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* HeroesPreferSwords
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* HeroesPreferSwordsHeroesPreferSwords: When lying low in the Human world, he uses the name of White Swordsman.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: He's somewhat down when he realizes that all his insane fighting skill doesn't do much to really help people at large.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: He's somewhat down when he realizes that all his insane fighting skill doesn't do much to really help people at large.
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* SelfDeprecation: She can't cook, she's not athletic, and her meat is useless.
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* ALadyOnEachArm: As the Demon Queen puts it, he should feel blessed for when Lady Knight and her barge into her bedroom (okay, Head Maid pushed them in) and end up like this. He instead feels like in a LoverTugOfWar.
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* ALadyOnEachArm: As the Demon Queen puts it, he should feel blessed for when Lady Knight and her barge into her bedroom (okay, Head Maid pushed them in) and end up like this. He instead feels like in a LoverTugOfWar.
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* ALadyOnEachArm: As the Demon Queen puts it, he should feel blessed for when Lady Knight and her barge into her bedroom (okay, Head Maid pushed them in) and end up like this. He instead feels like in a LoverTugOfWar.
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* AnywhereButTheirLips: Beore leaving for the Demon Lands in search of Witch Girl, Demon Queen asks for a kiss to Hero. He kisses her in the forehead; she feels underwhelmed.
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* InnocentFanserviceGirl: At first it looked like she might just be teasing Hero, but as the story progresses it's obvious she really doesn't know her "meat" isn't "useless" at all.
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* InnocentFanserviceGirl: At first it looked like she might just be teasing Hero, but as the story progresses it's obvious she really doesn't know understand her "meat" isn't "useless" at all.
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* [[KingIncognito Hero Incognito]]: To protect his reputation and hide the fact he was the Hero who fought the Demon Queen, he goes by the title "The White Swordsman".
* SecretIdentity: To protect his reputation and hide the fact he was the Hero who fought the Demon Queen, he goes by the title "The White Swordsman". In the Demon Lands he goes by as Dark Knight, TheDragon to Demon Queen.
* CurtainsMatchTheWindows: A redhead with ruby eyes.
* InnocentFanserviceGirl: At first it looked like she might just be teasing Hero, but as the story progresses it's obvious she really doesn't know her "meat" isn't "useless" at all.
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* LadyOfBlackMagic
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* LadyOfBlackMagicLadyOfBlackMagic: Although she barely uses any.
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* MinoredInAsskickingMinoredInAsskicking: According to her, she knows enough magic to get by in a fight.
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* {{Knighting}}: Lady Knight pledges herself to Hero and asks him to make it formal by performing the typical Hollywood short form ceremony (kneeling and being touched on the shoulder with the flat of the sword).
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* [[TheUglyGuysHotDaughter The Dragon's Hot Daughter]]: Her dad's a dragon but she looks like a human. It sorta justified since they're demons.
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* [[TheUglyGuysHotDaughter [[BizarreSexualDimorphism The Dragon's Hot Daughter]]: Her dad's a dragon but she looks like a human. It sorta justified since they're demons.
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* ChasteHero: He's seemingly somewhat dense over the Demon Queen's advances on him and is sometimes shy about it. Later confesses that it's because he wants to avoid a MayflyDecemberRomance. Played straight with Fire Dragon Princess, Demon Girl and Lady Knight.
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* ChasteHero: He's seemingly somewhat dense over the Demon Queen's advances on him and is sometimes shy about it. Later confesses that it's because he wants to avoid a MayflyDecemberRomance. Played straight Same with Fire Dragon Princess, Demon Girl and Lady Knight.Knight. In the case of Demon Queen, however, he eventually admits that it's because he wants to avoid a MayflyDecemberRomance
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* MagicKnight: Is not only a good swordsman but a magic user as well like teleportation.
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* MagicKnight: Is not only a good swordsman but a magic user as well like teleportation.
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* ChasteHero: He's somewhat dense over the Demon Queen's advances on him and is sometimes shy about it.
** He even calls a "Strategic Retreat" (with great panic) while using teleport magic to get away when Fire Dragon Grand Princess (suggestively) invites him to "escort her" back to her "lavish hotel room".
* [[spoiler:TheDragon: As the Dark Knight, he's the Demon Queen's Dragon and enforcer in the Demon world.]]
** He even calls a "Strategic Retreat" (with great panic) while using teleport magic to get away when Fire Dragon Grand Princess (suggestively) invites him to "escort her" back to her "lavish hotel room".
* [[spoiler:TheDragon: As the Dark Knight, he's the Demon Queen's Dragon and enforcer in the Demon world.]]
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* ChasteHero: He's seemingly somewhat dense over the Demon Queen's advances on him and is sometimes shy about it.
** He even calls a "Strategic Retreat" (with great panic) while using teleport magicit. Later confesses that it's because he wants to get away when avoid a MayflyDecemberRomance. Played straight with Fire Dragon Grand Princess (suggestively) invites him to "escort her" back to her "lavish hotel room".
Princess, Demon Girl and Lady Knight.
*[[spoiler:TheDragon: TheDragon: As the Dark Knight, he's the Demon Queen's Dragon and enforcer in the Demon world.]]
** He even calls a "Strategic Retreat" (with great panic) while using teleport magic
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* [[LikeAnOldMarriedCouple Like A Married Couple]]: Since the Hero and the Demon Queen belong to each other, he is technically her "husband". They even act like a married couple.
** A sweet, (mostly) innocent, wide-eyed married couple.
** A sweet, (mostly) innocent, wide-eyed married couple.
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* [[LikeAnOldMarriedCouple Like A Married Couple]]: Since the Hero and the Demon Queen belong to each other, he is technically her "husband". They even act like a married couple.
**couple. A sweet, (mostly) innocent, wide-eyed married couple.couple.
* NoGuyWantsToBeChased: He calls a "Strategic Retreat" (with great panic) using teleport magic to get away when Fire Dragon Grand Princess (suggestively) invites him to "escort her" back to her "lavish hotel room".
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* NoGuyWantsToBeChased: He calls a "Strategic Retreat" (with great panic) using teleport magic to get away when Fire Dragon Grand Princess (suggestively) invites him to "escort her" back to her "lavish hotel room".
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* NinjaMaidNinjaMaid: In her demon clan the Way of the Maid is considered an honorable calling, on par with chivalry.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Variation - We can save the world together. AndItWorked.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Variation - We can save the world together. AndItWorked.
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* BigEater: Little Sister Maid. Her obssession with food isn't surprising given her background.
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* BigEater: Little Sister Maid. Her obssession with food isn't surprising given her background.Backstory.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: The sisters are the only survivors of seven siblings, all dead by starvation and disease. They are runaway serfs, fleeing from a despotic landlord.
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* GiveMeLibertyOrGiveMeDeath: Having been born a serf, Big Sister Maid values her new found dignity very, very highly. And she will ask others to do the same.
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* BigEater: Little Sister Maid. Her obssession with food isn't surprising given her background.
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** NerdsAreSexy: She is a HollywoodNerd thru and thru.
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** NerdsAreSexy: HollywoodNerd: She really is a HollywoodNerd thru and thru.hot.
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** NerdsAreSexy: She really is hot.
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** NerdsAreSexy: She really is hot.a HollywoodNerd thru and thru.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Variation - We can save the world together. ItWorked.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Variation - We can save the world together. ItWorked.AndItWorked.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Variation - We can save the world together. ItWorked.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Can be lovably awkward around Hero.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Can be lovably awkward around Hero. When listing her good points to him, the only thing she could think of was that she was a superb ''accountant''.
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* JeanneDArchetype: Big Maid Sister shapes up into this after [[spoiler:she's forced to impersonate the Crimson Scholar to fool the Inquisition]].
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* JeanneDArchetype
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* GuileHero: Cutting deals, pushing new ideas and educating people are what she does best.
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* GuileHero: Cutting deals, pushing new deals and propagating ideas and educating people are what she does best.her weapons.
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* BigBreastsBigDeal: She never cared for her assets until she met Hero. Even then, she still needs prodding by the Head Maid to flaunt them.
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* BigBreastsBigDeal: She never cared for her assets until she met Hero. Even then, she still needs prodding by the Head Maid to flaunt them.
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* GuileHero: Cutting deals, pushing new ideas and educating people are what she does best.
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* BuxomIsBetter: Averted, she thinks her breasts aren't attractive.
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* BuxomIsBetter: Averted, BigBreastsBigDeal: She never cared for her assets until she thinks her breasts aren't attractive.met Hero. Even then, she still needs prodding by the Head Maid to flaunt them.
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* CharlesAtlasSuperPower: Hero's strenght is unreal, and it shows he just trained really hard for it.
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* CharlesAtlasSuperPower: Hero's strenght strength is unreal, and it shows he just trained really hard for it.
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* WorldsStrongestMan: Buttler says the hero might as well be the strongest warrior in the world.
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* WorldsStrongestMan: Buttler Butler says the hero might as well be the strongest warrior in the world.
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* ManicPixieDreamGirl: To Hero, in a manner of speaking. Hero was in something of a rut, bordering on DeathSeeker before he met her.
**MagicalGirlfriend: Though Hero counts as her "Magical Boyfriend" as well
**MagicalGirlfriend: Though Hero counts as her "Magical Boyfriend" as well
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* CharacterDevelopment: Merchant Youngster has become quite the BadassBookworm.
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* SupremeChef: Little Maid Sister.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Big Maid Sister. [[GuileHero Definitely.]]
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* DrillSargentNasty: To the Youngster trio. To be fair, [[TookALevelInBadass it works.]]
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* DrillSargentNasty: DrillSergeantNasty: To the Youngster trio. To be fair, [[TookALevelInBadass it works.]]