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* BishonenLine: For the whole race as a whole - her new form is arguably the most human-looking out of all the golems shown thus far - no jagged appendages growing from her body, no uneven gem formations on her limbs - just a normally- shaped humanoid made from perfectly arranged liquid metal and a crystallized leotard. Hell, she even simulates ''fabric'' from ''crystalline molecules!''
* BodySurf: [[spoiler: Whenever she's in danger, she can transfer her consciousness into another golem's body and take control of it.]]
* BodySurf: [[spoiler: Whenever she's in danger, she can transfer her consciousness into another golem's body and take control of it.]]
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!! The Great Crystal
[[folder: The Great Crystal]]
* AmbiguouslyEvil
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane
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The protagonist of the story. Formerly an ordinary civilian ''man'', she was transformed after finding a sword in an alleyway.
Now, she is currently investigating a local crystal cult rumored to be involved in a process called the Reformation.
->For more information about her past and her escapades, her entry can be found [[Characters/LiquidMercury here]].
Now, she is currently investigating a local crystal cult rumored to be involved in a process called the Reformation.
->For more information about her past and her escapades, her entry can be found [[Characters/LiquidMercury here]].
* PurpleIsPowerful
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!! The Couple
* HappilyMarried: Subverted. They were transformed into brainwashed golems, under a false bliss, on the day they went to purchase a wedding ring.
* HappilyMarried: Subverted. They were transformed into brainwashed golems, under a false bliss, on the day they went to purchase a wedding ring.
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!! The Couple
* HappilyMarried: Subverted. They were transformed into brainwashed golems, under a false bliss, on the day they went to purchase a wedding ring.
* RedOniBlueOni: For crying out loud, it's even in their hair colors!
!! Roland
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!! Daisy
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* CombatStilletos: [[spoiler: Made of crystal formations, no less.]]
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* CombatStilletos: CombatStilettos: [[spoiler: Made of crystal formations, no less.]]
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! The Crystal Cult
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! Other Characters
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->For more information, its entry can be found [[Characters/LiquidMercury here]].
->For more information, her entry can be found [[Characters/LiquidMercury here]].
->For more information, her entry can be found [[Characters/LiquidMercury here]].
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* PowerFloats
* SeadogPegLeg: All of their legs end in jagged, sharp crystalline blades.
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* OurGolemsAreDifferent: Unlike the modern stereotype of Golems being dumb, muscular, rocky brutes, these golems instead resemble lithe female humanoids sporting crystal formations as smooth as finely cut gemstones.
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!! Saul
* NumberTwo
* SatelliteCharacter
!! Saul
* NumberTwo
* SatelliteCharacter
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* BladeBelowTheShoulderBladeBelowTheShoulder: Thus far, all of them.
* OneGenderRace: Everyone who was transformed thus far becomes a female, even if their hosts and past selves weren't.
* OurGolemsAreDifferent: Unlike the modern stereotype of Golems being dumb, muscular, rocky brutes, these golems instead resemble lithe female humanoids sporting crystal formations as smooth as finely cut gemstones.
* TragicMonster: It is doubtful that they wanted
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The overarching antagonists of the story.story, they are a cult who all believe that a purple crystal of unknown origin is their diving savior. Their sole belief is to try and lead all souls to salvation by transforming as many of them into golems through the crystal in a process called "The Reformation."
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!! Mercury
!! Iron
!! Amalgam/"Mary Clay"
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* CyberNinja: Case in point.
* Cyborg: An interpretation of her origin.
* Cyborg: An interpretation of her origin.
* SensualSpandex: Apart from a few armor plates on the shoulders, arms, abdomen and legs, it's mostly a black skintight battlesuit.
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* SpontaneousWeaponCreation: With the ability to generate shards and shields out of thin air, Edith she has this.
* OneSteveLimit: [[spoiler: The CanonWelding story, "Faith Beyond Flesh", also features one of the modern metalloid girls named Selene ''Iron'', which]].
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* PowerGivesYouWings
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* FountainOfYouth: [[spoiler: What the liquid metal combined with the crystal's power does to her body - gave her a body resembling her younger days, made her taller, and more beautiful.]]
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* ArcVillain: She's effectively the BigBad of the second arc. It remains to be seen, however, just how much authority she commands over the cult itself.
* CombatStilletos: [[spoiler: Made of crystal formations, no less.]]
* FountainOfYouth: [[spoiler: What the liquid metal combined with the crystal's power does to her body - it gave her a body resembling her younger days, made her taller, and more beautiful.]]
* CombatStilletos: [[spoiler: Made of crystal formations, no less.]]
* FountainOfYouth: [[spoiler: What the liquid metal combined with the crystal's power does to her body - it gave her a body resembling her younger days, made her taller, and more beautiful.]]
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: Natch. And it's a cybernetic design too.
* ShockAndAwe: One pull of the sword's trigger unleashes a surge of electricity so powerful it can destroy virtually anything.
* ThouShaltNotKill: Has recently adopted this policy when dealing with any further transformed thralls.
* ShockAndAwe: One pull of the sword's trigger unleashes a surge of electricity so powerful it can destroy virtually anything.
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!! Acolyte Selene
One of the cult's regular acolytes.
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One of the cult's regular acolytes.
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!!The Priestess/"Edith"
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