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* IntrepidReporter: They run a successful society news blog, and have a pencance to get into trouble on their search for scoops.[[spoiler: The fact that the Swashbuckler had to rescue them so often drove them to become the M/Patriarch in one possible path.]]
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* IntrepidReporter: They run a successful society [[CurrentEventsBlog news blog, blog]], and have a pencance to get into trouble on their search for scoops.[[spoiler: The fact that the Swashbuckler had to rescue them so often drove them to become the M/Patriarch in one possible path.]]
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* DartboardOfHate: While we don't know if Firebrand himself has one for anyone, we can learn that Caledon's firefighters got printouts of his face plastered to all the dartboards back at the station.
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* SecretKeeper: At the start of the story he's the only one in on the Swashbuckler's secret identity. Naturally, as the lasersword was his inventions.
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* SecretKeeper: At the start of the story he's the only one in on the Swashbuckler's secret identity. Naturally, as the lasersword was his inventions.invention.
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* SecretSecretKeeper: Potentially. There is a good chance that he actually figured out who's behind the mask -given how many clues as thrown his way in certain paths- but doesn't let it on.
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* SecretSecretKeeper: Potentially. There is a good chance that he actually figured out who's behind the mask -given how many clues as were thrown his way in certain paths- but doesn't let it on.
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* CradlingYourKill: If MC lets Bloodmist kill Firebrand it'll look as if she's doing this/is locked in a passionate kiss with him. Her being a vampire should however give no illusions to what she's actually doing.
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* AnyLastWords: If MC loses against Firebrand before the apartment fire he'll do this, giving MC the opportunity to turn the tables by either headbutting him, throwing him off physically or verbally, or giving him a big slobbery kiss.
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* SecretKeeper: At the start of the story he's the only one in on the Swashbuckler's secret identity. Naturally, as the lasersword was his inventions.
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* AHeroToHisHometown: To Dockerstown, his district, due to all his ill-gotten gains being used to help its people.
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* SecretSecretKeeper: Potentially. There is a good chance that he actually figured out who's behind the mask -given how many clues as thrown his way in certain paths- but doesn't let it on.
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* DeathTrap: Only villain in the game to do this. If he wins the fight after the apartment fire, he'll set one up in a fireworks warehouse. He ''does'' feel a bit sorry for trying to kill the MC in such a spectacular way, but ''the cause comes first''. He's also livestreaming the whole thing and YMMV on whether that is a cruel taunt or a sneaky safety-measure to make sure the MC actually gets rescued.
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* ElementalPunch: His fighting MO (aside from throwing Fireballs) is setting his hands on fire. They're also the only part of him that he can do that with.
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* SharingABody: [[spoiler: This can happen to them in one possible ending.]]
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* SharingABody: [[spoiler: This can happen to them in one possible ending.]]ending, if magical mishaps during the final battle cause the twins to merge into one body.
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* SingleMindedTwins: A bit of a running joke throughout the story (that MC and their twin are [[TheDividual the same person in two bodies]]), that can however come back around and bite them in the back in certain endings (see SharingABody above).
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: The game lets the player net achievements for failure (such as getting captured by the three main villains) without barring one from ultimately saving the day.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: The Player can go back to their civilian life in the end.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: The Player can go back to their civilian life in the end.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: The game lets the player Player net achievements for failure (such as getting captured by the three main villains) without barring one them from ultimately saving the day.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: ThePlayer MC can go back to their civilian life in the end.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: The
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* LetsGetDangerous: While they do have the same outstanding athletic abilities as their twin, they start out ''just'' a TV show host with no experience in crimefighting whatsoever. Does not mean they can't kick the behind of a villain threatening the station even before the story really starts.
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* LetsGetDangerous: While they do the MC does have the same outstanding athletic abilities as their twin, they start out ''just'' a TV show host with no experience in crimefighting whatsoever. Does not mean they can't kick the behind of a villain threatening the station even before the story really starts.
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* SecretRelationship: With the Reporter. MC only finds out about this after the reporter gives them a passionate smooch while they are masquerading as the Swashbuckler.
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* SecretRelationship: With the Reporter. The MC only finds out about this after the reporter gives them a passionate smooch while they are masquerading as the Swashbuckler.
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* TheAgeless: She got turned in 1752, when she was probably in her late 20s early 30s (if the most likely MC's age is anything to go by)
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* TheAgeless: She got turned in 1752, the 1750s, when she was probably in her late 20s early 30s (if the most likely MC's age is anything to go by)
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:This can happen to her if you have a better relationship with Firebrand and let him kill her]].
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:This can happen to her if you have MC has a better relationship with Firebrand and let lets him kill her]].
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* AntiClimacticUnmasking: Can happen with him when you best him in battle and decide to see who is under the hood [[StrangerBehindTheMask without having found his name first]]. [[spoiler:If you try to romance him as civilian in the end, this will be acknowledged and you'll learn his name when he starts working as lighting tech at your station.]]
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* AntiClimacticUnmasking: Can happen with him when you best MC bests him in battle and decide decides to see who is under the hood [[StrangerBehindTheMask without having found his name first]]. [[spoiler:If you try MC tries to romance him as civilian in the end, this will be acknowledged and you'll they'll learn his name when he starts working as lighting tech at your their station.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Can happen to him if you have a better relationship with Bloodmist and let her kill him]].
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Can happen to him if you have MC has a better relationship with Bloodmist and let lets her kill him]].
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: At first he might come across as the ''Brawns'' contrasting Bloodmist's ''Brains''. Nevertheless while ''precision isn't his style'' (according to the MC) he [[spoiler:built a bomb with incorrectly color-coded wires possibly on purpose, managed to set said bomb up without almost anyone noticing, and, at least in one path, learned how to control fire's path in about two weeks. He also worked as a sous-chef, which does require a certain level of organizational talent.]]
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: At first he might come across as the ''Brawns'' contrasting Bloodmist's ''Brains''. Nevertheless while ''precision isn't his style'' (according to the MC) he [[spoiler:built built a bomb with incorrectly color-coded wires possibly on purpose, managed to set said bomb up without almost anyone noticing, and, at least in one path, learned how to control fire's path in about two weeks. He also worked as a sous-chef, which does require a certain level of organizational talent.]]See GeniusBruiser below.
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* GeniusBruiser: While he is hot-headed and impulsive most of the time, a bit of a throwaway-line reveals he worked as a Sous-Chef at a high-class restaurant. This means he must have gone to college and earned his bachelor's degree in culinary arts/science and have shown great organizational, teamwork and general cooking skills.
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-> Name: Chief Robinson
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* TheCommissionerGordon: Chief Robinson (or Jamison, if the player picks 'Robinson' as their name). Sort of, at least. He does respect the Swashbuckler, but makes no secret of the Swashbuckler kinda grinding his nerves. Will also not hesitate arresting the player for wasting police time.
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* NoFullNameGiven: We never learn his first name.
* OneSteveLimit: He is another character whose name will change depending on the player's own name. His default name is ''Robinson'' (no first name given), but can change to Jamison.
* TheCommissionerGordon:Chief Robinson (or Jamison, if the player picks 'Robinson' as their name). Sort of, at least. He does respect the Swashbuckler, but makes no secret of the Swashbuckler kinda grinding his nerves. Will also not hesitate arresting the player for wasting police time.
* OneSteveLimit: He is another character whose name will change depending on the player's own name. His default name is ''Robinson'' (no first name given), but can change to Jamison.
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* YourVampiresSuck: Not too impressed when the MC tries to use popculture methods against her.
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* YourVampiresSuck: Not too impressed when the MC tries to use popculture pop-culture methods against her.
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!!(Fr)Enemies
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-> Real Name: Sonia [=MacAllister=]
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* TheCommissionerGordon: Chief Robinson (or Jamison, if the player picks 'Robinson' as their name). Sort of, at least. He does respect the Swashbuckler, but makes no secret of the Swashbuckler kinda grinding his nerves. Will also not hesitate arresting the player for wasting police time.
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!!(Fr)Enemies
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-> Real Name: Sonia [=MacAllister=]
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-> Real Name: Sonia [=MacAllister=]
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* BigBad: They are ones behind the kidnapping of the MC's twin.
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* KissOfTheVampire: Besides what's described in KissOfDistraction above, even her way of [[spoiler:killing Firebrand in one possible path]] is likened t a passionate kiss.
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* AbsurdlySharpClawsAbsurdlySharpClaws: Her MO for fighting. Her nails/claws are hard as steel when she wants.
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* KissOfTheVampireKissOfTheVampire: Besides what's described in KissOfDistraction above, even her way of [[spoiler:killing Firebrand in one possible path]] is likened t a passionate kiss.
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VillainWithGoodPublicity: Her civilian identity is part of one of the wealthiest, oldest and most influential families in the city.
*VoluntaryShapeshiftingVoluntaryShapeshifting: She can change her complexion and hair at will, as well as hide her fangs.
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* AWolfInSheepsClothing:AWolfInSheepsClothing: In his civilian guise he's regarded as a formidable and quite approachable businessman, who isn't above making his rounds through the casino's restaurant to have friendly chats with the patrons.
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* ChurchgoingVillain: Firebrand's catholic, has a strict moral codex about never attacking churches of any kind, helps out his church's charity (both legally and not), and in one path is shown crossing himself when he gets flustered.
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* OneSteveLimit: He is one of the characters whose name will change depending on what the player enters as their own name. His default name is Quintin Marsh, but their first name can change to Quincy or Quinton, and his surname can change to Morris.
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* OneSteveLimit: He is one of the characters whose name will change depending on what the player enters as their own name. His default name is Quintin Quentin Marsh, but their first name can change to Quincy or Quinton, Quillon, and his surname can change to Morris.
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* TheAgeless: She got turned in 1752, when she was probably in her late 20s early 30s (if the most likely MC age is anything to go by)
* AntiVillain: Her main motivation is to keep the city prospering while preserving the Old City, as [[spoiler:it reminds her of her late husband]]
* AWolfInSheepsClothing: In her civilian guise she's a respected member of Caledon City's High Society and [[spoiler:member of one of the city's oldest families. She's also president of the historical society]]
* AntiVillain: Her main motivation is to keep the city prospering while preserving the Old City, as [[spoiler:it reminds her of her late husband]]
* AWolfInSheepsClothing: In her civilian guise she's a respected member of Caledon City's High Society and [[spoiler:member of one of the city's oldest families. She's also president of the historical society]]
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* TheAgeless: She got turned in 1752, when she was probably in her late 20s early 30s (if the most likely MC MC's age is anything to go by)
* AntiVillain: Her main motivation is to keep the city prospering while preserving the Old City, as [[spoiler:it reminds her of her latehusband]]
husband.]]
* AWolfInSheepsClothing: In her civilianguise guise, she's a respected member of Caledon City's High Society and [[spoiler:member of one of the city's oldest families. She's also president of the historical society]]
* AntiVillain: Her main motivation is to keep the city prospering while preserving the Old City, as [[spoiler:it reminds her of her late
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Can happen to her if you have a better relationship with Firebrand and let him kill her]].
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Can [[spoiler:This can happen to her if you have a better relationship with Firebrand and let him kill her]].
