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* AbusiveParents: While not as abusive as Talia is to Edward, Jocelyne’s parenting isn’t exactly great either.
** She slaps Emma in the face after an argument with her about marrying Edward.
** She slaps Emma in the face after an argument with her about marrying Edward.
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* QueenIncognito: While she is in the Big City.
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* BadPeopleAbuseAnimals: His ''signature''.
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* BadPeopleAbuseAnimals: His ''signature''.He’s ''much worse'' in this fanfic than in the canon show.
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** In Volume 2, Chapter 38, he pulls a gun on Danny so that he could take him out and take the Diamond out of his stomach with force.
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** In Volume 2, Chapter 38, he pulls a gun on threatens to shoot Danny so that he could take him out and take the Diamond out of his stomach with force.too.
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* PosthumousCharacter: She died long before the events of both the canon show and the fanfic, only appearing in flashbacks, but nonetheless is important to the story.
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* PosthumousCharacter: She died long before the events of both the canon show and the fanfic, only appearing in flashbacks, but nonetheless is important to the story.
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[[folder:Sally]]
A roan pony who is Mela’s mount.
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A roan pony who is Mela’s mount.
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* BadassAdorable: She’s a doggie wearing a spiked collar who has a lot of strength.
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* BadassAdorable: All of them are animals who not only protect Ava and Pocketville but they can really kick tail.
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* BadassAdorable: All of them are animals who not only protect Ava and Pocketville but they can really kick tail.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Just like those before her, Jocelyne was in an arranged marriage with King James.
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* OminousObsidianOoze: Her ghost form frequently has a black substance dripping from her mouth.