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* DoingItForTheArt: Debatable. The author had already "finished" part four of case two, and was working on part five; but when a forum member pointed out the numerous problems, [[http://forums.dragonflycave.com/showpost.php?p=410951&postcount=102 he scrapped virtually all of those two parts]] in order to try again.
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* DoingItForTheArt: Debatable. The author had already "finished" part four of case two, and was working on part five; but [[http://forums.dragonflycave.com/showpost.php?p=410558&postcount=89 when a forum member pointed out the numerous problems, problems]], [[http://forums.dragonflycave.com/showpost.php?p=410951&postcount=102 he scrapped virtually all of those two parts]] in order to try again.
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* DoingItForTheArt: Debatable. The author had already "finished" part four of case two, and was working on part five; but when a forum member pointed out the numerous problems, [[http://forums.dragonflycave.com/showpost.php?p=410951&postcount=102 he scrapped virtually all of those two parts]] in order to try again.
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* ScheduleSlip: There's not an actual schedule, but once the author's thread caught up with what he wrote, things ''slowed down''.
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* ContinuityDrift: Despite the trope below, several of the characters have been taken in unexpected directions.
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* DidNotDoTheResearch
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* PlotHole: See AssPull above.
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* PsychicPowers: Skye, naturally. Rarely done well.
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* AuthorTract: The evidence is the end of [[http://forums.dragonflycave.com/showpost.php?p=409597&postcount=80 this post]].
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* AssPull: [[http://forums.dragonflycave.com/showpost.php?p=410080&postcount=82 How the hell does Skye figure out who the murder is near the end of part four?]]
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* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: The author lists suggested background music (most of it from the AceAttorney series) at the spot to begin playing it (and now links track titles to YouTube) to aid in setting the mood of the scene. Some readers have testified that it works well.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Only a single, mild example so far; the Goldenrod forensics team wasn't happy when Skye joined them, but during the investigation of [[spoiler: Lily's murder]], they discover that they miss having Skye on their team. Slooth relays this to Brendan at one point; Brendan cries, evidently proud of Skye and glad to hear that she's finally accepted among the forensics team.
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** Detective Slooth uses [[AceAttorney Gumshoe's]] VerbalTic "pal".
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** Detective Slooth uses [[AceAttorney Gumshoe's]] VerbalTic "pal".VerbalTic, pal!
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** Expect an "Odor Sleuth" joke any day now.
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''Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney'' is an ongoing series of "cases", written in the style of an AceAttorney game transcript, that attempts to tell the tale of Brendan ten years after his journey through Hoenn as a Pokémon Trainer; he has become a defense attorney. A FanFic written by [=Strife89=] (real name: Michael Dylan Carr), it only has one case fully written and a second case in progress. The author has the intention of creating a set of four or five cases that tie in to each other, forming a complete story. The series was inspired by [=ShadowKnux372's=] [[http://docs.google.com/View?docid=df4qzjdz_3f7393nd7 Phoenix's SSBB case files]].
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''Brendan Namron: Ace Attorney'' is an ongoing series of "cases", written in the style of an AceAttorney game transcript, that attempts to tell the tale of Brendan ten years after his journey through Hoenn as a Pokémon Trainer; he has become a defense attorney. A FanFic written by [=Strife89=] (real name: Michael Dylan Carr), it only has one case fully written and a second case in progress. The author has the intention of creating a set of four or five cases that tie in to each other, forming a complete story. The series was inspired by [=ShadowKnux372's=] [[http://docs.google.com/View?docid=df4qzjdz_3f7393nd7 Phoenix's SSBB case files]].
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* ScriptFic: Although case one's introduction is in prose.
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** Silver appears in case two. He's mellowed quite a bit since the end of HeartGold/SoulSilver.
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** While at the Goldenrod Docks, Brendan recalls a Milotic he owned named [[PokemonSpecial Mimi]].
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** WordOfGod says that he nearly took the relationship [[{{Squick}} too far]].
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** [[http://forums.dragonflycave.com/showpost.php?p=409273&postcount=67 Some say]] it ''is'' awesome.
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->''"You have faith in us, your Pokémon. It's time you had faith in your parents once again."''
-->-- '''Skye''', from a draft summary of Case 4
-->-- '''Skye''', from a draft summary of Case 4
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* LampshadeHanging: Every now and then. For instance, one of the '''Talk''' topics is "What have you been up to?", which gives only three lines of text; the last one has Brendan wonder to himself, "Is that it?"
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Brendan is accompanied by two Pokémon, Phoenix (a Torchic) and Skye (a Kirlia). Little is known about them, except that they are the children of two of the Pokémon that Brendan traveled with during his years as a trainer.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Late-game [[PlotWhatPlot plot points]] from Pokemon Platinum are referenced in case two.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Late-game [[PlotWhatPlot [[ExcusePlot plot points]] from Pokemon Platinum are referenced in case two.
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->''"Why do you think we're holding a normal trial with a Pokémon as the defendant? Because Pokémon have souls and intelligence to match ours. One of these days, maybe the entire world will come to see that ..."''
-->-- '''Brendan Namron''', ''Turnabout Return'' (Case 1)
-->-- '''Brendan Namron''', ''Turnabout Return'' (Case 1)
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->''"The only way any of us are going to get through this is if we play our roles ... and do our jobs."''
-->-- '''Kirlia "Skye" Namron''', ''Turnabout Tragedy'' (Case 2)
-->-- '''Kirlia "Skye" Namron''', ''Turnabout Tragedy'' (Case 2)
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* TheWoobie: Skye might be getting this treatment in case two.
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* TheWoobie: Skye might appears to be getting this treatment in case two.
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* BetterThanItSounds: Butterfree, the owner of the website on which the forums reside, has stated that the series [[http://forums.dragonflycave.com/showpost.php?p=407874&postcount=26 "works better than [she] thought it would when [she] first heard the idea."]]
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* TheJudge: Practically imported straight from the AceAttorney universe.
* ThePerryMasonMethod: Used by Brendan quite a bit.
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* VillainousBreakdown: When Brendan pins Russ in case one, Russ calls out his Mightyena and tries to ''kill him''.
* ThePerryMasonMethod: Used by Brendan quite a bit.
* VillainousBreakdown: When Brendan pins Russ in case one, Russ calls out his Mightyena and tries to ''kill him''.
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* ThePerryMasonMethod: Used by Brendan quite a bit.
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome: The series attempts to make Pokemon read like an AceAttorney game while fantasizing on the futures of the mainstay characters from the former series.
* WorldOfHam: As expected, there is a LOT of yelling in the courtroom.
* TheWoobie: Skye might be getting this treatment in case two.
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* VillianousBreakdown: When Brendan pins Russ in case one, Russ calls out his Mightyena and tries to ''kill him''.
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* PowerOfTrust: Brendan evidently wants the world to trust in their Pokemon as friends on a human level, rather than animals.
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* PowerOfTrust: Brendan evidently wants the world to trust in their Pokemon as friends on a human level, rather than as animals.
* SdrawkcabName: Brendan's last name is just his father's name (Norman) reversed. It exists only in this series.
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* VillianousBreakdown: When Brendan pins Russ in case one, Russ calls out his Mightyena and tries to ''kill him''.
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* PowerOfTrust: Brendan evidently wants the world to trust in their Pokemon as friends on a human level, rather than animals.
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* TheJudge: Practically imported straight from NotAsYouKnowThem: Brendan was Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald's silent male protagonist, who (like the AceAttorney universe.other games' player characters) led a successful life in nothing but training. Guess where this series takes him after six years of that.
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** Detective Slooth uses [[AceAttorney Gumshoe's]] VerbalTic "pal"."pal".
* TheJudge: Practically imported straight from the AceAttorney universe.
* ThePerryMasonMethod: Used by Brendan quite a bit.
* TheJudge: Practically imported straight from the AceAttorney universe.
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* MysteryMagnet: Brendan is potentially shaping up to be this. Case 2 starts with him asking his mother about Team Galactic. Guess [[spoiler: who kills her]] shortly thereafter.
