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* AerithAndBob: partially caused by the author's practice of naming characters after commenters' nicknames. Aeriths include Zaap Nator, Floydien, Khao, Zaid, Zytharros, Arcshod, Lasairfion. Examples of Bobs are Sam, Stu, Dalton, Jasper Clark, and Simon. Then there are traditional (canon-like) pony names such as Gold Petals, Whitemane and Nightshade.
* AllJustADream: a number of chapters in ''Innavedr''. [[spoiler: Nightshade captures Bellesmith and plugs her into a sequencing machine to trick information out of here. As the chapters are through Belle's point of view; the reader doesn't learn it until several chapters later.]] As those chapters were released, some observant readers guessed it already at the first or second dream chapter, due to [[spoiler: Kera behaving "out of character"]].
* AllJustADream: a number of chapters in ''Innavedr''. [[spoiler: Nightshade captures Bellesmith and plugs her into a sequencing machine to trick information out of here. As the chapters are through Belle's point of view; the reader doesn't learn it until several chapters later.]] As those chapters were released, some observant readers guessed it already at the first or second dream chapter, due to [[spoiler: Kera behaving "out of character"]].
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* AerithAndBob: partially Partially caused by the author's practice of naming characters after commenters' nicknames. Aeriths include Zaap Nator, Floydien, Khao, Zaid, Zytharros, Arcshod, Lasairfion. Examples of Bobs are Sam, Stu, Dalton, Jasper Clark, and Simon. Then there are traditional (canon-like) pony names such as Gold Petals, Whitemane and Nightshade.
* AllJustADream:a A number of chapters in ''Innavedr''. [[spoiler: Nightshade captures Bellesmith and plugs her into a sequencing machine to trick information out of here. As the chapters are through Belle's point of view; the reader doesn't learn it until several chapters later.]] As those chapters were released, some observant readers guessed it already at the first or second dream chapter, due to [[spoiler: Kera behaving "out of character"]].
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* FlashBack: several such chapters occur throughout ''Austraeoh'', slowly unveiling the backstory. Then in the first half of ''Eljunbyro'', [[spoiler: we finally get the entire backstory in form of several multi-chapter flashbacks.]]
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* FlashBack: several Several such chapters occur throughout ''Austraeoh'', slowly unveiling the backstory. Then in the first half of ''Eljunbyro'', [[spoiler: we finally get the entire backstory in form of several multi-chapter flashbacks.]]
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** [[spoiler:If Rainbow Dash is withouot the element of loyalty for too long, she turns into an AxCrazy dragon-like creature]].
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** [[spoiler:If Rainbow Dash is withouot without the element of loyalty for too long, she turns into an AxCrazy dragon-like creature]].
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* StealthPun: a mysterious group of merchants, which for some reason is called "The Lounge", is mentioned in ''Odrsjot''. In ''Urohringr'', we learn that they are [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lounge_lizard anthropomorphic lizards]].
* SteamPunk: many of the civilisations east of Equestria run on steam power combined with magic.
* SteamPunk: many of the civilisations east of Equestria run on steam power combined with magic.
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* StealthPun: a A mysterious group of merchants, which for some reason is called "The Lounge", is mentioned in ''Odrsjot''. In ''Urohringr'', we learn that they are [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lounge_lizard anthropomorphic lizards]].
* SteamPunk:many Many of the civilisations east of Equestria run on steam power combined with magic.
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* TragicKeepsake: Rainbow dash carries two items with her; The glasses from Scootaloo, and a book of pictures. [[spoiler:She loses both to the dragons in Silvadel[
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* TragicKeepsake: Rainbow dash carries two items with her; The glasses from Scootaloo, and a book of pictures. [[spoiler:She loses both to the dragons in Silvadel[Silvadel.]]
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* WorldSundering: A bit more dramatic than normal. The Sundering was an event in Equestria's distant past where [[spoiler:the ringworld of Urohringr was shattered into different pieces]].
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* WorldSundering: A bit more dramatic than normal. The Sundering was an event in Equestria's distant past where [[spoiler:the ringworld of Urohringr was shattered into different pieces]].pieces]].
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* BreakingTheFellowship: [[spoiler:The Noble Jury disbands in Yaerfaerda, and Rainbow Dash goes into the Grand Choke alone.]]
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* BreakingTheFellowship: BreakingTheFellowship:
** Eljunbyro ends with [[spoiler:Rainbow kidnapped/saved by Roarke; Pilate alone, blind, and whereabouts unknown; Bellesmith and Phoenix on a Ledomaritan transport bound for Blue Nova; Eagle Eyes lost and possibly dying in a canyon somewhere; and Crimson boarding a managlider to chase either Rainbow or Bellesmith]].
** [[spoiler:The Noble Jury disbands in Yaerfaerda, and Rainbow Dash goes into the Grand Choke alone.]]
** Eljunbyro ends with [[spoiler:Rainbow kidnapped/saved by Roarke; Pilate alone, blind, and whereabouts unknown; Bellesmith and Phoenix on a Ledomaritan transport bound for Blue Nova; Eagle Eyes lost and possibly dying in a canyon somewhere; and Crimson boarding a managlider to chase either Rainbow or Bellesmith]].
** [[spoiler:The Noble Jury disbands in Yaerfaerda, and Rainbow Dash goes into the Grand Choke alone.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: At the end of ''Eljunbyro'', with Rainbow at her last legs and Shell poised to kill her, [[spoiler:Roarke returns in her ship and makes it off with the unconscious Rainbow Dash, leaving Shell in the dust]].
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* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Shell claims that Rainbow was found after she killed an entire village when her necklace was removed. A flashback at the end of ''Eljunbyro'' shows that her necklace wasn't removed until after she was placed in the Chaos metal sarcophagus, and the village was killed by Shell's enforcers]].
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* LeaveNoWitnesses: [[spoiler:Shell claims that Rainbow was found after she killed the entire village of Aridstone when her necklace was removed. A flashback at the end of ''Eljunbyro'' shows that her necklace wasn't removed until after she was placed in the Chaos metal sarcophagus, and the village was killed by Shell's enforcers to prevent any witnesses of the confederacy's latest "weapon"]].
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* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Shell claims that Rainbow was found after she killed an entire village when her necklace was removed. A flashback at the end of ''Eljunbyro'' shows that her necklace wasn't removed until after she was placed in the Chaos metal sarcophagus, and the village was killed by Shell's enforcers]].
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* TragicKeepsake: Rainbow dash carries two items with her; The glasses from Scootaloo, and a book of pictures. [[spoiler:She loses both to the dragons in Silvadel]].
* TransferableMemory: The "sequencing" technology of Ledomare.
* TransferableMemory: The "sequencing" technology of Ledomare.
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* TragicKeepsake: Rainbow dash carries two items with her; The glasses from Scootaloo, and a book of pictures. [[spoiler:She loses both to the dragons in Silvadel]].
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* TransferableMemory: The "sequencing" technology ofLedomare.Ledomare lets a unicorn with a severed horn experience the memories of a dead subject. [[spoiler:It's now Bellesmith learns Rainbow's past]].
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* {{Precursors}}: According to Whitemane, the Alicorns (of whom Celestia, Luna and Whitemane are the last ones) seeded the world with harmony (and thereby life) after discovering it drifting through the void. She's partially correct, although that's not the entire truth. [[spoiler:The ancient Pegasi were the first equine race to inhabit the world, possibly even before [[RingWorldPlanet Urohringr]] was shattered. Modern equines are descended from the Pegasi through the Alicorns' meddling]].
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* {{Precursors}}: {{Precursors}}:
** According to Whitemane, the Alicorns (of whom Celestia, Luna and Whitemane are the last ones) seeded the world with harmony (and thereby life) after discovering it drifting through the void. She's partially correct, although that's not the entiretruth.truth.
** Pilate finds some old ruins and deduces from the pictograms that they were built by a pegasi civilization that predates even the earliest settlements in the area. [[spoiler:The ancient Pegasi were the first equine race to inhabit the world, possibly even before [[RingWorldPlanet Urohringr]] was shattered. Modern equines are descended from the Pegasi through the Alicorns' meddling]].
** According to Whitemane, the Alicorns (of whom Celestia, Luna and Whitemane are the last ones) seeded the world with harmony (and thereby life) after discovering it drifting through the void. She's partially correct, although that's not the entire
** Pilate finds some old ruins and deduces from the pictograms that they were built by a pegasi civilization that predates even the earliest settlements in the area. [[spoiler:The ancient Pegasi were the first equine race to inhabit the world, possibly even before [[RingWorldPlanet Urohringr]] was shattered. Modern equines are descended from the Pegasi through the Alicorns' meddling]].
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* BadassBoast: Courtesy of Prime Enforcer Shell; "I don't make threats. I make corpses."
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* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: [[spoiler:After Zenith tries to sell out Rainbow Dash, Shell rewards him with an exploding mana crystal in the mouth]].
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* YourHeadAsplode: [[spoiler:Shell kills Zenith by throwing a sound stone, a kind of mana crystal, and overloading it, blowing his head up real bad]].
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* InternalReveal: In "Dying Fighting" (Eljunbyro), Rainbow spills the beans to Crimson (and unbeknownst to her, Zenith who's listening in) that she's dying, and whatever goal she's going for she probably won't live to see it.
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* PensieveFlashback: through a technology called "sequencing" in the country of Ledomare. Can only be done by unicorns whose horns have been lost or removed. Curiously, this can be done even if only a skeleton is left of the subject whose memories are accessed.
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* PensieveFlashback: through Through a technology called "sequencing" in the country of Ledomare. Can only be done by unicorns whose horns have been lost or removed. Curiously, this can be done even if only a skeleton is left of the subject whose memories are accessed.accessed.
* PointOfDivergence: The point where the fic diverges from canon is the second part of ''Return of Harmony''. [[spoiler:Instead of simply fizzling harmlessly, the backlash from trying to use the Elements of Harmony while discorded and without Rainbow Dash kills the rest of the mane six. Rainbow, having shaken off her own discordance, gets there just in time to see what happens and kills Discord in anger, something that turns out to have been a bad idea]].
* PointOfDivergence: The point where the fic diverges from canon is the second part of ''Return of Harmony''. [[spoiler:Instead of simply fizzling harmlessly, the backlash from trying to use the Elements of Harmony while discorded and without Rainbow Dash kills the rest of the mane six. Rainbow, having shaken off her own discordance, gets there just in time to see what happens and kills Discord in anger, something that turns out to have been a bad idea]].
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* IndyPlay: Rainbow's approach to most situations is to make it up as she goes, and rely on luck and endurance to make it through alive.
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* IndyPlay: IndyPloy: Rainbow's approach to most situations is to make it up as she goes, and rely on luck and endurance to make it through alive.
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* HiddenElfVillage: Equestria itself turns out to be one for the pegasus race. Across most of the world, pegasi are all but nonexistant (the ponies of Emeraldine only knew of one pony with wings, their alicorn queen), but they are abundant enough to make up a third of the population in Equestria.
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* InMediasRes: The story starts out with Rainbow Dash flying east, with no explanation of where she's headed or why. [[spoiler: The Backstory is told through a series of flashbacks in Eljunbyro.]]
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* IndyPlay: Rainbow's approach to most situations is to make it up as she goes, and rely on luck and endurance to make it through alive.
-->'''Eagle Eye:''' Don't do anything stupid.\\
'''Rainbow:''' You mean stupider than usual?
* InMediasRes: The story starts out with Rainbow Dash flying east, with no explanation of where she's headed or why.[[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The Backstory is told through a series of flashbacks in Eljunbyro.]]
-->'''Eagle Eye:''' Don't do anything stupid.\\
'''Rainbow:''' You mean stupider than usual?
* InMediasRes: The story starts out with Rainbow Dash flying east, with no explanation of where she's headed or why.
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* NoYou:
-->'''Rainbow:''' We found a safe way out of here, so lemme just undo these restraints-\\
'''Roarke:''' Undo your own birth, you dishonorable pile of filth!
-->'''Rainbow:''' We found a safe way out of here, so lemme just undo these restraints-\\
'''Roarke:''' Undo your own birth, you dishonorable pile of filth!
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* BilingualBonus: the titles are composed of Old Norse or old English (with a little bit of goodwill when it comes to the grammar)
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* BilingualBonus: the titles are composed of Old Norse or old English (with a little bit of goodwill when it comes to the grammar)grammar).
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* BilingualBonus: the titles are composed of Old Norse words.
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* BilingualBonus: the titles are composed of Old Norse words. or old English (with a little bit of goodwill when it comes to the grammar)
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* HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash is a pony, a being of harmony, with the power and magic of [[MadGod Discord]] swirling around inside her. As long as she keeps the Element of Harmony around her neck it's fine, but it's the last element and won't keep her safe forever, and anytime she removes it she starts turning into something like Discord only a lot less playfully mad and a lot more AxCrazy]].
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* CanonImmigrant:
** Eagle Eye is based on a character of the same name and appearance, appearing in three fanfics (''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17463/distorted-perspective Distorted Perspective]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26103/playing-hard-to-get Playing Hard to Get]]'' and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/37768/a-night-he-wont-remember A Night He (Won't) Remember]]'') by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Vimbert+the+Unimpressive Vimbert the Unimpressive]].
** Eagle Eye is based on a character of the same name and appearance, appearing in three fanfics (''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17463/distorted-perspective Distorted Perspective]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26103/playing-hard-to-get Playing Hard to Get]]'' and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/37768/a-night-he-wont-remember A Night He (Won't) Remember]]'') by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Vimbert+the+Unimpressive Vimbert the Unimpressive]].
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* CanonImmigrant:
**CanonImmigrant: Eagle Eye is based on a character of the same name and appearance, appearing in three fanfics (''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17463/distorted-perspective Distorted Perspective]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26103/playing-hard-to-get Playing Hard to Get]]'' and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/37768/a-night-he-wont-remember A Night He (Won't) Remember]]'') by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Vimbert+the+Unimpressive Vimbert the Unimpressive]].
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* DamagedSoul: After [[spoiler:being dead for a good few months and turning into a chaos beast, Rainbow]] is a ''bit'' unhinged upon coming back.
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* DamagedSoul: After [[spoiler:being dead for a good few months and turning into a chaos beast, Rainbow]] is a ''bit'' unhinged upon coming back. She gets better, but for a while she's so AxCrazy that even the people she's helping are ''deeply'' terrified of her, not helped by her joking and laughing and generally acting like Pinkie Pie while being splattered with the blood of ponies she just killed.
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Played with, but subverted. ''Austraeoh'' seemingly ends with Rainbow dying, but she gets better in ''Eljunbyro'' (although it isn't clear that she survived till halfway in ''Eljunbyro''). In the end of ''Eljunbyro'', several main characters get thrown off an airship, but the very ending reveals that they all (unbeknownst to each other) survived the fall.]]
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Played with, but subverted. ''Austraeoh'' [[spoiler:''Austraeoh'' seemingly ends with Rainbow dying, but she gets better in ''Eljunbyro'' (although it isn't clear that she survived till halfway in ''Eljunbyro''). In the end of ''Eljunbyro'', several main characters get thrown off an airship, but the very ending reveals that they all (unbeknownst to each other) survived the fall.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: the chaos monsters in Windthrow. Also, [[spoiler: what Rainbow becomes when her pendant is removed.]] And Nevlamas.
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: After the Lerris massacre, Kera is reduced to an unresponsive shadow of a filly.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After the Lerris massacre, Kera is reduced to an unresponsive shadow of a filly.]]
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The author, Imploding Colon, is an alias of {{Creator/shortskirtsandexplosions}}, author of well-known fanfics ''FanFic/BackgroundPony'' and ''FanFic/TheEndOfPonies'', a fact that was not known initially and came as a surprise to many readers. The author has spoken almost nothing about ''Austraeoh'' and its sequels, only briefly acknowledging writing them in some recent blog posts. Although the author never replies to reader comments, he seems to enjoy reading them, as hidden references to last chapter's comments occasionally appear in the next chapter. Starting from about the mid-point of ''Austraeoh'' (the first story in the series), most characters and places have been named after frequent commenters on Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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The author, Imploding Colon, is an alias of {{Creator/shortskirtsandexplosions}}, author of well-known fanfics ''FanFic/BackgroundPony'' and ''FanFic/TheEndOfPonies'', a fact that was not known initially and came as a surprise to many readers. The author has spoken almost nothing about ''Austraeoh'' and its sequels, only briefly acknowledging writing them in some recent blog posts. Although the author never replies to reader comments, he seems to enjoy reading them, as hidden references to last chapter's comments occasionally appear in the next chapter. Starting from about the mid-point of ''Austraeoh'' (the first story in the series), most characters and places have been named after frequent commenters on Website/FimfictionDotNet.Platform/FimfictionDotNet.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark"
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* NotSoDifferentRemark"NotSoDifferentRemark
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* ImmortalitySeeker: Spoiler for 1/3 through Eljunbyro: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash. She's bound to both Chaos and Harmony, but with only the single element to keep chaos in check, she will eventually die. If she were to recreate the elements with the Harmonic Prism, the harmony would be powerful enough to fend of chaos indefinitely, making her immortal.]]
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* ImmortalitySeeker: Spoiler for 1/3 through Eljunbyro: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash. She's bound to both Chaos and Harmony, but with only the single element to keep chaos in check, she will eventually die. If she were to recreate the elements with the Harmonic Prism, the harmony would be powerful enough to fend of off chaos indefinitely, making her immortal.]]
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* AerithAndBob: partially caused by the author's practice of naming characters after commenters' nicknames. Aeriths include Zaap Nator, Floydien, Khao, Zaid, Zytharros, Arcshod, Lasairfion. Examples of Bobs are Sam, Stu, Dalton, Jasper Clark ([[CatchPhrase "It's a northern name"]]) and Simon. Then there are traditional (canon-like) pony names such as Gold Petals, Whitemane and Nightshade.
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* AerithAndBob: partially caused by the author's practice of naming characters after commenters' nicknames. Aeriths include Zaap Nator, Floydien, Khao, Zaid, Zytharros, Arcshod, Lasairfion. Examples of Bobs are Sam, Stu, Dalton, Jasper Clark ([[CatchPhrase "It's a northern name"]]) Clark, and Simon. Then there are traditional (canon-like) pony names such as Gold Petals, Whitemane and Nightshade.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: In addition to Prince Sam Rose from Silvadel, we have Prime Enforcer Shell. He's pretty much the leader of the enforcers, and is just as badass as Rainbow Dash.
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* RankScalesWithAsskicking: In addition to Prince Sam Rose from Silvadel, we have Prime Enforcer Shell. He's pretty much the leader of the enforcers, and is just as badass as Rainbow Dash.
