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* FrankensteinsMonster: Berna took pity on the younger sister after she ran afoul of Snark and stitched her back together. Unfortunately, she swapped the girl's arms.
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* FrankensteinsMonster: Berna took pity on the younger sister after she ran afoul of Snark and stitched her back together. Unfortunately, she swapped the girl's arms.hands.
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replacing with the proper wick since that's how they were intended
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* MundaneUtility: Her prosthetics really come in "handy" for all sorts of things.
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* MundaneUtility: Her prosthetics really come in "handy" [[{{Pun}} handy]] for all sorts of things.
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* DealWithTheDevil: These seem to be her stock and trade. In exchange for Snark's soul, she supplied Snark with her prosthetics, the Rabbit of Truth, and a boob job. She also reveals herself as the devil Music/RobertJohnson traded his soul to for a guitar.
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* DealWithTheDevil: These seem to be her stock and trade.[[{{Pun}} trade]]. In exchange for Snark's soul, she supplied Snark with her prosthetics, the Rabbit of Truth, and a boob job. She also reveals herself as the devil Music/RobertJohnson traded his soul to for a guitar.
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Just For Pun is a disambiguation
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* MundaneUtility: Her prosthetics really come in "[[JustForPun handy]]" for all sorts of things.
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* MundaneUtility: Her prosthetics really come in "[[JustForPun handy]]" "handy" for all sorts of things.
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* DealWithTheDevil: These seem to be her stock and [[JustForPun trade]]. In exchange for Snark's soul, she supplied Snark with her prosthetics, the Rabbit of Truth, and a boob job. She also reveals herself as the devil Music/RobertJohnson traded his soul to for a guitar.
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* DealWithTheDevil: These seem to be her stock and [[JustForPun trade]].trade. In exchange for Snark's soul, she supplied Snark with her prosthetics, the Rabbit of Truth, and a boob job. She also reveals herself as the devil Music/RobertJohnson traded his soul to for a guitar.
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* ButNotTooGay: Despite otherwise identifying as gay, he falls from the female Snark. Incidentally, this leads to his death.
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* ButNotTooGay: Despite otherwise identifying as gay, he falls from for the female Snark. Incidentally, this leads to his death.
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* ButNotTooGay: Despite otherwise identifying as gay, he falls from the female Snark. Incidentally, this leads to his death.
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* ExpressiveMask: The Rabbit of Truth is drawn with a face that changes expression as hers might under it.
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* ExpressiveMask: The Rabbit of Truth is drawn with a face that changes expression as hers might under it.
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The Chick is disambig.
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* TheLancer: She falls into a right-hand-man role to Leader in the Brigade's FiveManBand, mainly because her efforts to be TheChick keep falling through.
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* TheLancer: She falls into a right-hand-man role to Leader in the Brigade's FiveManBand, mainly because her efforts to be TheChick TheHeart keep falling through.
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* TheChick: Alice has more or less taken over Peace's role as this in the Brigade's FiveManBand, as the others make a point to look after due to her age and she is much better at being TheHeart than Sexy.
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* TheChick: TheHeart: Alice has more or less taken over Peace's role as this in the Brigade's FiveManBand, as the others make a point to look after due to her age and she is much better at being TheHeart this than Sexy.sexy.
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* FrankensteinsMonster: She is a patchwork being given life by the heart of Suspiriorum, the Mother of Sighs.
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%%* LiteralSplitPersonality: After Suspiriorum was beheaded and dismembered, Suspiriorum collected as many of her body parts as she could recover and stitched them together to create Berna. It's mentioned that the severed head of a witch -- strongly implied to be Suspiriorum's -- is a tourist attraction somewhere in Europe.
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* FrankensteinsMonster: She is a patchwork being given life by the heart of Suspiriorum, the Mother of Sighs.
%%* LiteralSplitPersonality:After Suspiriorum was beheaded and dismembered, Suspiriorum Lachrymarum collected as many of her body parts as she could recover and stitched them together to create Berna. It's mentioned that the severed head of a witch -- strongly implied to be Suspiriorum's -- is a tourist attraction somewhere in Europe.
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* JacobMarleyApparel: Played with. While she's technically undead, the hole in her chest from the poisoned arrow that killed her is still there, although it's now about the size of her hand and her ribs can be seen through it.
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* JacobMarleyApparel: Played with. While she's technically undead, the hole in her chest from the poisoned arrow that killed her is still there, although because of her body's decay it's now about the size of her hand and her ribs can be seen through it.
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* DCupDistress: This sets in after Demona boosts her bust. She's initially happy with the results, but since she's not used to the extra weight, they throw off her balance and tire her out. Even worse, her preoccupation with them blunts her effectiveness at seduction since she can't get away from talking about them whenever she gets into a conversation with a man.
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* DCupDistress: This sets in after Demona boosts her bust. She's initially happy with the results, but since she's not used to the extra weight, they throw off her balance and tire her out. Even worse, her preoccupation with them blunts her effectiveness at seduction since she can't get away stop herself from talking about them whenever she gets into a conversation with a man.
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* MsFanservice: They're the most consistently fanservicey characters in the story. Carrie is introduced in her underwear, both she and Mischa wear [[BareYourMidriff midriff-baring]] tops, and all three are shown in bikinis in the pool.
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* MsFanservice: They're the most consistently fanservicey characters in the story. Carrie is introduced in her underwear, both she and Mischa wear [[BareYourMidriff midriff-baring]] midriff-baring tops, and all three are shown in bikinis in the pool.
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* BuxomIsBetter: She decides to spend her last wish from Demona on large boobs.
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* BuxomIsBetter: BuxomBeautyStandard: She decides to spend her last wish from Demona on large boobs.
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* BuxomIsBetter: He seems to think so after getting a hug from Alice's sister post-boob job, but in a later chapter he recounts a nightmare in which giant boobs are smothering him and [[SubvertedTrope seems to have sworn off of them forever]] (to Sexy's delight).
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* BuxomIsBetter: BuxomBeautyStandard: He seems to think so after getting a hug from Alice's sister post-boob job, but in a later chapter he recounts a nightmare in which giant boobs are smothering him and [[SubvertedTrope seems to have sworn off of them forever]] (to Sexy's delight).
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* BuxomIsBetter: Downplayed; while she's nowhere near her sister's upgraded proportions, in ch. 67 she's secretly tickled that in those 5 years she's grown up to be more buxom than Sexy.
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* BuxomIsBetter: BuxomBeautyStandard: Downplayed; while she's nowhere near her sister's upgraded proportions, in ch. 67 she's secretly tickled that in those 5 years she's grown up to be more buxom than Sexy.
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* BuxomIsBetter: She was five years older than anyone else in the Brigade and quite endowed. Leader noticed, [[InvokedTrope or at least Sexy thinks so]].
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* BuxomIsBetter: BuxomBeautyStandard: She was five years older than anyone else in the Brigade and quite endowed. Leader noticed, [[InvokedTrope or at least Sexy thinks so]].
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* TrueLoveIsExceptional: Despite otherwise being gay, he falls in love with Snark to the extent that he actually visits her with the intent to propose. Unfortunately, she's a SerialKiller who targets men she considers attractive.
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* TrueLoveIsExceptional: Despite otherwise being gay, he falls in love with Snark to the extent that he actually visits planned to propose to her with the intent to propose. after finishing his work in Japan. Unfortunately, she's she happens to be a SerialKiller who targets men she considers attractive.
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* BuryYourGays: He's killed by Snark in chapter 30.
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* BuryYourGays: He's killed by Snark in chapter 30.30, ironically right after confessing to being in love with her.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: He's quick to remind potential suitors he's gay, but he fell in love with Alice's sister.
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Helena, AKA Lachrymarum, the Mother of Tears, is one of the two maids. She's very cheerful and upbeat, and together with Berna, she keeps the Voynich spotless and still has plenty of energy leftover for her own pursuits.
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Helena, AKA Lachrymarum, the Mother of Tears, is one of the two maids. She's very cheerful and upbeat, and together with Berna, she keeps the Voynich spotless and still has plenty of energy leftover left over for her own pursuits.
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-->*''to Mamiya, before killing her''* But today, something incredibly wonderful happened. I'm really happy right now. And that means...I've earned myself a '''treat'''!
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* EyeScream: She lost one of her eyes to an arrow fired by Spanish soldiers. In modern times she has a glass eye in its place, swapping it out for an eyepatch after it was accidentally broken.
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'''Leader''': That dumb maid...she's so tiny. How can she be so dang strong?
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'''Leader''': That dumb maid... she's so tiny. How can she be so dang strong?
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* FrankensteinsMonster: She's a patchwork being given life by the heart of Suspiriorum, the Mother of Sighs.
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* FrankensteinsMonster: She's She is a patchwork being given life by the heart of Suspiriorum, the Mother of Sighs.Sighs.
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* BoomHeadshot: His specialty as an assassin. He snipes the two male Mercero dealers from his hotel room in one of the early chapters, and then uses the ferris wheel in the amusement park as his nest to try to snipe the female Mercero dealers in their hotel room, but they escape.
* BuryYourGays: He's killed by Snark in ch. 30.
* BuryYourGays: He's killed by Snark in ch. 30.
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* BoomHeadshot: His specialty as an assassin. He snipes the two male Mercero dealers from his hotel room in one of the early chapters, and then uses the ferris Ferris wheel in the amusement park as his nest to try to snipe the female Mercero dealers in their hotel room, but they escape.
* BuryYourGays: He's killed by Snark inch. chapter 30.
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* DistressedDude: The final chapters cover him getting caught by his old gang and tortured to the point of severe mutilation. If not for Helena showing up, he most likely would have died.
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* DistressedDude: The final chapters cover him getting caught by his old gang and tortured to the point of severe mutilation. If not for The only thing that saves him from death is Helena showing up, he most likely would have died.up [[spoiler:and, a few chapters earlier, relocating his heart]].
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* DistressedDude: The final chapters cover him getting caught by his old gang and tortured to the point of severe mutilation. If not foe Helena showing up, he most likely would have died.
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* DistressedDude: The final chapters cover him getting caught by his old gang and tortured to the point of severe mutilation. If not foe for Helena showing up, he most likely would have died.
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* MayDecemberRomance: He and Helena fall in love, but he doesn't realize (at first) that she's actually Lachrymarum.
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* MayDecemberRomance: DistressedDude: The final chapters cover him getting caught by his old gang and tortured to the point of severe mutilation. If not foe Helena showing up, he most likely would have died.
* MayflyDecemberRomance: He and Helena fall in love, but he doesn't realize (at first) that she's actually Lachrymarum.
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* OlderThanSheLooks: The younger of the sisters is actually 21, making her a PsychopathicWomanchild.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: His very last flashback with his aniki shows them both naked [[ModestyBedsheet under the same sheets]]. The only other time this happens is when he was with Helena, his explicit love interest. While we don't see many instances of their relationship, it's still clear that his aniki meant a lot to him.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Taizou and his brother were both in the {{Yakuza}}, but they became disillusioned with the life and planned to leave the country with a chunk of their clan's money. His brother didn't make their rendezvous, so he went on as they'd agreed.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Taizou and his brother aniki were both in the {{Yakuza}}, but they became disillusioned with the life and planned to leave the country with a chunk of their clan's money. His brother aniki didn't make their rendezvous, so he went on as they'd agreed.
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* ScarsAreForever: Helena is able to fix all the damage done to him by his torturers except for his right eye.
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* ScarsAreForever: Helena is able to fix all the damage done to him by his torturers except for his right eye. On the plus side, their injuries match now.
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* JacobMarleyApparel: Played with. While she's technically undead, the hole in her chest from the poisoned arrow that killed her is still there, although it's now about the size of her hand and her ribs can be seen through it.