History FanFic / FirstTrySeries

20th Jul '16 5:43:46 PM ladyofthelibrary
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* WoundedGazelleGambit: Barako portrays herself [[HystericalWoman hysterical with worry]] for [[MamaBear her daughter]] that taken by [[MaliciousSlander two perverts and The Demon]] under the guise of a training trip.

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* WoundedGazelleGambit: Barako portrays herself [[HystericalWoman hysterical with worry]] for [[MamaBear her daughter]] that was taken by [[MaliciousSlander two perverts and The Demon]] under the guise of a training trip.
31st May '16 12:54:52 PM Willbyr
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The ''First Try Series'' is a collection of {{Naruto}} ForWantOfANail [[{{Fanfic}} Fanfiction stories]], written by the prolific [[Creator/{{Lucillia}} Luci]][[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/579283/Lucillia llia]]. The premise of this story is an AlternateUniverse in which Naruto was able - thanks to a minor stroke of luck - pass his Academy graduation exam on his [[TitleDrop first try]]. As a result, he becomes a Genin two years earlier than in canon, put on a team with genin teammates [[TheStrategist Satoshi Kamiya]] & [[ActionGirl Suzume Kamizuki]]. Their sensei is [[TeamDad Tetsuo Shimura]], the disowned grandson of [[ManipulativeBastard Danzo Shimura]].

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The ''First Try Series'' is a collection of {{Naruto}} ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail [[{{Fanfic}} Fanfiction stories]], written by the prolific [[Creator/{{Lucillia}} Luci]][[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/579283/Lucillia llia]]. The premise of this story is an AlternateUniverse in which Naruto was able - thanks to a minor stroke of luck - pass his Academy graduation exam on his [[TitleDrop first try]]. As a result, he becomes a Genin two years earlier than in canon, put on a team with genin teammates [[TheStrategist Satoshi Kamiya]] & [[ActionGirl Suzume Kamizuki]]. Their sensei is [[TeamDad Tetsuo Shimura]], the disowned grandson of [[ManipulativeBastard Danzo Shimura]].



* DeconstructionFic: Many tropes and plots from {{Naruto}} are deconstructed. The author points out that many elements from later parts of the series have resulted in early plot points making no sense.

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* DeconstructionFic: Many tropes and plots from {{Naruto}} ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' are deconstructed. The author points out that many elements from later parts of the series have resulted in early plot points making no sense.
22nd Feb '16 1:52:34 PM Dechstreme
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* CharacterDerailment: Kakashi and Sasuke suffer from this. They resemble nothing from their canon part one characterizations and are very similar to the characterizations of them used in other fanfictions to bash them, with Sasuke's anti-social tendencies and arrogance exaggerated beyond what actually did happen, where he didn't actually disparage his teammates like he does in this series, and Kakashi is turned from the troubled man that avoided interacting with his students unless he absolutely needed to into obsessed with teaching Naruto and only Naruto while dismissing Sasuke and Sakura, when Kakashi did care for all his students equally in canon, it's just that he was clueless regarding what he actually needed to do in order to get through to them and overestimated himself when it came to getting through to Sasuke.
11th Sep '15 3:26:33 AM Morgenthaler
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* HowDoYouLikeThemApples: In ''FT:TT'', apple trees grow all around Konoha so they're the only thing an unprepared Sakura can eat. Team Tetsuo had to guard an apple cider festival, [[spoiler: where they get drugged and captured by a kidnapping ring.]]
6th Sep '15 10:55:31 AM Racheakt
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*** [[spoiler: Given that someone tries to break in and steal the revised curriculum from one of the bidding printing companies, it is possible this was an actual enemy action.]]

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*** [[spoiler: Given that someone tries to break in and steal the revised curriculum from one of the bidding printing companies, it is possible this was ''[[InvertedTrope an actual enemy action.]]]]'']]
6th Sep '15 10:47:03 AM Racheakt
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*** [[spoiler: Given that someone tries to break in and steal the revised curriculum from one of the bidding printing companies, it is possible this was an actual enemy action.]]
6th Sep '15 10:40:12 AM Racheakt
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** [[spoiler: When the Third Hokage updates the Ninja Academy textbooks to be more historically accurate and show the dangers of being a ninja, along with reworking the school curriculum, it's seen by the other ninja villages as remilitarizing and abandoning the project to become a tourist trap instead of having caught on a group of MoralGuardians doing a mess with the curriculum.]]

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** [[spoiler: When the Third Hokage updates the Ninja Academy textbooks to be more historically accurate and show the dangers of being a ninja, along with reworking the school curriculum, it's seen by the other ninja villages as remilitarizing and abandoning the project to become a tourist trap instead of having caught on a group to sabotage of MoralGuardians doing a mess with the curriculum.]]
17th Mar '15 5:45:17 AM EDP
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* AllIssuesArePoliticalIssues: [[spoiler: When the Third Hokage updates his textbooks to be more historically accurate and show the dangers of being a ninja, along with reworking the school curriculum - it's seen by the other ninja villages as remilitarizing.]]

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* AllIssuesArePoliticalIssues: Tends to happen.
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[[spoiler: When the Third Hokage updates his the Ninja Academy textbooks to be more historically accurate and show the dangers of being a ninja, along with reworking the school curriculum - curriculum, it's seen by the other ninja villages as remilitarizing.remilitarizing and abandoning the project to become a tourist trap instead of having caught on a group of MoralGuardians doing a mess with the curriculum.]]


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** [[spoiler: When the Kazekage sends Gaara on a joint mission with Konoha in a brinksmanship response to Konoha's perceived remilitarization, the fact Konoha's team includes Naruto (a Jinchuriki) and Kakashi (capable jonin, student of the Fourth Hokage, and son of a man who had a lot of Suna nin in his body count) is seen as a powerful counter to that instead that the complete coincidence that is. Also, Naruto asking Gaara if he's an Uzumaki is seen as ''questioning Gaara's paternity in the most offensive way as possible while still having PlausibleDeniability'' instead than as genuine curiosity.]]
15th Mar '15 2:59:19 PM Tovath1
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* AdultFear: Tetsuo briefly fear that his infant daughter would not recognized him for being away too long.

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* AdultFear: Tetsuo briefly fear that his infant daughter would not recognized recognize him for after being away too long.
15th Mar '15 10:18:58 AM EDP
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** In fairness, the people Naruto killed had [[spoiler:set a trap that murdered his peers, fellow Konoha ninja, in a case of RevengeByProxy]], so it's not surprising that people are giving him back-pats for it, while tampering with toilet paper is a ''really'' effective way to assassinate a ninja and embarrass him.

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** In fairness, the people Naruto killed had [[spoiler:set a trap that murdered his peers, fellow Konoha ninja, in a case of RevengeByProxy]], so it's not surprising that people are giving him back-pats for it, while tampering with and toilet paper is a ''really'' effective way to assassinate a ninja and embarrass him.rare in the field.
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