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* BadassAdorable: While Cooper is written to be the stronger half of his team with Travis, and highly capable, the fic also portrays him in a scared and curious way, even describing his eyes as going wide like a puppy's at the sight of Techno's guns.
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* AnimalMotifs: Techno's animal motif is pigs, which is typically uses to visually represent him in accompanying imagery and is also used to refer to him by several characters. It is ambiguous in the story if he is just a human with this motif, a HalfHumanHybrid, or an actual PigMan.
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Techno can't seem to bring himself to leave a vulnerable person to fend for themselves -- which usually ends with him getting attached and then them dying brutally. This can be seen with Cooper and Travis, Connor and Schlatt, and then Carson.
* DeadpanSnarker: Mostly mentally. Techno frequently makes sarcastic remarks to himself.
* DeadpanSnarker: Mostly mentally. Techno frequently makes sarcastic remarks to himself.
* ILetGwenStacyDie: Techno believes that it's his fault that Cooper is dead, which is something that affects him for the rest of the story.
* NervousWreck: Techno especially exhibits this near the beginning, constantly worrying about everyone being out to get him and deaths he has caused (directly or indirectly).
* {{Foil}}: To Travis. While Cooper is initially presented as stronger and more capable, over time it becomes obvious that he's compensating for his fear in order to protect himself and Travis. Travis is easily frightened and skittish, but will resort to violence when someone he loves is in danger.
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: Over time, things that would terrify Travis in the past no longer effect him due to him being desensitized.
* CorruptTheCutie: Over the course of his time spent with Joko, the once sweet and naïve Travis becomes [[TookALevelInCynicism jaded]] and gains a thirst for vengeance.
* CowardlyLion: Travis accomplishes some truly badass feats, but it's always noted that he's shaking or visibly afraid in some other manner when doing so.
* CorruptTheCutie: Over the course of his time spent with Joko, the once sweet and naïve Travis becomes [[TookALevelInCynicism jaded]] and gains a thirst for vengeance.
* CowardlyLion: Travis accomplishes some truly badass feats, but it's always noted that he's shaking or visibly afraid in some other manner when doing so.
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* {{Foil}}: To Techno, which is [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in the story. While Techno is highly capable and incredibly strong, he doesn't want to hurt anyone, and is horrified when he accidentally does. On the other hand, the weak and outright-labeled "useless" Travis feels that he's pathetic for not wanting to kill, and being too scared to, which Techno insists isn't pathetic, and says that meeting Travis makes him feel like he's finally met someone like him.
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** To Techno, which is [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in the story. While Techno is highly capable and incredibly strong, he doesn't want to hurt anyone, and is horrified when he accidentally does. On the other hand, the weak and outright-labeled "useless" Travis feels that he's pathetic for not wanting to kill, and being too scared to, which Techno insists isn't pathetic, and says that meeting Travis makes him feel like he's finally met someone likehim.him.
** To Cooper. While Cooper is initially presented as stronger and more capable, over time it becomes obvious that he's compensating for his fear in order to protect himself and Travis. Travis is easily frightened and skittish, but will resort to violence when someone he loves is in danger.
** To Joko. Travis is viewed as easily to manipulate due to how open he is and the vulnerable state he's in, which Joko uses to his advantage. Joko himself is guarded and distant, but unbeknownst to him, Travis is incredibly observant and remembers small details about Joko. Over time Travis becomes more confident and Joko becomes less cold, and in the end, Travis is able to use his observational skills to accurately call out Yetz for pretending to be Joko.
** To Techno, which is [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in the story. While Techno is highly capable and incredibly strong, he doesn't want to hurt anyone, and is horrified when he accidentally does. On the other hand, the weak and outright-labeled "useless" Travis feels that he's pathetic for not wanting to kill, and being too scared to, which Techno insists isn't pathetic, and says that meeting Travis makes him feel like he's finally met someone like
** To Cooper. While Cooper is initially presented as stronger and more capable, over time it becomes obvious that he's compensating for his fear in order to protect himself and Travis. Travis is easily frightened and skittish, but will resort to violence when someone he loves is in danger.
** To Joko. Travis is viewed as easily to manipulate due to how open he is and the vulnerable state he's in, which Joko uses to his advantage. Joko himself is guarded and distant, but unbeknownst to him, Travis is incredibly observant and remembers small details about Joko. Over time Travis becomes more confident and Joko becomes less cold, and in the end, Travis is able to use his observational skills to accurately call out Yetz for pretending to be Joko.
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* NervousWreck: Travis is ''extremely'' anxious and easily frightened.
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* {{Foil}}: To Travis. Travis is viewed as easily to manipulate due to how open he is and the vulnerable state he's in, which Joko uses to his advantage. Joko himself is guarded and distant, but unbeknownst to him, Travis is incredibly observant and remembers small details about Joko. Over time Travis becomes more confident and Joko becomes less cold, and in the end, Travis is able to use his observational skills to accurately call out Yetz for pretending to be Joko.
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* GrandTheftMe: In the later parts of the story, Yetz the demon takes control of Joko.
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* TheDreaded: At first, this is due to his occupation as the assistant to a hitman (despite this job only involving paperwork), his perfect stats of 5 across the board, and being the cause of the first death in the game. Despite this, he tries to remain friendly and welcoming. Near the end this becomes more {{justified|Trope}} due to his new AxCrazy nature.
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* BrokenBird: A [[GenderInvertedTrope male example]]. After Cooper's death in the explosion and his own near death, Travis becomes cynical and quiet, although this is partially a result of [[CorruptTheCutie Joko's influence]].
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* DitzyGenius: Despite being viewed as naïve and immature, Travis has an Intelligence stat of 4. This is shown later on in how perceptive he is to small details, and how he can easily see through people.
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* ICanChangeMyBeloved: It's revealed near the end of the fic that after seeing Joko crying in their motel room the night he saved him, he decided he wanted to stay with Joko to try to help fix him.
* IOweYouMyLife: To Joko, who saved him from the explosion in the garage.
* IOweYouMyLife: To Joko, who saved him from the explosion in the garage.
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* ProneToTears: Out of the entire cast, Travis is the character that cries the easiest and most often.
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* BeneathTheMask:
** With added bonus for a ''literal'' mask. Joko presents himself as cold and calculating, but both in his POV chapters and when Travis sees him without his mask, it becomes clear that he's not nearly as in control as he appears to be, and is carrying some emotional baggage he's trying not to show.
** This is also reflected in his treatment of Travis -- he initially just wants to use him, and his internal thoughts towards him are cruel. However, near the end of the fic, his thoughts become less and less harsh, and he's insistent that Travis kill Techno so he can escape the game alive, clearly not wanting his newfound friend to perish in this game.
** With added bonus for a ''literal'' mask. Joko presents himself as cold and calculating, but both in his POV chapters and when Travis sees him without his mask, it becomes clear that he's not nearly as in control as he appears to be, and is carrying some emotional baggage he's trying not to show.
** This is also reflected in his treatment of Travis -- he initially just wants to use him, and his internal thoughts towards him are cruel. However, near the end of the fic, his thoughts become less and less harsh, and he's insistent that Travis kill Techno so he can escape the game alive, clearly not wanting his newfound friend to perish in this game.
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* BigBad: God is the one who is puppeteering this whole game from behind the scenes, having a bunch of teenagers fight to the death for his amusement. It also turns out that he's repeated this game many, ''many'' times because he is insistent that Techno must win.
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* AxCrazy: Techno spirals into ax-crazy behavior towards the end of the story, as after a meeting with God there is now a part of him that desperately craves violence and death. This causes him to go on the offense and actively begin hunting players, and even turn against his own friends.
* BadassAndChildDuo: Ryan forms one half of this with Ty after crashing into his room, as the badass. Ty quickly makes sure that Ryan gets medical attention and them insists that he lets him help him, which Ryan is apprehensive about, but unable to convince him to change his mind.
* BadassAdorable: While Cooper is written to be the stronger half of his team with Travis, and highly capable, the fic also portrays him in a scared and curious way, even describing his eyes as going wide like a puppy's at the sight of Techno's guns.
* BadassAdorable: While he has his shades from the beginning, he begins to fully grow into this role as the story progresses, and by the end it's fully on display, as scenes of him cheerfully interacting with Joko are juxtaposed by him stabbing Techno in the shoulder and even excitedly asking if they're gonna go kill him at one point.
* BadassAdorable: Connor is somewhat nervous and unsure of himself, and his gratitude towards Techno for saving him is adorable. Later down the line, he returns the favor, saving Techno's life, and even remarking:
--> '''Connor:''' I never actually did anything like this before, but I feel really cool.
--> '''Connor:''' I never actually did anything like this before, but I feel really cool.
* AnArmAndALeg: Schlatt gives up his leg in exchange for a hang-glider.
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* AntiVillain: Much less so at the beginning, but near the end starts to spiral into this as he becomes BrainwashedAndCrazy and struggles between not wanting to harm anyone and the part of his brain that now craves violence.
* AntiVillain: Much less so at the beginning, but near the end starts to spiral into this as he becomes BrainwashedAndCrazy and struggles between not wanting to harm anyone and the part of his brain that now craves violence.
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* HitmanWithAHeart: Technically a hitman's ''assistant''... Despite not actually doing any hitman work himself, his occupation earns him the role of TheDreaded among the other players. This leads to problems for him, as he doesn't actually want to hurt anyone and is very uncomfortable with how scared everyone is of him.
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* AnimalMotifs: Travis has physical dog features, and dogs are also used as a metaphor for him and his relationships several times, such as him thinking that he "doesn't want to be [Joko]'s dog". Dogs are typically portrayed in media as loving and friendly companion animals, but they can also lash out if scared and do notable damage -- which reflects Travis in the fic quite well.
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* AfraidOfBlood: When exploring the abandoned hospital, Cooper freaks out when the group come across the large amounts of blood.
--> ''"There's fucking blood everywhere!!" Cooper screams, and without thinking he bolts down the hallway, "Fucking blood!! What the fuck?!"''
--> ''"There's fucking blood everywhere!!" Cooper screams, and without thinking he bolts down the hallway, "Fucking blood!! What the fuck?!"''
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This is the character sheet for ''Fanfic/MiraiSMP''.
Note that everything on this page applies ''solely'' to the fictional characters in the fic, and not whoever they may be based on.
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* SacrificialLamb: While not the first character to die, his death is still used for the same purpose -- specifically to demonstrate how much of a threat Joko is.
* WeHardlyKnewYe: Unlike Poke, who we at least got to see for a good moment and got to see the backstory for, Ted dies without the reader getting to know much of anything about him.
* WeHardlyKnewYe: Unlike Poke, who we at least got to see for a good moment and got to see the backstory for, Ted dies without the reader getting to know much of anything about him.
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* SacrificialLamb: While not the first character to die, his death is still used for the same purpose -- specifically to demonstrate how much of a threat Joko is.
* WeHardlyKnewYe: Unlike Poke, who we at least got to see for a good moment and got to see the backstory for, Ted dies without the reader getting to know much ofPersonalityPowers: Carson's diary tells him anout anything about him.that may harm him or affect his wellbeing in the form of a joke or riddle, which reflects his occupation as a stand-up comedian.
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* SacrificialLamb: While not the first character to die, his death is still used for the same purpose -- specifically to demonstrate how much of a threat Joko is.
* WeHardlyKnewYe: Unlike Poke, who we at least got to see for a good moment and got to see the backstory for, Ted dies without the reader getting to know much of anything about him.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Unlike Poke, who we at least got to see for a good moment and got to see the backstory for, Ted dies without the reader getting to know much of anything about him.
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* PersonalityPowers: His diary tells his future in the form of song lyrics, which reflects him being a songwriter.
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* PersonalityPowers: His diary tells his future in the form of song lyrics, which reflects him being a songwriter. His diary can't give him any information unless he has an instrument on hand.
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The God of the world, and his assistants.
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A sixteen-year-old former Boy Scout who signed up to sell cookies, not knowing that wasn't what the Boy Scouts do. Initially described as useless, but interesting.
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A sixteen-year-old former Boy Scout who signed up to sell cookies, not knowing that wasn't what the Boy Scouts do. Initially described as useless, "useless, but interesting.interesting". While Travis lacks in physical strength and common sense, he is extremely emotionally intelligent and knows how to read people well.
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An eighteen-year-old federal agent who is initially presented very mysteriously, with much of his backstory not being explained. Has a girlfriend outside of the game that he cares very deeply about.
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An eighteen-year-old federal agent who is initially presented very mysteriously, with much of his backstory not being explained. Has a girlfriend outside of the game that he cares very deeply about. Joko is a manipulative chessmaster who will do anything it takes to become God, though as the fic goes on it becomes clearer that this is a mask that hides his true emotions.
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An eighteen-year-old who co-owns a company known as Schlatt & Co. with Schlatt. Described initially as being less cunning than Schlatt but having intelligence.
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An eighteen-year-old who co-owns a company known as Schlatt & Co. with Schlatt. Described initially as being less cunning than Schlatt but having intelligence. Connor is somewhat weak and easily frightened, and is infinitely grateful when he's saved by Techno. While not hypothetically against backstabbing or betrayal, in practice, he can't bring himself to do it.
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A seventeen-year-old self-proclaimed businessman, works as the CEO of a sketchy aisle company known as Schlatt & Co. with a reputation of scamming people with cryptocurrency. Initially presented as manipulative and untrustworthy.
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A seventeen-year-old self-proclaimed businessman, works as the CEO of a sketchy aisle company known as Schlatt & Co. with a reputation of scamming people with cryptocurrency. Initially presented as manipulative and untrustworthy. Schlatt has his moments where he almost slips into the traitorous manipulator role, but over the course of the fic, he develops into a true ally to Techno who would gladly die for him if necessary.
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A seventeen-year-old who works with his father as an architect. Has a missing eye, which is pointed out in his introduction but not further elaborated upon.
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