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I fuss. I oughtta give the earlier chapters a revisit, find something to pencil in for Castor.
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!! The Young Aristocrat | The Young Griffon | [[spoiler:Son of Scarlet Sin]]
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!! The Young Aristocrat | The Young Griffon | [[spoiler:Son of Scarlet Sin]]
Sin / The Risen Flame]]
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* RageAgainstTheHeavens: Griffon resents the idea of relying on a higher power. This comes to a head during the climax of the Olympia arc, best summarized by his oath of brotherhood with Solus: "No more higher powers."
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* RageAgainstTheHeavens: Griffon resents the idea of relying on a higher power.absent gods and distant spirits. This comes to a head during the climax of the Olympia arc, best summarized by his oath of brotherhood with Solus: "No more higher powers."
* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler:The necklace he liberated from the Rosy Dawn's filial pools allows an unidentified ancestor of Griffon's to antagonize him from the great beyond. Snark apparently runs in the family.]]
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Griffon's betrothed, and [[KissingCousins first cousin]] through her father, Fotios. The elder sister to Castor and Rena. Deeply fond of Griffon, whom she still calls Lio, and sympathetic to his repressed wanderlust, but still committed to following the sect's edicts and waiting to travel the outside world. [[spoiler:Right up until Griffon makes a break for it; after ''that'' she's planning to follow him.]]
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Griffon's betrothed, and [[KissingCousins first cousin]] through her father, Fotios. The elder sister to Castor and Rena. Deeply Lydia is deeply fond of Griffon, whom she still calls Lio, and sympathetic to his repressed wanderlust, but still committed to following the sect's edicts and waiting to travel the outside world. [[spoiler:Right up until Griffon makes a break for it; after ''that'' she's planning stunt she makes plans to follow him.]]
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The greatest Hellenic Hero, the first Olympic Champion, whose labors inspired the Greek city-states and whose death brought them anguish in turn. In ''Virtuous Sons'' Heracles was killed performing his 11th Labor.
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The [[PublicDomainCharacter greatest Hellenic Hero, Hero]], the first Olympic Champion, whose labors inspired the Greek city-states and whose death brought them anguish in turn. In ''Virtuous Sons'' Heracles was killed performing his 11th Labor.
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The king of Macedon, whose military prowess carved himself an empire among the largest of all time. In ''Virtuous Sons'', he failed to conquer Greece, but got what he wanted regardless. Centuries ago, he disappeared into the subcontinent of India with his armies.
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The [[HistoricalDomainCharacter king of Macedon, Macedon]], whose military prowess carved himself an empire among the largest of all time. In ''Virtuous Sons'', he failed to conquer Greece, but got what he wanted regardless. Centuries ago, he disappeared into the subcontinent of India with his armies.
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