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* GirlsLove: The beautifully crafted backbone of the story. Other relationships (notably Ron and Hermione) are just as well done, and almost as prominent.
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* DoomedProtagonist: [[spoiler:Harriet]] is clearly going to die at the end of the series and yet somehow, there is still supposed to be a happy ending.
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* DoomedProtagonist: DoomedProtagonist:
** [[spoiler:Harriet]] is clearly going to die at the end of the series and yet somehow, there is still supposed to be a happy ending.
** [[spoiler:Harriet]] is clearly going to die at the end of the series and yet somehow, there is still supposed to be a happy ending.
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* NecessarilyEvil: [[spoiler:Gellert Grindelwald]]... who can be surprisingly endearing and yet totally despicable at the same time.
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* NecessarilyEvil: NecessarilyEvil:
** [[spoiler:Gellert Grindelwald]]... who can be surprisingly endearing and yet totally despicable at the same time.
** [[spoiler:Gellert Grindelwald]]... who can be surprisingly endearing and yet totally despicable at the same time.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6008512/1/A_Butterfly_Effect A Butterfly Effect]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/468338/SlyGoddess SlyGoddess]], is a GenderFlip ForWantOfANail ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfiction epic that stars Harriet Lily Potter, the Girl-Who-Lived, and fleshes out Creator/JKRowling's universe while skillfully avoiding many of the common fanfiction pitfalls.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6008512/1/A_Butterfly_Effect A Butterfly Effect]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/468338/SlyGoddess SlyGoddess]], is a GenderFlip ForWantOfANail WhatIf ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfiction epic that stars Harriet Lily Potter, the Girl-Who-Lived, and fleshes out Creator/JKRowling's universe while skillfully avoiding many of the common fanfiction pitfalls.
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Currently a dead fic.
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Currently a dead fic.
DeadFic.
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* BiTheWay: Both of the [[OfficialCouple main characters]] were [[WordOfGod declared Bi]] early on, and [[spoiler:Harriet]] is self-admittedly Bi as of chapter 17.
** [[spoiler:Ginny]] on the other hand is ''still'' in denial about her attraction to [[spoiler:Harriet]], so much so that she actually [[spoiler:oblivated herself after that one time she accidentally kissed Harriet and liked it]].
** [[spoiler:Ginny]] on the other hand is ''still'' in denial about her attraction to [[spoiler:Harriet]], so much so that she actually [[spoiler:oblivated herself after that one time she accidentally kissed Harriet and liked it]].
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!!''FanFic/AButterflyEffect'' provides examples of:
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* MindManipulation: Plays a much more prominent role than in canon.
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* DarkerAndEdgier / BloodierAndGorier: Harry suffers from some rather serious abuse early on. It also contains (sometimes graphic) violence like decapitation, torture, and rape.
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* DarkerAndEdgier / BloodierAndGorier: DarkerAndEdgier: Harry suffers from some rather serious abuse early on. It also contains (sometimes graphic) violence like decapitation, torture, and rape.
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* {{Badass}}: Many characters, on all sides of the morality spectrum. Understandably and realistically, trained and/or skilled adults regularly [[RealityEnsues put even the badass children/teens in their place.]]
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*** [[spoiler:Ginny]] on the other hand is ''still'' in denial about her attraction to [[spoiler:Harriet]], so much so that she actually [[spoiler:oblivated herself after that one time she accidentally kissed Harriet and liked it]].
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* TheChessmaster: Many characters. On a literal level, Ron and Dumbledore; Harriet is also quite good, though still not quite as good as Ron, even at her best. Yes, this often leads to a ThirtyGambitPileup, for better or worse.
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* TheChessmaster: Many characters. On a literal level, Ron and Dumbledore; Harriet is also quite good, though still not quite as good as Ron, even at her best. Yes, this often leads to a ThirtyGambitPileup, GambitPileup, for better or worse.
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* FromBadToWorse: As memory serves, there are only a handful of chapters where none of the main characters are seriously injured, [[OnlyMostlyDead nearly killed]], tortured, maimed, sexually assaulted, or ''worse.'' And that's just the characters. [[spoiler: Harry gets possessed by her horcrux on multiple occassions, one of which causes the deaths of 30 people and the destruction of the Hogwarts Express.]] To be fair, almost every chapter is over 20,000 words in length, covering a vast amount of other material.
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* FromBadToWorse: As memory serves, there There are only a handful of chapters where none of the main characters are seriously injured, [[OnlyMostlyDead nearly killed]], tortured, maimed, sexually assaulted, or ''worse.'' And that's just the characters. [[spoiler: Harry gets possessed by her horcrux on multiple occassions, one of which causes the deaths of 30 people and the destruction of the Hogwarts Express.]] To be fair, almost every chapter is over 20,000 words in length, covering a vast amount of other material. ]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Ginny has quite a few moments, only some of which are called out. Likewise, Harry [[spoiler:uses Legilimency to force Pansy to view Quirell raping Lavender every time she closes her eyes.]] Why? Because Pansy was shooting spitballs at her
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* {{All Take and No Give}}: [[spoiler:Ginny's unhealthy codependent relationship with Harry. Because of her sexual confusion in the third book, Ginny morphs into a nasty jealous bitch that wants Harry to herself sans romance.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier / BloodierAndGorier: Harry suffers from some really serious abuse in the first 2 books and gets starved to death once. It also contains a significant amount of (sometimes graphic) violence like decapitation, torture and rape.
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* DarkerAndEdgier / BloodierAndGorier: Harry suffers from some really rather serious abuse in the first 2 books and gets starved to death once. early on. It also contains a significant amount of (sometimes graphic) violence like decapitation, torture torture, and rape.
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* FromBadToWorse: As memory serves, there is only one chapter (sans the prologue and short interludes) where none of the main characters are seriously injured, [[OnlyMostlyDead nearly killed]], tortured, maimed, sexually assaulted, or ''worse.'' And that's just the characters. [[spoiler: Harry gets possessed by her horcrux on multiple occassions, one of which causes the deaths of 30 people and the destruction of the Hogwarts Express.]] To be fair, almost every chapter is over 20,000 words in length, covering a vast amount of other material. This is a HurtComfortFic taken to near-extremes on both ends of hurt and comfort. As such, it can be difficult to adjust to, but it can also be extremely enjoyable.
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* FromBadToWorse: As memory serves, there is are only one chapter (sans the prologue and short interludes) a handful of chapters where none of the main characters are seriously injured, [[OnlyMostlyDead nearly killed]], tortured, maimed, sexually assaulted, or ''worse.'' And that's just the characters. [[spoiler: Harry gets possessed by her horcrux on multiple occassions, one of which causes the deaths of 30 people and the destruction of the Hogwarts Express.]] To be fair, almost every chapter is over 20,000 words in length, covering a vast amount of other material. This is a HurtComfortFic taken to near-extremes on both ends of hurt and comfort. As such, it can be difficult to adjust to, but it can also be extremely enjoyable.
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* HiddenDepths: Nicholas Flamel is made into an intensely intriguing character.
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* HiddenDepths: His role shrouded in mystery, Nicholas Flamel is made into an intensely intriguing character.relevant to the underlying original plot.
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* KangarooCourt: A rather infamous example; the Wizengamot is several times worse than its canon counterpart. It skips past "farce of a trial" and goes straight into "they're all complete morons with no self-respect, integrity, or care towards their own traditions, rules, morality, or curiosity." Thankfully, [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Dumbledore]] arrives, points out how insanely stupid they all are and the entire basis for the trial is in less than ten seconds, and they reluctantly rule--unanimously--that [[spoiler: Harriet]] isn't guilty. No, really. He talks for ten seconds, presents no new evidence or information, and the Wizengamot completely reverses its ruling from "AFateWorseThanDeath" to a unanimous "clear of all charges". You can't even blame this one on AdultsAreUseless or pure corruption, either. In a story where almost everyone is a rounded, fleshed-out character that has actual realistic motives, this instance is bizarrely out of place and nonsensical.
** Dumbledore DID provide new evidence (or at least, evidence that the court hadn't considered, namely [[spoiler:the fact that Harry's eyes had changed color, a prime indicator that she'd been possessed during the events she was charged regarding.]] Otherwise, yes, very much a colossal fail on the part of the Wizengamot.
** Dumbledore DID provide new evidence (or at least, evidence that the court hadn't considered, namely [[spoiler:the fact that Harry's eyes had changed color, a prime indicator that she'd been possessed during the events she was charged regarding.]] Otherwise, yes, very much a colossal fail on the part of the Wizengamot.
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* NecessarilyEvil: [[spoiler:Gellert Grindelwald]]... who is surprisingly endearing and yet totally despicable at the same time.
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* OriginalFlavor: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]] It feels like this...at first. Then SlyGoddess puts the characters through the wringer...and doesn't stop. Oh, and all of the characters are way more sexual than in canon. Also, magic behaves differently (and is capable of far, far more) than in canon.
* RoundCharacter: Canon Ginny is somewhat flat in terms of background and personality, whereas 'A Butterfly Effect' Ginny is detailed and believable. Dozens of characters also get this treatment, from Dumbledore to Lavender Brown.
* RoundCharacter: Canon Ginny is somewhat flat in terms of background and personality, whereas 'A Butterfly Effect' Ginny is detailed and believable. Dozens of characters also get this treatment, from Dumbledore to Lavender Brown.
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* OriginalFlavor: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]] It feels like this...at first. Then SlyGoddess the author puts the characters through the wringer...and doesn't stop. Oh, and all wringer. Also, some of the characters are way far more sexual than in canon. Also, magic behaves differently (and is capable of far, far more) than in canon.
* RoundCharacter: Canon Ginny is somewhat flat in terms of background and personality, whereas 'A Butterfly Effect' Ginny isdetailed and believable.detailed. Dozens of characters also get this treatment, from Dumbledore to Lavender Brown.
* RoundCharacter: Canon Ginny is somewhat flat in terms of background and personality, whereas 'A Butterfly Effect' Ginny is
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: [[spoiler: Pansy Parkinson]] is the end all be all of AlphaBitch {{Tsundere}}s. She has the rather miraculous and vastly entertaining ability to oscillate her behavior patterns between those of a full-blown {{Ice Queen}} and those of a consummate PrincessClassic.
* ThePowerOfLove: Considerably ''more'' awesome than in canon.
* ThePowerOfLove: Considerably ''more'' awesome than in canon.
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: [[spoiler: Pansy Parkinson]] is the end all be all of AlphaBitch {{Tsundere}}s. She has the rather miraculous and vastly entertaining ability to oscillate her behavior patterns between those of a full-blown {{Ice Queen}} and those of a consummate PrincessClassic.
* ThePowerOfLove: Considerably ''more''awesome powerful and significant than in canon.
* ThePowerOfLove: Considerably ''more''
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* {{All Take and No Give}}: [[spoiler:Ginny's unhealthy codependent relationship with Harry. Because of her sexual confusion in the third book, Ginny morphs into a nasty jealous bitch that wants Harry to herself sans romance.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier / BloodierAndGorier: Harry suffers from some really serious abuse in the first 2 books and gets starved to death once. It also contains a significant amount of (sometimes graphic) violence like decapitation, torture and rape.
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* KangarooCourt: A rather infamous example; the Wizengamot is several times worse than its canon counterpart. It skips past "farce of a trial" and goes straight into "they're all complete morons with no self-respect, integrity, or care towards their own traditions, rules, morality, or curiosity." Thankfully, [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Dumbledore]] arrives, points out how insanely stupid they all are and the entire basis for the trial is in less than ten seconds, and they reluctantly rule--unanimously--that [[spoiler: Harriet]] isn't guilty. No, really. He talks for ten seconds, presents no new evidence or information, and the Wizengamot completely reverses its ruling from "AFateWorseThanDeath" to a unanimous "clear of all charges". You can't even blame this one on AdultsAreUseless or pure corruption, either. In a story where almost everyone is a rounded, fleshed-out character that has actual realistic motives, this instance is bizarrely out of place and nonsensical.
** Dumbledore DID provide new evidence (or at least, evidence that the court hadn't considered, namely [[spoiler:the fact that Harry's eyes had changed color, a prime indicator that she'd been possessed during the events she was charged regarding.]] Otherwise, yes, very much a colossal fail on the part of the Wizengamot.
** Dumbledore DID provide new evidence (or at least, evidence that the court hadn't considered, namely [[spoiler:the fact that Harry's eyes had changed color, a prime indicator that she'd been possessed during the events she was charged regarding.]] Otherwise, yes, very much a colossal fail on the part of the Wizengamot.
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* VillainTeleportation: Obviously, wizards in HP can apparate, but [[spoiler:Grindelwald, thanks to his fourth Hallow, can portkey anywhere, passing seamlessly through any and all magical protections. The portkey is powered by thought. Almost feels like he is a everywhere, always watching.
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* VillainTeleportation: Obviously, wizards in HP can apparate, but [[spoiler:Grindelwald, thanks to his fourth Hallow, can portkey anywhere, passing seamlessly through any and all magical protections. The portkey is powered by thought. Almost feels like he is a everywhere, always watching.]]
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* VillainTeleportation: Obviously, wizards in HP can apparate, but [[spoiler:Grindelwald, thanks to his fourth Hallow, can portkey anywhere, passing seamlessly through any and all magical protections. The portkey is powered by thought. Almost feels like he is a everywhere, always watching.
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* {{I Know You're in There Somewhere Fight}}: Happens on several occasions.
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* {{"I Know You're in There Somewhere" Fight}}: Happens on several occasions.
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* {{"I Know You're in There Somewhere" Fight}}: Happens on several occasions.