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** Thomas shows how much more level headed he is the story by [[spoiler: allowing all six of the foreign agents to leave in peace rather then execute them for their help in preventing two WMDs from being used on his Capital.]]

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** Thomas shows how much more level headed he is the story by [[spoiler: allowing all six of the foreign agents to leave in peace rather then execute them for their help in preventing two WMDs [=WMDs=] from being used on his Capital.]]
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* MercyKill: Done to some [[ManOnFire Men On Fire.]] during the [[spoiler: [=ComStar=] coup.]]

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* %%* MercyKill: Done to some [[ManOnFire Men On Fire.]] men on fire]] during the [[spoiler: [=ComStar=] coup.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: The Dropship Titan, only designed to work in Deep Space, deploying into an atmosphere to stop a nuclear weapon from being launched at a Medical center. They knew they would die doing so and did it anyway.]]
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: Phil repeatedly laments the fact that he's just a data analyst. The closest he gets to action before he had to get involved in the Data Core Heist was most likely jogging to catch a taxi.


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** [[spoiler: Averted at the last second as Maxwell had six blank data cores ready to go so that no one had to backstab anyone else to get a copy.]]


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** Thomas shows how much more level headed he is the story by [[spoiler: allowing all six of the foreign agents to leave in peace rather then execute them for their help in preventing two WMDs from being used on his Capital.]]


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* SoProudOfYou: Thomas to his son Edward when [[spoiler: Edward bankrupts himself to personally pay the ransom of all the Davion Prisoners of War rather then allow them to be mistreated.]]
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* TrappedByGamblingDebts: How [[spoiler: [=SAFE=} managed to get plans to the Taurian Research lab that the (fake) Data Core is stored. A contractor that made the escape tunnel for it kept plans and wracked up gambling debts to some legbreakers. [=SAFE=] paid off his debts in returns for the blueprints he shouldn't have kept.]]

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* TrappedByGamblingDebts: How [[spoiler: [=SAFE=} [=SAFE=] managed to get plans to the Taurian Research lab that the (fake) Data Core is stored. A contractor that made the escape tunnel for it kept plans and wracked up gambling debts to some legbreakers. [=SAFE=] paid off his debts in returns for the blueprints he shouldn't have kept.]]

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* RunningGag: The jokes about SAFE's incompetence.

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* RunningGag: The jokes about SAFE's incompetence. [[spoiler: Which changes to "SAFE isn’t always incompetent" when Maxwell manages to pull something off.]]


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* TrappedByGamblingDebts: How [[spoiler: [=SAFE=} managed to get plans to the Taurian Research lab that the (fake) Data Core is stored. A contractor that made the escape tunnel for it kept plans and wracked up gambling debts to some legbreakers. [=SAFE=] paid off his debts in returns for the blueprints he shouldn't have kept.]]
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** [[spoiler: Vesar Kristofur's rant to the First Circuit about the Clan might have been true when Clan Wolverine fled, but is completely ignorant of both the Warden Faction that had since formed among the Clans, and of Clan Diamond Shark's and Clan Ghost Bear's treatment of non Warrior Caste members.]]

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** Before the revised chapters [[spoiler: Vesar Kristofur's rant to the First Circuit about the Clan might have been true when Clan Wolverine fled, but is completely ignorant of both the Warden Faction that had since formed among the Clans, and of Clan Diamond Shark's and Clan Ghost Bear's treatment of non Warrior Caste members.]]
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: [[spoiler: Word of Blake or at least what would become the Jihad, along with The Blood show up much earlier.]]
** And with that [[spoiler: The Clans are brought to the attention of [=ComStar=] nearly 25 years before the Inner Sphere learns of them in canon.]]

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: [[spoiler: Word of Blake or at least what would become the Jihad, along with The Blood show up much earlier.]]
** And with that Before the revision [[spoiler: The Clans are brought to the attention of [=ComStar=] nearly 25 years before the Inner Sphere learns of them in canon.]]



* WrittenByTheWinners: [[spoiler: Vesar Kristofur history lecture about The Clans is heavily tainted by the hatred and resentment that the Clan Wolverine survivors have for them.]]

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* WrittenByTheWinners: [[spoiler: Vesar Kristofur history lecture about The Clans is heavily tainted by the hatred and resentment that the Clan Wolverine survivors have for them.]]]]. At least before the revision changed his speech.

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** Victor Li [[spoiler: tips off Phil Sheridan that the Death Commandos were going to nuke the University where the (unknown to them) decoy Data Core is being held.]] To go against his own government, even passively is a death sentence in the Capellan Confederation if ever found out.

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** Victor Li [[spoiler: tips off Phil Sheridan that the Death Commandos were going to nuke the University where the (unknown to them) decoy Data Core is being held.]] He then joins the Enemy Mine scenario amongst all the Foreign intelligence agents to stop it]] To go against his one's own government, even passively passively, is a death sentence in the Capellan Confederation if ever found out.Confederation.



* ImproperlyParanoid: [[spoiler: McCarron's Armored Calvary expected sabotage and managed to get the codes for Mech's looted directly from the factory. However they didn't expect a second lock out code, and no one has chemical weapon detectors for non-lethal chemicals. Their Mech Warriors can't pilot as they have full body irritation from weaponized and aerosolized poison ivy.]]

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* ImproperlyParanoid: [[spoiler: McCarron's Armored Calvary expected sabotage and managed to get the codes for Mech's looted directly from the factory. However they didn't expect a second lock out code, and no one has chemical weapon detectors for non-lethal chemicals. Their Mech Warriors now can't pilot as they have full body irritation from weaponized and aerosolized poison ivy.]]
* InevitableMutualBetrayal: Discussed and Lampshaded by [[spoiler: the [=MIM=] agent in the EnemyMine situation up above. That once they stop the nuke and make their own copies of the Data Core, what's stopping them from backstabbing each other? Maxwell, agent of [=SAFE=] laughs and says that's all a part of the spy game.
]] At which point everyone shrugs and accepts it's going to happen before they start planning.

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** Victor Li [[spoiler: tips off Phil Sheridan that the Death Commandos were going to nuke the University where the (unknown to them) decoy Data Core is being held.]] To go against his own government, even passively is a death sentence in the Capellan Confederation if ever found out.



* KangarooCourt: What awaits any of the troops that followed [[spoiler: Michael Hasek-Davion]] and only if they surrender. However it's Zigzagged as the trial would be rigged in favor of leniency as they were loyal troops before they had to be declared pirates due to the actions of [[spoiler: Michael Hasek-Davion]] to avoid an open war.

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* KangarooCourt: What Zigzagged. This is what awaits any of the troops that followed [[spoiler: Michael Hasek-Davion]] and only if they surrender. However it's Zigzagged as the trial would be rigged in favor of leniency as they were loyal troops before they had to be declared pirates due to the actions of [[spoiler: Michael Hasek-Davion]] to avoid an open war.war. And the fact they're offered the trial in the first place is more than most pirates ever got, even in real life.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: Turns out that [[spoiler: at least some of the competent [=SAFE=] agents are masters of this.]] By pretending to be a bit of a bumbling fool, Agent Danford manages to get proof [[spoiler: that someone is going to nuke the location of the Data Core.]]
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** [[spoiler: Vesar Kristofur's rant to the First Circuit about the Clan might have been true when Clan Wolverine fled, but is completely ignorant of the Warden Faction that had since formed among the Clans.]]

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** [[spoiler: Vesar Kristofur's rant to the First Circuit about the Clan might have been true when Clan Wolverine fled, but is completely ignorant of both the Warden Faction that had since formed among the Clans.Clans, and of Clan Diamond Shark's and Clan Ghost Bear's treatment of non Warrior Caste members.]]

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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler:The knowledge about the core was deliberately leaked in order to force the other Successor States into rushing to get at it on the Concordat's schedule.]]

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** And with that [[spoiler: The Clans are brought to the attention of [=ComStar=] nearly 25 years before the Inner Sphere learns of them in canon.]]
* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler:The [[spoiler: The knowledge about the core was deliberately leaked in order to force the other Successor States into rushing to get at it on the Concordat's schedule.]]



** [[spoiler: Vesar Kristofur's rant to the First Circuit about the Clan might have been true when Clan Wolverine fled, but is completely ignorant of the Warden Faction that had since formed among the Clans.]]



* TakeAThirdOption: When faced with immediate humiliation and financial ruin, or a complete shut down of the [=HPGs=]in his nation, both of which would kill the Taurian Concordat, Thomas Calderon instead [[spoiler: seizes all the [=HPGs=]in the Concordat by force.]]

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* TakeAThirdOption: When faced with immediate humiliation and financial ruin, or a complete shut down of the [=HPGs=]in [=HPGs=] in his nation, both of which would kill the Taurian Concordat, Thomas Calderon instead [[spoiler: seizes all the [=HPGs=]in [=HPGs=] in the Concordat by force.]]


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* WrittenByTheWinners: [[spoiler: Vesar Kristofur history lecture about The Clans is heavily tainted by the hatred and resentment that the Clan Wolverine survivors have for them.]]
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: [[spoiler: Word of Blake or at least what would become the Jihad, alongwith The Blood show up much earlier.]]

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: [[spoiler: Word of Blake or at least what would become the Jihad, alongwith along with The Blood show up much earlier.]]
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: [[spoiler: Word of Blake, or at least what would become the Jihad, show up much earlier and are dealt with.]]

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: [[spoiler: Word of Blake, Blake or at least what would become the Jihad, alongwith The Blood show up much earlier and are dealt with.earlier.]]
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** [[spoiler: Edward Calderon orders the TDF to engage what's left of The Sixth Syrtis Fusiliers instead of bombarding them from orbit as the TDF needs the salvage. He is almost literally paying for Battlemech's and weapons with the lives of his troops.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: The deep space only Taurian Dropship Titan deploys into an atmosphere to try and stop Michael Hasek-Davion's plan to nuke surrendering forces and civilians. They wind up taking two nukes that were meant for them]]

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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: The deep space only Taurian Dropship Titan deploys into an atmosphere to try and stop Michael Hasek-Davion's plan to nuke surrendering forces and civilians. They wind up taking two nukes that were meant for them]] the non-combatants]]

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* EveryoneHasStandards: [[spoiler: The last survivor of the attempted nuclear bombing run realizes there are non-combatants at his target, and decides to instead take out the TDF Titan instead.]]



* GodzillaThreshold: [[spoiler: Michael Hasek-Davion's plan to use a nuclear bomb on his own surrendering forces and frame the Taurians for it resulted in the Taurians responding in kind.]]

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* GodzillaThreshold: [[spoiler: Michael Hasek-Davion's plan to use a nuclear bomb on his own surrendering forces and frame the Taurians for it resulted in the Taurians responding in kind.nuking his HQ.]]


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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: The deep space only Taurian Dropship Titan deploys into an atmosphere to try and stop Michael Hasek-Davion's plan to nuke surrendering forces and civilians. They wind up taking two nukes that were meant for them]]


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** [[spoiler: The Sixth Syrtis Fusiliers bombers have this reaction when the Non-Atmospheric Dropship Titan not only deploys into an atmosphere to intercept them ''it's gaining on them''.]]


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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Larson, the last bomber left decides to take the TDF Titan out with him rather than nuke the Red Cross at this target.]]

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