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* InstantDeathBullets: To some extent. In this universe, you can be shot without dying - just ask [[spoiler: Will]] - but a direct shot to the head with cause an instant death.


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!!Will Grayson
* DoggedNiceGuy: To Paige.
* [[spoiler: OnlySixFaces: After Rollins shoots him in the head, he can't identify faces anymore.]]

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* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: ''The Disappearance'' has one. Nobody except David get what they want ''in the least''. Here's a sum of all the bad things that happened:]]
** [[spoiler: Cady's protesters failed to accomplish anything.]]
** [[spoiler: Nick, Shelby, and three of Cady's protesters are dead.]]
** [[spoiler: Jem, Yasuna, Tobias, and Cassie are forced to kill all the kids in Grantsville except those that were taken to the daycare.]]
** [[spoiler: Jem and David know the names of all the daycare workers except for Marco.]]
** [[spoiler: All of the babies in the daycare are dead.]]
** [[spoiler: Rollins is about to be forced to kill Gav, Kaelyn, Will, Cary, Sarah, and Paige.]]
** [[spoiler: The final daycare kids alive have disappeared; the only person who knows where they are is Kristopher, and he doesn't want anything to do with them.]]
** [[spoiler: Charlie is on the loose, and he can cause explosions by clapping his hands. And he's only six, so he has no idea what he's doing.]]



* GottaKillEmAll: David is on a mission to kill every person under six in Grantsville. [[spoiler: So far, he's succeeded with all but eighteen.]]
** [[spoiler: David also sends Rollins on such a mission, to kill Will, Cary, Gav, Sarah, Paige, and Kaelyn. Needless to say, it doesn't go very well.]]



** [[spoiler: Jem was working for David the entire time.]]

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** [[spoiler: Jem was working for David the entire time.TheMole.]]


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* VillainousBSOD: ''All'' of David's supporters except Yasuna ([[spoiler: and yes, that does include David himself]]) in ''The Control''.
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** "Yeah. Yeah, that works." - [[spoiler: Shelby]]
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** "Do you want to see?" - [[spoiler: Charlie]]
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* AbortedArc: [[spoiler: Originally, Charlie was going to be a major villain, but the author couldn't figure out how to make it interesting, so he just had Yasuna kill him. At least he managed to get rid of the character without [[DroppedABridgeOnHim Dropping a Bridge On Him]].]]


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* ChekhovsGun: Jem has a conversation with Will and Paige about whether or not they're carrying guns. It seems insignificant at first, but it becomes important later: [[spoiler: Jem was trying to find out whether or not Will and Paige could've forced Kristopher to give up his sisters at gunpoint. They couldn't have, and he didn't.]]
** Also, [[spoiler: David's gun, which we see give the TouchOfDeath to Grady early on, is what makes Alex a zombie.]]

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* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Will and Paige.

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* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Will and Paige.Paige, [[spoiler: until Will gets brain damage and can't recognize faces anymore. That puts a pretty big wedge in it.]]



* BodyHorror: Gav punches [[spoiler: Rollins]] so hard that he ''swallows one of his own teeth.''

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* BodyHorror: Gav punches [[spoiler: Rollins]] so hard in ''The Control'' that he ''swallows one of his own teeth.''



* CycleOfRevenge: Discussed in Kaelyn's narration, through a borderline AuthorFilibuster:

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* CycleOfRevenge: Discussed in Kaelyn's narration, narration in ''The Control'', through a borderline AuthorFilibuster:



** ''The Control'' is more of both than ''The Disappearance''.



** "[[spoiler: David]], no, please, no, you don’t get it, you don’t understand!" - [[spoiler: Kristopher]]
** "[[spoiler: Rollins]]? What’s wrong? What happened to you?" - [[spoiler: Cary]]

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** "[[spoiler: David]], "David, no, please, no, you don’t get it, you don’t understand!" - [[spoiler: Kristopher]]
** "[[spoiler: Rollins]]? "Rollins? What’s wrong? What happened to you?" - [[spoiler: Cary]]



* RandomEventsPlot: The author has no idea what he's doing. He's just throwing out new plots for the hell of it to see if he can tie everything together.

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* RandomEventsPlot: The author has no idea what he's doing. He's just throwing out new plots for the hell of it to see if he can tie everything together. He's doing far better than he expected, all things considered.

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* BodyHorror: Gav punches [[spoiler: Rollins]] so hard that he ''swallows one of his own teeth.''



** Also, the kid who can cause explosions with his hands.

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** Also, the kid who can cause explosions with his hands.Charlie.
* CurbStompBattle: Every fight that Gav gets into - he manages to severely beat up Cassie, [[spoiler: Rollins]], and even '''[[spoiler: David]]'''.
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* [[spoiler: DecoyAntagonist: The author originally planned to make him a major antagonist, but he couldn't figure out where to take that plot, so he just had Yasuna kill him.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal: Yasuna slits his throat in ''The Control''.]]


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* DemotedToExtra: In ''The Control'', although the author plans on restarting his role in book 3.


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* DemotedToExtra: In ''The Control''.
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* TheMole: [[spoiler: Jem]].


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* [[spoiler: TheMole]]
* [[spoiler: VillainousBSOD: After Kristopher dies.]]
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* VillainsActHeroesReact: To the point where the series is more about David and his friends than anyone else.
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* ThoseTwoGuys: Tobias and Nick, [[spoiler: until Nick dies.]]

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--> There’s just no way [David] will be okay with this. I want to be loyal to him; it might be the only way to stay alive. But I can’t get my sisters killed for that - that’s all there is to it.//
And this is the alternative. The alternative to getting my sisters killed might be to get myself killed.

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--> There’s just no way [David] will be okay with this. I want to be loyal to him; it might be the only way to stay alive. But I can’t get my sisters killed for that - that’s all there is to it.//
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And this is the alternative. The alternative to getting my sisters killed might be to get myself killed.\\
I’m not sure if I’m okay with that. I mean, everybody thinks that they’ll be able to sacrifice themselves for the people they love, but nobody ever has to actually do it. And now that I’m in that situation, I’m not sure if I can. I once heard a comedian say something like, “There’s no one worth dying for, because then you’re dead, and you can’t know if it was actually worth it or not. It’s like throwing a million dollars on the sidewalk and hoping someone that works for a charity will pick it up.” The guy might be right - if David kills me, that doesn’t necessarily mean Sloane and Maddy will make it out alive. Maybe if I knew for sure that they would, I’d be willing to go through with this. But without that certainty…\\

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And this is the alternative. The alternative to getting my sisters killed might be to get myself killed.\\
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not sure if I’m okay with that. I mean, everybody thinks that they’ll be able to sacrifice themselves for the people they love, but nobody ever has to actually do it. And now that I’m in that situation, I’m not sure if I can. I once heard a comedian say something like, “There’s no one worth dying for, because then you’re dead, and you can’t know if it was actually worth it or not. It’s like throwing a million dollars on the sidewalk and hoping someone that works for a charity will pick it up.” The guy might be right - if David kills me, that doesn’t necessarily mean Sloane and Maddy will make it out alive. Maybe if I knew for sure that they would, I’d be willing to go through with this. But without that certainty…\\certainty…

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And this is the alternative. The alternative to getting my sisters killed might be to get myself killed.//
I’m not sure if I’m okay with that. I mean, everybody thinks that they’ll be able to sacrifice themselves for the people they love, but nobody ever has to actually do it. And now that I’m in that situation, I’m not sure if I can. I once heard a comedian say something like, “There’s no one worth dying for, because then you’re dead, and you can’t know if it was actually worth it or not. It’s like throwing a million dollars on the sidewalk and hoping someone that works for a charity will pick it up.” The guy might be right - if David kills me, that doesn’t necessarily mean Sloane and Maddy will make it out alive. Maybe if I knew for sure that they would, I’d be willing to go through with this. But without that certainty…//

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And this is the alternative. The alternative to getting my sisters killed might be to get myself killed.//
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I’m not sure if I’m okay with that. I mean, everybody thinks that they’ll be able to sacrifice themselves for the people they love, but nobody ever has to actually do it. And now that I’m in that situation, I’m not sure if I can. I once heard a comedian say something like, “There’s no one worth dying for, because then you’re dead, and you can’t know if it was actually worth it or not. It’s like throwing a million dollars on the sidewalk and hoping someone that works for a charity will pick it up.” The guy might be right - if David kills me, that doesn’t necessarily mean Sloane and Maddy will make it out alive. Maybe if I knew for sure that they would, I’d be willing to go through with this. But without that certainty…//certainty…\\

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* InfantImmortality: Averted, oh so much. Kids ''constantly'' die in the series, and [[spoiler: David's friends successfully kill fifty-two of the seventy young kids in Grantsville.]]

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* HeroicSacrifice: Kristopher is in a position where he might have to die in order to protect his sisters, and he's pretty nervous about it.
--> There’s just no way [David] will be okay with this. I want to be loyal to him; it might be the only way to stay alive. But I can’t get my sisters killed for that - that’s all there is to it.//
And this is the alternative. The alternative to getting my sisters killed might be to get myself killed.//
I’m not sure if I’m okay with that. I mean, everybody thinks that they’ll be able to sacrifice themselves for the people they love, but nobody ever has to actually do it. And now that I’m in that situation, I’m not sure if I can. I once heard a comedian say something like, “There’s no one worth dying for, because then you’re dead, and you can’t know if it was actually worth it or not. It’s like throwing a million dollars on the sidewalk and hoping someone that works for a charity will pick it up.” The guy might be right - if David kills me, that doesn’t necessarily mean Sloane and Maddy will make it out alive. Maybe if I knew for sure that they would, I’d be willing to go through with this. But without that certainty…//
** In the end, [[spoiler: Kristopher has to go through with the sacrifice, but he manages to save his sisters, at least for now.]]
* InfantImmortality: Averted, oh so much. Kids ''constantly'' die in the series, and [[spoiler: David's friends successfully kill fifty-two fifty-one of the seventy young kids in Grantsville.]]



* ShootTheShaggyDog: It happens in a couple of character arcs.
** [[spoiler: Cary dies right after deciding that he'll stop angsting over the death of his mother and get in a healthy relationship with Sarah - he'll never get to do either one.]]
** [[spoiler: Kristopher dies before he can know for sure whether or not he protected his sisters successfully. As of now he has, but he'll never appreciate it.]]



* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal: Rollins shoots him, at David's command.]]
* [[spoiler: PosthumousNarration: He narrates his own death.]]



Maria's brother.




!!!Charlie
One of the kids that David captures to kill, with the ability to cause explosions by clapping his hands.
* [[spoiler: NotQuiteDead: Everyone assumed that he died in the explosion he caused, but they were all unconscious, so no one really saw. Turns out, he survived.]]
* [[spoiler: PersonOfMassDestruction: He kills around ten kids with an explosion he created in the middle of a battle in the Mayor's Hall.]]
* PowerPalms: His explosion comes from clapping his hands - he can control the size by clapping his hands harder or softer.




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** "David, no, please, no, you don’t get it, you don’t understand!" - [[spoiler: Kristopher]]

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** "David, "[[spoiler: David]], no, please, no, you don’t get it, you don’t understand!" - [[spoiler: Kristopher]]Kristopher]]
** "[[spoiler: Rollins]]? What’s wrong? What happened to you?" - [[spoiler: Cary]]
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* WarIsHell: The message is more that violence is hell, since there's no actual war, but the author does indeed believe that war is hell, and that comes through a lot in the writing.

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But no. I have to prolong my life as long as possible. Every time I think of telling David to shoot me, of me getting shot, I know that I can’t do it. I have to survive. That’s my goal. Survival. I’ll do whatever I have to, kill whatever I have to, just to stay alive. Does that make me an evil person? Maybe. But it’s what I have to do. Certainly, what I’m doing is wrong, but it doesn’t matter, because I don’t have a choice, not really. The right thing to do would be to make some [[HeroicSacrifice heroic sacrifice]] and let myself get killed rather than kill people, but who would honestly do that? What person would honestly let themselves get killed? Nobody, that’s who. Only a suicidally depressed person would choose death, no matter how horrible the alternative is."

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But -->But no. I have to prolong my life as long as possible. Every time I think of telling David to shoot me, of me getting shot, I know that I can’t do it. I have to survive. That’s my goal. Survival. I’ll do whatever I have to, kill whatever I have to, just to stay alive. Does that make me an evil person? Maybe. But it’s what I have to do. Certainly, what I’m doing is wrong, but it doesn’t matter, because I don’t have a choice, not really. The right thing to do would be to make some [[HeroicSacrifice heroic sacrifice]] and let myself get killed rather than kill people, but who would honestly do that? What person would honestly let themselves get killed? Nobody, that’s who. Only a suicidally depressed person would choose death, no matter how horrible the alternative is."

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** Discussed (sort of) by Rollins:
-->"Maybe it would just be better to get myself killed by David. Maybe I should just go to him and say, “I can’t do this, just [[PrecisionFStrike fucking]] shoot me already.” It would certainly save me some time - I feel certain that if he doesn’t kill me now, he’ll do it later, when he realizes that [[spoiler: I couldn’t kill Gav.]]
But no. I have to prolong my life as long as possible. Every time I think of telling David to shoot me, of me getting shot, I know that I can’t do it. I have to survive. That’s my goal. Survival. I’ll do whatever I have to, kill whatever I have to, just to stay alive. Does that make me an evil person? Maybe. But it’s what I have to do. Certainly, what I’m doing is wrong, but it doesn’t matter, because I don’t have a choice, not really. The right thing to do would be to make some [[HeroicSacrifice heroic sacrifice]] and let myself get killed rather than kill people, but who would honestly do that? What person would honestly let themselves get killed? Nobody, that’s who. Only a suicidally depressed person would choose death, no matter how horrible the alternative is."
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* MoodWhiplash: The series can be ''extremely'' dark and heavy-handed, but every once in a while, we get a lighter, comic relief scene.
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** Kristopher, at one point, quotes a phrase he said he heard from a comedian. It does actually derive from something that was said on ADoseOfBuckley, although the author altered it a lot to suit his needs.
--> I once heard a comedian say something like, “There’s no one worth dying for, because then you’re dead, and you can’t know if it was actually worth it or not. It’s like throwing a million dollars on the sidewalk and hoping someone that works for a charity will pick it up.”
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* PosthumousNarration: A few characters, like [[spoiler: Kristopher]], narrate their own death.


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* [[spoiler: PosthumousNarration: He narrates his own death, and says in the narration that he's dead.]]

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* FamousLastWords:
** "David, no, please, no, you don’t get it, you don’t understand!" - [[spoiler: Kristopher]]




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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal: David shoots him in the head once he finds out that he had willingly given away his sisters to the daycare.]]
* [[spoiler: RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: Namely, with a shot in the head, via David.]]
* [[spoiler: ShootTheShaggyDog]]: His goal throughout the series is to ensure the safety of his little sisters without David finding out. [[spoiler: He manages to save his sisters, for the time being anyway, but David knew what was going on pretty much from the beginning, and Kristopher got shot for it.]]

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The author, gradually, brought a theme out of the story. It's basically an exploration of how horrible violence can be, especially when people who aren't really evil commit it to each other. Throughout the series, we consistently get the POV of both sides of a fight, and we get everyone's reaction to every injury or death - the person being killed, the killer, and the killed person's friends all narrate.


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* CycleOfRevenge: Discussed in Kaelyn's narration, through a borderline AuthorFilibuster:
--> What would [Will's family] think if they could see what Will looks like right now? What would they think if they saw any of this? Would they want revenge on whoever did this? Or would they see the value in just ending the violence, ending the deaths? I hope, for Will’s sake, that they would just want an end to the deaths, an end to stupid revenge. Because whoever did this to Will is an evil person, but shooting him in the face won’t make him any less evil. It’ll just put him through pain, make his family mourn him.


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* GreyAndGrayMorality: Nobody is wholly good or wholly evil.


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* BlackAndWhiteMorality: She certainly sees the world like this, quick to label people as good or evil. The author plans to deconstruct the trope through her.

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The chapters are very, very short (typically between 100 and 800 words), meaning that the author can get a lot to happen very quickly. The fic is divided into several 'books', each spanning fifty chapters exactly. The first book has now been completed, called ''The Disappearance''. The second is in progress, although it has no title.

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The chapters are very, very short (typically between 100 and 800 words), meaning that the author can get a lot to happen very quickly. The fic is divided into several 'books', each spanning fifty chapters exactly. The first book has now been completed, called ''The Disappearance''. The second is in progress, although it has no title.
and the working title is ''The Control''.


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* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler: David's plan to kill the kids? So far, he's succeeded at all but eighteen. The problem is, this is a ''huge'' source of guilt for his sane personality.]]
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The chapters are very, very short (typically between 100 and 800 words), meaning that the author can get a lot to happen very quickly. The fic is divided into several 'books', each spanning fifty chapters exactly. The first book has now been completed, called ''The Disappearance''. The second is in progress, although it has no title.
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** Billy --> ''Film/DoctorHorriblesSingAlongBlog'', officially, although it could also be ''Literature/{{Remnants}}''

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** Billy --> ''Film/DoctorHorriblesSingAlongBlog'', ''Film/DoctorHorriblesSingalongBlog'', officially, although it could also be ''Literature/{{Remnants}}''
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* BloodKnight: David[[spoiler:'s sociopathic personality.]]


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The main characters include, in order of who narrates:
* Gav, the first narrator, who crashes his car into the barrier during the opening chapter. He's a very nice, soft guy, who gets a superpower: [[spoiler: [[BadPowersGoodPeople the ability to change the hardness of anything he touches]].]]
* Hazel, a girl who used to have [[AbusiveParents a father who molested her and a mother who beat her.]] She [[spoiler: sees her dad in her room during the middle of the night in Chapter Twenty-Eight.]] As she struggles to get over the abuse of her parents and open up to others, the author struggles to give her a personality outside of this.
* Grady, who gets shot in the arm by David early on, which gives him the TouchOfDeath.
* Maria, who was rescued by Gav early on. She has an intense hatred for David because he shot her brother, Alex.
* David, a [[TheSociopath sociopath]] who immediately takes control of Grantsville by using guns and violence as a threat. He starts to lead a pack of followers, all of whom are mainly afraid of him. [[spoiler: It turns out that, for as-of-now-unexplained reasons, he has multiple personalities: a psychopath, and a normal guy.]]
* Kaelyn, a very [[TeamMom moralistic character]] who starts a daycare after David declares his intentions to kill every child in Grantsville.
* Tobias, one of David's workers, who, unlike most of them, has very few qualms about what he does, despite not being too tough.
* Nick, who is pretty much identical to Tobias. [[spoiler: He's KilledOffForReal as of Chapter Forty-Six]].
* Will, who helps out Kaelyn to take care of the kids, and has a crush on Paige.
* Sarah, who [[FlatCharacter has no distinct personality at all]], [[CreatorBreakdown much to the author's rage.]] When she's not being boring, she's helping out Kaelyn with the daycare. She also has a superpower - she's a LivingBattery.
* Cassie, one of David's guards, [[ButtMonkey whose sole purpose in the narrative seems to be so that the author has someone to beat up.]]
* Cary, who is helping Kaelyn with the daycare. He's depressed for no reason that the author currently knows of.
* Alex, Maria's sister, who gets shot by David early on. [[spoiler: He comes BackFromTheDead with the TouchOfDeath superpower, until David [[KilledOffForReal actually kills him off.]]]]
* Paige, who helps out Kaelyn with the daycare. She is utterly {{Badass}}, and Will has a crush on her.
* Kristopher, who works for David. He's the most scared of all of them, and he gives his sisters to the daycare, while trying to hide all of this from David.
* Rollins, another one of David's workers, who is used as a hitman when [[spoiler: David's normal personality comes about.]]
* Yasuna, one of David's workers who has less qualms about her business than everyone else because she has a crush on him.
* Eve, a disabled girl who needs to get over being protected by Darla, her sister, before David decides to shoot her.
* Fisher, a nine year-old boy who wants his sister, Kaede, back.
* Marco, another daycare worker, with no distinct personality yet.
* Cady, the leader of a movement to get the kids back from David.
* Isabelle, one of the kids that wasn't rescued as part of the daycare and who David plans to kill.
* Jem, another daycare worker. [[spoiler: It turns out he was just working for David the entire time, and he has a hand in killing all the babies in the daycare.]]

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The main characters include, in order of who narrates:
* Gav, the first narrator, who crashes his car into the barrier during the opening chapter. He's a very nice, soft guy, who gets a superpower: [[spoiler: [[BadPowersGoodPeople the ability to change the hardness of anything he touches]].]]
* Hazel, a girl who used to have [[AbusiveParents a father who molested her and a mother who beat her.]] She [[spoiler: sees her dad in her room during the middle of the night in Chapter Twenty-Eight.]] As she struggles to get over the abuse of her parents and open up to others, the author struggles to give her a personality outside of this.
* Grady, who gets shot in the arm by David early on, which gives him the TouchOfDeath.
* Maria, who was rescued by Gav early on. She has an intense hatred for David because he shot her brother, Alex.
* David, a [[TheSociopath sociopath]] who immediately takes control of Grantsville by using guns and violence as a threat. He starts to lead a pack of followers, all of whom are mainly afraid of him. [[spoiler: It turns out that, for as-of-now-unexplained reasons, he has multiple personalities: a psychopath, and a normal guy.]]
* Kaelyn, a very [[TeamMom moralistic character]] who starts a daycare after David declares his intentions to kill every child in Grantsville.
* Tobias, one of David's workers, who, unlike most of them, has very few qualms about what he does, despite not being too tough.
* Nick, who is pretty much identical to Tobias. [[spoiler: He's KilledOffForReal as of Chapter Forty-Six]].
* Will, who helps out Kaelyn to take care of the kids, and has a crush on Paige.
* Sarah, who [[FlatCharacter has no distinct personality at all]], [[CreatorBreakdown much to the author's rage.]] When she's not being boring, she's helping out Kaelyn with the daycare. She also has a superpower - she's a LivingBattery.
* Cassie, one of David's guards, [[ButtMonkey whose sole purpose in the narrative seems to be so that the author has someone to beat up.]]
* Cary, who is helping Kaelyn with the daycare. He's depressed for no reason that the author currently knows of.
* Alex, Maria's sister, who gets shot by David early on. [[spoiler: He comes BackFromTheDead with the TouchOfDeath superpower, until David [[KilledOffForReal actually kills him off.]]]]
* Paige, who helps out Kaelyn with the daycare. She is utterly {{Badass}}, and Will has a crush on her.
* Kristopher, who works for David. He's the most scared of all of them, and he gives his sisters to the daycare, while trying to hide all of this from David.
* Rollins, another one of David's workers, who is used as a hitman when [[spoiler: David's normal personality comes about.]]
* Yasuna, one of David's workers who has less qualms about her business than everyone else because she has a crush on him.
* Eve, a disabled girl who needs to get over being protected by Darla, her sister, before David decides to shoot her.
* Fisher, a nine year-old boy who wants his sister, Kaede, back.
* Marco, another daycare worker, with no distinct personality yet.
* Cady, the leader of a movement to get the kids back from David.
* Isabelle, one of the kids that wasn't rescued as part of the daycare and who David plans to kill.
* Jem, another daycare worker. [[spoiler: It turns out he was just working for David the entire time, and he has a hand in killing all the babies in the daycare.]]

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** Also, Cady turns out to be pretty badass when she gets into a fight with Rollins.



* BerserkButton: Anything involving a threat towards Maria, for Gav. The mere implication that he may not be able to rescue her is enough to beat up Cassie and [[spoiler: discover his superpower.]]



* ButtMonkey: Cassie's sole role in the story seems to be so that different people can beat her up.



** Also, the kid who can cause explosions with his hands.



* DisabilitySuperpower: Everyone gets their superpowers after an injury of some kind, and some of the injuries can be pretty harmful. For example, Sarah gets her superpower after a baby accidentally set her on fire, Grady and [[spoiler: Alex]] get their superpowers from [[spoiler: David's gun]], and Gav gets his superpower after he crashes his car into the barrier.

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* DisabilitySuperpower: Everyone gets their superpowers after an injury of some kind, and some of the injuries can be pretty harmful. For example, Sarah gets her superpower after a baby accidentally set her on fire, Grady and [[spoiler: and Alex]] get their superpowers from [[spoiler: getting shot with David's gun]], and Gav gets his superpower after he crashes crashed his car into the barrier.



* FlatCharacter: ''Sarah''. Only about a third of the characters are properly fleshed out, but the author didn't even try with her - she doesn't even have a superficial personality.



* LittleMissBadass: Subverted. Maria sneaks out to kill David, and at first, it looks like she might succeed. Turns out she has no idea what she's doing, and the only result of her attempts was [[spoiler: getting her nose broken.]]



* OhAndXDies: Inverted; in something similar to what Creator/KAApplegate did in ''Literature/{{Remnants}}'', the author has said that he'll do his best to keep Hazel alive, although he can't promise anything. He's also given tenative immortality to three other characters, and marked a bunch of characters that he ''knows'' are going to die.

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* OhAndXDies: Inverted; in something similar to what Creator/KAApplegate did in ''Literature/{{Remnants}}'', the author has said that he'll do his best to keep Hazel alive, although he can't promise anything. He's also given tenative tentative immortality to three other characters, and marked a bunch of characters that he ''knows'' are going to die.



* PervertedDad: Hazel has one, and it's not PlayedForLaughs, for once.



* StoppedCaring: Cary.



* TeamMom: Kaelyn.



** Tobias is gay.



* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Where the hell did David get all his sociopathy from? (The author intends to answer, if he can remember.)

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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Where the hell did David get all his sociopathy from? (The author intends to answer, if (We get an answer: [[spoiler: he can remember.)has multiple personalities, and only one of them is evil.]])



* WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: [[invoked]] The author started it impulsively one day because he had finished his assignments in his creative writing class early. He has no idea what's going to happen next, no answers to any of the mysteries, and no plans at all, other than an extremely rough synopsis of who's going to make it to the end of the series and who won't. (And he's already broken that synopsis more than once, so there really are no plans.)

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* WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: [[invoked]] The author started it impulsively one day because he had finished his assignments in his creative writing class early. He has no idea what's going to happen next, no answers to any of the mysteries, and no plans at all, other than an extremely rough synopsis of who's going to make it to the end of the series and who won't. (And he's already broken that synopsis more than once, so there really are no plans.))
[[/folder

!!The Character Sheet
[[folder: The Daycare Workers]]
!!!Kaelyn Crewe
* TeamMom
* TokenMinority: She's half-black, half-white.
* WouldHurtAChild: She struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.

!!!Jem
* WouldHurtAChild: He struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.
** Also, [[spoiler: he kills a couple daycare babies with David.]]

!!!Cary Chen
Another daycare worker, who seems to be very disconnected and dperessed, except when it comes to his little brother.
* StoppedCaring
* TokenMinority: He's Chinese.
* WouldHurtAChild: He struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.

!!!Sarah Vida
Sarah is one of the daycare workers, with no personality whatsoever. She's implied to have a sort of connection to Cary, but it hasn't been expanded upon yet.
* FlatCharacter: Only about a third of the characters are properly fleshed out, but the author didn't even try with her - she doesn't even have a superficial personality.
* LivingBattery[=/=]ShockAndAwe: Her superpower.
* PowerHair: Sarah's LivingBattery power only comes from her hair.
* WouldHurtAChild: She struggles with having to kill a kid that was PlayingWithFire uncontrollably.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: David's Workers]]
!!!David
The current leader of Grantsville, he is a sociopath who enjoys killing.
* AntiVillain: [[spoiler: It turns out, he has two personalities, and only one of them is a sociopath.]]
* AxCrazy
* BigBad
* {{Jerkass}}: That doesn't even begin to describe it, but it's a pretty nice start.
** [[spoiler: JerkWithAHeartOfGold: But only his sociopathic side is a jerk.]]
* TokenMinority: He's Chinese.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Sam put it best in ''Gone'': "The phrase 'AxCrazy fourteen year-olds' isn't normally followed by 'have a nice day'."
* WouldHurtAChild: Every single one in Grantsville, to be precise.

!!!Tobias
One of David's workers, who has less moral qualms about what he does than most of the rest of them.
* {{Fingore}}: [[spoiler: He loses part of his fingers when he touches Alex, not aware that Alex had the TouchOfDeath.]]
* HeterosexualLifePartners: With Nick, minus the 'heterosexual' part on his end.
* StraightGay
* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler: He's one of the ones that killed the kids that David captured.]]

!!!Kristopher
Kristopher is another worker, who gives his sisters to the daycare and tries to hide it from David.
* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: He doesn't seem to know which side he's on.

!!!Yasuna
She's another one of David's workers, who justifies what she does by the fact that she has a crush on him.
* TokenMinority: She's Japanese.
* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler: She's one of the ones that killed the kids that David captured.]]
* {{Yandere}}: To David.

!!!Rollins
David uses him as a hit man to kill people that he doesn't like. Naturally, he struggles with this quite a bit.
* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler: He's one of the ones that killed the kids that David captured.]]

!!!Nick
Like Tobias, he's one of David's workers, and he has few moral qualms about what he does.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: With Tobias.
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal: He dies when a little kid causes an explosion that causes him to fly across the mayor's hall and land on his head.]]

!!!Cassie
Cassie is one of David's workers, although she has yet to have a distinct personality.
* ButtMonkey: Her sole role in the story seems to be so that different people can beat her up.
* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler: She's one of the ones that killed the kids that David captured.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Young Kids]]
!!!Alex
* [[spoiler: BackFromTheDead]]
* BlackDudeDiesFirst: He's the first character in the entire series to be killed, and he's black. The author didn't mention his skin color until after his death, and he didn't realize the UnfortunateImplications until after he wrote it. [[spoiler: But at least he came BackFromTheDead.]]
* CreepyChild: [[spoiler: After he comes back from the dead.]]
* {{Redshirt}}
* TokenMinority: He's black.
* WeHardlyKnewYe
[[/folder]]
[[folder: The Protesters]]
!!!Cady
Cady is the leader of the protesters, despite not having any younger siblings among the kids that David captured. She does have a little brother, though, Jason, who she tries to protect.
* {{Badass}}: When she fights Rollins.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Everyone Else]]
!!!Gav Wills
Gav was the first narrator of the series, who crashed his car into the barrier. He then rescued Alex and Maria, and after Alex was shot by David, he dedicated himself to protecting Maria.
* BadPowersGoodPeople[=/=]BewareTheNiceOnes: His superpower turns out to be [[spoiler: the ability to change how hard or soft an object that he's touching is. This means that he can affect how hard it hurts when he punches you and how much damage it does - if he wants to, he can crush your brain just by patting your head.]] But he wouldn't do that, because he's actually very nice and sweet. Unless you hit one of his [[BerserkButton Berserk Buttons]], as Cassie learns the hard way.
* {{Badass}}: At one point, he beats up Cassie, who was guarding the mayor's office, to get to Maria. He lampshades it:
--> That was the most badass thing I've ever done.
* BerserkButton: Anything involving a threat towards Maria. The mere implication that he may not be able to rescue her is enough to beat up Cassie and [[spoiler: discover his superpower.]]
* WouldHitAGirl: He beats up Cassie to get into the Mayor's Hall. And he doesn't even give it a second thought.

!!!Hazel
Hazel is one of the fourteen year-olds, who went to school with David. She's currently living on her own - her only sibling was her older sister - and is starting to become friends with Grady.
* AbusiveParents: She used to have them.
** PervertDad

!!!Maria
Alex's older brother, who Gav has been protecting.
* LittleMissBadass: Subverted. She sneaks out to kill David, and at first, it looks like she might succeed. Turns out she has no idea what she's doing, and the only result of her attempts was [[spoiler: getting her nose broken.]]
* TokenMinority: Like her brother, she's black.

!!!Eve
Eve is a disabled girl who wants to protect herself without her sister, Darla. (That's it, so far - she's only had one POV chapter.)
* DeadpanSnarker
** DisabledSnarker
[[/folder]]

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