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* BoobBasedGag: Mami's rather ample bossom is a source of a fair bit of comedy, usually from other characters reacting with [[EatingTheEyeCandy awe]] or [[ACupAngst jealousy]], or having their faces shoved into them through comical circumstances.
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* GagBoobs: Mami's rather ample bossom is a source of a fair bit of comedy, usually from other characters reacting with [[EatingTheEyeCandy awe]] or [[ACupAngst jealousy]], or having their faces shoved into them through comical circumstances.
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* Punk: She seems to favour this aesthetic, wearing torn, mismatched clothes with band patches, rainbow-dyed hair, more spikes than a porcupine, and enough piercings to supply the american military with metal for bullets.
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* ToughLove: Claims to believe in this, but it's possible that she's full of it. While Oktavia's dream seems to at least attempt to make her confront her identity crisis and help her figure herself out, Mami's dream appears to be nothing but sadistically tormenting her with her own guilt.
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* ToughLove: Claims to believe in this, but it's possible that she's full of it. While Oktavia's dream seems to at least attempt to make her confront her identity crisis and help her figure herself out, Mami's dream appears to be nothing but sadistically tormenting her with her own guilt.guilt, and she admits freely that she just wants to play with and eat them.
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* DontCallMePaul: As [[spoiler:Ophelia, she dislikesbeing called Kyoko. In fact she doesn't associate the name with her self at all, and doesn't realize that Ophelia was not her original name until Candeloro and Sayaka say it outright]].
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* HasAType: Kyoko admits to herself that a big reason for her attraction to Sayaka is that Sayaka is rude, aggressive, and stubborn, which reminds Kyoko a lot of herself, and is something she admires (while also finding it annoying at times). That said she is also attracted to Oktavia, so above all her type seems to be [[SingleTargetSexuality Sayaka]].
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* HasAType: Kyoko admits to herself that a big reason for her attraction to Sayaka is that Sayaka is rude, aggressive, and stubborn, which reminds Kyoko a lot of herself, and is something she admires (while also finding it annoying at times). That said she is also attracted to Oktavia, [[NiceGirl Oktavia]], so above all her type seems to be [[SingleTargetSexuality Sayaka]].Sayaka]].
* InTheBlood: After giving a motivational speech, she jokes that it's in the blood since she's the daughter of a pastor.
* InTheBlood: After giving a motivational speech, she jokes that it's in the blood since she's the daughter of a pastor.
* {{Heel}}: In ''Restless'', the entire gang face [[spoiler:Mephisto in a wrestling match, with the imaginary audience booing at them. Charlotte (or Nozomi), who's a fan of pro wrestling, decides to play into it by flipping them off]].
* OtherMeAnnoysMe: More like [[spoiler:other me gives me an inferiority complex; Oktavia can tell fairly quickly that Oktavia was deeply loved by everyone around her, feeding into her insecurities by making her feel that even the person who took over her body when she died was better than her]].
* SuperSpeed: One of the uses of her InstantRunes is to increase her momentum.
* TwitchyEye: [[spoiler:Gets one when summarizing how ''utterly absurd'' her current situation is]].
* TwitchyEye: [[spoiler:Gets one when summarizing how ''utterly absurd'' her current situation is]].
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Her ethnicity is not mentioned, but she has dreadlocks, which are typically associated with people of African descent.
* TheBlank: In her physical form, she lacks eyes, mouth, nose, and her body is just a psychedelic shifting of colours in the shape of a human (and also dreadlocks).
* CharacterTics: She seems to chew gum a lot.
* TheDreaded: For those who know about her. Just hearing her name is enough to cause Charlotte an OhCrap reaction.
* Face: Her chosen method to finish of the heroes is through what amounts to a metaphysical wrestling match, with her cast as the Face.
* ImAHumanitarian: Strictly speaking she only eats souls, but since everyone in the afterlife's physical bodies ''are'' their souls, the difference is academic.
* MeaningfulName: She most likely gets her name from Mephistopheles, the demon who tempts Faust (which Madoka Magica is a WholePlotReference to).
* NightmareWeaver: Her modus operandi. She can weave nightmares specifically targeting the deepest fears and insecurities of her victims. Even if they learn that they are in a dream, they can't do anything to get out of it, as she will simply transition to being a more traditional DomainHolder.
* TheOmniscient: She not only knows that she's in a timeloop, but knows that Homura is perpetuating it and even her motications for doing so.
* Punk: She seems to favour this aesthetic, wearing torn, mismatched clothes with band patches, rainbow-dyed hair, more spikes than a porcupine, and enough piercings to supply the american military with metal for bullets.
* PunkRock: Appears to like this kind of music, playing a lot of it in the dreams she puts the heroes through. Nozomi approves.
* SoulEating: Freely admits that this is what she does, consuming the souls, minds, memories, and lives of everyone who stumbles into her lair, including the main heroes.
* Troll: When the heroes compare her to freddy krueger, she sends a copy of Krueger's hand specifically to flip them off.
* ToughLove: Claims to believe in this, but it's possible that she's full of it. While Oktavia's dream seems to at least attempt to make her confront her identity crisis and help her figure herself out, Mami's dream appears to be nothing but sadistically tormenting her with her own guilt.
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* TheBlank: In her physical form, she lacks eyes, mouth, nose, and her body is just a psychedelic shifting of colours in the shape of a human (and also dreadlocks).
* CharacterTics: She seems to chew gum a lot.
* TheDreaded: For those who know about her. Just hearing her name is enough to cause Charlotte an OhCrap reaction.
* Face: Her chosen method to finish of the heroes is through what amounts to a metaphysical wrestling match, with her cast as the Face.
* ImAHumanitarian: Strictly speaking she only eats souls, but since everyone in the afterlife's physical bodies ''are'' their souls, the difference is academic.
* MeaningfulName: She most likely gets her name from Mephistopheles, the demon who tempts Faust (which Madoka Magica is a WholePlotReference to).
* NightmareWeaver: Her modus operandi. She can weave nightmares specifically targeting the deepest fears and insecurities of her victims. Even if they learn that they are in a dream, they can't do anything to get out of it, as she will simply transition to being a more traditional DomainHolder.
* TheOmniscient: She not only knows that she's in a timeloop, but knows that Homura is perpetuating it and even her motications for doing so.
* Punk: She seems to favour this aesthetic, wearing torn, mismatched clothes with band patches, rainbow-dyed hair, more spikes than a porcupine, and enough piercings to supply the american military with metal for bullets.
* PunkRock: Appears to like this kind of music, playing a lot of it in the dreams she puts the heroes through. Nozomi approves.
* SoulEating: Freely admits that this is what she does, consuming the souls, minds, memories, and lives of everyone who stumbles into her lair, including the main heroes.
* Troll: When the heroes compare her to freddy krueger, she sends a copy of Krueger's hand specifically to flip them off.
* ToughLove: Claims to believe in this, but it's possible that she's full of it. While Oktavia's dream seems to at least attempt to make her confront her identity crisis and help her figure herself out, Mami's dream appears to be nothing but sadistically tormenting her with her own guilt.
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[[folder:The Shades '''(UNMARKED SPOILERS)''']]
Shades of Kyoko Sakura, Oktavia von Seckendorff, Mami Tomoe, and Charlotte from previous timeloops. Reibey keeps them imprisoned and consults them for information on his enemies.
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* ReplacementScrappy: InUniverse. [[spoiler:Charlotte/Nozomi is less than happy when Sayaka regains her memories but forgets being Oktavia during the events of ''Restless''. Not only does Charlotte not like change in general, but she was close friends with Oktavia, whereas Sayaka is a complete stranger who's rather frustrating to deal with on account of her stubbornness and self-loathing]].
* SixthRanger: [[spoiler:She joins the main cast (who are already a FiveManBand) during the events of ''Restless''. Slightly complicated in the sense that while Ophelia and Candeloro are happy to welcome her to the team, she also takes the place of Oktavia von Seckendorff, but decidedly not her role as TheHeart]].
* SixthRanger: [[spoiler:She joins the main cast (who are already a FiveManBand) during the events of ''Restless''. Slightly complicated in the sense that while Ophelia and Candeloro are happy to welcome her to the team, she also takes the place of Oktavia von Seckendorff, but decidedly not her role as TheHeart]].
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* HeroWorshipper: She greatly admired and wanted to be like Mami when she was alive. [[spoiler:She breaks down while apologising to Candeloro in the afterlife, but Candeloro assures her that Mami was not the flawless hero she thought she was and had many demons of her own, and that Sayaka's supposed failings are nothing worse than her own]].
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* ExperiencedProtagonist: Mami and Kyoko are both veteran magical girls with countless kills under their belt, making them the most skilled fighters and strategists of the team. Oktavia and Charlotte are decidedly not this, having never been in a fight prior to the start of the plot (Charlotte's first encounter with Mami [[HopelessBossFight does not count as a fight]].
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* FlamingHair: During a dream sequence she gets burning hair [[spoiler:as her Witch Remnant]].
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* OxymoronicBeing: In ''Restless'', [[spoiler:Ophelia has all the traits of a witch - a new name and identity, notably different personality, a witch remnant in the form of burning hair - but retains her memories of life completely, with no change aside from thinking her name as always been Ophelia, which should be impossible]].
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* IHatePastMe: In ''Restless'' she's [[spoiler: rather pissed to learn that her human counterpart wasted her wish on something as simple and minor as a cake. Her Nozomi persona for her part is ashamed and regrets her wish]].
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* LiminalBeing: In ''Restless'', Charlotte [[spoiler:and Nozomi seem to exist at once, switching in and out randomly, changing appearence to match whoever is in the front seat at the moment (Nozomi has her magical girl outfit and staff, while Charlotte is in civilian clothes and has a tail). Each has memories of a different life but retains vague recollections of her counterpart's life. She eventually decides to go by Charzomi to make it easier for her friends]].
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* PunkRock: It turns out that Charlotte [[spoiler:or at least Nozomi]] likes this kind of music, praising Mephisto for her music taste even while knowing she's a bad guy they have to fight.
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* ItsAllMyFault: Sayaka has a guilt complex almost as bad as Mami, especially in regards to what she considers letting Mami die because she didn't contract soon enough to save her.
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* YourDaysAreNumbered: [[spoiler:During ''Restless'', she operates on the well-founded assumption that she will only exist as long as the dream lasts, and will go back to being Oktavia when it ends. She hopes to make amends with Mami before then, though Mami is sadly Candeloro at the moment and operating on the same principle]].
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* HasAType: Kyoko admits to herself that a big reason for her attraction to Sayaka is that Sayaka is rude, aggressive, and stubborn, which reminds Kyoko a lot of herself, and is something she admires (while also finding it annoying at times). That said she is also attracted to Oktavia, so above all her type seems to be [[SingleTargetSexuality Sayaka]].
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* LoveEpiphany: Kyoko realizes that she's in love with Sayaka in chaptrer 43, after a FreudianSlip about kissing Sayaka. She starts thinking about how she does find Sayaka cute and is fiercely dedicated to her. While she's not sure if she wants a relationship with anyone, the idea of being with Sayaka is not unappealing.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Kyoko spends most of the fic wanting Sayaka back. [[spoiler:She gets her wish in ''Restless'', but it also comes with some caveats; ''Just'' Sayaka is back, not Oktavia, meaning that the close and bordering on romantic relationship she has built with Oktavia is gone, and Sayaka is just as aggressive and distrustful as she was when she was alive. Not to mention that in the time between, Kyoko has grown to love and care about Oktavia too, even if she is different than Sayaka, and she does not want to choose between them]].
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* AfterlifeAngst: [[spoiler:Upon being told she's dead and in the afterlife, Sayaka spends a while in complete HeroicBSOD listening to the others tell her about the afterlife, then immediately attempts suicide by way of stabbing herself to death. When that fails, she tries to jump out a window]].
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:When she learns the truth about the magical girl system and her own death, she tries to stab herself to death, jumping out a window when that doesn't work]].
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* HairTriggerTemper: As Kyoko puts it, "her sore spots were numerous and hard to miss."
* HealingFactor: Her magical girl ability in life was that she could heal and recover abnormally fast. [[spoiler:This remains in the afterlife, even stronger than the normal healing factor everyone has. The author decribes it as "cut her head off, another pops out like a pez-dispenser]].
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Had a bad case of it, which is noted as one of the few things Kyoko doesn't miss about her. [[spoiler:After regaining her memories, she several times spirals into self-deprecation and insistence that she is worthless and no one should care about her because she fails to live up to her own impossibly high standards]].
* HealingFactor: Her magical girl ability in life was that she could heal and recover abnormally fast. [[spoiler:This remains in the afterlife, even stronger than the normal healing factor everyone has. The author decribes it as "cut her head off, another pops out like a pez-dispenser]].
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Had a bad case of it, which is noted as one of the few things Kyoko doesn't miss about her. [[spoiler:After regaining her memories, she several times spirals into self-deprecation and insistence that she is worthless and no one should care about her because she fails to live up to her own impossibly high standards]].
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:She suffers ''repeated'' ones in ''Restless'', each for understandable reasons. When she learns that the Magical Girl system is a scam she curls up and rocks back and forth, reacting with hostility when Ophelia tries to approach. When she learns that she's dead and became a witch before death, she's briefly entirely silent, before trying to kill herself]].
* InnocentlyInsensitive: [[spoiler:During ''Restless'', having forgotten all of her time in the afterlife, she assumes that the current dream-world they're in is the work of a witch, thinking of the {{Eldritch Abomination}}s. Candeloro and Charlotte, both witches, exchange uncomfortable glances]].
* InstantRunes: Her magic in live allowed her to create these, [[spoiler:and she retains them in the afterlife. They appear to mostly work as platforms and increase her physical abilities]].
* KickingAssInAllHerFinery: [[spoiler:During the final battle of ''Restless'', she's wearing a princess gown]].
* InnocentlyInsensitive: [[spoiler:During ''Restless'', having forgotten all of her time in the afterlife, she assumes that the current dream-world they're in is the work of a witch, thinking of the {{Eldritch Abomination}}s. Candeloro and Charlotte, both witches, exchange uncomfortable glances]].
* InstantRunes: Her magic in live allowed her to create these, [[spoiler:and she retains them in the afterlife. They appear to mostly work as platforms and increase her physical abilities]].
* KickingAssInAllHerFinery: [[spoiler:During the final battle of ''Restless'', she's wearing a princess gown]].
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* PartingWordsRegret: [[spoiler:After regaining her memories, she deeply regrets that during her last meeting with Madoka she insulted and derided her. When Ophelia lies and claims they made up, she's still doubtful and asks if Madoka hates her]].
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* AmnesiacDissonance: Played with. [[spoiler:As Ophelia during ''Restless'' she doesn't actually lose any memories, but she acts like her witch counterpart would have, and is a lot more patient and gentle than Kyoko would have been]].
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* AmnesiacDissonance: Oktavia is a lot like Sayaka, but unlike her passionate and stubborn predecessor, Oktavia is a lot more calm and willing to listen to reason. WordOfGod is that she is like Sayaka, but without the hang-ups. [[spoiler:When she regains her memories of being Sayaka, but forgets being Oktavia, she's much more aggressive, insensitive, and standoffish]].
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* AmnesiacDissonance: Oktavia is a lot like Sayaka, but unlike her passionate and stubborn predecessor, Oktavia is a lot more calm and willing to listen to reason. WordOfGod is that she is like Sayaka, but without the hang-ups. [[spoiler:When she When [[spoiler:Sayaka regains her memories of being Sayaka, but forgets being Oktavia, she's much more Oktavia]], Kyoko remarks that part of the reason she loves Sayaka is that she is aggressive, insensitive, rude, and standoffish]].stubborn, unlike Oktavia who's a NiceGirl.
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* AmbiguousSituation: While Annabelle and Nikki's motives for joining the void walkers are clear, the Twins are less so. The Madam describes them as hedonists, which one would think matches poorly for an organization dedicated to dying.
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* AmbiguousSituation: While Annabelle and Nikki's motives for joining the void walkers are clear, the Twins are less so. The Madam describes them as hedonists, which one would think matches poorly for an organization dedicated to dying. Arzt implies that it might be because they idealize the idea of dying in each others' arms, and didn't get that chance in their first life.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: The living Ai'jurrik'kai regularly disembowel [[WouldHurtAChild infants]] as sacrifices to their death god and see nothing wrong with it -- it's just a part of their culture.
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: To [[spoiler:Lily]], the villain of the arc before Marsters. [[spoiler:Lily]] was a the charming head of a large network of connections who drew most of her power from her ability to subtly turn anyone to her side, and who was noted to be an inhumanly beautiful LadyOfWar. Brooklyn is a violent brute who wouldn't know subtlety if it bit her in the nose, and who's power is drawn from sheer strength. Also in a more subtle way, while she was ableist against the wild witches for their mental disability, Brooklyn is ableist towards the physically disabled Oktavia.
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* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: To [[spoiler:Lily]], [[spoiler:Lily the Fairy]], the villain of the arc before Marsters. [[spoiler:Lily]] Marsters who was a the charming head of a large network of connections who drew most of her power from her ability to subtly turn anyone to her side, and who was noted to be an inhumanly beautiful LadyOfWar. Brooklyn is a violent brute who wouldn't know subtlety if it bit her in the nose, and who's power is drawn from sheer strength. Also in a more subtle way, while she [[spoiler:Lily the Fairy]] was ableist against the wild witches for their mental disability, Brooklyn is ableist towards the physically disabled Oktavia.Oktavia. Finally, [[spoiler:Lily the Fairy]] was a monstrous villain with no redeeming qualities, while Brooklyn turns out to have a FreudianExcuse and is treated more sympathetically after it's revealed.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: She dismissively calls Oktavia a "fucking cripple". This is very much played to make her more hateable. [[spoiler:She was disabled herself in life, making her a BoomerangBigot]]
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: She dismissively calls Oktavia a "fucking cripple". This is very much played to make her more hateable. [[spoiler:She was disabled herself in life, making her a BoomerangBigot]]BoomerangBigot.]]
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Notable aversion. This is the norm in the world of ''Madoka Magica'', so when Kyoko first meets Charlotte, she notes that it's weird for someone to have blue eyes and pink hair.
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Notable aversion. This is the norm in the world of ''Madoka Magica'', so when Kyoko first meets Charlotte, she notes that it's weird for someone to have blue eyes and pink hair. [[spoiler:She apparently had pink eyes when she was still alive, but for whatever reason they changed to blue when she became a witch]].
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* AmnesiacDissonance: Oktavia is a lot like Sayaka, but unlike her passionate and stubborn predecessor, Oktavia is a lot more calm and willing to listen to reason. WordOfGod is that she is like Sayaka, but without the hang-ups.
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* AmnesiacDissonance: Oktavia is a lot like Sayaka, but unlike her passionate and stubborn predecessor, Oktavia is a lot more calm and willing to listen to reason. WordOfGod is that she is like Sayaka, but without the hang-ups. [[spoiler:When she regains her memories of being Sayaka, but forgets being Oktavia, she's much more aggressive, insensitive, and standoffish]].
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* WistfulAmnesia: In ''Restless'', she [[spoiler:experiences a version where she remembers living in the afterlife as Mami, and that she told her friends about her life before dying, but doesn't actually remember her first life at all]].
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* FishOutOfWater: No pun intended. [[spoiler:In ''Restless'', when she regains her memories but forgets having ever been Oktavia, she is left in a similar position to Kyoko at the start of the fic; Having absolutely no idea how she got there, what's happening, or why Mami is alive again]].
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* AlternateSelf: WordOfGod explains that Charlotte ''is'' Nagisa Momoe, but was born a few years earlier to a different father as a result of ForWantOfANail, explaining why she's older, looks different, [[spoiler:and had a different name]].
* GivenNameReveal: In ''Restless'', Charlotte [[spoiler:dreams of herself as the magical girl she was prior to death, revealing that her name was Nozomi]].
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* UnknownCharacter: Not Charlotte, but the magical girl who succumbed to despair and became her. There are no one around who knew her in life, and everything known about her can only be deduced from context clues; Judging by the way Charlotte arrived in the afterlife, it's implied that she had a sick loved one and made her wish on their behalf, and the wish might have had something to do with sweets judging by the theme of her witch labyrinth. Her magical girl ability was to create and control gold strings, and she died soon after contracting. And that's about it.
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* UnknownCharacter: Not Charlotte, but the magical girl who succumbed to despair and became her. There are no one around who knew her in life, and everything known about her can only be deduced from context clues; Judging by the way Charlotte arrived in the afterlife, it's implied that she had a sick loved one and made her wish on their behalf, and the wish might have had something to do with sweets judging by the theme of her witch labyrinth. Her magical girl ability was to create and control gold strings, and she died soon after contracting. And that's about it. [[spoiler:''Restless'' reveals what her outfit looked like, that hse used a rod tipped with a piece of candy as a weapon, and that her name was Nozomi Momome]].
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* TheGhost: Ironically given that she's one of few characters who actually is alive. She is occasionally mentioned by the deceased, but, because she's still alive, she doesn't appear in the afterlife at all. [[spoiler:A dream version of her appears in ''Restless'' as the target of Charlotte's anger at being kept in a ViciousCycle]].
* GreaterScopeVillain: In some ways, Homura's constant timelooping is the source of endless suffering for the main characters, even if she doesn't know about it. [[spoiler:When she (or at least a dream version of her) is confronted about it, she freely admits that she would have continued even if she knew how much pain and misery she was inflicting on her friends]].
* GreaterScopeVillain: In some ways, Homura's constant timelooping is the source of endless suffering for the main characters, even if she doesn't know about it. [[spoiler:When she (or at least a dream version of her) is confronted about it, she freely admits that she would have continued even if she knew how much pain and misery she was inflicting on her friends]].
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* MindHive: [[spoiler:A side-effect of Homura's wish is that any previous timeline version of Madoka are ripped out of the afterlife and added to the "current" Madoka, making her a gestalt of countless alternate versions of herself]].
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Short humanoids with digitigrade legs, claws, tails, and bristles in place of hair. Savians are the most recent species to show up in the afterlife, having only very recently come to the Incubators' attention. So far, the only two Savians are being helped through the adjustment period by the New Life Alliance and are studied in Cloudbreak.
Short humanoids with digitigrade legs, claws, tails, and bristles in place of hair. Savians are the most recent species to show up in the afterlife, having only very recently come to the Incubators' attention. So far, the only two Savians are being helped through the adjustment period by the New Life Alliance and are studied in Cloudbreak.
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* StarfishAlien: Individual Coronians look like huge floating cities crackling with energy.
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[[folder:Savians]]
Short humanoids with digitigrade legs, claws, tails, and bristles in place of hair. Savians are the most recent species to show up in the afterlife, having only very recently come to the Incubators' attention. So far, the only two Savians are being helped through the adjustment period by the New Life Alliance and are studied in Cloudbreak.
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* HigherTechSpecies: Their technology is described as "miraculous", and the only species that can be said to rival them are the SufficientlyAdvancedAliens Incubators.
* StarfishAlien: Individual Coronians look like huge floating cities crackling with energy.
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[[folder:Savians]]
Short humanoids with digitigrade legs, claws, tails, and bristles in place of hair. Savians are the most recent species to show up in the afterlife, having only very recently come to the Incubators' attention. So far, the only two Savians are being helped through the adjustment period by the New Life Alliance and are studied in Cloudbreak.
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* LovedINotHonourMore: Mami loves the life she has with Charlotte and would like nothing more than to spend her afterlife living a simple domestic life with her at the Nautilus Platform, but when [[spoiler:Kyoko has to leave to rescue Momo from Reibey, Mami feels obligated to go with her. Unlike most examples, Charlotte is understanding and goes with them as well, even if she's not happy about it]].
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* LovedINotHonourMore: LovedINotHonourMore:
** Mami loves the life she has with Charlotte and would like nothing more than to spend her afterlife living a simple domestic life with her at the Nautilus Platform, but when [[spoiler:Kyoko has to leave to rescue Momo from Reibey, Mami feels obligated to go with her. Unlike most examples, Charlotte is understanding and goes with them as well, even if she's not happy aboutit]].it]].
** This comes back in her symbolism-laden DreamSequence in ''Restless'', where her family are having a cozy dinner and asks her to join them, but she insists that she's "on the clock" and can't.
** Mami loves the life she has with Charlotte and would like nothing more than to spend her afterlife living a simple domestic life with her at the Nautilus Platform, but when [[spoiler:Kyoko has to leave to rescue Momo from Reibey, Mami feels obligated to go with her. Unlike most examples, Charlotte is understanding and goes with them as well, even if she's not happy about
** This comes back in her symbolism-laden DreamSequence in ''Restless'', where her family are having a cozy dinner and asks her to join them, but she insists that she's "on the clock" and can't.
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: A minor in-universe case, Charlotte being attacked by Valks is the reason that exporting Dockengaut wildlife from their territories is illegal in several territories.
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* ForgotAboutTheirPowers: In ''Restless'', Oktavia's wheelchair gets stuck in the mud and she asks the other to help her. A deadpan Charlotte points out that she can make her wheelchair fly.
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* ForgotAboutTheirPowers: ForgotAboutHerPowers: In ''Restless'', Oktavia's wheelchair gets stuck in the mud and she asks the other to help her. A deadpan Charlotte points out that she can make her wheelchair fly.
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* ForgotAboutTheirPowers: In ''Restless'', Oktavia's wheelchair gets stuck in the mud and she asks the other to help her. A deadpan Charlotte points out that she can make her wheelchair fly.
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* SecretPetPlot: After ''Monsterland'', Kyoko tries to keep him a secret from her family, since she figures they won't react well to her having adopted a savage beast that Charlotte has a trauma trigger for.
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* TraumaButton: Valks ''will' cause Charlotte to react badly after one ripped her shoulder off and left her in the hospital in excrucitating pay for days.
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* TraumaButton: Valks ''will' cause A few years into her afterlife, Charlotte to react badly was attacked by an escaped Valk after one ripped her shoulder off and protecting Mami from its mate. The incident left her in the hospital in excrucitating pay for days. a few days, and ever since she has had a pathological phobia of valks. This becomes a problem when she and Kyoko have to fight some in the Monsterland arc.
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* AscendedExtra: They were originally intended as only minor cameos when they were first introduced. However, being the first of these cameos, and a major part of Mami and Charlotte's backstory, they ended up having to play a much larger role.
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* RapeAsBackstory: At one point when alive, Natsuru had to go to school in her girl form (posing as a transfer student) and was at the very least sexually assaulted by her female classmates. Years later, she clearly has a hard time recounting it.
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* {{Transplant}}: Like their friends, they are the main characters of ''Literature/{{Kampfer}}''.
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* JackassGenie: They all grant wishes that usually result in the girl who made them suffering more. Nanabey was apparently an especially foul one, magically changing his contractees physically or mentally to make them fit the ideal magical girl better.
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* QueerEstablishingMoment: While Natsuru's GenderBender situation was known to the audience from her first apperance, ''Gift of the Puella Magi'' has her coming out to Charlotte by explaining that, over time, she started feeling more comfortable as a girl than she did in her original form, often transforming when alone just for comfort. While she's not sure if she would call herself a trans woman, having had little time to explore her gender identity before dying, she is happy to be a girl forever.
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* QueerEstablishingMoment: While Natsuru's GenderBender situation was known to the audience from her first apperance, ''Gift of the Puella Magi'' has her coming out to Charlotte by explaining that, over time, she started feeling more comfortable as a girl than she did in her original form, often transforming when alone just for comfort. While she's not sure if she would call herself a trans woman, having had little time to explore her gender identity before dying, she is happy to be a girl forever.permanently.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Shizuku may be a bit of a jackass, but when push comes to shove she cares about her friends and will give genuine and sincere advice when someone needs it.
* ManipulativeBitch: Shizuku fashions herself one, claiming that she pushed Mami and Charlotte together and planning on doing the same with Akane and Mikoto just so she won't have competition for Natsuru's affections. Mami insists that she and Charlotte would have gotten together with or without her pushing.
* ManipulativeBitch: Shizuku fashions herself one, claiming that she pushed Mami and Charlotte together and planning on doing the same with Akane and Mikoto just so she won't have competition for Natsuru's affections. Mami insists that she and Charlotte would have gotten together with or without her pushing.
* QueerEstablishingMoment: While Natsuru's GenderBender situation was known to the audience from her first apperance, ''Gift of the Puella Magi'' has her coming out to Charlotte by explaining that, over time, she started feeling more comfortable as a girl than she did in her original form, often transforming when alone just for comfort. While she's not sure if she would call herself a trans woman, having had little time to explore her gender identity before dying, she is happy to be a girl forever.
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* InncentlyInsensitive: While high on (non-alcoholic) eggnog, Mikoto asks a few too many uncomfortable questions about Witchhood and her death to Charlotte, not helped by Charlotte being in a bad mood already.
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* InncentlyInsensitive: InnocentlyInsensitive: While high on (non-alcoholic) eggnog, Mikoto asks a few too many uncomfortable questions about Witchhood and her death to Charlotte, not helped by Charlotte being in a bad mood already.
