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** PlayedForLaughs in that killing people is not seen as big deal for ninja, for obvious reasons. But stealing or tampering with their toliet paper is a major offense.
** In fairness to Naruto, the people he killed had [[spoiler:set a trap that murdered his peers, fellow Konoha ninja, in a case of RevengeByProxy]], so it's not surprising that people are giving him back-pats for it.
** In fairness to Naruto, the people he killed had [[spoiler:set a trap that murdered his peers, fellow Konoha ninja, in a case of RevengeByProxy]], so it's not surprising that people are giving him back-pats for it.
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** PlayedForLaughs in that killing people is not seen as big deal for ninja, for obvious reasons. But stealing or tampering with their toliet toilet paper is a major offense.
** Infairness to Naruto, fairness, the people he Naruto killed had [[spoiler:set a trap that murdered his peers, fellow Konoha ninja, in a case of RevengeByProxy]], so it's not surprising that people are giving him back-pats for it.it, while tampering with toilet paper is a ''really'' effective way to kill a ninja.
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* OnlySurvivor: Hiashi Hyuuga is the member of Jiraiya's genin team left alive.
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* SoleSurvivor: Hiashi Hyuuga is the member of Jiraiya's genin team left alive.
** Hiro Kurosaki is only member of Team 8 that survived the Kiri Chunin Exams.
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* CatchYourDeathOfCold: Kabuto gets hospitialized when he gets sick after getting caught in the rain during border patrol. [[spoiler: Tetsuo exploits this so Naruto can have his spot on the team for the Suna Chunin Exams.]]
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* DirtyOldMan: As Suzume shows, being hit on and peeked on by these sort of men is sexual harassment when you are the one harassed.
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* DirtyOldMan: As Suzume shows, being hit on and peeked on by these sort of men is sexual harassment is extremely upsetting when you are the one harassed.
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** Shows up again in ''Team Tetsuo'', rather than Sakura and Sasuke do the Genin Exam and have Naruto held back another year if they fail, Tetsuo decides to pass them to take them on months-long training trips to whip them into shape to get Naruto to the Suna Chunin Exam. Although in his defence, he ''was'' getting the Rookie of the Year and Top Kunoichi, so he assumed that he'd just need to shape them up a bit. He was correct, but underestimated how ''much'' shaping up they'd need before they were ready for the Chunin Exams, and with Naruto the most stable member of the group [[spoiler:Sarutobi decides that they aren't ready for Suna, meaning that just like {{Canon}} and ''Team 7'', Naruto must wait until the Konoha Exams to finally break out of his AlmightyJanitor status.]]
* NamesTheSame: Suzume shares her first name with the Academy's kunoichi arts instructor. {{Lampshaded}} in "Team Tetsuo". She also has the same family name as {{Canon}} MauveShirt Izumo Kamizuki. Kita Haruno has the same given name with Academy exam proctor, Kita Hagane.
* NamesTheSame: Suzume shares her first name with the Academy's kunoichi arts instructor. {{Lampshaded}} in "Team Tetsuo". She also has the same family name as {{Canon}} MauveShirt Izumo Kamizuki. Kita Haruno has the same given name with Academy exam proctor, Kita Hagane.
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** Shows up again in ''Team Tetsuo'', rather than Sakura and Sasuke do the Genin Exam and have Naruto held back another year if they fail, Tetsuo decides to pass them to take them on months-long training trips to whip them into shape to get Naruto to the Suna Chunin Exam. Although in his defence, he ''was'' getting the Rookie of the Year and Top Kunoichi, so he assumed that he'd just need to shape them up a bit. He was correct, but underestimated how ''much'' shaping up they'd need before they were ready for the Chunin Exams, and with Naruto the most stable member of the group [[spoiler:Sarutobi Sarutobi decides that they aren't ready for Suna, meaning that just like {{Canon}} and ''Team 7'', Suna. Then, a single slot is opened for Naruto must wait until the Konoha Exams to finally break out of his AlmightyJanitor status.]]
participate... on [[spoiler:Kabuto]]'s team.
* NamesTheSame: Invoked. Suzume shares her first name with the Academy's kunoichi arts instructor. {{Lampshaded}} in "Team Tetsuo". She also has the same family name as {{Canon}} MauveShirt Izumo Kamizuki. Kita Haruno has the same given name with Academy exam proctor, Kita Hagane.
* NamesTheSame: Invoked. Suzume shares her first name with the Academy's kunoichi arts instructor. {{Lampshaded}} in "Team Tetsuo". She also has the same family name as {{Canon}} MauveShirt Izumo Kamizuki. Kita Haruno has the same given name with Academy exam proctor, Kita Hagane.
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* KingIncognito: The Hokage occasionally makes Danzo man the complaints desk; its how he meets Barako, who thinks he's a washed-up drunk ninja who should have retired. Barako learns the hard way that he's the Hokage's advisor.
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* KingIncognito: The Hokage occasionally makes gives menial tasks to his advisors, like having Danzo man the complaints desk; its desk, which is how he meets Barako, who thinks he's mistakes a man in such a position for a washed-up drunk ninja who should have retired.retired already. Barako learns the hard way that he's the Hokage's advisor.
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* LoveAtFirstPunch: A platonic variant with Konohamaru and Naruto. Konohamaru started to look up to Naruto when Naruto attacked him when Konohamaru tried to ambush his grandfather. Naruto was first person to not to kiss up to him and actually get angry at him for his actions.
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* LoveAtFirstPunch: A platonic variant with Konohamaru and Naruto. Konohamaru started to look up to Naruto when Naruto attacked him when Konohamaru tried to ambush his grandfather. Naruto was first person to not to kiss up to him and actually get angry at think Konohamaru was a threat and treat him for his actions.as such.
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***[[spoiler: Although finally subverted when Tetsuo pulled some strings for Naruto to participate in the Suna Chunnin Exams [[OhCrap by having him take Kabuto's place in Kabuto's team]].]]
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* AdultFear: Tetsuo briefly fear that his infant daughter would not recognized him for being away too long.
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* WhenHeSmiles: Non-romantic version in ''Team Tetsuo,'' when Tetsuo smiles at Sakura for [[SoProudOfYou picking on a medical jutsu fairly quickly.]]
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* {{Irony}}: While Sasuke supplies InsaneTrollLogic (see below) to Naruto's early graduation by saying he would have already been nominated long before the "dead last", Kakashi later reveals that it was '''that''' attitude that made sure he wasn't.
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** Kakashi gives one truly shattering one to Sasuke in ''Team 7'' calling him on his [[ItsAllAboutMe attitude]] and his being an UngratefulBastard.
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Subverted, [[CoolBigSis Suzume]] teaches Naruto that he shouldn't take Sakura's abuse and that his crush is unhealthy. Tolerating someone's abuse is not how love works. Naruto takes her advice and Sakura learns quickly that it was ''only'' Naruto's crush that let her land a hit.
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Subverted, [[CoolBigSis Suzume]] teaches Naruto that he shouldn't take Sakura's abuse and that his crush is unhealthy. Tolerating unhealthy - tolerating someone's abuse is not ''not'' how love works. Naruto takes her advice - realising along the way that he desired Sakura's friendship rather than her love (but his poor social skills meant he thought he wanted her romantically) - and Sakura learns quickly that it was ''only'' Naruto's crush that let her land a hit.hit in previously.
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--->Tetsuo: I can't believe Naruto was able to con a ninja out of 20000 ryo with a chalkboard eraser and string.
--->Iwa Academy Instructor throwing at eraser at unruly student: Best money I ever spent.
--->Iwa Academy Instructor throwing at eraser at unruly student: Best money I ever spent.
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* BadMoodAsAnExcuse: Naruto already depressed from being left behind from his teammates, Sakura tries to punch him for "faking being a ninja." He stops her punch and in a bout of TranquilFury, he [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech rips Sakura a new one.]]
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* BadMoodAsAnExcuse: Naruto is already depressed from being left behind from by his teammates, and then Sakura tries to punch him for "faking being a ninja." ninja". He stops her punch and in a bout of TranquilFury, he [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech rips Sakura her a new one.]]one while threatening to break her arm]].
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** In FT:S, [[spoiler: this is Tobi's motive for revenge and why he steals Sasuke's son, Fugaku]], although thanks to TheReveal in {{Canon}} this will be eventually rewritten in some inknown manner
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** In FT:S, [[spoiler: this is the older Tobi's motive for revenge and why he steals Sasuke's son, Fugaku]], although thanks to TheReveal in {{Canon}} this will be eventually rewritten in some inknown mannerFugaku, after killing the sound nin who originally stole him for Orochimaru.]]
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* BadMoodAsExcuse: Naruto already depressed from being left behind from his teammates, Sakura tries to punch him for "faking being a ninja." He stops her punch and in a bout of TranquilFury, he [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech rips Sakura a new one.]]
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* BadMoodAsExcuse: BadMoodAsAnExcuse: Naruto already depressed from being left behind from his teammates, Sakura tries to punch him for "faking being a ninja." He stops her punch and in a bout of TranquilFury, he [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech rips Sakura a new one.]]
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Hibachi, as it turns out, is NOT an OC - he\'s an anime-only character from a Filler arc
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** Hibachi, an Academy student who once bullied Naruto and [[spoiler: in ''Team Tetsuo'' gets a second chance at becoming a genin.]]
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* AndThenWhat[=/=]ArmorPiercingQuestion: Asked of Sasuke by Haku in ''Team Tetsuo'':
-->"And, what will you do, and who will you have at your side when you have avenged your clan?"
-->"And, what will you do, and who will you have at your side when you have avenged your clan?"
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Often. Naruto gives one to Sakura in ''First Try'' and another to Sasuke in ''Team Tetsuo.''
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!!Tropes found in the First Try Series
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* WrongGenreSavvy: A lot of people have the wrong idea of who people are, what or why they are ''doing'' certain things, and even oftentimes on what's really happening.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: A lot of people have the wrong idea of who people are, what or why they are ''doing'' certain things, and even oftentimes on what's really happening.happening.
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--> (''First Try'') Tetsuo: "You passed was a test to weed out the absolutely hopeless candidates"
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* [[LikeFatherLikeSon Like Mother Like Daughter]]: The Haruno women have a problem of MuggingTheMonster.
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* NoAccountingForTaste: Kita is a NiceGuy doormat, while Barako is a {{Jerkass}} AlphaBitch. Although it is shown that they do love each other and Kita starts putting his foot down when Barako costs him his job and drives their daughter to move out.
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* NoAccountingForTaste: Kita is a NiceGuy doormat, ExtremeDoormat, while Barako is a {{Jerkass}} AlphaBitch. Although it is shown that they do love each other and Kita starts putting his foot down when Barako costs him his job and drives their daughter to move out.
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* {{Flopsy}}: Team 5 had to pull this one after Satoshi lost them their money in ''River Country Con''
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* {{Flopsy}}: Team 5 had to pull this one after Satoshi lost them their money in ''River Country Con''Con''.
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* KickedUpstairs: In ''Team 7: Divergence'', [[spoiler:Hiashi Hyuuga]] is appointed Hokage due to lack of an alternate option
* KingIncognito: The Hokage made Danzo man the complaints desk, its how he meets Barako, who's thinks he's a washed-up drunk ninja who should have retired. Barako learns the hard way that he's the Hokage's advisor.
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* KickedUpstairs: In ''Team 7: Divergence'', [[spoiler:Hiashi Hyuuga]] is appointed Hokage due to lack of an alternate option
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* KingIncognito: The Hokagemade occasionally makes Danzo man the complaints desk, desk; its how he meets Barako, who's who thinks he's a washed-up drunk ninja who should have retired. Barako learns the hard way that he's the Hokage's advisor.
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** Given his healing abilities, he's not in danger of dying from snake-bite - but damn if it doesn't make him ''horribly'' sick.
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* MisplacedRetribution: [[spoiler: An Iwa genin tries to avenge her father, who was killed in the Third Shinobi War, by killing Konoha genin.]]
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* MisplacedRetribution: [[spoiler: An Iwa genin tries to avenge her father, who was killed in the Third Shinobi War, by killing Konoha genin. [[LaserGuidedKarma It gets her twin brother and their teammate slaughtered by an Kyuubi-powered, enraged Naruto, leaving her to flee for her life]].]]
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* MyGreatestSecondChance: [[spoiler: when Sarutobi reworks the Academy curriculum for sabotage, the students who failed the Academy or Genin test get their second chance with re-take exams to see what were the real numbers of passing, which will boost the numbers of active shinobi]]
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* MyGreatestSecondChance: [[spoiler: when Sarutobi reworks the Academy curriculum for sabotage, the students who failed the Academy or Genin test get their second chance with re-take exams to see what were the real numbers of passing, which will boost the numbers of active shinobi]]shinobi.]]
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** Shows up again in ''Team Tetsuo'', rather than Sakura and Sasuke do the Genin Exam and have Naruto held back another year if they fail, Tetsuo decides to pass them to take them on months-long training trips to whip them into shape to get Naruto to the Suna Chunin Exam
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** Shows up again in ''Team Tetsuo'', rather than Sakura and Sasuke do the Genin Exam and have Naruto held back another year if they fail, Tetsuo decides to pass them to take them on months-long training trips to whip them into shape to get Naruto to the Suna Chunin Exam Exam. Although in his defence, he ''was'' getting the Rookie of the Year and Top Kunoichi, so he assumed that he'd just need to shape them up a bit. He was correct, but underestimated how ''much'' shaping up they'd need before they were ready for the Chunin Exams, and with Naruto the most stable member of the group [[spoiler:Sarutobi decides that they aren't ready for Suna, meaning that just like {{Canon}} and ''Team 7'', Naruto must wait until the Konoha Exams to finally break out of his AlmightyJanitor status.]]
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* GoodGuyBar: The Jounin-senseis of Genin teams tend to go the same bar since being a teacher is very stressful. Its were Tetsuo talks to his colleague Morishita and managed to convince Kakashi to teach Naruto twice.
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* GoodGuyBar: The Jounin-senseis of Genin teams tend to go the same bar since being a teacher is very stressful. Its were It's where Tetsuo talks to his colleague Morishita and managed to convince Kakashi to teach Naruto twice.
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7033987/1/First-Try First Try]]'' - the original story. of Prelude of the two years leading up to the time of the {{Canon}} plot.
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* HonorRelatedAbuse: It's implied that Uchiha who had bastard children or married outside the village had themselves and their family killed. [[spoiler: Which is Tobi's motive for revenge and why he steals Sasuke's son, Fugaku.]]
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* HonorRelatedAbuse: It's implied that Uchiha who had bastard children or married outside the village had themselves and their family killed. killed - Itachi tells Kisame this outright in FT:TT, when the latter asks if the clan has any survivors other than Sasuke.
** In FT:S, [[spoiler:Which this is Tobi's motive for revenge and why he steals Sasuke's son, Fugaku.]]Fugaku]], although thanks to TheReveal in {{Canon}} this will be eventually rewritten in some inknown manner
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