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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Kumo has a rather strained relationship with many other villages, and also cases of ItsPersonal with the Hyūga and the Uzumaki-clans.
* GreatEscape: [[spoiler:The first chunin-exam in Kumo consists the Genin having to break out of individual prison cells.]]
* SolidClouds: The ''Raiun Fields'', where the second Chunin-exams take place.
* TeethclenchedTeamwork: A lot of Konoha-nin [[spoiler:(including Masakado and the ''entire'' Hyūga-clan) hate the fact that they have to ally themselves with Kumo.]]
* GreatEscape: [[spoiler:The first chunin-exam in Kumo consists the Genin having to break out of individual prison cells.]]
* SolidClouds: The ''Raiun Fields'', where the second Chunin-exams take place.
* TeethclenchedTeamwork: A lot of Konoha-nin [[spoiler:(including Masakado and the ''entire'' Hyūga-clan) hate the fact that they have to ally themselves with Kumo.]]
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Kumo has a rather strained relationship with many other villages, and also cases of ItsPersonal with the Hyūga and the Uzumaki-clans.
* GreatEscape: [[spoiler:The first chunin-exam in Kumo consists the Genin having to break out ofUzumaki Clans. The Raikage himself is a particular individual prison cells.example, given that he's the only Kage who doesn't get invited to [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata's wedding given his involvement with the Hyūga Affair. Even his brother Killer Bee and fellow Kumo shinobi Karui are invited (the former because of his friendship with the bride and groom, the latter because Ino requested to invite her so she could spend time with Chōji), while the Raikage gets no invitation.]]
* GreatEscape: [[spoiler:The first Chūnin Exam in Kumo consists of the genin having to break out of individual prison cells.]]
* SolidClouds: The ''Raiun Fields'', where the secondChunin-exams Chūnin Exam take place.
* TeethclenchedTeamwork: A lot of Konoha-nin [[spoiler:(including Masakado and the ''entire''Hyūga-clan) Hyūga Clan) hate the fact that they have to ally themselves with Kumo.]]Kumo due to their personal history with that village]].
* GreatEscape: [[spoiler:The first chunin-exam in Kumo consists the Genin having to break out of
* GreatEscape: [[spoiler:The first Chūnin Exam in Kumo consists of the genin having to break out of individual prison cells.]]
* SolidClouds: The ''Raiun Fields'', where the second
* TeethclenchedTeamwork: A lot of Konoha-nin [[spoiler:(including Masakado and the ''entire''
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The Yondaime Raikage and current leader of Kumo. [[spoiler:He first appears during the Shimo-Arc, where two ROOT-Agents make and attempt on his life. It leads, however, to him agreeing to an alliance with Konoha.]]
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The Yondaime Raikage and current leader of Kumo. [[spoiler:He first appears during the Shimo-Arc, Shimo Arc, where two ROOT-Agents ROOT agents make and an attempt on his life. It leads, however, to him agreeing to an alliance with Konoha.]]
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* AchillesInHisTent: [[spoiler:After the attempt on his life, he outright breaks off negotiations, and then renegs on his agreement to let the Jinjūriki train under Killer Bee on Shimagame-island, until the latter talks some sense into him.]]
* AssassinOutclassin: He holds of [[spoiler:Fū and Torune long enogh for the Konoha-delegation to intervene. Danzō actually planned for him to survive, planning it as a FalseFlagOperation.]]
* HitMeDammit: To [[spoiler:Hinata, after he gets hit with her ThatLittleGirlWasMe.]]
* InconsistentSpelling: Due to the author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanized spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: When confronted with his action in the Hyūga-affair, he remains in his position that it was right for Kumo, although he acknowledges how morally wrong it was.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While he does believe [[spoiler:Jiraya's word that ROOT is a RenegadeSplinterFaction on its own, he still is doubtful Konoha, not due to hidden intentions, but due to perceived incompetence.]]
* AssassinOutclassin: He holds of [[spoiler:Fū and Torune long enogh for the Konoha-delegation to intervene. Danzō actually planned for him to survive, planning it as a FalseFlagOperation.]]
* HitMeDammit: To [[spoiler:Hinata, after he gets hit with her ThatLittleGirlWasMe.]]
* InconsistentSpelling: Due to the author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanized spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: When confronted with his action in the Hyūga-affair, he remains in his position that it was right for Kumo, although he acknowledges how morally wrong it was.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While he does believe [[spoiler:Jiraya's word that ROOT is a RenegadeSplinterFaction on its own, he still is doubtful Konoha, not due to hidden intentions, but due to perceived incompetence.]]
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* AchillesInHisTent: [[spoiler:After the attempt on his life, he outright breaks off negotiations, and then renegs on his agreement to let the Jinjūriki jinchūriki train under Killer Bee on Shimagame-island, Shimagame Island, until the latter talks some sense into him.]]
* AdaptationNameChange: Due to the author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanized spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
* AssassinOutclassin: He holdsof off [[spoiler:Fū and Torune long enogh enough for the Konoha-delegation Konoha delegation to intervene. Danzō actually planned for him to survive, planning it as a FalseFlagOperation.]]
* HitMeDammit: To [[spoiler:Hinata, after he gets hit with herThatLittleGirlWasMe.]]
* InconsistentSpelling: Due to the author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanized spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
ThatLittleGirlWasMe speech]].
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: When confronted with his action in theHyūga-affair, Hyūga Affair, he remains in his position that it was right for Kumo, although he acknowledges how morally wrong it was.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While he does believe[[spoiler:Jiraya's [[spoiler:Jiraiya's word that ROOT is a RenegadeSplinterFaction on its own, he still is doubtful of Konoha, not due to hidden intentions, but due to perceived incompetence.]] incompetence]].
* AdaptationNameChange: Due to the author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanized spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
* AssassinOutclassin: He holds
* HitMeDammit: To [[spoiler:Hinata, after he gets hit with her
* InconsistentSpelling: Due to the author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanized spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: When confronted with his action in the
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While he does believe
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!Higher-ranking Shinobi
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The jinchūriki of the Hachibi and Ē's adoptive brother. While outwardly a goofy rapper, he is initially the strongest jinchūriki due to having full-control over his bijū.
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The jinchūriki of the Hachibi and Ē's adoptive brother. While outwardly a goofy rapper, he is initially the strongest jinchūriki due to having full-control full control over his bijū.
* AdaptationNameChange: Similarly to his brother, he is "Killer B''ee''" instead of "Killer B".
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: [[spoiler:He calms down his brother after the failed attempt on his life.]]
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: [[spoiler:He calms down his brother after the failed attempt on his the latter's life.]]
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Similarly to his brother, he is "Killer B''ee''" instead of "Killer B".
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The jinchūriki of the Nibi. [[spoiler:She accompanies the Kumo-delegation to Shimo.]]
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The jinchūriki of the Nibi. [[spoiler:She accompanies the Kumo-delegation Kumo delegation to Shimo.]]
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** While their relationship in-canon is unknown, here she trained under Killer Bee in order to master her Bijū.
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** While their canonical relationship in-canon is unknown, here she trained under Killer Bee in order to master her Bijū.bijū.
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* BadassTeacher: Alongside Killer Bee, she sometimes teaches at the Shimo Academy.
* BerserkButton: Being reminded of her role as TeamMom. Also Bee's rapping.
* PungeonMaster: While not as bad as Kanji, she does enjoy some cat-related-wordplay during battle.
->'''Yugito:''' Cat got your tongue?
->'''Naruto:''' [[LamePunReaction Really?]]
* ShipTease: With Han during the Shimagame-Arc.
* SparedByAdaptation: Like her fellow jinchūriki.
* SupremeChef: What seems to be somewhat common among the jinchūriki [[note]]with Naruto, Han and Utakata also being praised for their cooking[[/note]], albeit she has a focus on seafood.
* BerserkButton: Being reminded of her role as TeamMom. Also Bee's rapping.
* PungeonMaster: While not as bad as Kanji, she does enjoy some cat-related-wordplay during battle.
->'''Yugito:''' Cat got your tongue?
->'''Naruto:''' [[LamePunReaction Really?]]
* ShipTease: With Han during the Shimagame-Arc.
* SparedByAdaptation: Like her fellow jinchūriki.
* SupremeChef: What seems to be somewhat common among the jinchūriki [[note]]with Naruto, Han and Utakata also being praised for their cooking[[/note]], albeit she has a focus on seafood.
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* BadassTeacher: Alongside Killer Bee, she sometimes teaches at the Shimo Shimogakure Shinobi Academy.
* BerserkButton: Being reminded of her role as the TeamMom. Also Bee's rapping.
* PungeonMaster: While not as bad as Kanji, she does enjoy somecat-related-wordplay cat-related wordplay during battle.
->'''Yugito:'''battle:
-->'''Yugito:''' Cat got yourtongue?
->'''Naruto:'''tongue?\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[snorting]'' [[LamePunReaction Really?]]
* ShipTease: WithHan during Han, starting with the Shimagame-Arc.
Kumo Chūnin Exams Arc.
*SparedByAdaptation: SparedByTheAdaptation: Like her fellow jinchūriki.
* SupremeChef: What seems to be somewhat common among the jinchūriki [[note]]with Naruto,Han Han, and Utakata also being praised for their cooking[[/note]], albeit she has a focus on seafood.
* BerserkButton: Being reminded of her role as the TeamMom. Also Bee's rapping.
* PungeonMaster: While not as bad as Kanji, she does enjoy some
->'''Yugito:'''
-->'''Yugito:''' Cat got your
->'''Naruto:'''
'''Naruto:''' ''[snorting]'' [[LamePunReaction Really?]]
* ShipTease: With
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* SupremeChef: What seems to be somewhat common among the jinchūriki [[note]]with Naruto,
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* WreathedInFlames: Her chakra-cloak consists of the Nibi's blue flames.
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* WreathedInFlames: Her chakra-cloak chakra cloak consists of the Nibi's blue flames.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: When confronted with his action in the Hyūga-affair, he remains in his position that it was right for Kumo, although he acknowledges how morally wrong it was.
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Due to the author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanized spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: InconsistentSpelling: Due to the author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanized spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A"."A".
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: When confronted with his action in the Hyūga-affair, he remains in his position that it was right for Kumo, although he acknowledges how morally wrong it was.
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: When confronted with his action in the Hyūga-affair, he remains in his position that it was right for Kumo, although he acknowledges how morally wrong it was.
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* ShipTease: With [[spoiler:Han during the Shimagame-Arc.]]
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* ShipTease: With [[spoiler:Han Han during the Shimagame-Arc.]]
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: When confronted with his action in the Hyūga-affair, he remains in his position that it was right for Kumo, although he acknowlegdes how morally wrong it was.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: When confronted with his action in the Hyūga-affair, he remains in his position that it was right for Kumo, although he acknowlegdes acknowledges how morally wrong it was.
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Due to the author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanised spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While he does believe [[spoiler:Jiraya's word that ROOT is a RenegadeSplinterFaction on its own, he still is doubtful Konoha, not due to hidden intentions, but due to percieved incompetence.]]
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While he does believe [[spoiler:Jiraya's word that ROOT is a RenegadeSplinterFaction on its own, he still is doubtful Konoha, not due to hidden intentions, but due to percieved incompetence.]]
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Due to the author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanised romanized spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While he does believe [[spoiler:Jiraya's word that ROOT is a RenegadeSplinterFaction on its own, he still is doubtful Konoha, not due to hidden intentions, but due topercieved perceived incompetence.]]
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While he does believe [[spoiler:Jiraya's word that ROOT is a RenegadeSplinterFaction on its own, he still is doubtful Konoha, not due to hidden intentions, but due to
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** While their relationship in-canon is unkown, here she traind under Killer Bee in order to master her Bijū.
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** While their relationship in-canon is unkown, unknown, here she traind trained under Killer Bee in order to master her Bijū.
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* BerserkButton: Being remided of her role as TeamMom. Also Bee's rapping.
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* BerserkButton: Being remided reminded of her role as TeamMom. Also Bee's rapping.
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* TeamMom: Towards other jinchūriki, so mutch that Fū outright takes to calling her "mom".
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* TeamMom: Towards other jinchūriki, so mutch much that Fū outright takes to calling her "mom".
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler:His mothers suicide [[DrivenToSuicide stemming form]] her treatment as a mere brooding-mare for Storm-Release users [[DrivenToVillainy turned his brother away]] from Kumo, whereas he remained loyal, having recognised a change in the Raikage's ways. Nasumareta also states that Darui was simply too young to remember his mother's suicide.]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler:His mothers suicide [[DrivenToSuicide stemming form]] her treatment as a mere brooding-mare for Storm-Release users [[DrivenToVillainy turned his brother away]] from Kumo, whereas he remained loyal, having recognised recognized a change in the Raikage's ways. Nasumareta also states that Darui was simply too young to remember his mother's suicide.]]
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:Compared to the other members of the Kumo-delegation his isn't mutch developed before his death.]]
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:Compared to the other members of the Kumo-delegation his isn't mutch much developed before his death.]]
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:He is resureccted by Kabuto for the Kumo-invasion, leading to a rematch with Hiashi.]]
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:He is resureccted resurrected by Kabuto for the Kumo-invasion, leading to a rematch with Hiashi.]]
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* RedOniBlueOni: He appears as a irrational and {{Hotblooded}} compared to his clanhead Kiyoi. Although normaly he seems to be "pretty chill", according to Darui.
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* RedOniBlueOni: He appears as a irrational and {{Hotblooded}} compared to his clanhead clan-head Kiyoi. Although normaly normally he seems to be "pretty chill", according to Darui.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He tries to keep his discussion with the Hyūga civilised, albeit he agrees with Hosshin's demand for satisfaction.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He tries to keep his discussion with the Hyūga civilised, civilized, albeit he agrees with Hosshin's demand for satisfaction.
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[[Characters/TruePotentialKonohagakure Konohagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialIwagakure Iwagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialKirigakure Kirigakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialSunagakure Sunagakure]] | '''Kumogakure''' | [[Characters/TruePotentialOtherNinjaVillages Other Ninja Villages]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialAkatsuki Akatsuki]] -]]]]]
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[[Characters/TruePotentialKonohagakure Konohagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialIwagakure Iwagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialKirigakure Kirigakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialSunagakure Sunagakure]] | '''Kumogakure''' | [[Characters/TruePotentialOtherNinjaVillages Other Ninja Villages]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialAkatsuki Akatsuki]] -]]]]]
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[[folder: General]]
[[folder: General]]
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[[Characters/TruePotentialKonohagakure Konohagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialIwagakure Iwagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialKirigakure Kirigakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialSunagakure Sunagakure]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialKumogakure Kumogakure]] '''Kumogakure''' | [[Characters/TruePotentialOtherNinjaVillages Other Ninja Villages]] | [[Characters/TruePotentialAkatsuki Akatsuki]] -]]]]]
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! Leadership
[[folder: Ē]]
!! Ē
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!! Ē
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!! Ē
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!!Ē
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! Higher-ranking Shinobi
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!!Darui
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!! Cee
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! Other Kumo-Nin
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!! Karui
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* BerserkButton: All matters concerning his father's death. According to Darui, he is normally more calm.
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* BerserkButton: All matters concerning his father's death. According to Darui, he is normally more calm.calmer.
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* ThreateningMediator: He is assigned to mediate the meeting between the Hyūga and the Yotsuki, which he mostly does by showing off his BFS.
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* ThreateningMediator: He is assigned to mediate the meeting between the Hyūga and the Yotsuki, which he mostly does by showing off his BFS.
{{BFS}}.
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* {{Foil}}: The Neji, who also lost hsi father in the Hyūga-affair and thus grew up orphaned. [[spoiler: Neji actually uses this case of ASharedSuffering to diffuse their tensions.]]
* MissingMom: He lost his mother early on, leading to Kashikoi's death leaving him orphaned.
* MissingMom: He lost his mother early on, leading to Kashikoi's death leaving him orphaned.
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* {{Foil}}: The Neji, who also lost hsi his father in the Hyūga-affair and thus grew up orphaned. [[spoiler: Neji actually uses this case of ASharedSuffering to diffuse their tensions.]]
* MissingMom: He lost his mother early on, leading to Kashikoi's death leaving him fully orphaned.
* MissingMom: He lost his mother early on, leading to Kashikoi's death leaving him fully orphaned.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He tries to keep his discussion with the Hyūga, albeit he agrees with Hosshin's demand for satisfaction.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He tries to keep his discussion with the Hyūga, Hyūga civilised, albeit he agrees with Hosshin's demand for satisfaction.
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* TeethclenchedTeamwork: A lot of Konoha-nin [[spoiler:(including Masakado and the ''entire'' Hyūga-clan) hate the fact that they have to ally themselves with Kumo.]]
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Due to the Author using romanji rather than the fully romanised spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Due to the Author author using the romanji spelling rather than the fully romanised spelling, his name is written as "Ē" instead of "A".
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* TeethclenchedTeamwork: A lot of Konoha-nin [[spoiler:(including Masakado and the ''entire'' Hyūga-clan) hate the fact that they have to ally themselves with Kumo.]]
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