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* AnAxeToGrind: Their collective WeaponOfChoice, with each Marlfox other than [[NonActionBigBad Silth and Lantur]] carrying one.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: He's a bird of prey in a ''Redwall'' book, it's to be expected.
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* RightBehindMe: While a captive of Mokkan's, when the fox goes off scouting, Fenno tries to encourage the rats holding him captive to [[TheMutiny mutiny]] and mocks them for their superstitious fear of the Marlfox brood, disparaging the foxes in the process. Then Mokkan [[WalkInChimeIn having snuck up behind Fenno without being seen]], makes a wise crack at the shrew's expense before pummelling Fenno for amusement.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Although he's no saint, his abuse of Fenno can be seen as this.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler:Kills her own mother to become ruler of Castle Marl.]]
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* LaserGuidedKarma: [[spoiler:Murders her mother in order to claim rulership. Mokkan shows up before she's even finished with the funeral and proclaiming her new reign to kill her himself to claim rulership.]]
* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler:Kills her own mother to become ruler of CastleMarl.Marl...for all of ten seconds before Mokkan shows up.]]
* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler:Kills her own mother to become ruler of Castle
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* FauxAffablyEvilFauxAffablyEvil: Is fully capable of affecting a charming facade, such as when he greets Lantur upon arriving back at Castle Marl with a smile while expressing "sorrow" at their mother's sudden passing...all while planning to murder her.
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* ManipulativeBastardManipulativeBastard: The biggest schemer in the whole book, outplaying the woodlanders and even his siblings in his bid for personal power.
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* BigBadWannabe: She manages to outplay her mother, kill her, and set herself up to be the next Queen...and then Mokkan shows up at the funeral to prove she's utterly outclassed.
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* TheClan: [[spoiler: All [[spoiler:All of them adopted.]]
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* PosthumousCharacter: [[spoiler: [[DisneyDeath [[spoiler:[[DisneyDeath Not.]]]]
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* BrokenAngel: His wing is dislocated when we first meet him, and he can't fly. [[HandicappedBadass This doesn't seem to deter him greatly,]] [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and his wing gets fixed anyway.]]
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* WantingIsBetterThanHaving: As vast as his ambition is, [[spoiler: becoming King brings a host of bad dreams]], leaving him on the verge of madness even before the Redwallers come knocking at his door.
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* WantingIsBetterThanHaving: As vast as his ambition is, [[spoiler: becoming [[spoiler:becoming King brings a host of bad dreams]], leaving him on the verge of madness even before the Redwallers come knocking at his door.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler: Falling into a lake filled with ravenous, flesh-eating fish is ''not'' a pleasant way to die.]]
* IKnowYouKnowIKnow / PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler: How she offs Silth.]]
* IKnowYouKnowIKnow / PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler: How she offs Silth.]]
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler: Falling [[spoiler:Falling into a lake filled with ravenous, flesh-eating fish is ''not'' a pleasant way to die.]]
* IKnowYouKnowIKnow / PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo:[[spoiler: How [[spoiler:How she offs Silth.]]
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* TooCleverByHalf: [[spoiler: Silth outthinks herself ...just how she did it is very complicated to explain.]]
* TooCleverByHalf: [[spoiler: Silth outthinks herself ...just how she did it is very complicated to explain.]]
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* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler: Her [[spoiler:Her daughter Lantur poisons her this way.]]
* TooCleverByHalf:[[spoiler: Silth [[spoiler:Silth outthinks herself ...just how she did it is very complicated to explain.]]
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* TheHeart: She's the backbone of the group, giving Dann a pep talk when he needs it and encouraging the nobler paths of action.
* OddFriendship: She befriends the Mighty Megraw, a warlike osprey.
* OddFriendship: She befriends the Mighty Megraw, a warlike osprey.
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*PintsizedPowerhouseMartialArtsHeadband: Part of the usual ensemble for Guosim shrews.
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StoutStrength: His weight doesn't hamper his fighting ability one bit.
* WhatTheHellHero: He's not above calling out Rusvul after the latter tears into his son for his supposed cowardice.
* WhatTheHellHero: He's not above calling out Rusvul after the latter tears into his son for his supposed cowardice.
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SoProudOfYou: He finally has the chance to say as much at the end of the story, passing the title of Reguba along to Dann.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He's the recipient of this, as part of Dann's motivation is to finally prove himself in his father's eyes.
* WellDoneSonGuy: He's the recipient of this, as part of Dann's motivation is to finally prove himself in his father's eyes.
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* DirtyCoward: He kills Log-a-Log by spearing him InTheBack with a thrown rapier, and initially tries to murder Dippler while the latter's defenseless before being forced into a fair fight.
* DirtyCoward: He kills Log-a-Log by spearing him InTheBack with a thrown rapier, and initially tries to murder Dippler while the latter's defenseless before being forced into a fair fight.
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* ItsPersonal: The Marlfox brood's pet ravens ambushed him while he was sleeping, resulting in his injured wing. He'd gladly leap at the chance to get revenge, though his inability to fly puts a damper on that. [[spoiler:Once his wing is fixed, he makes good on his vow]].
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* TookaLevelInBadass: Notably when he takes on Raventail single-pawed and quite nearly kills him. From that point on, he becomes the warrior his father always wanted him to be.
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* TookaLevelInBadass: TookALevelInBadass: Notably when he takes on Raventail single-pawed and quite nearly kills him. From that point on, he becomes the warrior his father always wanted him to be.
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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Shockingly for a Redwall BigBad, Mokkan's ascent to kingship is heralded by him promising the Marlfox slaves that they can easily earn a position in his guard while also threatening the soldiers that screwups or laziness mean they'll be made slaves.
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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Shockingly for a Redwall BigBad, Mokkan's ascent to kingship is heralded by him promising the Marlfox Marlfox's slaves that they can easily earn a position in his guard while also threatening the soldiers that screwups or laziness mean they'll be made slaves.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: [[spoiler:He pushed pushes Lantur into the lake to be eaten by pike; he later gets knocked in and eaten by them himself.]]
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler: Falling into a lake filled with ravenous, flesh-eating fish is NOT a pleasant way to die.]]
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler: Falling into a lake filled with ravenous, flesh-eating fish is NOT ''not'' a pleasant way to die.]]
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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:He's killed by the slaves he mistreated.]]
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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Shcokingly for a Redwall BigBad, Mokkan's ascent to kingship is heralded by him promising the Marlfox slaves that they can easily earn a position in his guard while also threatening the soldiers that screwups or laziness mean they'll be made slaves.
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* EqualOpportunityEvil: Shcokingly Shockingly for a Redwall BigBad, Mokkan's ascent to kingship is heralded by him promising the Marlfox slaves that they can easily earn a position in his guard while also threatening the soldiers that screwups or laziness mean they'll be made slaves.
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* TooCleverByHalf: [[spoiler: Silth outthinks herself...herself ...just how she did it is very complicated to explain.]]
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Dannflor is normally a kind and gentle soul but that doesn't mean he's not a warrior.
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* TookaLevelinBadass: TookaLevelInBadass: Notably when he takes on Raventail single-pawed and quite nearly kills him. From that point on, he becomes the warrior his father always wanted him to be.
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* BiggerBad: The heroes never confront her...in fact, they never even really ''hear'' of her; she's dead and forgotten by the time they reach Castle Marl.
* BiggerBad: The heroes never confront her...in fact, they never even really ''hear'' of her; she's dead and forgotten by the time they reach Castle Marl.
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* BeautyIsBad: Played with--while with -- while she herself is no beauty, she's had countless valuable and precious treasures stolen to fill her bedchamber, in her delusion that death cannot visit where there are things of beauty.
* BiggerBad: The heroes never confront her...in fact, they never even really ''hear'' of her; she's dead and forgotten by the time they reach Castle Marl.beauty.
* BiggerBad: The heroes never confront her...in fact, they never even really ''hear'' of her; she's dead and forgotten by the time they reach Castle Marl.
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%%* HairTriggerTemper* GreaterScopeVillain: The reason the Marlfoxes are even attacking Redwall is that they are looking for riches to grace her throne room.
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* HairTriggerTemper: She's very easy to provoke, especially with regards to the White Ghost.
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* TheUnfought: The heroes never confront her... in fact, they never even really ''hear'' of her; she's dead and forgotten by the time they reach Castle Marl.
* TheDreaded: He's feared and loathed by both the slaves and the rat soldiers under his command.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: She had a slave beaten for looking at her.
* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler:She's killed by the slaves she mistreated and looked down upon.]]
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* DissonantSerenity: Even for a Marlfox, Mokkan is eerily serene, throttling a rat sent to spy on him to death while speaking soothingly to the victim and murdering his sister Lantur without ever breaking out of a sweet facade.
* EqualOpportunityEvil: Shcokingly for a Redwall BigBad, Mokkan's ascent to kingship is heralded by him promising the Marlfox slaves that they can easily earn a position in his guard while also threatening the soldiers that screwups or laziness mean they'll be made slaves.
* EqualOpportunityEvil: Shcokingly for a Redwall BigBad, Mokkan's ascent to kingship is heralded by him promising the Marlfox slaves that they can easily earn a position in his guard while also threatening the soldiers that screwups or laziness mean they'll be made slaves.
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* MonsterFacade: When confronted with vermin his tactic is to rear up to his impressive full height and starts roaring the most bloodthirsty threats at them, which sends them running... and leaves him sprawled on the ground and gasping for breath.
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* MauveShirt: As the largest group to collectively serve as the main antagonist of their book, most of the Marlfoxes get a moderate amount of characterization before they start dropping like flies.
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* {{Expy}}: There's a striking resemblance between his story arc and that of [[{{Theatre/Macbeth}} Lord and Lady Macbeth]], with all of the former's ambition, all of the latter's cruelty, and all the SanitySlippage of ''both''.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: After being captured by the Redwallers, Gelltor calls Janglur a coward that can't fight without an army at his back. Janglur proves Gelltor wrong by challenging him to single combat and soundly kicking his ass.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler:Cregga [[BoomHeadshot snipes him in the head with a longbow]], aided by Ellayo. This being [[SuperStrength Cregga]], the arrow pierces his head and keeps going.]]
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* TooDumbToLive: Gets a lethal dose of the IdiotBall when she decides that it's a good idea to stand there and mock the Redwallers charging at her forces. [[spoiler:She gets [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice skewered by a thrown javelin]] [[KilledMidSentence before she even gets to finish]] for her troubles.]]
* TooDumbToLive: Gets a lethal dose of the IdiotBall when she decides that it's a good idea to stand there and mock the Redwallers charging at her forces. [[spoiler:She gets [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice skewered by a thrown javelin]] [[KilledMidSentence before she even gets to finish]] for her troubles.]]
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* MauveShirt: OffWithHisHead: Beheaded [[HoistByHisOwnPetard with her own axe]] by Janglur.
* PlotTriggeringDeath: She exists just to get killed off and give the Marlfoxes a reason to war with Redwall.
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* PlotTriggeringDeath: She exists just to get killed off and give the Marlfoxes a reason to war with Redwall.
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* HeroKiller: She kills Elachim, causing Borrakul to swear vengeance on her.
* OnlySaneMan: Generally a lot more level-headed and even-tempered than her siblings.
* HeroKiller: She kills Elachim, causing Borrakul to swear vengeance on her.
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* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Ditches his siblings at Redwall, then almost all of his forces, and then he pushes his sister into a lake full of pike. It's rather telling that he's [[Pantheon/{{Crime}} the god of this trope.]]
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[[folder: Marlfox]]
!!Songbreeze Swifteye
* TheChick
* DaddysGirl
* SimpleStaff: With an emerald set into it. [[NamedWeapons Apparently, it's called the Leafwood.]]
!!Dannflower Reguba
* TheBerserker
* TheHero
* HurtingHero: With his father's constant disapproval hanging over him, and the subconscious belief that he'll never be a proper warrior, Dannflor has a lot of emotional baggage. Song helps him get over it, though.
* TookaLevelinBadass: Notably when he takes on Raventail single-pawed and quite nearly kills him. From that point on, he becomes the warrior his father always wanted him to be.
* WellDoneSonGuy: It doesn't help when his dad calls him a coward.
!!Dippler
* TheLancer
* MartialArtsHeadband
* PintsizedPowerhouse
* YouKilledMyFather: His reason for chasing after Fenno.
!!Burble
* MotorMouth: Lampshaded in his introduction.
* TheSmartGuy
* VerbalTic: "Yiss yiss."
!!Janglur Swifteye
* {{Acrofatic}}
* BigFun
* GoodParents: He's a really good dad to Song.
* StoutStrength
!!Rusvul Reguba
* AbusiveParents: Martin knows he tries to be a nice guy, but he's a fighter at heart and doesn't realize he's being unreasonably harsh.
* HeelRealization: When Dannflor takes off to retrieve the tapestry of Martin the Warrior, Rusvul realizes that he was much too harsh on his son for failing to guard it earlier, and expresses his regret when talking to Janglur later on.
* WellDoneSonGuy
!!Fenno
* TheBully: Is this to Dippler, constantly belittling him for his mistakes.
* DirtyCoward
* HumiliationConga: His life after murdering the Log-a-Log and deserting the Guosim becomes this in short order, courtesy of being captured by Mokkan and his band. [[{{Jerkass}} Not that he didn't have it coming.]]
%%* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves
!!Gawjo Swifteye
%%* BadassGrandpa
* TheClan: [[spoiler: All of them adopted.]]
%%* DisneyDeath
* PosthumousCharacter: [[spoiler: [[DisneyDeath Not.]]]]
* WalkingSpoiler: Kind of odd to see one of these in a Redwall book, isn't it?
!!Mighty Megraw
* AwesomeMcCoolname: He's a bird of prey in a ''Redwall'' book, it's to be expected.
* BrokenAngel: His wing is dislocated when we first meet him, and he can't fly. [[HandicappedBadass This doesn't seem to deter him greatly,]] [[spoiler: and his wing gets fixed anyway.]]
!!Sollertree / Skyspike
* TheBigGuy
* GentleGiant
* MeaningfulRename: His real name is Skyspike, but he renamed himself after he started living along. It's country talk for Solitary, if you couldn't tell.
!!The Marlfox Brood
* AnAxeToGrind
* BigScrewedUpFamily
* TheNondescript: Invoked, they have patchy fur colors that make them hard to see.
!!Mokkan
* AmbitionIsEvil: He's dead-set on becoming king. [[spoiler:He does, for a while.]]
* AnAxetoGrind
* BadassCape
* BigBad: Doing double duty as TheHeavy.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Ditches his siblings at Redwall, then almost all of his forces, and then he pushes his sister into a lake full of pike. It's rather telling that he's [[Pantheon/{{Crime}} the god of this trope.]]
* DeadpanSnarker
* FauxAffablyEvil
* ManipulativeBastard
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When the heroes raid his castle, and it becomes clear that the fight is lost, he sheds his embroidered finery of kingship and throws on his old Marlfox cloak, intending to make a run for it. [[spoiler:It doesn't work out for him.]]
* SmugSnake
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: [[spoiler:After he becomes king, Mokkan begins a descent into madness, which is partially fueled by sudden nightmares about vengeful woodlanders and his dead siblings.]]
!!Gelltor
* AnAxeToGrind
* BadassCape
* TheBerserker
* BloodKnight: Out of all of the Marlfoxes, he is the most eager to fight and go to war.
* TheBrute
* HotBlooded
!!Ascrod
* AnAxeToGrind
* BadassCape
* TheDragon
* MauveShirt
* OnlySaneMan
* TheStrategist
!!Vannan
* AnAxeToGrind
* BadassCape
* EvilGenius
* CunningLikeAFox: Probably the second most clever of the Marlfoxes that assaulted Redwall, after Mokkan.
* MauveShirt
!!Ziral
* HotBlooded
* MauveShirt: She exists just to get killed off and give the Marlfoxes a reason to war with Redwall.
* [[OffWithHisHead Off With Her Head]]
!!Predak
* MauveShirt
!!Lantur
* CunningLikeAFox
* DaddysGirl: It's stated that she was her father's favorite.
%%* DisneyVillainDeath
* TheDragon: To her mother, Queen Silth.
* DragonWithAnAgenda: Treachery runs in the family when it comes to the Marlfox brood.
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler: Falling into a lake filled with ravenous, flesh-eating fish is NOT a pleasant way to die.]]
* IKnowYouKnowIKnow / PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler: How she offs Silth.]]
%%* SelfMadeOrphan
* TheStarscream
!!High Queen Silth
* AnAxeToGrind: In her younger days, at least.
* BeautyIsBad: Played with--while she herself is no beauty, she's had countless valuable and precious treasures stolen to fill her bedchamber, in her delusion that death cannot visit where there are things of beauty.
* BiggerBad: The heroes never confront her...in fact, they never even really ''hear'' of her; she's dead and forgotten by the time they reach Castle Marl.
* TheCaligula
* DeathByGenreSavvy: [[spoiler: She outthinks herself when Lantur suspiciously pours them some wine.]]
* EvilMatriarch: Slew her mate over a leadership dispute, and fosters treachery amidst her children while ruling them with an iron paw.
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: With a hair-trigger temper, excessive vanity, and her own safety and comfort first and foremost, she rivals Tsarmina of ''Mossflower'' in this regard.
%%* HairTriggerTemper
* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler: Her daughter Lantur poisons her this way.]]
* TooCleverByHalf: [[spoiler: Silth outthinks herself...just how she did it is very complicated to explain.]]
%%* WeHardlyKnewYe
!!Raventail and his Barbarians
* BarbarianTribe
* BloodKnight: Unlike [[DirtyCoward most vermin]], they willingly and gleefully charge right into battle, especially Raventail.
* TribalFacePaint
* VillainTeamUp: Raventail and his ferret tribe were first introduced as antagonists to Dann and co, but later teamed up with the Marlfoxes to take over Redwall.
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[[folder: Marlfox]]
!!Songbreeze Swifteye
* TheChick
* DaddysGirl
* SimpleStaff: With an emerald set into it. [[NamedWeapons Apparently, it's called the Leafwood.]]
!!Dannflower Reguba
* TheBerserker
* TheHero
* HurtingHero: With his father's constant disapproval hanging over him, and the subconscious belief that he'll never be a proper warrior, Dannflor has a lot of emotional baggage. Song helps him get over it, though.
* TookaLevelinBadass: Notably when he takes on Raventail single-pawed and quite nearly kills him. From that point on, he becomes the warrior his father always wanted him to be.
* WellDoneSonGuy: It doesn't help when his dad calls him a coward.
!!Dippler
* TheLancer
* MartialArtsHeadband
* PintsizedPowerhouse
* YouKilledMyFather: His reason for chasing after Fenno.
!!Burble
* MotorMouth: Lampshaded in his introduction.
* TheSmartGuy
* VerbalTic: "Yiss yiss."
!!Janglur Swifteye
* {{Acrofatic}}
* BigFun
* GoodParents: He's a really good dad to Song.
* StoutStrength
!!Rusvul Reguba
* AbusiveParents: Martin knows he tries to be a nice guy, but he's a fighter at heart and doesn't realize he's being unreasonably harsh.
* HeelRealization: When Dannflor takes off to retrieve the tapestry of Martin the Warrior, Rusvul realizes that he was much too harsh on his son for failing to guard it earlier, and expresses his regret when talking to Janglur later on.
* WellDoneSonGuy
!!Fenno
* TheBully: Is this to Dippler, constantly belittling him for his mistakes.
* DirtyCoward
* HumiliationConga: His life after murdering the Log-a-Log and deserting the Guosim becomes this in short order, courtesy of being captured by Mokkan and his band. [[{{Jerkass}} Not that he didn't have it coming.]]
%%* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves
!!Gawjo Swifteye
%%* BadassGrandpa
* TheClan: [[spoiler: All of them adopted.]]
%%* DisneyDeath
* PosthumousCharacter: [[spoiler: [[DisneyDeath Not.]]]]
* WalkingSpoiler: Kind of odd to see one of these in a Redwall book, isn't it?
!!Mighty Megraw
* AwesomeMcCoolname: He's a bird of prey in a ''Redwall'' book, it's to be expected.
* BrokenAngel: His wing is dislocated when we first meet him, and he can't fly. [[HandicappedBadass This doesn't seem to deter him greatly,]] [[spoiler: and his wing gets fixed anyway.]]
!!Sollertree / Skyspike
* TheBigGuy
* GentleGiant
* MeaningfulRename: His real name is Skyspike, but he renamed himself after he started living along. It's country talk for Solitary, if you couldn't tell.
!!The Marlfox Brood
* AnAxeToGrind
* BigScrewedUpFamily
* TheNondescript: Invoked, they have patchy fur colors that make them hard to see.
!!Mokkan
* AmbitionIsEvil: He's dead-set on becoming king. [[spoiler:He does, for a while.]]
* AnAxetoGrind
* BadassCape
* BigBad: Doing double duty as TheHeavy.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Ditches his siblings at Redwall, then almost all of his forces, and then he pushes his sister into a lake full of pike. It's rather telling that he's [[Pantheon/{{Crime}} the god of this trope.]]
* DeadpanSnarker
* FauxAffablyEvil
* ManipulativeBastard
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When the heroes raid his castle, and it becomes clear that the fight is lost, he sheds his embroidered finery of kingship and throws on his old Marlfox cloak, intending to make a run for it. [[spoiler:It doesn't work out for him.]]
* SmugSnake
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: [[spoiler:After he becomes king, Mokkan begins a descent into madness, which is partially fueled by sudden nightmares about vengeful woodlanders and his dead siblings.]]
!!Gelltor
* AnAxeToGrind
* BadassCape
* TheBerserker
* BloodKnight: Out of all of the Marlfoxes, he is the most eager to fight and go to war.
* TheBrute
* HotBlooded
!!Ascrod
* AnAxeToGrind
* BadassCape
* TheDragon
* MauveShirt
* OnlySaneMan
* TheStrategist
!!Vannan
* AnAxeToGrind
* BadassCape
* EvilGenius
* CunningLikeAFox: Probably the second most clever of the Marlfoxes that assaulted Redwall, after Mokkan.
* MauveShirt
!!Ziral
* HotBlooded
* MauveShirt: She exists just to get killed off and give the Marlfoxes a reason to war with Redwall.
* [[OffWithHisHead Off With Her Head]]
!!Predak
* MauveShirt
!!Lantur
* CunningLikeAFox
* DaddysGirl: It's stated that she was her father's favorite.
%%* DisneyVillainDeath
* TheDragon: To her mother, Queen Silth.
* DragonWithAnAgenda: Treachery runs in the family when it comes to the Marlfox brood.
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: [[spoiler: Falling into a lake filled with ravenous, flesh-eating fish is NOT a pleasant way to die.]]
* IKnowYouKnowIKnow / PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler: How she offs Silth.]]
%%* SelfMadeOrphan
* TheStarscream
!!High Queen Silth
* AnAxeToGrind: In her younger days, at least.
* BeautyIsBad: Played with--while she herself is no beauty, she's had countless valuable and precious treasures stolen to fill her bedchamber, in her delusion that death cannot visit where there are things of beauty.
* BiggerBad: The heroes never confront her...in fact, they never even really ''hear'' of her; she's dead and forgotten by the time they reach Castle Marl.
* TheCaligula
* DeathByGenreSavvy: [[spoiler: She outthinks herself when Lantur suspiciously pours them some wine.]]
* EvilMatriarch: Slew her mate over a leadership dispute, and fosters treachery amidst her children while ruling them with an iron paw.
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: With a hair-trigger temper, excessive vanity, and her own safety and comfort first and foremost, she rivals Tsarmina of ''Mossflower'' in this regard.
%%* HairTriggerTemper
* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler: Her daughter Lantur poisons her this way.]]
* TooCleverByHalf: [[spoiler: Silth outthinks herself...just how she did it is very complicated to explain.]]
%%* WeHardlyKnewYe
!!Raventail and his Barbarians
* BarbarianTribe
* BloodKnight: Unlike [[DirtyCoward most vermin]], they willingly and gleefully charge right into battle, especially Raventail.
* TribalFacePaint
* VillainTeamUp: Raventail and his ferret tribe were first introduced as antagonists to Dann and co, but later teamed up with the Marlfoxes to take over Redwall.
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