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* CavalryBetrayal: A heroic variation. After receiving _eggcat following [[spoiler: his escape from the siege on his capital,]] spoiler: the leader of China [[, realizing how much of the world that he had to face if the war were to continue, personally executed him out in the forests of China in order to ensure world peace.]]
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* CavalryBetrayal: A heroic variation. After receiving _eggcat following [[spoiler: his escape from the siege on his capital,]] spoiler: the leader of China [[, [[spoiler:, realizing how much of the world that he had to face if the war were to continue, personally executed him out in the forests of China in order to ensure world peace.]]
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* BodyguardBetrayal: A variation. After receiving _eggcat following [[spoiler: his escape from the siege on his capital,]] [[spoiler: the leader of China, realizing how much of the world that he had to face if the war were to continue, personally executed him out in the forests of China in order to ensure world peace.]]
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* BodyguardBetrayal: CavalryBetrayal: A heroic variation. After receiving _eggcat following [[spoiler: his escape from the siege on his capital,]] [[spoiler: spoiler: the leader of China, China [[, realizing how much of the world that he had to face if the war were to continue, personally executed him out in the forests of China in order to ensure world peace.]]
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* BodyguardBetrayal: A variation. After receiving _eggcat following [[spoiler: his escape from the siege on his capital,]] [[spoiler: the leader of China, realizing how much of the world that he had to face if the war were to continue, personally executed him out in the forests of China in order to ensure world peace.]]
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!Brazil
* TheEmpire: The few times we see it in action, it's busy in the act of [[RapePillageAndBurn Rape, Pillage, and Burning]] other civilizations in the name of conquest
* OutOfFocus: We barely get insights into what this civilization is on the ground. All Magic chooses to reveal to us are its enmity with the Amazon, and [[spoiler: destroying the [[MurderInc Assassins' Guild's]] leadership as a result.]]
* TheEmpire: The few times we see it in action, it's busy in the act of [[RapePillageAndBurn Rape, Pillage, and Burning]] other civilizations in the name of conquest
* OutOfFocus: We barely get insights into what this civilization is on the ground. All Magic chooses to reveal to us are its enmity with the Amazon, and [[spoiler: destroying the [[MurderInc Assassins' Guild's]] leadership as a result.]]
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* TheMostWanted: After committing a spate of high profile terrorist attacks on multiple public gatherings, multiple nations posted high profile bounties on his head, singling him out as one of the world's most wanted criminals. [[spoiler: Ultimately, he would avoid detection by the law by giving up his bombing lifestyle, settling down on a remote island, never to be seen again by society before it all got blown up anyway.]]
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* TheMostWanted: After committing a spate of high profile terrorist attacks on multiple public gatherings, multiple nations posted high profile bounties on his head, singling him out as one of the world's most wanted criminals. [[spoiler: Ultimately, he would avoid detection by the law by giving up his bombing lifestyle, settling down on a remote island, never to be seen again by society before it all got blown up anyway.at large.]]
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* TheMostWanted: After committing a spate of high profile terrorist attacks on multiple public gatherings, multiple nations posted high profile bounties on his head, singling him out as one of the world's most wanted criminals. [[spoiler: Ultimately, he would avoid detection by the law by giving up his bombing lifestyle, settling down on a remote island, never to be seen again by society before it all got blown up anyway.]]
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!Ice Spikes/"Siberia"Spikes/[[MotherRussiaMakesYouStrong "Siberia"]]
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* MotherRussiaMakesYouStrong: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by their [[AuthorAvatar admin Mayyye]], who named the nation "Siberia" after their [[GrimUpNorth cold and harsh environment]]. Indeed, the environment made the people living there very tough and communal, and they would also continue the great Russian tradition of [[spoiler: defeating all other nations]] with their strength of arms and HomeFieldAdvantage.
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* TerroristWithoutACause: Gave and given no reason for committing the spree of terrorists incidents he committed, like assassinating world leaders at a peace conference and blowing up the Arctic's wall.
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* TerroristWithoutACause: Gave and given no reason for committing the a spree of terrorists incidents he committed, incidents, like assassinating world leaders at a peace conference and blowing up the Arctic's wall.
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* ChekhovsGunman: You remember that guy who was rejected from North Star? You know how he's _eggcat, the leader of the plains from the last event? Well, [[spoiler: he would indeed come back, stronger than ever before, destroying North Star, and becoming the main threat to world peace]].
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* SacrificialLamb: Despite building up an early settlement at the seeming expense of _eggcat and his desires to join them, they proved nothing more than an easy target to steamroll by [[spoiler: the forces of _eggcat looking for conquest and revenge. Such a promising nation dying in such a manner both helps to highlight how important public relations are to state survival, as well as showcasing to the other civilizations how dangerous _eggcat could be if pressed, leading to the _Eggcat war.]]
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* BadassPacifist: Despite [[SuicidalPacifism not wanting to fight back against invaders at all]], the Trost Sanctuary decided to resolve this problem by [[spoiler: ''building rockets to space'' to avoid any conflicts happening on the ground. In doing so, they were the first nation to use advanced redstone technology, and were the first to build redstone spacecraft. They then used their redstone spacecraft to build ''an entire artificial moon as a SpaceStation'', finally giving them the safe haven they so desperately needed, and would continue teaching the art of redstone rocketry to the entire world for ages to come.]]
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* OutOfFocus: Despite being involved in the plot heavily, the Amazon never get focused on in any specific fashion, with the only times [=MagicGum=] features them being to either illustrate a fact about civilization, or setting up conflicts for other civilizations and entities to resolve.
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* UnknownRival: Despite them considering America to be such a priority to take care of that they [[spoiler: conspired to lure their leader into a trap just to destabilize them]], America didn't really notice their rivalry very much, as seen by how [[spoiler: they ignored the bait to go into the trap, namely the allegation that Mexico was usurped by a tyrant]]. [[spoiler: They would promptly get to realize how much Mexico exactly hated them when they declared war during Britain's invasion.]]
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* BackFromTheBrink: Was reduced to [[spoiler: one settlement hiding out on the island of Taiwan due to Russia's [[RapePillageAndBurn brutal attack]] on their original settlement. This led the newcomer "better" Chinese to surpass them in population and settlements afterwards. However, they bounced back from this massive disadvantage, holding off the "better" Chinese from capturing Taiwan and then capturing all of "Better" China's settlements in return. Following this, they would continue to hold out against the Russians until they managed to launch a massive invasion of the entire world, proving that they had succeeded in surviving their bad starting situation.]]
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* TheWorfEffect: If you have seen Spoke's Civilization Experiments before, then you'd know that some of their players are some of the toughest and most powerful [[PlayerVersusPlayer PvPers]] in the world, most notably Clownpierce. This is especially true once they merged with [[spoiler: Ocean]]. This makes it all the more shocking when [[spoiler: [[GrimUpNorth the Ice Spikes]] manage to actually defeat them and their army, killing all of the people who appeared in Spoke's event in the process, including Clownpierce]].
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Likely due to having most of its civilian population killed, the Snow state refused to send diplomats to communicate with the other civilizations about their intentions, namely [[spoiler: their plans to attack the mountain civilization]]. They only ever communicated in person, meaning that the only civilization they had major talks with were the Vikings living in their trade routes. This would bite them in the butt hard as, when they formalized their alliance with the Vikings, those who opposed fled and warned [[spoiler: all of the other civilizations about their alliance, insinuating that they were about to conquer everyone instead of just the Mountain. As a result, the Snow state met a cold reception from all they met, destroying the Swamp when they attacked them in preemptive self-defense and being utterly ambushed by the combined Desert and Plains army after trying to go talk with them.]] [[spoiler: Fortunately, the survivors of that battle managed to successfully conduct audience with the Plains and Desert themselves, peacefully resolving the conflict and misconceptions and allowing Snow to go ahead with their plans to invade the mountains.]]
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* LandslideElection: PlayedForLaughs. Due to the election happening [[spoiler: after all but two of the players were either killed or exiled off of the island, the two players decided to set things straight by unanimously electing one of them as leader, ending the civil war with the Ocean completely destroyed.]]
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* BandOfBrothers: After having to survive the hostile conditions of the Ice Spikes biome in order to survive, the members of "Siberia" grew very close to each other, collaborating well on building up their settlement, mining for resources, preparing defenses, sharing resources, and, finally, fighting their enemies as a united team.
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* BandOfBrothers: After having to survive the hostile conditions of the Ice Spikes biome in order to survive, biome, the members of "Siberia" grew very close to each other, collaborating well on building up their settlement, mining for resources, preparing defenses, sharing resources, and, finally, and fighting their enemies as a united team.
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* TragicMistake: [[spoiler: Attacking the Snow state when they tried approaching them for safe passage to the mountains. [[PoorCommunicationKills Due to hearing all the news about the Snow being bloodthirsty warmongers from the Vikings that fled to them, ]] they thought that the approaching Snow army was planning on attacking ''them'' instead, causing them to fire back in perceived self-defense. This then caused Snow to attack them for real this time, leading to their state being utterly annihilated.]]
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* ActualPacifist: Most of the people who founded the sanctuary were pacifists and people who did not want to participate in wars, such as [[spoiler: the Eggcat war.]]
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* ActualPacifist: Most of the people who founded the sanctuary were pacifists and people who did not want to participate in wars, such as [[spoiler: the Eggcat war.]] As a result, [[spoiler: they were an easy target for a rogue band of Australian mercenaries looking for loot.]] However, [[SuicidalPacifism instead of changing thier pacifist ways,]] they instead [[spoiler: fled into space to escape the danger on the surface.]]
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* DirtyCommunists: Were described by [=MagicGum=] as having a communist ideology and were shown to use communist symbols such as a HammerAndSickle on red background, but despite that, they also resorted to [[RapePillageAndBurn Raping, Pillaging, And Burning]] other people's civilizations for resources, firmly characterizing their society as this.
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* BadassArmy: After [[spoiler: [[ArchEnemy the Russian]] [[RapePillageAndBurn attack on their original settlement]]]], the Chinese started massively focusing on gearing up and preparing their military to defend from further attacks. This army proved themselves when [[spoiler: they fended off an attack by "Better" China on Taiwan despite the "Better" Chinese getting the drop on them, and proved themselves again when they successfully captured all of "Better" China's settlements with minimal casualties. After securing their homeland and receiving the support and loyalty of the former "Better" Chinese, they grew even stronger, fending off at least one (and probably multiple) attacks by Russia at the great wall, then going on the offensive and [[DoUntoOthersBeforeTheyDoUntoUs Doing Onto Others Before They Do Unto Us]] the same things the Russians have been doing, namely RapePillageAndBurn.]]
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* ElaborateUndergroundBase: Built one deep in the mountains of Madagascar, an otherwise uninhabited landmass, to evade the detection of society at large.
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* TerroristWithoutACause: Gave and given no reason for committing the spree of terrorists incidents he committed, like assasinating world leaders at a peace conference and blowing up the Arctic's wall.
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* TerroristWithoutACause: Gave and given no reason for committing the spree of terrorists incidents he committed, like assasinating assassinating world leaders at a peace conference and blowing up the Arctic's wall.
