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* ClassicalElementsEnsemble: The four Wardens each favor a different element as a battle weapon. Harry wields fire, Yoshimo calls up wind, Wild Bill manipulates earth and stone, and Ramirez's green disintegration-rays are associated with water's erosive effects according to WordOfGod.
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* FourElementEnsemble: The four Wardens each favor a different element as a battle weapon. Harry wields fire, Yoshimo calls up wind, Wild Bill manipulates earth and stone, and Ramirez's green disintegration-rays are associated with water's erosive effects according to WordOfGod.
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* UnreliableIllustrator: A flashback showing the history of Harry and Thomas' relationship shows Thomas sitting on the couch in Harry's living room and making a mess... with a remote in one hand as he watches a flat-screen TV, when Harry's apartment doesn't have electricity and wizards tend to make most modern electronics breakdown immediately. Possibly Thomas rigged it up on an extension cord in Harry's absence, back when he was still getting the hang of no longer being rich and didn't appreciate how costly it'd be for Harry to walk in and short the thing out.
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* UnreliableIllustrator: A flashback showing the history of Harry and Thomas' relationship shows Thomas sitting on the couch in Harry's living room and making a mess... with a remote in one hand as he watches a flat-screen TV, when Harry's apartment doesn't have electricity and wizards tend to make most modern electronics breakdown immediately. Possibly Thomas rigged it up on an extension cord in Harry's absence, back when he was still getting the hang of no longer being rich and didn't appreciate how costly it'd be for Harry to walk in and short the thing out.out.
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* UnreliableIllustrator: A flashback showing the history of Harry and Thomas' relationship shows Thomas sitting on the couch in Harry's living room and making a mess... with a remote in one hand as he watches a flat-screen TV, when Harry's apartment doesn't have electricity and wizards tend to make most modern electronics breakdown immediately.
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* UnreliableIllustrator: A flashback showing the history of Harry and Thomas' relationship shows Thomas sitting on the couch in Harry's living room and making a mess... with a remote in one hand as he watches a flat-screen TV, when Harry's apartment doesn't have electricity and wizards tend to make most modern electronics breakdown immediately. Possibly Thomas rigged it up on an extension cord in Harry's absence, back when he was still getting the hang of no longer being rich and didn't appreciate how costly it'd be for Harry to walk in and short the thing out.
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* CrazyEnoughToWork: a staple of Harry's plans. It's evidently rubbed off on Wild Bill too.
* DistantPrologue: one of the comics [[spoiler: shows a Shoggoth - possibly the same one - unleashed on Hammurabi's Babylon]].
* DistantPrologue: one of the comics [[spoiler: shows a Shoggoth - possibly the same one - unleashed on Hammurabi's Babylon]].
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* CrazyEnoughToWork: a A staple of Harry's plans. It's evidently rubbed off on Wild Bill too.
* DistantPrologue:one One of the comics [[spoiler: shows a Shoggoth - possibly the same one - unleashed on Hammurabi's Babylon]].
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