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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/373655/gboyhversedented-iron Another piece of]] RecursiveFanfiction is in progress, revolving around Helping Hoof and his father Iron Hoof dealing with the fall out of the main fic.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen:
** The Ropen's role was originally meant to be given to the hydra in Froggy Bottom Bog, but WordOfGod said they felt something more unique was needed for the part.
** The Ropen was originally supposed to be the FinalBoss, with the story ending shortly there after with Checker having a very brief role. However, the writer decided Trixie still had a lot of growing to do and expanded on the story greatly.
** [[spoiler:Checker's ShapeshifterGuiltTrip to Twilight]] was originally going to be [[spoiler:of Celestia telling Twilight she's been arrested for apparently destroying Ponyville with her out of control magic. After Twilight believes it was caused by Checker's TakingYouWithMe attack, 'Celestia' states that [[CuckooNest Checker was never in Ponyville]] and the confrontation with her was her hallucinating due to Trixie abandoning her (instead of being kidnapped by Checker) before Twilight finally finds AGlitchInTheMatrix to retake control.]] This was abandoned for being seen as too dark.
** The Ropen's role was originally meant to be given to the hydra in Froggy Bottom Bog, but WordOfGod said they felt something more unique was needed for the part.
** The Ropen was originally supposed to be the FinalBoss, with the story ending shortly there after with Checker having a very brief role. However, the writer decided Trixie still had a lot of growing to do and expanded on the story greatly.
** [[spoiler:Checker's ShapeshifterGuiltTrip to Twilight]] was originally going to be [[spoiler:of Celestia telling Twilight she's been arrested for apparently destroying Ponyville with her out of control magic. After Twilight believes it was caused by Checker's TakingYouWithMe attack, 'Celestia' states that [[CuckooNest Checker was never in Ponyville]] and the confrontation with her was her hallucinating due to Trixie abandoning her (instead of being kidnapped by Checker) before Twilight finally finds AGlitchInTheMatrix to retake control.]] This was abandoned for being seen as too dark.
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* RuleOfSymbolism: Checker uses a holographic chessboard to symbolize all of her plans, with her intended UnwittingPawns as pieces. [[spoiler:Her final VillainousBreakdown sees her shatter the projector and destroy the board, symbolizing her sanity also shattering.]]
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The story is presently complete, though the writers have shown interest in writing more stories in the same universe. This includes a one shot titled "[[http://fav.me/d653kte Happy]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9288869/1/GBOYH-Verse-Happy-Mother-s-Day Mother's Day]]" and its [[RecursiveFanfiction Optional Canon]] companion piece ''[[http://kendell2.deviantart.com/art/GBOYH-Verse-Another-Happy-Mother-s-Day-Spoilers-371526482?q=gallery%3Akendell2%2F16763124&qo=0 Another Happy Mother's Day]]'' (by Alexwarlorn) (Warning! Contain spoilers for for the main fic and ''Fanfic/PerfectCompanions'' in both the story and the trope listing below) and WordOfGod is they intend to write more one shots.
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The story is presently complete, though the writers have shown interest in writing more stories in the same universe. This includes a one shot titled "[[http://fav.me/d653kte Happy]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9288869/1/GBOYH-Verse-Happy-Mother-s-Day Mother's Day]]" and its [[RecursiveFanfiction Optional Canon]] companion piece ''[[http://kendell2.deviantart.com/art/GBOYH-Verse-Another-Happy-Mother-s-Day-Spoilers-371526482?q=gallery%3Akendell2%2F16763124&qo=0 Another Happy Mother's Day]]'' (by Alexwarlorn) (Warning! Contain spoilers for for the main fic and ''Fanfic/PerfectCompanions'' in both the story and the trope listing below) and WordOfGod is they intend to write more one shots.
shots. A live reading of the Mother's Day stories can be found [[https://youtu.be/5k-MGoVq4oM here]].
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* {{Hallucinations}}: "Another Happy Mother's Day" is told from [[spoiler:Checker's POV, and as she's completely insane at this point, she's hallucinating the insane asylum as her still going about her life (or [[FalseMemories what she thinks is her life]]) as normal. The biggest, however, is her hallucinating her mother still being alive and with her constantly, and even talking to other ponies.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: Trixie teaches all her friends her Lucid Dreaming trick [[spoiler: which allows them to defeat Checker in the final confrontation.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: ChekhovsGun:
** Trixie teaches all her friends her Lucid Dreaming trick [[spoiler: which allows them to defeat Checker in the final confrontation.]]
** A tropical storm is mentioned as being headed in to clear up the damage Discord caused that wasn't fixed by the Elements. After being mentioned several times, it finally arrives [[spoiler:as part of Checker's attempt to kill Trixie by stranding her in it.]]
** Trixie teaches all her friends her Lucid Dreaming trick [[spoiler: which allows them to defeat Checker in the final confrontation.]]
** A tropical storm is mentioned as being headed in to clear up the damage Discord caused that wasn't fixed by the Elements. After being mentioned several times, it finally arrives [[spoiler:as part of Checker's attempt to kill Trixie by stranding her in it.]]
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* [[AGodAmI An Alicorn Am I]]: Checker Monarch's worldview has shades of this, even if she doesn't outright say it, though hers is a more realistic depiction of a god complex than most.
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* [[ActionGirl Action Mare]]: Turns out, Rarity knows how to fight [[spoiler: unfortunately for the Diamond Dogs.]] Her chapter of "Perfect Companions" reveals she learned how to fight because she was bullied frequently as a filly and needed to protect herself.
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* [[ActionGirl Action Mare]]: ActionGirl: Turns out, Rarity knows how to fight [[spoiler: unfortunately for the Diamond Dogs.]] Her chapter of "Perfect Companions" reveals she learned how to fight because she was bullied frequently as a filly and needed to protect herself.
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* {{Hobos}}: Trixie, until Twilight takes her in.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: lampshaded in fic, as Trixie says, their plan is to trick Checker into defeating HERSELF]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: lampshaded in fic, as Trixie says, their plan is to trick Checker into defeating HERSELF]].
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* {{Hobos}}: Trixie, who after the Ursa incident ends up living on the streets until Twilight takes her in.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler:lampshaded in fic, Lampshaded in-fic, as Trixie says, their plan is to trick Checker into defeating HERSELF]].
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* [[IAmNotLeftHanded I Am Not Left Hoofed]]: When confronted by [[spoiler:the Diamond Dogs again]] Rarity attempts to [[spoiler:whine them into submission like she did the first time.]] When that fails, she breaks out her martial arts skills and delivers a CurbstompBattle. According to WordOfGod, this included to show she ''could'' have [[spoiler:beaten the Diamond Dogs to a pulp the first time]], she just preferred the nonviolent approach.
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* [[IAmNotLeftHanded I Am Not Left Hoofed]]: IAmNotLeftHanded: When confronted by [[spoiler:the Diamond Dogs again]] Rarity attempts to [[spoiler:whine them into submission like she did the first time.]] When that fails, she breaks out her martial arts skills and delivers a CurbstompBattle. According to WordOfGod, this included to show she ''could'' have [[spoiler:beaten the Diamond Dogs to a pulp the first time]], she just preferred the nonviolent approach.
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--> '''Fluttershy''': [[LampshadeHanging Um…Pinkie does things like that…]] Sorry, I can't explain it any better than that, but even Twilight can't figure out how Pinkie does a lot of the things she does…[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPinkieKeen She's tried]]…
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--> '''Fluttershy''': [[LampshadeHanging Um…Pinkie does things like that…]] Sorry, I can't explain it any better than that, but even Twilight can't figure out how Pinkie does a lot of the things she does…[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPinkieKeen She's tried]]…tried]]...
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* JawDrop: Trixie, repeatedly, upon learning of the Mane Cast's heroics.
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** Trixie, repeatedly, upon learning of the Mane Cast's heroics.
** Trixie, repeatedly, upon learning of the Mane Cast's heroics.
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* MindRape: [[spoiler:Checker Monarch subjects Rainbow Dash to this via a dream infiltration spell, giving her horrible nightmares involving Trixie to turn her against her. And it ''almost'' works. This act [[EvenEvilHasStandards even horrifies the Diamond Dogs.]]]]
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* MindRape: MindRape:
** [[spoiler:Checker Monarch subjects Rainbow Dash to this via a dream infiltration spell, giving her horrible nightmares involving Trixie to turn her against her. And it ''almost'' works. This act [[EvenEvilHasStandards even horrifies the Diamond Dogs.]]]]
** [[spoiler:Checker Monarch subjects Rainbow Dash to this via a dream infiltration spell, giving her horrible nightmares involving Trixie to turn her against her. And it ''almost'' works. This act [[EvenEvilHasStandards even horrifies the Diamond Dogs.]]]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Applejack, upon realizing she just blew up at Filly!Trixie over an accident and left the poor girl in tears. Later, Rainbow Dash comes across Trixie and is about to finally give her a piece of her mind (as she's been wanting to do all story), then sees Trixie sobbing and realizes that she's becoming just like the bullies she faced in Flight School. That snaps her out of her anger at Trixie quickly, and she finally lets go of her grudge against her.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
** [[spoiler: Applejack, upon realizing she just blew up at Filly!Trixie over an accident and left the poor girl in tears. Later, Rainbow Dash comes across Trixie and is about to finally give her a piece of her mind (as she's been wanting to do all story), then sees Trixie sobbing and realizes that she's becoming just like the bullies she faced in Flight School. That snaps her out of her anger at Trixie quickly, and she finally lets go of her grudge against her.]]
** [[spoiler: Applejack, upon realizing she just blew up at Filly!Trixie over an accident and left the poor girl in tears. Later, Rainbow Dash comes across Trixie and is about to finally give her a piece of her mind (as she's been wanting to do all story), then sees Trixie sobbing and realizes that she's becoming just like the bullies she faced in Flight School. That snaps her out of her anger at Trixie quickly, and she finally lets go of her grudge against her.]]
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** The Diamond Dog's second attempt to ruin Trixie's charity performance. While we know they went under the stage and the mane six had set boobytraps (and some animals as guards), we don't see it actually happen, just the end result.
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** The Diamond Dog's Dogs' second attempt to ruin Trixie's charity performance. While we know they went under the stage and the mane six had set boobytraps (and some animals as guards), we don't see it actually happen, just the end result.
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* VillainSong: Checker Monarch gets one in chapter 7, called "Through My Eyes".
** She gets a short reprise in chapter 8.
** She gets "Checkmate" and "Checkmate (Reprise)" in chapter 10.
** Her part of "The World I Want To Be In" in chapter 11 also counts.
** She gets a short reprise in chapter 8.
** She gets "Checkmate" and "Checkmate (Reprise)" in chapter 10.
** Her part of "The World I Want To Be In" in chapter 11 also counts.
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* VillainSong: Checker Monarch gets one in chapter 7, called several. First, there's "Through My Eyes".
** She getsEyes" in chapter 7, with a short reprise in chapter 8.
**8. She later gets "Checkmate" and "Checkmate (Reprise)" in chapter 10.
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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: [[spoiler:Diamond Tiara was all to happy to hear Checker tell her that Checker was just like her as a kid...until [[BrokenPedestal she finds out]] [[TheSociopath what kind]] [[BigBad of pony]] Checker ended up growing into. [[VillainousBSOD Diamond isn't quite as thrilled by Checker's compliment after that.]]]]
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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: [[spoiler:Diamond Tiara was all to happy to hear Checker tell her that Checker was just like her as a kid... until [[BrokenPedestal she finds out]] [[TheSociopath what kind]] [[BigBad of pony]] Checker ended up growing into. [[VillainousBSOD Diamond isn't quite as thrilled by Checker's compliment after that.]]]]
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Three separate live readings have started. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4isKgmyJJw&feature=channel&list=UL here]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mhfwd7l8Kes&feature=g-u-u here]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iccK3iLTCXQ in]]
[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eG8vPxg49Mc several]]
[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] [[https://youtu.be/7-lpCxfEoyw Crunchy]] [[https://youtu.be/3xHEEHi1obk Mon]][[https://youtu.be/3JY84YOvN-o key]] [[https://youtu.be/sNbYbQHOFoM Studios]]. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to 7. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eG8vPxg49Mc several]]
[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] [[https://youtu.be/7-lpCxfEoyw Crunchy]] [[https://youtu.be/3xHEEHi1obk Mon]][[https://youtu.be/3JY84YOvN-o key]] [[https://youtu.be/sNbYbQHOFoM Studios]]. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to 7. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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Three separate live readings have started. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4isKgmyJJw&feature=channel&list=UL here]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mhfwd7l8Kes&feature=g-u-u here]], and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iccK3iLTCXQ in]]
[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eG8vPxg49Mc several]]
[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] [[https://youtu.be/7-lpCxfEoyw Crunchy]] [[https://youtu.be/3xHEEHi1obk Mon]][[https://youtu.be/3JY84YOvN-o key]] [[https://youtu.be/sNbYbQHOFoM Studios]].com/playlist?list=PLpnmbqIqFLihJL4GFlqIoDyhp00Obr-_a Here at Crunchy Monkey Studios. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to 7.8. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] [[https://youtu.be/7-lpCxfEoyw Crunchy]] [[https://youtu.be/3xHEEHi1obk Mon]][[https://youtu.be/3JY84YOvN-o key]] [[https://youtu.be/sNbYbQHOFoM Studios]].
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] [[https://youtu.be/7-lpCxfEoyw Crunchy]] [[https://youtu.be/3xHEEHi1obk Monkey]] [[https://youtu.be/3JY84YOvN-o Studios]]. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to six. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] [[https://youtu.be/7-lpCxfEoyw Crunchy]] [[https://youtu.be/3xHEEHi1obk Monkey]] Mon]][[https://youtu.be/3JY84YOvN-o key]] [[https://youtu.be/3JY84YOvN-o be/sNbYbQHOFoM Studios]]. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to six.7. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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* [[AGodIAm An Alicorn I Am]]: Checker Monarch's worldview has shades of this, even if she doesn't outright say it, though hers is a more realistic depiction of a god complex than most.
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* [[AGodIAm [[AGodAmI An Alicorn I Am]]: Am I]]: Checker Monarch's worldview has shades of this, even if she doesn't outright say it, though hers is a more realistic depiction of a god complex than most.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Twilight gives one to Blueblood after he calls Rarity [[{{Hypocrite}} selfish]].
** [[spoiler:Trixie also gives one to the defeated Checker…sort of. She then says she's done hating Checker, forgives her, and she's done letting her control her life, even through justifiable hatred. Which arguably hurts Checker ''worse'' than the speech itself.]]
** [[spoiler:Trixie also gives one to the defeated Checker…sort of. She then says she's done hating Checker, forgives her, and she's done letting her control her life, even through justifiable hatred. Which arguably hurts Checker ''worse'' than the speech itself.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech
** Twilightgives one spends an entire day putting up with Blueblood's high and mighty act while cleaning up a StinkBomb Spike let off in his room. She manages to Blueblood after put up with his insults...until he calls Rarity [[{{Hypocrite}} selfish]].
Rarity selfish]] for her expectation of him being a gentlestallion to her. [[RantInducingSlight Twilight lets him have it after that,]] pretty much letting out her entire day's worth of frustrations on him at once. Surprisingly, [[spoiler:it actually gets it through his thick head that he needs to be a better pony]].
--> '''Twilight''': I don't care what you say about me, I can even forgive you for saying Pinkie, Rainbow, and Fluttershy ruined the Gala, [[JerkassHasAPoint because they actually kind of did!]] I may even be able to forgive you for insulting Applejack's cooking! But you do NOT call Rarity of all ponies selfish! She may be a little vain sometimes, and sometimes she lets her desires get the best of her, but she's the most generous and unselfish mare I know! She's the Element of Generosity for crying out loud! She worked herself ragged making me and my friends TWO sets of Gala Dresses, doing everything we asked even though she knew our designs were a big disaster! And you know what, Blueblood? She didn't even think about working on her dress until she had ours made! Is that selfish?! Does that surprise you? Of course it would surprise a [[ItsAllAboutMe self-serving]], [[SmallNameBigEgo egotistical]], {{narcissist}} like you! You know, I wasn't expecting you to be her prince charming, but I was expecting you to be a proper gentlestallion! That's ALL she wanted for you to do! She'd probably even have been happy if you'd just split everything 50/50! Instead you were a [[PrinceCharmless selfish, egocentric, self-absorbed royal PAIN]] who only cared about yourself and wanted your date to do absolutely everything for you! And now you have the nerve to call that poor mare selfish?! And don't you DARE use the fact you're royalty as an excuse! Because it's NOT! [[GodEmperor Princess Celestia]] is a lot more royal than you are and she gave me a place to stay in Ponyville just because she knew I'd be miserable without my friends! She lent me and my friends the castle ballroom for my birthday party without even being asked! She gave Rarity a room in the royal palace just because I told her Rarity needed somewhere to stay! Celestia set everything aside and came to Ponyville as fast as she could just because Spike wrote her a letter saying I was getting worked up at making a deadline! So no! Being royal most certainly isn't an excuse, Blueblood! And let me tell you something else! It's not an excuse to treat ANY of your subjects who look up to you like dirt the way you did Rarity! Celestia and Luna both go out of their way to befriend and have a good relationship with their subjects. Luna, who rules the night, set everything aside to try and reconnect with her subjects on Nightmare Night! And Celestia isn't too 'refined' that she can't take a little commoner food! If anything, [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask Celestia tries to be LESS royal than she really is!]] [[ArmorPiercingQuestion If they're the highest royalty in the land, Blueblood, what does that say about how you behave when you're so much lower than they are?]]
**[[spoiler:Trixie also gives Trixie later sort of ends up giving one to the [[spoiler:[[IHatePastMe her own defeated Checker…sort of.past self, the Great and Powerful Trixie]] (actually [[BigBad Checker Monarch]] disguised as her in a dream). She then says she's done hating Checker, forgives her, and she's done letting her control her life, even through justifiable hatred. Which arguably hurts Checker ''worse'' than the speech itself.]]
** Twilight
--> '''Twilight''': I don't care what you say about me, I can even forgive you for saying Pinkie, Rainbow, and Fluttershy ruined the Gala, [[JerkassHasAPoint because they actually kind of did!]] I may even be able to forgive you for insulting Applejack's cooking! But you do NOT call Rarity of all ponies selfish! She may be a little vain sometimes, and sometimes she lets her desires get the best of her, but she's the most generous and unselfish mare I know! She's the Element of Generosity for crying out loud! She worked herself ragged making me and my friends TWO sets of Gala Dresses, doing everything we asked even though she knew our designs were a big disaster! And you know what, Blueblood? She didn't even think about working on her dress until she had ours made! Is that selfish?! Does that surprise you? Of course it would surprise a [[ItsAllAboutMe self-serving]], [[SmallNameBigEgo egotistical]], {{narcissist}} like you! You know, I wasn't expecting you to be her prince charming, but I was expecting you to be a proper gentlestallion! That's ALL she wanted for you to do! She'd probably even have been happy if you'd just split everything 50/50! Instead you were a [[PrinceCharmless selfish, egocentric, self-absorbed royal PAIN]] who only cared about yourself and wanted your date to do absolutely everything for you! And now you have the nerve to call that poor mare selfish?! And don't you DARE use the fact you're royalty as an excuse! Because it's NOT! [[GodEmperor Princess Celestia]] is a lot more royal than you are and she gave me a place to stay in Ponyville just because she knew I'd be miserable without my friends! She lent me and my friends the castle ballroom for my birthday party without even being asked! She gave Rarity a room in the royal palace just because I told her Rarity needed somewhere to stay! Celestia set everything aside and came to Ponyville as fast as she could just because Spike wrote her a letter saying I was getting worked up at making a deadline! So no! Being royal most certainly isn't an excuse, Blueblood! And let me tell you something else! It's not an excuse to treat ANY of your subjects who look up to you like dirt the way you did Rarity! Celestia and Luna both go out of their way to befriend and have a good relationship with their subjects. Luna, who rules the night, set everything aside to try and reconnect with her subjects on Nightmare Night! And Celestia isn't too 'refined' that she can't take a little commoner food! If anything, [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask Celestia tries to be LESS royal than she really is!]] [[ArmorPiercingQuestion If they're the highest royalty in the land, Blueblood, what does that say about how you behave when you're so much lower than they are?]]
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** According to WordOfGod, what happened to the Diamond Dogs during their second attempt at sabotage the charity play was based off the ''HomeAlone'' films
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** According to WordOfGod, what happened to the Diamond Dogs during their second attempt at sabotage the charity play was based off the ''HomeAlone'' ''Film/HomeAlone'' films
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] [[https://youtu.be/7-lpCxfEoyw Crunchy]] [[https://youtu.be/3xHEEHi1obk Monkey]] Studios. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to six. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] [[https://youtu.be/7-lpCxfEoyw Crunchy]] [[https://youtu.be/3xHEEHi1obk Monkey]] Studios.[[https://youtu.be/3JY84YOvN-o Studios]]. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to six. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] [[https://youtu.be/7-lpCxfEoyw Crunchy]] Monkey [[https://youtu.be/3xHEEHi1obk Monkey]] Studios. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to six. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] Crunchy Monkey Studios. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to six. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] Crunchy [[https://youtu.be/7-lpCxfEoyw Crunchy]] Monkey Studios. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to six. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts.]] The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to three. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts.]] parts]] [[https://youtu.be/Npmeg1LVh0U by]] Crunchy Monkey Studios. The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to three.six. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts.]] The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to three.
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts.]] The first is up to chapter 4, the second to half of chapter 10, and the third up to three.
three. A live reading of the final chapter can be found [[https://youtu.be/AcMNg6M0p4Y here]].
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* DisneyVillainDeath: [[spoiler:While none of them actually ''kill'' her, being it's a dream, Checker gets defeated in dreams this way a total of three times (once in Trixie's dream, then twice later during her final dream attack in Pinkie's and Rainbow's dreams). When it happens in Rainbow's, she actually says '[[OhNoNotAgain Not again]]'.]]
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* DisneyVillainDeath: DisneyVillainDeath:
** [[spoiler:While none of them actually ''kill'' her, being it's a dream, Checker gets defeated in dreams this way a total of three times (once in Trixie's dream, then twice later during her final dream attack in Pinkie's and Rainbow's dreams). When it happens in Rainbow's, she actually says '[[OhNoNotAgain Not again]]'.]]]]
** An AlternateEnding the creator considered had [[spoiler:Checker escape in her chariot with Trixie catching on. During the fight, the lightning rod she used to try and kill Rainbow Dash earlier would fall out of her pocket and cause her to be struck by lightning and fall to her death while Trixie got to safely.]] The creator decided this was too dark for the tone they were going to.
** [[spoiler:While none of them actually ''kill'' her, being it's a dream, Checker gets defeated in dreams this way a total of three times (once in Trixie's dream, then twice later during her final dream attack in Pinkie's and Rainbow's dreams). When it happens in Rainbow's, she actually says '[[OhNoNotAgain Not again]]'.
** An AlternateEnding the creator considered had [[spoiler:Checker escape in her chariot with Trixie catching on. During the fight, the lightning rod she used to try and kill Rainbow Dash earlier would fall out of her pocket and cause her to be struck by lightning and fall to her death while Trixie got to safely.]] The creator decided this was too dark for the tone they were going to.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The Ropen's roll was originally meant to be given to the hydra in Froggy Bottom Bog, but WordOfGod said they felt something more unique was needed for the part.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: WhatCouldHaveBeen:
** The Ropen'sroll role was originally meant to be given to the hydra in Froggy Bottom Bog, but WordOfGod said they felt something more unique was needed for the part.part.
** The Ropen was originally supposed to be the FinalBoss, with the story ending shortly there after with Checker having a very brief role. However, the writer decided Trixie still had a lot of growing to do and expanded on the story greatly.
** The Ropen's
** The Ropen was originally supposed to be the FinalBoss, with the story ending shortly there after with Checker having a very brief role. However, the writer decided Trixie still had a lot of growing to do and expanded on the story greatly.
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* BreakTheCutie: Arguably happens to Trixie at Checker's hooves after she's become a nicer person. Multiple times.
** ''Arguably?''
** ''Arguably?''
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* BreakTheCutie: Arguably happens BreakTheCutie:
** Happens to Trixie at Checker's hooves after she's become a nicer person. Multipletimes.
** ''Arguably?''times.
** Happens to Trixie at Checker's hooves after she's become a nicer person. Multiple
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** '''''Arguably!?'''''
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''Getting Back On Your Hooves'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by Kendell2 and Shadow Raikou with cover art by Paraderpy, available on Website/DeviantArt [[http://kendell2.deviantart.com/gallery/34673702 here]], [[Website/FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.Net]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7644048/1/My_Little_Pony_Getting_Back_On_Your_Hooves here]] and Website/FimfictionDotNet [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4866/Trixie%27s-Gettin%27-Back-On-Her-Hooves here]].
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''Getting Back On Your Hooves'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by Kendell2 [=Kendell2=] and Shadow Raikou with cover art by Paraderpy, available on Website/DeviantArt [[http://kendell2.deviantart.com/gallery/34673702 here]], [[Website/FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.Net]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7644048/1/My_Little_Pony_Getting_Back_On_Your_Hooves here]] and Website/FimfictionDotNet [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4866/Trixie%27s-Gettin%27-Back-On-Her-Hooves here]].
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Kendell2 also made a side story set in the same universe called ''FanFic/PerfectCompanions'' which deals with how the Mane Cast got their pets.
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* HateSink: Checker Monarch in spades. The commenters stating how much they hate Checker shows that the author really did a good job making her despicable as possible.
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* HateSink: Checker Monarch in spades. The commenters stating how much they hate Checker shows that the author really did a REALLY good job in making her as despicable as possible.
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* HateSink: Checker Monarch in spades. The commenters stating how much they hate Checker shows that the author really did a good job making her despicable as possible.
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'''''Getting Back On Your Hooves''''' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by Kendell2 and Shadow Raikou with cover art by Paraderpy, available on Website/DeviantArt [[http://kendell2.deviantart.com/gallery/34673702 here]], [[Website/FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.Net]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7644048/1/My_Little_Pony_Getting_Back_On_Your_Hooves here]] and Website/FimfictionDotNet [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4866/Trixie%27s-Gettin%27-Back-On-Her-Hooves here]].
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* AdaptationExpansion: The fic is actually based off an roleplay between the two co-writers. The original RP only came up to the story's half-way point, a lot of plot points were missing, and [[BigBad Checker Monarch]] didn't exist, her role instead being filled by [[AdaptedOut Trixie's parents]], who only appeared at the ''very'' end.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The fic is actually based off an roleplay between the two co-writers. The original RP only came up to the story's half-way point, a lot didn't have many of plot points were missing, the scenes in the final version even up to that point, and [[BigBad Checker Monarch]] didn't exist, her role instead being filled by [[AdaptedOut Trixie's parents]], who only appeared at the ''very'' end.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The fic is actually based off an roleplay between the two co-writers. The original RP only came up to the story's half-way point, a lot of plot points were missing, and [[BigBad Checker Monarch]] didn't exist, her role instead being filled by [[AdaptedOut Trixie's parents]], who only appeared at the ''very'' end.
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* BrickJoke: When Trixie faints in a dramatic fashion, Sweetie Belle comments that she does so in the same manner as Rarity. When Rarity herself does faint likewise a couple of chapters later, Trixie comments that Sweetie Belle was right.
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* BrickJoke: BrickJoke:
** Spike asks Twilight if he can plant a StinkBomb in Prince Blueblood's room, which she denies. It turns out next chapter he did it anyway.
** When Trixie faints in a dramatic fashion, Sweetie Belle comments that she does so in the same manner as Rarity. When Rarity herself does faint likewise a couple of chapters later, Trixie comments that Sweetie Belle was right.
** Spike asks Twilight if he can plant a StinkBomb in Prince Blueblood's room, which she denies. It turns out next chapter he did it anyway.
** When Trixie faints in a dramatic fashion, Sweetie Belle comments that she does so in the same manner as Rarity. When Rarity herself does faint likewise a couple of chapters later, Trixie comments that Sweetie Belle was right.
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Two separate live readings have started. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4isKgmyJJw&feature=channel&list=UL here]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mhfwd7l8Kes&feature=g-u-u here.]] The first is up to chapter 4 and the second to half of chapter 10.
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[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eG8vPxg49Mc several]]
[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc0SVoHTD4s parts.]] The first is up to chapter
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* FantasyForbiddingFather: [[spoiler:Helping Hoof's father Iron Hoof did ''not'' approve of his interest in theater, forcing him to be a business stallion. This ended badly.]]
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* BatOutOfHell: The Ropen, a giant bat-like monster in Everfree Forest that Trixie has to fend off to protect the Cutie Mark Crusaders as [[spoiler:it's blind, meaning Fluttershy's [[DeathGlare Stare]] has no affect.]]
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* BatOutOfHell: The Ropen, a giant bat-like monster in Everfree Forest that Trixie has to fend off to protect the Cutie Mark Crusaders as [[spoiler:it's blind, meaning Fluttershy's [[DeathGlare Stare]] has no affect.effect.]]
