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* LoveableSexManiac: [[spoiler: Madoka all the way.]]
* {{LoveTriangle}}: Ichika gets stuck in one, Kira gets into one as well but it eventually it [[LoveDodecahedron gets bigger.]]
* {{LoveTriangle}}: Ichika gets stuck in one, Kira gets into one as well but it eventually it [[LoveDodecahedron gets bigger.]]
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* LoveableSexManiac: LovableSexManiac: [[spoiler: Madoka all the way.]]
*{{LoveTriangle}}: LoveTriangle: Ichika gets stuck in one, Kira gets into one as well but it eventually it [[LoveDodecahedron gets bigger.]]
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** Coincides with a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming when Kira and [[spoiler: Rei]] talk with eachother.
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** Coincides with a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming when When Kira and [[spoiler: Rei]] talk with eachother.each other.
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* CombatPragmatist: Kira.
** Further reinforced in Chapter 16.
** Further reinforced in Chapter 16.
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* CombatPragmatist: Kira.
** Further reinforced in Chapter 16.Kira will use anything he has to win. Even paper plates.
** Further reinforced in Chapter 16.
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* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty: Kira will use anything he has. Even paper plates.
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*** Chapter 4 also has Shinjiro yelling [[WorldOfWarcraft "Leeroy Jenkins!"]] as he charges in.
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*** Chapter 4 also has Shinjiro yelling [[WorldOfWarcraft [[VideoGame/WorldOfWarcraft "Leeroy Jenkins!"]] as he charges in.
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** Chapter 12.5, even though he's been knocked out due to HyperDrive, Kira gets up and starts shooting at Silvero Gospel despite any injuries he has.
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** Chapter 12.5, even though he's been knocked out due to HyperDrive, [=HyperDrive=], Kira gets up and starts shooting at Silvero Gospel despite any injuries he has.
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* HeroicRROD: [[spoiler: Kira's HyperDrive. It boosts strength, reaction time, everything to make him a better fighter. It only last five minutes before he goes unconscious before it starts to negatively affect him.]]
* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice]]: [[spoiler: Kira pulls this off when Muesel is about to throw the world into chaos with rampaging Prototypes.]]
* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice]]: [[spoiler: Kira pulls this off when Muesel is about to throw the world into chaos with rampaging Prototypes.]]
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* HeroicRROD: [[spoiler: Kira's HyperDrive.[[spoiler:Kira's [=HyperDrive=]. It boosts strength, reaction time, everything to make him a better fighter. It only last five minutes before he goes unconscious before it starts to negatively affect him.]]
*[[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice]]: [[spoiler: Kira HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Kira pulls this off off]] when Muesel [[spoiler:Muesel is about to to]] throw the world into chaos with [[spoiler:with rampaging Prototypes.]]Prototypes]].
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* ChekhovsGun: Remember that thing that took up all of Kira's remaining Equalizer's all the way in the beginning? [[spoiler: It's actually HyperDrive, a performance enhancer with a nasty time limit of five minute usage.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: Remember that thing that took up all of Kira's remaining Equalizer's all the way in the beginning? [[spoiler: It's actually HyperDrive, [=HyperDrive=], a performance enhancer with a nasty time limit of five minute usage.]]
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* [[CakeEater Likes Older Woman]]: A RunningGag when it comes to Kira.
** Inverted for [[spoiler: Chifuyu]], who pursues Kira.
** Inverted for [[spoiler: Chifuyu]], who pursues Kira.
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* [[OhCrap Oh Son of A Bi-]]: Happens when Kira's cameras are being jammed [[spoiler: despite the fact SlenderMan was supposed to have been gone]].
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* [[OhCrap Oh Son of A Bi-]]: Happens when Kira's cameras are being jammed [[spoiler: despite the fact SlenderMan [[Franchise/TheSlenderManMythos Slender Man]] was supposed to have been gone]].
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** Chapter 5 has shout outs to VideoGame/{{Persona 3}} and the SlenderManMythos.
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** Chapter 5 has shout outs to VideoGame/{{Persona 3}} and the SlenderManMythos.Franchise/TheSlenderManMythos.
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* GenreSavvy: Kira knows that he should maintain a low profile as not to attract attention of too many girls.
** He also knows to make sure an enemy is dead to ensure they don't come back.
** He also knows to make sure an enemy is dead to ensure they don't come back.
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* [[TakeUpMySword Take Up My Ideals]]: When [[spoiler: Luke]] dies, Kira subconsciously takes up the heroic ideals he once had.
* TemptingFate: [[GenreSavvy Kira]] should really have known better than to dare the universe into locking him in a closet with Tabane.
* TemptingFate: [[GenreSavvy Kira]] should really have known better than to dare the universe into locking him in a closet with Tabane.
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* [[TakeUpMySword Take Up My Ideals]]: TakeUpMySword: When [[spoiler: Luke]] dies, Kira subconsciously takes up the heroic ideals he once had.
* TemptingFate:[[GenreSavvy Kira]] Kira should really have known better than to dare the universe into locking him in a closet with Tabane.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8463340/1/Infinite-Stratos-Prototype-Spartan Infinite Stratos: Prototype Spartan]] tells the story of Kira Orthun, the pilot of the IS Unit MJOLNIR, as he enters IS Academy, told from his perspective. The story mixes in elements of ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' while keeping in parts of InfiniteStratos, all the while adding new parts into it, somewhat expanding on the world of InfiniteStratos and how the world could've been affected with its introduction.
Even with the elements of Halo present, the author manages to keep Kira Orthun from being too overpowered considering how Halo: Combat Evolved took place past the 2500 year range, sticking with the rules of IS battles. The story includes some AlternativeCharacterInterpretation, putting a few characters into a new light and exploring how one person can make a huge difference, and also delves deeper into how a super weapon for one gender can tip the equality of the sexes massively.
Even with the elements of Halo present, the author manages to keep Kira Orthun from being too overpowered considering how Halo: Combat Evolved took place past the 2500 year range, sticking with the rules of IS battles. The story includes some AlternativeCharacterInterpretation, putting a few characters into a new light and exploring how one person can make a huge difference, and also delves deeper into how a super weapon for one gender can tip the equality of the sexes massively.
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Note: When referencing chapters, please use the fanfiction chapter numbers. (For example, Chapter 25 on the fanfiction site is Chapter 22 from Kira's point of view as the author does not label Season Openings/Finales, Flashbacks, and Holiday Specials with 'Chapter X')
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!!Infinite Stratos: Prototype Spartan provides examples of the following tropes:
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** Chapter 6 gives us the [[Franchise/MetalGear cardboard box of stealthiness.]] Also Kira's First Shift is reminiscent of a Synchro Summon in YuGiOh5Ds.
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** Chapter 6 gives us the [[Franchise/MetalGear cardboard box of stealthiness.]] Also Kira's First Shift is reminiscent of a Synchro Summon in YuGiOh5Ds.''Anime/YuGiOh5Ds''.
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** Chapter 13 Kira says a line similar to [[YuGiOh5Ds Yusei's Stardust Dragon]] summoning line when he finishes Second Shift.
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** Chapter 13 Kira says a line similar to [[YuGiOh5Ds [[Anime/YuGiOh5Ds Yusei's Stardust Dragon]] summoning line when he finishes Second Shift.
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* ThemeMusicPowerup: Chapter 13 with [[YuGiOh5Ds Clear Mind]] as Kira's power up music.
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* ThemeMusicPowerup: Chapter 13 with [[YuGiOh5Ds [[Anime/YuGiOh5Ds Clear Mind]] as Kira's power up music.
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** How about a certain [[{{Persona3}}blue haired man named Minato?]]
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** How about a certain [[{{Persona3}}blue [[VideoGame/{{Persona 3}} blue haired man named Minato?]]
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** Later on in Chapter 6 we have [[RosarioPlusVampire "Know your place!"]]
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** Later on in Chapter 6 we have [[RosarioPlusVampire [[Manga/RosarioToVampire "Know your place!"]]
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** Chapter 10 with [[CodeGeass Zero]] popping in to save the day.
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** Chapter 10 with [[CodeGeass [[Anime/CodeGeass Zero]] popping in to save the day.
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* ShoutOut: GGundam and TengenToppaGurrenLagann get their shout outs.
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* ShoutOut: GGundam Anime/MobileFighterGGundam and TengenToppaGurrenLagann Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann get their shout outs.
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* MoreDakka: [[spoiler: Rei. She has ''multiple'' [[Warhammer40K Hurricane Bolters]] on her IS Unit.]]
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* MoreDakka: [[spoiler: Rei. She has ''multiple'' [[Warhammer40K [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} Hurricane Bolters]] on her IS Unit.]]