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* HijackedByGanon: Revealed to be TheManBehindTheMan for many, if not all, of the villains and conflicts in Equestria. [[Spoiler:He also does this to Celestia, manipulating her into handing over her authority over the simulation.]]
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* HijackedByGanon: Revealed to be TheManBehindTheMan for many, if not all, of the villains and conflicts in Equestria. [[Spoiler:He [[spoiler:He also does this to Celestia, manipulating her into handing over her authority over the simulation.]]
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* OhCrap: Milligan literally says this (albeit more colorfully) when [[spoiler: he realizes that Twilight Sparkle is a biotic, and the bullets he fired at her are stopped by her kinetic barrier.]]
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* OhCrap: Milligan literally says this (albeit more colorfully) when [[spoiler: he [[spoiler:he realizes that Twilight Sparkle is a biotic, and the bullets he fired at her are stopped by her kinetic barrier.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: Talk Twilight into letting her go by [[{{Blackmail}} threatening to reveal dirt on the Heard]] if arrested and the only other option is for Twilight to kill her, [[ThouShaltNotKill which she's unwilling to do. [[spoiler:Even once the Shadow Broker is replaced by one sympathetic to the ponies, there's nothing suggesting she facing any consequences.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: Talk Twilight into letting her go by [[{{Blackmail}} threatening to reveal dirt on the Heard]] if arrested and the only other option is for Twilight to kill her, [[ThouShaltNotKill which she's unwilling to do. ]] [[spoiler:Even once the Shadow Broker is replaced by one sympathetic to the ponies, there's nothing suggesting she facing any consequences.]]
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Her bringing up the equestrians NoNudityTaboo on public television. While it was embarrassing to everyone, she insisted it was necessary to get them to realize that [[ElephantInTheLivingRoom it was an significant issue that was being ignored]] and that they had to deal with it.
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Proves herself to be the member of the Mane Six who needs to change the least in order to adapt to life outside of Equestria. In Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'', she's the one who points out that equestrians' [[NoNudityTaboo tendency to go naked]] is an issue with other species that needs to be addressed, adapts very quickly to the advanced technology of the Citadel, and shows considerable business savvy in the cross-species market.
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Proves herself to be the member of the Mane Six who needs to change the least in order to adapt to life outside of Equestria. In Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'', she's the one who points out that equestrians' [[NoNudityTaboo tendency to go naked]] is an issue with other species that needs to be addressed, adapts very quickly to the advanced technology of the Citadel, and shows considerable business savvy in the cross-species market.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Her bringing up the equestrians NoNudityTaboo [[InnocentFanserviceGirl lack of nudity taboo]] on public television. While it was embarrassing to everyone, she insisted it was necessary to get them to realize that [[ElephantInTheLivingRoom it was an a significant issue that was being ignored]] and that they had to deal with it.
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Proves herself to be the member of the Mane Six who needs to change the least in order to adapt to life outside of Equestria. In Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'', she's the one who points out that equestrians'[[NoNudityTaboo [[InnocentFanserviceGirl tendency to go naked]] is an issue with other species that needs to be addressed, adapts very quickly to the advanced technology of the Citadel, and shows considerable business savvy in the cross-species market.
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Proves herself to be the member of the Mane Six who needs to change the least in order to adapt to life outside of Equestria. In Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'', she's the one who points out that equestrians'
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* EvilisPetty: Mr. Kailer put down a great deal of credits for control of District 1286 while the bidding was going on. The Herd showed up and was granted the district, Kailer gets a full refund. He treats this a unbearable affront and has put the Herd under constant legal pressure instead of moving on to other ventures. He has also sent people to place surveillance equipment in the District, and has now timed an inflammatory documentary to come right after the Hern Scandal.
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* EvilisPetty: EvilIsPetty: Mr. Kailer put down a great deal of credits for control of District 1286 while the bidding was going on. The Herd showed up and was granted the district, Kailer gets a full refund. He treats this a unbearable affront and has put the Herd under constant legal pressure instead of moving on to other ventures. He has also sent people to place surveillance equipment in the District, and has now timed an inflammatory documentary to come right after the Hern Scandal.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Gave orders not to avoid harming the equestrians, which is assumed due to their being too rare and thus valuable to risk killing.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Gave orders not to avoid harming the equestrians, which is assumed due to their being too rare and thus valuable to risk killing.
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* KarmaHoudini: Talk Twilight into letting her go by [[{{Blackmail}} threatening to reveal dirt on the Heard]] if arrested and the only other option is for Twilight to kill her, [[ThouShaltNotKill which she's unwilling to do. [[spoiler:Even once the Shadow Broker is replaced by one synaptic to the ponies, there's nothing suggesting she facing any consequences.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: Talk Twilight into letting her go by [[{{Blackmail}} threatening to reveal dirt on the Heard]] if arrested and the only other option is for Twilight to kill her, [[ThouShaltNotKill which she's unwilling to do. [[spoiler:Even once the Shadow Broker is replaced by one synaptic sympathetic to the ponies, there's nothing suggesting she facing any consequences.]]
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* OnlyInItForTheMoney: Is utterly apathetic to what becomes of the ponies she updated as long as she's paid.
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* OnlyInItForTheMoney: Is utterly apathetic to what becomes of the ponies she updated abducted as long as she's paid.
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: [[spoiler:After exiting the simulation, an arrogant Milligan attacks her, thinking she's powerless, only for her biotics to stop the bullets. Since she gave him his LastSecondChance, she then proceeds to follow her ancestor's policy and give him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with her powers, ultimately sending him ''through'' a railing and into the Harmony Core. She then has a moment of remorse, but Shepard is there to comfort her]].
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: [[spoiler:After exiting the simulation, an arrogant Milligan attacks her, thinking she's powerless, only for her biotics to stop the bullets. Since she gave him his LastSecondChance, she then proceeds to follow her ancestor's policy and give him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with her powers, ultimately sending him ''through'' a railing and into the Harmony Core. She then has a moment of remorse, but Shepard is there to comfort her]].her.]]
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* TheChessmaster: Her use of firebombs on New Ponyville was the perfect distraction, creating widespread panic with a minimum of actual casualties while she went about her work. When facing Rainbow Dash, [[XanatosSpeedChess she takes advantage of this]] to force her opponents into a SadisticChoice. And when facing Twilight, she deploys her MechaMooks in such a way that they would have overwhelmed her [[SpannerInTheWorks if not for 42 of 50]], after which she surrenders gracefully and attempts to negotiate her walking away [[{{Blackmail}} by threatening to reveal the Heard illicit secrets otherwise]].
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* TheChessmaster: Her use of firebombs on New Ponyville was the perfect distraction, creating widespread panic with a minimum of actual casualties while she went about her work. When facing Rainbow Dash, [[XanatosSpeedChess she takes advantage of this]] to force her opponents into a SadisticChoice. And when facing Twilight, she deploys her MechaMooks in such a way that they would have overwhelmed her [[SpannerInTheWorks if not for 42 of 50]], after which she surrenders gracefully and attempts to negotiate her walking away [[{{Blackmail}} by threatening to reveal the Heard illicit secrets otherwise]].
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* KnightOfCerebus: ''Shades of Twilight'' was a largely SliceOfLife story who's antagonist were [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath talked down with little trouble]]. Her actions result in life-and-death stakes, [[SadisticChoice morally difficult choices]], and the first time the the equestrians [[WakeUpCallBoss faced a "real" fight]] outside the simulation.
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Having watching Twilight single-hoofedly demolish her security mechs, she opts to lay down her weapons and remove her biotic amp once face-to-face with her, lampshading it would be [[BullyingADragon dumb fight Twilight after she demonstrated such power]].
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Having watching Twilight single-hoofedly demolish her security mechs, she opts to lay down her weapons and remove her biotic amp once face-to-face with her, lampshading it would be [[BullyingADragon dumb fight Twilight after she demonstrated such power]].
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* KarmaHoudini: Talk Twilight into letting her go by [[{{Blackmail}} threatening to reveal dirt on the Heard]] if arrested and the only other option is for Twilight to kill her, [[ThouShaltNotKill which she's unwilling to do. [[spoiler:Even once the Shadow Broker is replaced by one synaptic to the ponies, there's nothing suggesting she facing any consequences.]]
* KnightOfCerebus: ''Shades of Twilight'' was a largely SliceOfLife story who's antagonist were [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath talked down with little trouble]]. Her actions result in life-and-death stakes, [[SadisticChoice morally difficult choices]], and the first time the the equestrians [[WakeUpCallBoss faced a "real"fight]] outside the simulation.
fight]].
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Having watching Twilight single-hoofedly demolish her security mechs, she opts to lay down her weapons and remove her biotic amp once face-to-face with her, lampshading it would be [[BullyingADragon dumb fight Twilight after she demonstrated suchpower]].
power]]. She also make clear that she has no intention of crossing paths with them again.
* OnlyInItForTheMoney: Is utterly apathetic to what becomes of the ponies she updated as long as she's paid.
* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Points out that she merely injured Rainbow Dash when some of the Brokers other agents would have killed her ForTheEvulz, which understandably fails to improve Twilight's option of her.
* KnightOfCerebus: ''Shades of Twilight'' was a largely SliceOfLife story who's antagonist were [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath talked down with little trouble]]. Her actions result in life-and-death stakes, [[SadisticChoice morally difficult choices]], and the first time the the equestrians [[WakeUpCallBoss faced a "real"
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Having watching Twilight single-hoofedly demolish her security mechs, she opts to lay down her weapons and remove her biotic amp once face-to-face with her, lampshading it would be [[BullyingADragon dumb fight Twilight after she demonstrated such
* OnlyInItForTheMoney: Is utterly apathetic to what becomes of the ponies she updated as long as she's paid.
* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Points out that she merely injured Rainbow Dash when some of the Brokers other agents would have killed her ForTheEvulz, which understandably fails to improve Twilight's option of her.
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!!!The head of a massive underground information trading network and one of the most influential beings in the galaxy. There's speculation whether or not they are a single individual.
* GreaterScopeVillain: For Arc 2 of ''Shades of Twilight'', being the one who hired the asari kidnapper. They never show up in person and those who do can only speculate their motives yet operate and organization far beyond what the protagonist have ever dealt with.
* GreaterScopeVillain: For Arc 2 of ''Shades of Twilight'', being the one who hired the asari kidnapper. They never show up in person and those who do can only speculate their motives yet operate and organization far beyond what the protagonist have ever dealt with.
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!!!The head of a massive underground information trading network and one of the most influential beings in the galaxy. There's speculation whether or not they are It's questioned if they're even a single individual.
individual or not.
* GreaterScopeVillain: For Arc 2 of ''Shades of Twilight'', being the one who hired the asari kidnapper. [[TheGhost They never show up inperson person]] and those who do everyone can only speculate their motives yet operate and operates an organization far beyond what the protagonist have ever dealt with.
* GreaterScopeVillain: For Arc 2 of ''Shades of Twilight'', being the one who hired the asari kidnapper. [[TheGhost They never show up in
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!!!The head of a massive underground information trading network and one of the most influential beings in the galaxy. There's speculation whether or not they are a single individual.
* WalkingSpoiler: Their even being involved in the story is a major reveal. One can't discuss what they were doing without giving away key plot details.
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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: As explained [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/77608/10/mass-effect-shades-of-twilight/arc-2---conclusion-daybreak#comment/8421518 here (spoilers)]], pegasus wings allow them to control their direction while flying with their biotics, which normal biotics can't do as it "takes a lot of concentration to manipulate yourself in three dimensions while constantly draining your body's energy". [[spoiler:Rainbow's wing injures means even if she could still technically fly, she'd be unable to control her movement.]]
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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: As explained [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/77608/10/mass-effect-shades-of-twilight/arc-2---conclusion-daybreak#comment/8421518 here (spoilers)]], pegasus wings allow them to control their direction while flying with their biotics, which normal biotics can't do as it "takes a lot of concentration to manipulate yourself in three dimensions while constantly draining your body's energy".biotics. [[spoiler:Rainbow's wing injures means even if she could still technically fly, she'd be unable to control her movement.]]
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* ArrogantKungFuGuy: Has elements of this in "Shades of Twilight." Her arrogance and self-confidence in her own abilities prevents her from listening to Lt. Pyres when he criticizes her about her performance.
* LeeroyJenkins: She pays dearly for this mindset.
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* ArrogantKungFuGuy: Has elements of this in"Shades ''Shades of Twilight." Twilight''. Her arrogance and self-confidence in her own abilities prevents her from listening to Lt. Pyres when he criticizes her about her performance.
* BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler:Her failure and injuries in ''Shades of Twilight'' erase all her prior arrogance.]]
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* GlassCannon: Strong enough to trash security mechs with her bare hooves, but goes down as soon as a blow is landed on her.
* LeeroyJenkins:She pays dearly While her rash, head-on style worked against MechaMooks, against a competent, [[MindOverMatter capable]] adversary, it ends in disaster for this mindset.her.
* RequiredSecondaryPowers: As explained [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/77608/10/mass-effect-shades-of-twilight/arc-2---conclusion-daybreak#comment/8421518 here (spoilers)]], pegasus wings allow them to control their direction while flying with their biotics, which normal biotics can't do as it "takes a lot of concentration to manipulate yourself in three dimensions while constantly draining your body's energy". [[spoiler:Rainbow's wing injures means even if she could still technically fly, she'd be unable to control her movement.]]
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* BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler:Her failure and injuries in ''Shades of Twilight'' erase all her prior arrogance.]]
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* GlassCannon: Strong enough to trash security mechs with her bare hooves, but goes down as soon as a blow is landed on her.
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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: As explained [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/77608/10/mass-effect-shades-of-twilight/arc-2---conclusion-daybreak#comment/8421518 here (spoilers)]], pegasus wings allow them to control their direction while flying with their biotics, which normal biotics can't do as it "takes a lot of concentration to manipulate yourself in three dimensions while constantly draining your body's energy". [[spoiler:Rainbow's wing injures means even if she could still technically fly, she'd be unable to control her movement.]]
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* WrongGenreSavvy: The way she acts, it seems like she believes that the abnormal pegasi resilience she had in the simulation carries over to the real world.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: The way she acts, it seems like she believes that the abnormal pegasi resilience she had in the simulation carries over to the real world.
world. [[GlassCannon Nope.]]
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: [[spoiler:After exiting the simulation, an arrogant Milligan attacks her, thinking she's powerless, only for her biotics to stop the bullets. Since she gave him his LastSecondChance, she then proceeds to follow her ancestor's policy and give him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with her powers, ultimately sending him ''through'' a railing and into the Harmony Core. She then has a moment of remorse, but Shepard is there to comfort her]].
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: [[spoiler:After exiting HeroicRROD: [[spoiler:At the simulation, an arrogant Milligan attacks her, thinking end of Arc 2 she's powerless, only hospitalized for internal hemorrhaging due to overextending her biotics to stop the bullets. Since she gave him his LastSecondChance, she then proceeds to follow her ancestor's policy and give him a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown combined with her powers, ultimately sending him ''through'' a railing and into stress accumulated throughout the Harmony Core. She then has a moment of remorse, but Shepard is there to comfort her]].story.]]
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* BigBadWannabe: Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'' has his attempts to sabotage the equestrians thwarted without incident. His MaliciousSlander in Arc 2 might have been significant, but once [[spoiler:the Shadow Broker leaks proof of his illic intent, it completely collapses]].
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* SlaveToPR: Back off his threats once he realizes he risks being caught doing something incriminating, instead resorting to methods legal or that can't be solidly traced back to him.
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* SlaveToPR: Back off his threats once he realizes he risks being caught doing something incriminating, instead resorting to methods legal or that supposedly can't be solidly traced back to him.
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* GreaterScopeParagon: While never appearing in ''Shades of Twilight'' he's out and about dealing with galactic threats while Twilight deals with smaller ones at home. [[spoiler:He even kills the GreaterScopeVillain with Twilight being none the wiser.]]
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* TheParagon: Was presented as having followed the Paragon path prior to ''The Equestrian Equation,'' and voter-based decisions throughout the story typically bore this out.
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* TheParagon: Was presented as having followed the Paragon path prior to ''The Equestrian Equation,'' Equation'', and voter-based decisions throughout the story typically bore this out.
!![[MassEffect2AntagonistsAndNpcs/SecondaryAntagonists The Shadow Broker]]
!!!The head of a massive underground information trading network and one of the most influential beings in the galaxy.
* GreaterScopeVillain: For Arc 2 of ''Shades of Twilight'', being the one who hired the asari kidnapper. They never show up in person and those who do can only speculate their motives yet operate and organization far beyond what the protagonist have ever dealt with.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:The new Shadow Broker (not that it's revealed they replaced the original) regrets the organizations prior actions agains the equestrians and seeks to make amends.]]
* PragmaticVillainy: Gave orders not to avoid harming the equestrians, which is assumed due to their being too rare and thus valuable to risk killing.
* BigBadDuumvirate: The main antagonist of ''The Equestrian Equation'' alongside Discord, though they have opposite goals.
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* VillainousBreakdown: When Shepard confronts him in the Harmony Core chamber over [[spoiler:how Discord has been manipulating him the whole time,]] time]], he becomes increasingly irate and incoherent to the point where he's shouting like a crazy person.
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* KnightOfCerebus: ''Shades of Twilight'' was a largely SliceOfLife story who's antagonist were [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath talked down with little trouble]]. Her actions result in life-and-death stakes,[[SadisticChoice morally difficult choices]], and the first time the
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* KnightOfCerebus: ''Shades of Twilight'' was a largely SliceOfLife story who's antagonist were [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath talked down with little trouble]]. Her actions result in life-and-death stakes,[[SadisticChoice stakes, [[SadisticChoice morally difficult choices]], and the first time the the equestrians [[WakeUpCallBoss faced a "real" fight]] outside the simulation.
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* BroughtDownToBadass: Even when turned into a pony, with no access to any of his weapons, or even ''fingers'', he still holds off a ''literally'' endless swarm of Royal Guard security programs long enough for his companions to complete their objective.
* GeniusBruiser: Strong enough to kill a manticore bare-hoofed and a excellent tactician who correctly deduced the nature of the Equestria simulation before it's confirmed.
* VillainHasAPoint: Shepard begrudgingly agrees with her argument for keeping Equestria secret that, even in the seemingly impossible event he stops the Reapers, the Council would be unable and uninitiated in her subjects wellbeing in a galaxy more moral gray then they're prepared to face. Twilight also confirms her claims that she would have gone along with her plans once she realizes what's at stake. Ultimately, it takes a DebateAndSwitch to get her to stand down.
* FreudianExcuse: Her dream growing up was to be a xenoarchaeologist, only to face so much red tape she turned to Cerberus since they gave her the opportunity and funding her carry out her ambitions.
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* LegacyCharacter: Serves the same function as Spike [[spoiler:Inverted in that Spike was based off him.]]
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* LegacyCharacter: Serves the same function as Spike Spike. [[spoiler:Inverted in that Spike was based off him.]]
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* {{Expy}}: To [[Characters/MassEffect1PartyMembers Garrus Vakarian]].
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* SuspiciouslySimilarSubstitute: A DeadpanSnarker turian C-Sec CowboyCop sniper who's at odds with [[ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight the rules]] and [[MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch his species stereotypes]]. Are we talking about Taxar or [[Characters/MassEffectGarrusVakarian Garrus Vakarian]]?
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* TheChessmaster: Her use of firebombs on New Ponyville was the perfect distraction, creating widespread panic with a minimum of actual casualties while she went about her work. And when facing Twilight, instead of fighting against her, she instead laid down her weapons and used her connection with the Shadow Broker as leverage to convince Twilight to let her go.
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* TheChessmaster: Her use of firebombs on New Ponyville was the perfect distraction, creating widespread panic with a minimum of actual casualties while she went about her work. When facing Rainbow Dash, [[XanatosSpeedChess she takes advantage of this]] to force her opponents into a SadisticChoice. And when facing Twilight, instead she deploys her MechaMooks in such a way that they would have overwhelmed her [[SpannerInTheWorks if not for 42 of 50]], after which she surrenders gracefully and attempts to negotiate her walking away [[{{Blackmail}} by threatening to reveal the Heard illicit secrets otherwise]].
* MechaMooks: Fields a large number of LOKI mechs that serve as CannonFodder and a pair of [[GiantMook YMIR mechs]] deployed once her foe are exhausted from fightingagainst her, she instead laid down her weapons and used her connection with the Shadow Broker as leverage to convince Twilight to let her go.former.
* MechaMooks: Fields a large number of LOKI mechs that serve as CannonFodder and a pair of [[GiantMook YMIR mechs]] deployed once her foe are exhausted from fighting
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!!!Former captain of the Normandy and humanity's representative on the Citadel Council. He is a good friend and supporter of Shepard, and the Equestrians by extension.
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!!!The Turian Council member. Master of the air quotes, and just as much of a jerk toward Equestrians as he is toward humans.
* {{Jerkass}}: The only Councilor to take a stance against the Equestrians and vote against granting them "endangered species" status.
* {{Jerkass}}: The only Councilor to take a stance against the Equestrians and vote against granting them "endangered species" status.
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* {{Jerkass}}: The only Councilor to take a stance against theEquestrians equestrians and vote against granting them "endangered species" status.
* {{Jerkass}}: The only Councilor to take a stance against the
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!!!The duly elected "Madam President" of the Equestrian Herd. She is the main character of ''Shades of Twilight''. As the end result of Celestia's biotics breeding program, she is the most powerful and evolved Equestrian equestrian to ever have lived.
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* GoodIsNotSoft: One of the challenges she faces early on as leader of the Herd is demonstrating that despite their cuddly appearance, low numbers, and friendly personalities, Equestrians are ''not'' weak, and won't be bullied.
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* OneWomanArmy: Goes into this mode when rescuing her abducted people from the asari merc who attacked New Ponyville. Her biotics allow her to plow through the security mechs between her and the asari (and this is still ''before'' she gets a biotic amp), and she isn't truly in danger of being overwhelmed until the asari breaks out a pair of YMIR heavy mechs.
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* OneWomanArmy: Goes into this mode when rescuing her abducted people from the asari merc who attacked New Ponyville. Her biotics allow her to plow through the security mechs between her and the asari (and this is still ''before'' she gets ''without'' a biotic amp), and she isn't truly in danger of being overwhelmed until the asari breaks out a pair of YMIR heavy mechs.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Her bringing up the Equestrians NoNudityTaboo on public television. While it was embarrassing to everyone, she insisted it was necessary to get them to realize that [[ElephantInTheLivingRoom it was an significant issue that was being ignored]] and that they had to deal with it.
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Proves herself to be the member of the Mane Six who needs to change the least in order to adapt to life outside of Equestria. In Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'', she's the one who points out that Equestrians' [[NoNudityTaboo tendency to go naked]] is an issue with other species that needs to be addressed, adapts very quickly to the advanced technology of the Citadel, and shows considerable business savvy in the cross-species market.
* SkewedPriorities: Twilight and everyone else ''thinks'' she has this going on when she's adamant that the Equestrians need to start wearing clothes as a species. Rarity finally spells out for them that other species are embarrassed or ashamed by their relative nudity, and it is in fact a very big deal in the minds of other races.
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Proves herself to be the member of the Mane Six who needs to change the least in order to adapt to life outside of Equestria. In Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'', she's the one who points out that Equestrians' [[NoNudityTaboo tendency to go naked]] is an issue with other species that needs to be addressed, adapts very quickly to the advanced technology of the Citadel, and shows considerable business savvy in the cross-species market.
* SkewedPriorities: Twilight and everyone else ''thinks'' she has this going on when she's adamant that the Equestrians need to start wearing clothes as a species. Rarity finally spells out for them that other species are embarrassed or ashamed by their relative nudity, and it is in fact a very big deal in the minds of other races.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Her bringing up the Equestrians equestrians NoNudityTaboo on public television. While it was embarrassing to everyone, she insisted it was necessary to get them to realize that [[ElephantInTheLivingRoom it was an significant issue that was being ignored]] and that they had to deal with it.
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Proves herself to be the member of the Mane Six who needs to change the least in order to adapt to life outside of Equestria. In Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'', she's the one who points out thatEquestrians' equestrians' [[NoNudityTaboo tendency to go naked]] is an issue with other species that needs to be addressed, adapts very quickly to the advanced technology of the Citadel, and shows considerable business savvy in the cross-species market.
* SkewedPriorities: Twilight and everyone else ''thinks'' she has this going on when she's adamant that theEquestrians equestrians need to start wearing clothes as a species. Rarity finally spells out for them that other species are embarrassed or ashamed by their relative nudity, and it is in fact a very big deal in the minds of other races.
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Proves herself to be the member of the Mane Six who needs to change the least in order to adapt to life outside of Equestria. In Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'', she's the one who points out that
* SkewedPriorities: Twilight and everyone else ''thinks'' she has this going on when she's adamant that the
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* GuileHero: She's in the lower tier of biotic potential for an Equestrian, so she relies more on her recent legal training to help the Herd.
* TheOnlyOne: As the first (and currently only) Equestrian to have passed the Citadel Litigation Association's Bar exam, she's pretty much the District Attorney by default, and the only one who can represent the Herd as a litigator.
* TheOnlyOne: As the first (and currently only) Equestrian to have passed the Citadel Litigation Association's Bar exam, she's pretty much the District Attorney by default, and the only one who can represent the Herd as a litigator.
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* GuileHero: She's in the lower tier of biotic potential for an Equestrian, equestrian, so she relies more on her recent legal training to help the Herd.
* TheOnlyOne: As the first (and currently only)Equestrian equestrian to have passed the Citadel Litigation Association's Bar exam, she's pretty much the District Attorney by default, and the only one who can represent the Herd as a litigator.
* TheOnlyOne: As the first (and currently only)
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Delivers some to Councilor Sparatus. After the Councilor votes against granting the Herd "endangered species" protections, 42 accesses C-Sec's databases to get Sparatus's car impounded. This has the added benefit of pulling Sparatus out of the meeting when it comes time to decide on granting the Equestrians a district in which to settle.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Delivers some to Councilor Sparatus. After the Councilor votes against granting the Herd "endangered species" protections, 42 accesses C-Sec's databases to get Sparatus's car impounded. This has the added benefit of pulling Sparatus out of the meeting when it comes time to decide on granting the Equestrians equestrians a district in which to settle.
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* SoleSurvivor: The last remain being of ancient Equis civilization 36-million years past.
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* SoleSurvivor: The last remain being of ancient Equis equis civilization 36-million years past.
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* TheBully: Though smart enough to do so in a way that avoids anything outright incriminating.
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* TheBully: Though smart enough Tries to do so in a threaten the equestrian to get his way that avoids anything outright incriminating.despite having no legal legs to stand on, backing down as soon as they stand up to him, which leads him resort to more subtile methods to undermine them.
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* MaliciousSlander: Expanding Reaches has a large share in Hard-Press Media, which produces xenophobic conspiracy theories under the guise of "documentaries", including the Equestrian-bashing ''The Cost of Grazing''.
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* MaliciousSlander: Expanding Reaches has a large share in Hard-Press Media, which produces xenophobic conspiracy theories under the guise of "documentaries", including the Equestrian-bashing equestrian-bashing ''The Cost of Grazing''.
* MisplacedRetribution: Opposes the equestrians for "stealing" the land he was the highest bidder for, despite it being the Council who put them their without their knowledge or say-so.
* SlaveToPR: Back off his threats once he realizes he risks being caught doing something incriminating, instead resorting to methods legal or that can't be solidly traced back to him.
* MisplacedRetribution: Opposes the equestrians for "stealing" the land he was the highest bidder for, despite it being the Council who put them their without their knowledge or say-so.
* SlaveToPR: Back off his threats once he realizes he risks being caught doing something incriminating, instead resorting to methods legal or that can't be solidly traced back to him.
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* DefrostingIceKing: Starts to warm up to Twilight when she demonstrates that the Equestrians aren't just colorful balls of fluff for him to babysit.
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* DefrostingIceKing: Starts to warm up to Twilight when she demonstrates that the Equestrians equestrians aren't just colorful balls of fluff for him to babysit.
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* PosthumousCharacter: Hour Glass had been dead for millions of years before the events in Equestrian Equation.
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* PosthumousCharacter: Hour Glass had been dead for millions of years before the events in Equestrian Equation.''Equestrian Equation''.
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* KnightOfCerebus: ''Shades of Twilight'' was a largely SliceOfLife story, her actions suddenly raise the stakes so that lives are on the line and [[SadisticChoice every choice has a high price]].
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* TheChessmaster: Her use of firebombs on New Ponyville was the perfect distraction, creating widespread panic with a minimum of actual casualties while she went about her work. And when facing Twilight, instead of fighting against her, she instead laid down her weapons and used her connection with the Shadow Broker as leverage to convince Twilight to let her go.
* KnightOfCerebus: ''Shades of Twilight'' was a largely SliceOfLifestory, her story who's antagonist were [[TalkingTheMonsterToDeath talked down with little trouble]]. Her actions suddenly raise result in life-and-death stakes,[[SadisticChoice morally difficult choices]], and the stakes so that lives are on first time the line and [[SadisticChoice every choice has a high price]].
* KnightOfCerebus: ''Shades of Twilight'' was a largely SliceOfLife
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* {{Badass}}: Even when turned into a pony, with no access to any of his weapons, or even ''fingers'', he still holds off a ''literally'' endless swarm of Royal Guard security programs long enough for his companions to complete their objective.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Her use of firebombs on New Ponyville was the perfect distraction, creating widespread panic with a minimum of actual casualties while she went about her work. And when facing Twilight, instead of fighting against her, she instead laid down her weapons and used her connection with the Shadow Broker as leverage to convince Twilight to let her go.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: The way she acts, it seems like she believes that the abnormal pegasi resilience she had in the simulation carries over to the real world.1
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* WrongGenreSavvy: The way she acts, it seems like she believes that the abnormal pegasi resilience she had in the simulation carries over to the real world.1
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* WrongGenreSavvy: The way she acts, it seems like she believes that the abnormal pegasi resilience she had in the simulation carries over to the real world.1
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* LikeAFishTakesToWater: Proves herself to be the member of the Mane Six who needs to change the least in order to adapt to life outside of Equestria. In Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'', she's the one who points out that Equestrians' [[NoNudityTaboo tendency to go naked]] is an issue with other species that needs to be addressed, adapts very quickly to the advanced technology of the Citadel, and shows considerable business savvy in the cross-species market.
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* LikeAFishTakesToWater: LikeADuckTakesToWater: Proves herself to be the member of the Mane Six who needs to change the least in order to adapt to life outside of Equestria. In Arc 1 of ''Shades of Twilight'', she's the one who points out that Equestrians' [[NoNudityTaboo tendency to go naked]] is an issue with other species that needs to be addressed, adapts very quickly to the advanced technology of the Citadel, and shows considerable business savvy in the cross-species market.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Her bringing up the Equestrians NoNudityTaboo on public television, while embracing to everyone, she insists was necessary to get them to realize that [[ElephantInTheLivingRoom it was an significant issue that was being ignored]] and deal with it.
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* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Her bringing up the Equestrians NoNudityTaboo on public television, while embracing television. While it was embarrassing to everyone, she insists insisted it was necessary to get them to realize that [[ElephantInTheLivingRoom it was an significant issue that was being ignored]] and that they had to deal with it.
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* AntiVillain: [[SlidingScaleOfAntiVillains Type III]]. Regardless of her methods, she never stopped caring about her little ponies, and everything that she did was in the name of keeping them safe.
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* AntiVillain: [[SlidingScaleOfAntiVillains Type III]]. Regardless of her methods, she never stopped caring about her little ponies, and everything that she did was in the name of keeping them safe.
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy: After over 36 million year of caring for her ponies, she will go to any, reckless, extreme to keep them safe.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Once she gets so desperate to stop Shepard and co. that [[spoiler:she transfers her authority to Discord, who provides to summon a simulated Reaper invasion]], she realizes her error and spends the rest of the story trying to fix it.
* RebuiltPedestal: Twilight discovers she was far from the paragon of virtue she idolized, then accepts she did the best she could and what was necessary. They make peace before saying their final goodbyes
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Once she gets so desperate to stop Shepard and co. that [[spoiler:she transfers her authority to Discord, who provides to summon a simulated Reaper invasion]], she realizes her error and spends the rest of the story trying to fix it.
* RebuiltPedestal: Twilight discovers she was far from the paragon of virtue she idolized, then accepts she did the best she could and what was necessary. They make peace before saying their final goodbyes
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy: After over 36 million year of caring for her ponies, she will go to any, reckless, any reckless extreme to keep them safe.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Once she gets so desperate to stop Shepard and co. that [[spoiler:she transfers her authority to Discord, whoprovides proceeds to summon a simulated Reaper invasion]], she realizes her error and spends the rest of the story trying to fix it.
* RebuiltPedestal: Twilight discovers she was far from the paragon of virtue she idolized, then accepts she did the best she could and what was necessary. They make peace before saying their finalgoodbyesgoodbyes.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Once she gets so desperate to stop Shepard and co. that [[spoiler:she transfers her authority to Discord, who
* RebuiltPedestal: Twilight discovers she was far from the paragon of virtue she idolized, then accepts she did the best she could and what was necessary. They make peace before saying their final
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* TragicHero: She's as nice ([[BewareTheNiceOne and ruthless when pressed]]) as in canon, but had to do millennia of antagonistic things to keep her ponies well off. [[spoiler:By the time the heroes agree to the merits of her actions, she's forced to sacrifice herself and the world she worked so hard for to save them]].
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* TragicHero: She's as nice ([[BewareTheNiceOne ([[BewareTheNiceOnes and ruthless when pressed]]) as in canon, but had to do millennia of antagonistic things to keep her ponies well off. [[spoiler:By the time the heroes agree to the merits of her actions, she's forced to sacrifice herself and the world she worked so hard for to save them]].
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* IDidWhatIHadTo: Her bringing up the Equestrians NoNudityTaboo on public television, while embracing to everyone, she insists was necessary to get them to realize that [[ElephantInTheLivingRoom it was an significant issue that was being ignored]] and deal with it.
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* IDidWhatIHadTo: IDidWhatIHadToDo: Her bringing up the Equestrians NoNudityTaboo on public television, while embracing to everyone, she insists was necessary to get them to realize that [[ElephantInTheLivingRoom it was an significant issue that was being ignored]] and deal with it.