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** There's another one in the Chapter 10 omake where, after reading a hacked chatroom log, Chachamaru delivers this gem:
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--> [[quoteblock]]'''Chachamaru''': "Perhaps the meme is insinuating that Chisame-san is using some form of device in order to properly penetrate the miniature horse."
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He's gone to [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Uminari City]].
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He's gone to [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Uminari City]].City]], and the TSAB is finally figuring out that maybe Nanoha and Hayate ''aren't'' the only mages of note on the planet.
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* OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs: Lampshaded by Chisame in an omake. After reading a chat that insinuates [[spoiler: Chisame [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]]]]
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* OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs: Lampshaded by Chisame in an omake. After reading a chat that insinuates [[spoiler: Chisame X [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]]]]
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* OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs: Lampshaded by Chisame in an omake. After reading a chat that insinuates [[spoiler: Chisame [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]]]]
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* FacePalm: Lindy's favorite reaction to Fate-chan and Arf's antics.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 6, [[spoiler:Hayate has just been mind fucked into seeing everything she loves die. Her cries for help are the same ones Simba from TheLionKing shout, word-for-word, after Mufassa dies.]]
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* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove:[[spoiler:Nanoha is having some problems with this.]]
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*YouAreNotAlone: Officially the author's favorite trope. Invoked by Signum in word to [[spoiler: Hayate after her MindRape]] and by [[spoiler:Negi in action when he rescues her from the darkness mind fucking her.]]
*YouAreNotAlone: Officially the author's favorite trope. Invoked by Signum in word to [[spoiler: Hayate after her MindRape]] and by [[spoiler:Negi in action when he rescues her from the darkness mind fucking her.]]
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* GondorCallsForAid: [[spoiler:A thoroughly {{mind rape}}d Hayate who is isolated in a magically sealed dimension makes a telepathic desperate pleas for help... and Negi hears her plea, and does not disappoint.]] The chapter notes make it explicit that the author was deliberately invoking the TropeNamer's imagery.
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* GondorCallsForAid: [[spoiler:A At the end of Chapter [[spoiler:6]], [[spoiler:Hayate]], thoroughly {{mind rape}}d Hayate who is and isolated in a magically sealed dimension dimension, makes a desperate telepathic desperate pleas plea for help... and Negi in the following chapter's beginning, [[spoiler:Negi]] hears her the plea, and does not disappoint.]] disappoint. The chapter notes make it explicit that the author was deliberately invoking the TropeNamer's imagery.imagery of YouAreNotAlone, too.
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* FuroScene: Chapter 9 has Negi bonding with Hayate, Signum and Vita in the bathtub. Much to his embarrassment.
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* GondorCallsForAid: [[spoiler:A thoroughly {{mind rape}}d Hayate who is isolated in a magically sealed dimension makes a telepathic desperate pleas for help... and Negi hears her plea, and does not disappoint.]] The chapter notes make it explicit that the author was deliberately invoking the TropeNamer's imagery.
* GondorCallsForAid: [[spoiler:A thoroughly {{mind rape}}d Hayate who is isolated in a magically sealed dimension makes a telepathic desperate pleas for help... and Negi hears her plea, and does not disappoint.]] The chapter notes make it explicit that the author was deliberately invoking the TropeNamer's imagery.
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->'''Negi''': I am Negi Springfield, offspring of the Thousand Master and the Princess of Ostia. I have been trained by the greatest masters of combat and magic, and have never failed to impress them. I have faced demons, madmen, cyborgs, and gods themselves, all for the sake of others. I have traveled the world in search of one man thought dead. ''And I found him.'' You think the darkness scares me? You think I am just some child? You think I would back away from anyone who would ''hurt my students? JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM?''
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* DefearMeansFriendship:Alyssa calls Nanoha out on this when Nanoha notes that Negi "looks lonely" but it was {{Played For Laughs}}.
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->'''Signum''':"Zafira, I think you're doing it wrong."
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->'''Signum''':"Zafira, I think you're doing it wrong."
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** Chapter 6 has this in spades. It begins with a TastesLikeDiabetes-style description of Hayate making breakfast for her knights, in which HilarityEnsues when she 'punishes' Vita. It ends with [[spoiler: Hayate being MindRaped into thinking her knights are dead and the city is destoryed. Also contains a rather [[TearJerker Tear Jerking]] ShoutOut to TheLionKing]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Once again, Asuna. The only difference is that she's not [[{{Understatement}} happy]] about Negi waking out on her and the class.
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* WarriorTherapist: Signum, surprisingly. She delivers a good YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech to [[spoiler: Hayate the morning after her Mind Rape.]] While she doesn't do this DURING battle, her reputation AS a warrior certainly gives her the title.
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* FollowTheLeader: Zephyr-Fiction, the author, admits that this story is based off of ShadowCrystalMage's similar fic ''Overlords and Overkill''. However, this is PlayedWith because him and Zephyr have routine correspondence about their stories, and Mage has accepted the face that he inspired Zephyr.
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* BadassBoast: Negi, during his [[spoiler:rescue of Hayate.]]
->'''Negi''': I am Negi Springfield, offspring of the Thousand Master and the Princess of Ostia. I have been trained by the greatest masters of combat and magic, and have never failed to impress them. I have faced demons, madmen, cyborgs, and gods themselves, all for the sake of others. I have traveled the world in search of one man thought dead. ''And I found him.'' You think the darkness scares me? You think I am just some child? You think I would back away from anyone who would ''hurt my students? JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM?''
->'''Negi''': I am Negi Springfield, offspring of the Thousand Master and the Princess of Ostia. I have been trained by the greatest masters of combat and magic, and have never failed to impress them. I have faced demons, madmen, cyborgs, and gods themselves, all for the sake of others. I have traveled the world in search of one man thought dead. ''And I found him.'' You think the darkness scares me? You think I am just some child? You think I would back away from anyone who would ''hurt my students? JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM?''
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The story can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6691878/1/Equal_and_Opposite_Attraction here]].
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* FurroScene: Chapter 9 has Negi bonding with Hayate, Signum and Vita in the bathtub. Much to his embarassment
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What follows is equal parts sugary, fluffy goodness, mind-rape, and ensuing hilarity. All the while, a new enemy is slowly encroaching on the city, threatening both Negi and his students. Considering that three of his students include Nanoha, Fate, and Hayate, things are going to get very sticky very quickly.
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* MoodWhiplash: In chapter 4.
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