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* AesopAmnesia: The events of ''Black Water'' destroy the flume he and Courtney traveled in, teaching both of them they [[spoiler:can't blend the Territories.]] When [[spoiler:Nevva Winter pretends she needs his technology back in First Earth to avert a catastrophe, he blindly believes her and goes along with her plan until Courtney stops him.]]
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* BlamingTheVictim: She blames Mark for everything that happens to Second Earth because he gave her his Acolyte's ring, ignoring that he only did it because she threatened to murder his parents.
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* NonIndicativeName: This guy is ''no'' saint. He also has nothing to do with either Saint Bernards or Great Danes, [[LampshadeHanging something that is joked about later in the series.]] However, [[UsefulNotes/{{Satan}} say it three times real fast.]]
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* NonIndicativeName: This guy is ''no'' saint. He also has nothing to do with either Saint Bernards or Great Danes, [[LampshadeHanging something that is joked about later in the series.]] However, [[UsefulNotes/{{Satan}} [[{{Satan}} say it three times real fast.]]
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* ObviouslyEvil: In his base form, Saint Dane wears [[DarkIsEvil all black]], has IcyBlueEyes, has [[WhiteHairBlackHeart creepy white hair]], and is [[EvilFeelsIcyCold ice cold to the touch]] and [[EvilSmellsBad smells bad]]. This is in contrast to his shapeshifted forms, [[ParanoiaFuel which look just like anyone else.]]
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* ObviouslyEvil: In his base form, Saint Dane wears [[DarkIsEvil all black]], has IcyBlueEyes, has [[WhiteHairBlackHeart creepy white hair]], and is [[EvilFeelsIcyCold [[EvilIsDeathlyCold ice cold to the touch]] and [[EvilSmellsBad smells bad]]. This is in contrast to his shapeshifted forms, [[ParanoiaFuel which look just like anyone else.]]
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* NonIndicativeName: This guy is ''no'' saint. He also has nothing to do with either Saint Bernards or Great Danes, [[LampshadeHanging something that is joked about later in the series.]] However, [[UsefulNotes/Satan say it three times real fast.]]
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* NonIndicativeName: This guy is ''no'' saint. He also has nothing to do with either Saint Bernards or Great Danes, [[LampshadeHanging something that is joked about later in the series.]] However, [[UsefulNotes/Satan [[UsefulNotes/{{Satan}} say it three times real fast.]]
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* CommutingOnABus: She comes in and out of the story and is the most likely Traveler for Bobby to go to when he needs help.
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* ShipTease: [[spoiler: With Courtney.]]
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* ShipTease: [[spoiler: With [[spoiler:With Courtney.]]
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* BusCrash: [[spoiler: She gets killed offscreen by Lifers before she can relocate to the island of Ibara.]]
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* BusCrash: [[spoiler: She [[spoiler:She gets killed offscreen by Lifers Flighters before she can relocate to the island of Ibara.]]
* MissionControl: Her role in ''The Reality Bug'', monitoring Bobby and Loor while they're in Lifelight and giving them critical information.
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* YankTheDogsChain: She spent her whole childhood in an environment just training her to be a genius with no love, then gets told that she can save her territory. But then it turns out Bobby is the lead traveler and he's going to save the territory as lead traveler. So she tries to save the territory on her own, [[spoiler:but she ends up losing]]. And even worse, [[spoiler:she dies before she gets to rejoin the fight against Saint Dane despite desperately wanting to give him payback.]]
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* YankTheDogsChain: She spent her whole childhood in an environment just training her to be a genius with no love, then gets told that she can save her territory. But then it turns out Bobby is the lead traveler and he's going to save the territory as lead traveler. So she She tries to save the territory on her own, [[spoiler:but she ends up losing]]. And even worse, [[spoiler:she dies before she gets to rejoin the fight against Saint Dane despite desperately wanting to give him payback.]]
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* {{Misblamed}}: The prequel series reveals she wasn't responsible for the assassination attempt on the Blok trustees and was simply in the wrong place at the wrong time.
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The main antagonist of the series, a shapeshifter with nebulous goals. His ModusOperandi is to turn worlds towards disaster by affecting a point in time that will be pivotal to that world's history.
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The main antagonist of the series, a shapeshifter with nebulous goals. His ModusOperandi modus operandi is to turn worlds towards disaster by affecting a point in time that will be pivotal to that world's history.
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* AnchoredShip: [[spoiler: With Loor. She won't date him while they're still fighting to save the universe, though they are mutually attracted to each other and she doesn't specify whether she'd consider doing so after the war.]]
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* AnchoredShip: [[spoiler: With [[spoiler:With Loor. She won't date him while they're still fighting to save the universe, though they are mutually attracted to each other and she doesn't specify whether she'd consider doing so after the war.]]
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* CatchPhrase: "And so we go."
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* CatchPhrase: CharacterCatchphrase: "And so we go."
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Bobby manages to [[spoiler:''kill'' Saint Dane]] when [[spoiler:Saint Dane]] attacks him in a blind rage in ''The Rivers of Zadaa''. Unfortunately, it doesn't stick.
* HealingHands: [[spoiler:He possesses the subconscious ability to heal people by touching them, bringing Loor back from the dead at the end of ''Rivers of Zadaa'' with this power.]]
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* LovableJock: He's a great friend to Mark, and a good basketball player before starting his adventures as a traveller.
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* LovableJock: He's a great friend to Mark, and a good basketball player before starting his adventures as a traveller.Traveler.
* NonActionGuy: In books 1-5 he can only barely defend himself against similarly non-action opponents. After Saint Dane nearly kills him in a fight at the beginning of ''The Rivers of Zadaa'' he TookALevelInBadass and trained with Loor to learn how to defend himself.
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* WrongGuyFirst: [[spoiler: The first guy she agrees to date ends up being Saint Dane in disguise.]]
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* WrongGuyFirst: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The first guy she agrees to date ends up being Saint Dane in disguise.]]
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* BadassInDistress: Shortly after a firefight with Saint Dune and harpooning a quip, he's snared by some mooks.
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* BadassInDistress: Shortly after a firefight with Saint Dune Dane and harpooning a quip, he's snared by some mooks.
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* DistressedDude: Captured early on by Denduron's royalty in book 1.
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Takes an attack meant for Bobby and Spader, and subsequently dies.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Takes an attack meant for Bobby and Spader, and subsequently dies.]]
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* DistressedDude: Captured He's captured early on by Denduron's royalty in book 1.
* HeroicSacrifice:[[spoiler: Takes [[spoiler:Takes an attack meant for Bobby and Spader, and subsequently dies.]]
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* TimeAbyss: [[spoiler: Rivals Saint Dane in age.]]
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* PoorCommunicationKills: [[spoiler:Much of the conflict of the later books comes about because Press told Bobby to keep the Territories separate, but not ''why'' or the consequences of merging them, leading to Bobby breaking the rules more and more out of desperation and playing into Saint Dane's plans.]]
* TimeAbyss:[[spoiler: Rivals [[spoiler:He rivals Saint Dane in age.]]
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* ShipTease: [[spoiler: With Bobby. They finally confess their feelings in book 6, but Loor won't date him while they still have a mission to accomplish.]]
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* ShipTease: [[spoiler: With [[spoiler:With Bobby. They finally confess their feelings in book 6, but Loor won't date him while they still have a mission to accomplish.]]
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* {{Catchphrase}}: "Welcome to [the Territory], Pendragon."
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* {{Catchphrase}}: CharacterCatchphrase: "Welcome to [the Territory], Pendragon."
* GodEmperor: At the start of ''The Soldiers of Halla'' he rules over Third Earth's Ravinian compounds as their king and god.
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* NonIndicativeName: This guy is ''no'' saint. He also has nothing to do with either Saint Bernards or Great Danes, [[LampshadeHanging something that is joked about later in the series.]] However, [[ArchangelLucifer say it three times real fast.]]
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* NonIndicativeName: This guy is ''no'' saint. He also has nothing to do with either Saint Bernards or Great Danes, [[LampshadeHanging something that is joked about later in the series.]] However, [[ArchangelLucifer [[UsefulNotes/Satan say it three times real fast.]]
** Bobby incorrectly assumes he [[KillAndReplace replaced Telleo.]] In that specific case, he was incorrect.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: While not true in every novel, some of his forms are popular among higher echelons of society, and other forms are popular among subset groups.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: While not true in every novel, some quite a few of his forms are popular among higher echelons of society, and other forms are popular among subset groups.groups. Whenever Saint Dane appears as himself, he has at least a small cult-like following on the Territory he shows up on.
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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Inverted. He's so evil Bobby flat out asks him if he's Saint Dane in disguise. Naymeer is complimented by this case of mistaken identity.
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* FlingALightOfHopeIntoTheFuture: [[spoiler:Despite dying before she got to see it, she created the plans for the few sane citizens of Veelox to colonize Ibara and restart civilization there. She also planned for the Pilgrims of Rayne to return to mainland Veelox one day to educate the Flighters.]]
* SmallNameBigEgo: She arrogantly believed she could outsmart Saint Dane with the Reality Bug. Saint Dane immediately turned the Bug against her efforts to help Veelox, mocking her along the way and [[HeroicBSOD causing her to break]].
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* YankTheDogsChain: She spent her whole childhood in an environment just training her to be a genius with no love, then gets told that she can save her territory. But then it turns out Bobby is the lead traveler and he's going to save the territory as lead traveler. So she tries to save the territory on her own, [[spoiler:but she ends up losing]].
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* YankTheDogsChain: She spent her whole childhood in an environment just training her to be a genius with no love, then gets told that she can save her territory. But then it turns out Bobby is the lead traveler and he's going to save the territory as lead traveler. So she tries to save the territory on her own, [[spoiler:but she ends up losing]]. And even worse, [[spoiler:she dies before she gets to rejoin the fight against Saint Dane despite desperately wanting to give him payback.]]
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* EvilIsPetty: He had no need to sacrifice the many dissidents of Ravinia in the Yankee Stadium, doing it mostly because he was irritated that they refused to follow him.
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* VoodooShark: Naymeer's presence is meant to be explained by TheReveal that he was meant to be the Traveler of Second Earth who would mentor Bobby rather than Press, but this raises a great deal more questions than it answers. How exactly he was meant to be a Traveler is confusing given that before Nevva interfered in the timeline he seemingly died of tuberculosis long before Bobby was born or Second Earth became a territory. Press never referred to another Traveler of Second Earth and Naymeer seemingly has none of a Traveler's powers, being limited to things that any acolyte can do with their ring. He creates a flume, but this is implied to be because Saint Dane gave him the power to do so, and in ''The Soldiers of Halla'' it takes all 10 of the Travelers to perform a similar feat. He doesn't come BackFromTheDead like any of the others do either, implying he was subject to CessationOfExistence once Saint Dane was done with him. There's also the question of why Nevva needed Mark's ring to give to him at all, given the later reveal that Saint Dane created the flumes to begin with. Was he not capable of making a singular ring?
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* VoodooShark: Naymeer's presence is meant to be explained by TheReveal that he was meant to be the Traveler of Second Earth who would mentor Bobby rather than Press, but this raises a great deal more questions than it answers. How exactly he was meant to be a Traveler is confusing given that before Nevva interfered in the timeline he seemingly died of tuberculosis long before Bobby was born or Second Earth became a territory. Press never referred to another Traveler of Second Earth and Naymeer seemingly has none of a Traveler's powers, being limited to things that any acolyte can do with their ring. He creates a flume, but this is implied to be because Saint Dane gave him the power to do so, and in ''The Soldiers of Halla'' it takes all 10 11 of the Travelers working together to perform a similar feat. He doesn't come BackFromTheDead like any of the others do either, implying he was subject to CessationOfExistence once Saint Dane was done with him. There's also the question of why Nevva needed Mark's ring to give to him at all, given the later reveal that Saint Dane created the flumes to begin with. Was he not capable of making a singular ring?
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* PowerMakesYourHairGrow: Inverted after ''The Reality Bug'', when Saint Dane's hair burns off after he wins on Veelox. Played straight in the ''Soldiers of Halla'', when he regrows long black hair after his seeming victory.
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* PowerMakesYourHairGrow: Inverted after ''The Reality Bug'', when Saint Dane's hair burns off after he wins on Veelox. Played straight in the ''Soldiers of Halla'', when he regrows long black hair after his seeming victory.