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* BetterWithNonHumanCompany: Verona's alienation from humanity leads her to sympathize with and adore Others, and she can quickly and easily form connections with them. This is clearest with her bond with Tashlit, a mass of eyeballs wearing ill-fitting human flesh who is incapable of speech, who she nevertheless near-instantly befriends on their first meeting.


* DisappearedDad: He died when she was young. Paul, the closest thing she had to a stepdad, abandoned them years later. Lucy's got some issues, suffice to say.

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* DisappearedDad: He Her father died when she was young. Paul, the closest thing she had to a stepdad, abandoned them years later. Lucy's got some issues, suffice to say.



* {{Teleportation}}: After going through the Forest Ribbon Trail, Miss gives her a rope that lets her teleport over short distances as long as she's out of everyone's sight, with the rope's texture changing to inform her of whether or not she's being watched.
* ThreePointLanding: Avery lands on her feet and one hand after completing the Stuck-In Place Path, giving her the ability to safely fall from any height and ejecting her miles over Kennet.

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* {{Teleportation}}: TeleportationWithDrawbacks: After going through the Forest Ribbon Trail, Miss gives her a rope that lets her teleport over short distances as long as she's out of everyone's sight, with the rope's texture changing to inform her of whether or not she's being watched.
* ThreePointLanding: Avery lands on her feet and one hand after completing the Stuck-In Place Path, giving her the ability to [[FeatherFall safely fall from any height height]] and ejecting her miles over Kennet.



* HumanlikeAnimalAging: She's still aging like a normal opposum and isn't expected to live more than three years. Even in the first few weeks she's around she visibly ages, getting closer to being a young teenager like the trio. One of the benefits of the familiar bond is a concomitant lifespan to Avery, her partner, so she'll live as long as Avery does. Her aging slows down to the rate of a human's after the bond is established.

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* HumanlikeAnimalAging: She's still aging like a normal opposum opossum and isn't expected to live more than three years. Even in the first few weeks she's around she visibly ages, getting closer to being a young teenager like the trio. One of the benefits of the familiar bond is a concomitant lifespan to Avery, her partner, so she'll live as long as Avery does. Her aging slows down to the rate of a human's after the bond is established.



* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She across as this before the reveal that she can ONLY speak in lies.

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* %%zce* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She across as this before the reveal that she can ONLY ''only'' speak in lies.



* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: He's basically the opposite of what people expect a Pactverse Goblin to be - civilized, intelligent, subtle, and focused on long-term plans.

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* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: He's basically the opposite of what people expect a Pactverse an ''Otherverse'' Goblin to be - civilized, intelligent, subtle, and focused on long-term plans.



* WingedHumanoid: She appears as a woman with long, flowing moth-like wings that she drapes over herself to remain revealing but decent. [[spoiler:She loses her wings after the Carmine Contest, though in Wild Abandon 17.1 she implies that she regained them some how after becoming a PhysicalGod.]]

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* WingedHumanoid: She appears as a woman with long, flowing moth-like wings that she drapes over herself to remain revealing but decent. [[spoiler:She loses her wings after the Carmine Contest, though in Wild Abandon 17.1 she implies that she regained them some how somehow after becoming a PhysicalGod.]]



* TheResenter: A lot of Charles' motivations are rooted in a deep-seated resentment for how his life has gone, from being considered not good enough to directly assist in binding the Blue Heron god and being a nobody living in a dying ski town while Alexander and the others became regional if not global names, to getting foresworn and having to live off other's mercy while the likes of Alexander, Bristow, and Musser became yet more powerful.

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* TheResenter: A lot of Charles' motivations are rooted in a deep-seated resentment for how his life has gone, from being considered not good enough to directly assist in binding the Blue Heron god and being a nobody living in a dying ski town while Alexander and the others became regional if not global names, to getting foresworn and having to live off of other's mercy while the likes of Alexander, Bristow, and Musser became yet more powerful.

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* BigBad: It's revealed in Shaking Hands 9.9 that Edith is part of the conspiracy behind the Carmine Beast's murder. Later interludes reveal that she initially helped Charles because he'd helped her in the past, but got more involved because of the potential benefits.]]



* EvilAllAlong: [[spoiler:It's revealed in Shaking Hands 9.9 that Edith is part of the conspiracy behind the Carmine Beast's murder. Later interludes reveal that she initially helped Charles because he'd helped her in the past, but got more involved because of the potential benefits.]]



* BigBadFriend: [[spoiler:Maricica was her best friend, which causes her significant pain after it becomes clear how thoroughly the faerie betrayed Kennet.]]



* BigBad: [[spoiler:One After Another 10.z reveals that Maricica's one of the people behind the Carmine Beast's murder, and Dash to Pieces 11.z further reveals that she's not just a conspirator but the mastermind.]]

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* BigBad: [[spoiler:One After Another 10.z reveals that Maricica's BigBadDuumvirate: [[spoiler:Maricica is one of the people culprits behind the Carmine Beast's murder, murder and Dash inarguably the most trusted accomplice to Pieces 11.z further reveals that Charles. Due to being Forsworn, the only way he could have become the Carmine is by having Maricica pick up the reins of the plot, and she's not just a conspirator but happy to serve his grand vision if it means accomplishing her own goals. Once Charles becomes the mastermind.Carmine, he raises her into an Abyssal Blood Goddess, with Maricica continuing to happily serve as his most powerful and longest-lasting ally.]]



* DragonInChief: [[spoiler:Charles is the true mastermind behind the conspiracy against the Carmine, but his Forsworn nature means he's practically incapable of accomplishing anything for the first half of the series. Maricica is therefore the greatest threat until the battle for the Carmine Throne is resolved, usurping the conspiracy for her own ends until Charles becomes the Carmine Exile. Even then, her scheming proves to be the backbone for many of his plots.]]



* BigBad:
** [[spoiler:Charles was the original mastermind of the Carmine Conspiracy before Maricica took over. He and Edith originally created the Hungry Choir to trap Alexander, but turned it onto the Carmine Beast after she interfered with its creation.]]
** [[spoiler:After becoming the Carmine Exile, he spends a few arcs as a GreaterScopeVillain, but becomes the main threat again in Arc 20, when he declares war on the Kenneteers after they sell out Maricica's weakness to the Winter Court.]]
* BigBadDuumvirate: [[spoiler:He and the Aurum serve as the last major antagonists of ''Pale'' after Charles offers control of the Crucible in order for the Aurum to not have to worry about getting unmade by a future challenger]].

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* BigBad:
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BigBad: [[spoiler:Charles was the original mastermind of the Carmine Conspiracy before Maricica took over. He and Edith originally created the Hungry Choir to trap Alexander, but turned it onto on the Carmine Beast after she interfered with its creation.creation. Once he becomes the Carmine Exile, Charles begins his own quest to destroy the corruption of practitioner society, but his ruthless methods make him a far worse threat than anyone else.]]
* BigBadDuumvirate: Charles forms several alliances with other villains throughout the story, though his goals always remain dominant:
** [[spoiler:After becoming [[spoiler:Maricica is his most trusted accomplice, masterminding his rise to the Carmine Exile, he spends a few arcs as a GreaterScopeVillain, but becomes Throne throughout the main threat again in Arc 20, when he declares war on first half of the Kenneteers after they sell out Maricica's weakness to series. He repays the Winter Court.favor in kind by helping her become a blood goddess, with the two continuing to work together to advance Charles' goals.]]
* BigBadDuumvirate: ** [[spoiler:He and the Aurum serve as the last major antagonists of ''Pale'' after Charles offers the Aurum control of the Crucible in order for Crucible, allowing the Aurum to not have to worry about getting unmade by a future challenger]].
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* MinionMaster: His specialty is being able to reach into the Warrens from random places and bullying minor goblins sent against him into switching sides.

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* MinionMaster: TheMinionMaster: His specialty is being able to reach into the Warrens from random places and bullying minor goblins sent against him into switching sides.
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* AmplifiedAnimalAptitude: Justified as Snowdrop is a magical creature and retains her human level intelligence in animal form.
* CombatPragmatist: While fighting brownies she remembers the first rule Toadswallow taught her about goblin fighting, which is [[GroinAttack to go first for anything that jiggles]], and she's taken to using a goblin-tainted fork [[spoiler:(Actually a transformed Cherrypop)]] as a weapon. Nicolette implies that hanging around the goblins so often has made her nature somewhat goblin as well, which makes the fairy-adjacent brownies particularly thrown off by her.

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* AmplifiedAnimalAptitude: Justified Justified, as Snowdrop is a magical creature and retains her human level human-level intelligence in animal form.
* CombatPragmatist: While fighting brownies she remembers the first rule Toadswallow taught her about goblin fighting, which is [[GroinAttack to go first for anything that jiggles]], and she's taken to using a goblin-tainted fork [[spoiler:(Actually [[spoiler:(actually a transformed Cherrypop)]] as a weapon. Nicolette implies that hanging around the goblins so often has made her nature somewhat goblin as well, which makes the fairy-adjacent brownies particularly thrown off by her.



* {{Familiar}}: In [[https://palewebserial.wordpress.com/2021/03/27 One After Another 10.1]], she and Avery do the ritual to make Snowdrop Avery's official familiar.
* FunTShirt: Always wears one, usually pertaining to opossum memes, which changes whenever she changes form, though Interlude 4.x reveals she can keep the logos between transformations if she concentrates enough.
* FurryReminder: Will do things like hang upside down or crouch on all fours while in human form, then there's her eating habits and opinions on trash and things like birds. While fighting she'll even hiss as opossums often do to intimidate predators.
* HumanlikeAnimalAging: She's still aging like a normal opposum and isn't expected to live more than three years. Even in the few weeks she's around she's visably aging getting closer to being a young teenager like the trio. [[spoiler:One of the benefits of her familiar ship is a concomitant lifespan to Avery, her partner, now she'll live as long as she does.]]
* InstantExpert: Being made Avery's boon companion gave her a 'download' of everything she needed to be a good companion to Avery, which included things like speaking and some of Avery's knowledge about playing soccer.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Comes across as this before the reveal that she can ONLY speak in lies.

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* {{Familiar}}: In [[https://palewebserial.wordpress.com/2021/03/27 One After Another 10.1]], she and Avery do perform the ritual to make Snowdrop Avery's official familiar.
* FunTShirt: Always Snowdrop always wears one, usually pertaining to opossum memes, which changes whenever she changes form, though Interlude 4.x reveals she can keep the logos between transformations if she concentrates enough.
* FurryReminder: Will Snowdrop will do things like hang upside down or crouch on all fours while in human form, then there's form. Then there're her eating habits and opinions on trash and things like birds. While fighting she'll even hiss as opossums often do to intimidate predators. \n She's noted as being able to "scamper" even while in human form.
* HumanlikeAnimalAging: She's still aging like a normal opposum and isn't expected to live more than three years. Even in the first few weeks she's around she's visably aging she visibly ages, getting closer to being a young teenager like the trio. [[spoiler:One One of the benefits of her the familiar ship bond is a concomitant lifespan to Avery, her partner, now so she'll live as long as she does.]]
Avery does. Her aging slows down to the rate of a human's after the bond is established.
* InstantExpert: Being made Avery's boon companion gave her a 'download' of everything she needed to know to be a good companion to Avery, which included things like speaking and some of Avery's knowledge about playing soccer.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Comes She across as this before the reveal that she can ONLY speak in lies.



* OutsideContextProblem: Boon Companions all have some kind of trait depending on what kind of animal they started out as. Snowdrop was an opossum, which are known for deceiving people by playing dead, so her trait is that everything she says is the opposite of what she means. Practitioners are used to Others who can't lie, so an Other who can ''only'' lie- and there's no way of telling this without talking to her for some time- tends to blindside people.
* ParentalNeglect: Was abandoned by her mother and was barely surviving right up until Verona found her for the Forest Ribbon Trail ritual.

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* OutsideContextProblem: Boon Companions companions all have some kind of trait depending on what kind of animal they started out as. Snowdrop was an opossum, which are known for deceiving people by playing dead, so her trait is that everything she says is the opposite of what she means. Practitioners are used to Others who can't lie, so an Other who can ''only'' lie- and there's no way of telling this without talking to her for some time- tends to blindside people.
* ParentalNeglect: Was Snowdrop was abandoned by her mother and was barely surviving right up until when Verona found her for the Forest Ribbon Trail ritual.



* PlayingPossum: As any self-respecting humanized opossum would be. A human child suddenly keeling over, with or without screaming, is very alarming and the Kennet Trio knows how to take advantage of the confusion.
* SuperSenses: While her eyesight is normally as poor as any other opossum, as a result of the Paths turning her into a boon companion, it's particularly keen when it comes to finding hidden things, allowing her to perceive entrances that others can't see such as Warren holes, or the paths the brownies use to get around the Blue Heron Institute. It's implied that this is probably how Snowdrop can perceive Miss fully while others can't.

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* PlayingPossum: As any self-respecting humanized opossum would be. She does this, not always intentionally. A human child suddenly keeling over, with or without screaming, is very alarming and the Kennet Trio knows trio know how to take advantage of the confusion.
* SuperSenses: While Though her eyesight is normally as poor as any other opossum, opossum's, as a result of the Paths turning her into a boon companion, companion it's particularly keen when it comes to finding hidden things, allowing her to perceive entrances that others can't see such as Warren holes, or the paths the brownies use to get around the Blue Heron Institute. It's implied that this is probably how Snowdrop can perceive Miss fully while whereas others can't.



* DifferentlyDressedDuplicates: Once she and Verona start coexisting, Julette's slight difference in clothing serves as a tell for which is the original.

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* DifferentlyDressedDuplicates: Once she and Verona start coexisting, Julette's slight difference in clothing serves as a tell for which is the original. She's shown to have different taste in clothes than Verona's when they argue over whether given articles are "trash clothes" suitable for wearing in an environment likely to ruin them. Sometimes she and Verona wear the same clothes with inverted patterns of black and white.
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* BreakingTheFellowship: Downplayed. While they don't outright break up, the aftermath of the battle for the Carmine Throne puts a major strain on their relationship, with Avery moving to Thunder Bay, and Lucy and Verona becoming more distant from one another as the latter delves more into the new underbelly of the town. This is further [[PaintingTheMedium signified]] by the chapter headers showing the trio by themselves rather than together as they were previously.
* BroughtDownToBadass: In the latter portion of Finish Off the trio gets effectively gainsaid, but still manage to get the upper hand without being able to call upon their magic.

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* BreakingTheFellowship: Downplayed. While Though they don't outright break up, the aftermath of the battle for the Carmine Throne puts a major strain on their relationship, with Avery moving to Thunder Bay, and Lucy and Verona becoming more distant from one another as the latter delves more into the new underbelly of the town. This is further [[PaintingTheMedium signified]] by the chapter headers showing the trio by themselves rather than together as they were previously.
* BroughtDownToBadass: In the latter portion of Finish Off the trio gets get effectively gainsaid, but still manage to get the upper hand without being able to call upon their magic.



* FighterMageThief: While they're all practitioners and by extension have elements of the Mage, they each fall into one archetype more than the others:

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* FighterMageThief: While Though they're all practitioners and by extension have elements of the Mage, they each fall into one archetype more than the others:



* FromNobodyToNightmare: At the beginning of the story the trio are three novice practitioners in a podunk town that don't come from any notable families and only have an edge thanks to the power given by the Kennet Others, but by the end of the story they've become big regional players that the likes of the Mussers, Hennigars, the Finder corporation Wonderkand, and the Carmine Exile are forced to take seriously as threats.

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* FromNobodyToNightmare: At the beginning of the story the trio are three novice practitioners in a podunk town that who don't come from any notable families and only have an edge thanks to the power given by the Kennet Others, but by the end of the story they've become big regional players that the likes of the Mussers, the Hennigars, the Finder corporation Wonderkand, and the Carmine Exile are forced to take seriously as threats.



* MoralityChain: Verona mentions to Charles that she feels that were it not for Lucy and Avery, there's a big chance that if she'd awakened in a more usual way and grew up within regular practitioner culture, she'd end up being just as conniving a person as Alexander and see nothing wrong with binding and enslaving Others.

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* MoralityChain: Verona mentions to Charles that she feels that were it not for Lucy and Avery, there's a big chance that if she'd awakened in a more usual way and grew grown up within regular practitioner culture, she'd end up being just as conniving a person as Alexander and see nothing wrong with binding and enslaving Others.



* AuraVision: Her Sight is keyed to violence, with swords representing wounds and daggers representing a person's association with violence. The more daggers, the more associated with violence they are.

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* AuraVision: Her Sight is keyed to violence, with swords representing wounds and wounds, daggers representing a person's association with violence.violence, and watercolor staining representing negative emotions. The more daggers, the more associated with violence they are.



* CurbStompCushion: Lucy is almost completely outclassed in her duel with Anthem, but she does give a good enough showing that he admits he's impressed and that America could learn from her.

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* CurbStompCushion: Lucy is almost completely outclassed in her duel with Anthem, but she does give gives a good enough showing that he admits he's impressed and that America could learn from her.



* DuelBoss: She can invoke this by using her duelist circle, as it'll trap her opponent until either she or them is defeated.

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* DuelBoss: She can invoke this by using her duelist circle, as it'll trap her opponent until either she or them is they are defeated.



* KidDetective: While all three of the protagonists are acting as this while investigating the Carmine Beast's disappearance, Lucy seems to be the most eager of the three to act as a detective.

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* KidDetective: While Although all three of the protagonists are acting as this while investigating the Carmine Beast's disappearance, Lucy seems to be the most eager of the three to act as a detective.



* MageMarksman: Miss gives her a magic ring that can turn harmless objects into weapons. She often uses it on soda cans, turning them into handguns.
* MagicalAccessory: Is the first of the Trio to acquire an Implement, an earring made with the help of Verona and Avery that has the effect of allowing her to sharpen her hearing and listen in on conversations.

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* MageMarksman: Miss gives her a magic ring that can turn harmless objects into weapons. She often occasionally uses it on soda cans, turning them into handguns.
* MagicalAccessory: Is Lucy is the first of the Trio trio to acquire an Implement, an earring made with the help of Verona and Avery that has the effect of allowing her to sharpen her hearing and listen in on conversations.



* RedEyesTakeWarning: Invoked, her fox mask is enchanted to have red eyes in order to make her seem more intimidating.

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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Invoked, her Invoked. Lucy's fox mask is enchanted to have red eyes in order to make her seem more intimidating.



* YinYangBomb: Following the Battle for the Carmine Throne, she's been mixing together both fae and goblin magic when she fights.
* YouAreNotAlone: Acknowledges this during the Implement ritual-as much it affirms for her the various awful things that people say about her (and a great deal of the casual racism she's struggled with suspecting but never being able to confirm) it also provides her insight into the good aspects of her life, and she reaffirms that she loves her friends and family and they love her back.

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* YinYangBomb: Following the Battle for the Carmine Throne, she's been she starts mixing together both fae and goblin magic when she fights.
* YouAreNotAlone: Acknowledges this during the Implement ritual-as ritual--as much it affirms for her the various awful things that people say about her (and a great deal of the casual racism she's struggled with suspecting but never being able to confirm) it also provides her insight into the good aspects of her life, and she reaffirms that she loves her friends and family and they love her back.



* DimensionalTraveler: As a Path Runner Avery Practice deals with traveling the Paths and gaining their boons, and by the time of the final epilogue three years later, she's started traveling to Realms on the regular.

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* DimensionalTraveler: As a Path Runner Avery Practice Avery's practice deals with traveling the Paths and gaining their boons, and by the time of the final epilogue three years later, she's started traveling to Realms on the regular.



* {{Gayngst}}: Avery's a lesbian and is fine with her sexuality, but she hasn't come out to her family and is also (as far as she knows) the only queer girl in her age group in Kennet, which doesn't help. It gets worse when Maricica flat out tells her that while there's three other queer girls in Kennet, one has already found true love and neither of the other two would be a good match for her.

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* {{Gayngst}}: Avery's a lesbian and is fine with her sexuality, but she hasn't come out to her family and is also (as far as she knows) the only queer girl in her age group in Kennet, which doesn't help. It gets worse when Maricica flat out tells her that while there's although there're three other queer girls in Kennet, one has already found true love and neither of the other two would be a good match for her.



* HasAType: Has a noticeable preference for full-figured women.

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* HasAType: Has She has a noticeable preference for full-figured women.



* LesbianJock: Avery is gay and happens to play hockey, with her main melee weapons being hockey sticks enchanted to hit extra hard.

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* LesbianJock: Avery is gay and happens to play hockey, hockey and soccer, with her main melee weapons being hockey and lacrosse sticks enchanted to hit extra hard.



* {{Teleportation}}: After going through the Forest Ribbon Trail, Miss gives her a rope that lets her teleport over short distances as long as she's being unobserved, with the rope's texture changing to inform her of whether or not she's being watched.
* ThreePointLanding: Lands on her feet and one hand after completing the Stuck-In Place Path, giving her the ability to safely fall from any height and ejecting her miles over Kennet.
* TrickedOutShoes: Has enchanted a pair of shoes with runes to make her jump farther while wearing them.

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* {{Teleportation}}: After going through the Forest Ribbon Trail, Miss gives her a rope that lets her teleport over short distances as long as she's being unobserved, out of everyone's sight, with the rope's texture changing to inform her of whether or not she's being watched.
* ThreePointLanding: Lands Avery lands on her feet and one hand after completing the Stuck-In Place Path, giving her the ability to safely fall from any height and ejecting her miles over Kennet.
* TrickedOutShoes: Has enchanted Avery wears a pair of shoes she enchanted with runes to make her jump farther while wearing them.



* BeingHumanSucks: She does ''not'' like her life as a human, and constantly considers turning into an Other or otherwise forsaking her humanity to escape it.
* CallingTheOldManOut: She finally loses her shit with her father in Out On A Limb 3.1.

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* BeingHumanSucks: She does ''not'' like her life as a human, and constantly initially considers turning into an Other or otherwise forsaking her humanity to escape it.
* CallingTheOldManOut: She finally loses her shit with her father in Out On A Limb 3.1. She calls him out a couple more times throughout the story, though less explosively.



* DualityMotif: Starts getting into Halflight practices, which blur the line between human and Other.

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* DualityMotif: Starts Verona starts getting into Halflight practices, which blur the line between human and Other.



* HeterosexualLifePartners: With [[spoiler:[=McCauleigh=] in the epilogue, who lives in Verona's demesne full-time after Verona secures her freedom from her family and calls Verona her "lifemate."]]

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* HeterosexualLifePartners: With [[spoiler:[=McCauleigh=] in the epilogue, who lives in Verona's demesne full-time after Verona secures her freedom from her family and who calls Verona her "lifemate."]]



** We know from her POV narration that she was scared when John held a knife to her face, but Lucy's subsequent chapter makes it clear that she didn't show it.

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** We know from her POV narration that she was she's scared when John held holds a knife to her face, but Lucy's subsequent chapter makes it clear that she didn't doesn't show it.



* TheSmartGuy: Out of the Trio, she's the most interested in studying and learning practice. Which isn't to say the others aren't, she's just ''that'' much more into it, and at one point she says she might be the student at BHI who most wants to learn.
* StatuesqueStunner: By the final epilogue Verona is revealed to have taken after her father in terms of height, being almost a head taller than her mother, and is now the tallest of the trio. She's also got a few admirers.

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* TheSmartGuy: Out of the Trio, she's the most interested in studying and learning practice. Which practice--which isn't to say the others aren't, aren't; she's just ''that'' much more into it, and at one point she says she might be the student at BHI who most wants to learn.
* StatuesqueStunner: By the final epilogue Verona is revealed stated to have taken after her father in terms of height, being almost height enough to be a head few inches taller than her mother, and is now the tallest of the trio. She's also got a few admirers.



* TheUnfavorite: Verona mentions feeling left out that compared to Miss and Avery and John ([[spoiler:plus his Dog Pack]]) and Lucy, none of the other Kennet Others have taken a special shine to her.

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* TheUnfavorite: Verona mentions feeling left out that compared to Miss and Avery Avery, and John ([[spoiler:plus his Dog Pack]]) and Lucy, none of the other Kennet Others have taken a special shine to her.
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* EvilIsPetty: [[spoiler:Chooses to interfere with Miss because she's pissed that Miss has control over a third of Kennet even though she controls just about everything else, and is even willing to conspire with Musser-aligned practitioners to have Copycat Cassandra bound and her Aware friend critically injured if not killed to facilitate that.]]

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* EvilIsPetty: [[spoiler:Chooses to interfere with Miss because she's pissed that Miss has full control over a third of Kennet even though she controls just about everything else, and is even willing to conspire with Musser-aligned practitioners to have Copycat Cassandra bound and her Aware friend critically injured if not killed to facilitate that.]]
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* WildCard: Exploited. [[spoiler:Crooked Rook defects to the Carmine Faction late in the serial, and when asked gives a cogent explanation for her defection that aligns with her philosophy, but the tools and deeds she left behind for Kennet are crucial in their victory and the counsel she provides the Carmine faction has little effect. The Kennet loyalists are uncertain if she has exploited her pattern of defeats to aid them by aligning with Charles so that he would lose or simply followed her moral code, and three years later she is on respectful terms with Verona and still considers Miss a dear friend.]]
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Nibble looks like a man in his 20's, but may be much older, though he can't specify outside of naming TV shows.

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* OlderThanTheyLook: Nibble looks like a man in his 20's, but may be much older, though he can't specify outside of naming TV shows.shows because he's long forgotten.



* FedToPigs: It's implied the conspirators have been using her as an unwitting garbage disposal for the corpses of those they've killed, as the arm of [[spoiler:the woman with the clockwork heart that Edith kills]] is seen in her and Nibble's fridge later on.

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* FedToPigs: It's implied the conspirators have been using her as an unwitting garbage disposal for the corpses of those they've killed, as the arm of [[spoiler:the woman with the clockwork heart that Edith kills]] is seen in her and Nibble's fridge later on.on (Though Verona has no idea who it originally belonged to).



* IJustWantToBeNormal: She doesn't seem to mind being a ghoul that much, but she clings to remnants of 'normality'- listening to pop music, cleaning the abandoned factory she and Nibble live in so it's an actual home, taking showers with soap and conditioner.

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* IJustWantToBeNormal: She doesn't seem to mind being a ghoul that much, but she clings to remnants of 'normality'- listening to pop music, cleaning the abandoned factory she and Nibble live in so it's an actual home, taking showers with soap and conditioner.conditioner, etc.
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* TheGift: Out of the three, Verona takes the quickest to magic in general and quickly intuits its uses, being the best at general magic within the tri0o. It's for this reason that she's started to become a Sorcerer.

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* TheGift: Out of the three, Verona takes the quickest to magic in general and quickly intuits its uses, being the best at general magic within the tri0o.trio. It's for this reason that she's started to become a Sorcerer.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: With [[spoiler: [=McCauleigh=] in the epilogue, who lives in Verona's demesne full-time after Verona secures her freedom from her family and calls Verona her "lifemate."]]

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* HeterosexualLifePartners: With [[spoiler: [=McCauleigh=] [[spoiler:[=McCauleigh=] in the epilogue, who lives in Verona's demesne full-time after Verona secures her freedom from her family and calls Verona her "lifemate."]]
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: With [[spoiler: [=McCauleigh=] in the epilogue, who lives in Verona's demesne full-time after Verona secures her freedom from her family and calls Verona her "lifemate."]]
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* ScarsAreForever: Verona suffers a serious injury from [[spoiler:Guilherme's glamour glass in Summer Break]], and her left hand is permanently damaged as a result, with her suffering chronic pain and hand cramps even in the epilogue. She refers to it as her "claw."

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For Want Of A Nail is now a disambiguation page.


* AlternateSelf: In a simulated alternate reality where Avery never met Lucy and Verona or awakened with them, she becomes a Ruins practitioner.



* ForWantOfANail: In a simulated alternate reality where Avery never met Lucy and Verona or awakened with them, she becomes a Ruins practitioner.
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Who the fuck thought that was an acceptable way to phrase that? Non-romantic relationships are fine, too. Asshole.


* IncompatibleOrientation: With Jeremy. Verona's heterosexual aromantic, and Jeremy wants an actual relationship with her, which she isn't willing to try.

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* IncompatibleOrientation: With Jeremy. Verona's heterosexual aromantic, and Jeremy wants an actual a romantic relationship with her, which she isn't willing to try.
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* BecameTheirOwnAntithesis: [[spoiler:In the end, Charles ends up becoming the exact sort of practitioner he claims to despise, as his last conscious act is trying to foreswear the Trio, only for the hypocrisy in doing so to cause his Self to be subsumed by his Role]].

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* BecameTheirOwnAntithesis: [[spoiler:In the end, Charles ends up becoming the exact sort of practitioner he claims to despise, as his last conscious act is trying to foreswear the Trio, only for the hypocrisy in doing so to cause his Self to be subsumed by his Role]].Role because of the hypocrisy in doing so]].



** And at the ''very'' end of the story, [[spoiler:his hypocracy proves to be his undoing. He became the Carmine, and defined his relationship to the role, entirely around ending the injustice of foreswearing; when he tries to foreswear the girls unjustly, it does so much damage to his self that he's left as an EmptyShell, completely subsumed by his role.]]

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** And at the ''very'' end of the story, [[spoiler:his hypocracy hypocrisy proves to be his undoing. He became the Carmine, and defined his relationship to the role, entirely around ending the injustice of foreswearing; when he tries to foreswear the girls unjustly, it does so much damage to his self Self that he's left as an EmptyShell, completely subsumed by his role.]]

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* {{Hypocrite}}: Early in the story, he's appalled by the new practitioners of Kennet being young teenagers and makes it clear that he doesn't want kids to get hurt. Later in the story, [[spoiler:he has no problem with his side recruiting kids to be child soldiers, or all the damage they take as a result.]]

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* {{Hypocrite}}: {{Hypocrite}}:
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Early in the story, he's appalled by the new practitioners of Kennet being young teenagers and makes it clear that he doesn't want kids to get hurt. Later in the story, [[spoiler:he has no problem with his side recruiting kids to be child soldiers, or all the damage they take as a result.]]
** And at the ''very'' end of the story, [[spoiler:his hypocracy proves to be his undoing. He became the Carmine, and defined his relationship to the role, entirely around ending the injustice of foreswearing; when he tries to foreswear the girls unjustly, it does so much damage to his self that he's left as an EmptyShell, completely subsumed by his role.
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