7th Aug '14 11:46:57 AM greatpikminfan
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I cannot stress enough how much more I want to do this edit (496 is not dead, by the way, I'm even working on pairing 9 today although I haven't worked on either that or 8 in months), but I'll have to settle for what I have now. And it's a shame, too, since the prologue is planned to undergo a MASSIVE redo before the next edit (which should hopefully cover the last three pairings of Act 1 Act 1, be the first update to not fall under a special date of sorts, and be the kick-off of the real plot).
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14th Apr '14 2:19:38 PM FirebirdMaximus
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31st Mar '14 11:38:23 AM greatpikminfan
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PS: This probably won't be true anymore. The file for chapter 5 of TZP has this beat by about 7 KB. Looooong.
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31st Mar '14 11:34:12 AM greatpikminfan
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I think the indents are supposed to go the other way around.
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29th Mar '14 4:06:49 PM greatpikminfan
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Reason seven(...ish since six is a "bonus") for why dream bubbles won't work with this that I forgot to put in the last edit reason: Gamzee might be immortal in canon, or at least there seems to be no ghosts of him in the dream bubbles. (My works are obviously another story. Not because Grandfather Clause like SJAHJ's shipping intermission, but because. Just because.) So either he would be finding a way to constantly sleep and happen to always dream by the other 31/65 members of the not-Meteor Crew, or something else weird is happening.
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29th Mar '14 3:42:14 PM greatpikminfan
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(Alternate Universe) Yeah, dream bubbles wouldn't work out. Even ignoring the Leijon Code keeping them immortal until Simpsons ends in Real Life (then again... hrm... this WAS/IS/WILL BE the story where it will originate in) and my simple matter of prefering them to not have perma white eyes (I cannot tell you how much it bugs me when fanart or, worse, works keep the A1 trolls with white eyes yet the A2 group — even the dead six — with yellow, especially if it makes no sense whatsoever), there's a ton of story flaws with it. One, and everything after is focused on ignoring this point, unless I'm understanding alternate timelines wrong there is only like three B1 alternates and no B2, and a few of the alternate B1 selves were either timeline wiped when the timeline fell or double-killed by Lord English. Two, age inconsistency. John, Rose, Nepeta, Vriska, etc will be perma-13, while Meulin, Cronus, Kankri etc will be perma-19. There's a reason why 496 specifies that Meenah is 6 sweeps and the post-scratch kids started playing in 2009. It's not to "remind" the readers anything since I don't like doing that, it's there to let them know of the change. Three, it doesn't leave as many options if they were still alive. There's no threat of death, nothing can be accomplished with access to dream bubbles, the lack of any goal beyond "fool around" kind of makes the story seem more like side goofing off than an actual progressing story. Four, dreamself related stuff. The living ones will be established to do things ghosts can't, since the living ones will be using their powers to protect the crew from the Big Bad while the ghosts are powerless and thus subject to said villain's abilities. And five, it would be "taking place in the same world as" (see point one) Act 6. Other people might like the thought of their fan fiction simply co-existing with canon, hencewhy dream bubble stories seem to be so popular, but I personally never really do. That's why everything I have so far is an AU. Either I don't agree with something in canon or canon will not agree with me, the latter being for like Steven Universe works. Oh wait, Unfortunate Implications-filled bonus reason six, it will imply that "doomed timeline caused by slight nail = sexuality can suddenly pull a 90 degree turn." Making the timeline doomed might prevent cross-section interaction and limit it, unless they all have some big unite thing or, again, go to the dream bubbles. But finding a way for that to work is beyond me without God Tier spamming.
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14th Feb '14 9:37:45 PM greatpikminfan
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Oh wait, this is what the last edit reason was referring to.
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14th Feb '14 9:36:32 PM greatpikminfan
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The wording's a little ambiguous regarding the Equius-Aradia entry ("well first it was based on a mistake" or something like that), but I think the point's gotten across.
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8th Dec '13 7:16:30 PM greatpikminfan
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13th Nov '13 1:21:46 PM FoominBlue
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