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-->'''Aerith:''' I think he [Angeal] really wants the both of you—no, you to find peace.\\
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-->'''Sephiroth''': Is it that you're the only one qualified to do what needs to be done, or is it that you don't trust anyone else to help you?
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* TheMole: Not long after leaving Costa del Sol, it becoems clear the Tsviets are keeping tabs on them somehow (Cait Sith doesn't join, so Reeve isn't it this time), and suspicion soon falls on [[spoiler: Shalua, prompting Cissnei to make a plan to out her if she is one, by splitting the group up and setting a rendezvous at Rocket Town to see if Shalua's group is ambushed. The plan works, but what Cissnei doesn't realize is that ''she's'' the mole. Nero has been connected to her somehow ever since he nearly killed her]].
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* TheMole: Not long after leaving Costa del Sol, it becoems becomes clear the Tsviets are keeping tabs on them somehow (Cait Sith doesn't join, so Reeve isn't it this time), and suspicion soon falls on [[spoiler: Shalua, prompting Cissnei to make a plan to out her if she is one, by splitting the group up and setting a rendezvous at Rocket Town to see if Shalua's group is ambushed. The plan works, but what Cissnei doesn't realize is that ''she's'' the mole. Nero has been connected to her somehow ever since he nearly killed her]].
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* FlawExploitation: The Tsviets use this against [[spoiler: Cissnei, given that Nero has a direct link to her after her tried to kill her, and is able to see her formulate her plans as she's making them, which enables him to "out" Shalua as a mole, while still watching Cissnei]].
* FeedTheMole: A variation occurs while they're trying to figure out how the Tsviets are tracking them. Cissnei devises a plan to have the group split into three groups, two of them will meet in one location, while the third, with the suspected mole heads to another. The ruse works and [[spoiler:Shalua]] is outed. [[spoiler: Except, it's actually ''Cissnei'' who's an unwitting mole, being tracked by Nero, who left a portion of his power within her after his attempted killing failed.]]
* FeedTheMole: A variation occurs while they're trying to figure out how the Tsviets are tracking them. Cissnei devises a plan to have the group split into three groups, two of them will meet in one location, while the third, with the suspected mole heads to another. The ruse works and [[spoiler:Shalua]] is outed. [[spoiler: Except, it's actually ''Cissnei'' who's an unwitting mole, being tracked by Nero, who left a portion of his power within her after his attempted killing failed.]]
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* HeroWithBadPublicity: Sephiroth.
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* HeroWithBadPublicity: Sephiroth.AVALANCE in general and Sephiroth in particular, given that he's implacably in the assassination of President Shinra.
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* TheMole: Not long after leaving Costa del Sol, it becoems clear the Tsviets are keeping tabs on them somehow (Cait Sith doesn't join, so Reeve isn't it this time), and suspicion soon falls on [[spoiler: Shalua, prompting Cissnei to make a plan to out her if she is one, by splitting the group up and setting a rendezvous at Rocket Town to see if Shalua's group is ambushed. The plan works, but what Cissnei doesn't realize is that ''she's'' the mole. Nero has been connected to her somehow ever since he nearly killed her]].
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* MacguffinGirl: Aerith; Sephiroth notes that for whatever reason, everything keeps coming back to her, and for those same reasons, ''everyone'' is after her.
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* MacguffinGirl: Aerith; Sephiroth notes that for whatever reason, everything keeps coming back to her, and for those same reasons, ''everyone'' is after her.
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* MacguffinGirl: Aerith; Sephiroth notes that for whatever reason, everything keeps coming back to her, and for those same reasons, ''everyone'' is after her.
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* KnightInSourArmor: Sephiroth.
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* KnightInSourArmor: Sephiroth.Sephiroth has gone through all the trauma that drove him mad in canon but still willingly hides out with Cissnei for four years, waiting for a chance to rescue Zack, all just to keep the promise he made to Angeal.
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* TheLeader: Sephiroth again. Sephiroth, by virtue of being the strongest member and having the most leadership experience, becomes the ''de facto'' leader of the group.
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* BigDamnReunion: Zack and Aerith are primed for one, but even when do run into each other again, circumstances keep tearing them apart until they get out of Midgar, when they are finally able to spend some time together figuring out where they are and what happens next.
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* NeckLift: Just to show how powerful and dangerous Jenova really is, she does the to ''Sephiroth'' of all people.
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* BornLucky: Cissnei, the other Turks say she was born under a lucky star, though it seems to stray into UnluckilyLucky every now and then.
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* CurbStompBattle: Basically Sephiroth vs. anything that isn't Genesis or a Tsviet.
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* ShowerOfAwkward: Sephiroth bumps into Cissnei when she's just out of the shower. She's wearing a towel, but Sephiroth is still a heterosexual male, and believe it or not, he starts imagining things about her.
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* ShowerOfAwkward: Sephiroth bumps into Cissnei when she's just out of the shower. She's wearing a towel, ModestyTowel, but Sephiroth is still a heterosexual male, and believe it or not, he starts imagining things about her.
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* SexForSolace: Cissnei relates a mission with her old partner going to investigate his brother. She doesn't go into details, just that they were both upset after it was done and they got "carried away". She leaves him alone in bed in the morning, because she's afraid of getting that close to anyone.
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** When the party first confronts Jenova, she incapacitates them all and pins them with a single spell, except for Barrett who shows up and distracts her long enough for the others to break free and fight her off.
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* LetMeAtHim: Cissnei and Cloud (mostly Cloud, since Cissnei's unenhanced) have to hold back Zack after they see Tseng slapping Aerith.
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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: After shooting down the Turks' helicopter, Cissnei thinks back to a conversation she had with another ex-Turk about why she'd getting so involved with AVALANCHE. When said former colleague demands to know if she thinks she can erase all her dark deeds of the past or if she wants to be a hero, Cissnei replies, "It's not about being a hero...it's about being able to looks at myself in the mirror."
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: When Cissnei confronts Shion and lists the myriad of crimes she's now been implacated in from assassinating the Shinra president to dropping the Sector 7 plate (which Deepground did) but AVALANCHE took the fall for), she asks if she left any out. Shion reminds her of three counts of grand theft auto, which compared to the rest is really rather minor.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: When Cissnei confronts Shion and lists the myriad of crimes she's now been implacated in from assassinating the Shinra president to dropping the Sector 7 plate (which Deepground did) did but AVALANCHE took the fall for), she asks if she left any out. Shion reminds her of three counts of grand theft auto, which compared to the rest is really rather minor.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: When Cissnei confronts Shion and lists the myriad of crimes she's now been implacated in from assassinating the Shinra president to dropping the Sector 7 plate (which Deepground did) but AVALANCHE took the fall for), she asks if she left any out. Shion reminds her of three counts of grand theft auto, which compared to the rest is really rather minor.
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* GoKartingWithBowser: When Sephiroth, Cissnei and Vincent run into the Turks in Wutai, they wind up joining them for a game of cards.
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* GambitPileup: Shinra has plans of course, AVALANCHE has plans to stop them, but in the mix is also Genesis, who, depending on the day, may or may not be working with Shinra, and Deepground who are definitely working outside Shinra's interests.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Reeve's warning to Cissnei through Cait Sith's fortune, "'''U R Watched'''", followed by the color black. [[spoiler:Nero the Sable is watching the group through Cissnei].]]
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**One while Aerith and Sephiroth are hiding in a closet in the Shinra building.
-->'''Aerith:''' I think he [Angeal] really wants the both of you—no, you to find peace.\\
**One while Aerith and Sephiroth are hiding in a closet in the Shinra building.
-->'''Aerith:''' I think he [Angeal] really wants the both of you—no, you to find peace.\\
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** One from Seph to Cissnei on her tendency to keep putting herself in dangerous situations:
-->'''Sephiroth''': Is it that you're the only one qualified to do what needs to be done, or is it that you don't trust anyone else to help you?
-->'''Sephiroth''': Is it that you're the only one qualified to do what needs to be done, or is it that you don't trust anyone else to help you?
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* BrutalHonesty: Sephiroth; Cissnei says he tells the truth whether people want to hear it or not. And he doesn't pull punches with it either.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Sephiroth and Cissnei are this to Zack at the beginning.
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* BigDamnHeroes: BigDamnHeroes:
** Sephiroth and Cissnei are this to Zack at thebeginning.beginning.
** When the party is ambushed by Auriel and Deepground, [[spoiler:Reno show up and carts off Auriel, leaving the party to recover]].
** Sephiroth and Cissnei are this to Zack at the
** When the party is ambushed by Auriel and Deepground, [[spoiler:Reno show up and carts off Auriel, leaving the party to recover]].
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* ItsQuietTooQuiet: After they escape from the Shinra cells, Cissnei realizes that it's entirely too quiet, as though nothing else on the the floor is moving. She realizes why that is right before they come across the scene of a massacre.
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* CuttingTheKnot: When imprisoned in the Shinra tower, Zack is manacled to the wall with electronically controlled shackles. When the time comes to escape, Cissnei is all set to try some complicated hacking to open them, then Kunsel comes in and sticks his sword into an electrical circuit, shorting out the manacles, which fall open.
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* SpitTake: Zack's reaction when he sees Aerith in Don Corneo's mansion over the video feed.
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--> '''Sephiroth:''' I am at peace.
--> '''Aerith:''' Are you really?
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* PowerTrio: The three main SOLDIERs.[=SOLDIERs=].
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* [[spoiler: RedHerringMole: Shalua. No word yet on who the actual mole is, if one exists.]]
** [[spoiler: It's Cissnei, who doesn't even know she's doing it.]]
** [[spoiler: It's Cissnei, who doesn't even know she's doing it.]]
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* [[spoiler: RedHerringMole: Shalua. No word yet on who the actual [[spoiler:Shalua]]. The real mole is, if one exists.]]
** [[spoiler: It's Cissnei,is [[spoiler:Cissnei]], who doesn't even know she's doing it.]]
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* [[spoiler: SacrificialLion: Subverted [[spoiler:Subverted with Zack, doubles subverted with Kunsel.]]
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The author stated that this story will be a Trilogy, each installment being equivalent to a Disc like the original FFVII. The first story(found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6595872/1/Final-Fantasy-VII-Another-Side here]]) is complete, and the second story(called ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10044260/1/Final-Fantasy-VII-Another-Story Final Fantasy VII: Another Story]]'') that was originally ongoing, but is now discontinued.
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The author stated that this story will be a Trilogy, each installment being equivalent to a Disc like the original FFVII. The first story(found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6595872/1/Final-Fantasy-VII-Another-Side here]]) is complete, and the second story(called ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10044260/1/Final-Fantasy-VII-Another-Story Final Fantasy VII: Another Story]]'') that was originally ongoing, but is now discontinued.
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* EnsembleCast EnsembleCast: All of the characters get roughly the same amount of focus.
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* TheQuietOne: Cloud rarely speaks in full sentences. without being spoken to. Sephiroth isn't exactly talkative either.either, and seems to avoid conversation as much as possible.
