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A race of Men native to Mórenorë. They also act as Ungoliant's primary {{Mook}}s on the mainland and in the Islands of Ormal. The Darklanders native to northern Arvalin are known as Delduthlings.
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A race of Men native to Mórenorë. They also act as Ungoliant's primary {{Mook}}s {{Mooks}} on the mainland and in the Islands of Ormal. The Darklanders native to northern Arvalin are known as Delduthlings.
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* PaleSkinnedBrunette: A recurring physical trait among male (and occasionally female) Darklanders, especially those that hail from Arvalin and the Islands of Ormal.
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* PaleSkinnedBrunette: RavenHairIvorySkin: A recurring physical trait among male (and occasionally female) Darklanders, especially those that hail from Arvalin and the Islands of Ormal.
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A 19-year-old Darklander, formerly a soldier that served in the Islands of Ormal. Currently residing in the Delduthling port-city of Grindsmouth, and the personal servant of Naikamil. He is also the cousin of Grodyn and Rhejya.
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A 19-year-old 19-year old Darklander, formerly a soldier that served in the Islands of Ormal. Currently residing in the Delduthling port-city of Grindsmouth, and the personal servant of Naikamil. He is also the cousin of Grodyn and Rhejya.
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A 23-year-old Darklander from the port-city of Grindsmouth in Delduthland. He is one of the many soldiers that patrol Arvalin, and is one of Jykale's closest friends.
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A 23-year-old 23-year old Darklander from the port-city of Grindsmouth in Delduthland. He is one of the many soldiers that patrol Arvalin, and is one of Jykale's closest friends.
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An 18-year-old Ormalic Darklander hailing from the island of Tygho, and the twin brother of Rhejya. He is a soldier in Gunglip's army during the Swerting-Darklander War.
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An 18-year-old 18-year old Ormalic Darklander hailing from the island of Tygho, and the twin brother of Rhejya. He is a soldier in Gunglip's army during the Swerting-Darklander War.
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* [[spoiler: MySisterIsOffLimits: When his sister, Rhejya, begins having a romantic relationship with Jhebdryk.]]
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* [[spoiler: MySisterIsOffLimits: When [[spoiler:MySisterIsOffLimits]]: [[spoiler:When his sister, Rhejya, begins having a romantic relationship with Jhebdryk.]]
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A 25-year-old Darklander from Arvalin. Was a resident of het-Githlun before he was sent to join Gunglip's army during their conquest in the Sunlands during the Swerting-Darklander War. [[spoiler: He later begins to have romantic feelings for Grodyn's sister, Rhejya.]]
* [[spoiler: TheAce]]
* [[spoiler: TheAce]]
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A 25-year-old 25-year old Darklander from Arvalin. Was a resident of het-Githlun before he was sent to join Gunglip's army during their conquest in the Sunlands during the Swerting-Darklander War. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He later begins to have romantic feelings for Grodyn's sister, Rhejya.]]
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An 18-year-old Ormalic Darklander woman residing in Salvidor. She is sent to the Islands of Ormal to assist her twin brother, Grodyn. [[spoiler: Later becomes the LoveInterest of Jhebdryk.]]
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An 18-year-old 18-year old Ormalic Darklander woman residing in Salvidor. She is sent to the Islands of Ormal to assist her twin brother, Grodyn. [[spoiler: Later [[spoiler:Later becomes the LoveInterest of Jhebdryk.]]
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* [[spoiler: HugeGuyTinyGirl/ OneHeadTaller: With [[spoiler:HugeGuyTinyGirl/ OneHeadTaller]]: [[spoiler:With Jhebdryk.]]
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* RavenHairIvorySkin: Like the other Darklanders introduced thus far, she has grayish-white skin and dark hair, but she is also considered attractive by her fellow Darklanders, especially [[spoiler: Jhebdryk]].
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* RavenHairIvorySkin: Like the other Darklanders introduced thus far, she has grayish-white skin and dark hair, but she is also considered attractive by her fellow Darklanders, especially [[spoiler: Jhebdryk]].[[spoiler:Jhebdryk.]]
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A 24-year-old Darklander woman, whose father is the master of Grindsmouth, where she is the city's chief of security.
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A 24-year-old 24-year old Darklander woman, whose father is the master of Grindsmouth, where she is the city's chief of security.
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A black cold-drake from the Far North of Arda, mother of Merkampa and Piutalamba, and the only Dragon in Mórenorë.
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A black cold-drake from the Far North of Arda, mother of Merkampa and Piutalamba, and the only Dragon in Mórenorë.Mórenorë during the late First Age. She later becomes a high-ranking minion of Ungoliant, and even becomes the mistress of her own company of soldiers.
* AnIcePerson: Since she is a cold-drake, she has a body well-suited for cold environments.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Generally favors this, depending on her mood.
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** AudioErotica: Many characters in the story are fascinated by her voice. From the IceQueen-esque tone to her thick accent (see AccentAdaptation above), Naikamil's voice has earned her many admirers from among Ungoliant's minions.
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** AudioErotica: Many characters in the story are fascinated by her voice. From the IceQueen-esque tone to her thick accent (see AccentAdaptation above), Naikamil's voice alone has earned her many admirers from among Ungoliant's minions.
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* GeniusBruiserGeniusBruiser: She is essentially built like a war machine, but has a photographic memory, is an expert of her fellow dragons and other creatures of Melkor, and gracefully exhibits her sentience in her mind, speech, and body language.
* GrimUpNorth: Where she hails from.
* GrimUpNorth: Where she hails from.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Being a cold-drake, Naikamil can neither fly nor breathe fire.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Being a cold-drake, Naikamil can neither fly nor breathe fire. However, since her mother was an ice-drake (a wingless dragon with the ability to spit frozen water), she is built somewhat differently from other cold-drakes, and capable of spitting a jet of water several meters away.
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* AccentAdaptation: To emphasize her origins from the Far North, Naikamil is intended to speak with a thick Scandinavian accent (preferably Danish or Swedish) in ''Servants''.
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* AccentAdaptation: To emphasize her origins from the Far North, Naikamil is intended to speak with the equivalent of a thick Scandinavian accent (preferably Danish or Swedish) in ''Servants''.
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* AscendedExtra: Originally an obscure dragon mentioned in 'TabletopGame/MiddleEarthRolePlaying'', Naikamil is now a major character in ''The Servants of Ungoliant''.
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* AccentAdaptation: To emphasize her origins from the Far North, Naikamil is intended to speak with a thick Scandinavian accent (preferably Danish or Swedish) in ''Servants''.
* AscendedExtra: Originally an obscure dragon mentioned in'TabletopGame/MiddleEarthRolePlaying'', a module for ''TabletopGame/MiddleEarthRolePlaying'', Naikamil is now a major character in ''The Servants of Ungoliant''.
* AscendedExtra: Originally an obscure dragon mentioned in
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* AscendedExtra: Originally an obscure dragon mentioned in 'TabletopGame/MiddleEarthRolePlaying'', Naikamil is now a major character in ''The Servants of Ungoliant''.
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* CompellingVoice: She ''is'' a Dragon, after all.
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* CompellingVoice: She ''is'' a Dragon, after all. This also leads to...
** AudioErotica: Many characters in the story are fascinated by her voice. From the IceQueen-esque tone to her thick accent (see AccentAdaptation above), Naikamil's voice has earned her many admirers from among Ungoliant's minions.
** AudioErotica: Many characters in the story are fascinated by her voice. From the IceQueen-esque tone to her thick accent (see AccentAdaptation above), Naikamil's voice has earned her many admirers from among Ungoliant's minions.
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* AccentAdaptation: In ''The Servants of Ungoliant'', Leucaruth is more or less an equivalent of a ViolentGlaswegian. See also, Expy below.
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*** [[HairTriggerTemper Scale Trigger Temper]]: Is perpetually angry, and constantly hunting.
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*** [[HairTriggerTemper Scale Trigger Temper]]: Is "Is perpetually angry, and constantly hunting.hunting".
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* PlayingWithFire: Since she is a fire-drake, this should be expected.
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* {{Expy}}: In ''The Servants of Ungoliant'', Leucaruth is basically [[Theatre/{{Macbeth}} Lady Macbeth]], [[{{Dissimile}} only]] [[RecycledInSpace a]] [[ScaledUp Dragon]].
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Leucaruth is a fire-drake, which is a wingless, fire-breathing dragon.
* PlayingWithFire:Since she is a fire-drake, this should be expected.
See OurDragonsAreDifferent.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Leucaruth is a fire-drake, which is a wingless, fire-breathing dragon.
* PlayingWithFire:
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[[folder: Servants of Morgoth]]
!Leucaruth
A female fire-drake that resides in the northern regions of Middle-earth. She dwelt with Naikamil for a brief period of time.
* CanonForeigner: Like Naikamil, she was a dragon created for ''Middle-earth Role Playing''.
* EvilRedhead
** FieryRedhead
*** [[HairTriggerTemper Scale Trigger Temper]]: Is perpetually angry, and constantly hunting.
** GreenEyedRedhead
* PlayingWithFire: Since she is a fire-drake, this should be expected.
[[folder: Servants of Morgoth]]
!Leucaruth
A female fire-drake that resides in the northern regions of Middle-earth. She dwelt with Naikamil for a brief period of time.
* CanonForeigner: Like Naikamil, she was a dragon created for ''Middle-earth Role Playing''.
* EvilRedhead
** FieryRedhead
*** [[HairTriggerTemper Scale Trigger Temper]]: Is perpetually angry, and constantly hunting.
** GreenEyedRedhead
* PlayingWithFire: Since she is a fire-drake, this should be expected.
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: She wears no boots or stockings on her feet, but makes up for it with...(see HandyCuffs below).
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: She Like most Delduthling women, she is regularly barefoot, though she wears no boots or stockings bracers on her feet, but makes up for it with...(see HandyCuffs below).ankles.
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An 18-year-old Darklander hailing from the Ormalic island of Tygho, and the twin brother of Rhejya. He is a soldier in Gunglip's army during the Swerting-Darklander War.
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An 18-year-old Ormalic Darklander woman residing in Salvidor. She is sent to the Islands of Ormal to assist her twin brother, Grodyn. [[spoiler: Later becomes the LoveInterest of Jhebdryk.]]
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Currently, she is the only female Darklander that is named ''and'' featured in the series.
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!!Jyldhrani
A 24-year-old Darklander woman, whose father is the master of Grindsmouth, where she is the city's chief of security.
* ActionGirl
* BarefistedMonk: Seldom uses weapons, preferring to use her acrobatics, hands, and feet in combat.
* BareYourMidriff
* DoesNotLikeShoes: She wears no boots or stockings on her feet, but makes up for it with...(see HandyCuffs below).
* ForeheadOfDoom
* HandyCuffs: The leather bracers she wears over her ankles and wrists.
* KickChick
* RavenHairIvorySkin
* {{Stripperific}}
* ShinyMidnightBlack
A 24-year-old Darklander woman, whose father is the master of Grindsmouth, where she is the city's chief of security.
* ActionGirl
* BarefistedMonk: Seldom uses weapons, preferring to use her acrobatics, hands, and feet in combat.
* BareYourMidriff
* DoesNotLikeShoes: She wears no boots or stockings on her feet, but makes up for it with...(see HandyCuffs below).
* ForeheadOfDoom
* HandyCuffs: The leather bracers she wears over her ankles and wrists.
* KickChick
* RavenHairIvorySkin
* {{Stripperific}}
* ShinyMidnightBlack
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* TheArcher: Most Darklanders use projectile weapons, such as dart-bows.
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* GeniusBruiser: He is the most muscular of the main Darklanders, but he is just as intelligent as any Darklander.
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* [[spoiler: TheAce]]
* GeniusBruiser: He is the most muscular of the main Darklanders, and even built like a football player, but he is just as intelligent as any Darklander.
* GeniusBruiser: He is the most muscular of the main Darklanders, and even built like a football player, but he is just as intelligent as any Darklander.
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* JerkJock: Shows shades of this, being a strong, athletic type of warrior, and is definitely a competitive type. But this is Downplayed, and he is also a...
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* BraidsOfActionBraidsOfAction: Her hair is mostly tied down in a long, twisted ponytail.
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* RavenHairIvorySkin
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* RavenHairIvorySkinRavenHairIvorySkin: Like the other Darklanders introduced thus far, she has grayish-white skin and dark hair, but she is also considered attractive by her fellow Darklanders, especially [[spoiler: Jhebdryk]].
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* BraidsOfAction
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* IdenticalTwinIDTag: Rhejya's MessyHair is much longer, and is braided down in a thick ponytail. Her lips are bent ''up''wards Also, Rhejya speaks with a Salvidoric accent, while Grodyn speaks with an Ormalic accent.
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* IdenticalTwinIDTag: Rhejya's MessyHair is much longer, and is braided down tied in a thick ponytail.the aforementioned braid. Her lips are bent ''up''wards Also, Rhejya speaks with a Salvidoric accent, while Grodyn speaks with an Ormalic accent.
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* {{Tsundere}}
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* IdenticalTwinIDTag: Rhejya's MessyHair is much longer, and is braided down in a long thick ponytail. Her lips are bent ''up''wards Also, Rhejya speaks with a Salvidoric accent, while Grodyn speaks with an Ormalic accent.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Currently, she is the only female Darklander that is named in the series.
* TwinDesynch: Rhejya was sent away from Grodyn when they were both two years old, though were still perfectly aware of each other's existance, despite not meeting again until they were teenagers.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Currently, she is the only female Darklander that is named ''and'' featured in the series.
* TwinDesynch: Rhejya was sent away from Grodyn when they were both two years old, though were still perfectly aware of each other's existance, despite not meeting again until they wereteenagers. teenagers.
* TwinDesynch: Rhejya was sent away from Grodyn when they were both two years old, though were still perfectly aware of each other's existance, despite not meeting again until they were
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* IdenticalTwinIDTag: His preference to wear the aforementioned lenses over his eyes, and his lips are bent ''down''wards. Also speaks with an Ormalic accent, while Rhejya speaks with a Salvidoric accent.
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* IdenticalTwinIDTag: Rhejya's MessyHair is much longer, and is braided down in a long ponytail. Her lips are bent ''up''wards Also, Rhejya speaks with a Salvidoric accent, while Grodyn speaks with an Ormalic accent.
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* IdenticalTwinIDTag: Rhejya's MessyHair is much longer, and is braided down in a long ponytail. Also, Rhejya speaks with a Salvidoric accent, while Grodyn speaks with an Ormalic accent.
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* TwinDesync: Rhejya was sent away from Grodyn when they were both two years old, though were still perfectly aware of each other's existance, despite not meeting again until they were teenagers.
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* TwinDesync: TwinDesynch: Rhejya was sent away from Grodyn when they were both two years old, though were still perfectly aware of each other's existance, despite not meeting again until they were teenagers.
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* HalfIdenticalTwins: With Rhejya.
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* SingleMindedTwins: Averted! Though Grodyn and Rhejya are twins, they have fairly different personalities, and are perfectly capable of thinking and acting independently from each other.
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* [[spoiler: MySisterIsOffLimits: When his sister, Rhejya, begins having a romantic relationship with Jhebdryk.]]
* SingleMindedTwins: Averted! Though Grodyn and Rhejya are twins, they have fairly different personalities, and are perfectly capable of thinking and acting independently from each other. This is due to a...
* TwinDesynch: He and Rhejya were seperated from each other when they were two years old; Grodyn stays in the Islands of Ormal, while Rhejya is sent to Delduthland, and eventually Salvidor. They are still perfectly aware of each other's existance in the mean-time, though they did not meet each other again until they were both in their early teens.
* SingleMindedTwins: Averted! Though Grodyn and Rhejya are twins, they have fairly different personalities, and are perfectly capable of thinking and acting independently from each other. This is due to a...
* TwinDesynch: He and Rhejya were seperated from each other when they were two years old; Grodyn stays in the Islands of Ormal, while Rhejya is sent to Delduthland, and eventually Salvidor. They are still perfectly aware of each other's existance in the mean-time, though they did not meet each other again until they were both in their early teens.
* HalfIdenticalTwins: With Grodyn.
* SiblingSenioritySquabble: Subverted. Rhejya is older than Grodyn by a few seconds, but they don't hold this against each other, and Rhejya acts more like a CoolBigSis towards her brother.
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* TwinDesync: Rhejya was sent away from Grodyn when they were both two years old, though were still perfectly aware of each other's existance, despite not meeting again until they were teenagers.
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* SingleMindedTwins: Averted! Though Grodyn and Rhejya are twins, they have fairly different personalities from each other.
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* SingleMindedTwins: Averted! Though Grodyn and Rhejya are twins, they have fairly different personalities personalities, and are perfectly capable of thinking and acting independently from each other.
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A 25-year-old Darklander from Arvalin. Was a resident of het-Githlun before he was sent to join Gunglip's army during their conquest in the Sunlands during the Swerting-Darklander War. [[spoiler: He later begins to develope feelings for Grodyn's sister, Rhejya.]]
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A 25-year-old Darklander from Arvalin. Was a resident of het-Githlun before he was sent to join Gunglip's army during their conquest in the Sunlands during the Swerting-Darklander War. [[spoiler: He later begins to develope have romantic feelings for Grodyn's sister, Rhejya.]]
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* [[spoiler: HugeGuyTinyGirl: HugeGuyTinyGirl/ OneHeadTaller: With Rhejya.]]
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A 25-year-old Darklander from Arvalin. Was a resident of het-Githlun before he was sent to join Gunglip's army during their conquest in the Sunlands during the Swerting-Darklander War.
War. [[spoiler: He later begins to develope feelings for Grodyn's sister, Rhejya.]]
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* [[spoiler: HugeGuyTinyGirl: With Rhejya.]]
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An 18-year-old Darklander woman from Salvidor. She is sent to the Islands of Ormal to assist her twin brother, Grodyn.
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An 18-year-old Darklander woman from residing in Salvidor. She is sent to the Islands of Ormal to assist her twin brother, Grodyn.
Grodyn. [[spoiler: Later becomes the LoveInterest of Jhebdryk.]]
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* GeniusBruiser: He is the most muscular of the main Darklanders, but he is just as intelligent as any Darklander.Darklander.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: With Rhejya.
* JerkJock: Shows shades of this, being a strong, athletic type of warrior, and is definitely a competitive type. But this is Downplayed, and he is also a...
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: With Rhejya.
* JerkJock: Shows shades of this, being a strong, athletic type of warrior, and is definitely a competitive type. But this is Downplayed, and he is also a...
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A 19-year-old Darklander, formerly a soldier that served in the Islands of Ormal. Currently the personal servant of Naikamil.
* HypercompetentSidekick
* HypercompetentSidekick
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A 19-year-old Darklander, formerly a soldier that served in the Islands of Ormal. Currently residing in the Delduthling port-city of Grindsmouth, and the personal servant of Naikamil.
Naikamil. He is also the cousin of Grodyn and Rhejya.
*HypercompetentSidekickHypercompetentSidekick: To Gunglip, and later, Naikamil.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: How he feels whenever he has to clarify a situation to his fellow warriors.comrades in Delduthland.
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An 18-year-old Darklander hailing from the Ormalic island of Tygho, and the twin brother of Rhejya. He is a soldier in Gunglip's army during the Swerting-Darklander War.
* SingleMindedTwins: Averted! Though Grodyn and Rhejya are twins, they have fairly different personalities from each other.
* GeniusBruiser: He is the most muscular of the main Darklanders, but he is just as intelligent as any Darklander.* JerkJock: Shows shades of this, being a strong, athletic type of warrior, and is definitely a competitive type. But this is Downplayed, and he is also a...
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold
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!Gongs
An evil race obscurely related to Orcs. While they mostly dwell in the distant, more obscure regions of Middle-earth, they are also known to dwell in Mórenorë and especially the Islands of Ormal.
* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Subverted. At first they appear to be an even more war-like and hostile version of the Orcs, they are actually more passive outside of combat, and casually interact in peace with the other races that serve Ungoliant.
* AxCrazy
* BloodKnight
* GoddamnedOrks
* OurOrcsAreDifferent
* ProudWarriorRace
!!Gnaki
A Gong warrior that is one of the most loyal members of Gunglip's army in the Islands of Ormal.
*{{Cloudcuckoolander}}
* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Currently the only Gong introduced in the story that isn't AxCrazy.
An evil race obscurely related to Orcs. While they mostly dwell in the distant, more obscure regions of Middle-earth, they are also known to dwell in Mórenorë and especially the Islands of Ormal.
* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Subverted. At first they appear to be an even more war-like and hostile version of the Orcs, they are actually more passive outside of combat, and casually interact in peace with the other races that serve Ungoliant.
* AxCrazy
* BloodKnight
* GoddamnedOrks
* OurOrcsAreDifferent
* ProudWarriorRace
!!Gnaki
A Gong warrior that is one of the most loyal members of Gunglip's army in the Islands of Ormal.
*{{Cloudcuckoolander}}
* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Currently the only Gong introduced in the story that isn't AxCrazy.
