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By {{Creator/shortskirtsandexplosions}}, the same author as ''Fanfic/BackgroundPony'' and ''Fanfic/TheEndOfPonies''. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon FIMFiction]].
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By {{Creator/shortskirtsandexplosions}}, the same author as ''Fanfic/BackgroundPony'' and ''Fanfic/TheEndOfPonies''.{{Creator/shortskirtsandexplosions}}. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon FIMFiction]].
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From the [[{{Creator/shortskirtsandexplosions}} same author]] of ''FanFic/BackgroundPony'' and ''FanFic/TheEndOfPonies''. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon FIMFiction]].
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* DoubleDoubleTitle: The title is "Bon" repeated six times.
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Lyra dies.]]
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Lyra dies.]]]] Doubles as GainaxEnding.
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* MindScrew: The story starts with Bon Bon and Lyra playing music on a hill. Bon Bon wakes up and the situation repeats itself. It just gets weirder from there.
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* [[spoiler:DownerEnding]]: [[spoiler:Lyra dies.]]
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From the same author of ''FanFic/BackgroundPony'' and ''FanFic/TheEndOfPonies''. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon FIMFiction]].
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From the [[{{Creator/shortskirtsandexplosions}} same author author]] of ''FanFic/BackgroundPony'' and ''FanFic/TheEndOfPonies''. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon FIMFiction]].
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-->You can be happy! You can make sweet music! I can't do this without you, honey. I can hear you! You always told me you wanted an encore. Stay with me now! They're not going to wait much longer. I love you so much. They're not going to make much longer, sweetie.
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* SurrealHorror: Oohhh boy. Where to begin? [[spoiler: How about Lyra as a spider made of drumsticks on a web of lyre strings endlessly repeating the aforementioned BrokenRecord as she chases Bon Bon through a river of leaves while oak clouds rain drumsticks?]]
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* SurrealHorror: Oohhh boy. Where to begin? [[spoiler: How about Lyra as a spider made of drumsticks on a web of lyre strings endlessly repeating the aforementioned BrokenRecord as she chases Bon Bon through a river of leaves while oak clouds rain drumsticks?]]drumsticks?]]
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* DerangedAnimation: Even though this is a text-only fanfic, the imagery is very evocative.
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-->You can be happy! You can make sweet music! I can't do thisis a text-only fanfic, the imagery is very evocative.without you, honey. I can hear you! You always told me you wanted an encore. Stay with me now! They're not going to wait much longer. I love you so much. They're not going to make much longer, sweetie.
-->You can be happy! You can make sweet music! I can't do this
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* SchmuckBait: The fanfic description ends with "Do not read this."
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* PurpleProse: Even though this is a text-only fanfic, the imagery is very evocative.
* SchmuckBait: The fanfic description ends with "Do not read this.""
* SurrealHorror: Oohhh boy. Where to begin? [[spoiler: How about Lyra as a spider made of drumsticks on a web of lyre strings endlessly repeating the aforementioned BrokenRecord as she chases Bon Bon through a river of leaves while oak clouds rain drumsticks?]]
* SchmuckBait: The fanfic description ends with "Do not read this.
* SurrealHorror: Oohhh boy. Where to begin? [[spoiler: How about Lyra as a spider made of drumsticks on a web of lyre strings endlessly repeating the aforementioned BrokenRecord as she chases Bon Bon through a river of leaves while oak clouds rain drumsticks?]]
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From the same author of [[FanFic/BackgroundPony Background Pony]]. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon FIMFiction]].
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From the same author of [[FanFic/BackgroundPony Background Pony]].''FanFic/BackgroundPony'' and ''FanFic/TheEndOfPonies''. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon FIMFiction]].
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From the same author of [[FanFic/BackgroundPony Background Pony]]. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/bon-bon-bon-bon-bon-bon FIMFiction]].
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From the same author of [[FanFic/BackgroundPony Background Pony]]. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/bon-bon-bon-bon-bon-bon net/story/43470/Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon-Bon FIMFiction]].
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Bon Bon and Lyra are playing music at the top of a hill. Lyra playing the lyre, and Bon Bon a drumset.
As the situation starts to repeat itself, Bon Bon notices something is wrong.
From the same author of [[FanFic/BackgroundPony Background Pony]]. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/bon-bon-bon-bon-bon-bon FIMFiction]].
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
* DerangedAnimation: Even though this is a text-only fanfic, the imagery is very evocative.
* [[spoiler:DownerEnding]]: [[spoiler:Lyra dies.]]
* [[spoiler:GainaxEnding]]
* MindScrew
* SchmuckBait: The fanfic description ends with "Do not read this."
Bon Bon and Lyra are playing music at the top of a hill. Lyra playing the lyre, and Bon Bon a drumset.
As the situation starts to repeat itself, Bon Bon notices something is wrong.
From the same author of [[FanFic/BackgroundPony Background Pony]]. Can be found at [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43470/bon-bon-bon-bon-bon-bon FIMFiction]].
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
* DerangedAnimation: Even though this is a text-only fanfic, the imagery is very evocative.
* [[spoiler:DownerEnding]]: [[spoiler:Lyra dies.]]
* [[spoiler:GainaxEnding]]
* MindScrew
* SchmuckBait: The fanfic description ends with "Do not read this."
