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* GreenEyes: As described in the first chapter, having big green eyes along with being a PerpetualSmiler is why she is described as [[OlderThanTheyLook still appearing childlike]].
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* PerpetualSmiler: As described in the first chapter, having big green eyes along with smiling perpetually is why she [[OlderThanTheyLook still appears childlike]].
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* ActionGirl: She's growing into this, though she's mostly trying to grow into a SpiritedYoungLady who is confident in her abilities than an outright fighter.
** She definitely becomes this when she [[spoiler:defeats Patchwork in [[https://twistedcogs.wordpress.com/2015/02/04/3-3-in-eorum-locum-in-their-place/ 3.3]].]]
** She definitely becomes this when she [[spoiler:defeats Patchwork in [[https://twistedcogs.wordpress.com/2015/02/04/3-3-in-eorum-locum-in-their-place/ 3.3]].]]
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* ActionGirl: She's growing into this, though she's mostly trying to grow into a SpiritedYoungLady young woman who is confident in her abilities than an outright fighter.
**fighter. She definitely becomes this an Action Girl when she [[spoiler:defeats Patchwork in [[https://twistedcogs.wordpress.com/2015/02/04/3-3-in-eorum-locum-in-their-place/ 3.3]].]]
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* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: One of the kindest characters in the books.
** As an example, one of the first projects she creates after starting the competition for her job is making better tools for her fellow competitors.
** As an example, one of the first projects she creates after starting the competition for her job is making better tools for her fellow competitors.
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* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: One of the kindest characters in the books.
**books. As an example, one of the first projects she creates after starting the competition for her job is making better tools for her fellow competitors.
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* BrownEyes: Very fitting since he's incredibly more practical and down-to-earth than Elena.
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* TenorBoy: Explicitly described as having a "strong tenor voice" in the first chapter.
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* BrownEyes: Very fitting since he'incredibly more practical and down-to-earth than Elena.
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* BrownEyes: Very fitting since he'incredibly he's incredibly more practical and down-to-earth than Elena.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Usually inverted. Since he's almost always serious, his OOC moments are usually happiness and cheer when things are going well.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Usually inverted. Since he's almost always serious, his OOC moments are usually happiness and cheer when things are going well.
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* BrownEyes: Very fitting since he'incredibly more practical and down-to-earth than Elena.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Elena feels like this when she begins in Studio De Luca [[spoiler:and again when she starts at De Rose.]]
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Elena feels like this when she begins in Studio De Luca [[spoiler:and again when she starts at De Da Rose.]]]]
* GreenEyes: As described in the first chapter, having big green eyes along with being a PerpetualSmiler is why she is described as [[OlderThanTheyLook still appearing childlike]].
* GreenEyes: As described in the first chapter, having big green eyes along with being a PerpetualSmiler is why she is described as [[OlderThanTheyLook still appearing childlike]].
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The protagonist whose journey ToBeAMaster artist is chronicled throughout the story. Elena is new to the city and just wants to be a good painter, but soon finds herself in the middle of studio politics, AncientConspiracy, and ''a lot'' of CharacterDevelopment, both [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands good]] and [[BreakTheCutie bad]]. [[spoiler: Currently the de facto TheLeader of the studio Da Rose]].
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The protagonist whose journey ToBeAMaster artist is chronicled throughout the story. Elena is new to the city and just wants to be a good painter, Fabera, but soon finds herself in the middle of studio politics, AncientConspiracy, and ''a lot'' of CharacterDevelopment, both [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands good]] and [[BreakTheCutie bad]]. [[spoiler: Currently the de facto TheLeader of the studio Da Rose]].
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* HypercompetentSidekick: Could be considered this for Master Da Rose. She's trying to fix the entire studio for the better while he could care less.
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* ObliviousToLove: Doesn't see that Arturo has crush on her.
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One of, if not ''the'' very first person Elena officially meets in Milia. Kind and supportive to her face, though he does have a [[HandsomeLech dark side]].
* [[spoiler:AgonyBeam: Actually, an agony touch. It makes him a very good asset to the studio.]]
* OnlyFriend: To Elena while she's at the Da Rose studio.
* [[spoiler:AgonyBeam: Actually, an agony touch. It makes him a very good asset to the studio.]]
* OnlyFriend: To Elena while she's at the Da Rose studio.
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A [[ArtInitiatesLife Caelator]] who has a temper but truly believes in art. She doesn't start out as the happiest person, but by the end she at least has respect for Elena and is shown in a more positive light.
* BerserkButton: Breaking her supplies. She became a screaming fit when it happened.
** Also, disrespecting art. It is SeriousBusiness to her and those who disrespect it may find themselves on the wrong end of her metal brushes.
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: Not at first, but she comes to be protective of Elena because of her naive nature. So much so, [[spoiler:she initiated an attack on another studio based on a slight to Elena]].
* HairTriggerTemper: Apparently had this ''bad'' when she started at the studio. It cooled down, but she still has a temper.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite her hostility, she is one of the most honest if [[BrutalHonesty blunt]] characters shown, and she believes in building herself up as an artist to stay at the studio instead of bringing other artists down.
!!Nicollo
* BerserkButton: Whether it was based on principles or because it was happening to [[LoveInterest Elena]], he didn't take the fact that her mother was abusing her very well.
* BoisterousBruiser: Very friendly and charming, as well as an excellent fighter.
* TheChampion: As the only sagittari in the studio, he defends the studio constantly. This allows some perks such as not really having [[UltimateJobSecurity to worry or work as much as everyone else]].
* NiceGuy: One of the nicest guys in the setting.
** [[spoiler:Realizing that Arturo had a crush on Elena didn't elicit any open hostility in him.]]
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* BerserkButton: Whether it was based on principles or because it was happening to [[LoveInterest Elena]], he didn't take the fact that her mother was abusing her very well.
* BoisterousBruiser: Very friendly and charming, as well as an excellent fighter.
* TheChampion: As the only sagittari in the studio, he defends the studio constantly. This allows some perks such as not really having [[UltimateJobSecurity to worry or work as much as everyone else]].
* NiceGuy: One of the nicest guys in the setting.
** [[spoiler:Realizing that Arturo had a crush on Elena didn't elicit any open hostility in him.]]
* BerserkButton: Whether it was based on principles or because it was happening to [[LoveInterest Elena]], he didn't take the fact that her mother was abusing her very well.
* BoisterousBruiser: Very friendly and charming, as well as an excellent fighter.
* TheChampion: As the only sagittari in the studio, he defends the studio constantly. This allows some perks such as not really having [[UltimateJobSecurity to worry or work as much as everyone else]].
* NiceGuy: One of the nicest guys in the setting.
** [[spoiler:Realizing that Arturo had a crush on Elena didn't elicit any open hostility in him.]]
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* BerserkButton: Whether it was based on principles or because it was happening to [[LoveInterest Elena]], he didn't take the fact that her mother was abusing her very well.
* BoisterousBruiser: Very friendly and charming, as well as an excellent fighter.
* TheChampion: As the only sagittari in the studio, he defends the studio constantly. This allows some perks such as not really having [[UltimateJobSecurity to worry or work as much as everyone else]].
* NiceGuy: One of the nicest guys in the setting.
** [[spoiler:Realizing that Arturo had a crush on Elena didn't elicit any open hostility in him.]]
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A [[ArtInitiatesLife Caelator]] who has a temper but truly believes in art. She doesn't start out as the happiest person, but by the end she at least has respect for Elena and is shown in a more positive light.
* BerserkButton: Breaking her supplies. She became a screaming fit when it happened.
** Also, disrespecting art. It is SeriousBusiness to her and those who disrespect it may find themselves on the wrong end of her metal brushes.
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: Not at first, but she comes to be protective of Elena because of her naive nature. So much so, [[spoiler:she initiated an attack on another studio based on a slight to Elena]].
* HairTriggerTemper: Apparently had this ''bad'' when she started at the studio. It cooled down, but she still has a temper.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite her hostility, she is one of the most honest if [[BrutalHonesty blunt]] characters shown, and she believes in building herself up as an artist to stay at the studio instead of bringing other artists down.
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!!Elena Lucciano/[[spoiler:Cog]]
The protagonist whose journey ToBeAMaster artist is chronicled throughout the story. Elena is new to the city and just wants to be a good painter, but soon finds herself in the middle of studio politics, AncientConspiracy, and ''a lot'' of CharacterDevelopment, both [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands good]] and [[BreakTheCutie bad]]. [[spoiler: Currently the de facto TheLeader of the studio Da Rose]].
!!Ele
!!Arturo
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* RuleAbidingRebel: She's trying to be this [[spoiler:because it means she can give her studio a competitive edge in the competition while not having to worry about any major consequences]].
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Elena feels like this when she begins in Studio Da Luca [[spoiler:and again when she starts at Da Rose.]]
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Elena feels like this when she begins in Studio Da De Luca [[spoiler:and again when she starts at Da De Rose.]]
* BerserkButton: Whether it was based on principles or because it was happening to [[LoveInterest Elena]], he didn't take the fact that her mother was abusing her very well.
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* NiceGuy: One of the nicest guys in the setting.
** [[spoiler:Realizing that Arturo had a crush on Elena didn't elicit any open hostility in him.]]
** [[spoiler:Realizing that Arturo had a crush on Elena didn't elicit any open hostility in him.]]
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A [[ArtInitiatesLife Caelator]] who has a temper but truly believes in art. She doesn't start out as the happiest person, but by the end she at least has respect for Elena and is shown in a more positive light.
* BerserkButton: Breaking her supplies. She became a screaming fit when it happened.
** Also, disrespecting art. It is SeriousBusiness to her and those who disrespect it may find themselves on the wrong end of her metal brushes.
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: Not at first, but she comes to be protective of Elena because of her naive nature. So much so, [[spoiler:she initiated an attack on another studio based on a slight to Elena]].
* HairTriggerTemper: Apparently had this ''bad'' when she started at the studio. It cooled down, but she still has a temper.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite her hostility, she is one of the most honest if [[BrutalHonesty blunt]] characters shown, and she believes in building herself up as an artist to stay at the studio instead of bringing other artists down.
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** She definitely becomes this when she [[spoiler:defeats Patchwork in [[https://twistedcogs.wordpress.com/2015/02/04/3-3-in-eorum-locum-in-their-place/ 3.3]].
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** She definitely becomes this when she [[spoiler:defeats Patchwork in [[https://twistedcogs.wordpress.com/2015/02/04/3-3-in-eorum-locum-in-their-place/ 3.3]].]]
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* ActionGirl: She's growing into this, though she's mostly trying to grow into a SpiritedYoungLady who is confident in her abilities than an outright fighter.
** She definitely becomes this when she [[spoiler:defeats Patchwork in [[https://twistedcogs.wordpress.com/2015/02/04/3-3-in-eorum-locum-in-their-place/ 3.3]].
* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Elena feels like this when she begins in Studio Da Luca [[spoiler:and again when she starts at Da Rose.]]
** She definitely becomes this when she [[spoiler:defeats Patchwork in [[https://twistedcogs.wordpress.com/2015/02/04/3-3-in-eorum-locum-in-their-place/ 3.3]].
* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Elena feels like this when she begins in Studio Da Luca [[spoiler:and again when she starts at Da Rose.]]
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Admit it. Her storm is this. [spoiler: It lets her automatically learn about the workings of just about anything as long as she tricks herself into thinking she owns it. ''ANYTHING''.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Admit it. Her storm is this. [spoiler: [[spoiler: It lets her automatically learn about the workings of just about anything as long as she tricks herself into thinking she owns it. ''ANYTHING''.]]
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Admit it. Her storm is this. [spoiler: It lets her automatically learn about the workings of just about anything as long as she tricks herself into thinking she owns it. ''ANYTHING''.
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* BoisterousBruiser: Very friendly and charming, as well as an excellent fighter.
* TheChampion: As the only sagittari in the studio, he defends the studio constantly. This allows some perks such as not really having [[UltimateJobSecurity to worry or work as much as everyone else]].
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* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: One of the kindest characters in the books.
** As an example, one of the first projects she creates after starting the competition for her job is making better tools for her fellow competitors.
* WideEyedIdealist: Very naïve and overly trusting. It starts to disappear throughout the story.
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* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: One of the kindest characters in the books.
** As an example, one of the first projects she creates after starting the competition for her job is making better tools for her fellow competitors.
* WideEyedIdealist: Very naïve and overly trusting. It starts to disappear throughout the story.
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