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* GoldTooth: Gabool's incisors have been knocked out and replaced with gold teeth studded with emeralds.
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: A [[WhipItGood large ship's rope]] with knots in it. She eventually develops her own system of complicated knotwork that can be used to weaponize almost any rope.
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: A [[WhipItGood large ship's rope]] rope with knots in it. She eventually develops her own system of complicated knotwork that can be used to weaponize almost any rope.
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The commander of the ''Darkqueen'' and one of Gabool's original eight captains, Saltar was a corsair hook fighter with an ugly reputation. Coming upon Mariel and Joseph's ship, the ''Periwinkle'' Saltar captured it, killed most of the crew, and sold Mariel and Joseph to Gabool as slaves. When Gabool murdered Saltar's brother, Bluddrigg, the searat captain returned to Fort Bladegirt, and was slain in a duel with Gabool.
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The commander of the ''Darkqueen'' and one of Gabool's original eight captains, Saltar was a corsair hook fighter with an ugly reputation. Coming upon Mariel and Joseph's ship, the ''Periwinkle'' ''Periwinkle'', Saltar captured it, killed most of the crew, and sold Mariel and Joseph to Gabool as slaves. When Gabool murdered Saltar's brother, Bluddrigg, the searat captain returned to Fort Bladegirt, and was slain in a duel with Gabool.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Gabool is quite clearly messed up in the head; his delusions, vivid audio/visual hallucinations, and general paranoia seem to point in the direction of schizophrenia.
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* KnowsTheRopes: Her WeaponOfChoice is a piece of rope with two knots tied in it.
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* KnowsTheRopes: Her WeaponOfChoice weapon is a piece of rope with two knots tied in it.
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* KnifeNut: In ''Bellmaker'', where he's armed with a set of daggers.
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* KnifeNut: Wears several daggers and knives in addition to his signature curved sword.
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* SimpleStaff: His weapon of choice.
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* {{Sadist}}: A particularly cruel searat, even by Terramort standards. Saltar murdered the crew of the ship he captured Mariel on and is strongly implied to have had them chopped to little pieces to "feed the fishes" while still alive.
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* BerserkButton: After his betrayal, Greypatch can drive Gabool mad. Mentioned he was almost killed by a wee mousemaid also makes him positively ''erupt'' on Saltar with none of the feigned good humor from before.
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** [[spoiler: She served as the personal slave/servant of Gabool, aka the AxCrazy pirate king for a number of seasons, before she was thrown off a cliff into the sea, where she floated on a spar of driftwood that smacks her on the head (leading to LaserGuidedAmnesia about her slavery and childhood), before being deposited on a sandy wasteland of a beach, where she is promptly attacked by seagulls]].
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** [[spoiler: She [[spoiler:She served as the personal slave/servant of Gabool, aka the AxCrazy pirate king for a number of seasons, before she was thrown off a cliff into the sea, where she floated on a spar of driftwood that smacks her on the head (leading to LaserGuidedAmnesia about her slavery and childhood), before being deposited on a sandy wasteland of a beach, where she is promptly attacked by seagulls]].
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* HairTriggerTemper: You better believe it.
* HotBlooded: Mariel is always ready to fight anyone, even when it gets her into serious trouble. Seagulls, toads, you name it. [[spoiler: She even bites one of the searats that originally captured Joseph's ship, and killed him!]]
* HotBlooded: Mariel is always ready to fight anyone, even when it gets her into serious trouble. Seagulls, toads, you name it. [[spoiler: She even bites one of the searats that originally captured Joseph's ship, and killed him!]]
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* HotBlooded: Mariel is always ready to fight anyone, even when it gets her into serious trouble. Seagulls, toads, you name it.
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A descendent of Gonff the Mousethief, Dandin is a troublemaker who doesn't quite fit in at Redwall Abbey. Taking up Martin the Warrior's sword, Dandin leaves the Abbey with Mariel, aiming to stop Gabool the Wild and put an end to the threat of the searat kings. With Gabool defeated, Dandin, still restless, returns Martin's sword to the Abbey, before setting off for Southsward with Mariel, and getting caught up in the war against the Urgan Nagru.
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A descendent descendant of Gonff the Mousethief, Dandin is a troublemaker who doesn't quite fit in at Redwall Abbey. Taking up Martin the Warrior's sword, Dandin leaves the Abbey with Mariel, aiming to stop Gabool the Wild and put an end to the threat of the searat kings. With Gabool defeated, Dandin, still restless, returns Martin's sword to the Abbey, before setting off for Southsward with Mariel, and getting caught up in the war against the Urgan Nagru.
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* OlderAndWiser: In ''The Bellmaker''
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* YouDirtyRat: A searat, like all Gabool's captains.
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* YouDirtyRat: A searat, like all of Gabool's captains.
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* FedToTheBeast: He dies by being thrown the Skrabblag the scorpion.
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* FedToTheBeast: He dies by being thrown the to Skrabblag the scorpion.
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* DeadpanSnarker
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* KnowsTheRopes: Her WeaponOfChoice is a piece of rope with two knots tied in it.
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* TheNotLoveInterest: With Mariel.
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* BewareMyStingerTailBewareMyStingerTail: By virtue of being a scorpion.
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* PowerPincers
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* PowerPincersPowerPincers: Also by virtue of being a scorpion.
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* FedToTheBeast: How he meets his end.
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* FedToTheBeast: How he meets his end.He dies by being thrown the Skrabblag the scorpion.
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* PragmaticVillainy: What he wants to pursue, but his bloodthirsty tendencies make him NotSoDifferent from Gabool.
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* PragmaticVillainy: What he wants to pursue, but his bloodthirsty tendencies make him NotSoDifferent from like Gabool.
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* DefiantToTheEnd: In contrast to a lot of the series' villains, Riptung never contemplates surrender, and his last act is to scream his FamousLastWords in Dandin's face.
* FamousLastWords: A classically villainous "You'll never take me alive."
* FamousLastWords: A classically villainous "You'll never take me alive."
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* DefiantToTheEnd: In contrast to a lot of the series' villains, Riptung never contemplates surrender, and his last act is to scream his FamousLastWords last words in Dandin's face.
* FamousLastWords: A classically villainous "You'll never take me alive."face.
* FamousLastWords: A classically villainous "You'll never take me alive."
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Their scuttling of the ''Darkqueen'' is what promtps the searats to return to Redwall and is why the Abbey ends up under attack. If they had left the ''Darkqueen'' in sailing condition then the rest of Greypatch's crew would have sailed out to sea and, under the less competent leadership of Bigfang, would have likely been sunk or captured by the rest of Gabool's captains.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Their scuttling of the ''Darkqueen'' is what promtps prompts the searats to return to Redwall and is why the Abbey ends up under attack. If they had left the ''Darkqueen'' in sailing condition then the rest of Greypatch's crew would have sailed out to sea and, under the less competent leadership of Bigfang, would have likely been sunk or captured by the rest of Gabool's captains.
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* CuteButCacophonic: Hon Rosie very nice and friendly, but goodness, her ''laugh''... Even the reader gets to see just how bad it is if you listen to the audio version.
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* CuteButCacophonic: Hon Rosie very nice and friendly, but goodness, her ''laugh''... Even the reader gets to see hear just how bad it is if you listen to the audio version.
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* TheStarscream: Wondered if Flogga, or any of the other captains were planning to rebel against Gabool, and seemed interested in joining in if they were.
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* TheStarscream: Wondered if Flogga, or any of the other captains were planning to rebel against Gabool, and seemed interested in joining in if they were.
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* {{Natural Weapon}}: His tail and pincers.
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* {{Natural Weapon}}: NaturalWeapon: His tail and pincers.
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* TheStarscream: While he doesn't usurp Gabool's throne, and, in fact, never tries to, he still successfully betrays Gabool. And certainly pushes him to sidelines as a villain, by actively going out and threatening Redwall, while Gabool sits on his trone and goes progressively insaner.
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* TheStarscream: While he doesn't usurp Gabool's throne, and, in fact, never tries to, he still successfully betrays Gabool. And certainly pushes him to sidelines as a villain, by actively going out and threatening Redwall, while Gabool sits on his trone and goes progressively insaner.
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* {{The Insomniac}}: Cannot sleep due to nightmares, which majorly contributes to his mental breakdown.
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* {{Orcus on his Throne}}: He's never even aware that Mariel and her friends are after him-- and by the time they confront him is too mad to even care.
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* {{Orcus on his Throne}}: OrcusOnHisThrone: He's never even aware that Mariel and her friends are after him-- and by the time they confront him is too mad to even care.
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* SimpleStaff: His weapon of choice.
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* HeroicLineage: Descended from Gonff. Specifically, he's Gonff's great-grandson.
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* HeroicLineage: Descended from Gonff. Specifically, he's Gonff's great-grandson.
* OlderAndWiser: In ''The Bellmaker''
* OlderAndWiser: In ''The Bellmaker''
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* OlderAndWiser: In ''The Bellmaker''