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Pandemonium,formerly named ''La Otra Vida"/"The Other Life" and "Zombie Alive",is a story not yet written by Tropers/{{Astriferous}}.
Alexandra was a though-as-nails criminal who didn't mind anyone's business,until she crosses paths with Mortin,who is severely injured due to being persecuted to death by a rival clan.Oh,and everyone here is a demon.
Alexandra was a though-as-nails criminal who didn't mind anyone's business,until she crosses paths with Mortin,who is severely injured due to being persecuted to death by a rival clan.Oh,and everyone here is a demon.
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Pandemonium,formerly named ''La Otra Vida"/"The Other Life" and "Zombie Alive",is Alive", is a story not yet written by Tropers/{{Astriferous}}.
Alexandra was a though-as-nails criminal who didn't mind anyone'sbusiness,until business, until she crosses paths with Mortin,who Mortin, who is severely injured due to being persecuted to death by a rival clan.Oh,and clan. Oh, and everyone here is a demon.
Alexandra was a though-as-nails criminal who didn't mind anyone's
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%%* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette:Alexandra and Hester.
%%* TheFakeCutie:Hester,'''''so fucking much'''''.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent: They have human colored skin,but with dragon-like scales.Female demons have wings,whereas male ones have poisonous tails.[[spoiler:Final forms are closer to [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]].]]
%%* SugaryMalice:Hester.
%%* TallPoppySyndrome:As demons with both tail and wings are considered "unfairly advantaged",they are persecuted to be assasinated.
* ThemeTwinNaming: Not only twins,but all siblings in a family get this treatment,and are subject in some point of their lives in a [[InvoluntaryBattleToTheDeath death battle]] until there's [[OneSteveLimit one left]].
* TransformationHorror:Mortin tries so hard to avoid this.[[spoiler:Other fully-fledged demons,have succeeded though this process,to the point of leaving their "humanity" behind.]]
%%* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette:Alexandra and Hester.
%%* TheFakeCutie:Hester,'''''so fucking much'''''.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent: They have human colored skin,but with dragon-like scales.Female demons have wings,whereas male ones have poisonous tails.[[spoiler:Final forms are closer to [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]].]]
%%* SugaryMalice:Hester.
%%* TallPoppySyndrome:As demons with both tail and wings are considered "unfairly advantaged",they are persecuted to be assasinated.
* ThemeTwinNaming: Not only twins,but all siblings in a family get this treatment,and are subject in some point of their lives in a [[InvoluntaryBattleToTheDeath death battle]] until there's [[OneSteveLimit one left]].
* TransformationHorror:Mortin tries so hard to avoid this.[[spoiler:Other fully-fledged demons,have succeeded though this process,to the point of leaving their "humanity" behind.]]
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%%* DarknessVonGothickname:Everyone.
DarknessVonGothickname: Everyone.
%%*EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette:Alexandra EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Alexandra and Hester.
%%*TheFakeCutie:Hester,'''''so TheFakeCutie: Hester,'''''so fucking much'''''.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent: They have human coloredskin,but skin, but with dragon-like scales.scales. Female demons have wings,whereas wings, whereas male ones have poisonous tails.tails. [[spoiler:Final forms are closer to [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]].]]
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SugaryMalice: Hester.
%%*TallPoppySyndrome:As TallPoppySyndrome: As demons with both tail and wings are considered "unfairly advantaged",they advantaged", they are persecuted to be assasinated.
* ThemeTwinNaming: Not onlytwins,but twins, but all siblings in a family get this treatment,and treatment, and are subject in some point of their lives in a [[InvoluntaryBattleToTheDeath death battle]] until there's [[OneSteveLimit one left]].
*TransformationHorror:Mortin TransformationHorror: Mortin tries so hard to avoid this.this. [[spoiler:Other fully-fledged demons,have demons, have succeeded though this process,to process, to the point of leaving their "humanity" behind.]]
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* AntiHero:Alexandra.
* TheBrute:Vladimir.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder:Alexandra has this so badly.
* DarknessVonGothickname:Everyone.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette:Alexandra and Hester.
* TheFakeCutie:Hester,'''''so fucking much'''''.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent:And how.They have human colored skin,but with dragon-like scales.Female demons have wings,whereas male ones have poisonous tails.[[spoiler:Final forms are closer to [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]].]]
* TheBrute:Vladimir.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder:Alexandra has this so badly.
* DarknessVonGothickname:Everyone.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette:Alexandra and Hester.
* TheFakeCutie:Hester,'''''so fucking much'''''.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent:And how.They have human colored skin,but with dragon-like scales.Female demons have wings,whereas male ones have poisonous tails.[[spoiler:Final forms are closer to [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]].]]
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* ThemeTwinNaming:UpToEleven.Not only twins,but all siblings in a family get this treatment,and are subject in some point of their lives in a [[InvoluntaryBattleToTheDeath death battle]] until there's [[OneSteveLimit one left]].
* ThemeTwinNaming:UpToEleven.Not only twins,but all siblings in a family get this treatment,and are subject in some point of their lives in a [[InvoluntaryBattleToTheDeath death battle]] until there's [[OneSteveLimit one left]].
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*ThemeTwinNaming:UpToEleven.Not only twins,but all siblings in a family get this treatment,and are subject in some point of their lives in a [[InvoluntaryBattleToTheDeath death battle]] until there's [[OneSteveLimit one left]].
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Pandemonium,formerly named ‘’La Otra Vida”/“The Other Life” and “Zombie Alive”,is a story not yet written by Tropers/{{Astriferous}}.
Alexandra was a though-as-nails criminal who didn't mind anyone's business,until she crosses paths with Mortin,who is severely injured due to being persecuted to death by a rival clan.Oh,and everyone here is a demon.
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!!''Pandemonium'' contains examples of:
* AntiHero:Alexandra.
* TheBrute:Vladimir.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette:Alexandra and Hester.
*TheFakeCutie:[[spoiler:Hester]],'''''so fucking much'''''.
*OurDemonsAreDifferent:And how.They have human colored skin,but with dragon-like scales.Female demons have wings,whereas male ones have poisonous tails.[[spoiler:Final forms are closer to [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]].]]
* SugaryMalice:Hester.
*TransformationHorror:Mortin tries so hard to avoid this.[[spoiler:Other fully-fledged demons,have succeeded though this process,to the point of leaving their “humanity” behind.]]
Alexandra was a though-as-nails criminal who didn't mind anyone's business,until she crosses paths with Mortin,who is severely injured due to being persecuted to death by a rival clan.Oh,and everyone here is a demon.
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!!''Pandemonium'' contains examples of:
* AntiHero:Alexandra.
* TheBrute:Vladimir.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette:Alexandra and Hester.
*TheFakeCutie:[[spoiler:Hester]],'''''so fucking much'''''.
*OurDemonsAreDifferent:And how.They have human colored skin,but with dragon-like scales.Female demons have wings,whereas male ones have poisonous tails.[[spoiler:Final forms are closer to [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]].]]
* SugaryMalice:Hester.
*TransformationHorror:Mortin tries so hard to avoid this.[[spoiler:Other fully-fledged demons,have succeeded though this process,to the point of leaving their “humanity” behind.]]
