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* [[AmbiguouslyBrown Ambiguously]] ''[[AmbiguouslyBrown Grey]]'': The Delduthlings have features on their faces and bodies reminiscent of other races of Men in Arda (slanted dark-colored eyes, pale skin, dark, wild hair), but they still have features that distinguish them from the Men of Middle-earth. It is as though they are their very own race.
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* CoolBigSis: Although she is Grodyn's twin, she is older than him by only a few seconds.
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}{{Cloudcuckoolander}}/ TheComicallySerious: Their personalities are inclined to be either of these.
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* SeenItAll/ TheComicallySerious: SeenItAll: They worship a spider-like Maia as their queen, [[EqualOpportunityEvil work alongside Ogres, Gongs, Giants, and Pygmies on a regular basis]], live in one of the most mysterious regions of Arda, police the most dangerous parts of that region, battle borderline [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking speak with accents that seem alien in origin]]. So naturally, they are relatively fine with whatever person, demigod, or creature that sets foot upon their shores.
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* SeenItAll/ WeirdnessFilter: TheComicallySerious: They worship a spider-like Maia as their queen, [[EqualOpportunityEvil work alongside Ogres, Gongs, Giants, and Pygmies on a regular basis]], live in one of the most mysterious regions of Arda, police the most dangerous parts of that region, battle borderline [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking speak with accents that seem alien in origin]]. So naturally, they are relatively fine with whatever person, demigod, or creature that sets foot upon their shores.
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* SeenItAll/ WierdnessFilter: WeirdnessFilter: They worship a spider-like Maia as their queen, [[EqualOpportunityEvil work alongside Ogres, Gongs, Giants, and Pygmies on a regular basis]], live in one of the most mysterious regions of Arda, police the most dangerous parts of that region, battle borderline [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking speak with accents that seem alien in origin]]. So naturally, they are relatively fine with whatever person, demigod, or creature that sets foot upon their shores.
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* SeenItAll: They worship a spider-like Maia as their queen, [[EqualOpportunityEvil work alongside Ogres, Gongs, Giants, and Pygmies on a regular basis]], live in one of the most mysterious regions of Arda, police the most dangerous parts of that region, battle borderline [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking speak with accents that seem alien in origin]]. So naturally, they are relatively fine with whatever person, demigod, or creature that sets foot upon their shores.
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* SeenItAll: SeenItAll/ WierdnessFilter: They worship a spider-like Maia as their queen, [[EqualOpportunityEvil work alongside Ogres, Gongs, Giants, and Pygmies on a regular basis]], live in one of the most mysterious regions of Arda, police the most dangerous parts of that region, battle borderline [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking speak with accents that seem alien in origin]]. So naturally, they are relatively fine with whatever person, demigod, or creature that sets foot upon their shores.
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[[folder: Other Races of Mórenorë]]
!!Greblings
A savage race of feral Men from the Mórenorëan region of Gologoth.
* AlwaysChaoticEvil
* HalfHumanHybrid: Are supposedly descended from Gongs and the Swertings of the Sunlands.
* MilkyWhiteEyes
* WackyWaysideTribe
[[folder: Other Races of Mórenorë]]
!!Greblings
A savage race of feral Men from the Mórenorëan region of Gologoth.
* AlwaysChaoticEvil
* HalfHumanHybrid: Are supposedly descended from Gongs and the Swertings of the Sunlands.
* MilkyWhiteEyes
* WackyWaysideTribe
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battle borderline [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking speak with accents that seem alien in origin]]. So naturally, they are relatively fine with whatever person, demigod, or creature that sets foot upon their shores.
battle borderline [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking speak with accents that seem alien in origin]]. So naturally, they are relatively fine with whatever person, demigod, or creature that sets foot upon their shores.
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region, battle borderline [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking speak with accents that seem alien in origin]]. So naturally, they are relatively fine with whatever person, demigod, or creature that sets foot upon their shores.
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!!Rhejya
An 18-year-old Darklander woman from Salvidor. She is sent to the Islands of Ormal to assist her twin brother, Grodyn.
* BrainyBrunette
* MessyHair
* RavenHairIvorySkin
* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Currently, she is the only female Darklander that is named in the series.
An 18-year-old Darklander woman from Salvidor. She is sent to the Islands of Ormal to assist her twin brother, Grodyn.
* BrainyBrunette
* MessyHair
* RavenHairIvorySkin
* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Currently, she is the only female Darklander that is named in the series.
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* SeenItAll: They worship a spider-like Maia as their queen, [[EqualOpportuniyEvil [[EqualOpportunityEvil work alongside Ogres, Gongs, Giants, and Pygmies on a regular basis]], live in one of the most mysterious regions of Arda, police the most dangerous parts of that region,
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battle borderline [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking speak with accents that seem alien in origin]]. So naturally, they are relatively fine with whatever person, demigod, or creature that sets foot upon their shores.
battle borderline [[EldritchAbomination Eldritch Abominations]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking speak with accents that seem alien in origin]]. So naturally, they are relatively fine with whatever person, demigod, or creature that sets foot upon their shores.
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A race of Men native to Mórenorë. They also act as Ungoliant's primary {{Mook}}s on the mainland and in the Islands of Ormal.
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A race of Men native to Mórenorë. They also act as Ungoliant's primary {{Mook}}s on the mainland and in the Islands of Ormal.
Ormal. The Darklanders native to northern Arvalin are known as Delduthlings.
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A 23-year-old Darklander from the port-city of Grindsmouth. He is one of the many soldiers that patrol Arvalin, and is one of Jykale's closest friends.
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!!Jhebdryk
A 25-year-old Darklander from Arvalin. Was a resident of het-Githlun before he was sent to join Gunglip's army during their conquest in the Sunlands during the Swerting-Darklander War.
* NightmareFuelStationAttendant: Has a habit of extending hyperbole into what is more or less TooMuchInformation, much to the dismay of Grodyn.
* SeenItAll
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* LeParkour: The Darklanders that are assigned to the Islands of Ormal are inclined to be athletic and aware of their surroundings. They use both of these to their advantage when traveling throughout the Islands and the Sunlands.
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* SurroundedByIdiots: How he feels whenever he has to clarify a situation to his fellow warriors.
!!Grodyn
An 18-year-old Darklander from the Ormalic island of Tygho. He is a soldier in Gunglip's army during the Swerting-Darklander War.
* BadassBeret
* CoolShades: The pair of Unlight-tinted lenses he wears casually.
* MessyHair
* WarriorPoet: In addition to being a skilled warrior, he is also an experienced singer and musician.
!!Grodyn
An 18-year-old Darklander from the Ormalic island of Tygho. He is a soldier in Gunglip's army during the Swerting-Darklander War.
* BadassBeret
* CoolShades: The pair of Unlight-tinted lenses he wears casually.
* MessyHair
* WarriorPoet: In addition to being a skilled warrior, he is also an experienced singer and musician.
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* BishounenLine: Bears a number of somewhat more humanoid features than what is implied in the Tolkien legendarium.
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* EvilMatriarch
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* MotorMouth: Zigzagged. They speak at a normal pace, and are not as noisy as Gongs or Ogres, but they are inclined to speak with heavily pronounced Salvidoric or swift-paced Ormalic accents, which make them seem to speak faster or slower than they appear to be.
* PaleSkinnedBrunette: A recurring physical trait among male Darklanders, especially those that hail from Arvalin and the Islands of Ormal.
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!!Jykale
A 19-year-old Darklander, formerly a soldier that served in the Islands of Ormal. Currently the personal servant of Naikamil.
* MookLieutenant: To Naikamil.
* TheRenfield/ TheIgor: Acts as a (downplayed) combination of the two as Naikamil's servant.
!!Galkyn
A 23-year-old Darklander from the port-city of Grindsmouth. He is one of the many soldiers that patrol Arvalin, and is one of Jykale's closest friends.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: He has the same pale complexion and dark hair as most other Darklanders, but he also has a particularly skeletal face.
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A 19-year-old Darklander, formerly a soldier that served in the Islands of Ormal. Currently the personal servant of Naikamil.
* MookLieutenant: To Naikamil.
* TheRenfield/ TheIgor: Acts as a (downplayed) combination of the two as Naikamil's servant.
!!Galkyn
A 23-year-old Darklander from the port-city of Grindsmouth. He is one of the many soldiers that patrol Arvalin, and is one of Jykale's closest friends.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: He has the same pale complexion and dark hair as most other Darklanders, but he also has a particularly skeletal face.
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[[folder:Darklanders]]
A race of Men native to Mórenorë. They also act as Ungoliant's primary {{Mook}}s on the mainland and in the Islands of Ormal.
* BadassNormal
* ChildSoldiers: Most Darklanders that act as warriors are inclined to be teenagers and young adults.
* CombatPragmatist
* WiseBeyondTheirYears
[[folder:Darklanders]]
A race of Men native to Mórenorë. They also act as Ungoliant's primary {{Mook}}s on the mainland and in the Islands of Ormal.
* BadassNormal
* ChildSoldiers: Most Darklanders that act as warriors are inclined to be teenagers and young adults.
* CombatPragmatist
* WiseBeyondTheirYears
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* LanternJawOfJustice: A [[GenderFlip gender-flipped]], villainous, non-humanoid example. Naikamil's lower jaw is not only large, but so strong and heavy that she can use it to crush rocks, ice, and even human beings with little effort.
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* LanternJawOfJustice: A [[GenderFlip gender-flipped]], female, villainous, and non-humanoid example. Naikamil's lower jaw is not only large, but so strong and heavy that she can use it to crush rocks, ice, and even human beings with little effort.
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* LanternJawOfJustice: A [[GenderFlip gender-flipped]], villainous, non-humanoid example. Naikamil's lower jaw is so large and heavy that she can use it to crush rocks, ice, and even human beings with little effort.
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* LanternJawOfJustice: A [[GenderFlip gender-flipped]], villainous, non-humanoid example. Naikamil's lower jaw is not only large, but so large strong and heavy that she can use it to crush rocks, ice, and even human beings with little effort.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromRealFast: Her name translates to "Mother of Pain".
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[[folder: Ungoliant]]
The Spider of Night, the Dark Power in the South, and ruler of the Dark Land. Originally a high-ranking servant of [[TheSilmarillion Morgoth]], Ungoliant is now the most powerful being in the southern regions of Arda.
* AscendedExtra
* BigBad
** BidBadDuumvirate: With Morgoth, however loosely.
* EldritchAbomination
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Played straight, Subverted, and Averted, depending on the minions and subjects in question.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Eight of them.
* VillainousGlutton
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[[folder: Naikamil]]
A black cold-drake from the Far North of Arda, mother of Merkampa and Piutalamba, and the only Dragon in Mórenorë.
* BreakTheHaughty
* DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: To Ungoliant. Also literally, since she is a cold-drake.
* GeniusBruiser
* LanternJawOfJustice: A [[GenderFlip gender-flipped]], villainous, non-humanoid example. Naikamil's lower jaw is so large and heavy that she can use it to crush rocks, ice, and even human beings with little effort.
* NamesToRunAwayFromRealFast: Her name translates to "Mother of Pain".
* OurDragonsOurDifferent: Being a cold-drake, Naikamil can neither fly nor breathe fire.
* WhipItGood: Like all cold-drakes, Naikamil has a long, whip-like tail, and she definitely knows how to use it.
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[[folder: Ungoliant]]
The Spider of Night, the Dark Power in the South, and ruler of the Dark Land. Originally a high-ranking servant of [[TheSilmarillion Morgoth]], Ungoliant is now the most powerful being in the southern regions of Arda.
* AscendedExtra
* BigBad
** BidBadDuumvirate: With Morgoth, however loosely.
* EldritchAbomination
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Played straight, Subverted, and Averted, depending on the minions and subjects in question.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Eight of them.
* VillainousGlutton
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[[folder: Naikamil]]
A black cold-drake from the Far North of Arda, mother of Merkampa and Piutalamba, and the only Dragon in Mórenorë.
* BreakTheHaughty
* DarkActionGirl
* TheDragon: To Ungoliant. Also literally, since she is a cold-drake.
* GeniusBruiser
* LanternJawOfJustice: A [[GenderFlip gender-flipped]], villainous, non-humanoid example. Naikamil's lower jaw is so large and heavy that she can use it to crush rocks, ice, and even human beings with little effort.
* NamesToRunAwayFromRealFast: Her name translates to "Mother of Pain".
* OurDragonsOurDifferent: Being a cold-drake, Naikamil can neither fly nor breathe fire.
* WhipItGood: Like all cold-drakes, Naikamil has a long, whip-like tail, and she definitely knows how to use it.
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