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* BeatThemAtTheirOwnGame: During the middle of Palpatine's bid to discredit Supreme Chancellor Valorum over the Naboo Crisis, Valorum (who has apparently been bodyjacked by a dimension-travelling Dread Emperor) displays force sensitivity, mind-controlling the Trade Federation Senator into confessing to the plot. Valorum then proposes a bold series of punishments that will have the side effect of enhancing Valorum's power. Palpatine is left seething at Valorum, manipulating and mind-controlling the senate before he himself could, and hypocritically wondering where the Jedi are to stop this when he needs them.
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* BeatThemAtTheirOwnGame: During the middle of Palpatine's bid to discredit Supreme Chancellor Valorum over the Naboo Crisis, Valorum (who has apparently been bodyjacked by a dimension-travelling Dread Emperor) displays force sensitivity, mind-controlling the Trade Federation Senator into confessing to the plot. Valorum then proposes a bold series of punishments that will have the side effect of enhancing Valorum's power. Palpatine is left seething at Valorum, manipulating and mind-controlling the senate before he himself could, and hypocritically wondering where the Jedi are to stop this when he needs them.them.
* NegativeContinuity: This isn't really a story, it's more of a collection of independent short stories united only by the base premise that someone in the ''Star Wars'' universe has the powers and personality of a Dread Emperor/Empress.
* NegativeContinuity: This isn't really a story, it's more of a collection of independent short stories united only by the base premise that someone in the ''Star Wars'' universe has the powers and personality of a Dread Emperor/Empress.
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* ''Fanfic/TheDanceIsNotOver'': Another ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' ForWantOfANail story. King Aegon and Queen Rhaenyra both experience different earlier deaths in the Dance of the Dragons, causing two different, more competent monarchs to succeed them and altering the future of the Seven Kingdoms. However, more than half of the story can feel like a PostScriptSeason.
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* ''Fanfic/TheDanceIsNotOver'': Another ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' ForWantOfANail story. King Aegon and Queen Rhaenyra both experience different earlier deaths in the Dance of the Dragons, causing two different, more competent monarchs to succeed them and altering the future of the Seven Kingdoms. However, more than half of This is followed by the story can feel like tale of Westeros being still divided after the fighting stops, with both sides certain that there ''will'' be a PostScriptSeason.Second Dance to reunite the Seven Kingdoms at some point, but neither side being in a good position to be the one who starts it.
