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* ShootEveryoneThatMoves: A battle in which this is the only option occurs at the end of ''Disappearance''. The mayor's hall is complete chaos, with protesters, David's workers, and little kids mixed in - nobody can see who they're targeting, they just have to shoot.

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* CruelTwistEnding: We learn that [[spoiler: Cary's mom died of cancer, but that he's going to make an active effort to be strong and move on]] ''less than a hundred pages before'' [[spoiler: Rollins kills Cary.]]

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* CruelTwistEnding: We learn that [[spoiler: Cary's mom died of cancer, but that he's going to make an active effort to be strong and move on]] ''less than a hundred pages before'' words'' before [[spoiler: Rollins kills Cary.]]
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* CruelTwistEnding: We learn that [[spoiler: Cary's mom died of cancer, but that he's going to make an active effort to be strong and move on]] ''less than a hundred pages before'' [[spoiler: Rollins kills Cary.]]


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* DeusAngstMachina: The entire series. In particular, the pileup of really terrible events that happen to the daycare - among them [[spoiler: Shelby's death, Cary's death, Jem giving away all of their names except Marco's to David, Kristopher's death, and Stella's RandomTeleportation]] - were unrealistically tragic, even for a fan fiction of Gone.
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* [[spoiler: DecoyAntagonist: The author originally planned to make him a major antagonist, but he couldn't figure out where to take that plot, so he just had Yasuna kill him.]]

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* [[spoiler: DecoyAntagonist: [[DiscOneFinalBoss Decoy Antagonist]]: The author originally planned to make him a major antagonist, but he couldn't figure out where to take that plot, so he just had Yasuna kill him.]]

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The chapters are very, very short (typically between 100 and 800 words), meaning that the author can get a lot to happen very quickly. The fic is divided into several 'books', each spanning fifty chapters exactly. The first book has now been completed, called ''The Disappearance''. The second is in progress, and the working title is ''The Control''.

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The chapters are very, very short (typically between 100 and 800 words), meaning that the author can get a lot to happen very quickly. The fic is divided into several 'books', each spanning fifty chapters exactly. The first book has now been completed, called ''The Disappearance''. ''Disappearance''. The second is in progress, and the working title is ''The Control''.
''Control''.



* ADeathInTheLimelight: [[spoiler: The fist half of ''The Control'' focuses heavily on Kristopher's character arc, only for him to die halfway through the book.]]

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* ADeathInTheLimelight: [[spoiler: The fist half of ''The Control'' ''Control'' focuses heavily on Kristopher's character arc, only for him to die halfway through the book.]]



* CycleOfRevenge: Discussed in Kaelyn's narration in ''The Control'', through a borderline AuthorFilibuster:

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* CycleOfRevenge: Discussed in Kaelyn's narration in ''The Control'', ''Control'', through a borderline AuthorFilibuster:



* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: ''The Disappearance'' has one. Nobody except David get what they want ''in the least''. Here's a sum of all the bad things that happened:]]

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* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: ''The Disappearance'' ''Disappearance'' has one. Nobody except David get what they want ''in the least''. Here's a sum of all the bad things that happened:]]



** David gets a few [[OutOfCharacterMoment Out of Character Moments]] towards the end of ''The Disappearance'', foreshadowing [[spoiler: his multiple personalities.]]

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** David gets a few [[OutOfCharacterMoment Out of Character Moments]] towards the end of ''The Disappearance'', ''Disappearance'', foreshadowing [[spoiler: his multiple personalities.SplitPersonality.]]



** [[spoiler: David also sends Rollins on such a mission, to kill Will, Cary, Gav, Sarah, Paige, and Kaelyn. Needless to say, it doesn't go very well.]]

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** [[spoiler: David also sends Rollins on such a mission, to kill Will, Cary, Gav, Sarah, Paige, and Kaelyn. Needless to say, it doesn't go very well.well, although he successfully kills Cary before giving up.]]



* SwitchingPOV: In the eighty chapters so far, the complete list of narrators is as follows: Gav, Hazel, Grady, Maria, David, Kaelyn, Tobias, Alex, Nick, Sarah, Cary, Will, Kristopher, Cassie, Rollins, Paige, Yasuna, Eve, Fisher, Marco, Isabelle, Gerard, Charlie, and Bonnie.

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* [[spoiler: SplitPersonality: David has one.]]
** [[spoiler: SplitPersonalityTakeover: He seems to be approaching one by the end of ''Control''.]]
* SwitchingPOV: In the eighty chapters so far, the complete list of narrators is as follows: Gav, Hazel, Grady, Maria, David, Kaelyn, Tobias, Alex, Nick, Sarah, Cary, Will, Kristopher, Cassie, Rollins, Paige, Yasuna, Eve, Fisher, Marco, Isabelle, Gerard, Charlie, Bonnie, and Bonnie.Resse.



* VillainousBSOD: ''All'' of David's supporters except Yasuna ([[spoiler: and yes, that does include David himself]]) in ''The Control''.

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* VillainousBSOD: ''All'' of David's supporters except Yasuna ([[spoiler: and yes, that does include David himself]]) in ''The Control''.''Control''.


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* [[spoiler: SplitPersonalityTakeover: He seems to be approaching one by the end of ''Control''.]]

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David calls a meeting in the gym for all the kids that show up. Gav, Maria, and Alex [[TravelingAtTheSpeedOfPlot make it back to town while the meeting is still in progress.]] David shoots Alex [[BoomHeadshot in the head]], [[WeHardlyKnewYe killing him]].\\

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David calls a meeting in the gym for all the kids that show up. Gav, Maria, and Alex [[TravelingAtTheSpeedOfPlot make it back to town while the meeting is still in progress.]] David shoots Alex [[ShootTheDog shoots]] [[{{Redshirt}} Alex]] [[BoomHeadshot in the head]], [[WeHardlyKnewYe killing him]].\\



David shows up at Kristopher's house and tells him that he knew that he had given up Maddy and Sloane involuntarily the entire time. Kristopher tries to explain, but David [[BoomHeadshot shoots him in the head]], killing him.\\
Grady, restless before the attack on David with the protesters, goes to Hazel's house to hang out. She doesn't want to hang out, but she helps him after she accidentally closes a door on his fingers.\\

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David shows up at Kristopher's house and tells him that he knew that he had given up Maddy and Sloane involuntarily the entire time. Kristopher tries to explain, but David [[BoomHeadshot shoots him in the head]], [[ShootTheDog killing him.him]].\\
Grady, restless before the attack on David with the protesters, goes to Hazel's house to hang out. She doesn't want to hang out, but she helps him after she accidentally [[AmusingInjuries closes a door on his fingers.fingers]].\\


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Paige and Kaelyn meet Sarah at the house where she took the kids.\\
Jem finds out about Kristopher's death and blames himself for it.\\
Yasuna and Cassie discover Charlie hiding in his house. Yasuna is in favor of killing him, especially after he causes an explosion with his hands, but Cassie is dead-set against it, not wanting to kill any more kids. So, Yasuna [[KickTheDog stabs Cassie in the neck]] and takes Charlie anyway.\\
Cary decides to make a concious effort to be strong and move past his mother's death. Then, he hears a knock at the door. It's Rollins, who [[ShootTheDog kills]] [[YankTheDogsChain him]].\\
Paige sees Jem kneeling over Kristopher's body. Jem tells her that he was TheMole, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain alerting Paige that one of David's friends was on the way to kill her and her friends.]] She punches Jem in the face in anger.\\
Will wakes up, and is in immense pain.\\
Yasuna takes Charlie and Cassie to David's house, David orders Yasuna to kill Charlie, which she does. The two then eat lunch together.\\
Exhausted, Rollins goes to Tobias's house. Together, the two agree to find a way to get revenge on David.\\
Paige goes back to the daycare and informs Sarah and Kaelyn that they have to stay inside the house for the time being. They agree to have Marco get the kids food from the campsite, and to then get Will.\\
Bonnie, a protester who had lost her little brother in the attacks, prepares to fight David.\\
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler: Gav beating up David.]]


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* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler: When he beats up David.]]
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** [[spoiler: Rollins giving Will brain damage]], although he was attempting to ShootTheDog.


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* KickTheDog: When he [[spoiler: gives Will brain damage,]] although he was attempting to ShootTheDog.

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* KickTheDog: The series gets quite a few moments.
** Gav beating up Cassie for information.
** [[spoiler: Gav punching Rollins in the face and knocking him out for two hours.]]
** [[spoiler: Yasuna stabbing Cassie in the neck to prevent her from stopping Charlie's capture.]]



* ShootTheDog: The series gets quite a few moments; virtually every death in the series was done to someone that was completely unprepared to stop it.
** [[spoiler: David and Jem killing the babies in the daycare.]]
** [[spoiler: Yasuna, Tobias, Jem, and Cassie killing the kids that David had captured.]]
** [[spoiler: Yasuna killing Charlie.]]
** [[spoiler: Rollins killing Cary.]]
** David shooting Alex in the head.
** [[spoiler: David killing Kristopher.]]



* ShootTheDog: So many times! Moments that count include...
** [[spoiler: Killing the babies in the daycare with Jem.]]
** Shooting Alex in the head and killing him.
** [[spoiler: Killing Kristopher.]]



* ShootTheDog: When he [[spoiler: helps kill the kids that David captured.]]



* KickTheDog: When she [[spoiler: stabs Cassie in the neck to prevent her from stopping her from capturing Charlie.]]
* ShootTheDog: When she [[spoiler: kills Charlie.]]
** The scene where she [[spoiler: helped kill the kids that David captured]] also counts.



* ShootTheDog: When he [[spoiler: kills Cary.]]



* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler: He's one of the ones that killed the kids that David captured.]]

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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler: He's one of the ones that killed the kids that David captured.]]


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* ShootTheDog: When she [[spoiler: helps kill the kids that David captured.]]


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* [[spoiler: ShootTheDog: When he kills the daycare babies.]]


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* [[spoiler: MauveShirt: His purpose was to show that yes, Rollins really was a threat to the daycare workers.]]


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* CurbStompBattle: Any fight that he gets into ends up being one of these, due to his power.


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* KickTheDog: When he [[spoiler: punches a severely traumatized Rollins so hard that he swallows one of his own teeth.]]
** The scene where he beat up Cassie for information also counts.
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Grady, restless before the attack on David with the protesters, goes to Hazel's house to hang out. She doesn't want to hang out, but she helps him after she accidentally closes a door on his fingers.\\
Rollins picks himself up from Gav's doorstep and goes to Cary's house.\\
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* {{Flanderization}}: Her love for David became ''very'' exaggerated starting ''The Control''.

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Rollins reluctantly prepares to kill the people on the list that David gave him.\\
Tobias swears to get revenge on David for Nick's death.\\
Cady and her protesters regroup after their crushing loss against David. They make plans to make him surrender that night, and to kill him if he doesn't.\\
Kristopher walks to Paige's house and tells her where the kids are.\\
Hazel wakes up to find out that Grady has left.\\
Cassie, Tobias, and Jem deliver breakfast to everybody in Grantsville.\\
Rollins goes to Will's house and shoots him in the head.\\
Paige and Kristopher walk to Will's house and see his unconscious body. They take him inside and tend to his injuries.\\
Kaelyn walks to the daycare for her shift to take care of the kids, only to find Shelby and the babies dead, with everyone else missing.\\
Rollins goes to Gav's house with the intention to shoot him; [[CurbStompBattle Gav punches him in the face so hard that he swallows one of his own teeth.]]\\
Kristopher gets Sarah, and she takes the kids from Gerard's house to the empty house next door.\\
Charlie, the kid who caused the explosions in the Mayor's Hall, wonders whether or not his mom is alive.\\
Kaelyn shows up at Will's house. The two of them leave Will and walk to Gerard's house.\\
David shows up at Kristopher's house and tells him that he knew that he had given up Maddy and Sloane involuntarily the entire time. Kristopher tries to explain, but David [[BoomHeadshot shoots him in the head]], killing him.\\
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David and Jem return to the Mayor's Hall to find Nick dead and everybody else injured. Everybody except for the kids are herded out, and the kids are killed.\\
It turns out that all the kids that disappeared from the daycare had been teleported by Stella to her older brother, Gerard's house. Kristopher finds them there and vows to save them.\\
Grady, who had become one of the protesters, goes into Hazel's house so that David can't find him. He starts to show an interest in Hazel, but she tells him to back off.\\
'''The end.'''

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Meanwhile, at school, there's chaos. David quickly goes home, brings a gun, and declares himself in charge until the adults return. Grady resists him, so [[DisappropriateRetribution David shoots him in the arm.]]\\

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Meanwhile, at school, there's chaos. David quickly goes home, brings a gun, and declares himself in charge until the adults return. Grady resists him, so [[DisappropriateRetribution [[DisproportionateRetribution David shoots him in the arm.]]\\


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It's Jem and Shelby's watch at the daycare. Jem shoots Shelby in the head, revealing him to be TheMole. He and David shoot all the babies in the daycare. However, when they go to shoot the older kids, [[DeusExMachina they all disappear]].\\
The protesters arrive at the Mayor's Hall and go inside to rescue the kids. David's friends fight back. The kids had already escaped, due to the explosion, creating chaos as everyone tried not to shoot the people on their own side. In the end, an explosion knocks out everyone in the room. Nick is blown across the room; he lands on his neck, which kills him.\\
David and Jem look around for the kids, but they're nowhere to be found. They decide to head back to town.\\

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* TheyreCalledPersonalIssuesForAReason: He never tells any of the daycare workers that [[spoiler: his mom has cancer.]]



* FriendlessBackground



The book opens with Gav driving directly into a wall that suddenly appears in front of him. His mom was in the seat beside him; she's gone now, and he doesn't know what happened to her. He sees another car where the adults disappeared, with two little kids (Alex and Maria) inside it. He takes them with him to go back to town.//
Meanwhile, at school, there's chaos. David quickly goes home, brings a gun, and declares himself in charge until the adults return. Grady resists him, so [[DisappropriateRetribution David shoots him in the arm.]]//
Grady discovers that he can [[TouchOfDeath disintegrate anything he touches]]... but only with the arm that was shot by David's gun.//
David calls a meeting in the gym for all the kids that show up. Gav, Maria, and Alex [[TravelingAtTheSpeedOfPlot make it back to town while the meeting is still in progress.]] David shoots Alex [[BoomHeadshot in the head]], [[WeHardlyKnewYe killing him]].//
This naturally outrages the other kids, but David basically explains that since he has a gun, there's nothing they can do about it. He wants to kill all the kids under the age of six, because they can't work to make food.//
This inspires Kaelyn to take her brother, Aubrey, and anyone else she can find to make a daycare to protect the kids.//
Meanwhile, Maria makes plans to get revenge on David for killing Alex.//
That night, Tobias and Nick, two of David's friends, go back to the gym to dispose of Alex's body. But he [[NotQuiteDead turns out not to be entirely dead]]... and he can [[TouchOfDeath disintegrate your skin by touching it.]] Tobias and Nick flee in a panic.//
Meanwhile, Maria sneaks into David's room (in the Mayor's Hall) and tries to stab him with a butter knife. It doesn't work - he just wakes up.//
David starts to beat her up. He probably would've killed her, if Nick hadn't come into David's room to tell him about Alex.//
Meanwhile, Kaelyn has recruited plenty of others to get kids for the daycare, including Will, Cary, Jem, and Sarah. A baby that Sarah is holding starts [[PlayingWithFire shooting fireballs uncontrollably,]] almost killing them.//
Nick begins to take David to Alex.//
Will and a girl he recruited, Paige, are looking for kids when Nick, David, and Tobias come down the street, following Alex. Will and Paige hide as David discovers that shooting Alex results in nothing happening. Will and Paige decide to regroup with Kaelyn and the others.//
Gav notices that Maria is missing and he tracks her to the Mayor's Hall. He asks Cassie where she is, but instead of being helpful, Cassie decides to pull a knife on him, as per David's orders.//
Kaelyn, Jem, Sarah, and Cary decide that they have to kill the baby that was PlayingWithFire - Jem is the one to stab it. Will and Paige then come back. They all decide to go into separate groups - Sarah and Cary take the kids they already have to the lake, and the others go to find more kids.//
David realizes that every time he shoots Alex, his black glow gets stronger. So he and Nick put on gloves (to avoid the TouchOfDeath) and drag him back to town.//
Gav [[CurbStompBattle beats up Cassie]] to figure out where David sleeps.//
Cary gets all the kids into a car and starts to drive to the lake.//
David and Nick lock Alex in a room, but Alex breaks free with his TouchOfDeath.//

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The book opens with Gav driving directly into a wall that suddenly appears in front of him. His mom was in the seat beside him; she's gone now, and he doesn't know what happened to her. He sees another car where the adults disappeared, with two little kids (Alex and Maria) inside it. He takes them with him to go back to town.//
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Meanwhile, at school, there's chaos. David quickly goes home, brings a gun, and declares himself in charge until the adults return. Grady resists him, so [[DisappropriateRetribution David shoots him in the arm.]]//
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Grady discovers that he can [[TouchOfDeath disintegrate anything he touches]]... but only with the arm that was shot by David's gun.//
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David calls a meeting in the gym for all the kids that show up. Gav, Maria, and Alex [[TravelingAtTheSpeedOfPlot make it back to town while the meeting is still in progress.]] David shoots Alex [[BoomHeadshot in the head]], [[WeHardlyKnewYe killing him]].//
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This naturally outrages the other kids, but David basically explains that since he has a gun, there's nothing they can do about it. He wants to kill all the kids under the age of six, because they can't work to make food.//
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This inspires Kaelyn to take her brother, Aubrey, and anyone else she can find to make a daycare to protect the kids.//
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Meanwhile, Maria makes plans to get revenge on David for killing Alex.//
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That night, Tobias and Nick, two of David's friends, go back to the gym to dispose of Alex's body. But he [[NotQuiteDead turns out not to be entirely dead]]... and he can [[TouchOfDeath disintegrate your skin by touching it.]] Tobias and Nick flee in a panic.//
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Meanwhile, Maria sneaks into David's room (in the Mayor's Hall) and tries to stab him with a butter knife. It doesn't work - he just wakes up.//
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David starts to beat her up. He probably would've killed her, if Nick hadn't come into David's room to tell him about Alex.//
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Meanwhile, Kaelyn has recruited plenty of others to get kids for the daycare, including Will, Cary, Jem, and Sarah. A baby that Sarah is holding starts [[PlayingWithFire shooting fireballs uncontrollably,]] almost killing them.//
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Nick begins to take David to Alex.//
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Will and a girl he recruited, Paige, are looking for kids when Nick, David, and Tobias come down the street, following Alex. Will and Paige hide as David discovers that shooting Alex results in nothing happening. Will and Paige decide to regroup with Kaelyn and the others.//
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Gav notices that Maria is missing and he tracks her to the Mayor's Hall. He asks Cassie where she is, but instead of being helpful, Cassie decides to pull a knife on him, as per David's orders.//
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Kaelyn, Jem, Sarah, and Cary decide that they have to kill the baby that was PlayingWithFire - Jem is the one to stab it. Will and Paige then come back. They all decide to go into separate groups - Sarah and Cary take the kids they already have to the lake, and the others go to find more kids.//
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David realizes that every time he shoots Alex, his black glow gets stronger. So he and Nick put on gloves (to avoid the TouchOfDeath) and drag him back to town.//
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Gav [[CurbStompBattle beats up Cassie]] to figure out where David sleeps.//
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Cary gets all the kids into a car and starts to drive to the lake.//
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To Hazel decides not to tell anyone that she saw her father last night.\\
Everybody finally sets up the daycare at a campsite. Marco and Sarah get the first watch; Will and Paige walk home together.\\
David's friends all regroup; they all go on a mission to take everyone's food and little kids.\\
Tobias searches Eve's house.\\
Nick takes Fisher's little sister away. Jobs comes to Fisher asking if he wants revenge, but Fisher turns out to
be expanded.too young to join Fisher's rebellion.\\
Marco and Sarah feed the kids. They give one of them peanut butter, and she has an allergic reaction and dies.\\
Rollins reports to David a bunch of people meeting in a basement.\\
Cady is leading a bunch of protesters to try to save the kids that David's friends captured.\\
Isabelle, a little kid, was captured by David and thrown into the basement of the Mayor's Hall. But an explosion breaks down the door, and she escapes.\\

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Will and Paige recruit Kristopher's sisters, Maddy and Sloane. Kristopher works for David, so he makes them promise not to tell David what happened.//
Gav rescues Maria and takes her back to his house.//
Cary and Sarah discover that the lake is outside the barrier. A little kid named Connor touches the barrier and dies.//
David stabs Alex with a knife, and he actually does die this time. David tells Tobias and Nick to take Alex away.//
Kristopher tells David that Will and Paige forced him to give up Maddy and Sloane at gunpoint (which is a lie). David tells him that he already knew Will and Paige were taking kids, which makes Kristopher nervous about Maddy and Sloane's fate.//
David sees Cassie with a black eye, and asks what happens. After Cassie gives her explanation, David swears to go to Gav's house and kill both him and Maria.//
Grady sees Tobias and Nick dragging Alex across the street. When they explain why, Grady gets scared that David will kill him if he reveals his superpower.//
Sarah and Cary take the kids away from the barrier and wait for the others to show up. Cary angsts a bit about a nonspecific topic, and Sarah discovers that [[PowerHair her hair]] is a LivingBattery.//
Hazel is lying in her bed when her father comes in, despite her father having disappeared with the other adults, and he [[PervertDad molests her]].//
David goes to Gav's house, and shoots Maria in the stomach. Gav punches him in the face so hard that he retreats.//
Tobias and Nick successfully dispose of Alex's body against the barrier.//
Will, Paige, and a new recruit named Marco briefly regroup with Kaelyn and Jem. The former three decide to go back to the camp.//
David gives Rollins a list of people that he wants killed, including Will, Paige, Kaelyn, Gav, Cary, and Sarah.//
Gav fixes Maria up and puts her to bed.//
Jem and Kaelyn show up where Sarah and Cary are waiting with more kids; they all walk to a campsite together.//
David goes home and reveals two things to the reader: his father knew the border would appear before it happened, and David has multiple personalities: an evil one and a good one.//

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Will and Paige recruit Kristopher's sisters, Maddy and Sloane. Kristopher works for David, so he makes them promise not to tell David what happened.//
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Gav rescues Maria and takes her back to his house.//
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Cary and Sarah discover that the lake is outside the barrier. A little kid named Connor touches the barrier and dies.//
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David stabs Alex with a knife, and he actually does die this time. David tells Tobias and Nick to take Alex away.//
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Kristopher tells David that Will and Paige forced him to give up Maddy and Sloane at gunpoint (which is a lie). David tells him that he already knew Will and Paige were taking kids, which makes Kristopher nervous about Maddy and Sloane's fate.//
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David sees Cassie with a black eye, and asks what happens. After Cassie gives her explanation, David swears to go to Gav's house and kill both him and Maria.//
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Grady sees Tobias and Nick dragging Alex across the street. When they explain why, Grady gets scared that David will kill him if he reveals his superpower.//
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Sarah and Cary take the kids away from the barrier and wait for the others to show up. Cary angsts a bit about a nonspecific topic, and Sarah discovers that [[PowerHair her hair]] is a LivingBattery.//
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Hazel is lying in her bed when her father comes in, despite her father having disappeared with the other adults, and he [[PervertDad molests her]].//
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David goes to Gav's house, and shoots Maria in the stomach. Gav punches him in the face so hard that he retreats.//
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Tobias and Nick successfully dispose of Alex's body against the barrier.//
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Will, Paige, and a new recruit named Marco briefly regroup with Kaelyn and Jem. The former three decide to go back to the camp.//
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David gives Rollins a list of people that he wants killed, including Will, Paige, Kaelyn, Gav, Cary, and Sarah.//
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Gav fixes Maria up and puts her to bed.//
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Jem and Kaelyn show up where Sarah and Cary are waiting with more kids; they all walk to a campsite together.//
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David goes home and reveals two things to the reader: his father knew the border would appear before it happened, and David has multiple personalities: an evil one and a good one.//\\

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The summaries go chapter by chapter, with a new paragraph break for each new chapter.
[[folder:''The Disappearance'']]
The book opens with Gav driving directly into a wall that suddenly appears in front of him. His mom was in the seat beside him; she's gone now, and he doesn't know what happened to her. He sees another car where the adults disappeared, with two little kids (Alex and Maria) inside it. He takes them with him to go back to town.//
Meanwhile, at school, there's chaos. David quickly goes home, brings a gun, and declares himself in charge until the adults return. Grady resists him, so [[DisappropriateRetribution David shoots him in the arm.]]//
Grady discovers that he can [[TouchOfDeath disintegrate anything he touches]]... but only with the arm that was shot by David's gun.//
David calls a meeting in the gym for all the kids that show up. Gav, Maria, and Alex [[TravelingAtTheSpeedOfPlot make it back to town while the meeting is still in progress.]] David shoots Alex [[BoomHeadshot in the head]], [[WeHardlyKnewYe killing him]].//
This naturally outrages the other kids, but David basically explains that since he has a gun, there's nothing they can do about it. He wants to kill all the kids under the age of six, because they can't work to make food.//
This inspires Kaelyn to take her brother, Aubrey, and anyone else she can find to make a daycare to protect the kids.//
Meanwhile, Maria makes plans to get revenge on David for killing Alex.//
That night, Tobias and Nick, two of David's friends, go back to the gym to dispose of Alex's body. But he [[NotQuiteDead turns out not to be entirely dead]]... and he can [[TouchOfDeath disintegrate your skin by touching it.]] Tobias and Nick flee in a panic.//
Meanwhile, Maria sneaks into David's room (in the Mayor's Hall) and tries to stab him with a butter knife. It doesn't work - he just wakes up.//
David starts to beat her up. He probably would've killed her, if Nick hadn't come into David's room to tell him about Alex.//
Meanwhile, Kaelyn has recruited plenty of others to get kids for the daycare, including Will, Cary, Jem, and Sarah. A baby that Sarah is holding starts [[PlayingWithFire shooting fireballs uncontrollably,]] almost killing them.//
Nick begins to take David to Alex.//
Will and a girl he recruited, Paige, are looking for kids when Nick, David, and Tobias come down the street, following Alex. Will and Paige hide as David discovers that shooting Alex results in nothing happening. Will and Paige decide to regroup with Kaelyn and the others.//
Gav notices that Maria is missing and he tracks her to the Mayor's Hall. He asks Cassie where she is, but instead of being helpful, Cassie decides to pull a knife on him, as per David's orders.//
Kaelyn, Jem, Sarah, and Cary decide that they have to kill the baby that was PlayingWithFire - Jem is the one to stab it. Will and Paige then come back. They all decide to go into separate groups - Sarah and Cary take the kids they already have to the lake, and the others go to find more kids.//
David realizes that every time he shoots Alex, his black glow gets stronger. So he and Nick put on gloves (to avoid the TouchOfDeath) and drag him back to town.//
Gav [[CurbStompBattle beats up Cassie]] to figure out where David sleeps.//
Cary gets all the kids into a car and starts to drive to the lake.//
David and Nick lock Alex in a room, but Alex breaks free with his TouchOfDeath.//
Will and Paige recruit Kristopher's sisters, Maddy and Sloane. Kristopher works for David, so he makes them promise not to tell David what happened.//
Gav rescues Maria and takes her back to his house.//
Cary and Sarah discover that the lake is outside the barrier. A little kid named Connor touches the barrier and dies.//
David stabs Alex with a knife, and he actually does die this time. David tells Tobias and Nick to take Alex away.//
Kristopher tells David that Will and Paige forced him to give up Maddy and Sloane at gunpoint (which is a lie). David tells him that he already knew Will and Paige were taking kids, which makes Kristopher nervous about Maddy and Sloane's fate.//
David sees Cassie with a black eye, and asks what happens. After Cassie gives her explanation, David swears to go to Gav's house and kill both him and Maria.//
Grady sees Tobias and Nick dragging Alex across the street. When they explain why, Grady gets scared that David will kill him if he reveals his superpower.//
Sarah and Cary take the kids away from the barrier and wait for the others to show up. Cary angsts a bit about a nonspecific topic, and Sarah discovers that [[PowerHair her hair]] is a LivingBattery.//
Hazel is lying in her bed when her father comes in, despite her father having disappeared with the other adults, and he [[PervertDad molests her]].//
David goes to Gav's house, and shoots Maria in the stomach. Gav punches him in the face so hard that he retreats.//
Tobias and Nick successfully dispose of Alex's body against the barrier.//
Will, Paige, and a new recruit named Marco briefly regroup with Kaelyn and Jem. The former three decide to go back to the camp.//
David gives Rollins a list of people that he wants killed, including Will, Paige, Kaelyn, Gav, Cary, and Sarah.//
Gav fixes Maria up and puts her to bed.//
Jem and Kaelyn show up where Sarah and Cary are waiting with more kids; they all walk to a campsite together.//
David goes home and reveals two things to the reader: his father knew the border would appear before it happened, and David has multiple personalities: an evil one and a good one.//
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[[folder: The Daycare Workers]]
!!!Kaelyn Crewe
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: She certainly sees the world like this, quick to label people as good or evil. The author plans to deconstruct the trope through her.
* SoapboxSadie: It's implied.
* TeamMom
* TokenMinority: She's half-black, half-white.
* WouldHurtAChild: She struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.

!!!Jem
* [[spoiler: TheMole]]
* [[spoiler: NiceJobFixingItVillain: He ends up saving the lives of the very people that Rollins was trying to kill simply by telling them that David knew their names.]]
* [[spoiler: VillainousBSOD: After Kristopher dies.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: He struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.
** Also, [[spoiler: he kills a couple daycare babies with David.]]

!!!Cary Chen
Another daycare worker, who seems to be very disconnected and dperessed, except when it comes to his little brother.
* BrokenBird
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal: Rollins shoots him, at David's command.]]
* [[spoiler: PosthumousNarration: He narrates his own death.]]
* StoppedCaring

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[[folder: The Daycare David's Workers]]
!!!Kaelyn Crewe
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: She certainly sees the world like this, quick to label people as good or evil.
!!!David
The author plans to deconstruct the trope through her.
current leader of Grantsville, he is a sociopath who enjoys killing.
* SoapboxSadie: It's implied.
* TeamMom
* TokenMinority: She's half-black, half-white.
* WouldHurtAChild: She struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.

!!!Jem
*
AntiVillain: [[spoiler: TheMole]]
* [[spoiler: NiceJobFixingItVillain: He ends up saving the lives
It turns out, he has two personalities, and only one of the very people that Rollins was trying to kill simply by telling them that David knew their names.is a sociopath.]]
* AxCrazy
* BigBad
* BloodKnight
* {{Jerkass}}: That doesn't even begin to describe it, but it's a pretty nice start.
**
[[spoiler: VillainousBSOD: After Kristopher dies.JerkWithAHeartOfGold: But only his sociopathic side is a jerk.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: He struggles with having NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: 'Really fast' doesn't even begin to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.
** Also, [[spoiler: he kills a couple daycare babies with David.]]

!!!Cary Chen
Another daycare worker, who seems to be very disconnected and dperessed, except when it comes to his little brother.
* BrokenBird
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal: Rollins shoots him, at David's command.]]
* [[spoiler: PosthumousNarration: He narrates his own death.]]
* StoppedCaring
cover it.



* WouldHurtAChild: He struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.

!!!Sarah Vida
Sarah is one of the daycare workers, with no personality whatsoever. She's implied to have a sort of connection to Cary, but it hasn't been expanded upon yet.
* FlatCharacter: Only about a third of the characters are properly fleshed out, but the author didn't even try with her - she doesn't even have a superficial personality.
* LivingBattery[=/=]ShockAndAwe: Her superpower.
* PowerHair: Sarah's LivingBattery power only comes from her hair.
* WouldHurtAChild: She struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.

!!Will Grayson
* DoggedNiceGuy: To Paige.
* [[spoiler: LaserGuidedAmnesia: Averted.]]
* [[spoiler: OnlySixFaces: After Rollins shoots him in the head, he can't identify faces anymore.]]
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[[folder: David's Workers]]
!!!David
The current leader of Grantsville, he is a sociopath who enjoys killing.
* AntiVillain: [[spoiler: It turns out, he has two personalities, and only one of them is a sociopath.]]
* AxCrazy
* BigBad
* BloodKnight
* {{Jerkass}}: That doesn't even begin to describe it, but it's a pretty nice start.
** [[spoiler: JerkWithAHeartOfGold: But only his sociopathic side is a jerk.]]
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: 'Really fast' doesn't even begin to cover it.
* TokenMinority: He's Chinese.


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[[folder: The Daycare Workers]]
!!!Kaelyn Crewe
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: She certainly sees the world like this, quick to label people as good or evil. The author plans to deconstruct the trope through her.
* SoapboxSadie: It's implied.
* TeamMom
* TokenMinority: She's half-black, half-white.
* WouldHurtAChild: She struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.

!!!Jem
* [[spoiler: TheMole]]
* [[spoiler: NiceJobFixingItVillain: He ends up saving the lives of the very people that Rollins was trying to kill simply by telling them that David knew their names.]]
* [[spoiler: VillainousBSOD: After Kristopher dies.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: He struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.
** Also, [[spoiler: he kills a couple daycare babies with David.]]

!!!Cary Chen
Another daycare worker, who seems to be very disconnected and dperessed, except when it comes to his little brother.
* BrokenBird
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal: Rollins shoots him, at David's command.]]
* [[spoiler: PosthumousNarration: He narrates his own death.]]
* StoppedCaring
* TokenMinority: He's Chinese.
* WouldHurtAChild: He struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.

!!!Sarah Vida
Sarah is one of the daycare workers, with no personality whatsoever. She's implied to have a sort of connection to Cary, but it hasn't been expanded upon yet.
* FlatCharacter: Only about a third of the characters are properly fleshed out, but the author didn't even try with her - she doesn't even have a superficial personality.
* LivingBattery[=/=]ShockAndAwe: Her superpower.
* PowerHair: Sarah's LivingBattery power only comes from her hair.
* WouldHurtAChild: She struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.

!!Will Grayson
Will Grayson is another daycare worker, with a crush on Paige.
* DoggedNiceGuy: To Paige.
* [[spoiler: LaserGuidedAmnesia: Averted.]]
* [[spoiler: OnlySixFaces: After Rollins shoots him in the head, he can't identify faces anymore.]]

!!Paige Fox
Paige Fox is yet another of the daycare workers. She has a big personality and a relaxed sense of humor.
* GenkiGirl
* PrecisionFStrike: She delivers quite a few.
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** It got even more foreshadowing when [[spoiler: Yasuna mentions that someone was missing from the meet-up of David's workers. Jem was the one missing.]]



* SwitchingPOV: In thirty-two chapters so far, the complete list of narrators is as follows: Gav, Hazel, Grady, Maria, David, Kaelyn, Tobias, Alex, Nick, Sarah, Cary, Will, Kristopher, Cassie, Rollins, and Paige.

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* SwitchingPOV: In thirty-two the eighty chapters so far, the complete list of narrators is as follows: Gav, Hazel, Grady, Maria, David, Kaelyn, Tobias, Alex, Nick, Sarah, Cary, Will, Kristopher, Cassie, Rollins, Paige, Yasuna, Eve, Fisher, Marco, Isabelle, Gerard, Charlie, and Paige.Bonnie.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: [[spoiler: Jem saves the lives of all the remaining daycare workers by telling them that David knows their names.]]


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!!!Grady
Grady is one of the few boys in David's class that didn't ally himself with David. He gained the TouchOfDeath power early on, and since then, he joined up with the protesters to try to throw David out of power.
* DoggedNiceGuy: Towards Hazel.
* InformedAttribute: We didn't find out that he was one of the protesters until after their major battle in ''The Disappearance''; we don't know if he was actually part of it or not.
* TouchOfDeath: His superpower - his right hand (and only the right hand) can disintegrate anything it touches.

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* BoomHeadshot: Justified; none of the characters are trained gun-users, so they all think it's best to aim for the head. (This usually works out pretty well, since so far, almost all the battles have been very close-range.)



* InstantDeathBullets: To some extent. In this universe, you can be shot without dying - just ask [[spoiler: Will]] - but a direct shot to the head with cause an instant death.

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* ADeathInTheLimelight: [[spoiler: The fist half of ''The Control'' focuses heavily on Kristopher's character arc, only for him to die halfway through the book.]]



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Lots and lots of it.
** [[spoiler: All that talk about the possibility of Kristopher making a HeroicSacrifice? Really, the author didn't even bother trying to hide his fate.]]
** This trope also comes in not with what is said, but with what isn't - [[spoiler: Jem is the only teenager that works for the daycare whose POV we don't get early on, because he's TheMole.]]
** Hell, that reveal was foreshadowed to hell and back with that technique. [[spoiler: Jem was the only person left off the list that David gives to Rollins of people to kill.]]
** Both of the above reveals get foreshadowed in the same scene, if you know what you're looking at. [[spoiler: Jem asks Will and Paige if they had guns. This foreshadows both that Jem is The Mole, and that David suspected that Kristopher was lying.]]



-->I’m not sure if I’m okay with that. I mean, everybody thinks that they’ll be able to sacrifice themselves for the people they love, but nobody ever has to actually do it. And now that I’m in that situation, I’m not sure if I can. I once heard a comedian say something like, “There’s no one worth dying for, because then you’re dead, and you can’t know if it was actually worth it or not. It’s like throwing a million dollars on the sidewalk and hoping someone that works for a charity will pick it up.” The guy might be right - if David kills me, that doesn’t necessarily mean Sloane and Maddy will make it out alive. Maybe if I knew for sure that they would, I’d be willing to go through with this. But without that certainty…

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-->I’m not sure if I’m okay with that. I mean, everybody thinks that they’ll be able to sacrifice themselves for the people they love, but nobody ever has to actually do it. And now that I’m in that situation, I’m not sure if I can. I once heard a comedian say something like, “There’s “There’s no one worth dying for, because then you’re dead, and you can’t know if it was actually worth it or not. It’s like throwing a million dollars on the sidewalk and hoping someone that works for a charity will pick it up.” The guy might be right - if David kills me, that doesn’t necessarily mean Sloane and Maddy will make it out alive. Maybe if I knew for sure that they would, I’d be willing to go through with this. But without that certainty…


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* RandomTeleportation: Stella, who [[spoiler: transports all of the non-baby daycare kids to her older brother's house when Jem and David invaded the campsite.]]


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** [[spoiler: David knew that Kristopher was lying about being forced to give up Maddy and Sloane the entire time.]]
** [[spoiler: Will got brain damage from when Rollins shot him in the head.]]


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* [[spoiler: VillainousBSOD: After giving Will brain damage, getting beat up so badly that he ''[[BodyHorror swallows one of his own teeth]]'' by Gav, and killing Cary.]]

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** [[spoiler: Charlie is on the loose, and he can cause explosions by clapping his hands. And he's only six, so he has no idea what he's doing.]]
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: 'Really fast' doesn't even begin to cover it.

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