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->''"[L]ooks like we’ve made quite the pair: a shadowy vigilante and a highly unorthodox archaeologist, who would have thought? H.U.R.R.I.C.A.N.E. is going down!."''
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->''"[L]ooks like we’ve made quite the pair: a shadowy vigilante and a highly unorthodox archaeologist, who would have thought? H.U.R.R.I.C.A.N.E. is going down!."''
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Mare-Do-Well''', Chapter 12
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->''"[L]ooks like we’ve made quite the pair: a shadowy vigilante and a highly unorthodox archaeologist, who would have thought? H.U.R.R.I.C.A.N.E. is going down!."''
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Daring Do & the Mysterious Mare Do Well: Canterlot Crisis'' is a story by Cannon Fodder.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/38921/daring-do-the-mysterious-mare-do-well-canterlot-crisis Daring Do & the Mysterious Mare Do Well: Canterlot Crisis'' Crisis]]'' is a story by Cannon Fodder.
Fodder. As the name states, this features the adventurer Daring Do and the superhero/vigilante Mysterious Mare Do Well paring up to fight an evil organization.
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This story is in progress, and can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/38921/daring-do-the-mysterious-mare-do-well-canterlot-crisis here]].
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* YouHaveFailledMe: The HURRICANE syndicate makes it clear that they kill anybody who fails their objective
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* YouHaveFailledMe: YouHaveFailedMe: The HURRICANE syndicate makes it clear that they will kill anybody who fails their objective
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Daring Do and & the Mysterious Mare Do Well: Canterlot Crisis'' is a story by Cannon Fodder.
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* Foreshadowing:
* XMeetsY: As one commenter stated on the Fimfiction, the story is like Batman and Indiana Jones teaming up to defeat SPECTRE. (In a good way of course)
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* YouHaveFailledMe: The HURRICANE syndicate makes it clear that they kill anybody who fails their objective
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It is written by Cannon Fodder
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* WhereDoesHeGetAllThoseWonderfulToys
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* MysteriousPast: The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well
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* ActionPrologueActionPrologue: The story begins with Mare-Do-Well racing to Union Jack's rendezvous point in Manehatten.
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* CrimefightingWithCash: Mare-Do-Well is loaded with cash, what with her high-tech suit, a car, a five star underground lair and a computer to boot. Daring Do believes she's more rich than Fancy Pants himself.
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* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: Mare-Do-Well tells Daring Do as this being the main resaon why she cannot reveal her identity.
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* EyeScream
EyeScream: Mare-Do-Well spits chemical in Union Jack's eyes at the beginning of the story, which results in Union Jack getting an eyepatch for the rest of the story.
* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: Mare-Do-Well tells Daring Do as this being the mainresaon reason why she cannot reveal her identity.
* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: Mare-Do-Well tells Daring Do as this being the main
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** In Chapter 11, it is revealed that[[spoiler:somepony once got mixed up with Mare-Do-Well's work, like Daring Do, but ends up getting killed in the process.]]
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** In Chapter 11, it is revealed that[[spoiler:somepony that [[spoiler:somepony once got mixed up with Mare-Do-Well's work, like Daring Do, but ends up getting killed in the process.]]
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* StubbornMule: Generally both Daring DO and Mare-Do-Well are this, but especially Mare-Do-Well. Something which annoys Daring Do at the times when its clear that that Mare-Do-Well is clearly not well.
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* EvilCounterpart: Dr. Giovanni D'Angelo is this to Daring Do.
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* ShoutOut: When Givonni gives Daring Do his NotSoDifferent speech, he lifts a line from Rene Belloc of Raiders of the Lost Ark. Shoot, he technically ''is'' Rene.
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* ElaborateUndergroundBase: Mare-Do-Well's HomeBase is this. And it definitely lives up to its elaborate name. The entrance is located one mile below Canterlot, hidden. You then take an elevator down below to the most extravagant suite you have ever seen. As seen in Chapter 2 and Chapter 5, it contains hite metallic walls, an emerald carpeting, a desk for solving crime, a wall of gadgets, a wall that has a computer behind it, a dark room, a elaborate kitchen, amongst under things. The only thing missing in the base is the [[SuperheroTrophyShelf trophy shelf]].
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* ElaborateUndergroundBase: Mare-Do-Well's HomeBase is this. And it definitely lives up to its elaborate name. The entrance is located one mile below Canterlot, hidden. You then take an elevator down below to the most extravagant suite you have ever seen. As seen in Chapter 2 and Chapter 5, it contains hite white metallic walls, an emerald carpeting, a desk for solving crime, a wall of gadgets, a wall that has a computer behind it, a dark room, a elaborate kitchen, amongst under things. The only thing missing in the base is the [[SuperheroTrophyShelf trophy shelf]].
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* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: Mare-Do-Well tells Daring Do as this being the main resaon why she cannot reveal her identity.
-->'''Mare-Do-Well''': I already told you, I can't reveal my identity. It may compromise others that I have worked with. My enemies are still out there, trying to find me. And if they know who I communicate with, they'll likely go through them to get to me. Who knows, they could be listening to me right now.
-->'''Mare-Do-Well''': I already told you, I can't reveal my identity. It may compromise others that I have worked with. My enemies are still out there, trying to find me. And if they know who I communicate with, they'll likely go through them to get to me. Who knows, they could be listening to me right now.
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* EvilBrit: Union Jack, who was born in Trottingham.
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*YouWatchTooMuchX: Daring Do tells Mare-Do-Well that she reads too much comic books, as a response to her . Mare-Do-Well is amused.
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* ElaborateUndergroundBase: Mare-Do-Well's HomeBase is this. And it definitely lives up to its elaborate name. The entrance is located one mile below Canterlot, hidden. You then take an elevator down below to the most extravagant suite you have ever seen. As seen in Chapter 2 and Chapter 5, it contains hite metallic walls, an emerald carpeting, a desk for solving crime, a wall of gadgets, a wall that has a computer behind it, a dark room, a elaborate kitchen, amongst under things. The only thing missing in the base is the [[SuperheroTrophyShelf trophy shelf]].
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* ElaborateUndergroundBaseElaborateUndergroundBase: Mare-Do-Well's HomeBase is this. And it definitely lives up to its elaborate name. The only thing missing in the base is the [[SuperheroTrophyShelf trophy shelf]].
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* NamesToRunFromReallyFast: The criminal syndicate HURRICANE and High Roller, the original, ruthless leader of the group (though since he is dead, he's not the one you have to worry about).
* NotSoDifferent: When they first meet, Daring Do begins to see how similar Mare-Do-Well and herself really are.
* NotSoDifferent: When they first meet, Daring Do begins to see how similar Mare-Do-Well and herself really are.
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* NamesToRunFromReallyFast: The criminal syndicate HURRICANE H.U.R.R.I.C.A.N.E. and High Roller, the original, ruthless leader of the group (though since he is dead, he's not the one you have to worry about).
* NotSoDifferent:When As they first meet, get to know each other better, Daring Do begins to see how similar and Mare-Do-Well and herself really are.begin to realize the similarities between each other.
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* ThePowerofFreiendship: Daring Do shares Mare-Do-Well the friendship.
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* ThouShaltNotSkill: Subverted, both Daring Do and Mare-Do-Well are willing to kill if necessary.
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* CoolCar: Or rather, a cool stagecoach, courtesy of the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well. It looks like your typical stagecoach (mysteriously without any horses), but on the inside, it is an advanced vehicle that has a computer, and is truly [[spoiler: a car that's both computer controlled and manually controled
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* CoolCar: Or rather, a cool stagecoach, courtesy of the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well. It looks like your typical stagecoach (mysteriously without any horses), but on the inside, it is an advanced vehicle that has a computer, and is truly [[spoiler: a car that's both computer controlled and manually controledcontrolled.]]
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* IWorkAlone: Besides the occasional partenership of associates (at leas in Daring Do's case, and implied in Mare-Do-Well's case) both Daring Do and the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well's jobs aren't particularly social, though Mare-Do-Well upholds this troupe the most. However, ever since her investigations into the dangerous HURRICANE, and her team-up with Daring Do, has caused her to consider getting a partner.
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* IWorkAlone: Besides the occasional partenership partnership of associates (at leas in Daring Do's case, and implied in Mare-Do-Well's case) both Daring Do and the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well's jobs aren't particularly social, though Mare-Do-Well upholds this troupe the most. However, ever since her investigations into the dangerous HURRICANE, and her team-up with Daring Do, has caused her to consider getting a partner.
** In Chapter 11, it is revealed that[[spoiler:somepony once got mixed up with Mare-Do-Well's work, like Daring Do, but ends up getting killed in the process.]]
** In Chapter 11, it is revealed that[[spoiler:somepony once got mixed up with Mare-Do-Well's work, like Daring Do, but ends up getting killed in the process.]]
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* CoolCar: Or rather, a cool stagecoac, stagecoach, courtesy of the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well. It looks like your typical stagecoach (mysteriously without any horses), but on the inside, it is an advanced vehicle that has a computer. computer, and is truly [[spoiler: a car that's both computer controlled and manually controled
* DeadpanSnarker: Mysterious Mare-Do-Well
* IWorkAlone: Besides the occasional partenership of associates (at leas in Daring Do's case, and implied in Mare-Do-Well's case) both Daring Do and the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well's jobs aren't particularly social, though Mare-Do-Well upholds this troupe the most. However, ever since her investigations into the dangerous HURRICANE, and her team-up with Daring Do, has caused her to consider getting a partner.
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* IWorkAlone: Besides the occasional partenership of associates (at leas in Daring Do's case, and implied in Mare-Do-Well's case) both Daring Do and the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well's jobs aren't particularly social, though Mare-Do-Well upholds this troupe the most. However, ever since her investigations into the dangerous HURRICANE, and her team-up with Daring Do, has caused her to consider getting a partner.
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* ContinuityNod: The story makesmakes reference to the event when Ponyville was attacked by parasprites in "Swarm of the Century".
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After the kidnapping of Prince Blueblood, and the lost of a friend,
It is written by Cannon Fodder
This story is in progress, and can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/38921/daring-do-the-mysterious-mare-do-well-canterlot-crisis here]].
!!This work contains examples of the following tropes:
*ContinuityNod: The story makes
*NamesToRunFromReallyFast: The criminal syndicate HURRICANE and High Roller, the original, ruthless leader of the group (though since he is dead, he's not the one you have to worry about).
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It is written by Cannon Fodder
This story is in progress, and can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/38921/daring-do-the-mysterious-mare-do-well-canterlot-crisis here]].
!!This work contains examples of the following tropes:
*ContinuityNod: The story makes
*NamesToRunFromReallyFast: The criminal syndicate HURRICANE and High Roller, the original, ruthless leader of the group (though since he is dead, he's not the one you have to worry about).
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