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** "I just wanted... to make a good TV show." [[spoiler:Mr. Puzzles]]
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*** "So whadda we do?! If they're coming for the King, that means they're coming after us!" [[spoiler:Sir Baron Koopa]]
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*** "So whadda we do?! If they're coming for the King, that means they're coming after us!" [[spoiler:Sir Baron Koopa]]Blackfoot]]
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** "Um, actually, it's gin rummy. So..." [[spoiler:Todd, one of the WDF members [[TooDumbToLive trying to clarify what kind of rummy he and his colleagues are playing to Serial Designation N]]. Said Disassembly Drone prompty impales Todd to the wall, then decapitates him.]]
** "Hey, Uzi! I just realized no one's said my name out loud before, [[KilledMidSentence so I'm just letting you know I'm--!]]" [[spoiler:Braxton, another WDF member trying to introduce himself to Uzi as they're running for their lives from N. He gets vertically bisected by N's carving laser before he finishes.]]
** "Hey, Uzi! I just realized no one's said my name out loud before, [[KilledMidSentence so I'm just letting you know I'm--!]]" [[spoiler:Braxton, another WDF member trying to introduce himself to Uzi as they're running for their lives from N. He gets vertically bisected by N's carving laser before he finishes.]]
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** "Um, actually, it's gin rummy. So..." [[spoiler:Todd, one of the WDF members [[TooDumbToLive trying to clarify what kind of rummy he and his colleagues are playing to Serial Designation N]]. Said Disassembly Drone prompty [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impales Todd to the wall, wall]], then [[OffWithHisHead decapitates him.him]].]]
** "Hey, Uzi! I just realized no one's said my name out loud before, [[KilledMidSentence so I'm just letting you know I'm--!]]" [[spoiler:Braxton, another WDF member trying to introduce himself to Uzi as they're running for their lives from N. He gets [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe vertically bisected by N's carvinglaser laser]] before he finishes.]]
** "Hey, Uzi! I just realized no one's said my name out loud before, [[KilledMidSentence so I'm just letting you know I'm--!]]" [[spoiler:Braxton, another WDF member trying to introduce himself to Uzi as they're running for their lives from N. He gets [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe vertically bisected by N's carving
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** "'''[[WithCatLikeTread Sneaky sneaky. Sneaking away. Get snuck up on.]]''' ''(Stab)'' '''Oww.''' ''(Stabbed again)'' '''Oww.''' ''(Stabbed a couple more times)'' '''Oww. O-O-O-O-Oww.'''" [[spoiler:Serial Designation J's Solver Core (a.k.a. Eldritch J), which is stabbed to death by N's nanite acid tail after her body is destroyed by Uzi's damaged railgun.]]
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** "'''[[WithCatLikeTread Sneaky sneaky. Sneaking away. Get snuck up on.]]''' ''(Stab)'' '''Oww.''' ''(Stabbed again)'' '''Oww.''' ''(Stabbed a couple more times)'' '''Oww. O-O-O-O-Oww.'''" [[spoiler:Serial Designation J's Solver Core (a.k.a. Eldritch J), which is stabbed to death by N's nanite acid tail after her body is destroyed by Uzi's damaged railgun. Both J and the Solver recover, J in a new body, the Solver because it's a DigitalAbomination.]]
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** "Ah! There's where I left my excuse to be outside right now." [[spoiler:Reid, a Worker Drone who left his glasses outside of the plantation. Right after he finds them, he is ambushed by Tessa Elliott, who beheads him with her sword.]]
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** "Ah! There's where I left my excuse to be outside right now." [[spoiler:Reid, a Worker Drone who left his glasses outside of the plantation. Right after he finds them, he is ambushed by Tessa James Elliott, who [[OffWithHisHead beheads him with her sword.sword]].]]
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** "Purple eyes... hot topic..." [[spoiler:Rebecca, who has literally been ripped in half by Uzi after she killed Darren. She dies trying to warn her fellow campers about the transformed and vampiric Solver Uzi, bleeding out of oil.]]
** "Ohhhh... ''you...?''" [[spoiler:Braidon, recognizing (or maybe not) Rebecca's murderer. Shortly after saying this, Uzi uses her Solver powers to make his head explode.]]
** "I think I've read that's good!" [[spoiler:Emily, taking Ronathon's suggestion to split up (which was actually a horrible decision). Uzi eventually kills her and uses her body to lure Lizzy in, ripping Emily's head off and nearly killing Lizzy.]]
** "Does it at least have pictures...?" [[spoiler:Ronathon, after Solver Uzi drops a book in front of him. Uzi replies, [[PreMortemOneLiner "There isn't. I checked."]] before violently murdering him off-screen.]]
** "Ohhhh... ''you...?''" [[spoiler:Braidon, recognizing (or maybe not) Rebecca's murderer. Shortly after saying this, Uzi uses her Solver powers to make his head explode.]]
** "I think I've read that's good!" [[spoiler:Emily, taking Ronathon's suggestion to split up (which was actually a horrible decision). Uzi eventually kills her and uses her body to lure Lizzy in, ripping Emily's head off and nearly killing Lizzy.]]
** "Does it at least have pictures...?" [[spoiler:Ronathon, after Solver Uzi drops a book in front of him. Uzi replies, [[PreMortemOneLiner "There isn't. I checked."]] before violently murdering him off-screen.]]
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** "Purple eyes... hot topic..." [[spoiler:Rebecca, who has literally been [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe ripped in half at the waist]] by Uzi after she killed Darren. She dies trying to warn her fellow campers about the transformed and vampiric Solver Uzi, Uzi (albeit with cryptic description), bleeding out of oil.]]
** "Ohhhh... ''you...?''" [[spoiler:Braidon, recognizing (or maybe not) Rebecca's murderer. Shortly after saying this, Uzi uses her Solver powers to [[YourHeadASplode make his headexplode.explode]].]]
** "I think I've read that's good!" [[spoiler:Emily, taking Ronathon's suggestion to split up (which was actually a horrible decision). Uzi eventually kills her and uses her body to lure Lizzy in, [[OffWithHisHead ripping Emily's headoff off]] and nearly killing Lizzy.]]
** "Does it at least have pictures...?" [[spoiler:Ronathon, after Solver Uzi drops a book in front of him. Uzi replies, [[PreMortemOneLiner "There isn't. I checked."]] before violently murdering him off-screen. His [[ScreamDiscretionShot distant death scream]] as Uzi slaughters him might be a BigNo.]]
** "Ohhhh... ''you...?''" [[spoiler:Braidon, recognizing (or maybe not) Rebecca's murderer. Shortly after saying this, Uzi uses her Solver powers to [[YourHeadASplode make his head
** "I think I've read that's good!" [[spoiler:Emily, taking Ronathon's suggestion to split up (which was actually a horrible decision). Uzi eventually kills her and uses her body to lure Lizzy in, [[OffWithHisHead ripping Emily's head
** "Does it at least have pictures...?" [[spoiler:Ronathon, after Solver Uzi drops a book in front of him. Uzi replies, [[PreMortemOneLiner "There isn't. I checked."]] before violently murdering him off-screen. His [[ScreamDiscretionShot distant death scream]] as Uzi slaughters him might be a BigNo.]]
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** "Cute. [[KilledMidSentence You know why I keep you around, N--?]]" [[spoiler:"Tessa Elliott"... or rather, the Absolute Solver wearing Tessa's skin, who gets decapitated by Serial Designation N.]]
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** "Cute. [[KilledMidSentence You know why I keep you around, N--?]]" [[spoiler:"Tessa James Elliott"... or rather, the Absolute Solver Solver/Cyn wearing Tessa's skin, who [[OffWithHisHead gets decapitated decapitated]] by Serial Designation N.N. This death does not stick, and "Tessa" soon reveals herself.]]
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** "I get it now!" [[spoiler:Darren, who snuck away to make out with his girlfriend Rebecca, referring to his girlfriend "setting a mood" for their alone time. Unfortunately, the cabin they chose to sneak off to was inhabited by Uzi, who had just transformed into a Murder Drone herself: she proceeds to kill Darren (off-screen) and drink his oil.]]
** "Purple eyes... hot topic..." [[spoiler:Rebecca, who has literally been ripped in half by Uzi after she killed Darren. She dies trying to warn her fellow campers about the transformed and vampiric Solver Uzi, bleeding out of oil.]]
** "Ohhhh... ''you...?''" [[spoiler:Braidon, recognizing (or maybe not) Rebecca's murderer. Shortly after saying this, Uzi uses her Solver powers to make his head explode.]]
** "I think I've read that's good!" [[spoiler:Emily, taking Ronathon's suggestion to split up (which was actually a horrible decision). Uzi eventually kills her and uses her body to lure Lizzy in, ripping Emily's head off and nearly killing Lizzy.]]
** "Does it at least have pictures...?" [[spoiler:Ronathon, after Solver Uzi drops a book in front of him. Uzi replies, [[PreMortemOneLiner "There isn't. I checked."]] before violently murdering him off-screen.]]
** "Purple eyes... hot topic..." [[spoiler:Rebecca, who has literally been ripped in half by Uzi after she killed Darren. She dies trying to warn her fellow campers about the transformed and vampiric Solver Uzi, bleeding out of oil.]]
** "Ohhhh... ''you...?''" [[spoiler:Braidon, recognizing (or maybe not) Rebecca's murderer. Shortly after saying this, Uzi uses her Solver powers to make his head explode.]]
** "I think I've read that's good!" [[spoiler:Emily, taking Ronathon's suggestion to split up (which was actually a horrible decision). Uzi eventually kills her and uses her body to lure Lizzy in, ripping Emily's head off and nearly killing Lizzy.]]
** "Does it at least have pictures...?" [[spoiler:Ronathon, after Solver Uzi drops a book in front of him. Uzi replies, [[PreMortemOneLiner "There isn't. I checked."]] before violently murdering him off-screen.]]
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** "Alright!" [[spoiler:Tim, one of Frank's colleagues who is tricked by a hologram of Frank (projected by the [[DigitalAbomination Absolute Solver]]) to [[TooDumbToLive "join him standing eerily still over there in suspiciously low resolution"]]. Once he comes close enough, the Absolute Solver drags him up into the ceiling and tears him apart.]]
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** "Alright!" [[spoiler:Tim, one of Frank's colleagues who is tricked by a hologram of Frank (projected by the [[DigitalAbomination Absolute Solver]]) to [[TooDumbToLive "join him standing eerily still over there in suspiciously low resolution"]]. Once he comes close enough, the Absolute Solver [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice impales him from behind]], drags him up into the ceiling ceiling, and tears him apart.]]
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** "Your dress is really cute!" [[spoiler:Penny, a Worker Drone attending the prom, commenting on Serial Designation V's attire for the event. When Doll unleashes her Solver powers in her attempt to kill V, Penny tries to run, but Doll uses her powers to give Penny a NeckSnap before [[SquashedFlat squashing her into an oily mess]].]]
** "Ah! There's where I left my excuse to be outside right now." [[spoiler:Reid, a Worker Drone who left his glasses outside of the plantation. Right after he finds them, he is ambushed by Tessa Elliott, who beheads him with her sword.]]
** "Ah! There's where I left my excuse to be outside right now." [[spoiler:Reid, a Worker Drone who left his glasses outside of the plantation. Right after he finds them, he is ambushed by Tessa Elliott, who beheads him with her sword.]]
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** "'''[[WithCatLikeTread Sneaky sneaky. Sneaking away. Get snuck up on.]]''' ''(Stab)'' '''Oww.''' ''(Four more stabs)'' '''Oww-- Oww-- Oww-- Oww."''' [[spoiler:Serial Designation J's Solver Core, which is stabbed to death by N's nanite acid tail after her body is destroyed by Uzi's damaged railgun.]]
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** "'''[[WithCatLikeTread Sneaky sneaky. Sneaking away. Get snuck up on.]]''' ''(Stab)'' '''Oww.''' ''(Four ''(Stabbed again)'' '''Oww.''' ''(Stabbed a couple more stabs)'' '''Oww-- Oww-- Oww-- Oww."''' times)'' '''Oww. O-O-O-O-Oww.'''" [[spoiler:Serial Designation J's Solver Core, Core (a.k.a. Eldritch J), which is stabbed to death by N's nanite acid tail after her body is destroyed by Uzi's damaged railgun.]]
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** "Ugh... please just leave the light... ''(lights shut off)'' [[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe ...ugh.]]" [[spoiler:Frank, a Worker Drone who ends up discovering Serial Designation J's Solver Core awakening; after it infects nearby machinery, it proceeds to violently dismantle Frank.]]
** "Alright!" [[spoiler:Tim, one of Frank's colleagues who is tricked by a hologram of Frank (projected by the [[DigitalAbomination Absolute Solver]]) to [[TooDumbToLive "join him standing eerily still over there in suspiciously low resolution"]]. Once he comes close enough, the Absolute Solver drags him up into the ceiling and tears him apart.]]
** "Any [[BuffySpeak forensic things]] over there? Do we have fingerprints?" [[spoiler:Sarah, a Worker Drone who falls into an incredibly convincing trap set by the Absolute Solver, as it created fully realistic holograms of a crime scene. Shortly after it disperses the holograms, Sarah is never seen again; it is implied the Solver killed her.]]
** "'''[[WithCatLikeTread Sneaky sneaky. Sneaking away. Get snuck up on.]]''' ''(Stab)'' '''Oww.''' ''(Four more stabs)'' '''Oww-- Oww-- Oww-- Oww."''' [[spoiler:Serial Designation J's Solver Core, which is stabbed to death by N's nanite acid tail after her body is destroyed by Uzi's damaged railgun.]]
** "Alright!" [[spoiler:Tim, one of Frank's colleagues who is tricked by a hologram of Frank (projected by the [[DigitalAbomination Absolute Solver]]) to [[TooDumbToLive "join him standing eerily still over there in suspiciously low resolution"]]. Once he comes close enough, the Absolute Solver drags him up into the ceiling and tears him apart.]]
** "Any [[BuffySpeak forensic things]] over there? Do we have fingerprints?" [[spoiler:Sarah, a Worker Drone who falls into an incredibly convincing trap set by the Absolute Solver, as it created fully realistic holograms of a crime scene. Shortly after it disperses the holograms, Sarah is never seen again; it is implied the Solver killed her.]]
** "'''[[WithCatLikeTread Sneaky sneaky. Sneaking away. Get snuck up on.]]''' ''(Stab)'' '''Oww.''' ''(Four more stabs)'' '''Oww-- Oww-- Oww-- Oww."''' [[spoiler:Serial Designation J's Solver Core, which is stabbed to death by N's nanite acid tail after her body is destroyed by Uzi's damaged railgun.]]
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** "I will not let it use me to consume the planet!" [[spoiler:Doll, translated from Russian, referring to the [[DigitalAbomination Absolute Solver]]. Shortly after this, she is mauled to death by the Solver (which is possessing the corpse of Tessa Elliott), which later rips out her core and devours it.]]
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** "I will not let it use me to consume the planet!" [[spoiler:Doll, translated from Russian, referring to the [[DigitalAbomination Absolute Solver]].Solver. Shortly after this, she is mauled to death by the Solver (which is possessing the corpse of Tessa Elliott), which later rips out her core and devours it.]]
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*** "So whadda we do?! If they're coming for the King, that means they're coming after us! [[spoiler:Sir Baron Koopa]]
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*** "So whadda we do?! If they're coming for the King, that means they're coming after us! us!" [[spoiler:Sir Baron Koopa]]
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*** "Please, no!! I have a family!! [[spoiler:Unnamed Anarchist Peasant]]
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*** "Please, no!! I have a family!! [[spoiler:Unnamed [[spoiler:Another Unnamed Anarchist Peasant]]
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*** "[[KilledMidSentence Hey, what's going on here-]]" [[spoiler:Unnamed Innkeeper]]
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*** "Please no! I'll go! I'll go-!! [[spoiler:An Anarchist Peasant]]
*** "Please, no!! I have a family!! [[spoiler:Another Anarchist Peasant]]
*** "There's no time for drinks, we need to go now!" [[spoiler:Sherbet Knight]]
*** "Please, no!! I have a family!! [[spoiler:Another Anarchist Peasant]]
*** "There's no time for drinks, we need to go now!" [[spoiler:Sherbet Knight]]
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*** "Please no! I'll go! I'll go-!! [[spoiler:An [[spoiler:Unnamed Anarchist Peasant]]
*** "Please, no!! I have a family!![[spoiler:Another [[spoiler:Unnamed Anarchist Peasant]]
*** "There's no time for drinks, we need to go now!"[[spoiler:Sherbet [[spoiler:Unnamed Sherbet Knight]]
*** "Please, no!! I have a family!!
*** "There's no time for drinks, we need to go now!"
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*** "My nephew is a good man, and would make a better King than the three of you could ever hope to be!" [[spoiler:Lord Raymund Kassimeer]]
*** "You traitor! I won't stand for this!" [[spoiler:Sir Raymund Russet]]
*** "Long live House Blackfoot." [[spoiler:Sir Ronan Blackfoot]]
*** "I said... run..." [[spoiler:Sir Harrin Sylver]]
*** "I'm very sorry, my lord..." [[spoiler:Lord John Tyebolt]]
*** "As am I. In all my years I've never met a finer swordsman." [[spoiler:Sir John Skayles]]
*** "So whadda we do?! If they're coming for the King, that means they're coming after us! [[spoiler:Sir Baron Koopa]]
*** "For as long as I am standing, Lord Berwick Python shall not come within an inch of the King's presence! And if he does, he shall die!" [[spoiler:Lord Horace Sylver]]
*** "That's a risk we're gonna have to take..." [[spoiler:Sir Siebold Skayles]]
*** "Wait, what?!" [[spoiler:Lord Kolfax]]
*** "You traitor! I won't stand for this!" [[spoiler:Sir Raymund Russet]]
*** "Long live House Blackfoot." [[spoiler:Sir Ronan Blackfoot]]
*** "I said... run..." [[spoiler:Sir Harrin Sylver]]
*** "I'm very sorry, my lord..." [[spoiler:Lord John Tyebolt]]
*** "As am I. In all my years I've never met a finer swordsman." [[spoiler:Sir John Skayles]]
*** "So whadda we do?! If they're coming for the King, that means they're coming after us! [[spoiler:Sir Baron Koopa]]
*** "For as long as I am standing, Lord Berwick Python shall not come within an inch of the King's presence! And if he does, he shall die!" [[spoiler:Lord Horace Sylver]]
*** "That's a risk we're gonna have to take..." [[spoiler:Sir Siebold Skayles]]
*** "Wait, what?!" [[spoiler:Lord Kolfax]]
