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* AcademyOfAdventure: [[ElaborateUniversityHigh Beacon Academy, as usual]]. Apparently, its standards are so high that only one out of five [[HeroAcademy Signal Academy]] students are accepted into [[SuperheroSchool Beacon Academy]], and various students are shocked at the difference in SuperWeight between themselves and powerhouses like [[TheAce Pyrrha Nikos]] and [[GradeSkipper Ruby Rose]].



* LittleBitBeastly: Few if any Faunus in this fic are depicted with other animal traits besides ears or tails.



** One of the Vale Faunus Liberation Movement's soldiers wields a [[GreenRocks Dust-infused]] WhipSword [[ArsenalAttire disguised as a belt]]. [[{{Squee}} Ruby]] refers to it a "Flex-Segmented Dust-Active Blade."

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** One of the Vale Faunus Liberation Movement's soldiers wields a [[GreenRocks Dust-infused]] WhipSword [[ArsenalAttire disguised as a belt]]. [[{{Squee}} Ruby]] refers to it as a "Flex-Segmented Dust-Active Blade."


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* PoliceAreUseless:
** In Chapter 8, [[spoiler:after Ruby explains the events of the Chapter 7 fight to Team JNPR, Jaune wants to tell the police and the faculty about the incident, as a normal civilian would. Pyrrha explains to him that]] Huntsmen and Huntresses have stronger Auras and greater fighting power than civil police, and that problems that are difficult for Huntsmen will be beyond the capabilities of the police.
** In Chapter 14, [[spoiler:when the police arrive to interrupt Beacon and Signal students participating in "the Grind" ([[ArrogantKungFuGuy picking fights with each other to test their own strength]])]], Aurea mocks a former classmate "who thought he'd be the best Huntsman of them all and ended up a beat cop." The police cadet in question admits that he could [[MoreDakka shoot Aurea with all six rounds]] of his [[RevolversAreJustBetter service revolver]] and still [[SuperToughness not break her Aura or even knock her out]].

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* BikerBabe: Yang gets a few more motorbike scenes than in canon ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}''. She invites Blake on rides, sharing her bike.



* ButForMeItWasTuesday: In Chapter 13, [[spoiler:Weiss explains that her abuses toward Melanie at high-society events were expected behavior for her as a way to keep "lower-class" people out of their circles. Melanie protests that it hurt her deeply to endure such treatment, but Weiss affirms that she never hated Melanie personally, and they manage to settle the matter and "normalize [Melanie's] status" so the bullying will stop]].



* MixAndMatchWeapon: It’s {{WebAnimation/RWBY}}. Not everything is also a gun, but they all have multiple attack forms.
** Alice Sgathan's "Cheshire Silver" is a two-handed sword which can split into two separate blades or become a Dust-powered pulse rifle.
** Aurea Perrault's "Sole and Luna" is a cudgel (Luna) which turns into a carbine rifle (Sole).
** Venus Carlton's unnamed shotgun tonfas.
** One of the Vale Faunus Liberation Movement's soldiers wields a Dust-infused WhipSword [[ArsenalAttire disguised as a belt]]. A "Flex-Segmented Dust-Active Blade," according to [[{{Squee}} Ruby]].
** Another VFLM member uses a longsword that doubles as an energy rifle, a "High-Energy Rail-Sword."

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* MixAndMatchWeapon: It’s {{WebAnimation/RWBY}}. Not everything every weapon [[{{WebAnimation/RWBY}} is also a gun, gun]], but they all have multiple attack forms.
forms and (sometimes) [[NamedWeapons names]].
** Alice Sgathan's "Cheshire Silver" is a [[{{BFS}} two-handed sword sword]] which can [[BifurcatedWeapon split into into]] [[DualWielding two separate blades blades]] or become a Dust-powered pulse rifle.
** Aurea Perrault's "Sole and Luna" is a cudgel [[CarryABigStick cudgel]] (Luna) which turns into a carbine rifle (Sole).
** Venus Carlton's unnamed shotgun tonfas.
[[ShotgunsAreJustBetter shotgun]] [[DualTonfas tonfas]].
** One of the Vale Faunus Liberation Movement's soldiers wields a Dust-infused [[GreenRocks Dust-infused]] WhipSword [[ArsenalAttire disguised as a belt]]. A [[{{Squee}} Ruby]] refers to it a "Flex-Segmented Dust-Active Blade," according to [[{{Squee}} Ruby]].
Blade."
** Another VFLM member uses a longsword that doubles as an energy combination [[CoolSword longsword]][=/=]energy rifle, which Ruby calls a "High-Energy Rail-Sword."



* NamedWeapons: Averted by the Malachite twins, whose weapons remain unnamed, and used to demonstrate the differences between Hunter culture and that of more normal people.

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* NamedWeapons: Averted by the Malachite twins, whose weapons remain unnamed, and used to demonstrate the differences between Hunter Huntsman[=/=]Huntress culture and that of more normal people.



* {{Squee}}: Ruby makes "a noise like a strangled whimper" when she sees Coco Adel's [[BriefcaseBlaster suitcase]] [[GatlingGood chaingun]], earning her "a strange look" from Miltia.

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* {{Squee}}: Ruby is such a fan of weapons that, in Chapter 6, she "gasps in awe" that "she's beautiful" when she sees [[OriginalCharacter Alice Sgathan]] show off [[NamedWeapons Cheshire Silver]], which pleases Alice until she realizes that Ruby's referring to her weapon instead of herself. In Chapter 15, Ruby gushes over [[spoiler:the Vale Faunus Liberation Movement terrorists']] weapons while identifying them by specific types and makes "a noise like a strangled whimper" when she sees Coco [[spoiler:Coco Adel's [[BriefcaseBlaster suitcase]] [[GatlingGood chaingun]], chaingun]]]], earning her "a strange look" from Miltia.
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* TheGhost: [[GangOfBullies Team CRDL]] are repeatedly stated to be left out of the events of this fic.


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* IWasJustPassingThrough: Nora and Yang joke like this to each other while fighting Grimm in Chapter 11.
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* AliceAllusion: [[OriginalCharacter Alice Sgathan]] is a young, blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl, clothed in a blue and white dress with rabbit and heart markings. Her surname [[https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sgàthan Sgàthan]] is Scottish Gaelic for "mirror" or "looking glass," and (being a "Society girl") she is from a "different world" than Ruby Rose. [[spoiler:She wears a silver heart[=/=]rabbit pendant that semi-secretly contains her personal supply of cocaine]].

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* AliceAllusion: [[OriginalCharacter Alice Sgathan]] is a young, blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl, clothed in a blue and white dress with rabbit and heart markings. Her surname [[https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sgàthan Sgàthan]] is Scottish Gaelic for "mirror" or "looking glass," and (being a "Society girl") she is from a "different world" than Ruby Rose. [[spoiler:She wears a silver heart[=/=]rabbit pendant that semi-secretly contains her personal supply of cocaine]].



--> '''Ruby:''' I'm single, my romantic prospects are completely hopeless[...]

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* AliceAllusion: [[OriginalCharacter Alice Sgathan]] is a young, blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl, clothed in a blue and white dress with rabbit and heart markings. Her surname [[https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sgàthan Sgàthan]] is Scottish Gaelic for "mirror" or "looking glass," and (being a "Society girl") she is from a "different world" than Ruby Rose. [[spoiler:She wears a silver heart[=/=]rabbit pendant that semi-secretly contains her personal supply of cocaine]].

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* AliceAllusion: [[OriginalCharacter Alice Sgathan]] is a young, blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl, clothed in a blue and white dress with rabbit and heart markings. Her surname [[https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sgàthan Sgàthan]] is Scottish Gaelic for "mirror" or "looking glass," and (being a "Society girl") she is from a "different world" than Ruby Rose. [[spoiler:She wears a silver heart[=/=]rabbit pendant that semi-secretly contains her personal supply of cocaine]].



* ThatCameOutWrong: Weiss says it almost word for word.
--> '''Weiss:''' Ha, [[SheCleansUpNicely it looks like a success from back here too]]. ({{Beat}}) Oh god, that sounded completely wrong.

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* ThatCameOutWrong: Weiss says it almost word for word.
word on two different occasions, both involving Ruby.
--> '''Weiss:''' '''Weiss (Chapter 3):''' Ha, [[SheCleansUpNicely it looks like a success from back here too]]. ({{Beat}}) Oh god, that sounded completely wrong.wrong.

--> '''Ruby:''' I'm single, my romantic prospects are completely hopeless[...]
--> '''Weiss:''' What makes you think your romantic prospects are hopeless? (She then thinks to herself:) ''Wait, no, that did'' not ''come out right''.
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* AliceAllusion: [[OriginalCharacter Alice Sgathan]] is a young, blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl, clothed in a blue and white dress with rabbit and heart markings, and (being a "Society girl") is from a "different world" than Ruby Rose. [[spoiler:She wears a silver pendant that semi-secretly contains her personal supply of cocaine]].

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* AliceAllusion: [[OriginalCharacter Alice Sgathan]] is a young, blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl, clothed in a blue and white dress with rabbit and heart markings, markings. Her surname [[https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sgàthan Sgàthan]] is Scottish Gaelic for "mirror" or "looking glass," and (being a "Society girl") she is from a "different world" than Ruby Rose. [[spoiler:She wears a silver heart[=/=]rabbit pendant that semi-secretly contains her personal supply of cocaine]].



** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is [not finished] recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like [more of] an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had "hypothetically" [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society scene]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby (and Alice) let her quit at her own pace; she notes that, even though [[HealingFactor Aura helps to prevent physiological addiction]], the psychological stress and causes thereof that led to her use remain]].

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** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is [not finished] (not finished) recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like [more of] (more of) an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had "hypothetically" [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society scene]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby (and Alice) let her quit at her own pace; she notes that, even though [[HealingFactor Aura helps to prevent physiological addiction]], the psychological stress and causes thereof that led to her use remain]].



* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: [[spoiler:Ruby Rose's CurbStompBattle against India Tullamarine ends up posted online shortly after the battle; India is displeased to find that Alice's Team AKWA (Aqua) put a screenshot of his OhCrap face on their webpage under a banner reading "Team [AKWA is struck-through and replaced with] Awkward" and tries feebly (and unsuccessfully) to stop Team MAVM from seeing his humiliating defeat]].

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* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: [[spoiler:Ruby Rose's CurbStompBattle against India Tullamarine ends up posted online shortly after the battle; India is displeased to find that Alice's Team AKWA (Aqua) put a screenshot of his OhCrap face on their webpage under a banner reading "Team [AKWA is struck-through and replaced with] Awkward" and tries feebly (and unsuccessfully) to stop Team MAVM Melanie, Pyrrha, and Weiss from seeing his humiliating defeat]].
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* FictionFiveHundred: The "Society" people in general, and Alice says this about her own and Weiss's respective families:

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* FictionFiveHundred: The "Society" people in general, and Alice says this about her own and Weiss's Weiss' respective families:



* FirstNameBasis: Ruby Rose and Yang Xiao may understandably refer to Qrow Branwen as "[[CoolUncle Uncle Qrow]]," but other students informed of their relationship to the Signal Academy teacher are also shown calling him "Professor Qrow" instead of "[[LastNameBasis Professor Branwen]]" or "[[FullNameBasis Professor Qrow Branwen]]."

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* FirstNameBasis: Ruby Rose and Yang Xiao may Long understandably refer to Qrow Branwen as "[[CoolUncle Uncle Qrow]]," but other students informed of their relationship to the Signal Academy teacher are also shown calling him "Professor Qrow" instead of "[[LastNameBasis Professor Branwen]]" or "[[FullNameBasis Professor Qrow Branwen]]."



** Alice Sgathan says in Chapter 6 that the "[[DrugsAreBad Society girl special]]" of Vale's high society would be known to Mistral's society scene as "sparkles;" however, when [[spoiler:Pyrrha Nikos, a celebrated Mistral tournament champion, discovers that Weiss is using the special]] in Chapter 15, her third-person narration reveals that Mistral's upper class refers to it as "bubbles." Possibly justified as an in-character mistake, since Alice also mispronounced Pyrrha Nikos's surname as "Nikoh" before Ruby corrected her in the same conversation.

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** Alice Sgathan says in Chapter 6 that the "[[DrugsAreBad Society girl special]]" of Vale's high society would be known to Mistral's society scene as "sparkles;" however, when [[spoiler:Pyrrha Nikos, a celebrated Mistral tournament champion, discovers that Weiss is using the special]] in Chapter 15, her third-person narration reveals that Mistral's upper class refers to it as "bubbles." Possibly justified as an in-character mistake, since Alice also mispronounced Pyrrha Nikos's Nikos' surname as "Nikoh" before Ruby corrected her in the same conversation.

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* AliceAllusion: [[OriginalCharacter Alice Sgathan]] is a young, blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl, clothed in a blue and white dress with rabbit and heart markings, and (being a "Society girl") is from a "different world" than Ruby Rose. [[spoiler:She wears a rabbit pendant that semi-secretly contains her personal supply of cocaine]].

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* AliceAllusion: [[OriginalCharacter Alice Sgathan]] is a young, blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl, clothed in a blue and white dress with rabbit and heart markings, and (being a "Society girl") is from a "different world" than Ruby Rose. [[spoiler:She wears a rabbit silver pendant that semi-secretly contains her personal supply of cocaine]].


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** Also from Chapter 6, Alice is described as wearing a silver heart pendant. Chapter 8 instead describes it as a silver rabbit pendant. Either would match her clothes and AliceAllusion theme.
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* AliceAllusion: [[OriginalCharacter Alice Sgathan]] is a young, blue-eyed, blonde-haired girl, clothed in a blue and white dress with rabbit and heart markings, and (being a "Society girl") is from a "different world" than Ruby Rose. [[spoiler:She wears a rabbit pendant that semi-secretly contains her personal supply of cocaine]].


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** In Chapter 8, Alice Sgathan obtains a video record of [[spoiler:Ruby Rose's duel-for-"favors" against India Tullamarine]] and shares this video with Team MAVM. Miltia recognizes [[spoiler:Ruby's attack pattern as mere defense-drill practice and points out that Ruby was holding back]]; a later paragraph in the same chapter erroneously attributes this recognition to Melanie, but a replay of the video in Chapter 15 correctly credits the recognition to Miltia.
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** Melanie and Miltia (who is commonly referred to as "Miltiades," the etymological origin of her canon name) Malachite were fired and blacklisted by Junior and enrolled at Beacon Academy after the events of the ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' "Yellow" trailer, whereas Volume 2 Chapter 04: ''Painting the Town'' [[spoiler:retains both in Junior's employ (and he even stops his goons from attacking Yang again)]].

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** Melanie and Miltia (who is commonly referred to as "Miltiades," the etymological origin of her canon name) Malachite were fired and blacklisted by Junior and enrolled at Beacon Academy after the events of the ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' "Yellow" trailer, whereas Volume 2 Chapter 04: ''Painting the Town'' [[spoiler:retains both in Junior's employ (and he even stops his goons from attacking Yang again)]].again)]]. Also, Miltia is more often than not referred to as "Miltiades" - the "Yellow" trailer doesn't have credits, and [=V2C04's=] credits list the twins as "Melanie and Miltia Malachite," but [[https://twitter.com/montyoum/status/350504971554402304 a tweet]] from Creator/MontyOum reveals her full name is Miltiades Malachite and "Miltia" is an official shortened name.

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* TheAce: Ruby is to everyone at Signal. She admits that by the end no one could keep up with her and it gave her a cult status.

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* TheAce: Ruby is was this to everyone her classmates at Signal. She admits that by in the end no one could keep up with her and it gave her a cult status.



* BigDamnHeroes: Beacon students cover each other's backs several times.
** [[spoiler:Ruby is this for Weiss in Chapter 7, turning a life-threatening White Fang ambush into a one-sided rout]].
** In Chapter 11's Grimm-hunt, Glynda [[InvokedTrope specifically reserves the powerful Team RWBY for this purpose]], as well as to provide the weaker Team MAVM an opportunity to demonstrate any improved capabilities.
** Chapter 14 has [[spoiler:Yang, Blake, Sun, and Taiyang]] serve this role; Nora references this trope by name.



* BrainlessBeauty: Melanie Malachite considers [[UpperClassTwit Society]] [[GenderInvertedTrope boys]] to be this trope.
-->'''Melanie:''' Society boys are stupid. I wish they weren't so pretty.



** [[spoiler:Neo herself has spoken lines in this fic, described as having "a bright and cultured voice]]." In canon, [[spoiler:all of Neo's appearances (from Volume 2 Chapter 04: ''Painting the Town'' to Volume 3 Chapter 11: ''Heroes and Monsters'') have no spoken lines at all (and therefore no voice actress listed in the credits), and even her appearances in ''WebAnimation/RWBYChibi'' keep her mute, only allowing for TalkingWithSigns]].

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** [[spoiler:Neo herself has spoken lines in this fic, described as having "a bright and cultured voice]]." In canon, [[spoiler:all of Neo's appearances (from Volume 2 Chapter 04: ''Painting the Town'' Town...'' to Volume 3 Chapter 11: ''Heroes and Monsters'') have no spoken lines at all (and therefore no voice actress listed in the credits), and even her appearances in ''WebAnimation/RWBYChibi'' keep her mute, only allowing for TalkingWithSigns]].



** In canon, [[spoiler:Nora Valkyrie's Semblance lets her produce and channel electricity into her attacks as well as absorb electricity to strengthen herself; in Volume 3, Chapter 02: ''New Challengers...'' and Volume 4, Chapter 07: ''Punished'', she is hit by electric attacks and remains undamaged, using powerful attacks against enemies immediately after being hit]]. In this fic, [[spoiler:Chapter 14 has Nora take damage from an electrified battleaxe without any reference to her Semblance or any display of its canon effects]].



* CoolAirship: Downplayed; the Bullhead airships from canon ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' are used both for general transport (like public buses) and specific assignments (such as on Beacon missions). The [[MegaCorp Schnee Dust Corporation]] has one permanently on standby in Vale to provide Weiss a ride away from potential or active [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters White Fang]] attacks.



** When [[spoiler:Ruby drops into the White Fang's ambush on Weiss, the White Fang literally come out in pieces]].



* DeadFic: ''Four Deadly Secrets'' has not been updated since October 5, 2015.



* DepravedDwarf: [[CuteAndPsycho Neo]], more than in canon; [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long calls her]] "[[GentlemanThief Roman]]'s [[TheDragon right-hand death midget]]."



* DirtyCop: The Vale Police Department officers label their reports of [[EvilVersusEvil crimes between crime groups]] with the acronyms "FCA" and "NFCA." Velvet claims these stand for [[FantasticRacism Faunus Crime Associations and Non Faunus Crime Associations]], but Aurea adds that [[FunWithAcronyms "NFCA" also stands for]] [[BystanderSyndrome Not Fucking Cared About]]. To the VPD, when criminals take each other out, it means less work for the cops.

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* DirtyCop: The Vale Police Department officers label their reports of [[EvilVersusEvil crimes between crime groups]] with the acronyms "FCA" and "NFCA." Velvet claims these stand for [[FantasticRacism Faunus Crime Associations and Non Faunus Crime Associations]], but Aurea Perrault adds that [[FunWithAcronyms "NFCA" also stands for]] [[BystanderSyndrome Not Fucking Cared About]]. To the VPD, when criminals take each other out, it means less work for the cops.



** Another OC, [[UpperClassTwit Venus Carlton]], comes into conflict with other characters on multiple occasions; two of those times, her company sees that she has bloodshot eyes, dilated pupils, and an agitated edge to her current emotional state, recognizing these as symptoms of drug abuse.

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** Another OC, [[UpperClassTwit Venus Carlton]], comes into conflict with other characters on multiple occasions; two of those times, her company sees that she has bloodshot eyes, dilated pupils, rapid breathing, and an agitated edge to her current emotional state, recognizing and they recognize these as symptoms of drug abuse.



* ItGetsEasier: [[spoiler:Neo suggests the conscience gets "limber" after the first dozen to explain why Ruby isn't overly bothered by the White Fang soldiers she killed]].

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* ItGetsEasier: [[spoiler:Neo suggests that "after the first dozen the conscience gets "limber" after the first dozen limber" to explain why Ruby isn't overly bothered by killing the White Fang soldiers she killed]].from Chapter 7]].



* LeftHanging: Due to [[DeadFic a lack of updates]], we're not likely to see [[spoiler:Cinder and Neo infiltrating Beacon Academy, Ruby's and Miltia's assassination of Hei "Junior" Xiong (Chapter 15, the last so far, promised "Next time around, the fate of Junior."), or any awesome (and hyped up in-story) sparring match between Pyrrha and Ruby]].



** One of the Vale Faunus Liberation Movement's soldiers wields a Dust-infused WhipSword hidden as a belt. A "Flex-Segmented Dust-Activated Blade," according to Ruby.
** Another VFLM member uses a longsword that doubles as an energy weapon, a "High-Energy Rail-Sword."

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** One of the Vale Faunus Liberation Movement's soldiers wields a Dust-infused WhipSword hidden [[ArsenalAttire disguised as a belt. belt]]. A "Flex-Segmented Dust-Activated Dust-Active Blade," according to Ruby.
[[{{Squee}} Ruby]].
** Another VFLM member uses a longsword that doubles as an energy weapon, rifle, a "High-Energy Rail-Sword."



** [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna is discovered this way twice]], [[PassFail despite efforts to avoid it]].

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** [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna is discovered this way twice]], [[PassFail despite making efforts to avoid it]].



* OriginalCharacter: Alice Sgathan, India and Venus, Velvet's parents, and various other background characters.

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: On Team JNPR[='=]s way to the Chapter 10[=/=]11 mission, Pyrrha gives Jaune a "cram session" of swordplay training. [[TheSpock Ren]] jokingly tells [[{{Adorkable}} Jaune]] to go easy on [[TheAce Pyrrha]], which takes both Jaune and Nora by surprise.
* OriginalCharacter: [[BitchInSheepsClothing Alice Sgathan, Sgathan]], [[{{Tomboy}} Aurea Perrault]], [[CasanovaWannabe India Tullamarine]] and Venus, Velvet's parents, [[UpperClassTwit Venus Carlton]], [[GoodParents Mark and Saffron Scarlatina]], and various other background characters.



* SiblingYinYang: Despite being too similar to be PolarOppositeTwins, Melanie and Miltia do have some significant differences, canon and [[OCStandIn invented]]. Besides their different dress colors (Melanie's [[WomanInWhite white]], Miltia's [[LadyInRed red]]), weapons (Melanie's [[ArmedLegs heel blades]], Miltia's [[WolverineClaws claw]] [[BladeBelowTheShoulder gauntlets]]), and hair lengths (Melanie has waist-length hair, [[FreezeFrameBonus Miltia has a bob haircut]]), this fic gives them different social-class side employer preferences (Melanie bodyguarded for [[DecadentCourt Vale's Society scene]], Miltia bodyguarded for [[GangBangers Vale's criminal underworld]]), [[spoiler:sexual orientations (Melanie's straight, Miltia's lesbian)]], and even conflict with each other (both are protective of each other, but Melanie doubted Miltia's combat skill after the Chapter 2 incident and dislikes Society girls due to [[AlphaBitch Weiss's influence]], while Miltia doubted Melanie's ability to handle Junior's anger and [[spoiler:dated [[RichBitch Alice Sgathan]] [=[=]and flirted with Ruby[=]=]]] at least partly to needle Melanie).

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* SiblingYinYang: Despite being too similar to be PolarOppositeTwins, Melanie and Miltia do have some significant differences, canon and [[OCStandIn invented]]. Besides their [[CoordinatedClothes different dress colors (Melanie's [[WomanInWhite colors]] ([[WomanInWhite Melanie's white]], [[LadyInRed Miltia's [[LadyInRed red]]), weapons (Melanie's [[ArmedLegs heel blades]], Miltia's [[WolverineClaws claw]] [[BladeBelowTheShoulder gauntlets]]), and hair lengths (Melanie has waist-length hair, [[FreezeFrameBonus Miltia has a bob haircut]]), this fic gives them different social-class side employer preferences (Melanie bodyguarded for [[DecadentCourt Vale's Society scene]], Miltia bodyguarded for [[GangBangers Vale's criminal underworld]]), [[spoiler:sexual orientations (Melanie's straight, Miltia's lesbian)]], and even conflict with each other (both are protective of each other, but Melanie doubted Miltia's combat skill after the Chapter 2 incident and dislikes Society girls due to [[AlphaBitch Weiss's influence]], while Miltia doubted Melanie's ability to handle Junior's anger and [[spoiler:dated [[RichBitch Alice Sgathan]] [=[=]and flirted with Ruby[=]=]]] at least partly to needle Melanie).



--> '''[[spoiler: Miltia Malachite]]:''' Do you really want to do this now? [[spoiler:I just asked you to kill someone]], and this is what you want to talk about?
--> '''[[spoiler: Ruby Rose]]:''' No, no, no[.] [[spoiler:You asked me to kill someone ''with you'']]. You think [[spoiler:it's the first part I should freak out about]]?

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--> ---> '''[[spoiler: Miltia Malachite]]:''' Do you really want to do this now? [[spoiler:I just asked you to kill someone]], and this is what you want to talk about?
--> ---> '''[[spoiler: Ruby Rose]]:''' No, no, no[.] [[spoiler:You asked me to kill someone ''with you'']]. You think [[spoiler:it's the first part I should freak out about]]?



* StylishProtectionGear: Since [[ArmorIsUseless armor is not completely useless]], several characters wear outfits that provide acceptable protection while still looking quite fashionable, such as the Malachite twins' and Alice Sgathan's [[MiniDressOfPower battle dresses]].

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* StylishProtectionGear: Since [[ArmorIsUseless armor is not completely useless]], several characters wear outfits that provide acceptable protection while still looking quite fashionable, such as the Malachite twins' and Alice Sgathan's [[MiniDressOfPower battle dresses]].dresses]]. [[ZigZaggedTrope However]]:
--> '''Chapter 14 Narration:''' [[DeflectorShields Aura]] meant form overtook function when deciding upon armour, but well-designed gear could make Aura stretch in a fight. Fighters had to think long and hard about the trade-offs between [[StoneWall protection]], [[FragileSpeedster mobility]], and [[ActionFashionista aesthetics]].



* {{Tomboy}}: [[OriginalCharacter Aurea Perrault]] likes being one, but is still jealous of prettier girls such as [[CoolBigSis Yang]] and [[TheAce Pyrrha]].



--> '''India:''' You know, suddenly she doesn't seem nearly so adorable.

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* VeteranInstructor: The narration notes this concept in Chapter 11, noting that the young age of [[SternTeacher Glynda Goodwitch]]'s substitute is a sign to Beacon students that she either likes teaching or is [[ThousandYardStare recovering from mental burnout]] as a Hunter.


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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Weiss's reaction to [[spoiler:a scroll alert about her classmates' fight with the White Fang in Chapter 14]].

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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: [[spoiler:While revealing the costs of maintaining her weapon]], Ruby says that her scythe's blades are "laser sharpened," and she has them custom-made for her out of stronger alloys than [[AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools she herself is capable of working]]. She uses Crescent Rose to chop up [[BearsAreBadNews Ursai]] in the forest as easily and messily as she slices and dices [[WolfMan Beowolves]] in the ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' "Red" trailer, [[spoiler:as well as breaking White Fang assassins' Auras and cutting them in half vertically for one-hit kills]].

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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: [[spoiler:While revealing the costs of maintaining her weapon]], Ruby says that her scythe's blades are "laser sharpened," and she has them custom-made for her out of stronger alloys than [[AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools she herself is capable of working]]. She uses Crescent Rose to chop up [[BearsAreBadNews Ursai]] in the forest as easily and messily as she slices and dices [[WolfMan [[TheBigBadWolf Beowolves]] in the ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' "Red" trailer, [[spoiler:as well as breaking White Fang assassins' Auras and cutting them in half vertically for one-hit kills]].



* TheBigBoard: Hei "Junior" Xiong has one in his BadGuyBar. He pins printed photographs of people he's investigating onto it, then projects a HolographicTerminal over it that can interface with [[EverythingIsAnIPodInTheFuture scrolls]]. He muses that [[NostalgiaFilter he's getting older and prefers the tactile printed photos even while dabbling with new technology]].



* BountyHunter: It's stated that bounties are offered for killing [[TheUsualAdversaries Grimm]], and Beacon Academy students (among others) are allowed to claim such bounties. Chapter 11 [[spoiler:featured a mission in which Ruby earned a hundred thousand lien by killing low-to-moderate Grimm such as [[TheBigBadWolf Beowolves]], [[FullBoarAction Boarbatusks]], and [[BearsAreBadNews Ursai]], and Ruby later learns that she ''additionally'' got credit for wounding the giant elder Beowolf that was killed off-screen by professional Huntsmen and Huntresses]].



** Junior becomes a mean drunk when he gets into his cups, one who can't quite remember what he did while under the influence. [[spoiler:He actually drunk-dialed Miltia while threatening her with the information he gathered at Roman's behest, causing her to panic and to try to convince Ruby to kill him for all their sakes]].

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** Junior becomes a mean drunk when he gets into his cups, one who [[WhatDidIDoLastNight can't quite remember what he did while under the influence.influence]]. [[spoiler:He actually drunk-dialed Miltia while threatening her with the information he gathered at Roman's behest, causing her to panic and to try to convince Ruby to kill him for all their sakes]].



* ChekhovsGunman: When [[spoiler:Ozpin orders Goodwitch to assemble a team of professional Huntsmen and Huntresses to kill the elder Beowolf in one night, her team includes "a dark man in a dusty cloak bearing a scythe in sable with cardinal trim]]." Later, [[spoiler:Goodwitch informs Ruby that, due to Ruby's successful attack that injured it earlier and "a persuasive argument by one of the Huntsmen attached to the party," Ruby got credit and bounty money for her effort]].

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* ChekhovsGunman: When [[spoiler:Ozpin orders Goodwitch to assemble a team of professional Huntsmen and Huntresses to kill the elder Beowolf in one night, her team includes "a dark man in a dusty cloak bearing a scythe in sable with cardinal trim]]." Later, [[spoiler:Goodwitch informs Ruby that, due to Ruby's successful attack that injured it earlier and "a persuasive argument by one of the Huntsmen attached to the party," Ruby got credit and extra bounty money for her effort]].



* DontThinkFeel: When Ruby stumbles while trying on high heels, she's advised to forget that she's wearing different shoes and imagine she's hunting Grimm on an unstable surface. She immediately improves, but still isn't [[InstantExpert perfect]].



** Hei "Junior" Xiong makes an important mistake while drunk that (after he wakes up hungover) he realizes he'll regret.

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** Hei "Junior" Xiong [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy makes an important mistake while drunk drunk]] that (after ([[WhatDidIDoLastNight after he wakes up hungover) hungover]]) [[ThisIsGonnaSuck he realizes he'll regret.regret]].



* ElementalWeapon: India Tullamarine’s [[GreenRocks Dust-infused]] FlamingSword and a Faunus gangster's [[ShockAndAwe electrified]] [[AnAxeToGrind battleaxe]].

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* ElementalWeapon: India Tullamarine’s [[GreenRocks Dust-infused]] FlamingSword and a Faunus gangster's White Fang {{Mook|s}}'s [[ShockAndAwe electrified]] [[AnAxeToGrind battleaxe]].



* GetYourMindOutOfTheGutter: Melanie uses a variation of this line about herself in Chapter 14.



* IconicItem: Ruby's and Blake's [[WeaponOfChoice weapons of choice]] are both so rare that they are recognizable, allowing [[spoiler:Miltia Malachite to know that Ruby's used it to kill before and for Velvet's father to warn her that Blake Belladonna might be linked to the White Fang]].

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* IconicItem: Ruby's [[spoiler:Ruby Roses's and Blake's Blake Belladonna's]] [[WeaponOfChoice weapons of choice]] are both so rare that they are enough to be recognizable, allowing [[spoiler:Miltia Malachite to know that Ruby's used it to kill before and for Velvet's father to warn her that Blake Belladonna might be linked to the White Fang]].



* IResembleThatRemark: When Weiss sees Ruby wearing outgrown clothes that now look like PaintedOnPants:
--> '''Weiss:''' You're growing, Ruby, and what was fine three years ago now looks like something your sister would wear.
--> '''Yang:''' Yeah, that's what I[[{{Beat}} ...]] Hey! What are you trying to say!?



* JudgeJuryAndExecutioner: Part of Huntsman[=/=]Huntress culture is that they police themselves, including those in training, as regular channels (i.e. the police) are unable to handle such incidences. The only time they ever get a higher authority (i.e. the faculty) involved is if it goes beyond their ability to handle.

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* JudgeJuryAndExecutioner: Part of Huntsman[=/=]Huntress culture is that they police themselves, including those students in training, as regular channels (i.e. the police) are unable to handle such incidences.incidents. The only time they ever get a higher authority (i.e. the faculty) involved is if it goes beyond their ability to handle.



* NeverLiveItDown: InUniverse, [[spoiler:India Tullamarine]] is repeatedly reminded of [[spoiler:how easily Ruby defeated him]].
* NoodleIncident: Melanie rattles off a list of attacks that Society boys and girls have inflicted upon her, [[spoiler:allegedly at Weiss Schnee's urging]]. They include being ambushed outside a weapons convention, having her dress set on fire at a gala, and even a random stranger walking up and asking her about a rumor that she had sold a kidney to pay for her dress. [[spoiler:Weiss specifically denies blame for the last one only]].



** [[spoiler:Ruby Rose successfully defies this in between a fight with Jaws of Menagerie gangsters and a visit to Velvet's family's cafe by chatting up a waitress who was smoking outside. The combination of her preexisting disguise (for looks) and the Dust powder and cigarette smoke (for smell) prevented Velvet]] from recognizing her until it was too late to keep her away.

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** [[spoiler:Ruby Rose successfully defies this in between a fight with Jaws of Menagerie gangsters and a visit to Velvet's family's cafe by chatting up a waitress who was smoking outside. The combination of her preexisting disguise (for looks) and the used Dust powder residue and cigarette smoke (for smell) prevented Velvet]] from recognizing her until it was too late to keep her away.



* PaintedOnPants: In Chapter 3, Ruby's casual clothes are shirts and [[WhoWearsShortShorts shorts]] that she bought when she was twelve, and she hasn't replaced the outgrown clothes because [[spoiler:she spent all of her money maintaining Crescent Rose]]. Weiss says her outfit "looks like something [[GoodBadGirl your sister]] would wear."

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* PaintedOnPants: In Chapter 3, Ruby's casual clothes are shirts and [[WhoWearsShortShorts shorts]] that she bought when she was twelve, and she hasn't replaced the outgrown clothes because [[spoiler:she spent all of her money maintaining Crescent Rose]]. Weiss says her outgrown outfit "looks like something [[GoodBadGirl your sister]] would wear."" [[IResembleThatRemark Yang is not quite pleased]].



* SpitTake: Neo is reading an information report when an unexpected detail makes her spit her coffee all over the page.



* SternTeacher: Glenda Goodwitch, as evident in the dressing down she gives everyone in Chapter 3.

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* SternTeacher: Glenda Glynda Goodwitch, as evident in the dressing down she gives everyone in Chapter 3.

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* OhCrap: [[spoiler:India Tullamarine]] has a moment upon realizing [[spoiler:Ruby Rose was holding back her scythe's sniper rifle fire]].
--> '''[[spoiler:India Tullamarine]]:''' ''[[PrecisionFStrike Sweet fuck]], [[spoiler:a sniper scy]][[CurseCutShort -!]]''

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'''[[spoiler:India Tullamarine]]:''' ''[[PrecisionFStrike Sweet fuck]], [[spoiler:a sniper scy]][[CurseCutShort -!]]''-!]]''
** [[spoiler:Miltia Malachite]] "freaks out" (her own words) when [[spoiler:Ruby reveals her alternate scythe blades with serrated edges]].



* PlausibleDeniability: Alice discusses this with Ruby, claiming that [[spoiler:since Pyrrha Nikos would disapprove of Weiss Schnee's drug habits, other people would look for ways to clue her in to Weiss's problems without Weiss discovering who told Pyrrha]].

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* PlausibleDeniability: PlausibleDeniability:
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Alice discusses this with Ruby, claiming that [[spoiler:since Pyrrha Nikos would disapprove of Weiss Schnee's drug habits, other people would look for ways to clue her in to Weiss's problems without Weiss discovering who told Pyrrha]].Pyrrha]].
** [[spoiler:Miltia begs Ruby not to use serrated blades in her scythe during the hit on Junior, claiming that normal blades will allow Ruby the excuse that she was warning him off investigating her, while sawtooth blades will unquestionably prove attempted murder]].
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: [[spoiler:While revealing the costs of maintaining her weapon]], Ruby says that her scythe's blades are "laser sharpened," and she has them custom-made for her out of stronger alloys than [[AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools she herself is capable of working]]. She uses Crescent Rose to chop up [[BearsAreBadNews Ursai]] in the forest as easily and messily as she slices and dices [[WolfMan Beowolves]] in the ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' "Red" trailer, [[spoiler:as well as breaking White Fang assassins' Auras and cutting them in half vertically for one-hit kills]].



* AccidentalTruth: Weiss suspects that [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna and Yang Xiao Long]] are hiding something from her, and says to them [[spoiler:that "[[OtherStockPhrases the cat is out of the bag]]!", enjoying [[OhCrap Blake's reaction]] without discovering that [[CatGirl Blake really is a Faunus]]]].

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* AccidentalTruth: Weiss suspects that [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna and Yang Xiao Long]] are hiding something from her, and says to them [[spoiler:that "[[OtherStockPhrases the cat is out of the bag]]!", enjoying [[OhCrap Blake's reaction]] without discovering that [[CatGirl Blake really is a Faunus]]]].Faunus]].



* AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools: Ruby planned, designed, and built Crescent Rose, even manufacturing a sizable portion of the parts herself, including all the wiring. She takes great pride in this, but [[spoiler:the blades are also a bit of a problem, though. Ruby used to either make them or make use of [[CoolUncle Qrow]]'s spares, but the current state of Crescent Rose requires blades beyond her ability to make, so she now has to have them specially built for her at great financial cost]].

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* AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools: Ruby planned, designed, and built Crescent Rose, Rose (as in canon), even manufacturing a sizable portion of the parts herself, including all the wiring. She takes great pride in this, but [[spoiler:the blades are also a bit of a problem, though. Ruby used to either make them or make use of [[CoolUncle Qrow]]'s Uncle Qrow's spares, but the current state of Crescent Rose requires blades alloys beyond her ability to make, so she now has to have needs them specially built for her at great financial cost]].



* AnimalStereotypes: Faunus tend to dislike having these applied to themselves or other Faunus, even if the speaker him-[=/=]herself is also a Faunus. When [[spoiler:Velvet Scarlatina references [[TrademarkFavoriteFood tuna fish]] to indicate [[PassFail her recognition of Blake as a Faunus]], Blake expresses disapproval of the "tuna stereotype," and Velvet apologizes for it]]. Also, after Velvet catches [[FakeOutMakeOut Miltia French-kissing the fox Faunus Sara]], Miltia twice asks Velvet about [[ReallyGetsAround fox girl stereotypes]], and Velvet expresses offense about the stereotype [[StereotypeReactionGag even while claiming that it's true about Sara]].
* AnythingThatMoves: [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long's previous dates included both boys and girls, both human and Faunus. She tells Blake Belladonna during a trip to the theater that she'd like to share the bed of a movie's male-human[=/=]female-Faunus lead couple, and eventually asks Blake to hook up with her without minding that [[CatGirl Blake is a cat-eared Faunus girl]]]].
* ArmorIsUseless: It's narrated that [[DeflectorShields a powerful Aura is a Huntsman's/Huntress's primary defense]], and that [[ArmorPiercingAttack attacks capable of piercing Auras will likely pierce armor as well]]. This is demonstrated when [[spoiler:Ruby Rose's scythe stab [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impales Miltia Malachite's Aura, battle dress, and torso]]]] in Chapter 2, but it's averted in Chapter 9 when [[spoiler:another heavy attack from Ruby Rose breaks Alice Sgathan's Aura and knocks her unconscious, but [[SternTeacher Glynda Goodwitch]] confirms that the steel lining of Alice's battle dress (barely) succeeded in preventing another serious injury]].

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* AnimalStereotypes: Faunus tend to dislike having these applied to themselves or other Faunus, even if the speaker him-[=/=]herself is also a Faunus. When [[spoiler:Velvet Scarlatina references [[TrademarkFavoriteFood tuna fish]] to indicate [[PassFail her recognition of Blake as a Faunus]], Faunus, Blake expresses disapproval of the "tuna stereotype," and Velvet apologizes for it]]. Also, after Velvet [[spoiler:Velvet catches [[FakeOutMakeOut Miltia French-kissing the fox Faunus Sara]], Sara, Miltia twice asks Velvet about [[ReallyGetsAround fox girl stereotypes]], and Velvet expresses offense about the stereotype [[StereotypeReactionGag even while claiming that it's true about Sara]].
Sara]]]].
* AnythingThatMoves: [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long's Long]]'s previous dates included both boys and girls, both human and Faunus. She tells Blake Belladonna [[BiTheWay casually mentions]] during a trip to the theater trip that [[AThreesomeIsHot she'd like to share the bed of a movie's male-human[=/=]female-Faunus male-human/female-Faunus lead couple, couple]], and eventually asks Blake to hook [[spoiler:hooks up with her Blake Belladonna without minding that [[CatGirl Blake is she's human and Blake's a cat-eared Faunus girl]]]].
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* ArmorIsUseless: It's narrated that [[DeflectorShields a powerful Aura is a Huntsman's/Huntress's primary defense]], and that [[ArmorPiercingAttack attacks capable of piercing Auras will likely pierce armor as well]]. This is demonstrated when [[spoiler:Ruby Rose's scythe stab [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impales Miltia Malachite's Aura, battle dress, and torso]]]] torso]] in Chapter 2, but it's averted in Chapter 9 when [[spoiler:another heavy attack from Ruby Rose breaks Alice Sgathan's Aura and knocks her unconscious, but [[SternTeacher Glynda Goodwitch]] Goodwitch confirms that the steel lining of Alice's battle dress (barely) succeeded in preventing another serious injury]].



* BadDreams: [[spoiler:Milita Malachite had some nightmares about [[SinisterScythe Crescent]] [[NamedWeapons Rose]] after Ruby Rose nearly killed her with it]].
* BadGuyBar: [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long's old watering hole is implied to be this]], and Hei "Junior" Xiong's bar definitely is.

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* BadDreams: [[spoiler:Milita Malachite had some nightmares about [[SinisterScythe Crescent]] [[NamedWeapons Rose]] Crescent Rose after Ruby Rose nearly killed her with it]].
* BadGuyBar: [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long's old watering hole is implied to be this]], and Hei "Junior" Xiong's bar nightclub definitely is.is.
* BelligerentSexualTension: [[spoiler:Miltia Malachite and Ruby Rose]], to the dismay of everyone around them, including each other. It doesn't help that [[spoiler:Miltia is accused of trying to seduce Ruby with the intention of breaking her heart]], or that [[spoiler:Ruby used to have "petting sessions" with other girls at Signal Academy for stress relief, and hasn't done so since transferring to Beacon Academy]].



* BungledSuicide: Chapter 6 reveals [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna tried to kill herself after her last mission with the White Fang by throwing herself off of a cliff. No one, not even her, expected to survive]].
* CanonDiscontinuity: This fic diverges from canon ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' between Volume 1, Chapter 14: ''Forever Fall Pt. 2'' and Volume 1, Chapter 15: ''The Stray''; the narrative acknowledges that [[spoiler:Jaune killed an [[BearsAreBadNews Ursa]] with Pyrrha's (unrecognized) help]], but differs on [[spoiler:the introduction of Sun Wukong and Blake's CatGirl reveal]]. In addition, certain other elements of the canon plot are altered, such as:

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* BungledSuicide: Chapter 6 reveals [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna tried to kill herself after her last mission with the White Fang by throwing herself off of a cliff. cliff]]. No one, not even her, expected her to survive]].
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* CanonDiscontinuity: This fic diverges from canon ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' between Volume 1, Chapter 14: ''Forever Fall Pt. 2'' and Volume 1, Chapter 15: ''The Stray''; the narrative acknowledges that [[spoiler:Jaune killed an [[BearsAreBadNews Ursa]] Ursa with Pyrrha's (unrecognized) help]], but differs on [[spoiler:the introduction of Sun Wukong and Blake's CatGirl Faunus reveal]]. In addition, certain other elements of the canon plot are altered, such as:



** Melanie and Miltia (who is commonly referred to as "Miltiades," the etymological origin of her canon name) Malachite were fired and blacklisted by Junior and enrolled at Beacon Academy after the events of the ''Yellow'' trailer, whereas Volume 2 Chapter 04: ''Painting the Town'' [[spoiler:retains both in Junior's employ (and he even stops his {{Mooks}} from attacking Yang again)]].
** Velvet Scarlatina is on "Team MAVM (Maven)" with the Malachite twins and an OC, and Team CFVY (Coffee) have different roles (except Fox Alistair, who has yet to appear). She is also portrayed as having a Semblance that allows her to cast Dust spells for both combat and healing, while Volume 3, Chapter 11: ''Heroes and Monsters'' reveals that [[spoiler:Velvet's Semblance is to create temporary {{Spectral Weapon Cop|y}}ies of her allies' weapons by [[CameraFiend taking photos of them]] and then [[InstantExpert wielding the copies with the same skill and techniques]] [[PowerCopying as the weapons' original owners]]]].

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** Melanie and Miltia (who is commonly referred to as "Miltiades," the etymological origin of her canon name) Malachite were fired and blacklisted by Junior and enrolled at Beacon Academy after the events of the ''Yellow'' ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' "Yellow" trailer, whereas Volume 2 Chapter 04: ''Painting the Town'' [[spoiler:retains both in Junior's employ (and he even stops his {{Mooks}} goons from attacking Yang again)]].
** Velvet Scarlatina is on "Team MAVM (Maven)" with the Malachite twins and an OC, and Team CFVY (Coffee) have different roles (except Fox Alistair, who has yet to appear). She is also portrayed as having a Semblance that allows her to cast Dust spells for both combat and healing, while Volume 3, Chapter 11: ''Heroes and Monsters'' reveals that [[spoiler:Velvet's Semblance is to create temporary {{Spectral Weapon Cop|y}}ies energy copies of her allies' weapons by [[CameraFiend after taking photos of them]] them and then [[InstantExpert wielding wield the copies with the same skill and techniques]] [[PowerCopying techniques as the weapons' original owners]]]].owners]].



** [[spoiler:Weiss admits to Ruby during their first practice run that]] she gets vicious after drinking (alcoholic) champagne, and that played a part in [[spoiler:abusing Melanie Malachite and inspiring her resentment]].



** Weiss admits to Ruby during their first practice run that she gets a mean streak after drinking (alcoholic) champagne, and that played a part in why the Malachite twins don't like her.



* CasanovaWannabe: [[OriginalCharacter India Tullamarine]] is always accompanied by [[UpperClassTwit Venus Carlton]], but far less successful at charming any other named female character. He meets with [[spoiler:Weiss and Ruby in Chapter 7, Ruby and Miltia in Chapter 13, and Weiss, Melanie, Pyrrha, and Alice Sgathan in Chapter 15]], none of whom are receptive to his charms.

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* CasanovaWannabe: [[OriginalCharacter India Tullamarine]] is always accompanied by [[UpperClassTwit Venus Carlton]], but far less successful at charming any other named female character. He meets with [[spoiler:Weiss and Ruby in Chapter 7, Ruby and Miltia in Chapter 13, and Weiss, Melanie, Pyrrha, and Alice Sgathan in Chapter 15]], none of whom are receptive to his charms.advances.



** One White Fang assassin mocks [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna for fleeing the organization and pursuing peace with humans, but lets her live with an invitation to return to the fold]]. Later, [[spoiler:Team JNPR are surprised to see Neo and Mercury Black, both humans, working with the White Fang]]; [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna is even more shocked (and outraged) to see White Fang Faunus taking orders from [[FantasticRacism Roman Torchwick]] despite him directly [[FantasticSlur calling them animals]]]].

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** One White Fang assassin mocks [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna for fleeing the organization and pursuing peace with humans, but lets her live with an invitation to return to the fold]]. Later, [[spoiler:Team JNPR are surprised to see Neo and Mercury Black, both humans, working with the White Fang]]; [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna is even more shocked (and outraged) to see White Fang Faunus taking orders from [[FantasticRacism Roman Torchwick]] despite him directly [[FantasticSlur [[FantasticSlurs calling them animals]]]].



* TheChainsOfCommanding: As the leaders of their group, Ruby, Melanie, and Jaune get dressed down for the fight in Chapter 2. Ruby for her lack of discipline, Melanie for initiating the prank in the first place that nearly got her sister killed, and Jaune for not getting involved when he was in the best position to mediate their hostility and help them in the hunt (due to the Malachites' CripplingOverspecialization).

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* TheChainsOfCommanding: As the leaders of their group, teams, Ruby, Melanie, and Jaune get dressed down for the fight in Chapter 2. Ruby for her [[spoiler:her lack of discipline, discipline]], Melanie for initiating [[spoiler:initiating the prank in the first place that nearly got her sister killed, killed]], and Jaune for not [[spoiler:not getting involved when he was in the best position to mediate their hostility and help them in the hunt (due (the Malachite twins' bodyguard weapons were not suited to fight the Malachites' CripplingOverspecialization).armor-carapaced Death Stalkers)]].



* ChekhovsGunman: When [[spoiler:Ozpin orders Goodwitch to assemble a team of professional Huntsmen and Huntresses to kill the elder Beowolf in one night, her team includes "[[CoolUncle a dark man in a dusty cloak bearing a scythe in sable with cardinal trim]]]]." Later, [[spoiler:Goodwitch informs Ruby that, due to Ruby's successful attack that injured it earlier and "a persuasive argument by one of the Huntsmen attached to the party," Ruby got credit and bounty money for her effort]].
* ChickMagnet: Ruby tells that she was this at Signal Academy, to the point where she's got a longer trail of broken hearts than Yang. [[spoiler:Considering the examples under LoveTriangle, she's still got it]].
* CoincidenceMagnet: Junior. He comes up with [[TheBigBoard a completely plausible chart]] in Chapter 11 of how [[TheConspiracy all the members of Teams MAVM, RWBY, and JNPR were in the same class and screwed him over]], but the truth of it was that [[OneDegreeOfSeparation it was all a bunch of coincidences]].
* ColossusClimb: Ruby against an ancient Grimm in Chapter 10.

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* ChekhovsGunman: When [[spoiler:Ozpin orders Goodwitch to assemble a team of professional Huntsmen and Huntresses to kill the elder Beowolf in one night, her team includes "[[CoolUncle a "a dark man in a dusty cloak bearing a scythe in sable with cardinal trim]]]].trim]]." Later, [[spoiler:Goodwitch informs Ruby that, due to Ruby's successful attack that injured it earlier and "a persuasive argument by one of the Huntsmen attached to the party," Ruby got credit and bounty money for her effort]].
* ChickMagnet: Ruby tells that [[spoiler:Ruby says she was this at Signal Academy, to the point where she's got a longer trail list of broken hearts exes than Yang. [[spoiler:Considering the examples under LoveTriangle, Considering how much Alice, Miltia, and Weiss are arguing over her, she's still got it]].
* CoincidenceMagnet: Junior. Hei "Junior" Xiong. He comes up with [[TheBigBoard a completely plausible chart]] in Chapter 11 of how [[TheConspiracy all the members of Teams MAVM, RWBY, MAVM and JNPR RWBY (and JNPR) were in the same class and screwed him over]], but the truth of it was that [[OneDegreeOfSeparation it was all a bunch of coincidences]].
* ColossusClimb: Ruby against an ancient Grimm in Chapter 10.11.



** [[spoiler:Ruby Rose was a ProfessionalKiller to pay for [[EasyLogistics her weapon's tremendous purchase and maintenance costs]]]].
** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee has a history of [[DrugsAreBad addiction to alcoholic champagne and cocaine]], and [[FunctionalAddict she still uses them]]]].
** [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna was a White Fang "[[DeadlyEuphemism operator]]" ([[ProfessionalKiller elite assassin]]), and they want her to rejoin them]].
** [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long was a [[GreenRocks Dust]] [[ArmsDealer runner]] for [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters White Fang]] [[LesCollaborateurs sympathizers]], working under Roman Torchwick and with Neo]].

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** [[spoiler:Ruby Rose was a ProfessionalKiller an assassin-for-hire to pay for [[EasyLogistics her weapon's tremendous purchase and maintenance costs]]]].
costs]].
** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee has a history of [[DrugsAreBad addiction to alcoholic champagne and cocaine]], cocaine, and [[FunctionalAddict she still uses them]]]].
them]].
** [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna was a White Fang "[[DeadlyEuphemism operator]]" ([[ProfessionalKiller elite assassin]]), "operator" (elite assassin), and they want her to rejoin them]].
** [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long was a [[GreenRocks Dust]] [[ArmsDealer runner]] Dust runner for [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters White Fang]] [[LesCollaborateurs sympathizers]], Fang sympathizers, working under Roman Torchwick and with Neo]].



** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is [not finished] recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like [more of] an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had [[TrialBalloonQuestion "hypothetically"]] [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society scene]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby (and Alice) let her quit at her own pace; she notes that, even though [[HealingFactor Aura helps to prevent physiological addiction]], the psychological stress and causes thereof that led to her use remain]].

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** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is [not finished] recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like [more of] an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had [[TrialBalloonQuestion "hypothetically"]] "hypothetically" [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society scene]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby (and Alice) let her quit at her own pace; she notes that, even though [[HealingFactor Aura helps to prevent physiological addiction]], the psychological stress and causes thereof that led to her use remain]].



-->'''[[spoiler:Ruby Rose]]:''' [[spoiler:My weapon's running costs are huge. These [[AbsurdlySharpBlade blade pieces are laser sharpened]], that costs two hundred Lien each and I wear them down faster than you think. Two hundred to sharpen, mind you, it's two thousand to replace. Every [[DepletedPhlebotinumShells round fired with a battle load of red Dust]] is ten Lien; I went through twenty today, and that was in a quick fight. I have to clean and regrease the moving parts weekly, or after every fight it gets dirty in. That's another three-hundred Lien in costs. And god forbid something happen to any of the motors. The principal barrel-crossbeam mechanism alone costs twenty-five thousand and not a half-lien less]].
-->'''[[spoiler:[[OhCrap Yang Xiao Long]]]]:''' [[OhMyGods Grimm and Dust]], [[spoiler:sis, how have you possibly afforded that weapon]]?
-->'''[[spoiler:Ruby Rose]]:''' [[spoiler:Well, being able to raid [[CoolUncle Uncle Qrow]]'s stockpile for second-hand parts always helped. But part of it was, well, forgoing buying anything else. Free canteen meals at every chance, or eating at home or with Uncle Qrow. And, well, as you can see, not buying clothes for a year or two at a time. Battle dress and Crescent Rose is all I've spent my money on for years now]].

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-->'''[[spoiler:Ruby --> '''[[spoiler:Ruby Rose]]:''' [[spoiler:My weapon's running costs are huge. These [[AbsurdlySharpBlade blade pieces are laser sharpened]], sharpened, that costs two hundred Lien each and I wear them down faster than you think. Two hundred to sharpen, mind you, it's two thousand to replace. Every [[DepletedPhlebotinumShells round fired with a battle load of red Dust]] Dust is ten Lien; I went through twenty today, and that was in a quick fight. I have to clean and regrease the moving parts weekly, or after every fight it gets dirty in. That's another three-hundred Lien in costs. And god forbid something happen to any of the motors. The principal barrel-crossbeam mechanism alone costs twenty-five thousand and not a half-lien less]].
-->'''[[spoiler:[[OhCrap --> '''[[spoiler:[[OhCrap Yang Xiao Long]]]]:''' [[OhMyGods Grimm and Dust]], [[spoiler:sis, how have you possibly afforded that weapon]]?
-->'''[[spoiler:Ruby --> '''[[spoiler:Ruby Rose]]:''' [[spoiler:Well, being able to raid [[CoolUncle Uncle Qrow]]'s Qrow's stockpile for second-hand parts always helped. But part of it was, well, forgoing buying anything else. Free canteen meals at every chance, or eating at home or with Uncle Qrow. And, well, as you can see, not buying clothes for a year or two at a time. Battle dress and Crescent Rose is all I've spent my money on for years now]].



-->'''Saffron:''' Do you have any straight girls in your class, honey?

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-->'''Saffron:''' --> '''Saffron:''' Do you have any straight girls in your class, honey?



* FakeOutMakeOut: Milita and a fox-girl Faunus in Chapter 6. It didn't work because Velvet suspected she heard anyway what she was eavesdropping on.
* FantasticSlur: As in canon, [[FantasticRacism racist humans]] often refer to [[LittleBitBeastly Faunus]] using animal-related insults.

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* FakeOutMakeOut: Milita [[spoiler:Milita and a fox-girl Faunus Faunus]] in Chapter 6. It didn't work because Velvet [[spoiler:Velvet Scarlatina]] suspected she heard anyway what she was eavesdropping on.
* FantasticSlur: FantasticSlurs: As in canon, [[FantasticRacism racist humans]] often refer to [[LittleBitBeastly Faunus]] using animal-related insults.insults.
* UsefulNotes/{{Fete}}: [[FamedInStory Pyrrha Nikos]] has learned about high society while being "tiresomely feted" at Mistral tournaments.



** Discussed between [[spoiler:Neo and Junior regarding the Malachite twins. Neo tells Junior that she [[ResignationsNotAccepted wouldn't have let them leave]] if she had been their boss; Junior initially assumes she would have [[BodyguardCrush sexual motivations to keep them]], and Neo counters that Junior should have either kept the Malachites or [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness killed them]] instead]].
* HumiliatingWager: [[CasanovaWannabe India Tullamarine]] (and [[UpperClassTwit Venus Carlton]]) wager against [[GirlyBruiser Ruby Rose]] (and [[AlphaBitch Weiss Schnee]]) that the loser's partner gives a kiss to the winner. [[spoiler:Ruby wins, but Venus is reluctant to follow through; Ruby declines to force her to despite Weiss's protests, but the rest of the Society torment her relentlessly until she finally follows through and shows Weiss a video record to convince her to "call off the hounds]]."

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** Discussed between [[spoiler:Neo and Junior regarding the Malachite twins. Neo tells Junior that she [[ResignationsNotAccepted wouldn't have let them leave]] if she had been their boss; Junior initially assumes she would have [[BodyguardCrush sexual motivations to keep them]], them, and Neo counters that Junior should have either kept the Malachites or [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness killed them]] instead]].
* HumiliatingWager: [[CasanovaWannabe India Tullamarine]] (and [[UpperClassTwit Venus Carlton]]) wager against [[GirlyBruiser Ruby Rose]] (and [[AlphaBitch Weiss Schnee]]) that the [[spoiler:the loser's partner gives a kiss to the winner. [[spoiler:Ruby Ruby wins, but Venus is reluctant to follow through; Ruby declines to force her to despite Weiss's protests, but the rest of the Society torment her relentlessly until she finally follows through and shows Weiss a video record to convince her to "call off the hounds]]."



* ICallItVera: Ruby not only named her [[SniperRifle sniper]]-[[SinisterScythe scythe]] "Crescent Rose," she also calls it her "sweetheart" (as in canon). This fic posits as justification that [[spoiler:[[EasyLogistics the tremendous financial cost of creating, maintaining, and upgrading Crescent Rose]], as well as [[ProfessionalKiller the means by which she attained those funds]], makes her as acutely aware of the weapon's value as [[OneManArmy the mind-blowing feats of arms she accomplishes with it]]]].
* IconicItem: Ruby's and Blake's [[WeaponOfChoice weapons of choice]] are both so rare that they are recognizable, allowing Miltia to know full-well that Ruby's used it to kill before and for Velvet's father to warn her that [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna was involved with White Fang]].
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:Ruby Rose uses a scythe attack so powerful that it runs Miltia Malachite through her torso ([[DeflectorShields Aura]], [[ArmorIsUseless battle]] [[StylishProtectionGear dress]], and all) and pins her to the ground in the same swing. To save Miltia's life, Velvet Scarlatina has to tell Ruby to slowly remove [[NamedWeapons Crescent Rose]] while Velvet uses healing magic to restore Miltia's flesh (including her right lung) as the scythe makes room. Crescent Rose comes out completely dripping blood (Ruby has to clean it as soon as possible so that the blood won't rust the blade), and Miltia has nightmares about Crescent Rose impaling her for several nights afterward]].
* ImpossiblyTackyClothes: [[spoiler:Junior orders Coco Adel to wear a cream-and-tan-colored version of [[MiniDressOfPower the Malachite twins' dresses]] as a "uniform" to blend in with the [[BadGuyBar club atmosphere]]. While Melanie and Miltia liked their own respective [[WomanInWhite white]] and [[LadyInRed red]] dresses (and so do other people), Coco thinks her brown dress is horrible, and even Miltia thinks of it as "crap-coloured" when she sees it]].

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* ICallItVera: Ruby not only named her [[SniperRifle sniper]]-[[SinisterScythe scythe]] "Crescent Rose," she also calls it her "sweetheart" (as in canon). This fic posits as justification that [[spoiler:[[EasyLogistics the [[spoiler:the tremendous financial cost of creating, maintaining, and upgrading Crescent Rose]], Rose, as well as [[ProfessionalKiller the means by which she attained those funds]], funds, makes her as acutely aware of the weapon's value as [[OneManArmy the mind-blowing feats of arms she accomplishes with it]]]].
it]].
* IconicItem: Ruby's and Blake's [[WeaponOfChoice weapons of choice]] are both so rare that they are recognizable, allowing Miltia [[spoiler:Miltia Malachite to know full-well that Ruby's used it to kill before and for Velvet's father to warn her that [[spoiler:Blake Blake Belladonna was involved with might be linked to the White Fang]].
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:Ruby Rose uses a scythe attack so powerful that it runs Miltia Malachite through her torso ([[DeflectorShields Aura]], [[ArmorIsUseless battle]] [[StylishProtectionGear dress]], (Aura, battle dress, and all) and pins her to the ground in the same swing. To save Miltia's life, Velvet Scarlatina has to tell Ruby to slowly remove [[NamedWeapons Crescent Rose]] Rose while Velvet uses healing magic to restore Miltia's flesh (including her right lung) as the scythe makes room. Crescent Rose The scythe blade comes out completely dripping blood (Ruby has to clean it as soon as possible so that the blood won't rust the blade), and Miltia has nightmares about Crescent Rose impaling her for several nights afterward]].
* ImpossiblyTackyClothes: [[spoiler:Junior orders Coco Adel to wear a cream-and-tan-colored version of [[MiniDressOfPower the Malachite twins' dresses]] dresses as a "uniform" to blend in with the [[BadGuyBar club atmosphere]]. atmosphere. While Melanie and Miltia liked their own respective [[WomanInWhite white]] white and [[LadyInRed red]] red dresses (and so do other people), Coco thinks her brown dress is horrible, and even Miltia thinks of it as "crap-coloured" when she sees it]].



* ImStandingRightHere: After [[SheCleansUpNicely Ruby comes out of a clothes boutique in a Weiss-picked ensemble]] and walks over to the rest of her team, Yang [[RecognitionFailure completely fails to recognize her own sister]] and complains about Ruby's failure to maintain her wardrobe until Ruby interrupts her.



* MamaBear[=/=]PapaWolf: At Velvet's request, her father uses his contacts within local Faunus resistance groups to investigate Blake Belladonna's possible connections to Faunus terrorist organizations. Velvet's mother runs a cafe with a sign that reads "Peace Begets Peace" on the window, but when she glares at Ruby during an incident there, Ruby finds her glare scarier than the inside of a giant Beowolf's maw.

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* MamaBear[=/=]PapaWolf: At Velvet's request, her father uses his contacts within local Faunus resistance groups to investigate Blake [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna's possible connections to Faunus terrorist organizations. organizations]]. Velvet's mother runs a cafe with a sign that reads "Peace Begets Peace" on the window, but when she glares at Ruby during an incident there, Ruby finds her glare gaze scarier than the inside [[spoiler:the maw of a giant Beowolf's maw.Beowolf that nearly ate her alive]].



* MySisterIsOffLimits: Yang is well-known for this at Signal and the reason Ruby doesn't tell her about her orientation at first.

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* MySisterIsOffLimits: Yang is well-known for this at Signal and the reason Ruby [[spoiler:Ruby doesn't tell her about her orientation at first.first]].



* NaiveNewcomer: Jaune is constantly shown to be completely unaware of Hunter traditions and culture, managing to be both completely horrified by the way Huntsmen and Huntresses do things and to completely horrify his peers because he and they don't understand each other's interpretations of their words and actions.
* TheNoseKnows: Faunus can recognize other Faunus by smell. [[spoiler:[[CatGirl Blake Belladonna]]]] [[PassFail is discovered this way twice]].

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* NaiveNewcomer: Jaune is constantly shown to be completely unaware of Hunter traditions and culture, managing to be both completely be horrified by the way Huntsmen and Huntresses do things and to completely horrify his peers because he and they don't understand each other's interpretations of their words and actions.
* TheNoseKnows: Faunus can recognize have good enough senses of smell to identify other Faunus by smell. [[spoiler:[[CatGirl Blake Belladonna]]]] [[PassFail or even specific individuals.
** [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna
is discovered this way twice]].twice]], [[PassFail despite efforts to avoid it]].
** [[spoiler:Ruby Rose successfully defies this in between a fight with Jaws of Menagerie gangsters and a visit to Velvet's family's cafe by chatting up a waitress who was smoking outside. The combination of her preexisting disguise (for looks) and the Dust powder and cigarette smoke (for smell) prevented Velvet]] from recognizing her until it was too late to keep her away.



--->[='=]''The woman is completely unfair'',[='=] [Roman] thought to himself in dismay. [='=]''It's hard enough to match wits with her when you don't want to pin her ankles back to her ears''.[='=] But the infamous Torchwick was a [[GentlemanThief gentleman thief]], and those [[ShesGotLegs goddamned sinful legs]] could do as they pleased, she wouldn't get the satisfaction of knowing it affected him.

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--->[='=]''The ---> [='=]''The woman is completely unfair'',[='=] [Roman] thought to himself in dismay. [='=]''It's hard enough to match wits with her when you don't want to pin her ankles back to her ears''.[='=] But the infamous Torchwick was a [[GentlemanThief gentleman thief]], and those [[ShesGotLegs goddamned sinful legs]] could do as they pleased, she wouldn't get the satisfaction of knowing it affected him.



* OhCrap: India has a moment upon realizing the giant scythe Ruby is swinging around is [[MixAndMatchWeapon also a gun]].
-->'''India:''' ''Sweet fuck, a sniper [[CurseCutShort scy–]]!''

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* OhCrap: India [[spoiler:India Tullamarine]] has a moment upon realizing the giant scythe Ruby is swinging around is [[MixAndMatchWeapon also a gun]].
-->'''India:''' ''Sweet fuck, a
[[spoiler:Ruby Rose was holding back her scythe's sniper [[CurseCutShort scy–]]!''rifle capacity]].
--> '''[[spoiler:India Tullamarine]]:''' ''[[PrecisionFStrike Sweet fuck]], [[spoiler:a sniper scy]][[CurseCutShort -!]]''



** Some Faunus characters use "God's Horns" as an exclamation. [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna is the first to use it in the story when she is surprised by Yang Xiao Long, and mentally remembers that "[t]he imprecation was an ancient Faunus one" that she should be careful not to use in front of [[FantasticRacism humans such as Weiss Schnee]]]].

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** Some Faunus characters use "God's Horns" as an exclamation. [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna is the first to use it in the story when she is surprised by Yang Xiao Long, and mentally remembers that "[t]he imprecation was an ancient Faunus one" that she should be careful not to use in front of [[FantasticRacism humans such as Weiss Schnee]]]].Schnee]].



* OneHitKill: [[spoiler:Ruby Rose one-hit-kills multiple adult White Fang assassins, to the shock of Teams RWBY and JNPR]].



** OCStandIn: Melanie and Miltia Malachite, the twin girls who fought Yang in the ''Yellow'' trailer.

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** OCStandIn: Melanie and Miltia Malachite, the twin girls who fought Yang in the ''Yellow'' ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' "Yellow" trailer.



** [[spoiler:Ruby Rose tells Miltia Malachite that this is how she gets all the money to pay for Crescent Rose. Neo is one too, and when they meet, they drop hints that they're both part of a MurderInc]].

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** [[spoiler:Ruby Rose tells Miltia Malachite that this is how she gets all the money to pay for Crescent Rose. Neo is one too, and when they meet, they drop hints that they're both part of a MurderInc]].their paths have crossed earlier]].



** Alice Sgathan says in Chapter 6 that the "[[DrugsAreBad Society girl special]]" of Vale's high society would be known to Mistral's society scene as "sparkles;" however, when [[spoiler:Pyrrha Nikos, a celebrated Mistral tournament champion, discovers that Weiss is using the special]] in Chapter 15, her third-person narration reveals that Mistral's upper class refers to it as "bubbles." Possibly justified as an in-character mistake, since Alice mispronounced Pyrrha Nikos's surname as "Nikoh" before Ruby corrected her.

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** Alice Sgathan says in Chapter 6 that the "[[DrugsAreBad Society girl special]]" of Vale's high society would be known to Mistral's society scene as "sparkles;" however, when [[spoiler:Pyrrha Nikos, a celebrated Mistral tournament champion, discovers that Weiss is using the special]] in Chapter 15, her third-person narration reveals that Mistral's upper class refers to it as "bubbles." Possibly justified as an in-character mistake, since Alice also mispronounced Pyrrha Nikos's surname as "Nikoh" before Ruby corrected her.her in the same conversation.



* SheCleansUpNicely: Weiss takes Ruby out shopping for new clothes at a high-class boutique after Team RWBY sees their leader in two- to three-year-old [[PaintedOnPants clothes that barely fit anymore]]. After Ruby is all dressed up with clothes that Weiss picked out for her, Weiss praises her own fashion sense [[ThatCameOutWrong using words open to misinterpretation]], and even Yang (Ruby's own sister) doesn't immediately recognize her.



* SignatureScent: Alice wears a brand of perfume so hard to find that Weiss and Miltia immediately recognize that Ruby's been involved with her when they catch its scent on Ruby.
* SpySpeak: In the form of Sign[=/=]Countersign between [[spoiler:Neo and Ruby]], when they first meet.

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* SignatureScent: Alice wears a brand of perfume so hard to find that Weiss [[spoiler:Weiss and Miltia immediately recognize that Ruby's been involved with her when they catch its scent on Ruby.
Ruby]].
* SkewedPriorities:
** In Chapter 8, [[spoiler:Ruby complains that three major shocks have disrupted her life: she nearly killed Miltia and got in trouble with Professors Ozpin and Goodwitch and her classmates for it, was outed as a lesbian by Weiss and Miltia in front of her sister and friends, and had to fight with Weiss against a team of White Fang assassins. Nora notices about the latter that Ruby complained only about fighting the White Fang, not about having killed them]].
** Similarly, in Chapter 12, [[spoiler:Miltia asks Ruby to help her kill Hei "Junior" Xiong, but they get sidetracked into an argument about their BelligerentSexualTension]]:
--> '''[[spoiler: Miltia Malachite]]:''' Do you really want to do this now? [[spoiler:I just asked you to kill someone]], and this is what you want to talk about?
--> '''[[spoiler: Ruby Rose]]:''' No, no, no[.] [[spoiler:You asked me to kill someone ''with you'']]. You think [[spoiler:it's the first part I should freak out about]]?
** Finally, in Chapter 13, after [[spoiler:the Faunus that Trevor contacted to investigate Blake claims to be a Jaws of Menagerie member (after denying being White Fang), Trevor [[YouHaveToBelieveMe swears to Velvet's father Mark]] that he didn't know the contact was a terrorist]]. Velvet's father tells him not to swear in front of his daughter, but Velvet uses a PrecisionFStrike to get his priorities straight.
* SpySpeak: In the form of [[spoiler:Neo and Ruby Rose, both in disguise,]] use Sign[=/=]Countersign between [[spoiler:Neo and Ruby]], when they first meet.



* SunglassesAtNight: Junior pokes fun at [[spoiler:Coco Adel]] for wearing sunglasses indoors past midnight, but [[spoiler:she shoots back that [[ActionFashionista she has to make some concession to fashion]] because [[ImpossiblyTackyClothes the uniform is not her style]]]].

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* SunglassesAtNight: Junior pokes fun at [[spoiler:Coco Adel]] his new hire for wearing sunglasses indoors past midnight, but [[spoiler:she she shoots back that [[ActionFashionista she has to make some concession to fashion]] because [[ImpossiblyTackyClothes the uniform is not her style]]]].style]].



-->'''Weiss:''' Ha, it looks like a success from back here too. ({{Beat}}) Oh god, that sounded completely wrong.

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-->'''Weiss:''' --> '''Weiss:''' Ha, [[SheCleansUpNicely it looks like a success from back here too.too]]. ({{Beat}}) Oh god, that sounded completely wrong.



-->'''Jaune:''' At some point, we have to be able to work together.
-->'''Ren:''' Otherwise, we'll not only end up dead, but the coroner will sign our certificates with 'Death by Stupidity'. Not how I'd like to go out.
* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: A moment of panic by Ruby leading to [[spoiler:her attempt to kill Miltia]] starts off the plot and gives the first few hints at the eponymous secrets.
* TrustPassword: [[spoiler: Ruby Rose and Neo]] exchange one in spy speak.
-->'''[[spoiler:Neo]]:''' So breathe easy, sister.
-->'''[[spoiler:Ruby]]:''' Free air is easy to breathe, sister.

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-->'''Jaune:''' --> '''Jaune:''' At some point, we have to be able to work together.
-->'''Ren:''' --> '''Ren:''' Otherwise, we'll not only end up dead, but the coroner will sign our certificates with 'Death by Stupidity'. Not how I'd like to go out.
* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: A moment of panic by Ruby [[spoiler:Ruby Rose, leading to [[spoiler:her her attempt to kill Miltia]] Miltia Malachite]], starts off the plot and gives the first few hints at the eponymous secrets.
* TrustPassword: [[spoiler: [[spoiler:Neo and Ruby Rose and Neo]] Rose, both disguised,]] exchange one in spy speak.
-->'''[[spoiler:Neo]]:'''
SpySpeak.
--> '''[[spoiler:Neo]]:'''
So breathe easy, sister.
-->'''[[spoiler:Ruby]]:''' --> '''[[spoiler:Ruby]]:''' Free air is easy to breathe, sister.



-->'''India:''' You know, suddenly she doesn't seem nearly so adorable.

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-->'''India:''' --> '''India:''' You know, suddenly she doesn't seem nearly so adorable.



* WhatTheHellHero: A good number of people call Ruby out on nearly killing Miltia in Chapter 2.

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* WhatTheHellHero: A good number of people call Ruby out [[spoiler:Ruby Rose on nearly killing Miltia Malachite]] in Chapter 2.



* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Neo is of this opinion with regard to the Malachite twins, namely that Junior should either have kept them or silenced them since [[HeKnowsTooMuch they knew too much]].

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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Neo is of this opinion with regard to the Malachite twins, namely that Junior should either [[ResignationsNotAccepted have instead kept them or silenced them killed them]] since [[HeKnowsTooMuch they knew too much]].inside information about his business]].
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* AccidentalTruth: Weiss suspects that [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna and Yang Xiao Long]] are hiding something from her, and says to them [[spoiler:that "[[OtherStockPhrases the cat is out of the bag]]!", enjoying [[OhCrap Blake's reaction]] without discovering that [[CatGirl Blake really is a Faunus]]]].

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* AlphaBitch[=/=]RichBitch: Every single Society girl ever seen on-screen. [[spoiler:Weiss rules them all]].

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* AlphaBitch[=/=]RichBitch: Every single Society girl ever seen on-screen. AlphaBitch: [[spoiler:Weiss rules them all]].Schnee used to be, and (less proudly) still is,]] "the tyrant of the Society scene."



* CasanovaWannabe: [[OriginalCharacter India Tullamarine]] is always accompanied by [[RichBitch Venus Carlton]], but far less successful at charming any other named female character. He meets with [[spoiler:Weiss and Ruby in Chapter 7, Ruby and Miltia in Chapter 13, and Weiss, Melanie, Pyrrha, and Alice Sgathan in Chapter 15]], none of whom are receptive to his charms.

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* CasanovaWannabe: [[OriginalCharacter India Tullamarine]] is always accompanied by [[RichBitch [[UpperClassTwit Venus Carlton]], but far less successful at charming any other named female character. He meets with [[spoiler:Weiss and Ruby in Chapter 7, Ruby and Miltia in Chapter 13, and Weiss, Melanie, Pyrrha, and Alice Sgathan in Chapter 15]], none of whom are receptive to his charms.



* DecadentCourt: The "Society," the sons and daughters of Remnant's wealthiest families and most powerful businesses.

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* DecadentCourt: The "Society," the [[UpperClassTwit sons and daughters daughters]] of Remnant's [[FictionFiveHundred wealthiest families families]] and [[MegaCorp most powerful businesses.businesses]].



** Another OC, [[RichBitch Venus Carlton]], comes into conflict with other characters on multiple occasions; two of those times, her company sees that she has bloodshot eyes, dilated pupils, and an agitated edge to her current emotional state, recognizing these as symptoms of drug abuse.

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** Another OC, [[RichBitch [[UpperClassTwit Venus Carlton]], comes into conflict with other characters on multiple occasions; two of those times, her company sees that she has bloodshot eyes, dilated pupils, and an agitated edge to her current emotional state, recognizing these as symptoms of drug abuse.



* HumiliatingWager: [[CasanovaWannabe India Tullamarine]] (and [[RichBitch Venus Carlton]]) wager against [[GirlyBruiser Ruby Rose]] (and [[AlphaBitch Weiss Schnee]]) that the loser's partner gives a kiss to the winner. [[spoiler:Ruby wins, but Venus is reluctant to follow through; Ruby declines to force her to despite Weiss's protests, but the rest of the Society torment her relentlessly until she finally follows through and shows Weiss a video record to convince her to "call off the hounds]]."

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* HumiliatingWager: [[CasanovaWannabe India Tullamarine]] (and [[RichBitch [[UpperClassTwit Venus Carlton]]) wager against [[GirlyBruiser Ruby Rose]] (and [[AlphaBitch Weiss Schnee]]) that the loser's partner gives a kiss to the winner. [[spoiler:Ruby wins, but Venus is reluctant to follow through; Ruby declines to force her to despite Weiss's protests, but the rest of the Society torment her relentlessly until she finally follows through and shows Weiss a video record to convince her to "call off the hounds]]."



* RichBitch[=/=]UpperClassTwit: Every single Society girl ever seen on-screen. [[spoiler:[[AlphaBitch Weiss Schnee]] rules them all]].



* SiblingYinYang: Despite being too similar to be PolarOppositeTwins, Melanie and Miltia do have some significant differences, canon and [[OCStandIn invented]]. Besides their different dress colors (Melanie's [[WomanInWhite white]], Miltia's [[LadyInRed red]]), weapons (Melanie's [[ArmedLegs heel blades]], Miltia's [[WolverineClaws claw]] [[BladeBelowTheShoulder gauntlets]]), and hair lengths (Melanie has waist-length hair, [[FreezeFrameBonus Miltia has a bob haircut]]), this fic gives them different social-class employer preferences (Melanie bodyguarded [[DecadentCourt Society boys]], Miltia bodyguarded [[BadGuyBar clubbers]]), [[spoiler:sexual orientations (Melanie's straight, Miltia's lesbian)]], and even conflict with each other (both are protective of each other, but Melanie doubted Miltia's combat skill after the Chapter 2 incident and dislikes Society girls due to [[AlphaBitch Weiss's influence]], while Miltia doubted Melanie's ability to handle Junior's anger and dated Alice Sgathan [[spoiler:[=[=]and flirted with Ruby[=]=]]] at least partly to needle Melanie).

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* SiblingYinYang: Despite being too similar to be PolarOppositeTwins, Melanie and Miltia do have some significant differences, canon and [[OCStandIn invented]]. Besides their different dress colors (Melanie's [[WomanInWhite white]], Miltia's [[LadyInRed red]]), weapons (Melanie's [[ArmedLegs heel blades]], Miltia's [[WolverineClaws claw]] [[BladeBelowTheShoulder gauntlets]]), and hair lengths (Melanie has waist-length hair, [[FreezeFrameBonus Miltia has a bob haircut]]), this fic gives them different social-class side employer preferences (Melanie bodyguarded for [[DecadentCourt Vale's Society boys]], scene]], Miltia bodyguarded [[BadGuyBar clubbers]]), for [[GangBangers Vale's criminal underworld]]), [[spoiler:sexual orientations (Melanie's straight, Miltia's lesbian)]], and even conflict with each other (both are protective of each other, but Melanie doubted Miltia's combat skill after the Chapter 2 incident and dislikes Society girls due to [[AlphaBitch Weiss's influence]], while Miltia doubted Melanie's ability to handle Junior's anger and dated [[spoiler:dated [[RichBitch Alice Sgathan [[spoiler:[=[=]and Sgathan]] [=[=]and flirted with Ruby[=]=]]] at least partly to needle Melanie).



* ValleyGirl: The Malachite twins still have the [[DullSurprise speech tones]], [[LikeIsLikeAComma word choices]], and [[ActionFashionista fashion sense]], but it's noted more than once that they're not to be mistaken for vapid fools; they were successful BodyguardBabes (before [[OneManArmy Yang beat them, and their boss's Mooks, and their boss himself]]) to [[BadGuyBar clubbers]] and [[DecadentCourt Society people]], after all.

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* ValleyGirl: The Malachite twins still have the [[DullSurprise speech tones]], [[LikeIsLikeAComma word choices]], and [[ActionFashionista fashion sense]], but it's noted more than once that they're not to be mistaken for vapid fools; they were successful BodyguardBabes (before [[OneManArmy Yang beat them, and their boss's Mooks, and their boss himself]]) to [[BadGuyBar clubbers]] and Vale's [[DecadentCourt Society people]], "Society" scene]] and [[GangBangers criminal underworld]], after all. all.

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* AnythingThatMoves: [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long's previous dates included both boys and girls, both human and Faunus. She tells Blake Belladonna during a trip to the theater that she'd like to share the bed of a movie's male-human[=/=]female-Faunus lead couple, and eventually asks Blake to hook up with her without minding that [[CatGirl Blake is a cat-eared Faunus girl]]]].


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* SeriesContinuityError: Not counting discrepancies with canon ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'', the fic contains some inconsistencies:
** Alice Sgathan says in Chapter 6 that the "[[DrugsAreBad Society girl special]]" of Vale's high society would be known to Mistral's society scene as "sparkles;" however, when [[spoiler:Pyrrha Nikos, a celebrated Mistral tournament champion, discovers that Weiss is using the special]] in Chapter 15, her third-person narration reveals that Mistral's upper class refers to it as "bubbles." Possibly justified as an in-character mistake, since Alice mispronounced Pyrrha Nikos's surname as "Nikoh" before Ruby corrected her.
** At the end of Chapter 7, [[spoiler:Mercury Black unwittingly meets Beacon Academy students before Cinder Fall can begin her mission to infiltrate Beacon with him and Emerald Sustrai disguised as students]]. However, in the second half of Chapter 10, [[spoiler:Cinder verbally complains about "Emerald's foolish exposure" when Mercury was the one who made the mistake and Emerald]] hadn't appeared in the story yet.

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* AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools: Ruby planned, designed, and built Crescent Rose, even manufacturing a sizable portion of the parts herself, including all the wiring. She takes great pride in this, but the blades are also a bit of a problem, though. Ruby used to either make them or make use of [[CoolUncle Qrow]]'s spares, but the current state of Crescent Rose requires blades beyond her ability to make, so she now has to have them specially built for her at great financial cost.

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* AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools: Ruby planned, designed, and built Crescent Rose, even manufacturing a sizable portion of the parts herself, including all the wiring. She takes great pride in this, but the [[spoiler:the blades are also a bit of a problem, though. Ruby used to either make them or make use of [[CoolUncle Qrow]]'s spares, but the current state of Crescent Rose requires blades beyond her ability to make, so she now has to have them specially built for her at great financial cost.cost]].



* ArmorPiercingAttack: Ruby’s scythe style includes several strikes designed to pierce an opponent’s armour [[spoiler:and their protective Aura]].

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* ArmorIsUseless: It's narrated that [[DeflectorShields a powerful Aura is a Huntsman's/Huntress's primary defense]], and that [[ArmorPiercingAttack attacks capable of piercing Auras will likely pierce armor as well]]. This is demonstrated when [[spoiler:Ruby Rose's scythe stab [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impales Miltia Malachite's Aura, battle dress, and torso]]]] in Chapter 2, but it's averted in Chapter 9 when [[spoiler:another heavy attack from Ruby Rose breaks Alice Sgathan's Aura and knocks her unconscious, but [[SternTeacher Glynda Goodwitch]] confirms that the steel lining of Alice's battle dress (barely) succeeded in preventing another serious injury]].
* ArmorPiercingAttack: Ruby’s scythe style includes several strikes designed to pierce an opponent’s armour armor [[spoiler:and their protective Aura]].



** Blake [[spoiler:and Yang for their involvement with the White Fang]].
** Weiss [[spoiler:for her actions as a Society girl]].
* BadDreams: Milita had some nightmares about Crescent Rose after Ruby nearly killed her with it.
* BadGuyBar: [[spoiler:Yang's old watering hole is implied to be this]], and Hei "Junior" Xiong's bar definitely is.

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** Blake [[spoiler:and [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna and Yang Xiao Long for their involvement with the White Fang]].
** Weiss [[spoiler:for [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee for her actions as a Society girl]].
* BadDreams: Milita [[spoiler:Milita Malachite had some nightmares about Crescent Rose [[SinisterScythe Crescent]] [[NamedWeapons Rose]] after Ruby Rose nearly killed her with it.
it]].
* BadGuyBar: [[spoiler:Yang's [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long's old watering hole is implied to be this]], and Hei "Junior" Xiong's bar definitely is.



* BlatantLies: [[spoiler:Ruby tells several, and shocks people with her ability to do so [[ConsummateLiar with a pure, honest, and innocent face]]]].
* BlownAcrossTheRoom: Miltia is sent flying by Ruby’s first shot in Chapter 1.

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* BlatantLies: [[spoiler:Ruby Rose tells several, many, and shocks people with her ability to do so [[ConsummateLiar with a pure, honest, and innocent face]]]].
* BlownAcrossTheRoom: Miltia [[spoiler:Miltia Malachite is sent flying by Ruby’s Ruby Rose’s first shot sniper shot]] in Chapter 1.



* BungledSuicide: Chapter 6 reveals [[spoiler:Blake tried to kill herself after her last mission with the White Fang by throwing herself off of a cliff. No one, not even her, expected to survive]].

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* BungledSuicide: Chapter 6 reveals [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna tried to kill herself after her last mission with the White Fang by throwing herself off of a cliff. No one, not even her, expected to survive]].



* CharacterTic: Since they wear [[MagicSkirt combat skirts]], the Malachite twins cross their legs when sitting to avoid {{Panty Shot}}s.

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* CharacterTic: Since they wear [[MagicSkirt combat skirts]], [[MiniDressOfPower battle dresses]], the Malachite twins cross their legs when sitting to avoid {{Panty Shot}}s.



* DarkSecret: Every single member of RWBY has one.
** [[spoiler:Ruby was a ProfessionalKiller to pay for her weapon]].
** [[spoiler:Weiss has a history with being a FunctionalAddict]].
** [[spoiler:Blake was a member of the White Fang and a trigger agent]].
** [[spoiler:Yang was a Dust Runner for White Fang sympathizers, working under Roman Torchwick and alongside Neo]].

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* DarkSecret: Every single member of Team RWBY has one.
one; it's in the fic's title, after all.
** [[spoiler:Ruby Rose was a ProfessionalKiller to pay for [[EasyLogistics her weapon]].
weapon's tremendous purchase and maintenance costs]]]].
** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee has a history with being a FunctionalAddict]].
of [[DrugsAreBad addiction to alcoholic champagne and cocaine]], and [[FunctionalAddict she still uses them]]]].
** [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna was a member of the White Fang "[[DeadlyEuphemism operator]]" ([[ProfessionalKiller elite assassin]]), and a trigger agent]].
they want her to rejoin them]].
** [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long was a Dust Runner [[GreenRocks Dust]] [[ArmsDealer runner]] for [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters White Fang sympathizers, Fang]] [[LesCollaborateurs sympathizers]], working under Roman Torchwick and alongside with Neo]].



* DramaticGunCock: In her duel with India, Ruby chambers a round once she stops playing with him, and her opponent barely has time to recognize her scythe is also a gun before he’s out cold.

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* DramaticGunCock: In her [[spoiler:her duel with India, Ruby [[LetsGetDangerous chambers a round round]] once she stops [[JustToyingWithThem playing with him, him]], and her opponent barely has time to recognize her scythe is also a gun before he’s out cold.cold]].



* EasyLogistics[=/=]InfiniteSupplies: Averted when [[spoiler:Ruby Rose explains to her teammates the costs of all her weapon's individual parts. Alice Sgathan is permitted to give Crescent Rose a detailed examination (without disassembling it) and later tells Weiss Schnee (while possibly exaggerating, but not implausibly so) that she'd price Crescent Rose at ''eight hundred thousand lien'' (an author's note provides a 10-lien-to-1-US-dollar conversion ratio); when Weiss offers to pay for one set of blades (in this fic, the three large blades consist of ''twenty-five'' smaller sub-blades locked together in the frame), it sets her back (a discounted price of) forty thousand lien. Ruby]] repeatedly avoids answering anyone who questions how the money to pay for it was obtained.
-->'''[[spoiler:Ruby Rose]]:''' [[spoiler:My weapon's running costs are huge. These [[AbsurdlySharpBlade blade pieces are laser sharpened]], that costs two hundred Lien each and I wear them down faster than you think. Two hundred to sharpen, mind you, it's two thousand to replace. Every [[DepletedPhlebotinumShells round fired with a battle load of red Dust]] is ten Lien; I went through twenty today, and that was in a quick fight. I have to clean and regrease the moving parts weekly, or after every fight it gets dirty in. That's another three-hundred Lien in costs. And god forbid something happen to any of the motors. The principal barrel-crossbeam mechanism alone costs twenty-five thousand and not a half-lien less]].
-->'''[[spoiler:[[OhCrap Yang Xiao Long]]]]:''' [[OhMyGods Grimm and Dust]], [[spoiler:sis, how have you possibly afforded that weapon]]?
-->'''[[spoiler:Ruby Rose]]:''' [[spoiler:Well, being able to raid [[CoolUncle Uncle Qrow]]'s stockpile for second-hand parts always helped. But part of it was, well, forgoing buying anything else. Free canteen meals at every chance, or eating at home or with Uncle Qrow. And, well, as you can see, not buying clothes for a year or two at a time. Battle dress and Crescent Rose is all I've spent my money on for years now]].



* EveryoneCanSeeIt: [[spoiler:Weiss' feelings towards Ruby]]; the former denies it, but the latter hopes "everyone" is right.

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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: [[spoiler:Weiss' [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee's hidden feelings towards Ruby]]; Ruby Rose]] are guessed at by several classmates; the former vehemently denies it, all such suggestions, but the latter hopes "everyone" is right.



* FashionVictimVillain: InUniverse, [[spoiler:Junior orders Coco Adel to wear a cream-and-brown-colored version of the Malachite twins' dresses as a "uniform" to blend in with the [[BadGuyBar club atmosphere]]. While Melanie and Miltia liked their own respective red and white dresses, Coco thinks her brown dress is horrible (even Miltia thinks of it as "crap-coloured" when she sees it)]].
* FictionFiveHundred: The "Society" people in general.

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* FashionVictimVillain: InUniverse, [[spoiler:Junior orders Coco Adel to wear a cream-and-brown-colored version of the Malachite twins' dresses as a "uniform" to blend in with the [[BadGuyBar club atmosphere]]. While Melanie and Miltia liked their own respective red and white dresses, Coco thinks her brown dress is horrible (even Miltia thinks of it as "crap-coloured" when she sees it)]].
* FictionFiveHundred: The "Society" people in general.general, and Alice says this about her own and Weiss's respective families:



* FirstNameBasis: Ruby Rose and Yang Xiao may understandably refer to Qrow Branwen as "[[CoolUncle Uncle Qrow]]," but other students informed of their relationship to the Signal Academy teacher are also shown calling him "Professor Qrow" instead of "[[LastNameBasis Professor Branwen]]" or "[[FullNameBasis Professor Qrow Branwen]]."



* IconicItem: Ruby's and Blake's [[WeaponOfChoice weapons of choice]] are both so rare that they are recognizable, allowing Miltia to know full-well that Ruby's used it to kill before and for Velvet's father to warn her that Blake was involved with White Fang.

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* ICallItVera: Ruby not only named her [[SniperRifle sniper]]-[[SinisterScythe scythe]] "Crescent Rose," she also calls it her "sweetheart" (as in canon). This fic posits as justification that [[spoiler:[[EasyLogistics the tremendous financial cost of creating, maintaining, and upgrading Crescent Rose]], as well as [[ProfessionalKiller the means by which she attained those funds]], makes her as acutely aware of the weapon's value as [[OneManArmy the mind-blowing feats of arms she accomplishes with it]]]].
* IconicItem: Ruby's and Blake's [[WeaponOfChoice weapons of choice]] are both so rare that they are recognizable, allowing Miltia to know full-well that Ruby's used it to kill before and for Velvet's father to warn her that Blake [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna was involved with White Fang. Fang]].
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:Ruby Rose uses a scythe attack so powerful that it runs Miltia Malachite through her torso ([[DeflectorShields Aura]], [[ArmorIsUseless battle]] [[StylishProtectionGear dress]], and all) and pins her to the ground in the same swing. To save Miltia's life, Velvet Scarlatina has to tell Ruby to slowly remove [[NamedWeapons Crescent Rose]] while Velvet uses healing magic to restore Miltia's flesh (including her right lung) as the scythe makes room. Crescent Rose comes out completely dripping blood (Ruby has to clean it as soon as possible so that the blood won't rust the blade), and Miltia has nightmares about Crescent Rose impaling her for several nights afterward]].
* ImpossiblyTackyClothes: [[spoiler:Junior orders Coco Adel to wear a cream-and-tan-colored version of [[MiniDressOfPower the Malachite twins' dresses]] as a "uniform" to blend in with the [[BadGuyBar club atmosphere]]. While Melanie and Miltia liked their own respective [[WomanInWhite white]] and [[LadyInRed red]] dresses (and so do other people), Coco thinks her brown dress is horrible, and even Miltia thinks of it as "crap-coloured" when she sees it]].



* {{Muggles}}: It's mentioned in the fic that many of the police, and presumably many other people, don't have Auras. This is one of the bigger changes from canon where basically everyone, save for the soulless Grimm, have Aura.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Yang had a moment like this in the past when she [[spoiler:attacked her father when he confronted her nine months ago about Dust-running with Roman Torchwick. Ruby barging in and finding she attacked him was a key part of her quitting]].

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* {{Muggles}}: It's mentioned in the fic that many of the police, and presumably many other people, don't have Auras. This is one of the bigger changes from canon where basically everyone, save for the soulless Grimm, have everyone (even animals, but not Creatures of Grimm) has an Aura.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Yang had a moment like this in the past when she [[spoiler:attacked her father when after he confronted her nine months ago about Dust-running with Roman Torchwick. Ruby barging in and finding she attacked him was a key part of her quitting]].



* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Glynda Goodwitch and a team of veteran Hunters set out to kill the Ancient Grimm from Chapter 10, which had lived at least a thousand years. We see none of it, only receiving a notice it was slain later.

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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Glynda [[spoiler:Glynda Goodwitch and a team of veteran Hunters set out to kill the Ancient Grimm from Chapter 10, which had lived at least a thousand years. We see none of it, only receiving a notice it was slain later.later]].



** OCStandIn: Melanie and Miltia Malachite, the twin girls who fought Yang in the '''Yellow'' trailer.

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** OCStandIn: Melanie and Miltia Malachite, the twin girls who fought Yang in the '''Yellow'' trailer.''Yellow'' trailer.
* PaintedOnPants: In Chapter 3, Ruby's casual clothes are shirts and [[WhoWearsShortShorts shorts]] that she bought when she was twelve, and she hasn't replaced the outgrown clothes because [[spoiler:she spent all of her money maintaining Crescent Rose]]. Weiss says her outfit "looks like something [[GoodBadGirl your sister]] would wear."



** [[spoiler:Ruby tells Miltia that this is how she gets all the money to pay for Crescent Rose. Neo is one too, and when they meet, they drop hints that they're both part of a MurderInc]].

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** [[spoiler:Ruby Rose tells Miltia Malachite that this is how she gets all the money to pay for Crescent Rose. Neo is one too, and when they meet, they drop hints that they're both part of a MurderInc]].



* ReformedCriminal: Blake Belladonna (as in canon), Melanie and Miltia Malachite, and [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long]].
* ReplacementGoldfish: Miltia is personally outraged when she discovers that Junior not only replaced them with [[spoiler:Coco Adel]], he even gave her a cream-and-brown ("crap-coloured") version of their dresses as a uniform!

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* ReformedCriminal: Blake Belladonna (as in canon), Melanie and Miltia Malachite, [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna (as in canon), and [[spoiler:Yang Yang Xiao Long]].
* ReplacementGoldfish: Miltia is personally outraged when she discovers that Junior not only replaced them her and Melanie with [[spoiler:Coco Adel]], he even gave her their replacement a cream-and-brown cream-and-tan ("crap-coloured") version of their dresses as a uniform!



* SecretPolice: The RSS, Vale's "secret happy fun-time people," whom you wouldn't want to meet in a dark alleyway.
* SerratedBladeOfPain: [[spoiler:Sawtooth anti-personnel blades have edges like sharks' teeth, full of points specifically designed to overwhelm a human being’s Aura. They are ''very'' illegal because of this]].
* SiblingYinYang: Despite being too similar to be PolarOppositeTwins, Melanie and Miltia do have some significant differences, canon and [[OCStandIn invented]]. Besides their different dress colors (Melanie's [[WomanInWhite white]], Miltia's [[LadyInRed red]]), weapons (Melanie's [[ArmedLegs heel blades]], Miltia's [[WolverineClaws claw]] [[BladeBelowTheShoulder gauntlets]]), and hair lengths (Melanie has waist-length hair, [[FreezeFrameBonus Miltia has a bob haircut]]), this fic gives them different social-class employer preferences (Melanie bodyguarded [[DecadentCourt Society boys]], Miltia bodyguarded [[BadGuyBar clubbers]]) sexual orientations (Melanie's straight, Miltia's lesbian), and even conflict with each other (both are protective of each other, but Melanie doubted Miltia's combat skill after the Chapter 2 incident and dislikes Society girls due to [[AlphaBitch Weiss's influence]], while Miltia doubted Melanie's ability to handle Junior's anger and dated Alice Sgathan [and flirted with Ruby] at least partly to needle Melanie).

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* SecretPolice: The RSS, Royal Secret Service, Vale's "secret happy fun-time people," whom you wouldn't want to meet in a dark alleyway.
* SerratedBladeOfPain: [[spoiler:Sawtooth Sawtooth anti-personnel blades have edges like sharks' teeth, full of points specifically designed to overwhelm a human being’s Aura. They are ''very'' illegal because of this]].
[[UsefulNotes/TheLawsAndCustomsOfWar Their use by militaries]] [[TruthInTelevision is prohibited]], and [[EvenEvilHasStandards even the White Fang don't use them]].
* SiblingYinYang: Despite being too similar to be PolarOppositeTwins, Melanie and Miltia do have some significant differences, canon and [[OCStandIn invented]]. Besides their different dress colors (Melanie's [[WomanInWhite white]], Miltia's [[LadyInRed red]]), weapons (Melanie's [[ArmedLegs heel blades]], Miltia's [[WolverineClaws claw]] [[BladeBelowTheShoulder gauntlets]]), and hair lengths (Melanie has waist-length hair, [[FreezeFrameBonus Miltia has a bob haircut]]), this fic gives them different social-class employer preferences (Melanie bodyguarded [[DecadentCourt Society boys]], Miltia bodyguarded [[BadGuyBar clubbers]]) sexual clubbers]]), [[spoiler:sexual orientations (Melanie's straight, Miltia's lesbian), lesbian)]], and even conflict with each other (both are protective of each other, but Melanie doubted Miltia's combat skill after the Chapter 2 incident and dislikes Society girls due to [[AlphaBitch Weiss's influence]], while Miltia doubted Melanie's ability to handle Junior's anger and dated Alice Sgathan [and [[spoiler:[=[=]and flirted with Ruby] Ruby[=]=]]] at least partly to needle Melanie).



* StylishProtectionGear: Since [[ArmorIsUseless armor is not completely useless]], several characters wear outfits that provide acceptable protection while still looking quite fashionable, such as the Malachite twins' and Alice Sgathan's [[MiniDressOfPower battle dresses]].



* SunglassesAtNight: Junior pokes fun at [[spoiler:Coco Adel]] for wearing sunglasses indoors past midnight, but [[spoiler:she shoots back that [[ActionFashionista she has to make some concession to fashion]] because [[ImpossiblyTackyClothes the uniform is not her style]]]].



* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: A few moments of panic by Ruby leading to [[spoiler: her trying to kill Miltia]] starts off the plot and gives the first few hints at the eponymous secrets.
* TrustPassword: [[spoiler: Ruby and Neo]] exchange one in spy speak.

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* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: A few moments moment of panic by Ruby leading to [[spoiler: her trying [[spoiler:her attempt to kill Miltia]] starts off the plot and gives the first few hints at the eponymous secrets.
* TrustPassword: [[spoiler: Ruby Rose and Neo]] exchange one in spy speak.



** Weiss exploits this when Venus and India are trying to provoke her into challenging them.

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** Weiss exploits this when Venus and India are trying try to provoke her into challenging them.



** In addition to the White Fang, other such Faunus rights[=/=]crime organizations are stated to exist, such as the "Jaws of Menagerie" and the "Vale Faunus Liberation Movement." These groups sometimes [[WeAreStrugglingTogether come in conflict with each other]] as well as [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized with non-members and law enforcement]], as indicated by gang-style graffiti indicative of turf wars.

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** In addition to the White Fang, this fic posits the existence of other such Faunus rights[=/=]crime organizations are stated to exist, organizations, such as the "Jaws of Menagerie" and the "Vale Faunus Liberation Movement." These groups sometimes [[WeAreStrugglingTogether come in conflict with each other]] as well as [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized with non-members and law enforcement]], as indicated shown by gang-style graffiti indicative of turf wars.

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* AnimalStereotypes: Faunus tend to dislike having these applied to themselves or other Faunus, even if the speaker him-[=/=]herself is also a Faunus. When [[spoiler:Velvet Scarlatina references [[TrademarkFavoriteFood tuna fish]] to indicate her recognition of [[PassFail Blake as a Faunus]], Blake expresses disapproval of the "tuna stereotype," and Velvet apologizes for it]]. Also, after Velvet catches [[FakeOutMakeOut Miltia French-kissing the fox Faunus Sara]], Miltia twice asks Velvet about [[ReallyGetsAround fox girl stereotypes]], and Velvet expresses offense about the stereotype [[StereotypeReactionGag even while claiming that it's true about Sara]].

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* AnimalStereotypes: Faunus tend to dislike having these applied to themselves or other Faunus, even if the speaker him-[=/=]herself is also a Faunus. When [[spoiler:Velvet Scarlatina references [[TrademarkFavoriteFood tuna fish]] to indicate [[PassFail her recognition of [[PassFail Blake as a Faunus]], Blake expresses disapproval of the "tuna stereotype," and Velvet apologizes for it]]. Also, after Velvet catches [[FakeOutMakeOut Miltia French-kissing the fox Faunus Sara]], Miltia twice asks Velvet about [[ReallyGetsAround fox girl stereotypes]], and Velvet expresses offense about the stereotype [[StereotypeReactionGag even while claiming that it's true about Sara]].



* AttackOfThe50FootWhatever: A Grimm that lives for a 1000 or so years rises to enormous heights. The ancient one in Chapter 10 was at least 30 ''stories'' tall.

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* AttackOfThe50FootWhatever: AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: A Grimm that lives for a 1000 or so years rises to enormous heights. The ancient one in Chapter 10 11 was at least 30 ''stories'' tall.



** Velvet Scarlatina is on "Team MAVM (Maven)" with the Malachite twins and an OC, and Team CFVY (Coffee) have different roles (except Fox Alistair, who has yet to appear).

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** Velvet Scarlatina is on "Team MAVM (Maven)" with the Malachite twins and an OC, and Team CFVY (Coffee) have different roles (except Fox Alistair, who has yet to appear). She is also portrayed as having a Semblance that allows her to cast Dust spells for both combat and healing, while Volume 3, Chapter 11: ''Heroes and Monsters'' reveals that [[spoiler:Velvet's Semblance is to create temporary {{Spectral Weapon Cop|y}}ies of her allies' weapons by [[CameraFiend taking photos of them]] and then [[InstantExpert wielding the copies with the same skill and techniques]] [[PowerCopying as the weapons' original owners]]]].


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* DisturbedDoves: When the giant elder Beowolf roars, the trees in the forest ripple as if shaken by a shockwave and birds fly out in all directions.


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* {{Flynning}}: Jaune's swordplay is lacking effectiveness because, as Pyrrha notes, [[spoiler:he's too afraid of death and of killing other people to properly fight, as well as having cheated his way into Beacon with forged transcripts because he'd never gone to combat school]]. Pyrrha points out to him that he needs to stop holding back on his swings and aim for his opponents' bodies instead of at their weapons.

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** [[spoiler:Neo herself has spoken lines in this fic, described as having "a bright and cultured voice]]." In canon, [[spoiler:all of Neo's appearances (from Volume 2 Chapter 04: ''Painting the Town'' to Volume 3 Chapter 11: ''Heroes and Monsters'') have no spoken lines at all (and therefore no voice actress listed in the credits), and even her appearances in ''WebAnimation/RWBYChibi'' keep her mute, only allowing for TalkingWithSigns]].



* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: [[spoiler:A White Fang assassin invites Blake Belladonna to rejoin to the White Fang. Blake accuses them of [[ResignationsNotAccepted killing runaways such as herself]], but the assassin claims that Blake is too capable and valuable to be executed (unless she actively fights the White Fang, of course)]].



* CategoryTraitor: One of Prof.- er, ''[[InsistentTerminology Dr.]]'' Oobleck's classes discusses human and Faunus criminals who might have [[LesCollaborateurs taken the opposing side from "their own" in the conflict between the two]], as well as [[PlayingBothSides those who would sell Dust or weapons to both sides in the conflict]]; given the mixed class composition, a heated argument quickly erupts between the students.

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** One White Fang assassin mocks [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna for fleeing the organization and pursuing peace with humans, but lets her live with an invitation to return to the fold]]. Later, [[spoiler:Team JNPR are surprised to see Neo and Mercury Black, both humans, working with the White Fang]]; [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna is even more shocked (and outraged) to see White Fang Faunus taking orders from [[FantasticRacism Roman Torchwick]] despite him directly [[FantasticSlur calling them animals]]]].
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One of Prof.- er, ''[[InsistentTerminology Dr.]]'' Oobleck's classes discusses human and Faunus criminals who might have [[LesCollaborateurs taken the opposing side from "their own" in the conflict between the two]], as well as [[PlayingBothSides those who would sell Dust or weapons to both sides in the conflict]]; given the mixed class composition, a heated argument quickly erupts between the students.


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* FantasticSlur: As in canon, [[FantasticRacism racist humans]] often refer to [[LittleBitBeastly Faunus]] using animal-related insults.

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* BreakTheCutie: Weiss Schnee has been targeted for assassination by the White Fang since she was 12. After [[spoiler:the recent attempts in Chapters 6 and 7, Blake expected to see Weiss as an ice-hearted Faunus-murderer and was surprised to find the heiress so unnerved and shaken by the attacks]].

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* BreakTheCutie: Weiss Schnee has been targeted for assassination by the White Fang Faunus terrorists since she was 12. After [[spoiler:the recent attempts White Fang attacks in Chapters 6 and 7, Blake expected to see Weiss as an ice-hearted Faunus-murderer and was surprised to find the heiress so unnerved and shaken by the attacks]].assaults]].



* CasanovaWannabe: [[OriginalCharacter India Tullamarine]] is always accompanied by [[RichBitch Venus Carlton]], but far less successful at charming any other named female character. He meets with [[spoiler:Weiss and Ruby in Chapter 7, Ruby and Miltia in Chapter 13, and Weiss, Melanie, Pyrrha, and Alice Sgathan in Chapter 15]], none of whom are receptive to his charms.



* CategoryTraitor: One of Prof.- er, ''[[InsistentTerminology Dr.]]'' Oobleck's classes discusses human and Faunus criminals who might have [[LesCollaborateurs taken the opposing side from "their own" in the conflict between the two]], as well as [[PlayingBothSides those who would sell Dust or weapons to both sides in the conflict]]; given the class composition, a heated argument quickly erupts between the students.

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* CategoryTraitor: One of Prof.- er, ''[[InsistentTerminology Dr.]]'' Oobleck's classes discusses human and Faunus criminals who might have [[LesCollaborateurs taken the opposing side from "their own" in the conflict between the two]], as well as [[PlayingBothSides those who would sell Dust or weapons to both sides in the conflict]]; given the mixed class composition, a heated argument quickly erupts between the students.



* CharacterTic: Since they wear [[MagicSkirt combat skirts]], the Malachite twins cross their legs when sitting to avoid {{Panty Shot}}s.



** Most of India and Ruby's duel is just Ruby practicing her defensive stance. When she stops playing around, the battle's over in one blow.
** The Jaws of Menagerie mooks who attack Ruby, Miltia, Venus and India don't put up much of a fight.

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** Most of India [[spoiler:India and Ruby's duel is just Ruby practicing her defensive stance. When she stops playing around, around]], the battle's over in one blow.
** The [[spoiler:The Jaws of Menagerie mooks who attack Ruby, Miltia, Venus India, and India Venus]] don't put up much of a fight.



* HeadsIWinTailsYouLose: Defied by Weiss when [[CasanovaWannabe India Tullamarine]] challenges Ruby to a duel ([[CombatByChampion expecting Weiss to fight in her place]]) and he tries to bet Weiss kissing him if he wins against himself kissing Ruby if he loses. Weiss rejects that bet and tells Ruby to name her prize, and [[spoiler:Ruby asks for a kiss from Venus Carlton if she wins]].



* HumiliatingWager: India and Venus wager the loser gives a kiss to the winner against Weiss and Ruby. Ruby wins, but Venus is reluctant to follow through; Ruby declines to force her to, but the rest of the Society torment her relentlessly [[spoiler:until she finally follows through and shows Weiss a video record to convince her to "call off the hounds]]."

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* HumiliatingWager: [[CasanovaWannabe India and Tullamarine]] (and [[RichBitch Venus Carlton]]) wager against [[GirlyBruiser Ruby Rose]] (and [[AlphaBitch Weiss Schnee]]) that the loser loser's partner gives a kiss to the winner against Weiss and Ruby. Ruby winner. [[spoiler:Ruby wins, but Venus is reluctant to follow through; Ruby declines to force her to, to despite Weiss's protests, but the rest of the Society torment her relentlessly [[spoiler:until until she finally follows through and shows Weiss a video record to convince her to "call off the hounds]]."


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* InstantHumiliationJustAddYouTube: [[spoiler:Ruby Rose's CurbStompBattle against India Tullamarine ends up posted online shortly after the battle; India is displeased to find that Alice's Team AKWA (Aqua) put a screenshot of his OhCrap face on their webpage under a banner reading "Team [AKWA is struck-through and replaced with] Awkward" and tries feebly (and unsuccessfully) to stop Team MAVM from seeing his humiliating defeat]].

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** Melanie complements her heel blades with a new set of elbow blades that can coil around her wrists to disguise them.

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** Melanie complements her [[ArmedLegs heel blades blades]] with a new set of [[BladeBelowTheShoulder elbow blades blades]] that can [[HiddenWeapons coil around her wrists to disguise them.them]]. Pyrrha notes that the weapon choice is influenced by Melanie's previous work as a "deceptive bodyguard."



* TheAtoner: A few characters feel like becoming hunters will give them the chance to balance out what they've done previously.

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* TheAtoner: A few characters feel like becoming hunters Huntsmen and Huntresses will give them the chance to balance out what they've done previously.



** This fic uses "Hunter[s]" as a gender-neutral term (which the official Japanese dub also does) instead of (and[=/=]or in addition to) the gendered terms "Huntsman[/-men]" and "Huntress[es]" (as in canon).



** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is [not finished] recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like [more of] an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had [[TrialBalloonQuestion "hypothetically"]] [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby (and Alice) let her quit at her own pace; she notes that, even though [[HealingFactor Aura helps to prevent physiological addiction]], the psychological stress and causes thereof that led to her use remain]].

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** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is [not finished] recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like [more of] an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had [[TrialBalloonQuestion "hypothetically"]] [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society]], Society scene]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby (and Alice) let her quit at her own pace; she notes that, even though [[HealingFactor Aura helps to prevent physiological addiction]], the psychological stress and causes thereof that led to her use remain]].



* DyeOrDie: [[spoiler:Ruby and Miltia dye their hair when they go scouting out Junior's bar]].

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* DyeOrDie: [[spoiler:Ruby and Miltia dye their hair as part of their disguises when they go scouting out Junior's bar]].



* HumiliatingWager: India and Venus wager the loser gives a kiss to the winner against Weiss and Ruby. Ruby wins, but Venus is reluctant to follow through; Ruby declines to force her to, but the rest of the Society torment her relentlessly [[spoiler:until she finally follows through and shows Weiss a video record to convince her to "call off the hounds"]].

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* HumiliatingWager: India and Venus wager the loser gives a kiss to the winner against Weiss and Ruby. Ruby wins, but Venus is reluctant to follow through; Ruby declines to force her to, but the rest of the Society torment her relentlessly [[spoiler:until she finally follows through and shows Weiss a video record to convince her to "call off the hounds"]].hounds]]."



* MamaBear[=/=]PapaWolf: At Velvet's request, her father uses his contacts within local Faunus resistance groups to investigate Blake Belladonna's possible connections to Faunus terrorist organizations. Velvet's mother runs a cafe with a sign that reads "Peace begets peace" on the window, but when she glares at Ruby during an incident there, Ruby finds her glare scarier than the inside of a giant Beowolf's maw.

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* MamaBear[=/=]PapaWolf: At Velvet's request, her father uses his contacts within local Faunus resistance groups to investigate Blake Belladonna's possible connections to Faunus terrorist organizations. Velvet's mother runs a cafe with a sign that reads "Peace begets peace" Begets Peace" on the window, but when she glares at Ruby during an incident there, Ruby finds her glare scarier than the inside of a giant Beowolf's maw.


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* OhMyGods: Real-world profanities are common, but some others are created for the setting.
** Multiple characters use the phrase "Grimm and Dust" as a general imprecation roughly equivalent to "Damn it."
** Some Faunus characters use "God's Horns" as an exclamation. [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna is the first to use it in the story when she is surprised by Yang Xiao Long, and mentally remembers that "[t]he imprecation was an ancient Faunus one" that she should be careful not to use in front of [[FantasticRacism humans such as Weiss Schnee]]]].

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* AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools: Ruby planned, designed, and built Crescent Rose, even manufacturing a sizable portion of the parts herself, including all the wiring. She takes great pride in this, but the blades are also a bit of a problem, though. Ruby used to either make them or make use of Qrow's spares, but the current state of Crescent Rose requires blades beyond her ability to make, so she now has to have them specially built for her at great financial cost.

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* AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools: Ruby planned, designed, and built Crescent Rose, even manufacturing a sizable portion of the parts herself, including all the wiring. She takes great pride in this, but the blades are also a bit of a problem, though. Ruby used to either make them or make use of Qrow's [[CoolUncle Qrow]]'s spares, but the current state of Crescent Rose requires blades beyond her ability to make, so she now has to have them specially built for her at great financial cost.cost.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:After Nora Valkyrie's threat to castrate Mercury Black in Chapter 14, Mercury retaliates by threatening to remove one of Nora's hands. He doesn't succeed, either]].
* AnimalStereotypes: Faunus tend to dislike having these applied to themselves or other Faunus, even if the speaker him-[=/=]herself is also a Faunus. When [[spoiler:Velvet Scarlatina references [[TrademarkFavoriteFood tuna fish]] to indicate her recognition of [[PassFail Blake as a Faunus]], Blake expresses disapproval of the "tuna stereotype," and Velvet apologizes for it]]. Also, after Velvet catches [[FakeOutMakeOut Miltia French-kissing the fox Faunus Sara]], Miltia twice asks Velvet about [[ReallyGetsAround fox girl stereotypes]], and Velvet expresses offense about the stereotype [[StereotypeReactionGag even while claiming that it's true about Sara]].



* BitchInSheepsClothing: Those Society girls always ''seem'' like such nice girls…

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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Those Society girls always ''seem'' like such nice girls…girls...



* TheDreaded: Alice claims that Weiss is this to the Society scene, including to Alice herself.



** Original character Alice Sgathan admits to Ruby in her first on-screen appearance that the former drinks champagne and cocaine, even keeping her own supply of the latter in a pendant around her neck. Unlike other characters in this fic, [[FunctionalAddict she's not shown to suffer significant impairment due to drug use]], though [[spoiler:she does want her friend Weiss to fall OffTheWagon, to Ruby's shock]]. Miltia knows about the drugs, but isn't bothered by it since she used to work in [[BadGuyBar nightclubs full of drug users]].
** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is (not finished) recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like (more of) an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had [[TrialBalloonQuestion "hypothetically"]] [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby (and Alice) let her quit at her own pace]].

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** Original character Alice Sgathan admits to Ruby in her first on-screen appearance that the former drinks champagne and cocaine, even keeping her own supply of the latter cocaine in a pendant around her neck. Unlike other characters in this fic, [[FunctionalAddict she's not shown to suffer significant impairment due to drug use]], though [[spoiler:she does want her friend Weiss to fall OffTheWagon, to Ruby's shock]]. shock. At one later point she refuses to share cocaine with Weiss, not to help her stay clean, but because Weiss would blame Alice and their friendship would be endangered]]. Miltia knows about the Alice's drugs, but isn't bothered by it them since she used to work in [[BadGuyBar nightclubs full of drug users]].
** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is (not finished) [not finished] recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like (more of) [more of] an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had [[TrialBalloonQuestion "hypothetically"]] [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby (and Alice) let her quit at her own pace]].pace; she notes that, even though [[HealingFactor Aura helps to prevent physiological addiction]], the psychological stress and causes thereof that led to her use remain]].


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* GroinAttack: During Chapter 14, [[spoiler:Nora Valkyrie threatens to castrate Mercury Black in retaliation for Mercury getting a handful of Nora's butt as part of a CombinationAttack with a {{Mook|s}}. She doesn't manage to do so]].


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* TheNoseKnows: Faunus can recognize other Faunus by smell. [[spoiler:[[CatGirl Blake Belladonna]]]] [[PassFail is discovered this way twice]].


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* PassFail: Some Faunus try to disguise themselves as humans to avoid the FantasticRacism they usually face, which gets varying degrees of support or opposition from other Faunus; they typically won't out each other to humans, though. [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna defies this by wearing a bow over her cat ears and using extra deodorant and keeping her distance from other Faunus, but is still identified as such by smell on separate occasions by Velvet Scarlatina and Sun Wukong]].


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* PlausibleDeniability: Alice discusses this with Ruby, claiming that [[spoiler:since Pyrrha Nikos would disapprove of Weiss Schnee's drug habits, other people would look for ways to clue her in to Weiss's problems without Weiss discovering who told Pyrrha]].

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* ArmsDealer: [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long used to traffic Dust as a White Fang sympathizer]].



** Melanie complements her heel blades with a new set of elbow blades that can coil up around her wrists to disguise them.
** A Faunus gang member wears a belt which doubles as a dust-powered WhipSword.

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** Melanie complements her heel blades with a new set of elbow blades that can coil up around her wrists to disguise them.
** A Faunus gang member wears a belt which doubles as a dust-powered Dust-powered WhipSword.



** Melanie and Miltia (who is commonly referred to as "Miltiades," the etymological origin of her canon name) Malachite were fired and blacklisted by Junior and enrolled at Beacon Academy after the events of the "Yellow" trailer, whereas V2 C04 retains both in Junior's employ.

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** Melanie and Miltia (who is commonly referred to as "Miltiades," the etymological origin of her canon name) Malachite were fired and blacklisted by Junior and enrolled at Beacon Academy after the events of the "Yellow" ''Yellow'' trailer, whereas V2 C04 retains Volume 2 Chapter 04: ''Painting the Town'' [[spoiler:retains both in Junior's employ.employ (and he even stops his {{Mooks}} from attacking Yang again)]].



** One original character, Sara the waitress at Velvet's parents' (who are also [=OCs=]) cafe, is a Faunus girl with fox ears and a fox tail. Volume 4, [[WorldBuilding World of Remnant]]: ''Faunus'' details that Faunus can have only one LittleBitBeastly animal trait. Furthermore, in canon, Faunus are rarely, if ever, referred to as "[Animal species] Faunus," as they object to [[FantasticRacism being treated as animals]].

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** One original character, Sara the waitress at Velvet's parents' (who are also [=OCs=]) cafe, is a Faunus girl with fox ears and a fox tail. Volume 4, [[WorldBuilding World of Remnant]]: ''Faunus'' details that Faunus can have only one LittleBitBeastly animal trait. Furthermore, in canon, Faunus are rarely, if ever, referred to as "[Animal species] Faunus," as they object to [[FantasticRacism being treated as animals]].animals]] (and the term doesn't specify the character's animal traits, such as ears or a tail).



* CategoryTraitor: One of Prof.- er, ''[[InsistentTerminology Dr.]]'' Oobleck's classes discusses human and Faunus criminals who might have [[LesCollaborateurs taken the opposing side from "their own" in the conflict between the two]], as well as [[PlayingBothSides those who would sell Dust or weapons to both sides in the conflict]]; given the class composition, a heated argument quickly erupts between the students.



* ColossusClimb: Ruby against an ancient Grimm in chapter 10.

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* ColossusClimb: Ruby against an ancient Grimm in chapter Chapter 10.



* CripplingOverspecialization: The twins' weapons and skills were made for bodyguarding and facing off against other people, so they can't fight armored or otherwise tough Grimm effectively until they get an upgrade.

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* CripplingOverspecialization: The Malachite twins' weapons and skills were made for bodyguarding and facing off against other people, so they can't fight armored or otherwise tough Grimm effectively until they get an upgrade.



** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is (not finished) recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like (more of) an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had [[TrialBalloonQuestion "hypothetically"]] [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby let her quit at her own pace]].

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** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is (not finished) recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like (more of) an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had [[TrialBalloonQuestion "hypothetically"]] [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby (and Alice) let her quit at her own pace]].



* LaResistance: Velvet's parents are members of Faunus rights organizations and still have some contacts and[=/=]or activity therein, but disapprove of the extremism displayed by [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters the more violent Faunus gangs]].



* MamaBear[=/=]PapaWolf: At Velvet's request, her father uses his connections to investigate Blake Belladonna's possible connections to Faunus terrorist groups. Velvet's mother runs a cafe with a sign that reads "Peace begets peace" on the window, but when she glares at Ruby during an incident there, Ruby finds her glare scarier than the inside of a giant Beowolf's maw.

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* MamaBear[=/=]PapaWolf: At Velvet's request, her father uses his connections contacts within local Faunus resistance groups to investigate Blake Belladonna's possible connections to Faunus terrorist groups.organizations. Velvet's mother runs a cafe with a sign that reads "Peace begets peace" on the window, but when she glares at Ruby during an incident there, Ruby finds her glare scarier than the inside of a giant Beowolf's maw.



** Alice's Cheshire Silver is a two-handed sword which can split into two separate blades or become a dust-powered pulse rifle.
** Aurea's Sole and Luna, a cudgel (Luna) which turns into a carbine rifle (Sole).
** Venus' shotgun tonfas.
** One of the Vale Faunus Liberation Movement's soldiers wields a dust-infused WhipSword hidden as a belt. A "Flex-Segmented Dust-Activated Blade," according to Ruby.

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** Alice's Cheshire Silver Alice Sgathan's "Cheshire Silver" is a two-handed sword which can split into two separate blades or become a dust-powered Dust-powered pulse rifle.
** Aurea's Sole Aurea Perrault's "Sole and Luna, Luna" is a cudgel (Luna) which turns into a carbine rifle (Sole).
** Venus' Venus Carlton's unnamed shotgun tonfas.
** One of the Vale Faunus Liberation Movement's soldiers wields a dust-infused Dust-infused WhipSword hidden as a belt. A "Flex-Segmented Dust-Activated Blade," according to Ruby.



** OCStandIn: Melanie and Miltia Malachite, the twin girls who fought Yang in the "Yellow" trailer.

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** OCStandIn: Melanie and Miltia Malachite, the twin girls who fought Yang in the "Yellow" '''Yellow'' trailer.

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** One original character, Sara the waitress at Velvet's parents' (who are also [=OCs=]) cafe, is a Faunus girl with fox ears and a fox tail. Volume 4, [[WorldBuilding World of Remnant]]: ''Faunus'' details that Faunus can have only one LittleBitBeastly animal trait. Furthermore, in canon, Faunus are rarely, if ever, referred to as "[Animal species] Faunus," as they object to [[FantasticRacism being treated as animals]].



* ElementalWeapon: India’s dust-infused fire sword.

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* ElementalWeapon: India’s dust-infused fire sword.India Tullamarine’s [[GreenRocks Dust-infused]] FlamingSword and a Faunus gangster's [[ShockAndAwe electrified]] [[AnAxeToGrind battleaxe]].
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* CanonDiscontinuity: This fic diverges from canon ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' between Volume 1, Chapter 14: ''Forever Fall Pt. 2'' and Volume 1, Chapter 15: ''The Stray''; the narrative acknowledges that [[spoiler:Jaune killed an [[BearsAreBadNews Ursa]] with Pyrrha's (unrecognized) assistance]], but differs on [[spoiler:the introduction of Sun Wukong and Blake's CatGirl reveal]]. In addition, certain other elements of the canon plot are altered, such as:

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* CanonDiscontinuity: This fic diverges from canon ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' between Volume 1, Chapter 14: ''Forever Fall Pt. 2'' and Volume 1, Chapter 15: ''The Stray''; the narrative acknowledges that [[spoiler:Jaune killed an [[BearsAreBadNews Ursa]] with Pyrrha's (unrecognized) assistance]], help]], but differs on [[spoiler:the introduction of Sun Wukong and Blake's CatGirl reveal]]. In addition, certain other elements of the canon plot are altered, such as:



* ChekhovsGun: Ruby’s second blade case turns out to contain [[spoiler:sawtooth anti-personnel blades, highly illegal (it’s a war-crime for the military to use them) and specially designed purely to break Auras.]]
* ChekhovsGunman: When [[spoiler:Ozpin orders Goodwitch to assemble a team of professional Huntsmen and Huntresses to kill the elder Beowolf at all costs, her team includes "[[CoolUncle a dark man in a dusty cloak bearing a scythe in sable with cardinal trim]]]]." Later, [[spoiler:Goodwitch informs Ruby that, due to Ruby's successful attack that injured it earlier and "a persuasive argument by one of the Huntsmen attached to the party," Ruby got credit and bounty money for her effort]].

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* ChekhovsGun: Ruby’s second blade case turns out to contain [[spoiler:sawtooth anti-personnel blades, highly illegal (it’s a war-crime war crime for the military to use them) and specially designed purely to break Auras.]]
Auras]].
* ChekhovsGunman: When [[spoiler:Ozpin orders Goodwitch to assemble a team of professional Huntsmen and Huntresses to kill the elder Beowolf at all costs, in one night, her team includes "[[CoolUncle a dark man in a dusty cloak bearing a scythe in sable with cardinal trim]]]]." Later, [[spoiler:Goodwitch informs Ruby that, due to Ruby's successful attack that injured it earlier and "a persuasive argument by one of the Huntsmen attached to the party," Ruby got credit and bounty money for her effort]].



* DrugsAreBad: Society boys and girls (among others) routinely indulge in alcoholic champagne with party drugs at their events.
** Original character Alice Sgathan admits to Ruby in her first on-screen appearance that the former drinks champagne and cocaine, even keeping her own supply of the latter in a pendant around her neck. Unlike other characters in this fic, [[FunctionalAddict she's not shown to suffer significant impairment due to drug use]], though [[spoiler:she does want her friend Weiss to fall OffTheWagon, to Ruby's shock]].

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* DrugsAreBad: Society boys and girls (among others) routinely indulge in alcoholic champagne with party drugs at their events.
** Original character Alice Sgathan admits to Ruby in her first on-screen appearance that the former drinks champagne and cocaine, even keeping her own supply of the latter in a pendant around her neck. Unlike other characters in this fic, [[FunctionalAddict she's not shown to suffer significant impairment due to drug use]], though [[spoiler:she does want her friend Weiss to fall OffTheWagon, to Ruby's shock]]. Miltia knows about the drugs, but isn't bothered by it since she used to work in [[BadGuyBar nightclubs full of drug users]].

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* AccidentalMurder: Yang killed one of Junior's henchmen when she crashed their club. [[spoiler:Her body count is much higher.]]
* TheAce: Ruby is to everyone at Signal. She admits that by the end no one could keep up with her and it gave her a cult-status.
* AlphaBitch: Every single society girl ever seen on-screen. [[spoiler: Weiss rules them all.]]
* AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools: Ruby planned, designed and built Crescent Rose, even manufacturing a sizable portion of the parts herself, including all the wiring. She takes great pride in this.
** The blades are a bit of a story in this, though, as Ruby used to either make them or make use of Qrow's spares, but the current state of Crescent Rose requires blades beyond her ability to make, so she has them specially built.
* ArmorPiercingAttack: Ruby’s scythe style includes several strikes designed to pierce an opponent’s armour [[spoiler: and their protective aura]].

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* AccidentalMurder: Yang killed one of Junior's henchmen when she crashed their club. [[spoiler:Her body count is much higher.]]
higher]].
* TheAce: Ruby is to everyone at Signal. She admits that by the end no one could keep up with her and it gave her a cult-status.
cult status.
* AlphaBitch: AlphaBitch[=/=]RichBitch: Every single society Society girl ever seen on-screen. [[spoiler: Weiss [[spoiler:Weiss rules them all.]]
all]].
* AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools: Ruby planned, designed designed, and built Crescent Rose, even manufacturing a sizable portion of the parts herself, including all the wiring. She takes great pride in this.
** The
this, but the blades are also a bit of a story in this, though, as problem, though. Ruby used to either make them or make use of Qrow's spares, but the current state of Crescent Rose requires blades beyond her ability to make, so she now has to have them specially built.
built for her at great financial cost.
* ArmorPiercingAttack: Ruby’s scythe style includes several strikes designed to pierce an opponent’s armour [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and their protective aura]].Aura]].



** Melanie’s new weapon is a set of elbow-blades which can be coiled up and hidden.
** A Faunus gang-member shows a belt which doubles as a dust-powered WhipSword.
* AttackOfThe50FootWhatever: A Grimm that lives for a 1000 or so years rises to enormous heights. The Ancient one in Chapter 10 was at least 30 ''stories'' tall.

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** Melanie’s Melanie complements her heel blades with a new weapon is a set of elbow-blades which elbow blades that can be coiled coil up and hidden.
around her wrists to disguise them.
** A Faunus gang-member shows gang member wears a belt which doubles as a dust-powered WhipSword.
* AttackOfThe50FootWhatever: A Grimm that lives for a 1000 or so years rises to enormous heights. The Ancient ancient one in Chapter 10 was at least 30 ''stories'' tall.



** Blake [[spoiler:and Yang for their involvement with the White Fang.]]
** Weiss [[spoiler:for her actions as a society girl.]]

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** Blake [[spoiler:and Yang for their involvement with the White Fang.]]
Fang]].
** Weiss [[spoiler:for her actions as a society girl.]]Society girl]].



* BadGuyBar: [[spoiler:Yang's old watering hole is implied to be this.]]
* BifurcatedWeapon: Alice Sgathan’s two-handed sword splits into two separate blades with their own handles. It’s also a gun.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Those society girls always ''seem'' like such nice girls…
* BlatantLies: [[spoiler: Ruby tells several, and shocks people by her ability to do it with a [[ConsummateLiar pure, honest and innocent face.]]]]
* BlownAcrossTheRoom: Miltia is sent flying by Ruby’s first shot in chapter one.
* BodyguardBabes: Melanie and Miltiadies worked as these, both for Junior and other clients, until Yang got them blacklisted.

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* BadGuyBar: [[spoiler:Yang's old watering hole is implied to be this.]]
this]], and Hei "Junior" Xiong's bar definitely is.
* BifurcatedWeapon: Alice Sgathan’s two-handed sword splits into two separate blades with their own handles. It’s It can also take the form of a gun.
pulse rifle.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Those society Society girls always ''seem'' like such nice girls…
* BlatantLies: [[spoiler: Ruby [[spoiler:Ruby tells several, and shocks people by with her ability to do it with a so [[ConsummateLiar with a pure, honest honest, and innocent face.]]]]
face]]]].
* BlownAcrossTheRoom: Miltia is sent flying by Ruby’s first shot in chapter one.
Chapter 1.
* BodyguardBabes: Melanie and Miltiadies Miltia worked as these, both for Junior and other clients, until Yang got them blacklisted.



* {{Bouncer}}: Junior employees several. After firing the Malachite sisters, he hires Coco Adel.
* BungledSuicide: Chapter 6 reveals [[spoiler:Blake tried to kill herself after her last mission with the White Fang by throwing herself off of a cliff. No one, not even her, expected to survive.]]
* CantHoldHisLiquor: Junior becomes a mean drunk when he gets into his cups, one who can't quite remember what he did while under the influence. [[spoiler:He actually drunk-dialed Miltia while threatening her with the information he gathered at Roman's behest, causing her to panic and to try to convince Ruby to kill him for all their sakes.]]
** Weiss admits to Ruby during their first practice run that she gets a mean streak when she drinks champagne, and that played a part in why the sisters don't like her.
* CasualDangerDialog: Ruby, when she and Miltia walk into the middle of a confrontation between India and Venus and a gang of faunus.
* CasualtyInTheRing: Pyrrha tells Melanie about a mishap during her second tournament where the referee misjudged her strength and she broke her opponent's aura, accidentally dealing a deadly blow.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: As the leaders of their group, Ruby, Melanie, and Jaune get dressed down for the fight in Chapter 2. Ruby for her lack of discipline, Melanie for initiating the prank in the first place that nearly got her sister killed, and Jaune for being the neutral party when he was in the best position to reach a compromise between them to avoid this sort of them.
* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: [[spoiler:Ruby]] tries this in her meeting with Ozpin over [[spoiler: Miltia's injury]]. He decides [[spoiler:she's]] not going to crack and lets her.
* ChekhovsGun: Ruby’s second blade case turns out to contain [[spoiler: sawtooth anti-personnel blades, highly illegal (it’s a war-crime for the military to use them) and specially designed purely for breaking auras.]]
* ChickMagnet: Ruby tells that she was this at Signal Academy, to the point where she's got a longer trail of broken hearts than Yang. [[spoiler:Considering the examples under LoveTriangle, she's still got it.]]
* CoincidenceMagnet: Junior. He comes up with a completely plausible chart in Chapter 11 of how all the members of MVAM, RWBY, and JNPR were in the same class and screwed him over, but the truth of it was that it was all a bunch of coincidences.

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* {{Bouncer}}: {{Bouncer}}s: Junior employees employs several. After firing the Malachite sisters, twins, he hires Coco Adel.
[[spoiler:Coco Adel]].
* BreakTheCutie: Weiss Schnee has been targeted for assassination by the White Fang since she was 12. After [[spoiler:the recent attempts in Chapters 6 and 7, Blake expected to see Weiss as an ice-hearted Faunus-murderer and was surprised to find the heiress so unnerved and shaken by the attacks]].
* BungledSuicide: Chapter 6 reveals [[spoiler:Blake tried to kill herself after her last mission with the White Fang by throwing herself off of a cliff. No one, not even her, expected to survive.]]
survive]].
* CantHoldHisLiquor: CanonDiscontinuity: This fic diverges from canon ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' between Volume 1, Chapter 14: ''Forever Fall Pt. 2'' and Volume 1, Chapter 15: ''The Stray''; the narrative acknowledges that [[spoiler:Jaune killed an [[BearsAreBadNews Ursa]] with Pyrrha's (unrecognized) assistance]], but differs on [[spoiler:the introduction of Sun Wukong and Blake's CatGirl reveal]]. In addition, certain other elements of the canon plot are altered, such as:
** Most normal people have no [[DeflectorShields Aura]], and even police and others below Huntsman[=/=]Huntress-level SuperWeight have weak Auras. In canon, everyone (except [[TheSoulless the Creatures of Grimm]]) has Aura.
** Melanie and Miltia (who is commonly referred to as "Miltiades," the etymological origin of her canon name) Malachite were fired and blacklisted by Junior and enrolled at Beacon Academy after the events of the "Yellow" trailer, whereas V2 C04 retains both in Junior's employ.
** Velvet Scarlatina is on "Team MAVM (Maven)" with the Malachite twins and an OC, and Team CFVY (Coffee) have different roles (except Fox Alistair, who has yet to appear).
** [[spoiler:Coco Adel becomes the replacement bodyguard at Junior's nightclub after the Malachites are fired]].
** [[spoiler:Yatsuhashi Daichi attends Haven Academy instead of Beacon, but remains a friend of Velvet and her family]].
** [[spoiler:Cinder Fall's plan for her, Mercury Black, and Emerald Sustrai to enter Beacon by posing as students hits a snag when Mercury unwittingly interacts with Team JNPR during a White Fang attack on Weiss, so Cinder substitutes Neo for Mercury in the infiltration plan]].
* CantHoldHisLiquor:
**
Junior becomes a mean drunk when he gets into his cups, one who can't quite remember what he did while under the influence. [[spoiler:He actually drunk-dialed Miltia while threatening her with the information he gathered at Roman's behest, causing her to panic and to try to convince Ruby to kill him for all their sakes.]]
sakes]].
** Weiss admits to Ruby during their first practice run that she gets a mean streak when she drinks after drinking (alcoholic) champagne, and that played a part in why the sisters Malachite twins don't like her.
* CasualDangerDialog: Ruby, when she and Miltia walk into the middle of a confrontation between India and Venus and a gang of faunus.
Faunus.
* CasualtyInTheRing: Pyrrha tells Melanie about a mishap during her second tournament where the referee misjudged her strength and she broke her opponent's aura, Aura, accidentally dealing a deadly blow.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: As the leaders of their group, Ruby, Melanie, and Jaune get dressed down for the fight in Chapter 2. Ruby for her lack of discipline, Melanie for initiating the prank in the first place that nearly got her sister killed, and Jaune for being the neutral party not getting involved when he was in the best position to reach a compromise between mediate their hostility and help them in the hunt (due to avoid this sort of them.
the Malachites' CripplingOverspecialization).
* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: [[spoiler:Ruby]] [[spoiler:Ruby Rose]] tries this in her [[spoiler:her meeting with Ozpin over [[spoiler: Miltia's injury]]. injury. He decides [[spoiler:she's]] she's not going to crack and lets her.
her]].
* ChekhovsGun: Ruby’s second blade case turns out to contain [[spoiler: sawtooth [[spoiler:sawtooth anti-personnel blades, highly illegal (it’s a war-crime for the military to use them) and specially designed purely for breaking auras.to break Auras.]]
* ChekhovsGunman: When [[spoiler:Ozpin orders Goodwitch to assemble a team of professional Huntsmen and Huntresses to kill the elder Beowolf at all costs, her team includes "[[CoolUncle a dark man in a dusty cloak bearing a scythe in sable with cardinal trim]]]]." Later, [[spoiler:Goodwitch informs Ruby that, due to Ruby's successful attack that injured it earlier and "a persuasive argument by one of the Huntsmen attached to the party," Ruby got credit and bounty money for her effort]].
* ChickMagnet: Ruby tells that she was this at Signal Academy, to the point where she's got a longer trail of broken hearts than Yang. [[spoiler:Considering the examples under LoveTriangle, she's still got it.]]
it]].
* CoincidenceMagnet: Junior. He comes up with [[TheBigBoard a completely plausible chart chart]] in Chapter 11 of how [[TheConspiracy all the members of MVAM, Teams MAVM, RWBY, and JNPR were in the same class and screwed him over, over]], but the truth of it was that [[OneDegreeOfSeparation it was all a bunch of coincidences.coincidences]].



* CombatMedic: Velvet.

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* CombatMedic: Velvet.Velvet wields a Dust-infused staff and can use Dust spells for both attacks and healing.



* ConsummateLiar: [[spoiler: Ruby.]]
* CoverBlowingSuperpower: [[spoiler:One faunus gang-member was outed by Velvet, Ruby, and Miltia, because she moved far too quickly for a civilian.]]
* CripplingOverspecialization: The twins' weapons and skills were made for bodyguarding and facing off against other people, so they can't fight Grimm effectively until they get an upgrade.

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* ConsummateLiar: [[spoiler: Ruby.]]
[[spoiler:Ruby Rose, helped in no small part by her youth and cuteness]].
* CoverBlowingSuperpower: [[spoiler:One faunus gang-member Faunus gang member was outed by Velvet, Ruby, and Miltia, Miltia because she moved reacted to danger far too quickly for a civilian.]]
to be an untrained civilian]].
* CripplingOverspecialization: The twins' weapons and skills were made for bodyguarding and facing off against other people, so they can't fight armored or otherwise tough Grimm effectively until they get an upgrade.



** Most of India and Ruby's duel is just Ruby practicing her defensive stance. When she stops playing around the battle's over in one blow.
** The Jaws Of Menagerie mooks who attack Ruby, Miltia, Venus and India don't put up much of a fight.

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** Most of India and Ruby's duel is just Ruby practicing her defensive stance. When she stops playing around around, the battle's over in one blow.
** The Jaws Of of Menagerie mooks who attack Ruby, Miltia, Venus and India don't put up much of a fight.



** [[spoiler:Ruby was a ProfessionalKiller to pay for her weapon.]]
** [[spoiler:Weiss has a history with being a FunctionalAddict.]]
** [[spoiler:Blake was a member of the White Fang and a trigger agent.]]
** [[spoiler:Yang was a Dust Runner for White Fang sympathizers, working under Roman Torchwick and alongside Neo.]]
* DecadentCourt: The Society, the sons and daughters of Remnant's wealthiest families and most powerful businesses.
* DeliberatelyCuteChild: Ruby ''ruthlessly'' exploits her cute and innocent appearance to pull the wool over everyone's eyes or avoid awkward questions. [[spoiler: Miltia learns to see through it.]]
* DiagonalCut: Ruby performs several on Grimm [[spoiler: and the White Fang assassins]].
* DramaticGunCock: In her duel with India, Ruby chambers a round once she stops playing with him, and her opponent barely has time to recognise her scythe is also a gun before he’s out cold.
* DyeOrDie: [[spoiler:Ruby and Miltia dye their hair when they go scouting out Junior's bar.]]

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** [[spoiler:Ruby was a ProfessionalKiller to pay for her weapon.]]
weapon]].
** [[spoiler:Weiss has a history with being a FunctionalAddict.]]
FunctionalAddict]].
** [[spoiler:Blake was a member of the White Fang and a trigger agent.]]
agent]].
** [[spoiler:Yang was a Dust Runner for White Fang sympathizers, working under Roman Torchwick and alongside Neo.]]
Neo]].
* DecadentCourt: The Society, "Society," the sons and daughters of Remnant's wealthiest families and most powerful businesses.
* DeliberatelyCuteChild: Ruby ''ruthlessly'' exploits her cute and innocent appearance to pull the wool over everyone's eyes or avoid awkward questions. [[spoiler: Miltia [[spoiler:Miltia learns to see through it.]]
it]].
* DiagonalCut: DiagonalCut[=/=]HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Ruby performs several on Grimm [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and on the White Fang assassins]].
* DirtyCop: The Vale Police Department officers label their reports of [[EvilVersusEvil crimes between crime groups]] with the acronyms "FCA" and "NFCA." Velvet claims these stand for [[FantasticRacism Faunus Crime Associations and Non Faunus Crime Associations]], but Aurea adds that [[FunWithAcronyms "NFCA" also stands for]] [[BystanderSyndrome Not Fucking Cared About]]. To the VPD, when criminals take each other out, it means less work for the cops.
* DramaticGunCock: In her duel with India, Ruby chambers a round once she stops playing with him, and her opponent barely has time to recognise recognize her scythe is also a gun before he’s out cold.
* DrugsAreBad: Society boys and girls (among others) routinely indulge in alcoholic champagne with party drugs at their events.
** Original character Alice Sgathan admits to Ruby in her first on-screen appearance that the former drinks champagne and cocaine, even keeping her own supply of the latter in a pendant around her neck. Unlike other characters in this fic, [[FunctionalAddict she's not shown to suffer significant impairment due to drug use]], though [[spoiler:she does want her friend Weiss to fall OffTheWagon, to Ruby's shock]].
** [[spoiler:Weiss Schnee is (not finished) recovering from a habit of abusing champagne and cocaine, recognizing that these led her to act like (more of) an AlphaBitch to Melanie Malachite; Weiss even claims to Ruby Rose that using these is so expected of Society people that enrolling in Beacon Academy cost the Schnee Dust Company 5% of its stock price, twice or more than they would have lost if she had [[TrialBalloonQuestion "hypothetically"]] [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl gone on an indulgence binge]], [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy directly trash-talked her father and the Society]], and [[DrunkDriver crashed a car while driving high and drunk]]. Ruby catches her drinking champagne and barely manages to convince her to hold off on the cocaine, pleading with her that [[RealityEnsues the drugs can impair her combat abilities and get her killed]]. Weiss agrees, but demands that Ruby let her quit at her own pace]].
** Another OC, [[RichBitch Venus Carlton]], comes into conflict with other characters on multiple occasions; two of those times, her company sees that she has bloodshot eyes, dilated pupils, and an agitated edge to her current emotional state, recognizing these as symptoms of drug abuse.
** Hei "Junior" Xiong makes an important mistake while drunk that (after he wakes up hungover) he realizes he'll regret.
* DyeOrDie: [[spoiler:Ruby and Miltia dye their hair when they go scouting out Junior's bar.]]bar]].



* EveryoneIsGay: {{Lampshaded}} by Velvet's mother, but otherwise averted.
-->'''Saffron''': Do you have any straight girls in your class, honey?
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: [[spoiler:Weiss' feelings towards Ruby.]]
* FakeOutMakeOut: Milita and a Fox-Girl Faunus in Chapter 6. It didn't work because Velvet suspected she heard anyway what she was eavesdropping on.

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* EveryoneIsGay: {{Lampshaded}} [[LampshadeHanging Questioned by Velvet's mother, mother]], but otherwise averted.
-->'''Saffron''': -->'''Saffron:''' Do you have any straight girls in your class, honey?
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: [[spoiler:Weiss' feelings towards Ruby.]]
Ruby]]; the former denies it, but the latter hopes "everyone" is right.
* FakeOutMakeOut: Milita and a Fox-Girl fox-girl Faunus in Chapter 6. It didn't work because Velvet suspected she heard anyway what she was eavesdropping on.on.
* FashionVictimVillain: InUniverse, [[spoiler:Junior orders Coco Adel to wear a cream-and-brown-colored version of the Malachite twins' dresses as a "uniform" to blend in with the [[BadGuyBar club atmosphere]]. While Melanie and Miltia liked their own respective red and white dresses, Coco thinks her brown dress is horrible (even Miltia thinks of it as "crap-coloured" when she sees it)]].
* FictionFiveHundred: The "Society" people in general.
--> '''Alice:''' The Schnees are ludicrously wealthy, we Sgathans are [[DistinctionWithoutADifference merely]] absurdly wealthy.



* HeKnowsTooMuch: Why Ruby[[spoiler: nearly killed Miltia. She recognized her killing someone before and mentions to Velvet the only reason she survived was because she knew what was going to happen and managed to get her defenses up.]]
* HumiliatingWager: India and Venus wager the loser gives a kiss to the winner against Weiss and Ruby. Ruby wins but doesn't collect since she doesn't want to force it.
* IAmWhatIAm: Alice tells Ruby this. She acknowledges she's a Society girl and enjoyed the decadent lifestyle.
* IconicItem: Ruby and Blake's WeaponOfChoice are both so rare that they are recognizable, allowing Miltia to know full-well that Ruby's used it to kill before and for Velvet's father to warn her that Blake was involved with White Fang.
* ImprobableAimingSkills: Ruby never seems to miss with the sniper part of her sniper-scythe...
* ItGetsEasier: [[spoiler:Neo suggests the conscience gets 'limber' after the first dozen to explain why Ruby isn't overly bothered by the White Fang soldiers she killed.]]
* ItsPersonal: The sisters aren't fond of Yang because not only did she get them fired, but Junior also blacklisted them, leaving Beacon as their own choice.
* JudgeJuryAndExecutioner: Part of hunter culture is that they police themselves, including those in training, as regular channels (i.e. the police) are unable to handle such incidences. The only time they ever get a higher authority (i.e. the faculty) involved is if it goes beyond their ability to handle.
* KnowledgeBroker: Hei "Junior" Xiong.

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* HeKnowsTooMuch: Why Ruby[[spoiler: HeKnowsTooMuch:
** This is the reason [[spoiler:Ruby
nearly killed Miltia. She Miltia recognized her killing someone before and mentions to Velvet the only reason she survived was because she knew what was going to happen and managed to get her defenses up.]]
up]].
** Discussed between [[spoiler:Neo and Junior regarding the Malachite twins. Neo tells Junior that she [[ResignationsNotAccepted wouldn't have let them leave]] if she had been their boss; Junior initially assumes she would have [[BodyguardCrush sexual motivations to keep them]], and Neo counters that Junior should have either kept the Malachites or [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness killed them]] instead]].
* HumiliatingWager: India and Venus wager the loser gives a kiss to the winner against Weiss and Ruby. Ruby wins wins, but doesn't collect since she doesn't want Venus is reluctant to follow through; Ruby declines to force it.
her to, but the rest of the Society torment her relentlessly [[spoiler:until she finally follows through and shows Weiss a video record to convince her to "call off the hounds"]].
* IAmWhatIAm: Alice tells Ruby this. She acknowledges she's a Society girl and enjoyed enjoys the decadent lifestyle.
* IconicItem: Ruby Ruby's and Blake's WeaponOfChoice [[WeaponOfChoice weapons of choice]] are both so rare that they are recognizable, allowing Miltia to know full-well that Ruby's used it to kill before and for Velvet's father to warn her that Blake was involved with White Fang.
* ImprobableAimingSkills: Ruby never seems to miss with the sniper part of her sniper-scythe...
sniper-scythe.
* ItGetsEasier: [[spoiler:Neo suggests the conscience gets 'limber' "limber" after the first dozen to explain why Ruby isn't overly bothered by the White Fang soldiers she killed.]]
killed]].
* ItsPersonal: The sisters Malachite twins aren't fond of Yang because not only did she get them fired, but Junior also blacklisted them, leaving Beacon Academy as their own only open career choice.
* JudgeJuryAndExecutioner: Part of hunter Huntsman[=/=]Huntress culture is that they police themselves, including those in training, as regular channels (i.e. the police) are unable to handle such incidences. The only time they ever get a higher authority (i.e. the faculty) involved is if it goes beyond their ability to handle.
* KnowledgeBroker: Hei "Junior" Xiong.Xiong does this both for hire and for his own business.



* MixAndMatchWeapon: It’s {{WebAnimation/RWBY}}. Not everything is a gun, but they all have multiple forms to attack with.
** Alice’s Cheshire Silver is a two-handed sword which can split into two separate blades or become a dust-powered pulse rifle.
** Aurea’s Sole and Luna, a cudgel (Luna) which turns into a carbine (Sol).

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* MamaBear[=/=]PapaWolf: At Velvet's request, her father uses his connections to investigate Blake Belladonna's possible connections to Faunus terrorist groups. Velvet's mother runs a cafe with a sign that reads "Peace begets peace" on the window, but when she glares at Ruby during an incident there, Ruby finds her glare scarier than the inside of a giant Beowolf's maw.
* MixAndMatchWeapon: It’s {{WebAnimation/RWBY}}. Not everything is also a gun, but they all have multiple forms to attack with.
forms.
** Alice’s Alice's Cheshire Silver is a two-handed sword which can split into two separate blades or become a dust-powered pulse rifle.
** Aurea’s Aurea's Sole and Luna, a cudgel (Luna) which turns into a carbine (Sol).rifle (Sole).



** One of the VLFM's soldiers wields a dust-infused WhipSword hidden as a belt. A 'Flex-Segmented Dust-Activated Blade', according to Ruby.
** Another VLFM member uses a longsword that doubles as an energy weapon; a 'High-Energy Rail-Sword'.
* {{Muggle}}: It's mentioned in the fic that many of the police, and presumably many other people, don't have aura. This is one of the bigger changes from the show where basically everyone, save for the soulless Grimm, have aura.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Yang had a moment like this in the past when she [[spoiler:attacked her father when he confronted her nine months ago about running with Roman Torchwick. Ruby bursting in and finding she attacked him was a key part of her quitting.]]

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** One of the VLFM's Vale Faunus Liberation Movement's soldiers wields a dust-infused WhipSword hidden as a belt. A 'Flex-Segmented "Flex-Segmented Dust-Activated Blade', Blade," according to Ruby.
** Another VLFM VFLM member uses a longsword that doubles as an energy weapon; weapon, a 'High-Energy Rail-Sword'.
"High-Energy Rail-Sword."
* {{Muggle}}: {{Muggles}}: It's mentioned in the fic that many of the police, and presumably many other people, don't have aura. Auras. This is one of the bigger changes from the show canon where basically everyone, save for the soulless Grimm, have aura.
Aura.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Yang had a moment like this in the past when she [[spoiler:attacked her father when he confronted her nine months ago about running Dust-running with Roman Torchwick. Ruby bursting barging in and finding she attacked him was a key part of her quitting.]]quitting]].



* NamedWeapons: Averted by the Malachite twins, whose weapons remain unnamed, and used to demonstrate the differences between hunter culture and that of more normal people.
* NaiveNewcomer: Jaune is constantly shown to be completely unaware of Hunter traditions and culture, managing to be both completely horrified by the way hunters do things, and completely horrify the hunters because he doesn't understand what it is he's threatening to do.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Goodwitch and a team of veteran Hunters set out to kill the Ancient Grimm from Chapter 10, which had lived at least a thousand years. We see none of it, only receiving a notice it was slain later.

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* NamedWeapons: Averted by the Malachite twins, whose weapons remain unnamed, and used to demonstrate the differences between hunter Hunter culture and that of more normal people.
* NaiveNewcomer: Jaune is constantly shown to be completely unaware of Hunter traditions and culture, managing to be both completely horrified by the way hunters do things, Huntsmen and Huntresses do things and to completely horrify the hunters his peers because he doesn't and they don't understand what each other's interpretations of their words and actions.
* NotDistractedByTheSexy:
** Jaune sometimes struggles to keep his eyes away from [[AbsoluteCleavage the top of Melanie's strapless dress]], but to his credit he repeatedly manages to remain serious and focus on their important subjects of conversation, which earns him some respect as a team leader.
** Cinder Fall crosses her legs during a conversation with Roman Torchwick, who has to make a mental effort to resist her allure:
--->[='=]''The woman is completely unfair'',[='=] [Roman] thought to himself in dismay. [='=]''It's hard enough to match wits with her when you don't want to pin her ankles back to her ears''.[='=] But the infamous Torchwick was a [[GentlemanThief gentleman thief]], and those [[ShesGotLegs goddamned sinful legs]] could do as they pleased, she wouldn't get the satisfaction of knowing
it is he's threatening to do.
affected him.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Glynda Goodwitch and a team of veteran Hunters set out to kill the Ancient Grimm from Chapter 10, which had lived at least a thousand years. We see none of it, only receiving a notice it was slain later.



-->'''India''': ''Sweet fuck, a sniper [[CurseCutShort scy–]]

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-->'''India''': -->'''India:''' ''Sweet fuck, a sniper [[CurseCutShort scy–]]scy–]]!''



* OriginalCharacter: Alice Sgathan, India and Venus, as well as Velvet's parents and various background characters.
** OCStandIn: Miltiades and Melanie Malachite, the two girls who fought Yang in the Yellow trailer.
* PassiveAggressiveKombat: Common between Society Girls.
* ProfessionalKiller: [[spoiler:Ruby tells Miltia that this is how she gets all the money to pay for Crescent Rose. Neo's one too and they drop hints that they're both part of a MurderInc. This explains the various disconcerting tropes in this page with Ruby's name in them, including the highly illegal sawtooth blades.]]
** White Fang's Trigger Teams and Trigger Agents are these.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Yang's eyes turn red when she gets pissed.
* ReformedCriminal: Blake (as per Canon), Miltia and Melanie Malachite and [[spoiler: Yang.]]
* RichBitch: See AlphaBitch above.

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* OriginalCharacter: Alice Sgathan, India and Venus, as well as Velvet's parents parents, and various other background characters.
** OCStandIn: Miltiades and Melanie and Miltia Malachite, the two twin girls who fought Yang in the Yellow "Yellow" trailer.
* PassiveAggressiveKombat: Common between Society Girls.
girls.
* ProfessionalKiller: PrecisionFStrike: Profanity appears several times, but some instances stand out, such as:
--> '''Trevor:''' Really, fuck, Mark, honest, I had no fucking clue.
--> '''Mark:''' [[OverprotectiveDad Don't swear in front of Velvet]].
--> '''Velvet:''' For ''fuck's'' sake, dad! [[SkewedPriorities How are you possibly worried about that]]? Focus!
* ProfessionalKiller:
**
[[spoiler:Ruby tells Miltia that this is how she gets all the money to pay for Crescent Rose. Neo's Neo is one too too, and when they meet, they drop hints that they're both part of a MurderInc. This explains the various disconcerting tropes in this page with Ruby's name in them, including the highly illegal sawtooth blades.]]
MurderInc]].
** The [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters White Fang's Trigger Teams Fang]] "Trigger Teams" and Trigger Agents "Trigger Agents" are these.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Yang's lilac eyes turn red when she gets pissed.
angry.
* ReformedCriminal: Blake Belladonna (as per Canon), Miltia and in canon), Melanie Malachite and [[spoiler: Yang.]]
Miltia Malachite, and [[spoiler:Yang Xiao Long]].
* RichBitch: See AlphaBitch above.ReplacementGoldfish: Miltia is personally outraged when she discovers that Junior not only replaced them with [[spoiler:Coco Adel]], he even gave her a cream-and-brown ("crap-coloured") version of their dresses as a uniform!



* SecretPolice: The RSS, Vale's "secret happy fun-time people", who you wouldn't want to meet in a dark alleyway.
* SerratedBladeOfPain: [[spoiler: Sawtooth anti-personnel blades have edges like sharks’ teeth, full of points specifically designed to overwhelm a human being’s aura. They are ''very'' illegal because of this]].
* SignatureScent: Alice wears a brand of perfume so hard to find that Weiss and Miltia immediately peg that she's been involved with Ruby when they catch the scent on her.
* SpySpeak:In the form of Sign/Countersign between [[spoiler:Neo and Ruby]], when they first meet.
* StealthInsult: Common between Society girls, though they just as often [[PassiveAggressiveKombat don't bother with the 'stealth']].

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* SecretPolice: The RSS, Vale's "secret happy fun-time people", who people," whom you wouldn't want to meet in a dark alleyway.
* SerratedBladeOfPain: [[spoiler: Sawtooth [[spoiler:Sawtooth anti-personnel blades have edges like sharks’ sharks' teeth, full of points specifically designed to overwhelm a human being’s aura.Aura. They are ''very'' illegal because of this]].
* SiblingYinYang: Despite being too similar to be PolarOppositeTwins, Melanie and Miltia do have some significant differences, canon and [[OCStandIn invented]]. Besides their different dress colors (Melanie's [[WomanInWhite white]], Miltia's [[LadyInRed red]]), weapons (Melanie's [[ArmedLegs heel blades]], Miltia's [[WolverineClaws claw]] [[BladeBelowTheShoulder gauntlets]]), and hair lengths (Melanie has waist-length hair, [[FreezeFrameBonus Miltia has a bob haircut]]), this fic gives them different social-class employer preferences (Melanie bodyguarded [[DecadentCourt Society boys]], Miltia bodyguarded [[BadGuyBar clubbers]]) sexual orientations (Melanie's straight, Miltia's lesbian), and even conflict with each other (both are protective of each other, but Melanie doubted Miltia's combat skill after the Chapter 2 incident and dislikes Society girls due to [[AlphaBitch Weiss's influence]], while Miltia doubted Melanie's ability to handle Junior's anger and dated Alice Sgathan [and flirted with Ruby] at least partly to needle Melanie).
* SignatureScent: Alice wears a brand of perfume so hard to find that Weiss and Miltia immediately peg recognize that she's Ruby's been involved with Ruby her when they catch the its scent on her.
Ruby.
* SpySpeak:In SpySpeak: In the form of Sign/Countersign Sign[=/=]Countersign between [[spoiler:Neo and Ruby]], when they first meet.
* {{Squee}}: Ruby makes "a noise like a strangled whimper" when she sees Coco Adel's [[BriefcaseBlaster suitcase]] [[GatlingGood chaingun]], earning her "a strange look" from Miltia.
* StealthInsult: Common between Society girls, though they just as often [[PassiveAggressiveKombat [[SugaryMalice don't bother with the 'stealth']].



* SugaryMalice: Any encounter between society girls is filled with this.

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* SugaryMalice: Any encounter between society Society girls is filled with this.



-->'''Weiss''': Ha, it looks like a success from back here too. ({{Beat}}) Oh god, that sounded completely wrong.

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-->'''Weiss''': -->'''Weiss:''' Ha, it looks like a success from back here too. ({{Beat}}) Oh god, that sounded completely wrong.



* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: A few moments of panic by Ruby leading to [[spoiler: her trying to kill Miltiades]] starts off the plot and gives the first few hints at the eponymous secrets.

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* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: A few moments of panic by Ruby leading to [[spoiler: her trying to kill Miltiades]] Miltia]] starts off the plot and gives the first few hints at the eponymous secrets.



-->'''[[spoiler:Neo]]''': So breathe easy, sister.
-->'''[[spoiler:Ruby]]''': Free air is easy to breathe, sister.

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-->'''[[spoiler:Neo]]''': -->'''[[spoiler:Neo]]:''' So breathe easy, sister.
-->'''[[spoiler:Ruby]]''': -->'''[[spoiler:Ruby]]:''' Free air is easy to breathe, sister.



** India, despite being flattened by Ruby in a single attack, is still shocked when Pyrrha points out he's only alive because Ruby had no intention of killing him, and that she herself is a little nervous about facing her.
--> '''India''': You know, suddenly she doesn't seem nearly so adorable.

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** India, despite being flattened by Ruby in a single attack, is still shocked when Pyrrha points out he's only alive because Ruby had no intention of killing him, and that she herself is a little nervous about facing her.
--> '''India''':
Ruby.
-->'''India:'''
You know, suddenly she doesn't seem nearly so adorable.adorable.
* ValleyGirl: The Malachite twins still have the [[DullSurprise speech tones]], [[LikeIsLikeAComma word choices]], and [[ActionFashionista fashion sense]], but it's noted more than once that they're not to be mistaken for vapid fools; they were successful BodyguardBabes (before [[OneManArmy Yang beat them, and their boss's Mooks, and their boss himself]]) to [[BadGuyBar clubbers]] and [[DecadentCourt Society people]], after all.



* WorldBuilding: Plenty.
* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Blake has a hard time accepting that the White Fang have gone from the latter to the former.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Neo is of this opinion in regards to the twins, namely that Junior should either have kept them or silenced them since they knew too much.

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* WorldBuilding: Plenty.
Plenty; extrapolating from ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}''[='=]s (early) presentation is the point of this fic.
* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Blake has YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters:
** Weiss Schnee and
a group of White Fang assassins exchange affiliation-based insults along with their death threats before opening combat with each other. [[spoiler:Blake Belladonna finds it hard time accepting to psychologically accept that the White Fang have gone changed from "freedom fighters" to "terrorists" even after she left]], and the latter loss of Faunus life, even of White Fang members, pains her.
** In addition
to the former.
White Fang, other such Faunus rights[=/=]crime organizations are stated to exist, such as the "Jaws of Menagerie" and the "Vale Faunus Liberation Movement." These groups sometimes [[WeAreStrugglingTogether come in conflict with each other]] as well as [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized with non-members and law enforcement]], as indicated by gang-style graffiti indicative of turf wars.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Neo is of this opinion in regards with regard to the Malachite twins, namely that Junior should either have kept them or silenced them since [[HeKnowsTooMuch they knew too much.much]].
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Added an example. Even if the trope is normally YMMV, this is an In Universe example, so it should be allowed on the work page. Question: When quoting Lie Ren, should we (on TV Tropes pages, for consistency purposes) refer to him by first name, last name, or full name?

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* TooDumbToLive: Defied InUniverse by Lie Ren during the three-team meeting in Chapter 5.
-->'''Jaune:''' At some point, we have to be able to work together.
-->'''Ren:''' Otherwise, we'll not only end up dead, but the coroner will sign our certificates with 'Death by Stupidity'. Not how I'd like to go out.
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* MixAndMatchWeapon: It’s {{WebAnimation/RWBY}}.

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* MixAndMatchWeapon: It’s {{WebAnimation/RWBY}}. Not everything is a gun, but they all have multiple forms to attack with.

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