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* AllForNothing: All of Donald's and miners from the Inner Bay organization to acquire their own West District Hypercube mine turned out to be this for two reasons. The first reason is how technologies have marched on as not only super-loop communication enables communication within the Black Ring, but also how unmanned mining drones controlled thanks to super-loop communication are more efficient than manual mining. That is why Inner Bay miners couldn't compete with Nirvana. The second reason is how Nirvana now deemed the Inner Bay Hypercube mine W-31 to be a negative asset due to the cost of outdated equipment and large work injury compensation costs from persistent Mania contamination. The miners protested against the mine's closure as it would cut off the last economic lifeline to the West District. That is why the company agreed on November 25, N.F. 104 to hand over mine W-31 to the people. Nirvana, however, didn't want their Hypercube monopoly to be threatened. That is why it implanted a secret code inside mine's robotic mechs to massacre their operators. Panic from the massacre allowed Corpus to call down the BR-002 which also caused rapid expansion of BR-000. While it was barely halted at the FAC's third Broken Frontline, surging contamination overtook all of the remaining safe spaces in the Inner Bay. This meant that mine W-31 was no longer operational. Thankfully by the end of Chapter 13, however, the situation has turned around. This is because the largest stand-alone Hypercube mine to date has risen out of the ruins of the BR-002 and although Nirvana tried to claim its ownership, Paradeisos has closed access to a certain technology based on the BR-002 Mania field due to security reasons. That is why super-loop communication can no longer be maintained inside the ruins and Nirvana's unmanned mining drones thus can't be used. That is why the new Inner Bay organization has bargaining power against Nirvana thanks to a seemingly forgotten manual mining technique that was preserved by Julien, the former leader of Rustfire.
* {{Brainwashed}}: When Donald gets captured, he gets marked by X, who is implied to be young Shalom, so that she can "make better use of him". Shalom's plan was for Donald to make a fake video of him betraying the Rustfire by defecting to Nirvana in order to collapse Rustfire from within due to the loss of leadership and trust. This worked as Donald is now considered a traitor by remaining Rustfire.
* {{Hunk}}: Donald is second tallest Sinner with height of 188 cm. Only Demon with height of 191 cm beat Donald.
* TheInfiltration: The Chief does not find out until Chapter 13 when they wake up from a coma, but it turns out that Donald was disguising himself as an Executive officer when they first met in Chapter 9 when the Chief was investigating the Drifter Camp to find the source of an unusual increase of residual contamination in the BR-004 lockdown area.
* {{Brainwashed}}: When Donald gets captured, he gets marked by X, who is implied to be young Shalom, so that she can "make better use of him". Shalom's plan was for Donald to make a fake video of him betraying the Rustfire by defecting to Nirvana in order to collapse Rustfire from within due to the loss of leadership and trust. This worked as Donald is now considered a traitor by remaining Rustfire.
* {{Hunk}}: Donald is second tallest Sinner with height of 188 cm. Only Demon with height of 191 cm beat Donald.
* TheInfiltration: The Chief does not find out until Chapter 13 when they wake up from a coma, but it turns out that Donald was disguising himself as an Executive officer when they first met in Chapter 9 when the Chief was investigating the Drifter Camp to find the source of an unusual increase of residual contamination in the BR-004 lockdown area.
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* AllForNothing: All of Donald's and miners from the Inner Bay organization attempting to acquire their own West District Hypercube mine turned out to be this for two reasons. reasons: The first reason is how technologies have marched on as not only super-loop communication enables communication within the Black Ring, but also how allows control over unmanned mining drones controlled thanks to super-loop communication are being more efficient than manual mining. That is why Inner Bay miners couldn't compete with Nirvana. The second reason is how mining, letting Nirvana now deemed outpace Inner Bay's miners; the second is Nirvana deeming the Inner Bay Hypercube mine W-31 to be a negative asset due to the cost of outdated equipment and large work injury compensation costs from persistent Mania contamination. The miners protested against the mine's closure as it would cut off the last economic lifeline to the West District. That is why the company agreed on November 25, N.F. 104 to hand over mine W-31 to the people. Nirvana, however, didn't want their Hypercube monopoly to be threatened. That is why threatened, so it implanted a secret code inside the mine's robotic mechs to massacre their operators. Panic from the massacre allowed Corpus to call down the BR-002 BR-002, which also caused rapid expansion of BR-000. While it was barely halted at the FAC's third Broken Frontline, surging contamination overtook all of the remaining safe spaces in the Inner Bay. This meant that mine W-31 was no longer operational. Thankfully by the end of Chapter 13, however, the situation has turned around. This is because the largest stand-alone Hypercube mine to date has risen out of the ruins of the BR-002 and although Nirvana tried to claim its ownership, Paradeisos has closed access to a certain technology based on the BR-002 Mania field due to security reasons. That is why super-loop communication can no longer be maintained inside the ruins and Nirvana's unmanned mining drones thus can't be used. That is why the new Inner Bay organization has bargaining power against Nirvana thanks to a seemingly forgotten manual mining technique that was preserved by Julien, the former leader of Rustfire.
* {{Brainwashed}}: WhenDonald he gets captured, he gets marked by X, who is implied to be a young Shalom, Shalom so that she can "make better use of him". Shalom's plan was for Donald to make a fake video of him betraying the Rustfire by defecting to Nirvana in order to collapse Rustfire from within due to from the loss of leadership and trust. This worked as Donald is now considered a traitor by remaining the remnants of Rustfire.
* {{Hunk}}:Donald He is the second tallest Sinner with height of 188 cm. Only Demon with height of 191 cm beat beats Donald.
* TheInfiltration: The Chief does not find out until Chapter 13 when they wake up from a coma, but it turns out that Donald was disguising himself asan the Executive officer Officer when they first met in Chapter 9 when the Chief was investigating the Drifter Camp to find the source of an unusual increase of residual contamination in the BR-004 lockdown area.9.
* {{Brainwashed}}: When
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* TheInfiltration: The Chief does not find out until Chapter 13 when they wake up from a coma, but it turns out that Donald was disguising himself as
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* AllForNothing: All of Donald's and miners from the Inner Bay organization to acquire their own West District Hypercube mine turned out to be this for two reasons. The first reason is how technologies have marched on as not only super-loop communication enables communication within the Black Ring, but also how unmanned mining drones controlled thanks to super-loop communication are more efficient than manual mining. That is why Inner Bay miners couldn't compete with Nirvana. The second reason is how Nirvana now deemed the Inner Bay Hypercube mine W-31 to be a negative asset due to the cost of outdated equipment and large work injury compensation costs from persistent Mania contamination. The miners protested against the mine's closure as it would cut off the last economic lifeline to the West District. That is why the company agreed on November 25, N.F. 104 to hand over mine W-31 to the people. Nirvana, however, didn't want their Hypercube monopoly to be threatened. That is why it implanted a secret code inside mine's robotic mechs to massacre their operators. Panic from the massacre allowed Corpus to call down the BR-002 which also caused rapid expansion of BR-000. While it was barely halted at the FAC's third Broken Frontline, surging contamination overtook all of the remaining safe spaces in the Inner Bay. This meant that mine W-31 was no longer operational. Thankfully by the end of Chapter 13, however, the situation has turned around. This is because the largest stand-alone Hypercube mine to date has risen out of the ruins of the BR-002 and although Nirvana tried to claim its ownership, Paradeisos has closed access to a certain technology based on the BR-002 Mania field due to security reasons. That is why super-loop communication can no longer be maintained inside the ruins and Nirvana's unmanned mining drones thus can't be used. That is why the new Inner Bay organization has bargaining power against Nirvana thanks to a seemingly forgotten manual mining technique that was preserved by Julien, the former leader of Rustfire.
* Brainwashed: When Donald gets captured, he gets marked by X, who is implied to be young Shalom, so that she can "make better use of him". Shalom's plan was for Donald to make a fake video of him betraying the Rustfire by defecting to Nirvana in order to collapse Rustfire from within due to the loss of leadership and trust. This worked as Donald is now considered a traitor by remaining Rustfire.
* Brainwashed: When Donald gets captured, he gets marked by X, who is implied to be young Shalom, so that she can "make better use of him". Shalom's plan was for Donald to make a fake video of him betraying the Rustfire by defecting to Nirvana in order to collapse Rustfire from within due to the loss of leadership and trust. This worked as Donald is now considered a traitor by remaining Rustfire.
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* AllForNothing: All of Donald's and miners from the Inner Bay organization to acquire their own West District Hypercube mine turned out to be this for two reasons. The first reason is how technologies have marched on as not only super-loop communication enables communication within the Black Ring, but also how unmanned mining drones controlled thanks to super-loop communication are more efficient than manual mining. That is why Inner Bay miners couldn't compete with Nirvana. The second reason is how Nirvana now deemed the Inner Bay Hypercube mine W-31 to be a negative asset due to the cost of outdated equipment and large work injury compensation costs from persistent Mania contamination. The miners protested against the mine's closure as it would cut off the last economic lifeline to the West District. That is why the company agreed on November 25, N.F. 104 to hand over mine W-31 to the people. Nirvana, however, didn't want their Hypercube monopoly to be threatened. That is why it implanted a secret code inside mine's robotic mechs to massacre their operators. Panic from the massacre allowed Corpus to call down the BR-002 which also caused rapid expansion of BR-000. While it was barely halted at the FAC's third Broken Frontline, surging contamination overtook all of the remaining safe spaces in the Inner Bay. This meant that mine W-31 W-31 was no longer operational. Thankfully by the end of Chapter 13, however, the situation has turned around. This is because the largest stand-alone Hypercube mine to date has risen out of the ruins of the BR-002 and although Nirvana tried to claim its ownership, Paradeisos has closed access to a certain technology based on the BR-002 Mania field due to security reasons. That is why super-loop communication can no longer be maintained inside the ruins and Nirvana's unmanned mining drones thus can't be used. That is why the new Inner Bay organization has bargaining power against Nirvana thanks to a seemingly forgotten manual mining technique that was preserved by Julien, the former leader of Rustfire.
*Brainwashed: {{Brainwashed}}: When Donald gets captured, he gets marked by X, who is implied to be young Shalom, so that she can "make better use of him". Shalom's plan was for Donald to make a fake video of him betraying the Rustfire by defecting to Nirvana in order to collapse Rustfire from within due to the loss of leadership and trust. This worked as Donald is now considered a traitor by remaining Rustfire.
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* AllForNothing: All of Donald's and miners from the Inner Bay organization to acquire their own West District Hypercube mine turned out to be this for two reasons. The first reason is how technologies have marched on as not only super-loop communication enables communication within the Black Ring, but also how unmanned mining drones controlled thanks to super-loop communication are more efficient than manual mining. That is why Inner Bay miners couldn't compete with Nirvana. The second reason is how Nirvana now deemed the Inner Bay Hypercube mine W-31 to be a negative asset due to the cost of outdated equipment and large work injury compensation costs from persistent Mania contamination. The miners protested against the mine's closure as it would cut off the last economic lifeline to the West District. That is why the company agreed on November 25, N.F. 104 to hand over mine W-31 to the people. Nirvana, however, didn't want their Hypercube monopoly to be threatened. That is why it implanted a secret code inside mine's robotic mechs to massacre their operators. Panic from the massacre allowed Corpus to call down the BR-002 which also caused rapid expansion of BR-000. While it was barely halted at the FAC's third Broken Frontline, surging contamination overtook all of the remaining safe spaces in the Inner Bay. This meant that mine W-31 was no longer operational. Thankfully by the end of Chapter 13, however, the situation has turned around. This is because the largest stand-alone Hypercube mine to date has risen out of the ruins of the BR-002 and although Nirvana tried to claim its ownership, Paradeisos has closed access to a certain technology based on the BR-002 Mania field due to security reasons. That is why super-loop communication can no longer be maintained inside the ruins and Nirvana's unmanned mining drones thus can't be used. That is why the new Inner Bay organization has bargaining power against Nirvana thanks to a seemingly forgotten manual mining technique that was preserved by Julien, the former leader of Rustfire.
* Brainwashed: When Donald gets captured, he gets marked by X, who is implied to be young Shalom, so that she can "make better use of him". Shalom's plan was for Donald to make a fake video of him betraying the Rustfire by defecting to Nirvana in order to collapse Rustfire from within due to the loss of leadership and trust. This worked as Donald is now considered a traitor by remaining Rustfire.
* Brainwashed: When Donald gets captured, he gets marked by X, who is implied to be young Shalom, so that she can "make better use of him". Shalom's plan was for Donald to make a fake video of him betraying the Rustfire by defecting to Nirvana in order to collapse Rustfire from within due to the loss of leadership and trust. This worked as Donald is now considered a traitor by remaining Rustfire.
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* TheInfiltration: The Chief does not find out until Chapter 13 when they wake up from a coma, but it turns out that Donald was disguising himself as an Executive officer when they first met in Chapter 9 when the Chief was investigating the Drifter Camp to find the source of an unusual increase of residual contamination in the BR-004 lockdown area.
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The owner of a shell company called Whitestone Industries engaged in illegal businesses such as debt collection and hired thug recruitment.
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The only female firefighter of the Eastside Fire Department.
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An introvert whose outburst of her powers led to the destruction of kitchen facilities due to low temperature in Blue Ribbon Culinary School.
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The current leader of the 9th Agency which is on the same administration level as FAC, and works directly under Paradeisos. It is in charge of the [=DisCity=]'s intelligence spies.
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They are swindler who repeatedly fabricated experiences of abuse and fake injuries to swindle wealthy women's property. They also imitated badges of The Homeless in order to abuse powers to perform violence to others while pretending to be part of The Homeless.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: They are secondary character of the rumored haunted toy factory in ''Toybox Terror'' event.
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* AndThisIsFor: When Langely is finishing off Parma in Chapter 13, she says the names of her subordinates: Marta, Red J, Padron, Viper, and Azure. She also remarks how not only their missions are accomplished with the death of Parma, but also how they can rest easy with no more late nights working.
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->'''Voiced by:''' Creator/WangXiaoTong (CN), Creator/SakakiharaYuki (JP), Creator/{{Kim Bo-na}} (KR)
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* {{Hunk}}: Donald is second tallest Sinner with height of 188 cm. Only Demon with height of 191 cm beat Donald.
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!!Donald
[[quoteright:797:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/don_basic.png]]
[[caption-width-right:797:''Surprised? You know what they say, don't judge a book by its cover, heh heh.'']]
[[caption-width-right:350:[[labelnote:''Click to see Rank-Up appearance.'']]https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/don_rank_up.png[[/labelnote]]]]
[[caption-width-right:350:[[labelnote:''Click to see his inmate mugshot.'']]https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/don_mugshot.png[[/labelnote]]]]
->'''Danger Rating:''' S
->'''MBCC File ID:'''MBCC-S-012
->'''Sinner Ability:''' Stormy Thunder
->'''Tendency:''' Fury | Core Breaker
->'''Skills:''' Electric Surge, Thunderous Might, Unexpected Thunder, Electric Conduction
->'''Affiliation:''' Executive Committee, [[spoiler:Rustfire]]
->'''Birthplace:''' Syndicate
->'''Birthday:''' December 18
->'''Height:''' 188cm
->'''Voiced by:'''
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The former leader of Rustfire who played a key role in the conflict between the West District miner union and the Nirvana Group from N.F. 103 to N.F. 104.
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!!Donald
[[quoteright:797:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/don_basic.png]]
[[caption-width-right:797:''Surprised? You know what they say, don't judge a book by its cover, heh heh.'']]
[[caption-width-right:350:[[labelnote:''Click to see Rank-Up appearance.'']]https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/don_rank_up.png[[/labelnote]]]]
[[caption-width-right:350:[[labelnote:''Click to see his inmate mugshot.'']]https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/don_mugshot.png[[/labelnote]]]]
->'''Danger Rating:''' S
->'''MBCC File ID:'''MBCC-S-012
->'''Sinner Ability:''' Stormy Thunder
->'''Tendency:''' Fury | Core Breaker
->'''Skills:''' Electric Surge, Thunderous Might, Unexpected Thunder, Electric Conduction
->'''Affiliation:''' Executive Committee, [[spoiler:Rustfire]]
->'''Birthplace:''' Syndicate
->'''Birthday:''' December 18
->'''Height:''' 188cm
->'''Voiced by:'''
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The former leader of Rustfire who played a key role in the conflict between the West District miner union and the Nirvana Group from N.F. 103 to N.F. 104.
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* LazyBum: K.K. and Che do all the actual work of Whitestone Industries, while she is seemingly ungrateful or ignorant of how much work they put in.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Her ''Blade of Night'' skin does away with her carefree personality likely having just taken care of loose ends she doesn't think are worth mentioning. Some of her lines are flat BlatantLies about this, [[spoiler:enough to make one think of her Interrogation story and imply this is her real line of work.]]
--> '''Bai Yi (Greeting):''' You're finally back. I stayed here and didn't go out all this time when you were gone... Oh, you want to know about the stain on my cloak? Che accidentally spilled water on it. Yeah, that must be it.
* TheGadfly: She provides way more cheer for her group that K.K. would rather she translate into work, being rather teasing towards the Chief and enthusiastic about her advertisements.
* KatanasAreJustBetter: Her choice of weapons are katana. Given her Sinner power is to move at supersonic speed, a cut is all she needs to put someone down.
* LazyBum: K.K. and Che do all the actual work of Whitestone Industries, while she is seemingly ungrateful or ignorant of how much work they put in. She's pretty shameless enough to proclaim staying in the MBCC in her Idle line because she gets free food.
--> '''Bai Yi (Conversation 3):''' Whitestone is able to survive in Syndicate till today because I've poured my blood, sweat, and tears into this company. You really can't count on those two kids, for heaven's sake... Why are you looking at me like this? Am I not speaking the truth?
--> '''Bai Yi (Greeting):''' You're finally back. I stayed here and didn't go out all this time when you were gone... Oh, you want to know about the stain on my cloak? Che accidentally spilled water on it. Yeah, that must be it.
* TheGadfly: She provides way more cheer for her group that K.K. would rather she translate into work, being rather teasing towards the Chief and enthusiastic about her advertisements.
* KatanasAreJustBetter: Her choice of weapons are katana. Given her Sinner power is to move at supersonic speed, a cut is all she needs to put someone down.
* LazyBum: K.K. and Che do all the actual work of Whitestone Industries, while she is seemingly ungrateful or ignorant of how much work they put in. She's pretty shameless enough to proclaim staying in the MBCC in her Idle line because she gets free food.
--> '''Bai Yi (Conversation 3):''' Whitestone is able to survive in Syndicate till today because I've poured my blood, sweat, and tears into this company. You really can't count on those two kids, for heaven's sake... Why are you looking at me like this? Am I not speaking the truth?
* MsFanservice: A pretty woman with long hair in a ponytail, her outfit consists of an open jacket revealing a bikini top over her large breasts and her pants conforming to all of her legs ''real tight''.
* SnakeOilSalesman: She is very insistent about shilling Whitestone Industries' services and ads. [[spoiler:Whatever shady job she keeps secret from the Chief and K.K. doesn't seem to bring in money (assuming it's money or something else she can't use) if she still complains about not having enough.]]
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* TheAce: Cinnabar's biography states that she is excellent in physical skills, shooting, and anti-reconnaissance, and her intellect and physique make her better able to resist Mania erosion than most people.
** She is also renowned within her profession, being highly requested for protection and escort missions even after being detained in the MBCC.
* AmbiguouslyGay: Her interrogation dialogue is more intimate toward a Female Chief than a Male one. Notable differences include [[spoiler:wrapping her arm "tightly" around Fem!Chief after helping her up, being "flustered" at Fem!Chief's teasing, and hugging Fem!Chief during the scene where she is crying. Serpent Member A even lampshades it by referring to Fem!Chief as Cinnabar's ''good friend'' while simply calling Male!Chief a friend.]]
** She is also renowned within her profession, being highly requested for protection and escort missions even after being detained in the MBCC.
* AmbiguouslyGay: Her interrogation dialogue is more intimate toward a Female Chief than a Male one. Notable differences include [[spoiler:wrapping her arm "tightly" around Fem!Chief after helping her up, being "flustered" at Fem!Chief's teasing, and hugging Fem!Chief during the scene where she is crying. Serpent Member A even lampshades it by referring to Fem!Chief as Cinnabar's ''good friend'' while simply calling Male!Chief a friend.]]
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* TheAce: Cinnabar's biography states that she is excellent in physical skills, shooting, and anti-reconnaissance, and her intellect and physique make her better able to resist Mania erosion than most people. She is also renowned within her profession, being highly requested for protection and escort missions even after being detained in the MBCC.
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**She is also renowned within her profession, being highly requested for protection and escort missions even after being detained in the MBCC.
* AmbiguouslyGay:Her interrogation dialogue is more intimate toward a Female Chief than a Male one. Notable differences include [[spoiler:wrapping her arm "tightly" around Fem!Chief after helping her up, being "flustered" at Fem!Chief's teasing, and hugging Fem!Chief during the scene where she is crying. Serpent Member A even lampshades it by referring to Fem!Chief as Cinnabar's ''good friend'' while simply calling Male!Chief a friend.]]
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: While EMP is nowehere near as dangerous as she boasts of being and has nary a bad bone on her apart from her ego, she's still a [[PersonOfMassDestruction Sinner]] at the end of the day and shouldn't be underestimated. Her awakening led to a power shortage in the entirety of Syndicate, and she did that entirely on a accident.
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: While EMP is nowehere nowhere near as dangerous as she boasts of being and has nary a bad bone on her apart from her ego, she's still a [[PersonOfMassDestruction Sinner]] at the end of the day and shouldn't be underestimated. Her awakening led to a power shortage in the entirety of Syndicate, and she did that entirely on a accident.
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* LovableCoward: EMP isn't exactly ''happy'' about going out on missions, and is one of the Sinners that break in a panic the quickest when put in actual life-threatening situations, but she can hold to her weapons and fight for her allies if given the right encouragment such as The Chief staying by her side or [[spoiler:Labyrinth calling out on how her cowardice will put the entirety of Eastside in danger in the fight against Sosia in the Witching Hour.]]
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* LovableCoward: EMP isn't exactly ''happy'' about going out on missions, and is one of the Sinners that break in a panic the quickest when put in actual life-threatening situations, but she can hold to her weapons and fight for her allies if given the right encouragment encouragement such as The Chief staying by her side or [[spoiler:Labyrinth calling out on how her cowardice will put the entirety of Eastside in danger in the fight against Sosia in the Witching Hour.]]
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* {{Narcissist}}: ''Quite'' downplayed. EMP likes to boast of her capabilities at any given moment and even takes credit for a victory entirely on herself ("All Thanks to Invincible Me!"), but is show to be very emphatetic towards others and is able to admit and recognize her own errors, both traits alien to pure Narcissists. It's implied her egotistic attitude is a facade she puts on to [[BeneathTheMask look tougher than she really is due to past trauma in Syndicate]].
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: EMP has revealed her true name, [[spoiler: Emy Pan]], to The Chief, and indeed the lack of notes about it on her profile and the fact she was abandoned as a orphan while still young makes one wonder if she ever ''had'' one.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: EMP has revealed her true name, [[spoiler: Emy Pan]], to The Chief, and indeed the lack of notes about it on her profile and the fact she was abandoned as a orphan while still young makes one wonder if she ever ''had'' one.
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* {{Narcissist}}: ''Quite'' downplayed. EMP likes to boast of her capabilities at any given moment and even takes credit for a victory entirely on herself ("All Thanks to Invincible Me!"), but is show to be very emphatetic empathetic towards others and is able to admit and recognize her own errors, both traits alien to pure Narcissists. It's implied her egotistic attitude is a facade façade she puts on to [[BeneathTheMask look tougher than she really is due to past trauma in Syndicate]].
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: EMP has revealed her true name,[[spoiler: Emy [[spoiler:Emy Pan]], to The Chief, and indeed the lack of notes about it on her profile and the fact she was abandoned as a orphan while still young makes one wonder if she ever ''had'' one.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: EMP has revealed her true name,
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* WalkingTechbane: Her Sinner ability allows her to disrupt electronic equipments through artificial magnetic pulses - luckily, these are activated by hitting a target with her arrows, which means she's got her ability (mostly) under control.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Is recruited in an early chapter but fails to make any appearances past that.
** TheBusCameBack: She returns in the Night of Wonders event as one of the Sinners assigned to rescue the Chief in the art gallery.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Is recruited in an early chapter but fails to make any appearances past that.
** TheBusCameBack: She returns in the Night of Wonders event as one of the Sinners assigned to rescue the Chief in the art gallery.
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* WalkingTechbane: Her Sinner ability allows her to disrupt electronic equipments equipment through artificial magnetic pulses - luckily, these are only activated by hitting a target with her arrows, which means she's got her ability (mostly) under control.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Is recruited in an early chapter but fails to make any appearances pastthat.
** TheBusCameBack: She returnsthat. [[TheBusCameBack This lasts until she returns]] in the Night ''Night of Wonders Wonders'' event as one of the Sinners assigned to rescue the Chief in the art gallery.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Is recruited in an early chapter but fails to make any appearances past
** TheBusCameBack: She returns
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* Fangirl: Kelvin, who likes gourmet cuisine, deeply adores Cabernet for the latter's beauty, elegance, and impeccable knowledge of food.
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* Fangirl: {{Fangirl}}: Kelvin, who likes gourmet cuisine, deeply adores Cabernet for the latter's beauty, elegance, and impeccable knowledge of food. food.
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* {{Bifauxnen}}: [=McQueen=] has a *very* androgynous look going for her which might make many players be confused regarding her gender until she speaks up.
* CompulsiveLiar: Proudly admits to being one, though she (mostly) limits her lying habits to those she dislikes - with The Chief and others she enjoys being around she goes with half-truths and a flirty mannerism instead.
* DefectorFromDecadence: In spite of being a Eastsider she feels nothing but comtempt for the District's high-class culture, believing they are only care about presentation and renown no matter how shallow the art actually is instead of any actual artistic merit or expression.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: "Evil" is a bit strong of a word to use against [=McQueen=] who's at worst a TragicVillain and at best TheCynic regarding artistry, but she's left completed baffled at The Chief's beliefs that there's something worth salvaging in the Eastside art world [[spoiler: even after witnessing how shallow it's usual patrons are and believes [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids they are naive]] for insisting on trying to make her go "straight" again.]] She does come to [[spoiler:appreciate The Chief's efforts however, and as she quietly comments at the end of her interrogation, she ''does'' wish Jennie had met someone with genuine intentions back them...]]
* CompulsiveLiar: Proudly admits to being one, though she (mostly) limits her lying habits to those she dislikes - with The Chief and others she enjoys being around she goes with half-truths and a flirty mannerism instead.
* DefectorFromDecadence: In spite of being a Eastsider she feels nothing but comtempt for the District's high-class culture, believing they are only care about presentation and renown no matter how shallow the art actually is instead of any actual artistic merit or expression.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: "Evil" is a bit strong of a word to use against [=McQueen=] who's at worst a TragicVillain and at best TheCynic regarding artistry, but she's left completed baffled at The Chief's beliefs that there's something worth salvaging in the Eastside art world [[spoiler: even after witnessing how shallow it's usual patrons are and believes [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids they are naive]] for insisting on trying to make her go "straight" again.]] She does come to [[spoiler:appreciate The Chief's efforts however, and as she quietly comments at the end of her interrogation, she ''does'' wish Jennie had met someone with genuine intentions back them...]]
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* {{Bifauxnen}}: [=McQueen=] has a *very* ''very'' androgynous look going for her which might make many players be confused regarding her gender until she speaks up.
* CompulsiveLiar: Proudly admits to being one, though she (mostly) limits her lying habits to those shedislikes - with dislikes--with The Chief and others she enjoys being around she goes with half-truths and a flirty mannerism instead.
* DefectorFromDecadence: In spite of being a Eastsider she feels nothing butcomtempt contempt for the District's high-class culture, believing they are only care about presentation and renown no matter how shallow the art actually is instead of any actual artistic merit or expression.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: "Evil" is a bit strong of a word to use against [=McQueen=] who's at worst a TragicVillain and at best TheCynic regarding artistry, but she's left completed baffled at The Chief's beliefs that there's something worth salvaging in the Eastside art world [[spoiler: even after witnessing how shallow it's usual patrons are and believes [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids they arenaive]] naïve]] for insisting on trying to make her go "straight" again.]] She does come to [[spoiler:appreciate The Chief's efforts however, and as she quietly comments at the end of her interrogation, she ''does'' wish Jennie had met someone with genuine intentions back them...]]
* CompulsiveLiar: Proudly admits to being one, though she (mostly) limits her lying habits to those she
* DefectorFromDecadence: In spite of being a Eastsider she feels nothing but
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: "Evil" is a bit strong of a word to use against [=McQueen=] who's at worst a TragicVillain and at best TheCynic regarding artistry, but she's left completed baffled at The Chief's beliefs that there's something worth salvaging in the Eastside art world [[spoiler: even after witnessing how shallow it's usual patrons are and believes [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids they are
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* HiddenDepths: Twofold! Beneath the seemingly proud and unapologetic scamming operations lies a girl who's ''very'' bitter at the Eastside art world for it's pretentious and vain obessions [[spoiler:because she was a victim of it herself]], and beneath that also lies a [[spoiler:former artist who regrets the path she was choosen and wishes she didn't meet a person like (the former) [=McQueen=] when she was younger]].
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* HiddenDepths: Twofold! Beneath the seemingly proud and unapologetic scamming operations lies a girl who's ''very'' bitter at the Eastside art world for it's pretentious and vain obessions obsessions [[spoiler:because she was a victim of it herself]], and beneath that also lies a [[spoiler:former artist who regrets the path she was choosen chose and wishes she didn't meet a person like (the former) [=McQueen=] when she was younger]].
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* JadeColoredGlasses: [=McQueen=] [[spoiler:or rather, Jennie, was once a spirited young artist who failed to garner attention in Eastside due to the vain and shallow patrons and moguls caring more about the renown behind a work of art than any actual merit to it. After being pointed to the (old) [=McQueen=] as a potential promoter of her art, she was used as a means for her to acquire fame and fortune at her expense. After awakening as a Sinner due to realizing she was manipulated for a long time, she murdered the forger and assumed her place, now viewing tricking naive artists and vain art conosseurs as the "righteous" thing to do since she believes they can't be changed.]]
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* JadeColoredGlasses: [=McQueen=] [[spoiler:or rather, Jennie, was once a spirited young artist who failed to garner attention in Eastside due to the vain and shallow patrons and moguls caring more about the renown behind a work of art than any actual merit to it. After being pointed to the (old) [=McQueen=] as a potential promoter of her art, she was used as a means for her to acquire fame and fortune at her expense. After awakening as a Sinner due to realizing she was manipulated for a long time, she murdered the forger and assumed her place, now viewing tricking naive naïve artists and vain art conosseurs connoisseurs as the "righteous" thing to do since she believes they can't be changed.]]
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* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Her reaction to Lisa making it clear she wants a set distance between the two of them? Get close enough for a hug. She ''does'' make up an excuse of approaching enemies, but is very disappointed when Lisa immediately gets off from her as the fight ends.
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* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: NoSenseOfPersonalSpace:
** Her reaction to Lisa making it clear she wants a set distance between the two of them? Get close enough for a hug. She ''does'' make up an excuse of approaching enemies, but is very disappointed when Lisa immediately gets off from her as the fight ends.
** Her reaction to Lisa making it clear she wants a set distance between the two of them? Get close enough for a hug. She ''does'' make up an excuse of approaching enemies, but is very disappointed when Lisa immediately gets off from her as the fight ends.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Her cheery and playful attitude is contrasted by Lisa's completely disinterested and aloof attitude during the Night of Wonders event as they make a duo to fight against the hostile artwork (much to the latter's chagrim).
* SelfDuplication: A secondary application of her powers is creating a perfect replica of herself which can fight automously, as show by her Ultimate Skill.
* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler:Her old identity as Jennie is considered long gone by her, dying by the time she took on the former [=McQueen's=] place as a forger, even refering to her old name in the third person.]]
* SelfDuplication: A secondary application of her powers is creating a perfect replica of herself which can fight automously, as show by her Ultimate Skill.
* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler:Her old identity as Jennie is considered long gone by her, dying by the time she took on the former [=McQueen's=] place as a forger, even refering to her old name in the third person.]]
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* RedOniBlueOni: Her cheery and playful attitude is contrasted by Lisa's completely disinterested and aloof attitude during the Night of Wonders event as they make a duo to fight against the hostile artwork (much to the latter's chagrim).
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* SelfDuplication: A secondary application of her powers is creating a perfect replica of herself which can fightautomously, autonomously, as show by her Ultimate Skill.
* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler:Her old identity as Jennie is considered long gone by her, dying by the time she took on the former [=McQueen's=] place as a forger, evenrefering referring to her old name in the third person.]]
* SelfDuplication: A secondary application of her powers is creating a perfect replica of herself which can fight
* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler:Her old identity as Jennie is considered long gone by her, dying by the time she took on the former [=McQueen's=] place as a forger, even
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* VillainHasAPoint: [=McQueen=] calls the Eastside art world rotten to the core, where no-one cares for the art itself, but the names and brands attached to them, and uses this to [[spoiler:justify tricking young artists into selling out their careers to her as a art bidder and forger, saying she's "teaching them a lesson about artistry".]] While absolutely ruthless to the point where The Chief flat out [[WhatTheHellHero calls her out on this]], a latter interrogation scene shows she's completely right when it comes to the average art conosseur in Eastside, with their initial indifference over a painting growing into rupturous enthusiasm upon learning the painting comes from the famous artist Maureen.
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* VillainHasAPoint: [=McQueen=] calls the Eastside art world rotten to the core, where no-one cares for the art itself, but the names and brands attached to them, and uses this to [[spoiler:justify tricking young artists into selling out their careers to her as a art bidder and forger, saying she's "teaching them a lesson about artistry".]] While absolutely ruthless to the point where The Chief flat out [[WhatTheHellHero calls her out on this]], a latter interrogation later Interrogation scene shows she's completely right when it comes to the average art conosseur connoisseur in Eastside, with their initial indifference over a painting growing into rupturous rapturous enthusiasm upon learning the painting comes from the famous artist Maureen.
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* SheepinSheepsClothing: When setting up her interrogation, it makes it seem like her cooperative and friendly demeanor might only be a front for her real personality, especially being part of the TREACHERY Libram, but it's quickly revealed that no, Cinnabar is as heroic and kind as she seems, and her dedication to protecting everyone is genuine.
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* SheepinSheepsClothing: SheepInSheepsClothing: When setting up her interrogation, it makes it seem like her cooperative and friendly demeanor might only be a front for her real personality, especially being part of the TREACHERY Libram, but it's quickly revealed that no, Cinnabar is as heroic and kind as she seems, and her dedication to protecting everyone is genuine.
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* OneOfTheBoys: After her father passed away, was taken in by her "Serpent Eye" colleagues and is able to drink and fight with the best of them.
* SheepinSheepsClothing: When setting up her interrogation, it makes it seem like her cooperative and friendly demeanor might only be a front for her real personality, especially being part of the TREACHERY Libram, but it's quickly revealed that no, Cinnabar is as heroic and kind as she seems, and her dedication to protecting everyone is genuine.
* SheepinSheepsClothing: When setting up her interrogation, it makes it seem like her cooperative and friendly demeanor might only be a front for her real personality, especially being part of the TREACHERY Libram, but it's quickly revealed that no, Cinnabar is as heroic and kind as she seems, and her dedication to protecting everyone is genuine.
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* CrutchCharacter: Early on, EMP's range and ability to oneshot squishy mooks with her ultimate makes her valuable to use in maps. As you progress in the game and obtain more powerful sinners, her power starts to pale in comparison. That said, she is still usable in later stages.
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* CrutchCharacter: Early on, EMP's range and ability to oneshot squishy mooks with her ultimate makes her valuable to use in maps. As you progress in the game and obtain more powerful sinners, Sinners, her power starts to pale in comparison. That said, she is still usable in later stages.
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* ProperlyParanoid: She is high suspicious of others, urges the Chief to step up their interrogation game and questions other sinners herself off-screen. However, it is mentioned that other sinners actually approve of this behavior, implying that they agree with her assessment of the threat they present to themselves and their peers.
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* ProperlyParanoid: She is high suspicious of others, urges the Chief to step up their interrogation game and questions other sinners Sinners herself off-screen. However, it is mentioned that other sinners Sinners actually approve of this behavior, implying that they agree with her assessment of the threat they present to themselves and their peers.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Kelvin is part of the Chief's investigation at the Insatiable Fiesta Event due to her expertise in gourmet cuisine.
* Fangirl: Kelvin, who likes gourmet cuisine, deeply adores Cabernet for the latter's beauty, elegance, and impeccable knowledge of food.
* AnIcePerson: Kelvin's nature as a Sinner is this. This means that she can KillItWithIce.
* ObsessedWithFood: Considering Kelvin's interest in gourmet cuisine, is it surprising that she is obsessed with food? Due to her Sinner condition, however, she can only taste food that has a temperature close to liquid nitrogen.
* TheQuietOne: Due to Kelvin's shy personality, she rarely voices her opinion. This is best shown when she sneaks into the kitchen late at night to get extra meals rather than tell the MBCC logistics department that her needs are still not met.
* Fangirl: Kelvin, who likes gourmet cuisine, deeply adores Cabernet for the latter's beauty, elegance, and impeccable knowledge of food.
* AnIcePerson: Kelvin's nature as a Sinner is this. This means that she can KillItWithIce.
* ObsessedWithFood: Considering Kelvin's interest in gourmet cuisine, is it surprising that she is obsessed with food? Due to her Sinner condition, however, she can only taste food that has a temperature close to liquid nitrogen.
* TheQuietOne: Due to Kelvin's shy personality, she rarely voices her opinion. This is best shown when she sneaks into the kitchen late at night to get extra meals rather than tell the MBCC logistics department that her needs are still not met.
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* VillainHasAPoint: [=McQueen=] calls the Eastside art world rotten to the core, where no-one cares for the art itself, but the names and brands attached to them, and uses this to [[spoiler:justify tricking young artists into selling out their carrers to her as a art bidder and forger, saying she's "teaching them a lesson about artistry".]] While absolutely ruthless to the point where The Chief flat out [[WhatTheHellHero calls her out on this]], a latter interrogation scene shows she's completely right when it comes to the average art conosseur in Eastside, with their initial indifference over a painting growing into rupturous enthusiasm upon learning the painting comes from the famous artist Maureen.
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* VillainHasAPoint: [=McQueen=] calls the Eastside art world rotten to the core, where no-one cares for the art itself, but the names and brands attached to them, and uses this to [[spoiler:justify tricking young artists into selling out their carrers careers to her as a art bidder and forger, saying she's "teaching them a lesson about artistry".]] While absolutely ruthless to the point where The Chief flat out [[WhatTheHellHero calls her out on this]], a latter interrogation scene shows she's completely right when it comes to the average art conosseur in Eastside, with their initial indifference over a painting growing into rupturous enthusiasm upon learning the painting comes from the famous artist Maureen.
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* AnimalMotif: Spiders.
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''Playable Sinners'': [[Characters/PathToNowhereViolence VIOLENCE]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereLove LOVE]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereGreed GREED]] | '''TREACHERY''' | [[Characters/PathToNowhereLimbo LIMBO]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereAnger ANGER]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereHeresy HERESY]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereSloth SLOTH]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereFraud FRAUD]] -]]]]]
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''Playable Sinners'': [[Characters/PathToNowhereViolence VIOLENCE]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereLove LOVE]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereGreed GREED]] | '''TREACHERY''' | [[Characters/PathToNowhereLimbo LIMBO]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereAnger ANGER]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereHeresy HERESY]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereSloth SLOTH]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereFraud FRAUD]] -]]]]]
| [[Characters/PathToNowhereImmortal IMMORTAL]]-]]]]]
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->'''Voiced by:''' Creator/ZhouShuai (CN), Creator/OharaSayaka (JP), Creator/{{Kang Shi-hyun}} (KR)
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->'''Voiced by:''' Creator/ZhangQi (CN), Creator/KondouReina (JP)
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[[Characters/PathToNowhereMinosBureauOfCrisisControl Minos Bureau of Crisis Control]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereDisCity The [=DisCity=]]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereOutlands The Outlands]]\\
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[[Characters/PathToNowhereMinosBureauOfCrisisControl Minos Bureau of Crisis Control]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereDisCity The [=DisCity=]]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereOutlands The Outlands]]\\Outlands]] | [[Characters/PathToNowhereOthers Others]]\\
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* TheFakeCutie: Oliver acts like they are ignorant of their actions and powers - even feigning ignorance and accusing the MBCC of "ganging up on a little kid" in their profile. As the same profile shows, however, they are a pathological liar that fakes stories of abuse and injuries to swindle wealthy women and give out fake badges of ''The Homeless''.
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* TheFakeCutie: Oliver acts like they are ignorant of their actions and powers - even feigning ignorance and accusing the MBCC of "ganging up on a little kid" in their profile.if they are arrested. As the same profile shows, however, they are a pathological liar that fakes stories of abuse and injuries to swindle wealthy women and give out fake badges of ''The Homeless''.
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* TheFakeCutie: Oliver acts like they are ignorant of their actions and powers - even feigning ignorance and accusing the MBCC of "ganging up on a little kid" in their profile. As the same profile shows, however, they are a pathological liar that fakes stories of abuse and injuries to swindle wealthy women and give out fake badges of ''The Homeless''.
