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* AGodAmI: He has recieved some quiet ribbing out of earshot from the rest of Akatsuki because of this. Quiet and out of earshot because he actually has the power to back it up.
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* AGodAmI: He has recieved received some quiet ribbing out of earshot from the rest of Akatsuki because of this. Quiet and out of earshot because he actually has the power to back it up.
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* AdaptationalBadass: In a roundabout way. In canon, the Rinnegan didn't really belong to him. The near dead Madara Uchiha implanted his own eyes into a young Nagato so they'd remain once he died, and so that [[spoiler:Obito]] could claim them latter. Here, the Rinnegan are something only a Senju or Uzumaki can really use, and Nagato developed his naturally.
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* AdaptationalBadass: In a roundabout way. In canon, the Rinnegan didn't really belong to him. The near dead Madara Uchiha implanted his own eyes into a young Nagato so they'd remain once he died, and so that [[spoiler:Obito]] could claim them latter.later. Here, the Rinnegan are something only a Senju or Uzumaki can really use, and Nagato developed his naturally.
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* [[IllGirl Ill Boy]]: [[spoiler:No longer, thanks to medicine delivered by Kushina.]]
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:During his fight with Kushina, his arm is torn off by her chains. He quickly regenerates it though with Kurama's Yin Chakra. Kushina then responded by tearing off his ''other'' arm, and ensnaring him in her chains. He tried to regenerate it [[UpToEleven again]] but as a claw, only for her to ensnare it in even more chains.]]
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* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler:During his fight with Kushina, his arm is torn off by her chains. He quickly regenerates it though with Kurama's Yin Chakra. Kushina then responded by tearing off his ''other'' arm, and ensnaring him in her chains. He tried to regenerate it [[UpToEleven again]] again but as a claw, only for her to ensnare it in even more chains.]]
