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* IWillWaitForYou: In the epilogue, [[spoiler:she's been waiting for Berenice to bring her back from beyond the Door for decades. When Berenice finally opens the door, she just smiles and says "Finally."]]". It's also implied that she could have ascended with the rest of humanity, but chose to stay with Berenice.]]
* RapidAging: [[spoiler:Her plate scrives her own time to fuel its edits, and so Sancia looks late middle-aged by the time she's thirty.]]
* BroughtDownToNormal: [[spoiler:She has to use the purgestick on herself to infiltrate Tevanne, dissolving her connection to Giva forever. This is especially painful as she has to watch all of humanity move on without her.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: His last desperate gambit at the end of ''Shorefall'' [[spoiler:fuses him with Valeria, creating Tevanne. As a result, Tevanne goes from wanting to simply wipe out scriving to wanting to ''destroy reality itself''.]]
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* YouAreNotAlone: [[spoiler:In the epilogue, he delays becoming Givan for ten years, not just because he's afraid of the plate, but because he doesn't want to leave Berenice alone. She convinces him to let her go, and he joins Giva.]]
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* TheCynic: After decades of trying to change Tevanne for the better and failing, he's lost hope in a better world. [[spoiler:He regains it right before his death, realizing that Giva will become a better society and that all his work did mean something.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Uses the imperiat to buy the Givans time to escape in ''Shorefall'', and is torn apart by shriekers.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Uses the imperiat to buy the Givans time to escape in ''Shorefall'', and is torn apart by shriekers.]]
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* IWillWaitForYou: In the epilogue, [[spoiler:she's been waiting for Berenice to bring her back from beyond the Door for decades. When Berenice finally opens the door, she just smiles and says "Finally."]]
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* TookALevelInIdealism: From an angry former slave and thief to a fervent champion of humanity [[spoiler:who finally manages to solve the problem of humanity's innovation and sacrifices herself for it]].
* TheAloner: In the epilogue, [[spoiler:because she can no longer twin, she has to watch Givan society evolve without her, forever cut off. For the first decade she has Gregor, but she eventually convinces him to join them. Then they all ascend to a higher plane, leaving her completely alone on Earth. Luckily, they left a gift behind: a door to Sancia, finally ending her isolation.]]
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler:After suffering under MindControl for the entire series, he's freed and spends ten years recovering, then joins Giva and is fully healed]].
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** He lost his idealism in battle, after witnessing his troops resorting to cannibalism and [[spoiler:being mind-controlled into a killing frenzy.]]
** After everything that happens to him in the series, [[spoiler:it takes him half a year to speak again, and at least a decade before he's ready to rejoin humanity's HiveMind.]]
** He lost his idealism in battle, after witnessing his troops resorting to cannibalism and [[spoiler:being mind-controlled into a killing frenzy.]]
** After everything that happens to him in the series, [[spoiler:it takes him half a year to speak again, and at least a decade before he's ready to rejoin humanity's HiveMind.]]
* AmnesiacHero: He can't remember anything about his past, which is slowly unveiled through the series.
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* SophiscatedAsHell: He'll interrupt elaborate MagiBabble with cursing and slang.
* TragicHero: [[spoiler:He was just a simple namer who wanted his daughter back, and so tried to open the door, scrived his wife Liviana into Valeria, and then scrived his son Crasedes into a hierophant to keep them alive. They then spent thousands of years trying to "fix" humanity and failing, eventually turning against each other, and nearly causing the apocalypse, before the events of the series convince all three to let go.]]
* TragicHero: [[spoiler:He was just a simple namer who wanted his daughter back, and so tried to open the door, scrived his wife Liviana into Valeria, and then scrived his son Crasedes into a hierophant to keep them alive. They then spent thousands of years trying to "fix" humanity and failing, eventually turning against each other, and nearly causing the apocalypse, before the events of the series convince all three to let go.]]
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* MacabreMothMotif: When [[spoiler:he destroyed himself in an effort to kill Valeria]], his essence went into moths. He uses them to communicate and they're used to indicate his presence until he's resurrected. [[spoiler:His sister had a butterfly motif]].
* ResidualSelfImage: [[spoiler:He appears as a child in the AfterlifeAntechamber, as he was only a child when he was scrived into a hierophant.]]
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* WhoWantsToLiveForever: [[spoiler:After spending 40,000 years in stasis, he's lost all desire to continue and only wants a meaningful death.]]
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* TragicVillain: [[spoiler:She's Clef's wife, who was trapped in a box for so long and so deeply scrived she could barely exist and was in constant agony. She broke under the weight of grief and tried to destroy reality in the vague hope that someone, anyone would come and fix it]].
* UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans: She will kill millions of people, [[spoiler:and eventuallyall of humanity itself]], destroy reality]], if she thinks it will mend the broken world.
* UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans: She will kill millions of people, [[spoiler:and eventually
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* ManipulativeBastard: Valeria is fond of giving half the truth to lead people into making terrible mistakes. [[spoiler:She didn't tell Sancia about scriving her plate to feed on her own time, her own goals for humanity, or half of how her scrived devices actually worked until it was time to strike.]]
* MentalFusion: [[spoiler:She fuses with Gregor Dandolo to become Tevanne, a GeniusLoci of the entire city's scrivings.]]
* MindControl: [[spoiler:As Tevanne, she uses tiny plates to turn people into "hosts" who obey her every command.]]
* MentalFusion: [[spoiler:She fuses with Gregor Dandolo to become Tevanne, a GeniusLoci of the entire city's scrivings.]]
* MindControl: [[spoiler:As Tevanne, she uses tiny plates to turn people into "hosts" who obey her every command.]]
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* ProperLady: What she was meant to be as a noble daughter, but she defies this by becoming a scriver and eventually [[spoiler:military leader]].
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* IronLady: In ''Locklands'', eight years of fighting Tevanne have turned her into a hardened, weary general, a far cry from the idealistic noble scriver.
* ProperLady: What she was meant to be as a noble daughter, but she defies this by becoming a scriver and eventually[[spoiler:military leader]].[[spoiler:the military leader of Giva]].
* ProperLady: What she was meant to be as a noble daughter, but she defies this by becoming a scriver and eventually
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* KnightInSourArmor: She's abrasive, foul-mouthed, distrustful, and bitter, but there is a strong moral core beneath that rough exterior. She vows to protect Clef from the Merchant Houses rather than let him be weaponized, and is determined to bring freedom no matter how difficult it becomes.
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* KnightInSourArmor: She's abrasive, foul-mouthed, distrustful, and bitter, but there is a strong moral core beneath that rough exterior. She vows to protect Clef from the Merchant Houses rather than let him be weaponized, and is determined to bring freedom no matter how difficult it becomes. [[spoiler:She's also the one that eventually figures out how to make a truly free society by twinning people.]]
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* ProperLadyProperLady: What she was meant to be as a noble daughter, but she defies this by becoming a scriver and eventually [[spoiler:military leader]].
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* AndIMustScreamAndIMustScream: Whenever his plate gets activated. [[spoiler:Then when he becomes Tevanne]].
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LivingMacGuffin: As a hierophantic tool, his ability to edit commands could revolutionize scriving in Tevanne. [[spoiler:There's also the fact that he's a key to the door at the center of creation, where all of reality might be changed.]]
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PersonOfMassDestruction: He can destroy entire empires.
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UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans: Decides to strip humanity of its free will to stop them from enslaving each other.
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* TheSmartGuy: The team is full of scrivers, schemers, and tacticians, but Berenice is the best of them all. [[spoiler:She even finds an innovation that can't be turned into a tool of oppression, something that Crasedes thought When they need to be impossible.]]
memorize several hundred sigils at a glance, Berenice is the one they call.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: He claims that he sought to bring freedom of all, and that there is a difference between violence to enforce power and violence for a higher cause. Yet he is repeatedly shown to give horrible, bloody deaths to those that oppose him, simply to demonstrate his might.
* MacabreMothMotif: When [[spoiler:he destroyed himself in an effort to kill Valeria]], his essence went into moths. He uses them to communicate and they're used to indicate his presence until he's resurrected.
* MacabreMothMotif: When [[spoiler:he destroyed himself in an effort to kill Valeria]], his essence went into moths. He uses them to communicate and they're used to indicate his presence until he's resurrected.
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* KnightInSourArmor: She's abrasive, foul-mouthed, distrustful, and bitter, but there is a strong moral core beneath that rough exterior. She vows to protect Clef from the Merchant Houses rather than let him be weaponized, and is determined to bring freedom no matter how difficult it becomes.
* PhantomThief: If you steal from a House, you're as good as dead. Sancia gets around this by never being caught.
* {{Psychometry}}: She has the ability to feel what an object has been through, whether it's the exact placement of cracks on a wall or the footfalls on a floor. [[spoiler:She loses it when Valeria edits her plate.]]
* PhantomThief: If you steal from a House, you're as good as dead. Sancia gets around this by never being caught.
* {{Psychometry}}: She has the ability to feel what an object has been through, whether it's the exact placement of cracks on a wall or the footfalls on a floor. [[spoiler:She loses it when Valeria edits her plate.]]
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* AdmiringTheAbomination: She's fascinated by the theory of hierophantic relics, but is also aware that they're powered by HumanSacrifice.
* TheSmartGuy: The team is full of scrivers, schemers, and tacticians, but Berenice is the best of them all.
* TheSmartGuy: The team is full of scrivers, schemers, and tacticians, but Berenice is the best of them all.
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* KnightInSourArmor: He's convinced that things like mercy or cruelty are just "twaddles" and is so broken by the war [[spoiler:and his enslavement]] that he's quit believing anything could improve. And yet, he keeps trying.
* MindControl: [[spoiler:The plate in his head lets his mother issue commands, and later allows Valeria to pull a GrandTheftMe.]]
* ShellShockedVeteran: He lost his idealism in battle, after witnessing his troops resorting to cannibalism and [[spoiler:being mind-controlled into a killing frenzy.]]
* ThouShaltNotKill: Downplayed. Gregor has no objection to killing in theory, as he's long since given up on morality, but every time he kills it brings him closer to the wretch he was on the battlefield. [[spoiler:And it makes it easier for the plate to overrule him]].
* MindControl: [[spoiler:The plate in his head lets his mother issue commands, and later allows Valeria to pull a GrandTheftMe.]]
* ShellShockedVeteran: He lost his idealism in battle, after witnessing his troops resorting to cannibalism and [[spoiler:being mind-controlled into a killing frenzy.]]
* ThouShaltNotKill: Downplayed. Gregor has no objection to killing in theory, as he's long since given up on morality, but every time he kills it brings him closer to the wretch he was on the battlefield. [[spoiler:And it makes it easier for the plate to overrule him]].
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* AlwaysABiggerFish: One of his sayings is that the problem with might is that there is always someone mightier, that someone being himself. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, he's right, and he has his own bigger fish in the form of Valeria.]]
* MagnusMeansMage: Fits pretty well. \n He's the first and strongest of all hierophants, mages with god-like powers, and took up the name "Magnus" to reflect his might and status.
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler:Conducted very unethical experiments on Gregor and robs him of his free will whenever she wants him to work.]]
* KnightTemplarParent: Will do anything for Gregor, right up to the apocalypse. Anything, that is, [[AbusiveParents except let him go free.]]
* NeverMyFault: Whenever Gregor is hurt, she's reduced to weeping and begging and saying she'll do ''anything'' to have him back. Half of these times, he's hurt because she sent him into danger himself.
* KnightTemplarParent: Will do anything for Gregor, right up to the apocalypse. Anything, that is, [[AbusiveParents except let him go free.]]
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* BehindEveryGreatMan: [[spoiler:She was used and abused by her husband and father for her scriving talents. She is the one that figured out all the Candiano rigs they've been using.]]
* DiscOneFinalBoss: The villain of the first book, [[spoiler:and foiling her plot is how Valeria is released.]]
* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:Kills her abusive father and husband once they've outlived their use to her.]]
* GodhoodSeeker: She wants to be a hierophant, effectively a demigod in her world. [[spoiler:She doesn't succeed.]]
* DiscOneFinalBoss: The villain of the first book, [[spoiler:and foiling her plot is how Valeria is released.]]
* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:Kills her abusive father and husband once they've outlived their use to her.]]
* GodhoodSeeker: She wants to be a hierophant, effectively a demigod in her world. [[spoiler:She doesn't succeed.]]
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!Main Characters
!!Sancia Grado
!!Berenice Grimaldi
!!Gregor Dandolo
!!Orso Ignacio
!!Clef [[spoiler:/ Claviedes]]
!!Crasedes Magnus
!!Valeria [[spoiler: / Tevanne]]
!Supporting Characters
!!Ofelia Dandolo
!!Estelle Candiano
!!Polina
!!Claudia
!!Diela
!!Greeter
!!Design
!!Sancia Grado
!!Berenice Grimaldi
!!Gregor Dandolo
!!Orso Ignacio
!!Clef [[spoiler:/ Claviedes]]
!!Crasedes Magnus
!!Valeria [[spoiler: / Tevanne]]
!Supporting Characters
!!Ofelia Dandolo
!!Estelle Candiano
!!Polina
!!Claudia
!!Diela
!!Greeter
!!Design
