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* IntelligibleUnintelligible: Naruto is capable of understanding everything Swift-chan says, even though she's a bird.
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* ActionPet: Swift-chan, Naruto's sparring partner, is a bird world renown for their speed and agility.
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The story's summary is 'Naruto is many things; troublesome, wild, unpredictable, adventurous, untamable, unique. But there's a benefit to being wild and unpredictable; no one has the faintest idea what you're going to do next.' Naruto is a LOT more adventurous when he's younger and the decisions he makes changes the story in huge ways. It is also the second longest Naruto story on [[NotableFanfictionArchives FanFiction.net]]
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The story's summary is 'Naruto is many things; troublesome, wild, unpredictable, adventurous, untamable, unique. But there's a benefit to being wild and unpredictable; no one has the faintest idea what you're going to do next.' Naruto is a LOT more adventurous when he's younger and the decisions he makes changes the story in huge ways. It is also the second longest Naruto story on [[NotableFanfictionArchives FanFiction.net]]
net]]. The only one longer is ''[[FanFic/YetAgain Yet Again with a little extra help]]''.
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* ChickMagnet: Naruto has many girls who are attracted to him, usually with him [[BigDamnHeroes rescuing them]].
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* ChickMagnet: Naruto has many girls who are attracted to him, usually with him [[BigDamnHeroes [[RescueRomance rescuing them]].
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* DefeatingTheUndefeatable: [[spoiler: Naruto is the only genin to have ever defeated Tsubaki, although Samui cam pretty close to doing it.]]
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* DefeatingTheUndefeatable: [[spoiler: Naruto is the only genin to have ever defeated Tsubaki, although Samui cam came pretty close to doing it.]]
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** {{Badass Normal}}: The first major opponent that Naruto face, Crow. He manages to evade the authorities and earn a unusually high bounty for a normal assassin. In a world where breathing fire from your mouth is common.
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** {{Badass Normal}}: The first major opponent that Naruto face, faces, Crow. He manages to evade the authorities and earn a unusually high bounty for a normal assassin. In a world where breathing fire from your mouth is common.
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* ArtisticLiscensePhysics: During the Chunin exam, it's mentioned that the hot climate of the area prevents lift, keeping them from rigging up a glider. As one technique of gliding is moving from thermal to thermal to keep aloft, this is almost the exact opposite of how it works in reality.
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* ArtisticLiscensePhysics: ArtisticLicensePhysics: During the Chunin exam, it's mentioned that the hot climate of the area prevents lift, keeping them from rigging up a glider. As one technique of gliding is moving from thermal to thermal to keep aloft, this is almost the exact opposite of how it works in reality.
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* ArtisticLiscensePhysics: During the Chunin exam, it's mentioned that the hot climate of the area prevents lift, keeping them from rigging up a glider. As one technique of gliding is moving from thermal to thermal to keep aloft, this is almost the exact opposite of how it works in reality.
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superlative. It\'s not impossible for Naruto style ninja and the way it\'s written sounds like a superlative.
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* SuperReflexes: A major part of Naruto's taijutsu style is his incredible speed and reflexes. [[spoiler: His speed and reflexes become so great that in the Chunin Exam, it culminates in Naruto [[AwesomeMoments dodging every single strike from]] [[RapidFireFisticuffs Neji's 8 Trigrams 64 Palms]]. [[BeyondTheImpossible From point blank]].]]
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* SuperReflexes: A major part of Naruto's taijutsu style is his incredible speed and reflexes. [[spoiler: His speed and reflexes become so great that in the Chunin Exam, it culminates in Naruto [[AwesomeMoments dodging every single strike from]] [[RapidFireFisticuffs Neji's 8 Trigrams 64 Palms]]. [[BeyondTheImpossible From Palms from point blank]].]]
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No longer the longest anymore. That honor belongs to Yet Again, With a Little Extra Help
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The story's summary is 'Naruto is many things; troublesome, wild, unpredictable, adventurous, untamable, unique. But there's a benefit to being wild and unpredictable; no one has the faintest idea what you're going to do next.' Naruto is a LOT more adventurous when he's younger and the decisions he makes changes the story in huge ways. It is also the second longest Naruto story on [[NotableFanfictionArchives FanFiction.net]]
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yet again with a little extra help is the longest fanfic on the site with a million and a quater words
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* DoorStopper: Is THE longest Naruto story on FanFiction.net, at over 960,000 words as of April 2014.
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* DoorStopper: Is THE The 2nd longest Naruto story on FanFiction.net, at over 960,000 a million words as of April 2014.
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** Misora Amaya's looks and abilities are based on Uzumi from {{Sekirei}}.'
** Kiyoko's [[SuperpowerfulGenetics Kekkei Genkai]] is based on [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Greed]]
** Tsubaki's looks are based on Nami from {{OnePiece}} and her Kekkei Genkai is based on [[ShockAndAwe Eneru's]] from the same series.
** Kiyoko's [[SuperpowerfulGenetics Kekkei Genkai]] is based on [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Greed]]
** Tsubaki's looks are based on Nami from {{OnePiece}} and her Kekkei Genkai is based on [[ShockAndAwe Eneru's]] from the same series.
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** Misora Amaya's looks and abilities are based on Uzumi from {{Sekirei}}.'
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** Kiyoko's [[SuperpowerfulGenetics Kekkei Genkai]] is based on [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemistGreed]]
Greed's]] powers.
**Tsubaki's looks are Tsubaki appears to be a bit of a mishmash of various characters from {{OnePiece}}. Her general appearance is based on Nami from {{OnePiece}} and Nami, while her Kekkei Genkai is based on [[ShockAndAwe Eneru's]] Logia powers. Lastly, some of her move set taken from [[LightEmUp Admiral]] [[LightIsNotGood Kizaru]].
* ImpossibleThief: Early on when Naruto faced a trio of [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain female Chunin]] who had infiltrated thesame series.village, he somehow managed to steal all their underwear without taking off or damaging their clothes, or even them noticing until [[FunnyMoment he showed them his "loot"]].
** Kiyoko's [[SuperpowerfulGenetics Kekkei Genkai]] is based on [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist
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* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Not exactly a villain at the time, but Tsubaki seriously loses her composure that not only is Naruto able to NoSell her overpowered lightning attacks, but he can actually land solid hits on her too and negate her MadeOfAir abilities. What's more, when it becomes clear that Naruto is actually winning, she completely loses it.
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* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Not exactly a villain at the time, but Tsubaki seriously loses her composure that not only is Naruto able to NoSell her overpowered lightning attacks, but he can actually land solid hits on her too and negate her MadeOfAir abilities. What's more, when it becomes clear that Naruto is actually winning, she completely loses it.]]
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* TournamentArc: The Chunin Exams naturally. [[spoiler: Although with the difference being that all Five of the Great Shinobi Villages participate and the exams themselves take place in Yugakure instead of Konoha.]]
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* TournamentArc: The Chunin Exams naturally. [[spoiler: Although with the difference being that all Five of the Great Shinobi Villages participate and the exams themselves take place in Yugakure instead of Konoha.]]]]
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Not exactly a villain at the time, but Tsubaki seriously loses her composure that not only is Naruto able to NoSell her overpowered lightning attacks, but he can actually land solid hits on her too and negate her MadeOfAir abilities. What's more, when it becomes clear that Naruto is actually winning, she completely loses it.
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Not exactly a villain at the time, but Tsubaki seriously loses her composure that not only is Naruto able to NoSell her overpowered lightning attacks, but he can actually land solid hits on her too and negate her MadeOfAir abilities. What's more, when it becomes clear that Naruto is actually winning, she completely loses it.
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** Kiyoko's [[SuperpowerfulGenetics Kekkei Genkai]] is based on [[{{FullmetalAlchemist}} Greed]]
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* AscendedExtra: Virtually all of the filler/movie villains are working together and are given much more significance in the plot. To the point that as of this writing, they are a much greater threat than the Akatsuki.
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* BlowYouAway: Much of Naruto's fighting style incorporates his Wind element and special mention goes to his SignatureMove "Jet Hand", which at maximum power can send opponents flying across the continent with just a single touch.
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* DramaticWind: Naruto's "Eiyuu Kaze" (Hero Wind) jutsu is a joke technique he made to make himself look more badass before a fight. [[spoiler: It's later weaponized as he uses this technique to NoSell [[MomentOfAwesome all of Tsubaki's lightning attacks]].]]
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* ChickMagnet: Naruto has many girls who are attracted to him, usually with him [[BigDamnHeroes rescuing them]].
* DefeatingTheUndefeatable: [[spoiler: Naruto is the only genin to have ever defeated Tsubaki, although Samui cam pretty close to doing it.]]
* DefeatingTheUndefeatable: [[spoiler: Naruto is the only genin to have ever defeated Tsubaki, although Samui cam pretty close to doing it.]]
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* ChickMagnet: Naruto has many girls who are attracted to him, usually with him [[BigDamnHeroes rescuing them]].
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* ChickMagnet: Naruto has many girls who {{Expy}}: Many of the [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] are attracted to him, usually actually these:
** Misora Amaya's looks and abilities are based on Uzumi from {{Sekirei}}.'
** Kiyoko's [[SuperpowerfulGenetics Kekkei Genkai]] is based on [[{{FullmetalAlchemist}} Greed]]
** Tsubaki's looks are based on Nami from {{OnePiece}} and her Kekkei Genkai is based on [[ShockAndAwe Eneru's]] from the same series.
* TournamentArc: The Chunin Exams naturally. [[spoiler: Although withhim [[BigDamnHeroes rescuing them]].the difference being that all Five of the Great Shinobi Villages participate and the exams themselves take place in Yugakure instead of Konoha.]]
** Misora Amaya's looks and abilities are based on Uzumi from {{Sekirei}}.'
** Kiyoko's [[SuperpowerfulGenetics Kekkei Genkai]] is based on [[{{FullmetalAlchemist}} Greed]]
** Tsubaki's looks are based on Nami from {{OnePiece}} and her Kekkei Genkai is based on [[ShockAndAwe Eneru's]] from the same series.
* TournamentArc: The Chunin Exams naturally. [[spoiler: Although with
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* DoorStopper: Is THE longest Naruto story on FanFiction.net, at over 960,000 words as of April 2014.
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* DoorStopper: Is THE longest Naruto story on FanFiction.net, at over 960,000 words as of April 2014.2014.
* ChickMagnet: Naruto has many girls who are attracted to him, usually with him [[BigDamnHeroes rescuing them]].
* ChickMagnet: Naruto has many girls who are attracted to him, usually with him [[BigDamnHeroes rescuing them]].
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** {{Badass Normal}}: The OC, Crow. He manages to evade the authorities in a world where breathing fire from your mouth is common with nothing but his swordsmanship skills.
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** {{Badass Normal}}: The OC, first major opponent that Naruto face, Crow. He manages to evade the authorities in and earn a unusually high bounty for a normal assassin. In a world where breathing fire from your mouth is common with nothing but his swordsmanship skills.common.
** {{Handicapped Badass}}: It's discovered that Crow has so many injuries that he should have died years ago.
** {{Handicapped Badass}}: It's discovered that Crow has so many injuries that he should have died years ago.
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* ActionGirl: Most of the Kunoichi that are attracted to [[ChickMagnet Naruto]]. Also the female OC, Misora Amaya.
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* ActionGirl: Most of the Kunoichi that are attracted to [[ChickMagnet Naruto]]. Also the female OC, Misora Amaya.Amaya, she's good enough to be considered for a spot in the Akatsuki.
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* DoorStopper: Is the longest story on FanFiction.net, at over 960,000 words as of April 2014.
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* DoorStopper: Is the THE longest Naruto story on FanFiction.net, at over 960,000 words as of April 2014.
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** {{Badass Normal}}: The OC, Crow. He manages to evade the authorities in a world where breathing fire from your mouth is common with nothing but his swordsmanship skills.
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** {{Badass Normal}}: The OC, Crow. He manages to evade the authorities in a world where breathing fire from your mouth is common with nothing but his swordsmanship skills.skills.
* DoorStopper: Is the longest story on FanFiction.net, at over 960,000 words as of April 2014.
* DoorStopper: Is the longest story on FanFiction.net, at over 960,000 words as of April 2014.
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* ActionGirl: Most of the Kunoichi that are attracted to [[ChickMagnet Naruto]]. Also the female OC, Misora Amaya.
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* {{Badass}}: Naruto, given the foes he faces... [[WorldOfBadass It's kind of a requirement.]]
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* {{Badass}}: Naruto, given the foes he faces... [[WorldOfBadass It's kind of a requirement.]]]]
** {{Badass Normal}}: The OC, Crow. He manages to evade the authorities in a world where breathing fire from your mouth is common with nothing but his swordsmanship skills.
** {{Badass Normal}}: The OC, Crow. He manages to evade the authorities in a world where breathing fire from your mouth is common with nothing but his swordsmanship skills.
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The story's summary is 'Naruto is many things; troublesome, wild, unpredictable, adventurous, untamable, unique. But there's a benefit to being wild and unpredictable; no one has the faintest idea what you're going to do next.' Naruto is a LOT more adventurous when he's younger and the decisions he makes changes the story in huge ways. It is also the longest Naruto story on [[NotableFanfictionArchives FanFiction.net]]
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The story's summary is 'Naruto is many things; troublesome, wild, unpredictable, adventurous, untamable, unique. But there's a benefit to being wild and unpredictable; no one has the faintest idea what you're going to do next.' Naruto is a LOT more adventurous when he's younger and the decisions he makes changes the story in huge ways. It is also the longest Naruto story on [[NotableFanfictionArchives FanFiction.net]]net]]
!! List of tropes appearing in Drifting
* {{Badass}}: Naruto, given the foes he faces... [[WorldOfBadass It's kind of a requirement.]]
!! List of tropes appearing in Drifting
* {{Badass}}: Naruto, given the foes he faces... [[WorldOfBadass It's kind of a requirement.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8833703/1/Drifting 'Drifting']] is a 'Naruto' fic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1168462/AlphaDelta1001 AlphaDelta1001]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8833703/1/Drifting 'Drifting']] is a 'Naruto' fic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1168462/AlphaDelta1001 AlphaDelta1001]].AlphaDelta1001]].
The story's summary is 'Naruto is many things; troublesome, wild, unpredictable, adventurous, untamable, unique. But there's a benefit to being wild and unpredictable; no one has the faintest idea what you're going to do next.' Naruto is a LOT more adventurous when he's younger and the decisions he makes changes the story in huge ways. It is also the longest Naruto story on [[NotableFanfictionArchives FanFiction.net]]
The story's summary is 'Naruto is many things; troublesome, wild, unpredictable, adventurous, untamable, unique. But there's a benefit to being wild and unpredictable; no one has the faintest idea what you're going to do next.' Naruto is a LOT more adventurous when he's younger and the decisions he makes changes the story in huge ways. It is also the longest Naruto story on [[NotableFanfictionArchives FanFiction.net]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8833703/1/Drifting 'Drifting']] is a 'Naruto' fic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1168462/AlphaDelta1001 AlphaDelta1001]].