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* TheSoulless: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders’ that return from the forest. They go about their daily lives on an emotionless autopilot. Though they’re not quite so unresponsive as to put up with schoolyard bullying, as [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Diamond Tiara can attest to…to…]]
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For years, Lero Michaelides has lived in the peace of Ponyville. He has a home, a job, and a loving family. Even after the Swap turned his world upside down, he held onto that peace with every ounce of will. Lero’s future looked tough, but he knew that he and his mares -old and new- could weather it together.
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For years, Lero Michaelides has lived in the peace of Ponyville. He has a home, a job, and a loving family. Even after the Swap turned his world upside down, upside-down, he held onto that peace with every ounce of will. Lero’s future looked tough, but he knew that he and his mares -old and new- could weather it together.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/151951/into-the-hedge ''Into the Hedge'']] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [=BadWolf9510=] based upon ''FanFic/DividedRainbow'' and ''FanFic/Xenophilia''.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/151951/into-the-hedge ''Into the Hedge'']] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [=BadWolf9510=] based upon ''FanFic/DividedRainbow'' and ''FanFic/Xenophilia''.
''FanFic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/151951/into-the-hedge ''Into the Hedge'']] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [=BadWolf9510=].
[=BadWolf9510=] based upon ''FanFic/DividedRainbow'' and ''FanFic/Xenophilia''.
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* EnfantTerrible: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders.’
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* EnfantTerrible: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders.’Crusaders’ are quite the sociopaths.
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* ChangelingTale: While not involving any of Queen Chrysalis’ buglike changelings, this trope is still very much in effect… played in the most classic sense possible when ‘Silk’ abducts the Crusaders and leaves http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Doppelganger doppelgangers]] behind to cover her tracks.
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* ChangelingTale: While not involving any of Queen Chrysalis’ buglike changelings, this trope is still very much in effect… played in the most classic sense possible when ‘Silk’ abducts the Crusaders and leaves http://tvtropes.[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Doppelganger doppelgangers]] behind to cover her tracks.
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* ChangelingTale: While not involving any of Queen Chrysalis’ buglike changelings, this trope is still very much in effect… played in the most classic sense possible when ‘Silk’ abducts the Crusaders and leaves doppelgangers behind to cover her tracks.
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* ChangelingTale: While not involving any of Queen Chrysalis’ buglike changelings, this trope is still very much in effect… played in the most classic sense possible when ‘Silk’ abducts the Crusaders and leaves doppelgangers http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Doppelganger doppelgangers]] behind to cover her tracks.
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--> “Girls,” cried Pinkie Pie. “What were y’all thinking?!’ She grabbed Apple Bloom by the shoulders and shook her. The filly hardly gave any reaction. “D’ya even know what y’all done?!”
-->“Ah broke her jaw,” Apple Bloom answered.
--> Pinkie Pie gasped and stopped shaking her sister. “Wha…”
--> “I broke her legs,” said Sweetie Belle, as if she’d been asked “how was the weather?” Her mother clutched her father’s hoof tightly.
--> “And I made sure she’d never be mean again,” said Scootaloo.
-->“Ah broke her jaw,” Apple Bloom answered.
--> Pinkie Pie gasped and stopped shaking her sister. “Wha…”
--> “I broke her legs,” said Sweetie Belle, as if she’d been asked “how was the weather?” Her mother clutched her father’s hoof tightly.
--> “And I made sure she’d never be mean again,” said Scootaloo.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both ''Fanfic/DividedRainbow'' and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/107542/ask-the-swapped-ponies '''Ask The Swapped Ponies''']], which are, themselves, recursive works of ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both ''Fanfic/DividedRainbow'' and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/107542/ask-the-swapped-ponies '''Ask Ask The Swapped Ponies''']], Ponies]], which are, themselves, recursive works of ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both ''Fanfic/DividedRainbow'' and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/107542/ask-the-swapped-ponies ''Ask The Swapped Ponies'']], which are, themselves, recursive works of ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both ''Fanfic/DividedRainbow'' and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/107542/ask-the-swapped-ponies ''Ask '''Ask The Swapped Ponies'']], Ponies''']], which are, themselves, recursive works of ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both ''Fanfic/DividedRainbow'' and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/107542/ask-the-swapped-ponies Ask The Swapped Ponies]], which are, themselves, recursive works of ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both ''Fanfic/DividedRainbow'' and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/107542/ask-the-swapped-ponies Ask ''Ask The Swapped Ponies]], Ponies'']], which are, themselves, recursive works of ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both ''Fanfic/DividedRainbow'' and ''Fanfic/AskTheSwappedPonies'', which are, themselves, recursive works of ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both ''Fanfic/DividedRainbow'' and ''Fanfic/AskTheSwappedPonies'', [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/107542/ask-the-swapped-ponies Ask The Swapped Ponies]], which are, themselves, recursive works of ''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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* FalseMemories / {{Masquerade}}: The Swapped Fives’ rewritten memories and the Bewitchment which Discord cast on nearly the whole rest of the planet.
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* FalseMemories / {{Masquerade}}: FalseMemories[=/=]{{Masquerade}}: The Swapped Fives’ rewritten memories and the Bewitchment which Discord cast on nearly the whole rest of the planet.
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* SwappedRoles: Since the story takes place right in the middle of Divided Rainbow, the Swapped Five are still, well… swapped.
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* SwappedRoles: Since the story takes place right in the middle of Divided Rainbow, ''Divided Rainbow'', the Swapped Five are still, well… swapped.
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* FonetikAksent: All the Apple Family, plus Swapped!Applejack and Swapped!Pinkie Pie.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/151951/into-the-hedge ''Into the Hedge'']] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/151951/into-the-hedge ''Into the Hedge'']] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.
fanfic by [=BadWolf9510=].
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* ChangelingTale: While not involving any of Queen Chrysalis’ buglike changelings, this trope is still very much in effect… played in the most classic sense possible when ‘Silk’ abducts the Crusaders and leaves doppelgangers behind to cover her tracks.
* DealWithTheDevil: The agreement Lero makes with The Lady: in exchange for a cure to the Swap, he will re-enter the Lady’s service on the day of his first daughter’s seventh birthday. For the record, Herd Bellerophon’s still hasn’t figured out how a human man and his pony sweethearts can conceive a child.
* DealWithTheDevil: The agreement Lero makes with The Lady: in exchange for a cure to the Swap, he will re-enter the Lady’s service on the day of his first daughter’s seventh birthday. For the record, Herd Bellerophon’s still hasn’t figured out how a human man and his pony sweethearts can conceive a child.
* EnfantTerrible: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders.’
* EnthrallingSiren: What Silk is.
* EnthrallingSiren: What Silk is.
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* DealWithTheDevil: The agreement Lero makes with The Lady: in exchange for a cure to the Swap, he will re-enter the Lady’s service on the day of his first daughter’s seventh birthday. For the record, Herd Bellerophon’s still hasn’t figured out how a human man and his pony sweethearts can conceive a child.
* EnfantTerrible: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders.’
* EnthrallingSiren: What Silk is.
* DealWithTheDevil: The agreement Lero makes with The Lady: in exchange for a cure to the Swap, he will re-enter the Lady’s service on the day of his first daughter’s seventh birthday. For the record, Herd Bellerophon’s still hasn’t figured out how a human man and his pony sweethearts can conceive a child.
* EnfantTerrible: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders.’
* EnthrallingSiren: What Silk is.
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* FonetikAksent: All the Apple Family, plus Swapped!Applejack and Swapped!Pinkie Pie.
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''Into the Hedge'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/151951/into-the-hedge ''Into the Hedge'' Hedge'']] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both Divided Rainbow and Ask The Swapped Ponies, which are, themselves, recursive works of Xenophilia.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both Divided Rainbow ''Fanfic/DividedRainbow'' and Ask The Swapped Ponies, ''Fanfic/AskTheSwappedPonies'', which are, themselves, recursive works of Xenophilia.''Fanfic/{{Xenophilia}}''.
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* {{Youkai}}: What ‘Silk’ is an arachnid example of.
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* {{Youkai}}: What ‘Silk’ is an arachnid example of.of.
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* HeroWorship: Scootaloo, (the real one) towards Rarity.
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* HeroWorship: HeroWorshipper: Scootaloo, (the real one) towards Rarity.
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For years, Lero Michaelides has lived in the peace of Ponyville. He has a home, a job, and a loving family. Even after the Swap turned his world upside down, he held onto that peace with every ounce of will. Lero’s future looked tough, but he knew that he and his mares -old and new- could weather it together.
But there had been always something that haunted him. Something in his past that had followed him to this new world. A force that even the Royal Sisters had learned to fear. It was something that Lero could not fully remember, but had always on the edge of his reason.
A face, a voice, a whisper in his ear…
'''Mo ridire…'''
Now his past has finally caught up to him. The Cutie Mark Crusaders have been taken by a twisted evil. Lero and his herd must journey together into the heart of a nightmarish and confront a force beyond all rational thought and morality.
Lero will have to confront his past and his sins as they all journey Into the Hedge.
But there had been always something that haunted him. Something in his past that had followed him to this new world. A force that even the Royal Sisters had learned to fear. It was something that Lero could not fully remember, but had always on the edge of his reason.
A face, a voice, a whisper in his ear…
'''Mo ridire…'''
Now his past has finally caught up to him. The Cutie Mark Crusaders have been taken by a twisted evil. Lero and his herd must journey together into the heart of a nightmarish and confront a force beyond all rational thought and morality.
Lero will have to confront his past and his sins as they all journey Into the Hedge.
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AssholeVictim: Diamond Tiara. Bad as she is, though, ALL the ponies are rightfully horrified at what happens to her.
BilingualBonus: Irish seems to be the Fae’s native tongue.
BloodOath: The Messenger has Lero bleed onto his contract with the Lady to make it binding.
EldritchAbomination: The Lady’s Messenger.
BilingualBonus: Irish seems to be the Fae’s native tongue.
BloodOath: The Messenger has Lero bleed onto his contract with the Lady to make it binding.
EldritchAbomination: The Lady’s Messenger.
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* AssholeVictim: Diamond Tiara. Bad as she is, though, ALL the ponies are rightfully horrified at what happens to her.
her.
* BilingualBonus: Irish seems to be the Fae’s nativetongue.
tongue.
* BloodOath: The Messenger has Lero bleed onto his contract with the Lady to make itbinding.
binding.
* EldritchAbomination: The Lady’s Messenger.
* BilingualBonus: Irish seems to be the Fae’s native
* BloodOath: The Messenger has Lero bleed onto his contract with the Lady to make it
* EldritchAbomination: The Lady’s Messenger.
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[[EveryoneIsBi Everypony Is Bi]]: The majority of the ponies, in keeping with Xenophilia’s setting.
ChangelingTale: While not involving any of Queen Chrysalis’ buglike changelings, this trope is still very much in effect… played in the most classic sense possible when ‘Silk’ abducts the Crusaders and leaves doppelgangers behind to cover her tracks.
DealWithTheDevil: The agreement Lero makes with The Lady: in exchange for a cure to the Swap, he will re-enter the Lady’s service on the day of his first daughter’s seventh birthday. For the record, Herd Bellerophon’s still hasn’t figured out how a human man and his pony sweethearts can conceive a child.
EnfantTerrible: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders.’
EnthrallingSiren: What Silk is.
TheFairFolk: The Fae.
FalseMemories / {{Masquerade}}: The Swapped Fives’ rewritten memories and the Bewitchment which Discord cast on nearly the whole rest of the planet.
HappilyMarried: Although the members of Herd Bellerophon haven’t taken any official vows, this is still the nature of their relationship, even Rainbow Dash, the ‘newest’ member, (who hasn’t moved into their house yet.)
HeroWorship: Scootaloo, (the real one) towards Rarity.
{{Interquel}}: Into The Hedge takes place at some point during Chapter 25 and 26 in Divided Rainbow.
MindControlMusic: Such a mesmerizing melody Silk plays...
{{Polyamory}}: Since this is a Xenophilia story, polygamous herds are an established pillar of pony society.
RecursiveFanfiction: Of both Divided Rainbow and Ask The Swapped Ponies, which are, themselves, recursive works of Xenophilia.
RepressedMemories: Lero had a very dark past with the Fae.
TheSoulless: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders’ that return from the forest. They go about their daily lives on an emotionless autopilot. Though they’re not quite so unresponsive as to put up with schoolyard bullying, as Diamond Tiara can attest to...
SwappedRoles: Since the story takes place right in the middle of Divided Rainbow, the Swapped Five are still, well… swapped.
WouldHurtAChild: Lero.
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* ChangelingTale: While not involving any of Queen Chrysalis’ buglike changelings, this trope is still very much in effect… played in the most classic sense possible when ‘Silk’ abducts the Crusaders and leaves doppelgangers behind to cover her
* DealWithTheDevil: The agreement Lero makes with The Lady: in exchange for a cure to the Swap, he will re-enter the Lady’s service on the day of his first daughter’s seventh birthday. For the record, Herd Bellerophon’s still hasn’t figured out how a human man and his pony sweethearts can conceive a
* EnfantTerrible: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders.
* EnthrallingSiren: What Silk
* TheFairFolk: The
* FalseMemories / {{Masquerade}}: The Swapped Fives’ rewritten memories and the Bewitchment which Discord cast on nearly the whole rest of the
* HappilyMarried: Although the members of Herd Bellerophon haven’t taken any official vows, this is still the nature of their relationship, even Rainbow Dash, the ‘newest’ member, (who hasn’t moved into their house yet.
* HeroWorship: Scootaloo, (the real one) towards
* {{Interquel}}: Into The Hedge takes place at some point during Chapter 25 and 26 in Divided
* MindControlMusic: Such a mesmerizing melody Silk
* {{Polyamory}}: Since this is a Xenophilia story, polygamous herds are an established pillar of pony
* RecursiveFanfiction: Of both Divided Rainbow and Ask The Swapped Ponies, which are, themselves, recursive works of
* RepressedMemories: Lero had a very dark past with the
* TheSoulless: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders’ that return from the forest. They go about their daily lives on an emotionless autopilot. Though they’re not quite so unresponsive as to put up with schoolyard bullying, as Diamond Tiara can attest
* SwappedRoles: Since the story takes place right in the middle of Divided Rainbow, the Swapped Five are still, well…
* WouldHurtAChild: Lero.
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AssholeVictim: Diamond Tiara. Bad as she is, though, ALL the ponies are rightfully horrified at what happens to her.
BilingualBonus: Irish seems to be the Fae’s native tongue.
BloodOath: The Messenger has Lero bleed onto his contract with the Lady to make it binding.
EldritchAbomination: The Lady’s Messenger.
--> The creature's face sent a small shiver down Lero’s spine. Like the rest of it, the creature’s skin looked to be laid over a bare skull. Cracked lips formed a smile that held a set of sharp teeth. It had no eyes, at least not on its face. Lero could see indentations of where eyes should be, but the sockets were simply covered in more yellow, leathery skin. A pair of brown horns rose up from its forehead, swooping back over its bald scalp and then tapering upwards at the end. A pair of black feathered wings rose up behind the creature and it was here the creature beheld Lero. Along its wings, eight golden eyes opened up and stared at him.
[[EveryoneIsBi Everypony Is Bi]]: The majority of the ponies, in keeping with Xenophilia’s setting.
ChangelingTale: While not involving any of Queen Chrysalis’ buglike changelings, this trope is still very much in effect… played in the most classic sense possible when ‘Silk’ abducts the Crusaders and leaves doppelgangers behind to cover her tracks.
DealWithTheDevil: The agreement Lero makes with The Lady: in exchange for a cure to the Swap, he will re-enter the Lady’s service on the day of his first daughter’s seventh birthday. For the record, Herd Bellerophon’s still hasn’t figured out how a human man and his pony sweethearts can conceive a child.
EnfantTerrible: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders.’
EnthrallingSiren: What Silk is.
TheFairFolk: The Fae.
FalseMemories / {{Masquerade}}: The Swapped Fives’ rewritten memories and the Bewitchment which Discord cast on nearly the whole rest of the planet.
HappilyMarried: Although the members of Herd Bellerophon haven’t taken any official vows, this is still the nature of their relationship, even Rainbow Dash, the ‘newest’ member, (who hasn’t moved into their house yet.)
HeroWorship: Scootaloo, (the real one) towards Rarity.
{{Interquel}}: Into The Hedge takes place at some point during Chapter 25 and 26 in Divided Rainbow.
MindControlMusic: Such a mesmerizing melody Silk plays...
{{Polygamy}}: Since this is a Xenophilia story, polygamous herds are an established pillar of pony society.
RecursiveFanfiction: Of both Divided Rainbow and Ask The Swapped Ponies, which are, themselves, recursive works of Xenophilia.
RepressedMemories: Lero had a very dark past with the Fae.
TheSoulless: The ‘Cutie Mark Crusaders’ that return from the forest. They go about their daily lives on an emotionless autopilot. Though they’re not quite so unresponsive as to put up with schoolyard bullying, as Diamond Tiara can attest to...
SwappedRoles: Since the story takes place right in the middle of Divided Rainbow, the Swapped Five are still, well… swapped.
WouldHurtAChild: Lero.
--> Apple Bloom was about to say something when it happened. The walking stick came down and struck the yellow filly across her face with a harsh crack, knocking her to the ground before a hand latched itself around her small throat.
TheRoyalWe / YeOldeButcheredeEnglish: Hi, Princess Luna!
{{Youkai}}: What ‘Silk’ is an arachnid example of.
