History FanFic / ChuninExamDay

7th Oct '15 2:50:01 PM Pastykake
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Well, the short version would be to say it's [[{{PartiallyKissedHero}} PKH]] for Manga/{{Naruto}}, and to a large extent this is true, but it ''does'' have its own original plot points, so we'll point them out here.

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Well, the short version would be to say it's [[{{PartiallyKissedHero}} PKH]] ''[[FanFic/PartiallyKissedHero PKH]]'' for Manga/{{Naruto}}, ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', and to a large extent this is true, but it ''does'' have its own original plot points, so we'll point them out here.



WARNING: This fic, like [=PKH=], has a '''sizable''' LoveItOrHateIt reputation, with a large Fandom and Hatedom. Please keep discussion to discussion page. Please keep YMMV to its page.

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WARNING: This fic, like [=PKH=], ''[=PKH=]'', has a '''sizable''' LoveItOrHateIt reputation, with a large Fandom and Hatedom. Please keep discussion to discussion page. Please keep YMMV to its page.



* AuthorAppeal: As PartiallyKissedHero, but instead of shiny things and eternal beauty (at first) making them dresses, baking them food, giving them awesome (classified as S-rank in the fic itself) massages complete with full spa treatment and music, etc, plus the sheer number of women.

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* AuthorAppeal: As PartiallyKissedHero, with ''Partially Kissed Hero'', but instead of shiny things and eternal beauty (at first) first), making them dresses, baking them food, giving them awesome (classified as S-rank in the fic itself) massages complete with full spa treatment and music, etc, plus the sheer number of women.



** And then it becomes quite good after [[spoiler:Naruto learns a more about chakra control, making him just as efficient with its usage while increasing his reserves massively, and it becomes a bloodline that enabled his wives to keep their memories of these loops]].
* BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood, HeelFaceBrainwashing, MoreThanMindControl: Most girls are turned into harem members by being given massages. Classified in-universe as S-rank. They literally beg to marry him, and mean it. Including previously enemies. Plus Naruto massage+"loved" Tsunade's hemophobia away. Even the ones who weren't converted by massages seem to have suffered this, since Tenten and Temari barely knew Naruto, ten days tops, yet agreed to marry him after the Forest of Death. In the same loop. While he married Hinata too. There's a point where being good at snogging draws the line.

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** And It then it becomes quite good after [[spoiler:Naruto learns a more about chakra control, making him just as efficient with its usage while increasing his reserves massively, and it becomes a bloodline that enabled enables his wives to keep their memories of these loops]].
* BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood, HeelFaceBrainwashing, MoreThanMindControl: Most girls are turned into harem members by being given massages. Classified massages, classified in-universe as S-rank."S-rank massages". They literally beg to marry him, and mean it. Including previously This includes prior enemies. Plus Plus, Naruto massage+"loved" massages and "loves" Tsunade's hemophobia away. Even the ones who weren't aren't converted by massages seem to have suffered suffer this, since Tenten and Temari have barely knew Naruto, known Naruto for ten days tops, tops yet agreed agree to marry him after the Forest of Death. In the same loop. While he married Hinata marries Hinata, too. There's a point where being good at snogging draws the line.



* CursedWithAwesome: The loops themselves. Initially, they have some of the same terror as in more conventional usages, such as ''Film/GroundhogDay'' itself, with Naruto becoming lonely and borderline psychotic. Later he finds out how to bring friends in on the loops, and starts using the time involved to power up in every possible way, including creating a new kekkai genkai with the Kyuubi's help and starting a clan (based around a [[{{Polyamory}} harem]]) to propagate it.

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* CursedWithAwesome: The loops loops, themselves. Initially, they have some of the same terror as in more conventional usages, such as ''Film/GroundhogDay'' itself, with Naruto becoming lonely and borderline psychotic. Later Later, he finds out how to bring friends in on the loops, and starts using the time involved to power up in every possible way, including creating a new kekkai kekkei genkai with the Kyuubi's help and starting a clan (based around a [[{{Polyamory}} harem]]) to propagate it.



** After the loop is complete we get to see how cheap it had become. Haku had just done an extremely risky summoning contract creation when she is told that the loops are over. She nearly passes out at the fact that she could have permanently died.

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** After the loop is complete we get to see how cheap it had has become. Haku had has just done an extremely risky summoning contract creation when she is told that the loops are over. She nearly passes out at the fact that she could have permanently died.



* JackOfAllTrades: Slight subversion, given that he has infinite time in which to hone them, but Naruto learns quite a few skills, including: Tailoring, Cooking, Leatherworking, Metallurgy, and various sundry others.

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* JackOfAllTrades: Slight subversion, PlayedWith, given that he has infinite time in which to hone them, but Naruto learns quite a few skills, including: Tailoring, Cooking, Leatherworking, Metallurgy, and various sundry others.



* HaremNanny: [[spoiler:Kurenai, and later Yugao]]. Both of them lost the job after joining it.
* OhCrap: [[spoiler:The reaction of the entire Kitsune Clan when Sarutobi signs Naruto into Chuunin status, ending the loops. ''This was on one of their "We just don't give a shit" be-as-insane-as-possible loops.'']]
* OlderThanTheyLook: Naruto, who by now has experienced ''centuries'' worth of resets. The rest of the Kitsune clan as well.

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* HaremNanny: [[spoiler:Kurenai, and later Yugao]]. Both of them lost lose the job after joining it.
the harem.
* OhCrap: [[spoiler:The The reaction of the entire Kitsune Clan when Sarutobi [[spoiler:Sarutobi signs Naruto into Chuunin status, ending the loops. ''This was on one of their "We just don't give a shit" be-as-insane-as-possible loops.'']]
* OlderThanTheyLook: Naruto, who by now has experienced ''centuries'' worth of resets. The rest of the Kitsune clan as well.
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* Really700YearsOld: Naruto, who by the end has experienced centuries' worth of resets. The rest of the Kitsune clan as well.



* RuleOfFunny: The apparent justification for why Naruto can make any female, including several sworn and powerful enemies who one would think would be somewhat hardened against brainwashing/interrogation techniques, defect and completely change loyalty... by giving them a massage. He has been in the loop for some untold number of years, and spent quite some of that time early on using his brute-force usual approach to, well, everything to get really really good at romance, but it's still really ridiculous.

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* RuleOfFunny: The apparent justification for why Naruto can make any female, female character, including several sworn and powerful enemies who whom one would think would be somewhat hardened against brainwashing/interrogation techniques, defect and completely change loyalty... by giving them a massage. He has been in the loop for some untold number of years, and spent quite some of that time early on using his brute-force usual approach to, well, everything to get really really, really good at romance, but it's still really ridiculous.



* TakeThat: One to J. K. Rowling with the description of the Rowling bloodline power, reflecting Lionheart's [[PartiallyKissedHero well-known view]] of the moral implications of the later Harry Potter books. [[spoiler: Specifically, the Rowling kekkai genkai is that anyone within audio range of the Rowling becomes confused, friend becoming foe and vice versa. [[BlessedWithSuck Including the Rowling]] [[GenderRestrictedAbility herself]].]]
** Don't forget the Kishimoto clan, which destroy anything they touch.
* VillainProtagonist: YMMV, given that none of his victims remember anything (Though that may make it even worse), but Naruto and his girls, among other unmentioned acts: Steal both Sasuke and Kakashi's sharingan eyes and spread a rumor that the Uchiha clan were a bunch of coprophiles.
** Morality always gets weird in a GroundhogDayLoop; it is arguable the effect of the looping on the actual morality of the act, since there are no consequences, but more than that, it's entirely possible (in fact, probably inevitable) for the one in the loop to start thinking oddly about morality, because they repeatedly have it pointed out to them that [[FridgeHorror none of their actions can have any lasting consequences]]. On the other hand, there's a limited amount of bad behavior an unusual approach to morality can excuse.
* WeakButSkilled: Ebisu is famous for being the only ninja ever to complete an A-rank mission using only the basic three. Unfortunately the only time he's in a fight, he's ambushed by [[BigBad Orochimaru]], making this an InformedAbility.
* YouCanNotFightFate: Used as a joke on Neji when [[spoiler:Kitsune Clan changed the first part of the exam and got him thrown out because "it is not his destiny to become chuunin"]]. Also doubles as an example of CrossesTheLineTwice.

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* TakeThat: TakeThat:
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One to J. K. Rowling Creator/JKRowling with the description of the Rowling bloodline power, reflecting Lionheart's [[PartiallyKissedHero [[FanFic/PartiallyKissedHero well-known view]] of the moral implications of the later Harry Potter ''Harry Potter'' books. [[spoiler: Specifically, [[spoiler:Specifically, the Rowling kekkai genkai is that anyone within audio range of the Rowling becomes confused, friend becoming foe and vice versa. [[BlessedWithSuck Including the Rowling]] [[GenderRestrictedAbility herself]].]]
** Don't forget There's also the Kishimoto clan, which who destroy anything they touch.
* %%* VillainProtagonist: YMMV, given that none of his victims remember anything (Though (though that may make it even worse), but Naruto and his girls, among other unmentioned acts: Steal acts, steal both Sasuke and Kakashi's sharingan eyes and spread a rumor that the Uchiha clan were a bunch of coprophiles.
** %%** Morality always gets weird in a GroundhogDayLoop; it is arguable the effect of the looping on the actual morality of the act, since there are no consequences, but more than that, it's entirely possible (in fact, probably inevitable) for the one in the loop to start thinking oddly about morality, because they repeatedly have it pointed out to them that [[FridgeHorror none of their actions can have any lasting consequences]]. On the other hand, there's a limited amount of bad behavior an unusual approach to morality can excuse.
* WeakButSkilled: Ebisu is famous for being the only ninja ever to complete an A-rank mission using only the Leaf ninja academy's basic three. Unfortunately three ninjutsu. Unfortunately, the only time he's in a fight, fight he's ambushed by [[BigBad Orochimaru]], making this an InformedAbility.
InformedTrope.
* YouCanNotFightFate: YouCannotFightFate: Used as a joke on Neji when [[spoiler:Kitsune Clan changed [[spoiler:the Kitsune clan change the first part of the exam and got get him thrown out because "it is not his destiny to become chuunin"]]. Also doubles as an example of CrossesTheLineTwice.
28th Mar '15 9:09:12 AM melvin89
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* BlackComedyRape: Chapter 35 involves a number of nasty things happening to Sasuke. One of which involves Naruto coercing him under threat of death to "play" with himself in public. [[DudeNotFunny The whole thing boils down to sexually humiliating a twelve year old boy. The author's note indicates that we are supposed to find this funny. ]]
12th Mar '15 7:05:12 PM lupine123
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* BlackComedyRape: Chapter 35 involves a number of nasty things happening to Sasuke. One of which involves Naruto coercing him under threat of death to "play" with himself in public. [[DudeNotFunny The whole thing boils down to sexually humiliating a twelve year old boy in public. The author's note indicates that we are supposed to find this funny. ]]

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* BlackComedyRape: Chapter 35 involves a number of nasty things happening to Sasuke. One of which involves Naruto coercing him under threat of death to "play" with himself in public. [[DudeNotFunny The whole thing boils down to sexually humiliating a twelve year old boy in public.boy. The author's note indicates that we are supposed to find this funny. ]]
12th Mar '15 7:04:17 PM lupine123
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* AuthorTract: The whole fic is underpinned by a rage-driven assassination of Kishimoto's plot, characters the author didn't like, Kishimoto's reasoning, et cetera, et cetera.



* AuthorTract: The whole fic is underpinned by a rage-driven assassination of Kishimoto's plot, characters the author didn't like, Kishimoto's reasoning, et cetera, et cetera.
12th Mar '15 7:03:26 PM lupine123
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* BlackComedyRape: Chapter 35 involves a number of nasty things happening to Sasuke. One of which involves Naruto coercing him under threat of death to "play" with himself in public. [[DudeNotFunny The whole thing boils down to sexually humiliating a twelve year old boy in public. The author's note indicates that we are supposed to find this funny. ]]
24th Apr '14 8:28:38 AM rmcmains
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** Don't forget the Kishimoto clan, which destroy anything they touch.
22nd Apr '14 2:47:34 PM LongLiveHumour
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Well, the short version would be to say it's [[{{PartiallyKissedHero}} PKH]] for {{Naruto}}, and to a large extent this is true, but it ''does'' have its own original plot points, so we'll point them out here.

Synopsis: Naruto dies during the the sand/sound invasion. He wakes up in bed, only to discover that he has gone back in time to the start of the chunin exams. He soon figures out he's stuck in a groundhog day loop, and begins to apply this fact to [[PeggySue make himself smarter]] and improve his chakra control, among other things...

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Well, the short version would be to say it's [[{{PartiallyKissedHero}} PKH]] for {{Naruto}}, Manga/{{Naruto}}, and to a large extent this is true, but it ''does'' have its own original plot points, so we'll point them out here.

Synopsis: Naruto dies during the the sand/sound Sand/Sound invasion. He wakes up in bed, only to discover that he has gone back in time to the start of the chunin exams. He soon figures out he's stuck in a groundhog day loop, and begins to apply this fact to [[PeggySue make himself smarter]] and improve his chakra control, among other things...
13th Apr '14 3:43:56 AM tommy7358
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19th Jan '14 2:09:22 PM ChaosKnux
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* OhCrap: [[spoiler:The reaction of the entire Kitsune Clan when Sarutobi signs Naruto into Chuunin status, ending the loops. ''This was on one of their "We just don't give a shit" be-as-insane-as-possible loops.''

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* OhCrap: [[spoiler:The reaction of the entire Kitsune Clan when Sarutobi signs Naruto into Chuunin status, ending the loops. ''This was on one of their "We just don't give a shit" be-as-insane-as-possible loops.'''']]
19th Jan '14 2:09:07 PM ChaosKnux
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* OhCrap: [[spoiler:The reaction of the entire Kitsune Clan when Sarutobi signs Naruto into Chuunin status, ending the loops. ''This was on one of their "We just don't give a shit" be-as-insane-as-possible loops.''
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