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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4223348/1/Eir-s-Tomorrow Eir's Tommorrow]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/210208/Jukebox-Hound Jukebox Hound]] a PeggySue ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII'' fic which opens post-[[Anime/FinalFantasyVIIAdventChildren Advent Children]] with TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt. A mysterious force of nature poisoned the environment and unleashed shadowy creatures that hunts people down to last man as the world starves to death. Cloud, as the last man alive, watches the Planet in its death throes. Then he wakes up in a lab....
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4223348/1/Eir-s-Tomorrow Eir's Tommorrow]] Tomorrow]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/210208/Jukebox-Hound Jukebox Hound]] a PeggySue ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII'' fic which opens post-[[Anime/FinalFantasyVIIAdventChildren Advent Children]] with TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt. A mysterious force of nature poisoned the environment and unleashed shadowy creatures that hunts people down to last man as the world starves to death. Cloud, as the last man alive, watches the Planet in its death throes. Then he wakes up in a lab....
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The foundation of the plot, which turns out to be the [[GeniusLoci Planet's]] doing, as it needed those deaths to power itself to power the TimeTravel and fight off its own demise.
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The foundation of the plot, which turns out to be the [[GeniusLoci Planet's]] doing, as it needed those deaths to power itself to power the TimeTravel and fight off its own demise.
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* WeHaveReserves: Hojo does not give a single damn about the troopers or scientists he uses as he can always get more, which he does as he tends to use them in his experiments.
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* AllTheOtherReindeer: The Strifes are outcasted for their religious beliefs.
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* AllTheOtherReindeer: The Strifes are outcasted outcasts for their religious beliefs.beliefs, they are the only people who believe in the Aesir. As a result, no one with exception of [[OldMaster Zangan]] wants anything to do with them. The townspeople are afraid that the Strifes can curse them with their gods, which admittedly Cloud and his mother don't try to disprove due it's usefulness.
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: While Sephiroth doesn't like the experiments, he accepts them as a painful fact of life. Although in his adulthood, he does realize that his childhood was strange to say the least.
* DrivenToSuicide: In the original timeline, Reeve killed himself rather than suffer through the apocalypse.
* EldritchAbomination: The Planet is a neutral variant of this, Cloud describes it as a blinding light whose voice is described as a roar and can't be understood by non-Cetra.
* EldritchAbomination: The Planet is a neutral variant of this, Cloud describes it as a blinding light whose voice is described as a roar and can't be understood by non-Cetra.
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* GuardianAngel: Cloud acts as one to Sephiroth before his own reincarnation and even came with the wings to prove it. He would try to protect Sephiroth from the cruel experiments and give him advice when needed.
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* GuardianAngel: Cloud acts as one to Sephiroth before his own reincarnation and even came with the wings to prove it. He would try to protect Sephiroth from the cruel experiments and other people and give him advice when needed.needed.
* AHeroIsBorn: Cloud is reborn as himself when his mother finally gives birth to him.
* AHeroIsBorn: Cloud is reborn as himself when his mother finally gives birth to him.
* ImperiledInPregnancy: Iflana is attacked and non-fatally shot by Hojo and his Turks when she attempts to escape.
* InSpiteOfANail: Despite Cloud's warning, Iflana gets captured
** [[spoiler: Elfe dies although in different circumstances.]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Despite Cloud's warning, Iflana gets captured
** [[spoiler: Elfe dies although in different circumstances.]]
* KillEmAll: Everyone died in the apocalypse.
* KlingonPromotion: When Professor Gast takes Hojo to task for authorizing the move of Sephiroth and the project without his permission, Hojo shoots him.
* KlingonPromotion: When Professor Gast takes Hojo to task for authorizing the move of Sephiroth and the project without his permission, Hojo shoots him.
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* {{Reincarnation}}: Cloud was initially a ghost when he traveled back time only to be reborn during his birth.
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* GodIsDead: Aerith, who commands the Lifestream, is gone when the apocalypse started despite Cloud's prayers. It's implied that the Planet absorbed her along with the rest of the Lifestream.
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* DespairEventHorizonDespairEventHorizon: Cloud crossed it after seeing everyone he loved die and the only thing that kept him going was the chance to save Zack, Aerith and Sephiroth.
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* FromTheMouthsOfBabes: A young Sephiroth asks Cloud if sex has making him sad.
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* FromTheMouthsOfBabes: A young Sephiroth asks Cloud if what sex has making him sad.is.
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* LastStandLastStand: When the population was down to one city, Cloud and others tried banding together for one last chance against the Plague. [[ForegoneConclusion With the exception of Cloud, everyone is wiped out.]]
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* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: The death of Iflana and Gast Faremis is followed by Cloud's birth.
* BlessedWithSuck: Cloud's mako enchancements [[spoiler: plus the Planet]] prevent him from starving to death or lose any muscle mass but he has to watch all of his friends and family starve, lose hope and die, living him the sole survivor.
* ContrivedCoincidence
* DoomedByCanon: Doctor Gast Faremis is killed and Iflana dies trying to escape.
* BlessedWithSuck: Cloud's mako enchancements [[spoiler: plus the Planet]] prevent him from starving to death or lose any muscle mass but he has to watch all of his friends and family starve, lose hope and die, living him the sole survivor.
* ContrivedCoincidence
* DoomedByCanon: Doctor Gast Faremis is killed and Iflana dies trying to escape.
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* BirthDeathJuxtaposition: The death of Iflana and Gast Faremis is followed by Cloud's birth.
* BlessedWithSuck: Cloud's mako enchancements [[spoiler: plus the Planet]] prevent him from starving to deathor lose any muscle mass but as quickly as regular people he has to watch all of his friends and family starve, lose hope and die, living him the sole survivor.
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* DoomedByCanon: Doctor Gast Faremis is killed and the pregnant Iflanadies is captured trying to escape.
* BlessedWithSuck: Cloud's mako enchancements [[spoiler: plus the Planet]] prevent him from starving to death
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* DoomedByCanon: Doctor Gast Faremis is killed and the pregnant Iflana
** Angel!Cloud tells Iflana that if Hojo turns on them that she go awake [[SealedGoodInACan Vincent from his coffin]] for him to help. Iflana manages to successfully awake Vincent when Hojo kills her husband, but both are shot and tranquilized before they could escape.
* ItsQuietTooQuiet: One of the signs of that things were turning for the worst was when whole forests were completely silent of life.
* ItsQuietTooQuiet: One of the signs of that things were turning for the worst was when whole forests were completely silent of life.
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* TheNeedless: Implied for the adult Cloud is mentioned to be incapable of starving due to his mako enhancements.
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* TheNeedless: Implied for the adult Cloud is mentioned to be incapable NeverFoundTheBody: The bodies of starving due to his mako enhancements. Nanaki, Cid and Vincent were never found as their cities were overrun before anyone could reach them.
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* PeggySue: Cloud is sent back in time by the Lifestream itself to prevent the circumstances that lead to the end of the world.
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* PeggySue: Cloud is sent back in time by the Lifestream Planet itself to prevent the circumstances that lead to the end of the world.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: The reason why Cloud decides to save Sephiroth: before he was reincarnated he meets a very young Sephiroth as a spirit. The young Sephiroth mistakes Cloud for an angel and they become close.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Professor Gast is the only scientist with any ethics in the Jenova Project and is the only one that treats Sephiroth like a child rather than an experiment. As Iflana points out this doesn't excuse him because he's still experimenting on a child
* UsedToBeASweetKid:The reason why Cloud decides to save Sephiroth: before he was reincarnated he meets a very young To Cloud's surprise, Sephiroth as a spirit. is one. The young adult Sephiroth mistakes Cloud knew was a FauxAffablyEvil BigBad [[AGodAmI with a massive god complex]] who's responsible for an angel starting TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt. The child Sephiroth is a sweet, inquisitive child who wants the affection and they become close.
companionship that no one gives him. The child's blithe acceptance that his beloved Cloud will kill him, disturbs Cloud so much that he vows to save him.
* UsedToBeASweetKid:
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* AndIMustScream: During the ApocalypseHow and death of his original timeline, Cloud cannot die and has to watch everyone he loves, his home and the planet die and he could do nothing to change anything.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Cloud's mako enchancements prevent him from starving to death or lose any muscle mass but he has to watch all of his friends and family starve, lose hope and die, living him the sole survivor.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Cloud's mako enchancements [[spoiler: plus the Planet]] prevent him from starving to death or lose any muscle mass but he has to watch all of his friends and family starve, lose hope and die, living him the sole survivor.
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* ApocalypseHow: '''Class 5:Planetary-scale Species Extinction''' as all life on the Planet dies as Cloud watches
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* ApocalypseHow: '''Class 5:Planetary-scale Species Extinction''' as First all life on the people die, then all the animals die, then the land grows barren and the atmosphere vanishes with the Lifestream tearing the Planet dies as to shreds and Cloud watcheswatched all of it.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Cloud's mako enchancements prevent him from starving to death or lose any muscle mass but he has to watch all of his friends and family starve, lose hope and die, living him the sole survivor.
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* DoomedByCanon
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--> It took one year, eight months, and three days for the Planet to die after Jenova's final defeat.
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: the Strifes are Scandinavian with their beliefs and their worship of [[DarkIsNotEvil Hel]].
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--> It took one year, eight months, and three days for the Planet to die after Jenova's final defeat.
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: the Strifes are Scandinavian with their beliefs and their worship of [[DarkIsNotEvil Hel]].
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*HopeSpotGuardianAngel: Cloud acts as one to Sephiroth before his own reincarnation and even came with the wings to prove it. He would try to protect Sephiroth from the cruel experiments and give him advice when needed.
* HopeSpot: After the events of ''Anime/FinalFantasyVIIAdventChildren'', there was hope that all [[HopeSproutsEternal new green]] means things are getting better again. Things quickly grow wrong when animals start growing in numbers with deformities and the plant life grows poisonous.
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* HopeSpot: After the events of ''Anime/FinalFantasyVIIAdventChildren'', there was hope that all [[HopeSproutsEternal new green]] means things are getting better again. Things quickly grow wrong when animals start growing in numbers with deformities and the plant life grows poisonous.
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The foundation of the plot, which turns out to be the [[GeniusLoci Planet's]] doing, as it needed those deaths to power itself to power the TimeTravel.
* NotSoImaginaryFriend
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The foundation of the plot, which turns out to be the [[GeniusLoci Planet's]] doing, as it needed those deaths to power itself to power the TimeTravel.
TimeTravel and fight off its own demise.
*NotSoImaginaryFriendNotSoImaginaryFriend: Everyone initially believe that Sephiroth's angel friend is a result of him reading too much fairy tales.
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: The reason why Cloud decides to save Sephiroth: before he was reincarnated he meets a very young Sephiroth as a spirit. The young Sephiroth mistakes Cloud for an angel and they become close.close.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4223348/1/Eir-s-Tomorrow Eir's Tommorrow]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/210208/Jukebox-Hound Jukebox Hound]] a PeggySue FinalFantasyVII fic which opens post-[[FinalFantasyVIIAdventChildren Advent Children]] with TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt. A mysterious force of nature poisoned the environment and unleashed shadowy creatures that hunts people down to last man as the world starves to death. Cloud, as the last man alive, watches the Planet in its death throes. Then he wakes up in a lab....
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4223348/1/Eir-s-Tomorrow Eir's Tommorrow]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/210208/Jukebox-Hound Jukebox Hound]] a PeggySue FinalFantasyVII ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII'' fic which opens post-[[FinalFantasyVIIAdventChildren post-[[Anime/FinalFantasyVIIAdventChildren Advent Children]] with TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt. A mysterious force of nature poisoned the environment and unleashed shadowy creatures that hunts people down to last man as the world starves to death. Cloud, as the last man alive, watches the Planet in its death throes. Then he wakes up in a lab....
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4223348/1/Eir-s-Tomorrow Eir's Tommorrow]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/210208/Jukebox-Hound Jukebox Hound]]Hound]] a PeggySue FinalFantasyVII fic which opens post-[[FinalFantasyVIIAdventChildren Advent Children]] with TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt. A mysterious force of nature poisoned the environment and unleashed shadowy creatures that hunts people down to last man as the world starves to death. Cloud, as the last man alive, watches the Planet in its death throes. Then he wakes up in a lab....
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* ApocalypseHow: '''Class 5:Planetary-scale Species Extinction''' as all life on the Planet dies as Cloud watches
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The foundation of the plot, which turns out to be the [[GeniusLoci Planet's]] doing, as it needed those deaths to power itself to power the TimeTravel.
* PeggySue: Cloud is sent back in time by the Lifestream itself to prevent the circumstances that lead to the end of the world.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: The reason why Cloud decides to save Sephiroth: before he was reincarnated he meets a very young Sephiroth as a spirit. The young Sephiroth mistakes Cloud for an angel and they become close.
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* ApocalypseHow: '''Class 5:Planetary-scale Species Extinction''' as all life on the Planet dies as Cloud watches
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The foundation of the plot, which turns out to be the [[GeniusLoci Planet's]] doing, as it needed those deaths to power itself to power the TimeTravel.
* PeggySue: Cloud is sent back in time by the Lifestream itself to prevent the circumstances that lead to the end of the world.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: The reason why Cloud decides to save Sephiroth: before he was reincarnated he meets a very young Sephiroth as a spirit. The young Sephiroth mistakes Cloud for an angel and they become close.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4223348/1/Eir-s-Tomorrow Eir's Tommorrow]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/210208/Jukebox-Hound]]net/u/210208/Jukebox-Hound Jukebox Hound]]
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