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* {{Precursors}}: The original population of Jaha mysteriously disappeared decades ago, it's current inhabitants being dedicated to explore the forgotten ruins and discover it's secrets.
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* {{Precursors}}: The original population of Jaha mysteriously disappeared decades ago, it's its current inhabitants being dedicated to explore the forgotten ruins and discover it's its secrets.
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* SlaveLiberation: Kibwe has always forbidden the trade of slaves, but recently has forbidden even the passing of slaves throught the town, much to the anger of the former slavers who are still trying to revert these progresses.
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* SlaveLiberation: Kibwe has always forbidden the trade of slaves, but recently has forbidden even the passing of slaves throught through the town, much to the anger of the former slavers who are still trying to revert these progresses.
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An ancient temple-city and formerly the seat of a glorious empire, Mzali spent much of its later history in decline. However, this changed with the uncovery of the mummyfied remains of an ancient child-king, Walkena. while this helped to revitalizethe city, it also drew the gaze of Cheliax, whose troops attacked the ancient city. Protected by a reawoken Walkena, the city soon found itself ruled by the increasingly harsh undead god-king.
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An ancient temple-city and formerly the seat of a glorious empire, Mzali spent much of its later history in decline. However, this changed with the uncovery of the mummyfied mummified remains of an ancient child-king, Walkena. while While this helped to revitalizethe revitalize the city, it also drew the gaze of Cheliax, whose troops attacked the ancient city. Protected by a reawoken Walkena, the city soon found itself ruled by the increasingly harsh undead god-king.
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* AChildShallLeadThem: Deconstructed. While Walkena's remains were originally worshiped by the people of Mzali, those under his rule now have to endure his childish whims.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Walkenas favorite method of execution, the "Punishment of Seven Angry Suns", with subjects its victims to all sorts of torture before they are burned alive via concentrated sunlight.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Walkenas favorite method of execution, the "Punishment of Seven Angry Suns", with subjects its victims to all sorts of torture before they are burned alive via concentrated sunlight.
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* AChildShallLeadThem: Deconstructed. While Walkena's remains were originally worshiped worshipped by the people of Mzali, those under his rule now have to endure his childish whims.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath:Walkenas Walkena's favorite method of execution, the "Punishment of Seven Angry Suns", with which subjects its victims to all sorts of torture before they are burned alive via concentrated sunlight.
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* GodEmperor: While he is "only" a descendant of the Old Sun Gods, the game treats him as an actual deity that can be worshiped.
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* GodEmperor: While he is "only" a descendant of the Old Sun Gods, the game treats him as an actual deity that can be worshiped.worshipped.
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: In ''Doorway To The Red Star'' he is held prisoner on the planet Akiton by the King Of Biting Ants, and the pcs have to save him.]]
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: In ''Doorway To The Red Star'' he is held prisoner on the planet Akiton by the King Of Biting Ants, and the pcs [=PCs=] have to save him.]]
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* SealedEvilinACan: The Nemesis Well, a mysterious well that every five years whispers seductive words to anyone who hears it.
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* SealedEvilInACan: The Nemesis Well, a mysterious well that
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[[folder: Nurvatcha]]
A coastal nation that is the homeland of the reclusive spider people Anadi.
* TheTheocracy: Subverted. The Anadi government is organized around the Empty Throne, an empty seat meant for the Anadi's main goddess Nana Anadi (Grandmother Anadi), but it's an honorary seat, and Grandmother Spider is not expected to rule.
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A coastal nation that is the homeland of the reclusive spider people Anadi.
* TheTheocracy: Subverted. The Anadi government is organized around the Empty Throne, an empty seat meant for the Anadi's main goddess Nana Anadi (Grandmother Anadi), but it's an honorary seat, and Grandmother Spider is not expected to rule.
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A coastal nation that is the homeland of the reclusive spider people Anadi.
* TheTheocracy: Subverted. The Anadi government is organized around the Empty Throne, an empty seat meant for the Anadi's main goddess Nana Anadi (Grandmother Anadi), but it's an honorary seat, and Grandmother Spider is not expected to rule.
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* SlaveRevolt: Recently, a slave ravolt has sucessfully ended slavery in Sargava, with the recently freed slaves changing the nation's name to Vidrian.
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* TheGreatWall: The walls around Kibwe is anyone than anyone can remember, with magical protections for anything that might try to invade it.
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* TheGreatWall: The walls around Kibwe is anyone older than anyone can remember, with magical protections for anything that might try to invade it.
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* PuttingThePalInPrincipal: He is the benevolent founder and headmaster of [[WizardingAcademy Maagambya Academy.]]
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* PuttingThePalInPrincipal: He is the benevolent founder and headmaster of [[WizardingAcademy [[WizardingSchool Maagambya Academy.]]
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* PuttingThePalInPrincipal: He is the benevolent founder and headmaster of [[WizardingAcademy Maagambya Academy.]]
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: In ''Doorway To The Red Star'' he is held prisoner on the planet Akiton by the King Of Biting Ants, and the pcs have to save him.]]
* BigGood: Of the ''Strength Of Thousands'' adventure path, and the Mwangi Expanse in general.
* BigGood: Of the ''Strength Of Thousands'' adventure path, and the Mwangi Expanse in general.
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* SlaveLiberation: Kibwe has always forbidden the trade of slaves, but recently has forbidden even the passing of slaves throught the town, much to the anger of the former slavers who are still trying to revert these progresses.
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[[folder: Kibwe]]
* TheGreatWall: The walls around Kibwe is anyone than anyone can remember, with magical protections for anything that might try to invade it.
* MerchantCity: Kibwe is a hotpot of different merchants and cultures across Garund, all offering and trading different things.
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* TheGreatWall: The walls around Kibwe is anyone than anyone can remember, with magical protections for anything that might try to invade it.
* MerchantCity: Kibwe is a hotpot of different merchants and cultures across Garund, all offering and trading different things.
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A formerly abandoned city, most of Jaha's inhabitants are refugees from the fallen nations of Lirgen and Yamasa, who now explore the city's ruins.
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A mysterious formerly abandoned city, most of Jaha's inhabitants are refugees from the fallen nations of Lirgen and Yamasa, who now explore the city's ruins.
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* TheNightOwl: Most of Jaha prefers to sleep during the day and live their social lives at night, on account of the mysterious nightmares that haunted them at night.
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** AbusivePrecursors: The original Jahans were xenophobic slaverowners, following a prophecy that claimed they were destined to rule over Jaha.
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* Astrologer: A great part of the Jahans culture consists of searching for the future in the star.
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* Astrologer: {{Astrologer}}: A great part of the Jahans culture consists of searching for the future in the star.
