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* YourPrincessIsInAnotherCastle: Peepi's made it into the Empire, met people of her own race, is preparing to be relocated to a new settlement with a surrogate family and is just about to part ways with Koinzell peacefully. Then [[CompleteMonster Pago]] murders Pago kills her adoptive parents out of pure spite and everything goes to hell again. Luckily Koinzell was there to save her.
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* ThePlan: [[spoiler:Frees the Seven Lances from jail in order to gain their support against Lebellond, and is currently waiting for the right time to strike against him.]]
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!'''Gerold'''
One of Lebellond's sons who is in charge of the detatchment of airships sent to subjugate the castle of the Imperial Elector.
* AttackAttackAttack: He really should have listened to his subordinates instead of trying to act tough.
* IneffectualSympatheticVillain
* SanitySlippage: Gerold doesn't take having half his fleet destroyed and then being ordered to retreat very well at all.
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* WellDoneSonGuy: His attempts to impress his father by taking down Koinzell wound up getting him killed.
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* PurpleEyes: Used to actually be blue prior to her EmergencyTransformation, but now is just on this side of Violet.
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* PutOnABus: Stays behind in Jullas-Abllas, and becomes the leader of the civilian militia there.
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* PointyEars: As a member of the Miruel Mirael race, this is expected.
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* ActionGirl: Not on Ato's level, but as the siege of the city of Jullas-Abllas showed Altea can more than just handle herself in a fight.
* BoobsOfSteel: Altea is really well-stacked.
* BoobsOfSteel: Altea is really well-stacked.
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The three Lances who died on the journey to Wisstech. Presumably, each of them represents one of the [[SevenHeavenlyVirtues Three Theological Virtues]].
!'''Elgunaha'''
Elgunaha was a close friend of Ascherit, and was the first of the fourteen Lances to be sacrificed. He cast a spell that creates a gigantic wall separating part of the world from the other. However, the spell's side effect turned him into stone. The wall, called the "Heaven's Lance" was eventually destroyed by Koinzell, after he made his final peace with Elgunaha.
* HeroicSacrifice
* [[SevenHeavenlyVirtues Three Theological Virtues]]: He represents charity.
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The three Lances who died on the journey to Wisstech. Presumably, each of them represents one of the [[SevenHeavenlyVirtues Three Theological Virtues]].
!'''Elgunaha'''
Elgunaha was a close friend of Ascherit, and was the first of the fourteen Lances to be sacrificed. He cast a spell that creates a gigantic wall separating part of the world from the other. However, the spell's side effect turned him into stone. The wall, called the "Heaven's Lance" was eventually destroyed by Koinzell, after he made his final peace with Elgunaha.
* HeroicSacrifice
* [[SevenHeavenlyVirtues Three Theological Virtues]]: He represents charity.
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heroes. Keeping with the symbolism of the SevenDeadlySins with the Seven Heroes, each one of them represents one of the [[SevenHeavenlyVirtues Four Cardinal Virtues]]
* [[SevenHeavenlyVirtues Four Cardinal Virtues]]: He represents Justice, [[spoiler: as emphasized by his actions as Koinzell]].
* MasterSwordsman: Though not to the same degree as Ascherit.
* [[SevenHeavenlyVirtues Four Cardinal Virtues]]: Presumably represents Courage or Fortitude, as shown by how he is described by the people in Jebr who knew him personally.
* [[SevenHeavenlyVirtues Four Cardinal Virtues]]: Presumably represents either Temperance or Prudence.
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* ToBeLawfulOrGood: She faces this dilemma during the attack on Jullas-Abllas
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* OhCrap: Has a truly epic moment when he recieves word that [[spoiler:Koinzell is still alive]].
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* GodivaHair: His long hair is tied into two braids. [[RuleOfCool With daggers hanging from them]].
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* CompleteMonster: Whatever shreds of decency he once had vanished altogether during the twenty year time gap. Taken UpToEleven when the lights are switched on in his underground chamber, revealing mountains of corpses from his failed attempts at immortality.
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* AlasPoorVillain: In his madness Barestar [[spoiler:recognises Koinzell as Ascherit, then begs him for help and cries about how he only ever wanted to be a merchant like his father]]. Even Koinzell found it pitiable.
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* CompleteMonster: Let's face it [[TragicVillain Glenn]] deserved his death, but he at least tried to atone in some manner. This guy [[spoiler: is picking a fight that will end in a one way slaughter, leading countless to death...[[GloryHound for his ego,]] rendering all the sacrifices made in the previous war pointless.]]
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* CompleteMonster: All of them. Despite the fake Ascherit claiming they had good intentions, it's hard to reconcile their supposedly noble goals with the rampant slaughter, rape and pillaging they took part in.
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* MoralEventHorizon: See For The Evulz above.
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* NotSoFastBucko: YourPrincessIsInAnotherCastle: Peepi's made it into the Empire, met people of her own race, is preparing to be relocated to a new settlement with a surrogate family and is just about to part ways with Koinzell peacefully. Then [[CompleteMonster Pago]] murders her adoptive parents out of pure spite and everything goes to hell again. Luckily Koinzell was there to save her.
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* BlackAndWhiteMorality: Believes that the Seven Heroes are absolutely good, and that Koinzell is absolutely evil for trying to kill them. [[spoiler:Blows up rather brutally in her face when Barestar orders his army to raze Jullas-Abllas to the ground.]]
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* ScarpiaUltimatum: Altea offers to help Koinzell across the border if he agrees to [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean pay the fee with his body]].body. Amusingly it turns out that Altea is actually a virgin and it's the first time she's asked it of anyone.