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* AdaptationalBadass: So many minor characters in canon end up becoming more badass in this fanfic. Special note to Gato, who was considered a minor threat in the series and has now become one of the major [[BigBad Big Bads]].
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* AdaptationalBadass: So many minor characters in canon end up becoming more badass in this fanfic. Special note
* AdaptationalHeroism: special mention goes toGato, who was considered a minor threat in the series Tayuya and has now become one of the major [[BigBad Big Bads]]. Kin
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* CovertPervert: Isaribi is the one to suggest competing about "bedding" Naruto first
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* EnemyMine: [[spoiler:Kakuzu and Misora]] and Naruto vs Moryu. Helps that the fate of the entire world was literally on the line.
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* EyepatchOfPower: after recovering from losing an eye, [[spoiler:Sasuke]] wears one of these
* FaceDoodling: Kiba suffers this after a party
--> "There's a dick on my face, isn't there?"
* FaceDoodling: Kiba suffers this after a party
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* SortingAlgorithmOfEvil: denied by the author, with the Moryu fight
--> "...the order doesn't necessarily have to be that every villain the hero fights next is stronger than the last. That's bullshit. Sometimes one of the stronger opponents shows up in the middle and wrecks absolute hell."
--> "...the order doesn't necessarily have to be that every villain the hero fights next is stronger than the last. That's bullshit. Sometimes one of the stronger opponents shows up in the middle and wrecks absolute hell."
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** Walking in on people when they're in the shower is apparently a common event at his place....
--> '''Kin''': THIS IS THE THIRD TIME THIS MONTH! DON'T YOU EVER KNOCK?!
--> '''Kin''': THIS IS THE THIRD TIME THIS MONTH! DON'T YOU EVER KNOCK?!
* EyeScream: [[spoiler:Sasuke]] has an eye taken in chapter 32
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** Hiruzen wasn't attacked by Orochimaru during the Exams because the Exams weren't attacked
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** Hiruzen wasn't attacked by Orochimaru Everyone who would have died during the Exams Invasion, because it never happened; this includes Hiruzen and the Exams weren't attackedFourth Kazekage
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%%* ForWantOfANail: (frick I've no idea how to explain this)
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** Tayuya came back with Naruto to Leaf, and never joined Orochimaru
** Haku never fought against Kakashi, and was prevented from committing suicide by a dying Zabuza
** Kin left Sound after being severely injured in the Exams, and also came to Leaf with Naruto
** Hiruzen wasn't attacked by Orochimaru during the Exams because the Exams weren't attacked
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* BadassBoast
-->'''Naruto (to Yukie)''': I've been fighting against assholes like [[NarutoTheMovieNinjaClashInTheLandOfSnow Doto]] ever since I was kicked out of the orphanage. I've beaten up entire street gangs with my bare fists, fought against whole armies of mercenaries, defeated a girl who was practically a walking slab of metal and one who could literally turn herself into lighting, rescued two countries from a fucker named Gato, and killed an S-Rank nuke nin who wouldn't die no matter how many times you stabbed him in the face. (...) The point is that there's not a single creature on this beautiful ball of water and dirt, living or dead, that I can't beat. Fact.
-->'''Naruto (to Yukie)''': I've been fighting against assholes like [[NarutoTheMovieNinjaClashInTheLandOfSnow Doto]] ever since I was kicked out of the orphanage. I've beaten up entire street gangs with my bare fists, fought against whole armies of mercenaries, defeated a girl who was practically a walking slab of metal and one who could literally turn herself into lighting, rescued two countries from a fucker named Gato, and killed an S-Rank nuke nin who wouldn't die no matter how many times you stabbed him in the face. (...) The point is that there's not a single creature on this beautiful ball of water and dirt, living or dead, that I can't beat. Fact.
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* BodySled: Naruto rides Nadare down a mountain [[spoiler:which ends up killing the latter]]
--> "SURF'S UP! WOOO!"
--> "SURF'S UP! WOOO!"
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* CluelessChickMagnet: Naruto doesn't have a clue about his many admirers.
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-->"Stuff like this just happens when I go places."
* CluelessChickMagnet: Naruto doesn't have a clue about his manyadmirers.admirers for the longest time.
* CluelessChickMagnet: Naruto doesn't have a clue about his many
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* GoshDarnItToHeck: Kaede is fond of "mother-hubbard"
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* LethalChef: Kaede's cooking looks and smells delicious; it just happens to be inedible. He's really sensitive about it too.
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* RapunzelHair: Kiyoko has a ''lot'' of hair
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%%* ShoutOut chapter 33, "You have my permission to die."
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* ActionPet: Swift-chan, Naruto's sparring partner, is a bird world renown for their speed and agility.
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* ActionPet: Swift-chan, Naruto's sparring partner, is a bird world renown renowned for their speed and agility.
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: ''Gato'' has destroyed the lively-hood of entire countries just because he felt like it.
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* CorruptCorporateExecutive: ''Gato'' has destroyed the lively-hood livelihood of entire countries just because he felt like it.
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* DefeatingTheUndefeatable: Naruto is the only genin to have ever defeated [[spoiler:Tsubaki]], although [[spoiler:Samui]] came pretty close to doing it.]]
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* DefeatingTheUndefeatable: Naruto is the only genin to have ever defeated [[spoiler:Tsubaki]], although [[spoiler:Samui]] came pretty close to doing it.]]
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* DoorStopper: This is the 2nd longest Naruto story on Fanfiction.net, at over a million words as of April 2014.
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* DoorStopper: This is the 2nd second longest Naruto story on Fanfiction.net, at over a million words as of April 2014.
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* SpitTake: Onoki spits out his tea when he realizes who Naruto's father is
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* IronicEcho: "Hide and clap. Try and find me." [[spoiler:Naruto to Tsubaki]]
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%%* ConfusionFu: Naruto's specialty.
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* DefeatingTheUndefeatable: [[spoiler: Naruto is the only genin to have ever defeated Tsubaki, although Samui came pretty close to doing it.]]
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* DefeatingTheUndefeatable: [[spoiler: DefeatingTheUndefeatable: Naruto is the only genin to have ever defeated Tsubaki, [[spoiler:Tsubaki]], although Samui [[spoiler:Samui]] came pretty close to doing it.]]
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* DramaticWind: Naruto's "Eiyuu Kaze" (Hero Wind) jutsu is a joke technique he made to make himself look more badass before a fight. [[spoiler: It's later weaponized as he uses this technique to NoSell [[MomentOfAwesome all of Tsubaki's lightning attacks]].]]
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* DramaticWind: Naruto's "Eiyuu Kaze" (Hero Wind) jutsu is a joke technique he made to make himself look more badass before a fight. [[spoiler: It's later weaponized as he uses this technique to NoSell [[MomentOfAwesome all of of]] Tsubaki's lightning attacks]].attacks.]]
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** Tsubaki appears to be a bit of a mishmash of various characters from {{OnePiece}}. Her general appearance is based on Nami, while her Kekkei Genkai is based on [[ShockAndAwe Eneru's]] Logia powers. Lastly, some of her move set taken from [[LightEmUp Admiral]] [[LightIsNotGood Kizaru]].
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** Tsubaki appears to be a bit of a mishmash of various characters from {{OnePiece}}.Manga/OnePiece. Her general appearance is based on Nami, while her Kekkei Genkai is based on [[ShockAndAwe Eneru's]] Logia powers. Lastly, some of her move set taken from [[LightEmUp Admiral]] [[LightIsNotGood Kizaru]].
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* MagnetismManipulation: one of Tsubaki's abilities from her [[ShockAndAwe kekkei genkai]]
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* NotSoStoic: [[spoiler:Tsubaki seriously loses her composure that not only is Naruto able to NoSell her lightning attacks, but he can land solid hits on her too and negate her MadeOfAir abilities. What's more, when it becomes clear that Naruto is winning, she completely loses it.]]
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* NotSoStoic: [[spoiler:Tsubaki [[spoiler:Tsubaki]] seriously loses her composure that not when [[spoiler:not only is Naruto able to NoSell her lightning attacks, but he can land solid hits on her too and negate her MadeOfAir abilities. abilities]]. What's more, when it becomes clear that Naruto [[spoiler:Naruto is winning, winning]], she completely loses it.]]
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* ShockAndAwe: Tsubaki. [[spoiler:Just don't assume that her lightning powers are her only strength.]]
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* SuperReflexes: A major part of Naruto's taijutsu style is his incredible speed and reflexes. [[spoiler: His speed and reflexes become so great that in the Chunin Exam, it culminates in Naruto [[AwesomeMoments dodging every single strike from]] [[RapidFireFisticuffs Neji's 8 Trigrams 64 Palms from point blank]].]]
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* SuperReflexes: A major part of Naruto's taijutsu style is his incredible speed and reflexes. [[spoiler: His speed and reflexes They become so great that in [[spoiler:in the Chunin Exam, it culminates in Naruto [[AwesomeMoments dodging every single strike from]] [[RapidFireFisticuffs Neji's 8 Trigrams 64 Palms from Palms]] at point blank]].blank.]]
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* CrazyPrepared: Tenten carries around scrolls with all sorts of things sealed into them, including a huge mass of water.
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* AffectionateNickname: [[LadySwearsALot Tayuya]] calls Naruto "shithead"
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%% * ShirtlessScene: in the second part of the Exams, both Naruto and Sasuke end up taking off their shirts due to the heat. Sakura is... ''appreciative''.
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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Naruto, although we [[IntelligibleUnintelligible only hear his side of the conversation]]
* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Naruto, although we [[IntelligibleUnintelligible only hear his side of the conversation]]
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* VomitDiscretionShot: after the terrifying "ride" ending the second part of the Chunin Exam, Sasuke "puked off-camera"
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%% * ShirtlessScene: in the second part of the Exams, both Naruto and Sasuke end up taking off their shirts due to the heat. Sakura is... ''appreciative''.
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** Later on, [[spoiler:Samui]] is similarly sane; she only attacked Naruto because he surprised her and was a potential enemy, not because he walked in on her taking a shower
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** Later on, [[spoiler:Samui]] is similarly sane; she only attacked Naruto because he surprised her and was a potential enemy, not because he walked in on her taking a shower[[WaterfallShower shower]]
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** Later on, [[spoiler:Samui]] is similarly sane; she only attacked Naruto because he surprised her and was a potential enemy, not because he walked in on her taking a shower
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* MindControlMusic: Tayuya uses her flute in order to cast genjutsus on people.
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* MindControlMusic: Tayuya uses her flute in order to cast genjutsus genjutsu on people.
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Please see Not Self Explanatory. Also, please be polite. \"Rudeness is not cool\".
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%% Seriously, there is zero context NEEDED for this trope. Also, "taken for granite" MEANS that someone is turned into stone.
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* TakenForGranite: how Ishidate kills [[spoiler:Gato]]
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* TakenForGranite: how Ishidate kills [[spoiler:Gato]]
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* StunnedSilence: the reaction Kakuzu gets from the other Akatsuki members after telling them where Hidan is: [[spoiler:"Somewhere to the north. His opponent sent him packing with a technique that put him into low-level flight and sent him across the entire continent."]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: a dying Zabuza, to [[spoiler:Kakuzu]]. It didn't kill him, but it did remove him from the situation.
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* {{Badass Normal}}: The first major opponent that Naruto faces is Crow, a muggle assassin. He manages to evade the authorities and earn a unusually high bounty for someone without any ninja skills in a world where breathing fire from your mouth is common.
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* {{Badass Normal}}: BadassNormal: The first major opponent that Naruto faces is Crow, a muggle {{muggle}} assassin. He manages to evade the authorities and earn a unusually high bounty for someone without any ninja skills in a world where breathing fire from your mouth is common.
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* DoorStopper: This is the 2nd longest Naruto story on FanFiction.net, at over a million words as of April 2014.
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* DoorStopper: This is the 2nd longest Naruto story on FanFiction.Fanfiction.net, at over a million words as of April 2014.
* ExactlyWhatIAimedAt: Zabuza's water attack didn't miss, it [[spoiler:washed away Hidan's blood circle]]
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* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:Crow.
* HairTriggerAvalanche: one of these buries [[spoiler:Hidan]] after he yells for help while [[spoiler:dismembered and embedded in a mountain]]
* MegatonPunch: the result of Naruto's Jet Hand, especially as used on [[spoiler:Hidan]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Naruto is this to Gato. Everything was working out fine for the buisnessman, until Naruto just happened upon the oppressed country and started screwing things up.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Naruto is this to Gato. Everything was working out fine for the buisnessman, businessman, until Naruto just happened upon the oppressed country and started screwing things up.
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* AccidentalPervert: Naruto is surprised when [[spoiler:Haku]] doesn't attack him for walking in on her getting changed, as she recognizes it was just an accident
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* TelephonePolearm: Naruto attacks [[spoiler:Hidan]] by ''throwing a tree at him''
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: when the Kyuubi sounds worried and tells Naruto to stay away from [[spoiler:Hidan and Kakuzu]], Naruto ''listens''
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* EyeColourChange: Kajiki's eyes turn yellow and slitted when "possessed" by Orochimaru
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* RightManInTheWrongPlace: Naruto becomes this in the third chapter when he [[spoiler: saves an entire country from Gato's tyranny after getting accidentally knocked out and sent out of the village.]]
* RuleofCool: Many of the things Naruto does, he does precisely because it would look, sound, or seem cool in some way.
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* RightManInTheWrongPlace: Naruto becomes this in the third chapter when he [[spoiler: saves an entire country from Gato's tyranny tyranny]] after getting accidentally knocked out and sent out of the village.]]
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*RuleofCool: RuleOfCool: Many of the things Naruto does, he does precisely because it would look, sound, or seem cool in some way.
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* AdaptationalBadass: So many minor characters in canon end up becoming more badass in this fanfic. Specila note to Gato, who was considered a minor threat in the series and has now become one of the major [[BigBad Big Bads]].
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* AdaptationalBadass: So many minor characters in canon end up becoming more badass in this fanfic. Specila Special note to Gato, who was considered a minor threat in the series and has now become one of the major [[BigBad Big Bads]].
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* {{Handicapped Badass}}: It's discovered that Crow has so many injuries that he should have died years ago.
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* {{Handicapped Badass}}: It's discovered that Crow has so many injuries that he should have died years ago.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8833703/1/Drifting Drifting]]'' is a 'Naruto' fic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1168462/AlphaDelta1001 AlphaDelta1001]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8833703/1/Drifting Drifting]]'' is a 'Naruto' {{Manga/Naruto}} fic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1168462/AlphaDelta1001 AlphaDelta1001]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8833703/1/Drifting 'Drifting']] is a 'Naruto' fic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1168462/AlphaDelta1001 AlphaDelta1001]].
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