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When Sabrina comes home from school after a difficult day with Chloe and finds the Bee Miraculous in her room, she's sure there's been a mistake. But when she tries to return it, the kwami suggests she spend one evening as the bee hero, and see if she changes her mind.
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When Sabrina comes home from school after a difficult day with Chloe Chloé and finds the Bee Miraculous in her room, she's sure there's been a mistake. But when she tries to return it, the kwami suggests she spend one evening as the bee hero, and see if she changes her mind.
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Unfortunately, she has something to deal with outside of the mask: her "best friend," Chloe.
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Unfortunately, she has something to deal with outside of the mask: her "best friend," Chloe.
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** Sabrina locks Chloe in a fitting room so she can transform into Honeycomb and combat an Akuma at the mall. Chloe is ''not'' happy when she's let back out.
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** Sabrina locks Chloe Chloé in a fitting room so she can transform into Honeycomb and combat an Akuma at the mall. Chloe Chloé is ''not'' happy when she's let back out.
** Ladybug locks Sabrina in the school bathroom [[spoiler: to protect her when an AkumatizedChloe Chloé demands she be brought to her. Sabrina waits til Ladybug is gone to transform into Honeycomb and sneak out through the window.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: In chapter ten, Hanii has this reaction to Sabrina being taken prisoner by an Akumatized Chloe, feeling that if she hadn't pushed her so hard to stand up to Chloe, Chloe wouldn't have been Akumatized, and subsequently wouldn't have caused the mess that led to Sabrina's capture.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: In chapter ten, Hanii has this reaction to Sabrina being taken prisoner by an Akumatized Chloe, Chloé, feeling that if she hadn't pushed her so hard to stand up to Chloe, Chloe Chloé, Chloé wouldn't have been Akumatized, and subsequently wouldn't have caused the mess that led to Sabrina's capture.]]
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* ProneToTears: Sabrina cries a ''lot'' throughout the fic, usually either due to Chloe's emotional abuse of her, or because she's stressing herself out.
* SchoolBullyingIsHarmless: Thoroughly averted; Chloe's long-term abuse and bullying of Sabrina has essentially stripped her of any confidence and left her as a meek shell of a girl who goes along with whatever she says in order to keep her happy.
* SchoolBullyingIsHarmless: Thoroughly averted; Chloe's long-term abuse and bullying of Sabrina has essentially stripped her of any confidence and left her as a meek shell of a girl who goes along with whatever she says in order to keep her happy.
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* ProneToTears: Sabrina cries a ''lot'' throughout the fic, usually either due to Chloe's Chloé's emotional abuse of her, or because she's stressing herself out.
* SchoolBullyingIsHarmless: Thoroughly averted;Chloe's Chloé's long-term abuse and bullying of Sabrina has essentially stripped her of any confidence and left her as a meek shell of a girl who goes along with whatever she says in order to keep her happy.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: Pretty much the whole fic; Sabrina is an abused "friend" of Chloe's who receives a Miraculous after a brief display of kindness, which allows her confidence to grow and leads to her making new friends.
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* ShoutOut: Sabrina makes a reference to Franchise/SailorMoon, comparing her status as a transforming heroine to the main character. [[ShowTheirWork She even refers to Usagi as her French dub name, Bunny Rivere. Rivere.]]
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* OutdatedByCanon: As the fic was published and completed before the second season, this is in abundance.
** The very nature of the Bee Miraculous itself; in canon the Bee's powers immobilize their victim, in the fic they heal a single object or person. The kwami is also different; in canon she is Pollen and has blue eyes, in the fic she is Hanii and has brown eyes and a much more maternal personality.
** Sabrina is portrayed much differently than canon; whereas in canon [[DependingOnTheWriter she's either Chloe's spineless yes-woman or just as big a bully as she is,]] in this fic she's much meeker, prone to tears, and is shown to be a victim of Chloe's toxic influence and abuse.
** The very nature of the Bee Miraculous itself; in canon the Bee's powers immobilize their victim, in the fic they heal a single object or person. The kwami is also different; in canon she is Pollen and has blue eyes, in the fic she is Hanii and has brown eyes and a much more maternal personality.
** Sabrina is portrayed much differently than canon; whereas in canon [[DependingOnTheWriter she's either Chloe's spineless yes-woman or just as big a bully as she is,]] in this fic she's much meeker, prone to tears, and is shown to be a victim of Chloe's toxic influence and abuse.
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''Bee-Nevolent'' is a WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug fanfic written by [=TwinklingCupcake=]. It was one of the earlier "Someone gets the Bee Miraculous" fanfics, notable for going to a then-unusual suspect: Sabrina.
When Sabrina comes home from school after a difficult day with Chloe and finds the Bee Miraculous in her room, she's sure there's been a mistake. But when she tries to return it, the kwami suggests she spend one evening as the bee hero, and see if she changes her mind.
She decides to keep it.
Quickly becoming a hero alongside Ladybug and Chat Noir, Sabrina finds herself growing more confident and gaining new friends.
Unfortunately, she has something to deal with outside of the mask: her "best friend," Chloe.
It can be read on Archive of Our Own [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7120507/chapters/16173412 here]], and on fanfiction.net [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11986157/1/Bee-Nevolent here.]]
!! Tropes used in Bee-Nevolent include:
* AMinorKidroduction: The story opens with five-year-old Sabrina at her first day of kindergarten, and follows her through her childhood up to the present day.
* AntiInterferenceLockUp:
** Sabrina locks Chloe in a fitting room so she can transform into Honeycomb and combat an Akuma at the mall. Chloe is ''not'' happy when she's let back out.
** Ladybug locks Sabrina in the school bathroom [[spoiler: to protect her when an Akumatized Chloe demands she be brought to her. Sabrina waits til Ladybug is gone to transform into Honeycomb and sneak out through the window.]]
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: In chapter 5, from Chat Noir to Honeycomb: "Honeycomb, in your normal life, is someone hurting you?"
* BodyHorror: [[spoiler: Princesse Abeille's hive army have large, black compound eyes. It freaks Sabrina out the first time she sees it.]]
* {{Glamour}}: Used as an in-universe reason for why people can't recognize Miraculous-users despite only having a domino mask to hide their identities.
* GroupHug: Honeycomb often finds herself in the middle of these with Ladybug and Chat Noir, namely after she spills how she's in a toxic friendship in her normal life, and in chapter ten when [[spoiler: Princesse Abeille is defeated.]]
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Every chapter is named after a song title.
* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Part of Sabrina's motivation to keep the Bee Miraculous is because she hopes to be friends with the other heroes. In her normal life, she also expresses desire to befriend her classmates, but fears it's too late.
* InASingleBound: As part of her test-run of the Bee Miraculous, Sabrina leaps from a nearby roof all the way to the Eiffel Tower. This is the act that gets her caught on camera.
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: In chapter ten, Hanii has this reaction to Sabrina being taken prisoner by an Akumatized Chloe, feeling that if she hadn't pushed her so hard to stand up to Chloe, Chloe wouldn't have been Akumatized, and subsequently wouldn't have caused the mess that led to Sabrina's capture.]]
* LateForSchool:
** Sabrina is running late in the first chapter, and is made even later when she stops to help up Master Fu, who she'd accidentally bowled over in her haste.
** In chapter two, Sabrina's alarm fails to go off in time, causing her to have to skip her morning prep and run the entire way to school. It also leads to her not knowing what everyone is gossiping about at school, having slept through the video of her InASingleBound being uploaded to the [=LadyBlog=].
* OutdatedByCanon: As the fic was published and completed before the second season, this is in abundance.
** The very nature of the Bee Miraculous itself; in canon the Bee's powers immobilize their victim, in the fic they heal a single object or person. The kwami is also different; in canon she is Pollen and has blue eyes, in the fic she is Hanii and has brown eyes and a much more maternal personality.
** Sabrina is portrayed much differently than canon; whereas in canon [[DependingOnTheWriter she's either Chloe's spineless yes-woman or just as big a bully as she is,]] in this fic she's much meeker, prone to tears, and is shown to be a victim of Chloe's toxic influence and abuse.
* MinidressOfPower: As opposed to the canon bodysuits, Sabrina as Honeycomb wears a minidress over leggings.
* OhCrap: Sabrina has this reaction at the end of chapter one, learning that her grand leap to the Eiffel Tower was caught on camera and posted online. It leads to her panic attack in chapter two.
* PetTheDog:
** The main reason Master Fu gave Sabrina the Bee Miraculous, stating that she "needs" its kwami's guidance.
** Sabrina begins having a panic attack in chapter two and flees to the bathroom. After spending a short time in the toilets, Rose comes to check on her, saying the class is worried about her. Afterwards when Sabrina returns to class, both Nino and Marinette quietly ask if she's alright.
* ProneToTears: Sabrina cries a ''lot'' throughout the fic, usually either due to Chloe's emotional abuse of her, or because she's stressing herself out.
* SchoolBullyingIsHarmless: Thoroughly averted; Chloe's long-term abuse and bullying of Sabrina has essentially stripped her of any confidence and left her as a meek shell of a girl who goes along with whatever she says in order to keep her happy.
* ShoutOut: Sabrina makes a reference to Franchise/SailorMoon, comparing her status as a transforming heroine to the main character. She even refers to Usagi as her French dub name, Bunny Rivere.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler: Sabrina throws one at Chloe in chapter ten, shouting how Chloe was an awful friend and she's finished with taking it.]]
* RescueHug: [[spoiler: In chapter ten, Sabrina jumps from a scaffold while Miraculous Ladybug performs its WorldHealingWave and into Chat Noir's arms. He immediately pulls her in for a hug, and is shortly afterwards joined by Ladybug.]]
* ThrowTheDogABone: Pretty much the whole fic; Sabrina is an abused "friend" of Chloe's who receives a Miraculous after a brief display of kindness, which allows her confidence to grow and leads to her making new friends.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Hanii's preferred recharge food is rose petals, which Sabrina casually plucks from nearby flowers and carries with her.
* WhamLine: [[spoiler: "You want [Sabrina] so badly? [...] I'm right here, Chloe."]]
When Sabrina comes home from school after a difficult day with Chloe and finds the Bee Miraculous in her room, she's sure there's been a mistake. But when she tries to return it, the kwami suggests she spend one evening as the bee hero, and see if she changes her mind.
She decides to keep it.
Quickly becoming a hero alongside Ladybug and Chat Noir, Sabrina finds herself growing more confident and gaining new friends.
Unfortunately, she has something to deal with outside of the mask: her "best friend," Chloe.
It can be read on Archive of Our Own [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7120507/chapters/16173412 here]], and on fanfiction.net [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11986157/1/Bee-Nevolent here.]]
!! Tropes used in Bee-Nevolent include:
* AMinorKidroduction: The story opens with five-year-old Sabrina at her first day of kindergarten, and follows her through her childhood up to the present day.
* AntiInterferenceLockUp:
** Sabrina locks Chloe in a fitting room so she can transform into Honeycomb and combat an Akuma at the mall. Chloe is ''not'' happy when she's let back out.
** Ladybug locks Sabrina in the school bathroom [[spoiler: to protect her when an Akumatized Chloe demands she be brought to her. Sabrina waits til Ladybug is gone to transform into Honeycomb and sneak out through the window.]]
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: In chapter 5, from Chat Noir to Honeycomb: "Honeycomb, in your normal life, is someone hurting you?"
* BodyHorror: [[spoiler: Princesse Abeille's hive army have large, black compound eyes. It freaks Sabrina out the first time she sees it.]]
* {{Glamour}}: Used as an in-universe reason for why people can't recognize Miraculous-users despite only having a domino mask to hide their identities.
* GroupHug: Honeycomb often finds herself in the middle of these with Ladybug and Chat Noir, namely after she spills how she's in a toxic friendship in her normal life, and in chapter ten when [[spoiler: Princesse Abeille is defeated.]]
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Every chapter is named after a song title.
* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Part of Sabrina's motivation to keep the Bee Miraculous is because she hopes to be friends with the other heroes. In her normal life, she also expresses desire to befriend her classmates, but fears it's too late.
* InASingleBound: As part of her test-run of the Bee Miraculous, Sabrina leaps from a nearby roof all the way to the Eiffel Tower. This is the act that gets her caught on camera.
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: In chapter ten, Hanii has this reaction to Sabrina being taken prisoner by an Akumatized Chloe, feeling that if she hadn't pushed her so hard to stand up to Chloe, Chloe wouldn't have been Akumatized, and subsequently wouldn't have caused the mess that led to Sabrina's capture.]]
* LateForSchool:
** Sabrina is running late in the first chapter, and is made even later when she stops to help up Master Fu, who she'd accidentally bowled over in her haste.
** In chapter two, Sabrina's alarm fails to go off in time, causing her to have to skip her morning prep and run the entire way to school. It also leads to her not knowing what everyone is gossiping about at school, having slept through the video of her InASingleBound being uploaded to the [=LadyBlog=].
* OutdatedByCanon: As the fic was published and completed before the second season, this is in abundance.
** The very nature of the Bee Miraculous itself; in canon the Bee's powers immobilize their victim, in the fic they heal a single object or person. The kwami is also different; in canon she is Pollen and has blue eyes, in the fic she is Hanii and has brown eyes and a much more maternal personality.
** Sabrina is portrayed much differently than canon; whereas in canon [[DependingOnTheWriter she's either Chloe's spineless yes-woman or just as big a bully as she is,]] in this fic she's much meeker, prone to tears, and is shown to be a victim of Chloe's toxic influence and abuse.
* MinidressOfPower: As opposed to the canon bodysuits, Sabrina as Honeycomb wears a minidress over leggings.
* OhCrap: Sabrina has this reaction at the end of chapter one, learning that her grand leap to the Eiffel Tower was caught on camera and posted online. It leads to her panic attack in chapter two.
* PetTheDog:
** The main reason Master Fu gave Sabrina the Bee Miraculous, stating that she "needs" its kwami's guidance.
** Sabrina begins having a panic attack in chapter two and flees to the bathroom. After spending a short time in the toilets, Rose comes to check on her, saying the class is worried about her. Afterwards when Sabrina returns to class, both Nino and Marinette quietly ask if she's alright.
* ProneToTears: Sabrina cries a ''lot'' throughout the fic, usually either due to Chloe's emotional abuse of her, or because she's stressing herself out.
* SchoolBullyingIsHarmless: Thoroughly averted; Chloe's long-term abuse and bullying of Sabrina has essentially stripped her of any confidence and left her as a meek shell of a girl who goes along with whatever she says in order to keep her happy.
* ShoutOut: Sabrina makes a reference to Franchise/SailorMoon, comparing her status as a transforming heroine to the main character. She even refers to Usagi as her French dub name, Bunny Rivere.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler: Sabrina throws one at Chloe in chapter ten, shouting how Chloe was an awful friend and she's finished with taking it.]]
* RescueHug: [[spoiler: In chapter ten, Sabrina jumps from a scaffold while Miraculous Ladybug performs its WorldHealingWave and into Chat Noir's arms. He immediately pulls her in for a hug, and is shortly afterwards joined by Ladybug.]]
* ThrowTheDogABone: Pretty much the whole fic; Sabrina is an abused "friend" of Chloe's who receives a Miraculous after a brief display of kindness, which allows her confidence to grow and leads to her making new friends.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Hanii's preferred recharge food is rose petals, which Sabrina casually plucks from nearby flowers and carries with her.
* WhamLine: [[spoiler: "You want [Sabrina] so badly? [...] I'm right here, Chloe."]]
