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* GutturalGrowler: His voice is described as rough.
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* InheritanceMurder: It's mentioned that Yuan got several of his relatives killed so he could become heir to Zhao.
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* InheritanceMurder: It's mentioned that Yuan got several of his relatives killed so he could become heir to Zhao.his grandfather Zhao's holdings.
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* OldMaster: Despite being more than a century old, Azula still trains for fighting as if she were much younger and demolishes younger opponents even when ganged up on. She even invented a couple new techniques.
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* BodyguardingABadass: Zhi is a member of the Chosen who is Azula's bodyguard, attendant, and sparring partner.
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* BodyguardingABadass: Zhi is a member of the Chosen who is Azula's bodyguard, attendant, and sparring partner. Also qualifies as BattleButler.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: '''Big time'''. Canon Azula was a TragicVillain. This Azula, on the other hand, is as sadistic and [[OmnicidalManiac omnicidal]] as ''Ozai''.
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* {{Expy}}: The author has said that Qing Xi is one of Long Feng, albeit one who has been forced to adjust his strategies to compensate for a leader stronger than he is.
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* {{Expy}}: The author has said that Qing Xi is one of Long Feng, Feng from the original series, albeit one who has been forced to adjust his strategies to compensate for a leader stronger than he is.
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* FormerRegimePersonnel: [[spoiler:Several of them choose to follow Jiazin as Fire Lord, seemingly happy to be doing something and being of use.]]
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* HighPriest: Also leads the cult that worships Azula.
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* KinslayingIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:Caused the deaths of three of her family members one way or another: she caused Zuko's death through unknown means, poisoned Iroh so her father could finish him off, and smothered Ozai himself out of mercy when old age and dementia set in.]]
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* KinslayingIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:Caused the deaths of three of her family members one way or another: she another. She caused Zuko's death through unknown means, poisoned Iroh so her father could finish him off, and smothered Ozai himself out of mercy when old age and dementia set in.]]
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* UriahGambit: [[spoiler:When Xia is sent to crush the rebels after they take back Long Du Shi, Azula declares his forces traitors and follows after him with her own army; she'd been looking to kill him for years as she believed him weak.]]
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* UriahGambit: [[spoiler:When Xia is sent to crush the rebels after they take back Long Du Shi, Azula declares his forces traitors and follows after him with her own army; army before he'd even arrived at Long Du Shi; she'd been looking to kill him for years as she believed him weak.]]
* BodyguardingABadass: Zhi is a member of the Chosen who is Azula's bodyguard, attendant, and sparring partner.
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler:Their existence can be traced back to Azula's disposal of Prince Zuko. Mai discovered that Azula caused Zuko's death and attacked, with Azula killing Mai while Ty Lee fled from Azula. From there, Azula decided that no one would care about her and created the Chosen as a means of creating loyal followers.]]
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* EvilWearsBlack: All of them wear black armor.
* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler:Their existence can be traced back to Azula's disposal of Prince Zuko. Mai discovered that Azula caused Zuko's death andattacked, killed everyone in her path to reach Azula, with Azula killing Mai while Ty Lee fled from Azula. From there, Azula decided that no one would care about her and created the Chosen as a means of creating loyal followers.]]
* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler:Their existence can be traced back to Azula's disposal of Prince Zuko. Mai discovered that Azula caused Zuko's death and
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!!Shiyan
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!!Cheng
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!!Gian
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* BadassNormal: Has specifically specialized his fighting style to kill A nonbender who can do battle with enemy benders. He's particularly effective against earthbenders.
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* BountyHunter: Paid to capture/kill runaway slaves.
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* BountyHunter: Paid to capture/kill capture runaway slaves.slaves and kill the opposition.
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* TheSociopath: Explicitly labeled by the author as such; a man who gives as much thought to killing as taking out the trash.
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* TheSociopath: Explicitly labeled by the author as such; such, a man who gives as much thought to killing as taking out the trash.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: [[spoiler:Last seen boarding a ship to nowhere in particular after Shiyan freed her.]]
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!!Earth Kingdom Resistance
A group of freedom fighters operating in the area around Long Du Shi. They were founded by Toph Beifong.
* {{Irony}}: Their current base is Lake Laogai, the facility originally used by the SecretPolice the Dai Li.
%%* LaResistance
* TrickArrow: Their signature weapons are arrows with stone tips; the resistance uses them to augment their distance and stopping power.
!!Other Characters
[[folder:Gian]]
A mercenary employed by the Fire Nation to capture runaway slaves.
* BadassNormal: Has specifically specialized his fighting style to kill earthbenders.
* BountyHunter: Paid to capture/kill runaway slaves.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler:Jiazin stabs through him with a FlamingSword, burning him from the inside out. [[AssholeVictim Nobody complains]].]]
* GutturalGrowler: His voice is described as rough.
* TheSociopath: Explicitly labeled by the author as such; a man who gives as much thought to killing as taking out the trash.
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!!Earth Kingdom Resistance
A group of freedom fighters operating in the area around Long Du Shi. They were founded by Toph Beifong.
* {{Irony}}: Their current base is Lake Laogai, the facility originally used by the SecretPolice the Dai Li.
%%* LaResistance
* TrickArrow: Their signature weapons are arrows with stone tips; the resistance uses them to augment their distance and stopping power.
!!Other Characters
[[folder:Gian]]
A mercenary employed by the Fire Nation to capture runaway slaves.
* BadassNormal: Has specifically specialized his fighting style to kill earthbenders.
* BountyHunter: Paid to capture/kill runaway slaves.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler:Jiazin stabs through him with a FlamingSword, burning him from the inside out. [[AssholeVictim Nobody complains]].]]
* GutturalGrowler: His voice is described as rough.
* TheSociopath: Explicitly labeled by the author as such; a man who gives as much thought to killing as taking out the trash.
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* AncestralSword: Jiazin's sword has been passed down at least three generations.
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* AncestralSword: AncestralWeapon: Jiazin's sword has been passed down at least three generations.
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler:Their existence can be traced back to Azula's disposal of Prince Zuko. Mai discovered that Azula caused Zuko's death and attacked, with Azula killing Mai while Ty Lee fled from Azula. From there, Azula decided that no one would care about her and created the Chosen as a means of creating loyal followers.]]
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[[folder:Cheng]]
A Chosen trainee under Shiyan's guidance.
* ButtMonkey: Nothing goes right for her throughout the story.
* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Endearing for her determination to her role as a Chosen even when it doesn't go well for her.
[[folder:Cheng]]
A Chosen trainee under Shiyan's guidance.
* ButtMonkey: Nothing goes right for her throughout the story.
* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Endearing for her determination to her role as a Chosen even when it doesn't go well for her.
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* ForWantOfANail: In-universe, Jiazin notes that she could have easily become a Chosen had her parents had another child.
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* {{Cult}}: An order of female warriors who worship Azula as a god. Even Shiyan says the word is accurate to describe them.
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* BigBrotherMentor: Designated to train Cheng.
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* GloryHound: Yuan's goal in life is to eclipse the deeds of his grandfather Admiral Zhao.
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[[folder:Shiyan]]
A young Chosen who tails Kanoda throughout his journey.
* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Sinks into catatonia after killing Azula without realizing it.]]
* TheRival: To Kanoda; his escape from Azula Island drives her to chase him around the world.
[[folder:Shiyan]]
A young Chosen who tails Kanoda throughout his journey.
* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Sinks into catatonia after killing Azula without realizing it.]]
* TheRival: To Kanoda; his escape from Azula Island drives her to chase him around the world.
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* DragonAscendant: Succeeded her father as ruler of the Fire Nation, now the Fire Empire.
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* LongRangeFighter: Subverted. When [[spoiler:Jiazin fights Azula, she attempts to gain an advantage by closing the distance and forcing Azula to fight hand-to-hand. This doesn't work because Azula is surprisingly strong for her age and can bend an opponent's chi.]]
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* InheritanceMurder: It's mentioned that Yuan got several of his relatives killed so he could become heir to Zhao.
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* UriahGambit: [[spoiler:When Xia is sent to crush the rebels after they take back Long Du Shi, Azula declares his forces traitors and follows after him with her own army; she'd been looking to kill him for years as she believed him weak.]]
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* BadassNormal: None of them are able to bend the elements (and conditioned to repress the ability if they can) but all are trained to fight toe-to-toe with powerful benders. Even Jiazin, herself trained with the sword and as a firebender, is left at a standstill against them.
* DarkActionGirl: All of them.
* DarkActionGirl: All of them.
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* BadassNormal: None of them are able to bend the elements (and are conditioned to repress the ability if they can) but all are trained to fight toe-to-toe with powerful benders. Even Jiazin, herself trained with the sword and as a firebender, is left at a standstill against them.
* DarkActionGirl: All ofthem. them are ruthless warriors, even the IneffectualSympatheticVillain Cheng.
* EvilCounterpart: A meta one to the Warriors of Kyoshi, as Azula used the Kyoshi Warriors as an inspiration when she created the Order. Really the only thing they don't share is the fans.
* DarkActionGirl: All of
* EvilCounterpart: A meta one to the Warriors of Kyoshi, as Azula used the Kyoshi Warriors as an inspiration when she created the Order. Really the only thing they don't share is the fans.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Conditioned to revere Azula as a living god.god.
[[folder:The Mistress of the Chosen]]
The leader of Azula's bodyguard.
* BlackCloak: Wears a black cloak with gold trim at all times.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Her entire identity has been surrendered to Azula.
* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler:Subverted; when Qing Xi reveals he poisoned her she tries to kill him, but he chose a fast-acting poison so she would be too ill to do anything before she succumbed.]]
* TamperingWithFoodAndDrink: [[spoiler:Qing Xi has her tea poisoned once he's able to get her alone.]]
* YourMakeupIsRunning: [[spoiler:As she starts to succumb to the poison, the sweat on her forehead causes her facepaint to run.]]
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[[folder:The Mistress of the Chosen]]
The leader of Azula's bodyguard.
* BlackCloak: Wears a black cloak with gold trim at all times.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Her entire identity has been surrendered to Azula.
* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler:Subverted; when Qing Xi reveals he poisoned her she tries to kill him, but he chose a fast-acting poison so she would be too ill to do anything before she succumbed.]]
* TamperingWithFoodAndDrink: [[spoiler:Qing Xi has her tea poisoned once he's able to get her alone.]]
* YourMakeupIsRunning: [[spoiler:As she starts to succumb to the poison, the sweat on her forehead causes her facepaint to run.]]
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* BlackWidow: Azula has had several husbands over the decades but none survived for very long.
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* LastOfHisKind: The only remaining member of the Fire Nation royalfamily.family by the time the story takes place.
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* GracefulLoser: [[spoiler:Jiazin forces him into retirement at the end of the main story. After an initial outburst of anger, Qing Xi accepts his loss, stating he will be needed one day.]]
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* {{Expy}}: The author has said that Qing Xi is one of Long Feng, albeit one who has been forced to adjust his strategies to compensate for a leader more stronger than he is.
* GracefulLoser: [[spoiler:Jiazin forces him into retirement at the end of the main story. After an initial outburst of anger, Qing Xi accepts hisloss, stating loss with an admonition that he will be needed one day.]]
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* SmugSnake: Like his grandfather, his ego eclipses his actual skill.
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* SmugSnake: Like his grandfather, his ego eclipses his actual skill.
[[/folder]]competence.
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!!The Chosen
An order of female warriors raised to serve Azula.
* BadassNormal: None of them are able to bend the elements (and conditioned to repress the ability if they can) but all are trained to fight toe-to-toe with powerful benders. Even Jiazin, herself trained with the sword and as a firebender, is left at a standstill against them.
* DarkActionGirl: All of them.
* KatanasAreJustBetter: Use katanas as their main weapons.
* UndyingLoyalty: Conditioned to revere Azula as a living god.
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[[/folder]]
!!The Chosen
An order of female warriors raised to serve Azula.
* BadassNormal: None of them are able to bend the elements (and conditioned to repress the ability if they can) but all are trained to fight toe-to-toe with powerful benders. Even Jiazin, herself trained with the sword and as a firebender, is left at a standstill against them.
* DarkActionGirl: All of them.
* KatanasAreJustBetter: Use katanas as their main weapons.
* UndyingLoyalty: Conditioned to revere Azula as a living god.
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* EvilOldFolks: Azula is more than a century old by the time the story takes place, and [[spoiler:intends to burn the whole world down.]]
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!!High Admiral Yuan
The commander of the Fire Empire's navy. Yuan is also a grandson of Admiral Zhao.
* IdenticalGrandson: Essentially identical to his grandfather to the point that [[spoiler:Yue]] has a hard time differentiating the two.
* SmugSnake: Like his grandfather, his ego eclipses his actual skill.
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!!High Admiral Yuan
The commander of the Fire Empire's navy. Yuan is also a grandson of Admiral Zhao.
* IdenticalGrandson: Essentially identical to his grandfather to the point that [[spoiler:Yue]] has a hard time differentiating the two.
* SmugSnake: Like his grandfather, his ego eclipses his actual skill.
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!!!The Dragon Empress
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* TheFaceless: Azula never shows her face, primarily to not show weakness through age. She even electrocutes people who look at her face and sleeps with a face covering.
* LastOfHisKind: The only remaining member of the Fire Nation royal family.
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!!High Minister Qing Xi
Azula's chancellor and the leading bureaucrat throughout the Fire Empire.
* EvilChancellor: Zigzagged; Qing Xi ''would'' be an Evil Chancellor given that he's a schemer who serves a tyrannical regime, but Azula is far worse than he is.
* GracefulLoser: [[spoiler:Jiazin forces him into retirement at the end of the main story. After an initial outburst of anger, Qing Xi accepts his loss, stating he will be needed one day.]]
* TheSpymaster: Qing Xi is the head of the Fire Empire's secret police, the Hidden Flame.
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[[folder:High General Xia]]
!!High General Xia
The supreme commander of Azula's armies.
%%* FourStarBadass
* FromNobodyToNightmare: Started out as a low-ranking aristocrat at the bottom of the military chain before working his way UpThroughTheRanks to become general.
* NobleDemon: Tries to be as good a man as he can be while serving the Fire Empire. Eventually, [[spoiler:he decides Azula has gone too far and defects to the rebels.]]
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!!Main Characters
[[folder:Jiazin]]
!!Jiazin
A young noblewoman and firebender whose father is the governor of Long Du Shi (formerly known as Ba Sing Se).
* AncestralSword: Jiazin's sword has been passed down at least three generations.
* FlamingSword: Can wreath her sword in blue flames and can burn a man from the inside out.
* LegacyCharacter: Qing Xi trained her to [[spoiler:become Azula when the Fire Empress died... or so he was meant to believe.]]
* PlayingWithFire: Jiazin is a firebender.
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[[folder:Kanoda]]
!!Kanoda
A nonbender from the Southern Water Tribe.
* BadassNormal: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a nonbender but that doesn't stop him from holding his ground against other benders.
* DisappearedDad: Kanoda's father was killed by firebenders whose ship ran aground. His grandfather [[RaisedByGrandparents helped his mother raise him]].
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[[folder:Tong]]
!!Tong
An earthbending slave.
* DishingOutDirt: An earthbender.
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!!Fire Empire
[[folder:Fire Empress Azula]]
!!Fire Empress Azula
Ruler of the Fire Empire, succeeding her father Fire Lord Ozai.
* BigBad: The central antagonist of the story.
* TheFaceless: Azula never shows her face, primarily to not show weakness through age.
* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler:Intends to drag most of civilization down with her when she dies.]]
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!!Main Characters
[[folder:Jiazin]]
!!Jiazin
A young noblewoman and firebender whose father is the governor of Long Du Shi (formerly known as Ba Sing Se).
* AncestralSword: Jiazin's sword has been passed down at least three generations.
* FlamingSword: Can wreath her sword in blue flames and can burn a man from the inside out.
* LegacyCharacter: Qing Xi trained her to [[spoiler:become Azula when the Fire Empress died... or so he was meant to believe.]]
* PlayingWithFire: Jiazin is a firebender.
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[[folder:Kanoda]]
!!Kanoda
A nonbender from the Southern Water Tribe.
* BadassNormal: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a nonbender but that doesn't stop him from holding his ground against other benders.
* DisappearedDad: Kanoda's father was killed by firebenders whose ship ran aground. His grandfather [[RaisedByGrandparents helped his mother raise him]].
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!!Tong
An earthbending slave.
* DishingOutDirt: An earthbender.
%%* UnskilledButStrong
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!!Fire Empire
[[folder:Fire Empress Azula]]
!!Fire Empress Azula
Ruler of the Fire Empire, succeeding her father Fire Lord Ozai.
* BigBad: The central antagonist of the story.
* TheFaceless: Azula never shows her face, primarily to not show weakness through age.
* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler:Intends to drag most of civilization down with her when she dies.]]
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